1. Judul dan artis
2. Tag dan offset
3. Combo colour
4. Finish sound yang kurang konsisten
5. Slider yang nyentuh hp bar
6. dsb

chatlog

12:47 <Miya> : star, can you help me in checking yasora diff ?
12:47 <Star Stream> : sure
12:48 <Miya> : i want to improve yasora diff before i'm going to upload it
12:53 <Star Stream> : so, what can i do for you?
12:53 <Miya> : well, just modding as usual in yasora diff :3
12:53 <Miya> : but do irc mod
12:54 *Star Stream is listening to (Suzuta Miyako - one's future-Let's Go Kud! Ver- (Short Ver.))[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/45503]
12:55 *Miya is editing Suzuta Miyako - one's future-Let's Go Kud! Ver- (Short Ver.)
12:55 <Miya> : >.<
12:55 <Miya> : download the yasora diff first star
12:59 <Miya> : basically the rythim is good
13:00 <Star Stream> : Suzuta Miyako - one's future-Let's Go Kud! Ver- (Short Ver.) (Miya)
13:00 <Star Stream> : jeez :p
13:01 <Miya> : huh?
13:01 <Star Stream> : nvm
13:01 <Star Stream> : 00:01:283 (1,2,3,4) -
13:01 <Miya> : hha, yes i already change that tittle
13:01 <Star Stream> : too sharp
13:01 <Star Stream> : isn't it?
13:01 <Miya> : too far?
13:01 <Star Stream> : yes
13:02 <Miya> : yes, it's not consistant with 00:04:711 (5,1,2,3,4) -
13:02 <Star Stream> : 00:48:425 -
13:02 <Star Stream> : feels empty
13:02 <Star Stream> : 00:57:425 (3) -
13:02 <Miya> : yes, adding it
13:02 <Star Stream> : 1grid right it perfect
13:02 <Miya> : agree with you
13:03 <Miya> : where?
13:03 <Star Stream> : 00:57:425 (3) -
13:03 <Star Stream> : 01:02:890 (1) - too short
13:03 <Star Stream> : maybe speating slider is better good
13:03 <Miya> : i think it's perfect
13:04 <Star Stream> : see,
13:04 <Star Stream> : 1 is on x:336
13:04 <Miya> : hmm, ok considering it
13:04 <Star Stream> : 3's tail on x:332
13:04 <Miya> : where?
13:04 <Star Stream> : 00:57:425 (3) -
13:04 <Miya> : slider shape is not good?
13:05 <Star Stream> : not shape
13:05 <Star Stream> : just placing
13:05 <Star Stream> : 01:02:354 (4) - almost reaching HP bar
13:06 <Miya> : woaa right
13:06 <Miya> : okay i change that
13:07 <Star Stream> : in kiai part, it's really feels empty compare with first parts
13:07 <Star Stream> : 01:17:140 (2,3,4,5) - too sharp again
13:07 <Miya> : yes, yes, i'll that to yasora, and i agree with you
13:08 <Miya> : leave that to yasora*
13:08 <Star Stream> : HP8 OD8 is really bad way :p
13:08 <Star Stream> : -1 both
13:08 <Miya> : woaa right
13:09 <Miya> : changed them
13:09 <Star Stream> : and she used soft-sliderslide2.wav and soft-hitclap.wav
13:10 <Miya> : she use her own hitsound
13:10 <Miya> : but my slot of hitsound is full
13:10 <Star Stream> : that doesn't matter
13:10 <Miya> : so i use your hitsound or sekai sound instead
13:10 <Star Stream> : ok
13:10 <Miya> : yes, i'll tell her to manage her hitsound
13:11 <Star Stream> : 00:37:068 (5,6) -
13:11 <Star Stream> : no
13:12 <Star Stream> : add a circle at 00:37:175 -
13:12 <Star Stream> : and shorten the slider by 1/4
13:12 <Star Stream> : and move 1/4 later
13:12 <Miya> : yeah yeah your right
13:12 <Star Stream> : it's really weird now
13:12 <Miya> : i'll higlight these, and tell yasora to fix that
13:13 <Star Stream> : 00:48:854 (1,2,1,2) - i wanna play them more soft
13:13 <Star Stream> : so recommend reduce them
13:13 <Star Stream> : 00:52:711 (5) - remove finish and add at 00:52:711 (5) -
13:13 <Miya> : spacing is too far right?
13:13 <Star Stream> : yes
13:13 <Star Stream> : finish- 00:56:568 (1) - like this note
13:14 <Miya> : yeah, inconsitant finish sound
13:14 <Miya> : changed
13:14 <Star Stream> : add finish 00:57:854 -
13:14 <Star Stream> : so more powerful with 00:58:497 -
13:15 <Miya> : umm, i don't think so
13:15 <Miya> : well leave that to yasora
13:15 <Star Stream> : or delete finish at 00:58:497 -
13:16 <Star Stream> : 01:05:140 (4) - add finish
13:16 <Miya> : oh yes it's not consistant
13:16 <Miya> : changed
13:16 <Star Stream> : 01:28:711 -
13:16 <Star Stream> : add finish, following 01:26:997 (1) -
13:17 <Miya> : yes agree
13:17 <Miya> : changed as well
13:18 <Star Stream> : if do that, add finish 01:27:640 - too
13:18 <Star Stream> : and 01:30:425 -
13:18 <Star Stream> : 01:47:568 (9) -
13:18 <Star Stream> : there's no rhythm
13:19 <Star Stream> : delete this note
13:19 <Miya> : yes agree with hitsound
13:19 <Miya> : ah yes deleted
13:19 <Star Stream> : um, that's all now
13:19 <Star Stream> : just major things
13:20 <Miya> : ok ok, i'll save this log :3

