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Suzuta Miyako - one's future-Let's Go Kud! Ver- (Short Ver.)

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Miya
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 06 Mei 2012 at 23:46:36

Artist: Suzuta Miyako
Title: one's future -Let's Go Kud! Ver.- (Short Ver.)
Source: Kud Wafter
Tags: opening -Sekai- Sekai Star Stream Yasora-chan Kudryavka Noumi
BPM: 140
Filesize: 14946kb
Play Time: 01:48
Difficulties Available:
  1. Kud's Future (1,87 stars, 119 notes)
  2. Miya's Future (3,7 stars, 161 notes)
  3. Sekai's Future (4,67 stars, 244 notes)
  4. Star's Future (4,96 stars, 285 notes)
  5. Yasora's Future (5 stars, 368 notes)
Download: Suzuta Miyako - one's future -Let's Go Kud! Ver.- (Short Ver.)
Download: Suzuta Miyako - one's future -Let's Go Kud! Ver.- (Short Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Futari dewo cute cute ~

Yess, Noumi Kudrayvka is really cute x)
Well, this is let's go kud ver. It's a slight diferent from the original one. But the rythim mostly is same.

~Detail~
Kud's Future (Easy) : 100%
Miya's Future (Normal) : 100%
Sekai's Future (Hard) : 100%
Star's Future (Insane) : 100%
Yasora's Future (2nd Insane) : 100%

Thx to -Sekai-, Yasora-chan and Star Stream for the Guest Diff
And the modder who improve this map :3
Sekai
title helped via irc~
SPOILER
17:10 <-Sekai-> : btw the artist is wrong
17:10 <-Sekai-> : D:
17:10 <Miya> : is it? o.o
17:10 <-Sekai-> : yes
17:10 <Miya> : what is it?
17:10 <-Sekai-> : Suzuta Miyako
17:11 <-Sekai-> : is the right one
17:11 <Miya> : is it? o.o any references?
17:11 <-Sekai-> : look at djpop map
17:11 <-Sekai-> : he mapped it
17:12 *-Sekai- is listening to (Suzuta Miyako - one's future)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/15742]
17:12 <Miya> : because i have an original song > http://puu.sh/iaQe
17:12 <-Sekai-> : but write it as this
17:12 <-Sekai-> : because there is 2 ver ranked
17:12 <-Sekai-> : with same name :o
17:14 <Miya> : hmm hmm
17:14 <Miya> : what is the first name of miyako suzuta then?
17:14 <Miya> : i need references >.<
17:14 <-Sekai-> : will japanese people use their last name first then their names
17:14 <-Sekai-> : well*
17:15 <Miya> : so which is right?
17:15 <-Sekai-> : the one i showed you
17:16 <-Sekai-> : but btw you can keep fixing your diff :3
17:16 <-Sekai-> : do that later \o/
17:16 <Miya> : hee from wikipedia > http://puu.sh/iaRx
17:17 <Miya> : wikipedia show that >.<
17:17 <Miya> : http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_Ku ... oundtracks
17:18 <-Sekai-> : hmm~
17:18 <-Sekai-> : well if you do this it'll list up under djpop's and other one's maps
17:18 <-Sekai-> : :o
17:18 <Miya> : hmm hmm
17:19 <Miya> : okay okay
17:19 <Miya> : it seems my artist need to be reversed
17:19 <-Sekai-> : yes
17:19 <-Sekai-> : :3
merchat7
Just notice your map and seems something weird with title?

Don't forget the . on Ver and keep consistent with usage of - or ~. Also should space out after one's future (looks better this way). Should be something like this.

one's future -Let's Go Kud! Ver.- (Short Ver.)
or
one's future ~Let's Go Kud! Ver.~ (Short Ver.)

No kudosu for this post
Sekai
ok i finished my diff, you can change the name if you like :3

dont forget to put the custom hitsound in the folder ~

Download: hitsounds.rar

Download: Suzuta Miyako - one's future-Let's Go Kud! Ver~ (Short Ver.) (Miya) [Sekai].osu
Topic Starter
Miya
merchat, please take a look here :
merchat7
Hmm... http://key.visualarts.gr.jp/kudo/blog/2 ... ure-1.html

Taken from their website, I would personally change it since the title doesn't look very good like this.

