Alright let's see what I can find.
General:Set the preview time to 65583 as it clearly starts at "futari".
Kud's Future:00:08:155 (1,2) - since (2) is at the red line, beginners might hit this too early or late. to make it easier replace (1,2) for a slider.
00:17:583 (4) - delete this note because it'd look unexpected for beginners as they might be used to the rhythm between (1,2,3).
00:43:940 (2) - hmm delete this and make a 1/2 slider starting at 00:43:726 so that it'd follow vocals accurately.
00:49:298 (1) - add a clap at the end to keep consistency?
01:00:226 (1,2,3) - replace this for a repeat slider to make it easier?
01:31:940 (2,3) - delete this and add a slider to where (2) is at and end it at 01:33:012 so that it'd follow the long pause.
01:48:012 (1) - extend the spinner till 01:54:440 like at star and Yasora's diff. it follows the guitar if you listen carefully.
Miya's Future:01:19:512 (6) - a NC because of new lyrics?
01:22:940 (5) - make this a repeat slider as it follows "michi wo"
01:48:012 (1) - same as Kud's Future.
Sekai's Future:00:07:298 - add a spinner and end it till 00:09:440 as it not only follows the vocals but the piano as well.
00:14:155 (5) - to make it sound nicer add a clap at the end. it should sound like the slidertick's clap.
00:25:512 (2) - make this a 1/2 repeat slider is it follows vocals accurately.
00:48:012 (1) - remove the NC because the vocals are still going.
00:48:869 (3) - make this a NC because of new lyrics and make this a 1/1 slider so that it'd follow "dake"
01:00:440 (1) - make this a 1/2 slider starting from the red tick at 01:00:655 so that it'd follow vocals accurately.
01:05:583 (8) - a NC here because of new lyrics.
01:20:155 (4) - ^
01:45:869 (1) - you should start the spinner at01:48:012 because the vocals are still going. add notes instead to follow the vocals and end the spinner like at star's diff.
Star's Future:01:12:762 (7) - NC here because the vocals ended at the previous slider.
01:26:369 (6) - ^
Yasora's Future:00:28:083 (1) - maybe add a clap here? sounds nice IMO
00:34:940 (4) - ^
00:38:155 (2) - ^
01:09:226 (1) - it'd look better if you can make this repeat once and add a circle at the big white tick.
01:36:655 (3) - same as 00:28:083
01:39:655 (6) - is there a reason why a clap is at the 1st repeat? move it to the 2nd repeat instead. same reason as above.
This is the best i can do. GL