Melophobia wrote:

Hi, Miya-chan (｡╹ω╹｡)
As promised~

General
where is sekaibg.jpg? o_o When you download it, i haven't finish upload it
add "sekai" to tags. because "-sekai-" doesnt work at all on web
http://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist?s=7&o=1 ... 4&g=0&la=0
but dont remove "-sekai-". it works successfully in game. Oh right, okay added.

Kud's Future
00:43:940 (2) - i think this note is hard to read for beginner, cuz it's on red tick. Oh no, it's 3/2 rythim. I don't think it's hard
00:45:869 (4,1) - switch newcombo Okay

Miya's Future
00:01:298 (1) - whistle to the end Ok
00:05:583 (3) - whistle ok
00:54:440 (3) - 7combos are too much for Normal diff imo, so add newcombo here or somewhere else ah okay, added
01:22:940 (5,1) - spacing right, fixed
01:42:869 (5) - newcombo here? I don't think it's consistent >.<

good luck ~ >w<
star☆

Melophobia wrote:

Yasora's Future
00:07:726 (1) - this spinner should start at 00:08:155 imo no
00:17:797 (3) - whistle here like 00:14:369 (2) - k
00:21:440 (1) - remove newcombo no
00:23:583 (1,2,3) - like this? k
00:29:155 - this tick sound is not suitable >< yes, tick with this hitsound is weird. so I increase the volume to little a bit
00:37:190 (6) - this slider should start at 00:37:298 - k
00:39:012 (7) - i think default finish is suitable here already do that
00:55:726 (2,3,4,5,6) - i think this stream should be more curved, like this k
01:12:226 (3) - add clap to the end? no
01:20:155 (6) - i think default finish is better here, like 01:06:440 (1) - already do that
01:22:083 (4,5) - why 1.3x here? reduce a bit spacing
01:26:155 (3) - remove clap k
01:30:547 (1) - are you sure its on blue tick? yes, I'm sure because after stream this note more easier read by players imo

[Ranger] wrote:

Hi~ Miya
From my queue

[Kud's Future]
Good map

[Miya's Future]
00:05:155 (2) - Just suggestion.put in x:84 y:192 Too far, sorry
00:05:583 (3) - If you allowed ^,put in x:168 y:264
00:24:440 (1) - Remove clap
00:24:869 (2) - Add clap ok, sounds good
01:02:369 (1) - How about like this? Will leave it to that

x:240 Y:80

[Ranger] wrote:

[Yasora's Future]
01:10:297 (2) - Just suggestion.put in x:240 y:192. k
01:42:655 (1) - Remove NC? no
01:43:297 (5) - Ifyou allowed ^,Add NC no

Laurier wrote:

ok

Kud's Future
00:17:583 (4,5) - little down and (5) stack on 00:14:583 (3) ? Ok, fixed :3
00:43:940 (2) - stack on 00:37:298 (3) is better. (nazi) ok

Miya's Future
00:46:083 (1) - why not use same form as 00:43:726 (4)? ah, ok, thx

Laurier wrote:

Yasora's Future
slidertick is Strange sound D: I will fix this, if someone mention this again
00:05:583 (2) - nazi 2~3 grid up is better k
00:31:940 (4) - why use x0.8? x1.0 is better... k
00:55:726 (2,3,4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/iZJQ unuse grid snap and try this. no
01:46:726 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - try unuse grid snap and remake.
imo.It is not good to contain two or more spacing in stream. no, but that's still rankable right? I saw in some map, that ok if use some spacing in stream. just consistent the spacing and will easier follow by players imo
01:54:012 - same as Star's diff no

hillaryzx wrote:

My mod for your 3rd map.... ( counting that I modded from modding queue )

General

(- _ -)/ pass...

Kud's Future

00:17:583(4) - add clap here... no, break my 1/1 clap pattern
00:46:298 - try adding circle here.. nope, i don't follow vocal there. >.<

Miya's Future

00:02:583(2,3) - I think make these two circle into something like this nope, i want 1/2 tapping there >.<

00:30:012(2) - remove repeat from this slider nope, i think this is follow the vocal since 'subaa' are divided into 3 parts.

hillaryzx wrote:

Yasora's Future

01:33:012(4,5) - remove clap at (4) and add it to (5)

1. Use the same video offset to all difficulties
2. Consider adding Little Busters!EX and Esctasy to tags, Kud Wafter is a fan-disc of Little Busters!EX
3. Why not find a bg for Star Stream's difficulty too? eg: http://puu.sh/j7zf

Sample,Time,0,"your hitsound file",volume

LKs wrote:

Yasora's Future

00:11:047 (5) - Spacing error during streams
00:11:476 (9) - ^
00:24:869 (4) - whistle
00:28:940 (1) - Use storyboard hitsound instead of slidertick's like this, they're two hitsounds with totally different sound effect.
To add storyboard hitsounds, add a line in your osu file like this:

Sample,Time,0,"your hitsound file",volume

00:46:940 (3) - ^
00:53:797 (2) - ^
01:00:655 (1,3) - ^
01:30:547 (1) - Don't use quadrupl here, it's off-beat

Byakugan249 wrote:

Yasora's Future:
00:28:083 (1) - maybe add a clap here? sounds nice IMO k
00:34:940 (4) - ^ no
00:38:155 (2) - ^ no
01:09:226 (1) - it'd look better if you can make this repeat once and add a circle at the big white tick. no
01:36:655 (3) - same as 00:28:083 k
01:39:655 (6) - is there a reason why a clap is at the 1st repeat? move it to the 2nd repeat instead. same reason as above. k

1. default colour is..actually doesn't fit the BGs or the video
2. default clap can hardly be catched

LKs wrote:

From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

I don't know why i modded this again..maybe I'm dizzied with tons of reqs hhe, thank you for your re-mod

General

1. default colour is..actually doesn't fit the BGs or the video nope, i think it's fit
2. default clap can hardly be catched nope

Kud's Future

00:47:583 (3) - move clap to the reverse point no >.<

Miya's Future

00:20:583 (4) - add note i don't follow the vocal here.
00:30:012 (2) - remove repeat okay, since a lot of people mentioning this.

