Doomsday93 wrote:

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

[EASY]

00:36:44 - Break? No. =)
00:41:77 - ^

no real problems with this. good job Thanks~

[NORMAL]


00:36:44 - Break? No. =)
00:41:77 - ^

again, no actual problems Thanks~

[HARD]


00:36:44 - Break? No. =)
00:41:77 - ^

[INSANE]

nothing

nice clean map. i struggled to find things wrong with it.
nice job Thanks~

star'd Thanks~

Derekku Chan wrote:

Okay. Are you guys NOT seeing the storyboard?

Gens wrote:

[Overall]

- No source? I can easily tell this is from some kind of anime or something. I'll add one.
- There seems to be some Un-Inhereted timing sections here... Explain? They're different on each difficulty it seems The un-inherited red ones are the same on each. If you meant inherited green ones, they're different for a reason. Like the one part: "suki yo shakeshakeshakeshakeshake suki yo". I could've just done 1/4 notes or something, but it really doesn't matter. Then later in the song on easy/normal, I have green sections to reduce volume on the slider. Ones on hard/insane to silence the spinner. Etc.

[Timing]
- I'd use Offset 6,441 instead of 775... Sure.

[Easy]
Felt perfect while playing~ hehe thanks :>

[Normal]
Awesome~ Thanks <3

[Hard]
I'm amazed you didn't use Tick Rate 2... Hmmmm, nah. I like 1
01:26:55 (x) - Seems I always want to hit a beat here... Add one? Oopsie *add*

[Insane]
01:26:55 (x) - Same as [Hard]. The tick rate too. Done~ (minus tick rate)

~ ~ ~

Wow, this map is really good, haven't met those kind of maps in awhile... Thanks, I appreciate the compliment <3
Go Starr! woo

0_o wrote:

Derekku Chan wrote:

Okay. Are you guys NOT seeing the storyboard?

Honestly, I didn't notice it either until my second or third run through Probably because some people just wait for the song to start and don't pay attention to the screen until the first notes come up. Maybe SB an arrow that appears with the star (instead of before it) that points in the initial direction? But by that time, people probably wouldn't see it until the last second anyway. I still don't see what the point of storyboarding an arrow was in the first place. It's the first note of the song. lrn2retry xd

..or the simpler solution would just be to stretch the star a bit so the endpoints are separate ^_^ And mess with the star? D: Maybe xd

strager wrote:

General
Storyboard at the beginning confused me. It shows an arrow going clockwise but the star is counter-clockwise. I don't think "left" should be pushed as much as "counter-clockwise," which to me makes more sense.

Easy
00:06:44 (1) - Repeat is late. =S I think it's fine.
00:53:77 (1) - Delete? Shown during the spinner I don't think it's really a problem :< EDIT: fine i'll fix it argh
01:02:45 (4,5) - Merge into slider? Good idea.
01:07:78 (3) - Under end of (1). Okie dokie.
01:08:28 (4,5) - Merge into repeating slider? Sure.
01:15:78 (1) - Move so it doesn't touch 01:13:12 (3). Kay.

Normal
00:23:10 (3) - This felt too early for the placement. I know it's snapped but it feels off somehow. HMM I dunno :/
00:51:60 (9) - I missed this note because I saw the spinner approach. Thus I would start 00:51:94 (1) 1/2 a beat later (end in the same place). Oops. Thanks!

Hard
00:33:10 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - When I saw this while playing I was like "oh wow." Only issue with this awesome pattern is the first slider. It needs to move with the rest of the curve. Fixed, thanks.

Insane
Nothing.

Derekku Chan wrote:

Gens wrote:

- There seems to be some Un-Inhereted timing sections here... Explain? They're different on each difficulty it seems The un-inherited red ones are the same on each. If you meant inherited green ones, they're different for a reason. Like the one part: "suki yo shakeshakeshakeshakeshake suki yo". I could've just done 1/4 notes or something, but it really doesn't matter. Then later in the song on easy/normal, I have green sections to reduce volume on the slider. Ones on hard/insane to silence the spinner. Etc.

Gens wrote:

Well, the difference on each difficulty about Inhereted sections doesn't matter, what I meant is why not Inherit the Un-inhereted sections? Also, I didn't notice they were the same :s Sorry~

Gens wrote:

Derekku Chan wrote:

Gens wrote:

- There seems to be some Un-Inhereted timing sections here... Explain? They're different on each difficulty it seems The un-inherited red ones are the same on each. If you meant inherited green ones, they're different for a reason. Like the one part: "suki yo shakeshakeshakeshakeshake suki yo". I could've just done 1/4 notes or something, but it really doesn't matter. Then later in the song on easy/normal, I have green sections to reduce volume on the slider. Ones on hard/insane to silence the spinner. Etc.