Hmm also this http://4.blog.xuite.net/4/4/3/a/1332686 ... 1851/1.jpg
and this http://4.blog.xuite.net/4/4/3/a/1332686 ... 1851/3.jpg
Topic Starter
Miya
nope, change the tittle on that movie too then :(
merchat7
I'm blind, then it should be one's future-Let's Go Kud! Ver- then. Change the ~ at the end to -.

If you really want to keep consistency with video.
Topic Starter
Miya
look at the pic carefully please. Or download the map and see it for yourself if you want to clarify it clearly.
merchat7
I did download your beatmap which is why I notice that it's - at the end and not ~

This picture should be very clear...



Or this (higher quality video) http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=pl ... hQWo#t=98s

Edit: Non-enlarged picture here http://puu.sh/icW6
Topic Starter
Miya
okay okay, but i don't want to add spacing to the that since i want to make it consistant witht the video.
Yasora
wait me .3.
Topic Starter
Miya
relax, i'll add it.
Take your time making your diff :)
Abe Nana
hello Miya. :p

SPOILER
Mod request taken from viewtopic.php?f=60&t=69552

: l

[General]

Add 'Little Busters' to the tag? : l



[Kud's Future]

: l


[Miya's Future]


00:03:226 (4) - move the 1 grid to the right.
00:04:083 (1) - asymmetric there. use this code
344,120,4083,6,0,B|256:56|256:56|172:124,1,210,0|2

340,120,4083,6,0,B|256:56|256:56|168:124,1,210,0|2
00:11:155 (3) - move to x:164 y:196
00:33:440 (3,4,1) - I would suggest this beat http://puu.sh/ikaF
01:23:583 (1,2) - spacing
01:26:583 (1,2,1,2) - :3 I want more beat http://puu.sh/ik6L
01:39:012 (2) - to left 1 grid. 1grid down


[Sekai's Future]


00:11:155 (1) - keep to the spacing
00:39:655 ~ 00:48:012 - why didn't you adding finish this part? :p
00:48:226 (2,3) - add note
01:18:440 (8) - clap
01:21:012 (5) - ^


[Star's Future]


00:07:083 (6) - 이 부분에 노트를 추가하고 스핀의 시작점이 00:07:190로 가는게 느낌상 좋을거같습니다
00:10:083 (2) - whistle
00:10:298 (4) - clap
00:10:940 (8) - ^
00:11:583 (1) - finish to start point
01:06:012 (6) - whistle

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:p
Topic Starter
Miya
thx, fixed some chata :3
Sekai
Yasora
>~< here. add tag please sorry for many file
oh yeah, change the title too please..

Download: BG and diff.rar

Download: hitsound.rar

Download: hitsound part 2.rar
Topic Starter
Miya
Yasora, hal-hal yang di rubah sama miya dan star stream dari diff yasora.
  1. Judul dan artis
  2. Tag dan offset
  3. Combo colour
  4. Finish sound yang kurang konsisten
  5. Slider yang nyentuh hp bar
  6. dsb
Maaf ya yasora, itu juga buat bikin diff yasora lebih bagus :), Hitsoundnya penuh, jadi sebagian besar ga bisa make hitsound yasora :(. Tolong disesuai ulang ya.
Tolong redownload dan baca savelog ini ya, soalnya ada beberapa point yang harus yasora pertimbangkan :