• Hi Miya and the other mappers ~ request from my queue~
  　
  General :
  　

1. Delete .osb file in the folder ( Full Submit )
2. Use the hitsounds which on Star's Future diff is more good ~
3. I think the tags "Kudrayvka Noumi" is wrong ,it should be "Kudryavka Noumi"
4. You should add a Red Timing Section at 00:00:440 Because the music start here, I remind you this because of this :
   
   

   narakucrimson wrote:

   • Offset:

   1. In the section from 00:00:390 to 00:01:327, there is no music, so the offset isn't right at 00:00:390.
      You should move it to 00:01:327, and then add an extra red timing section at 00:02:265 to fix the metronome.

   　
   Kud's Future :
   　
5. Is the spacing too big ?
6. 01:33:012 (X) - Add a note here , follow the music , I think it's important
   　
   Miya's Future :
   　
7. Follow the vocal isn't a good idea on this song...
8. Do not change spacing on 2 easiest diff
9. You just have a Easy diff , But this diff ( Normal??) is too hard . You should change it easier
10. 00:35:369 (1,2,3,4) - These notes can confusion some new player ...
11. 01:05:583 (1) - clap here sounds better imo
    　
    MoeMoe~ Sekai's Future :
    　
12. -Sekai- >_< I think you need to put hitsounds neat
13. 00:09:869 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think the spacing is not the same >_<
14. 00:18:440 (3) - spacing
15. 00:22:726 (2,3,4) - ^
16. 00:28:940 (4) - ^
17. 00:38:583 (4,5) - add clap on these notes sounds better ?
    　
    Star's Future :
    　
18. 00:48:226 (6) - Remove clap on the slider's of the end sounds better
19. 01:46:298 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - If some player use Double time on this diff , I think they will miss some notes on this part , maybe make is straight
    　
    Yasora's Future :
    　
20. So many different spacing on this .... I'm worried about that...
21. 00:06:869 (5) - spacing
22. 00:52:726 (5) - Delete this note , because vocal stop at 00:52:619
23. 00:56:155 (6) - ^
24. 00:58:940 (1) - move this note on 00:58:297 (4) - this slider's end ,it will more comfortable to play
25. 01:02:369 (4) - Very very ugly!!!~~
26. 01:05:797 (2) - add whistle?
    　
    
    You must to read~!

    Red : I think you must to fix. Bule : need to discuss. Black : just suggest.

bossandy wrote:

• Hi Miya and the other mappers ~ request from my queue~
  　
  General :
  　

1. Delete .osb file in the folder ( Full Submit ) not neccesary and not important to mention this you know.
2. Use the hitsounds which on Star's Future diff is more good ~ Sorry, like the default one
3. I think the tags "Kudrayvka Noumi" is wrong ,it should be "Kudryavka Noumi" oh right, fixed this
4. You should add a Red Timing Section at 00:00:440 Because the music start here, I remind you this because of this : It's not important, and the timing is not wrong. Why i should add another red timing section?
   
   

   narakucrimson wrote:

   • Offset:

   1. In the section from 00:00:390 to 00:01:327, there is no music, so the offset isn't right at 00:00:390.
      You should move it to 00:01:327, and then add an extra red timing section at 00:02:265 to fix the metronome.

   　
   Kud's Future :
   　
5. Is the spacing too big ? Sorry, i'm not a fan of low spacing.
6. 01:33:012 (X) - Add a note here , follow the music , I think it's important ok, it's good
   　
   Miya's Future :
   　
7. Follow the vocal isn't a good idea on this song... Sorry, please don't mention this when you mod another map, because everyone style is different
8. Do not change spacing on 2 easiest diff It's intentional, see previous mod
9. You just have a Easy diff , But this diff ( Normal??) is too hard . You should change it easier Hard, please compare it to sekai diff and play it with mod.
10. 00:35:369 (1,2,3,4) - These notes can confusion some new player ... i don't think so.
11. 01:05:583 (1) - clap here sounds better imo nope, sorry
    　

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Nice song ~
Good Luck :3

bossandy wrote:

• Yasora's Future :
  　