Well, the difference on each difficulty about Inhereted sections doesn't matter, what I meant is why not Inherit the Un-inhereted sections? Also, I didn't notice they were the same :s Sorry~

Rolled wrote:

Insane's cool.

eee wrote:

[All Diffs]
I'm just gonna say it ---> 00:06:441 is this timing section needed? is it supposed to be inherited, I think it lands on an exact beat that the previous one holdz, so, by me, it looks like it should either be inherited, or I need some glasses
*checked* yup, looks like it's useless where it is It was Gen's offset idea, which I couldn't tell if it was doing anything or not. Until I get any confirmations about timing from BATs (still waiting for some), I'm not sure what to do.

[Easy]
00:28:44 (2) - suggestion: extend this 1/2 so it reverses on 00:29:107, IT SOUNDS FINE JUST THE WAY IT IS THOUGH Nah. =)
00:31:10 (2) - this too? =)
00:54:44 (1) - this should be attached to the new BPM section, move it up VERY slightly until it reaches it, imo holy crap it WASN'T snapped D:! thanks for pointing this out!
01:03:121 (x) - break? that is, if somebody told you not to I usually hate short breaks like that, so no. ^_^
01:13:12 (3) - cool Thanks :3

[Normal]
I </3 2x in a [Normal] difficulty, it's just odd, you can easily make the 2x sliders match the video in 1x by just shortening it 1/4 :3
00:23:10 (3) - this slider is funny as it matches the vid, lol. . . . wait, I'm modding, snap out of it eee!!!, hahaha, ENOUGH That's the point, keep watching~!
00:41:774 (x) - maybe a break? that way, we can see da dude and girlz dancing Or you can just watch it without a break? :{
00:54:44 (2) - same as [Easy], maybe you can match it to the new timing section, whichever soundz better, idk, I sux at timin Again, thank you. I seriously don't know how this got unsnapped. ):
01:25:067 (x) - if I had time. . . I can make a screen, oh well. Here's what I did, try putting a slider here, that rebounds 3 timez, and place it so the endpoint is below 01:25:73 (1), hope that makes sense, this part just kinda felt. . . . empty to me, ya know? ichiban suki YO~~~~~

[Hard]
00:54:45 (2) - meh, just do it with all following difficulties (one more) Thank you thank you thank you thank you <3333

[Insane]
01:26:39 (1) - one grid up to align with (2,3) Kayz.

Rolled wrote:

Insane's cool.

^_^

anywayz, star Thanks~

0_o wrote:

Derekku Chan wrote:

Okay. Are you guys NOT seeing the storyboard?

Honestly, I didn't notice it either until my second or third run through Probably because some people just wait for the song to start and don't pay attention to the screen until the first notes come up. Maybe SB an arrow that appears with the star (instead of before it) that points in the initial direction?

..or the simpler solution would just be to stretch the star a bit so the endpoints are separate ^_^

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Easy]
00:00:85 (1) - move 1/4 earlier and try to separate the start from the end a bit more We agreed on fixing offset and essentially making it 1/8th earlier. =)
00:41:10 (5) - try a finish on the end Ehhh nah. :X
00:46:44 (5) - remove clap from end Fine.
00:57:62 (3) - end with a finish Sure.
01:08:28 (4) - ^ Sure.
01:25:73 (1) - i feel like this should have a finish somewhere I said the same exact thing before. I think having it on the end sounds okay.
01:26:39 (2) - end 1/4 earlier Someone told me to end it 1/4 LATER before >_> It doesn't sound right ending on the white tick. I'm not sure about ending it 1/8th earlier, either, so I'll keep it on the blue tick.


[Normal]
00:00:85 (1) - move 1/4 earlier Same as Easy.
00:11:77 (1) - start with a finish Kay.
00:47:44 (5) - use a whistle instead of a clap Kay.
00:57:62 (5,1) - a bit too much dead space imo =)
01:26:39 (2) - end 1/4 earlier Nuuu.

[Hard]
00:00:85 (1) - move slider start farther from slider end/repeat, its kinda hard to see Okie dokie.
00:08:77 (8) - try a finish Nah.
00:11:77 (1) - finish the start Yes!
01:08:62 (6) - end with a finish Okay.
01:27:22 (4) - end 1/4 earlier =P


[Insane]
00:00:85 (1) - separate slider start and end more Same as Hard, kay.
00:36:60 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - needs hitsounds
00:43:77 (1) - hitsound this I put sounds on the stream before it instead.
00:49:10 (1) - ^ ^
00:54:45 (2) - finish the end Done.
youre overusing whistle a little, try a different hitsound Kay-O.
01:27:22 (4) - end 1/4 earlier ;)

kingcobra52 wrote:

I'd delete the 1st timing section or inherit it if there are volume changes. Not really needed. It's there to make sure the ticks of the star are right (unless it doesn't matter what tick the slider is on). Either way it shouldn't affect anything~

-10 to the second offset. (6,431) Thank you very much~

The last timing section...I'm not sure. I've played with it but couldn't find a bpm/offset I liked. Try pm'ing awp and see if he can find the timing. Done.