chatlog
12:47 <Miya> : star, can you help me in checking yasora diff ?
12:47 <Star Stream> : sure
12:48 <Miya> : i want to improve yasora diff before i'm going to upload it
12:53 <Star Stream> : so, what can i do for you?
12:53 <Miya> : well, just modding as usual in yasora diff :3
12:53 <Miya> : but do irc mod :P
12:54 *Star Stream is listening to (Suzuta Miyako - one's future-Let's Go Kud! Ver- (Short Ver.))[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/45503]
12:55 *Miya is editing Suzuta Miyako - one's future-Let's Go Kud! Ver- (Short Ver.)
12:55 <Miya> : >.<
12:55 <Miya> : download the yasora diff first star
12:59 <Miya> : basically the rythim is good
13:00 <Star Stream> : Suzuta Miyako - one's future-Let's Go Kud! Ver- (Short Ver.) (Miya)
13:00 <Star Stream> : jeez :p
13:01 <Miya> : huh?
13:01 <Star Stream> : nvm
13:01 <Star Stream> : 00:01:283 (1,2,3,4) -
13:01 <Miya> : hha, yes i already change that tittle :D
13:01 <Star Stream> : too sharp
13:01 <Star Stream> : isn't it?
13:01 <Miya> : too far?
13:01 <Star Stream> : yes
13:02 <Miya> : yes, it's not consistant with 00:04:711 (5,1,2,3,4) -
13:02 <Star Stream> : 00:48:425 -
13:02 <Star Stream> : feels empty
13:02 <Star Stream> : 00:57:425 (3) -
13:02 <Miya> : yes, adding it
13:02 <Star Stream> : 1grid right it perfect
13:02 <Miya> : agree with you
13:03 <Miya> : where?
13:03 <Star Stream> : 00:57:425 (3) -
13:03 <Star Stream> : 01:02:890 (1) - too short
13:03 <Star Stream> : maybe speating slider is better good
13:03 <Miya> : i think it's perfect
13:04 <Star Stream> : see,
13:04 <Star Stream> : 1 is on x:336
13:04 <Miya> : hmm, ok considering it
13:04 <Star Stream> : 3's tail on x:332
13:04 <Miya> : where?
13:04 <Star Stream> : 00:57:425 (3) -
13:04 <Miya> : slider shape is not good?
13:05 <Star Stream> : not shape
13:05 <Star Stream> : just placing
13:05 <Star Stream> : 01:02:354 (4) - almost reaching HP bar
13:06 <Miya> : woaa right
13:06 <Miya> : okay i change that
13:07 <Star Stream> : in kiai part, it's really feels empty compare with first parts
13:07 <Star Stream> : 01:17:140 (2,3,4,5) - too sharp again
13:07 <Miya> : yes, yes, i'll that to yasora, and i agree with you
13:08 <Miya> : leave that to yasora*
13:08 <Star Stream> : HP8 OD8 is really bad way :p
13:08 <Star Stream> : -1 both
13:08 <Miya> : woaa right
13:09 <Miya> : changed them
13:09 <Star Stream> : and she used soft-sliderslide2.wav and soft-hitclap.wav
13:10 <Miya> : she use her own hitsound
13:10 <Miya> : but my slot of hitsound is full
13:10 <Star Stream> : that doesn't matter
13:10 <Miya> : so i use your hitsound or sekai sound instead
13:10 <Star Stream> : ok
13:10 <Miya> : yes, i'll tell her to manage her hitsound
13:11 <Star Stream> : 00:37:068 (5,6) -
13:11 <Star Stream> : no
13:12 <Star Stream> : add a circle at 00:37:175 -
13:12 <Star Stream> : and shorten the slider by 1/4
13:12 <Star Stream> : and move 1/4 later

13:12 <Miya> : yeah yeah your right
13:12 <Star Stream> : it's really weird now
13:12 <Miya> : i'll higlight these, and tell yasora to fix that
13:13 <Star Stream> : 00:48:854 (1,2,1,2) - i wanna play them more soft
13:13 <Star Stream> : so recommend reduce them
13:13 <Star Stream> : 00:52:711 (5) - remove finish and add at 00:52:711 (5) -
13:13 <Miya> : spacing is too far right?
13:13 <Star Stream> : yes
13:13 <Star Stream> : finish- 00:56:568 (1) - like this note
13:14 <Miya> : yeah, inconsitant finish sound
13:14 <Miya> : changed
13:14 <Star Stream> : add finish 00:57:854 -
13:14 <Star Stream> : so more powerful with 00:58:497 -
13:15 <Miya> : umm, i don't think so
13:15 <Miya> : well leave that to yasora
13:15 <Star Stream> : or delete finish at 00:58:497 -
13:16 <Star Stream> : 01:05:140 (4) - add finish
13:16 <Miya> : oh yes it's not consistant
13:16 <Miya> : changed
13:16 <Star Stream> : 01:28:711 -
13:16 <Star Stream> : add finish, following 01:26:997 (1) -
13:17 <Miya> : yes agree
13:17 <Miya> : changed as well
13:18 <Star Stream> : if do that, add finish 01:27:640 - too
13:18 <Star Stream> : and 01:30:425 -
13:18 <Star Stream> : 01:47:568 (9) -
13:18 <Star Stream> : there's no rhythm
13:19 <Star Stream> : delete this note
13:19 <Miya> : yes agree with hitsound
13:19 <Miya> : ah yes deleted
13:19 <Star Stream> : um, that's all now
13:19 <Star Stream> : just major things
13:20 <Miya> : ok ok, i'll save this log :3
Melophobia
Hi, Miya-chan (。╹ω╹。)
As promised~

General
where is sekaibg.jpg? o_o
add "sekai" to tags. because "-sekai-" doesnt work at all on web
http://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist?s=7&o=1 ... 4&g=0&la=0
but dont remove "-sekai-". it works successfully in game.