1. So many different spacing on this .... I'm worried about that... hmm this is insane, I think that fine with many jump
2. 00:06:869 (5) - spacing why with spacing? I think that's not problem
3. 00:52:726 (5) - Delete this note , because vocal stop at 00:52:619 no, "waa" word is still running
4. 00:56:155 (6) - ^ same as above, sorry
5. 00:58:940 (1) - move this note on 00:58:297 (4) - this slider's end ,it will more comfortable to play no
6. 01:02:369 (4) - Very very ugly!!!~~ In my opinion is not. Because I want to make this slider is "zig-zag" or thunder (?) shape
7. 01:05:797 (2) - add whistle? no, the sound is weird to me

1. Song folder - normal-hitclap.wav - As far as I see, you do not use this file(N:C1). remove ? or do you plan to use?

1. 00:15:012 (x) - add note. and add finish ( I prefer the rhythm was the same as here　00:17:155 (3,4,5) )
2. 00:20:583 (3) - 1grid down. same height with 00:18:869 (1) .
3. 00:33:012 (2) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/k3z6 ( add clap to repeat of the slider ) 00:34:083 (3) - I think if match it with a vocal; 00:34:083~00:34:512. but I think that rhythm of the suggestion matches here
4. 00:52:298 (3) - I think it is better match the vocals here also. so http://puu.sh/k3Cs ( suggestion is a circle. If you suspect that it is difficult, may use the slider　)
5. 00:55:726 (4) - ^
6. 01:04:512 (4) - add clap to end of the slider ?
7. 01:33:440 (1) - remove NC and 01:34:298 (2) - add NC. ( same as 01:40:298 (4) )
8. 01:43:726 (1) - remove NC and 01:44:583 (2) - add NC ( same as 01:40:298 (4) )

1. 00:40:298 (3,4,5) - If this is normal diff, you should not use such a pattern I recommend that you use DS0.8x in the same way as others
2. 00:52:298 (2) - Suggestion of the rhythm: slider start move to 00:52:083 and add repeat
3. 01:04:297 (4) - add NC and 01:05:583 (1) - remove NC ?
4. 01:42:869 (5) - add NC ?
5. 01:46:297 (4) - ^

1. 00:10:512 (4) - add clap
2. 00:11:155 (1) - add clap instead to finish to start of the slider and add clap to end of the slider
3. 00:11:155 (1) - remove NC and 00:11:583 (2) - add NC
4. 00:11:583 (2) - add finish instead to clap
5. 00:14:155 (5) - add whistle instead to clap to end of the slider
6. 00:14:262 - Unnecessary green line
7. 00:14:476 - ^
8. 00:15:333 - ^
9. 00:15:012 (7) - add NC and 00:15:869 (1) - remove NC
10. 00:16:726 (3) - add NC and 00:17:797 (1) - remove NC and 00:18:440 (3) - add NC
11. 00:17:797 (1,2) - It is better there was a clap sound like the same as here 00:14:155 (5)
12. 01:08:798 (x) - add note. here is a vocal. If there is not a sound here, it is strange to me and 01:09:012 (1,2) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/k3Sy
13. 01:16:726 (6) - add NC
14. 01:27:655 (2) - Is the tick sound of this slider intentional? I think it is better not to use this
15. 01:28:726 (6) - add NC and 01:30:012 (1) - remove NC
16. 01:47:155 (5) - remove one repeat. It does not match a drumbeat

1. 01:05:905 (5) - remove note. I like rhythm without here
2. 01:13:190 (11) - remove note. I think a little overmap. and suggestion of the hitsound: 01:13:083 (10) - add clap and whistle. 01:13:298 (1) - add finish. 01:15:012 (5) - add finish. 01:15:869 (1) - add finish to end of the slider
3. 01:46:619 (4) - remove note ?

