CXu wrote:

Hi there.
Let's just pretend I'm modding this because I saw it in #modreqs

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I'd prefer that you quote my post and state which changes you make, and which you have not. Thanks~
If you have any problems understanding what the hell I'm talking about, feel free to poke me in-game!

[Color guide]

1. Red text means that the issue is unrankable.
2. Blue text is a strongly recommended suggestion.
3. Black text is a regular suggestion.

[General]

1. You need a reverse arrow I got the skin from a different map. here: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/19431
2. approachcircle.png should be exactly 128x128 fixed
3. Maybe add Kinomi as tag? KinomiCandy is fine since his name doesn't have a space

[Easy]

1. 00:12:634 (1) - <3 :3
2. 00:17:732 (3,5) - This overlap ;_; Can you make the shape of (5) a little different so you can move it up a few notches? Also, it's not symmetrical, so you might want to fix that too. didn't feel like changing the slider, so I move (3)
3. 00:39:300 (3) - Add another repeat? done
4. 01:01:261 (3,4,5,6,1) - This pattern is probably pretty hard for a complete newbie, as the hitbursts are covering for the notes. I hope what I changed it to is better :3
5. 01:15:379 (1,2) - Move 3 gridlvl4 to the right so (2) is exactly in the center done
6. 01:21:261 (3) - Move 4 gridlvl4 upwards so it's aligned with 01:18:516 (1)? moved (1) down instead
7. 01:22:241 (4) - Reposition this if you follow the above^
8. 01:24:790 (1) - Make this more like this? done
   
   nvm grid 1.

That heart <3


[Insane]

1. 00:17:339 (4) - Move it down a bit so it doesn't overlap with 00:16:359 (2) Maybe somewhere like this: done
   
2. 00:20:477 (1) - Move 1 gridlvl4 to the left and 1 up. This is because of stacking. done
3. 00:22:437 (2) - Stack with 00:21:261 (4)? done
4. 00:36:947 (4) - this one is kinda weird imo. It's fine tho, so you can keep it as it is. I just find it kinda weird yeah, it was, fixed
5. 00:40:673 (11,1) - Center this done
6. 00:42:045 (5) - 1 gridlvl4 down. was 2 down to stack with (3), so I did that :3
7. 00:51:065 (3) - Try to make it follow the path of 00:50:281 (1)? did it without the code ;D
   
   

   256,32,51065,2,0,B|324:32|380:80,1,131.249998044223

8. 00:59:104 (4) - Stack with 00:58:124 (1) sliderstart done
9. 00:59:496 (5,6,1) - If you followed the above, move this a bit so it's aligned.
10. 01:16:947 (1,2,3) - Move this pattern down so it's not overlapping with 01:16:751 (10)? This will also make the movement from (3) to (4) smoother imo. done
11. 01:19:104 (7) - Weird looking slider ;w; straightened it out a bit
12. 01:26:261 (10) - 1 gridlvl4 to the right done
13. 01:26:359 (11) - 1 gridlvl4 to the right and 1 down. done

Why is the star rating for this lower than [Kinomi's Hard] ;w; because my hp drain was changed to 7

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Yeah, good job. Can't mod taiko =w=p
Nice mapset, and good luck =w=b
Long modpost is long

CXu wrote:

[0OoMickeyoO0's Normal]

1. 00:18:908 (1) - The pointy parts of this slider ;_; Make the slider without using red points? Oh yeah, thanks.
   
   SPOILER

   112,256,18908,6,0,B|80:279|72:319|80:366|160:414|247:406|200:319|227:275|283:275|311:319|263:406|350:414|430:366|438:319|430:279|398:255,1,512

   
2. 00:22:437 (2) - Stack underneath 00:20:673 (2) that's my mistake :3 thx
3. 00:27:535 (4) - Try this rhythm instead? change that stack to 1/2 slider with return :3
   
4. 01:04:790 (5) - Kinda ugly overlap with hitburst from 01:02:830 (1) Fixed~

Pretty sliders yeah! Yeah!