Kud's Future
00:43:940 (2) - i think this note is hard to read for beginner, cuz it's on red tick.
00:45:869 (4,1) - switch newcombo

Miya's Future
00:01:298 (1) - whistle to the end
00:05:583 (3) - whistle
00:54:440 (3) - 7combos are too much for Normal diff imo, so add newcombo here or somewhere else
01:22:940 (5,1) - spacing
01:42:869 (5) - newcombo here?

Sekai's Future
00:11:583 (2) - 1grid left and down
00:27:226 (6) - this slider is not suitalbe here imo, try this rhythm or something else

00:37:298 (3) - maybe hard to read this pattern imo. so add newcombo here?
00:56:583 (1) - clap to the end?
01:06:440 (1) - finish to the beginning instead of clap
01:20:155 (4) - ^

Star's Future
00:02:798 (4,6) - not stacked well
00:46:298 (2) - ^
01:04:512 (4,5,6) - ^
01:35:369 (4,5,6) - ^
01:44:798 (2,3,4) - ^
01:41:369 (2,3,4) - ^

Yasora's Future
00:07:726 (1) - this spinner should start at 00:08:155 imo
00:17:797 (3) - whistle here like 00:14:369 (2) -
00:21:440 (1) - remove newcombo
00:23:583 (1,2,3) - like this?

00:29:155 - this tick sound is not suitable ><
00:37:190 (6) - this slider should start at 00:37:298 -
00:39:012 (7) - i think default finish is suitable here
00:55:726 (2,3,4,5,6) - i think this stream should be more curved, like this

01:12:226 (3) - add clap to the end?
01:20:155 (6) - i think default finish is better here, like 01:06:440 (1) -
01:22:083 (4,5) - why 1.3x here?
01:26:155 (3) - remove clap
01:30:547 (1) - are you sure its on blue tick?

good luck ~ >w<
star☆
Topic Starter
Miya

Melophobia wrote:

Hi, Miya-chan (。╹ω╹。)
As promised~

General
where is sekaibg.jpg? o_o When you download it, i haven't finish upload it :P
add "sekai" to tags. because "-sekai-" doesnt work at all on web
http://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist?s=7&o=1 ... 4&g=0&la=0
but dont remove "-sekai-". it works successfully in game. Oh right, okay added.

Kud's Future
00:43:940 (2) - i think this note is hard to read for beginner, cuz it's on red tick. Oh no, it's 3/2 rythim. I don't think it's hard :D
00:45:869 (4,1) - switch newcombo Okay

Miya's Future
00:01:298 (1) - whistle to the end Ok
00:05:583 (3) - whistle ok
00:54:440 (3) - 7combos are too much for Normal diff imo, so add newcombo here or somewhere else ah okay, added
01:22:940 (5,1) - spacing right, fixed
01:42:869 (5) - newcombo here? I don't think it's consistent >.<

good luck ~ >w<
star☆
hhe, thank you for your mod and star <3
Sekai
Yasora

Melophobia wrote:

Yasora's Future
00:07:726 (1) - this spinner should start at 00:08:155 imo no
00:17:797 (3) - whistle here like 00:14:369 (2) - k
00:21:440 (1) - remove newcombo no
00:23:583 (1,2,3) - like this? k
00:29:155 - this tick sound is not suitable >< yes, tick with this hitsound is weird. so I increase the volume to little a bit
00:37:190 (6) - this slider should start at 00:37:298 - k
00:39:012 (7) - i think default finish is suitable here already do that
00:55:726 (2,3,4,5,6) - i think this stream should be more curved, like this k
01:12:226 (3) - add clap to the end? no
01:20:155 (6) - i think default finish is better here, like 01:06:440 (1) - already do that
01:22:083 (4,5) - why 1.3x here? reduce a bit spacing
01:26:155 (3) - remove clap k
01:30:547 (1) - are you sure its on blue tick? yes, I'm sure because after stream this note more easier read by players imo
thanks for mod

Download: Suzuta Miyako - one's future-Let's Go Kud! Ver- (Short Ver.) (Miya) [Yasora's Future].osu
Ranger
Hi~ Miya
From my queue

[Kud's Future]
Good map :)

[Miya's Future]
00:05:155 (2) - Just suggestion.put in x:84 y:192
00:05:583 (3) - If you allowed ^,put in x:168 y:264
00:24:440 (1) - Remove clap
00:24:869 (2) - Add clap
01:02:369 (1) - How about like this?

x:240 Y:80

[Sekai's Future]
00:22:726 (2) - Put in x:308 y:72.It`s look better to me
00:36:440 (2) - Add NC?
00:45:869 (1) - ^
00:46:297 (3) - If you allowed ^,Remove NC
01:33:869 (3) - Add Finish
01:43:298 (8) - This silder looks ugly to me....How about make straight?