1. 00:03:869 (1) - remove NC and 00:04:726 (5) - add NC and 00:05:155 (1) - remove NC
2. 00:10:512 (1) - remove NC and 00:10:726 (2) - add NC
3. 00:10:512 (1) - use S:C2 clap is better. so 00:10:405 - hitsound N⇒change S:C2
4. 00:11:155 (6,7,8) - ^ (add clap) 00:10:619 - ^
5. 00:24:548 (1) - remove note. I think match better not put this
6. 00:28:726 (4) - add finish ?
7. 00:37:298 (6) - add NC and 00:37:726 (1) - remove NC
8. 00:48:440 (8) - Suggestion of the rhythm: this note move to 00:48:655
9. 00:50:583 (2,3) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/k495
10. 00:52:726 (4,5) - remove note ? Probably here is not the sound ?
11. 00:56:047 (5,6) - ^
12. 01:24:226 (5) - add NC ( jump point )
13. 01:34:297 (2) - spacing too close ;x; Because DS is about the same as 1/2rhythm, mistake it for it
14. 01:42:226 (1) - remove NC I think that this NC does not have a meaning
15. 01:48:012 (1) - spinner end 01:54:440. I think it is better to match other like the diff

kosiga wrote:

[Yasora's Future]

1. 00:03:869 (1) - remove NC and 00:04:726 (5) - add NC and 00:05:155 (1) - remove NC no
2. 00:10:512 (1) - remove NC and 00:10:726 (2) - add NC k
3. 00:10:512 (1) - use S:C2 clap is better. so 00:10:405 - hitsound N⇒change S:C2 ok
4. 00:11:155 (6,7,8) - ^ (add clap) 00:10:619 - ^ k
5. 00:24:548 (1) - remove note. I think match better not put this no
6. 00:28:726 (4) - add finish ? k
7. 00:37:298 (6) - add NC and 00:37:726 (1) - remove NC no
8. 00:48:440 (8) - Suggestion of the rhythm: this note move to 00:48:655 no
9. 00:50:583 (2,3) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/k495 no
10. 00:52:726 (4,5) - remove note ? Probably here is not the sound ? "waaaaaa" word is still running in here .-.
11. 00:56:047 (5,6) - ^ same as above
12. 01:24:226 (5) - add NC ( jump point ) k
13. 01:34:297 (2) - spacing too close ;x; Because DS is about the same as 1/2rhythm, mistake it for it k
14. 01:42:226 (1) - remove NC I think that this NC does not have a meaning no
15. 01:48:012 (1) - spinner end 01:54:440. I think it is better to match other like the diff k

kosiga wrote:

Hi~ Miya~ :3

from my queue ~

here my mod ~

[General]

1. Song folder - normal-hitclap.wav - As far as I see, you do not use this file(N:C1). remove ? or do you plan to use? ah okay, deleted it.

[Kud's Future]

1. 00:15:012 (x) - add note. and add finish ( I prefer the rhythm was the same as here　00:17:155 (3,4,5) ) nope
2. 00:20:583 (3) - 1grid down. same height with 00:18:869 (1) . ups, okay
3. 00:33:012 (2) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/k3z6 ( add clap to repeat of the slider ) 00:34:083 (3) - I think if match it with a vocal; 00:34:083~00:34:512. but I think that rhythm of the suggestion matches here nope
4. 00:52:298 (3) - I think it is better match the vocals here also. so http://puu.sh/k3Cs ( suggestion is a circle. If you suspect that it is difficult, may use the slider　) ok, it's good
5. 00:55:726 (4) - ^
6. 01:04:512 (4) - add clap to end of the slider ? i don't think it's fit there
7. 01:33:440 (1) - remove NC and 01:34:298 (2) - add NC. ( same as 01:40:298 (4) ) ok
8. 01:43:726 (1) - remove NC and 01:44:583 (2) - add NC ( same as 01:40:298 (4) ) ok

[Miya's Future]

1. 00:40:298 (3,4,5) - If this is normal diff, you should not use such a pattern I recommend that you use DS0.8x in the same way as others see previous mod please.
2. 00:52:298 (2) - Suggestion of the rhythm: slider start move to 00:52:083 and add repeat i don't want to increase 1/2 rythim again
3. 01:04:297 (4) - add NC and 01:05:583 (1) - remove NC ? ok
4. 01:42:869 (5) - add NC ? nope
5. 01:46:297 (4) - ^

1. 00:02:583 (2,3) - As there are mainly only vocals at the beginning, everything should follow them. Which is not the case of (3) which should be moved 1/2 earlier. However you can't move it 1/2 earlier because it would make the pattern too hard for a easy difficulty.
   So consider removing (2) and moving (3) 1/2 earlier.
2. 00:06:012 (2,3) - ^
3. 00:34:298 (3) - As you have followed the vocals with (2), this slider needs to follow them too, so move it 1/2 earlier.