Starred. Thanks~

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Easy]
looks good (b'.')b


[Normal]
01:08:77 (6) - move 1/2 earlier Oops. How'd I miss that? :< Thanks~


[Hard]
01:17:12 (5) - use a different hitsound on these What do you mean "these?" You only gave me one hit circle XP Anyway, I like the claps, but I changed a few to whistles a little after this. I also fixed the 2nd to last slider that was messed up.


[Insane]
looks good <3


fix and ill rebubble ^_^ Thanks =)

Takuma wrote:

I really don't have any problems with the map. But the timing I'm still unsure of.. It sounds a little off at parts. And since I'm not confident in my timing ability either I'm not going to post timing for you. Sorry.
This star is probably all I can give.

Derekku Chan wrote:

Effing singer doesn't like to keep in sync with the BPM D:

awp wrote:

Derekku Chan wrote:

Effing singer doesn't like to keep in sync with the BPM D:

Don't ever time the song to the vocals; time it to the beat of the song. Just a word of advice.

RemmyX25 wrote:

Easy:
00:00:81 (1) - This doesnt sound like it ends on the correct beat. Because of the fading out shooting star sound, the only "completely correct" way to end it (imo) would be to end it when the sound ends, but that's many beats later when the music starts. Anywhere else I try and end it doesn't sound any different, so I'm going to keep it as is. =)
01:26:42 (2) - Does not end snapped correctly. Move the end to the white tick behind it. I've been thinking about this for a while. The white tick almost feels a little early to me, but maybe it's only 1/16th or 1/8th off or something. I'll just put it on the white to make everyone happy

Normal:
00:00:81 (1) - see easy.See above ^
01:26:42 (2) - see easy. Fixed.

Hard:
00:00:81 (1) - Better. Could still use a little work, but its better. I din't want to make it any shorter because it looked retarded with a piece of the star missing.
01:27:26 (4) - see easy Done.
01:11:42 (1) - Take out the silent spinner-bonus please. it doesn't need to be silent, imo Sounds stupid with a hitsounds imo. I have it faded out like easy/normal do =)

Insane:
00:00:81 (1) - See hard See above ^
01:11:42 (1) - ^ See above ^
00:53:76 (1) - Re snap this to 1/4 tick If you meant where it starts, I moved it 1/4th forward on the timeline because it was off. If you meant when the slider repeats, I don't like it on 1/4th. The triplet pattern of the 1/3rd sounds perfect imo.
01:27:26 (4) - See easy Mmhmm.


Man this anime is old-school.

Shinxyn wrote:

So many mods already~ Hehe, yep. It's been in bubble status multiple times XP
Remove all sliderslide whistles please~ Sounds too empty without them, so no thanks =)

Easy-
00:13:13 (3,4) - the two claps made the map feel faster than it should've imo, I say change 4's clap to whistle instead Sounds empty and plain without claps, though :/
00:15:79 (3,4) - ^
00:18:47 (3,4) - ^

Normal-
00:51:93 (1,1,2) - don't like the triple (not counting slider end) finish hitsounds, remove one of them Hey you're right. Plus there's a cute little bubbly noise at the spinner, so I'll remove the finish on that one. =)

Hard-
00:47:43 (5,6) - mirror (1,2) please (right a tick) I never could get this PERFECT, but okay.
01:26:59 (2) - center without grid snap? Between 1 and 3? It can WITH snap, and I changed it somehow o:
Interesting slider shapes Hehe thanks. I got creative with them in this difficulty~

Insane-
Nothing I wanna point out~ <3

Is that last slider a "Yo"? xD That's the point XD ichiban suki yo

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Easy]
01:25:76 (1) - start 1/2 earlier (its not mapped to anything atm) Fine.


[Normal]
00:36:26 (6) - map the dead space Done.
00:41:59 (6) - ^
00:57:64 (5) - ^
01:02:96 (6) - ^
01:25:76 (1) - as in easy Mmhmm.


[Hard]
map your dead space this is Hard not Laze About For Awhile Kay.


[Insane]
looks good <3

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

oh good this looks a lot better without the long blank pauses in it <3

bubbles go!