[Star's Future]
00:04:298 (7) - At `Hard rock` mode,this note touch the silder.Slightly up plz
00:09:440 (2) - Add NC?
00:11:583 (1) - Add Finish at the beginning
00:17:369 (6,8,10) - At `Hard rock` mode,this note touch the silder.Slightly up plz

[Yasora's Future]
01:10:297 (2) - Just suggestion.put in x:240 y:192.
01:42:655 (1) - Remove NC?
01:43:297 (5) - Ifyou allowed ^,Add NC

Good map~
Topic Starter
Miya

[Ranger] wrote:

Hi~ Miya
From my queue

[Kud's Future]
Good map :)

[Miya's Future]
00:05:155 (2) - Just suggestion.put in x:84 y:192 Too far, sorry
00:05:583 (3) - If you allowed ^,put in x:168 y:264
00:24:440 (1) - Remove clap
00:24:869 (2) - Add clap ok, sounds good
01:02:369 (1) - How about like this? Will leave it to that

x:240 Y:80
hhe, thx for the mod and the star :3
Sekai
Topic Starter
Miya
updated :3
Yasora

[Ranger] wrote:

[Yasora's Future]
01:10:297 (2) - Just suggestion.put in x:240 y:192. k
01:42:655 (1) - Remove NC? no
01:43:297 (5) - Ifyou allowed ^,Add NC no
thanks for mod

Download: Suzuta Miyako - one's future-Let's Go Kud! Ver- (Short Ver.) (Miya) [Yasora's Future].osu
Laurier
ok

Kud's Future
00:17:583 (4,5) - little down and (5) stack on 00:14:583 (3) ?
00:43:940 (2) - stack on 00:37:298 (3) is better. (nazi)

Miya's Future
00:46:083 (1) - why not use same form as 00:43:726 (4)?

Sekai's Future
00:28:726 (3,4) - looks little bad. try this http://puu.sh/iZDY
00:52:512 - add note?
00:57:226 (2) - try use spacing x1.3 http://puu.sh/iZEE
01:04:512 (6) and (7)end add finish
01:28:405 - add note
01:08:155 (3) - move 01:07:940 is more sound good imo.

Star's Future
01:03:012 (1) - (nazi)3rd way point little up sorry miss
01:05:369 (1,2) - sound20%? It is too low. please volume +10or20
01:54:440 - sound 5% is better

Yasora's Future
slidertick is Strange sound D:
00:05:583 (2) - nazi 2~3 grid up is better
00:31:940 (4) - why use x0.8? x1.0 is better...
00:55:726 (2,3,4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/iZJQ unuse grid snap and try this.
01:46:726 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - try unuse grid snap and remake.
imo.It is not good to contain two or more spacing in stream.
01:54:012 - same as Star's diff
Topic Starter
Miya

Laurier wrote:

ok

Kud's Future
00:17:583 (4,5) - little down and (5) stack on 00:14:583 (3) ? Ok, fixed :3
00:43:940 (2) - stack on 00:37:298 (3) is better. (nazi) ok

Miya's Future
00:46:083 (1) - why not use same form as 00:43:726 (4)? ah, ok, thx :D
thank you for the mod and star x)
Yasora

Laurier wrote:

Yasora's Future
slidertick is Strange sound D: I will fix this, if someone mention this again
00:05:583 (2) - nazi 2~3 grid up is better k
00:31:940 (4) - why use x0.8? x1.0 is better... k
00:55:726 (2,3,4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/iZJQ unuse grid snap and try this. no
01:46:726 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - try unuse grid snap and remake.
imo.It is not good to contain two or more spacing in stream. no, but that's still rankable right? I saw in some map, that ok if use some spacing in stream. just consistent the spacing and will easier follow by players imo
01:54:012 - same as Star's diff no
thanks for mod

Download: Suzuta Miyako - one's future-Let's Go Kud! Ver- (Short Ver.) (Miya) [Yasora's Future].osu
Sekai
hillaryzx
My mod for your 3rd map.... ( counting that I modded from modding queue )

General

(- _ -)/ pass...

