Hi, Miya-chan (。╹ω╹。)
As promised~
General
where is sekaibg.jpg? o_o
add "sekai" to tags. because "-sekai-" doesnt work at all on web
http://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist?s=7&o=1 ... 4&g=0&la=0
but dont remove "-sekai-". it works successfully in game.
Kud's Future
00:43:940 (2) - i think this note is hard to read for beginner, cuz it's on red tick.
00:45:869 (4,1) - switch newcombo
Miya's Future
00:01:298 (1) - whistle to the end
00:05:583 (3) - whistle
00:54:440 (3) - 7combos are too much for Normal diff imo, so add newcombo here or somewhere else
01:22:940 (5,1) - spacing
01:42:869 (5) - newcombo here?
Sekai's Future
00:11:583 (2) - 1grid left and down
00:27:226 (6) - this slider is not suitalbe here imo, try this rhythm or something else

00:37:298 (3) - maybe hard to read this pattern imo. so add newcombo here?
00:56:583 (1) - clap to the end?
01:06:440 (1) - finish to the beginning instead of clap
01:20:155 (4) - ^
Star's Future
00:02:798 (4,6) - not stacked well
00:46:298 (2) - ^
01:04:512 (4,5,6) - ^
01:35:369 (4,5,6) - ^
01:44:798 (2,3,4) - ^
01:41:369 (2,3,4) - ^
Yasora's Future
00:07:726 (1) - this spinner should start at 00:08:155 imo
00:17:797 (3) - whistle here like 00:14:369 (2) -
00:21:440 (1) - remove newcombo
00:23:583 (1,2,3) - like this?

00:29:155 - this tick sound is not suitable ><
00:37:190 (6) - this slider should start at 00:37:298 -
00:39:012 (7) - i think default finish is suitable here
00:55:726 (2,3,4,5,6) - i think this stream should be more curved, like this

01:12:226 (3) - add clap to the end?
01:20:155 (6) - i think default finish is better here, like 01:06:440 (1) -
01:22:083 (4,5) - why 1.3x here?
01:26:155 (3) - remove clap
01:30:547 (1) - are you sure its on blue tick?
good luck ~ >w<
star☆
As promised~
General
where is sekaibg.jpg? o_o
add "sekai" to tags. because "-sekai-" doesnt work at all on web
http://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist?s=7&o=1 ... 4&g=0&la=0
but dont remove "-sekai-". it works successfully in game.
Kud's Future
00:43:940 (2) - i think this note is hard to read for beginner, cuz it's on red tick.
00:45:869 (4,1) - switch newcombo
Miya's Future
00:01:298 (1) - whistle to the end
00:05:583 (3) - whistle
00:54:440 (3) - 7combos are too much for Normal diff imo, so add newcombo here or somewhere else
01:22:940 (5,1) - spacing
01:42:869 (5) - newcombo here?
Sekai's Future
00:11:583 (2) - 1grid left and down
00:27:226 (6) - this slider is not suitalbe here imo, try this rhythm or something else
00:37:298 (3) - maybe hard to read this pattern imo. so add newcombo here?
00:56:583 (1) - clap to the end?
01:06:440 (1) - finish to the beginning instead of clap
01:20:155 (4) - ^
Star's Future
00:02:798 (4,6) - not stacked well
00:46:298 (2) - ^
01:04:512 (4,5,6) - ^
01:35:369 (4,5,6) - ^
01:44:798 (2,3,4) - ^
01:41:369 (2,3,4) - ^
Yasora's Future
00:07:726 (1) - this spinner should start at 00:08:155 imo
00:17:797 (3) - whistle here like 00:14:369 (2) -
00:21:440 (1) - remove newcombo
00:23:583 (1,2,3) - like this?
00:29:155 - this tick sound is not suitable ><
00:37:190 (6) - this slider should start at 00:37:298 -
00:39:012 (7) - i think default finish is suitable here
00:55:726 (2,3,4,5,6) - i think this stream should be more curved, like this
01:12:226 (3) - add clap to the end?
01:20:155 (6) - i think default finish is better here, like 01:06:440 (1) -
01:22:083 (4,5) - why 1.3x here?
01:26:155 (3) - remove clap
01:30:547 (1) - are you sure its on blue tick?
good luck ~ >w<
star☆