1. 00:11:583 (1) - You should stack it with the previous (3), it would look much better :
   
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2. 00:39:869 (2,3,4,5) - This pattern is kinda confusing :
   
   1. Because the spacing between (3) and (4) is larger than the main spacing.
   2. (5) is hidden by (2) and (4)'s hitbursts which make it less visible.
   Therefore rearrange this pattern such that it is less confusing.
3. 00:50:583 (3,4) - I wouldn't put them so close to (2) track, it doesn't flow well.
4. 01:42:869 (5) - In my opinion, this circle should have a new combo mark since this triangle-shaped pattern is not included in 01:41:155 (1,2,3,4).
5. 01:46:297 (4) - ^

1. 00:13:297 (1,2,3) - This triple sounds totally out of place, I'd remove (2).
   If you really want to have a triple here, I would put the 1/4 circle at 00:13:619.
2. 00:14:155 (5) - Don't use a 1/1 slider here, thois plays very awkward. It looks like you miss something when you play it because there is nothing else than a tickclap at 00:14:369 when it should have a circle (like what you did at 00:17:155 (3,4,5) ) !
   Change it please, that's very frustrating. (_.__._)
3. 00:25:512 (2) - I don't see why you use a 1/1 slider here since there are cute vocals which only want to be mapped.
   I mean that's awkward since nothing justify having a 1/1 slider, that's why it is awkard to play. Thus instead you should map the vocals which would sound much better and more playable (this 1/1 slider is really awkward to play o.o).
   I would fix it this way :
   
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4. 00:28:940 (4) - ^
5. 00:33:869 (7) - Those claps sound out of place, I don't see what they actually follow. :/
   Remove them and add a clap on the slider's reverse instead. Sounds much better.
6. 00:47:583 (6,7,1,2,3) - You have a bad coming here :/
   
   1. Add new combo on 00:47:583 (6).
   2. Remove 00:48:012 (1)'s new combo.
   3. Add new combo on 00:48:869 (3).
7. 01:01:083 (2,3) - This pattern doesn't follow the music well. You should remove (2), move (3) at the spot where (2) was, and add a circle at 01:02:155.
8. 01:08:798 (7,1) - The 1/1 slider should start at (7)'s spot if you want to follow the vocals (which is the best thing to do here).
   You would have something like this, which plays much better :
   
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9. 01:11:797 (3,4,5) - This triple sounds out of place. Remove (4) please.
10. 01:21:012 (2) - This slider is too close from the previous note, that's confusing :
    
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    1. 00:59:369 (7) - In my opinion 20% is not enough, 30% sounds better.
    2. 01:05:369 (1,2,3) - With 30% I can barely hear them :/
       Stay with 40% here.
    3. 01:32:369 (3) - In my opinion, a spacing of 0.6x looks way better here.
11. 01:27:869 - This clap slider tick kinda surprised me, I think it's better not to have it since it doesn't really sound that good.
12. 01:34:297 (1,2,3,4) - I don't get what you are mapping here, the drums ? that sounds offbeat actually. You'd better follow the "Heys" here.

1. In my opinion, HP7 and OD8 is better than HP8 and OD7.

Miya wrote:

Noumi Kudrayvka is really cute x)

Mafiamaster wrote:

Miya wrote:

Noumi Kudrayvka is really cute x)

I'd rank that if you know what I mean.

Mafiamaster wrote:

Miya wrote:

Noumi Kudrayvka is really cute x)

I'd rank that if you know what I mean.