Kud's Future

00:17:583(4) - add clap here...
00:46:298 - try adding circle here..

Miya's Future

00:02:583(2,3) - I think make these two circle into something like this

00:30:012(2) - remove repeat from this slider

Sekai's Future

00:30:440(8) - remove clap from this beat

00:33:869(7) - remove clap here also..


Star's Future

Huh~ good....

Yasora's Future

01:33:012(4,5) - remove clap at (4) and add it to (5)


Best to you, Miya... ;)
And I shall take my leave....


EDIT : make it nice and neat mod... hehe
Topic Starter
Miya

hillaryzx wrote:

My mod for your 3rd map.... ( counting that I modded from modding queue )

General

(- _ -)/ pass...

Kud's Future

00:17:583(4) - add clap here... no, break my 1/1 clap pattern
00:46:298 - try adding circle here.. nope, i don't follow vocal there. >.<

Miya's Future

00:02:583(2,3) - I think make these two circle into something like this nope, i want 1/2 tapping there >.<

00:30:012(2) - remove repeat from this slider nope, i think this is follow the vocal since 'subaa' are divided into 3 parts.
No change for my diff >.<
But thank you for modding :)
Nyquill
needs moar mirai
no exceptions
Topic Starter
Miya
moar mirai? :?:
Yasora

hillaryzx wrote:

Yasora's Future

01:33:012(4,5) - remove clap at (4) and add it to (5)
fixed! thanks for mod

Download: Suzuta Miyako - one's future-Let's Go Kud! Ver- (Short Ver.) (Miya) [Yasora's Future].osu
Sekai
no changing ~ but thanks for modding :3
Pokie
:) Kudo~

Edit: I mean the character name in romaji :P hehe

Edit2: -w- sugoku kawaii deshita~
Topic Starter
Miya
o.o huh?

i see, kawai desho? :3

nee? lol
LKs
From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

General

  1. Use the same video offset to all difficulties
  2. Consider adding Little Busters!EX and Esctasy to tags, Kud Wafter is a fan-disc of Little Busters!EX
  3. Why not find a bg for Star Stream's difficulty too? eg: http://puu.sh/j7zf

Kud's Future

00:34:298 (3) - Extend to 00:35:155, add clap to the end
00:35:583 (1) - Delete clap from this if changed
00:37:298 (3) - ^


Miya's Future

00:30:012 (2) - Little spacing error
00:40:298 (3,4) - Make sure your notes are sight-reading with current AR, so I suggest to make a little jump here


00:53:797 (2,1) - Switch their position opposite, it's tricky to overlap 1/2 notes under slider



Sekai's Future

00:10:083 (2) - Spacing error
00:14:155 (5) - Use slidertick hitsound here, delete it on 00:15:012 (7)
00:22:726 (2,3,4) - Spacing error
01:13:726 (4) - ^

Hitsounds aren't in a regular placement imo. Especially on this part: 00:25:298 -
You may put more concentration on it :D.


Star's Future

01:06:226 (8) - Spacing
01:10:726 (2) - Whistle at beginning


Yasora's Future

00:11:047 (5) - Spacing error during streams
00:11:476 (9) - ^
00:24:869 (4) - whistle
00:28:940 (1) - Use storyboard hitsound instead of slidertick's like this, they're two hitsounds with totally different sound effect.
To add storyboard hitsounds, add a line in your osu file like this:

Sample,Time,0,"your hitsound file",volume

00:46:940 (3) - ^
00:53:797 (2) - ^
01:00:655 (1,3) - ^
01:30:547 (1) - Don't use quadrupl here, it's off-beat :(


That's all, thank you for your generosity
Topic Starter
Miya
nothing changed in my diff >.<
but thank you for the mod
Sekai
Yasora

LKs wrote:

Yasora's Future

00:11:047 (5) - Spacing error during streams
00:11:476 (9) - ^
00:24:869 (4) - whistle
00:28:940 (1) - Use storyboard hitsound instead of slidertick's like this, they're two hitsounds with totally different sound effect.
To add storyboard hitsounds, add a line in your osu file like this:
Sample,Time,0,"your hitsound file",volume
00:46:940 (3) - ^
00:53:797 (2) - ^
01:00:655 (1,3) - ^
01:30:547 (1) - Don't use quadrupl here, it's off-beat :(
all fixed! thanks for mod

anyway Miya, about general I will leave it to you, thx

Download: Suzuta Miyako - one's future-Let's Go Kud! Ver- (Short Ver.) (Miya) [Yasora's Future].osu
Leorda
Hello

General
* No custom combo color?