CXu wrote:

Hi there.
Let's just pretend I'm modding this because I saw it in #modreqs Oh you. =w=

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I'd prefer that you quote my post and state which changes you make, and which you have not. Thanks~
If you have any problems understanding what the hell I'm talking about, feel free to poke me in-game!

[Color guide]

1. Red text means that the issue is unrankable.
2. Blue text is a strongly recommended suggestion.
3. Black text is a regular suggestion.

[Kinomi's Hard]

1. 00:11:457 (5,6) - Of all places, why underneath the other slider? ;w; Also, the hitbursts from these makes an ugly overlap with 00:12:437 (2) later, so move it. Nope.
2. 00:21:849 (9) - Move this 4 gridlvl4 to the left, and 00:21:457 (8) 2 gridlvl4 to the left. I used to do that, until I changed it like this. (Couldn't find an arrow to the knee joke of that). No changes, sorry ;w;
3. 00:23:614 - Whistle Yup.
4. 00:35:967 (1) - Stack this on 00:36:947 (4) sliderend? Yup.
5. 00:41:261 - Add note? Nope.
6. 00:42:830 - ^ Nope.
7. 01:01:261 - whistle Yup.
8. 01:04:790 (7,9) - Why so ugly =w=p WHYYYYY
9. 01:21:261 (3,4) - Copy 01:20:477 (1,2), then ctrl+j Yup.
10. 01:25:575 (3,4) - Add claps on start and end of these sliders? ^

=W= Kult at du kunne modde dette /o/

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Yeah, good job. Can't mod taiko =w=p
Nice mapset, and good luck =w=b
Long modpost is long

Someone is impatient.

Agnes wrote:

Requested from the fire and ice queue. You received Ice.

[Kinomi's Hard]

Spoke to the user via IRC. Just made the suggestion of adding claps on the parts where they're emphasized during the kiai.

Agnes wrote:

[0OoMickeyoO0's Normal]

01:11:065 - The flow seems awkward here. You could do something like this. (Suggestion) Fixed

Agnes wrote:

Bubbled.

SPOILER

Makar8000 wrote:

@Love: Mok is right, if you include a skin for the circle elements you must include a reversearrow.png even if its from the template skin.

You also need to include a sliderborder color, even if its just white. Add this to the [Colours] section of the .osu files:

SliderBorder : 255,255,255

SapphireGhost wrote:

[0OoMickeyoO0's Normal]
- Looks good here.

SapphireGhost wrote:

Hello! I really did remember to mod this, don't worry.

[General]
- As previously noted, reversearrow.png and a custom slider border are necessary. 250,250,250 matches the overlay just a bit more! ye XD

[Insane]
00:33:810 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Maybe try something like this? It's a small difference, but at this BPM I find it awkward to start streaming on a blue tick. The other ones seemed fine. yummeh
01:28:516 - The inheriting section at this point causes spinnerspin.wav to fade out early, so it will sound better to just put it at the end of the spinner or do a decrescendo with more inheriting sections. herpaderp forgot to move it

[Easy]
- AR +1, maybe? It's a bit slow at the moment. done
00:12:634 (1) - <3 :3
00:22:045 (1,2,3,4,5) - Is there a different way of doing this to possibly avoid (2) overlapping with the previous (5)? It might be a bit more aesthetically pleasing if you can. Also, due to the approach rate (3,4) looks faster than it is, maybe unstack those. I did this instead
01:09:104 (1,1) - Try something like this? It avoids having to recover after a spinner and a short kickslider, which are both generally disliked for Easy difficulties. tried my best XD
01:24:006 (3) - Could you make this curve smoother? It makes me a bit sad right now. there, fixed

Alright, that's all I have to say for this map. I hope I can rank it at the same time as this version, but maybe one of you can use a different BG to differentiate the maps? kinda had this picture for a while before that set was made

Agnes wrote:

holy jesus this got ranked?

MY BUBBLES AREN'T FUCKING TERRIBLE, YAY