Miya's Future
00:30:012 (2) - Remove 1 repeating slider for following vocal?
00:54:440 (1) - Stack under the head slider is might be hard to read for beginners


Sekai's Future

* You might want to add the last spinner, like others diff

00:11:583 (2) - Remove clap
00:15:012 (7) - Add clap at tail slider


Star's Future
01:12:976 (9) - This note is almost offscreen


*yawn*
Topic Starter
Miya
no change for my diff Leo.
But thank you for modding :)
Sekai
YTYuyu
Alright let's see what I can find.

General:
Set the preview time to 65583 as it clearly starts at "futari".

Kud's Future:
00:08:155 (1,2) - since (2) is at the red line, beginners might hit this too early or late. to make it easier replace (1,2) for a slider.
00:17:583 (4) - delete this note because it'd look unexpected for beginners as they might be used to the rhythm between (1,2,3).
00:43:940 (2) - hmm delete this and make a 1/2 slider starting at 00:43:726 so that it'd follow vocals accurately.
00:49:298 (1) - add a clap at the end to keep consistency?
01:00:226 (1,2,3) - replace this for a repeat slider to make it easier?
01:31:940 (2,3) - delete this and add a slider to where (2) is at and end it at 01:33:012 so that it'd follow the long pause.
01:48:012 (1) - extend the spinner till 01:54:440 like at star and Yasora's diff. it follows the guitar if you listen carefully.

Miya's Future:
01:19:512 (6) - a NC because of new lyrics?
01:22:940 (5) - make this a repeat slider as it follows "michi wo"
01:48:012 (1) - same as Kud's Future.

Sekai's Future:
00:07:298 - add a spinner and end it till 00:09:440 as it not only follows the vocals but the piano as well.
00:14:155 (5) - to make it sound nicer add a clap at the end. it should sound like the slidertick's clap.
00:25:512 (2) - make this a 1/2 repeat slider is it follows vocals accurately.
00:48:012 (1) - remove the NC because the vocals are still going.
00:48:869 (3) - make this a NC because of new lyrics and make this a 1/1 slider so that it'd follow "dake"
01:00:440 (1) - make this a 1/2 slider starting from the red tick at 01:00:655 so that it'd follow vocals accurately.
01:05:583 (8) - a NC here because of new lyrics.
01:20:155 (4) - ^
01:45:869 (1) - you should start the spinner at01:48:012 because the vocals are still going. add notes instead to follow the vocals and end the spinner like at star's diff.

Star's Future:
01:12:762 (7) - NC here because the vocals ended at the previous slider.
01:26:369 (6) - ^

Yasora's Future:
00:28:083 (1) - maybe add a clap here? sounds nice IMO
00:34:940 (4) - ^
00:38:155 (2) - ^
01:09:226 (1) - it'd look better if you can make this repeat once and add a circle at the big white tick.
01:36:655 (3) - same as 00:28:083
01:39:655 (6) - is there a reason why a clap is at the 1st repeat? move it to the 2nd repeat instead. same reason as above.

This is the best i can do. GL :D
Sekai
thanks byaku, fix some of those stuff :3
I think you should use this combo colours


Download: Suzuta Miyako - one's future-Let's Go Kud! Ver- (Short Ver.) (Miya) [Sekai's Future].osu
Yasora

Byakugan249 wrote:

Yasora's Future:
00:28:083 (1) - maybe add a clap here? sounds nice IMO k
00:34:940 (4) - ^ no
00:38:155 (2) - ^ no
01:09:226 (1) - it'd look better if you can make this repeat once and add a circle at the big white tick. no
01:36:655 (3) - same as 00:28:083 k
01:39:655 (6) - is there a reason why a clap is at the 1st repeat? move it to the 2nd repeat instead. same reason as above. k
thx for mod

Download: Suzuta Miyako - one's future-Let's Go Kud! Ver- (Short Ver.) (Miya) [Yasora's Future].osu
Topic Starter
Miya
fixed some. Thank you 249 :)
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