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Haru - Voyage 1969 (Instrumental)

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mosluv
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mosluv
I love it WyndII. Some stuff I noticed that wasn't that good:

It would be better if the image didn't zoom for the 2nd time when your difficulty starts and after my first spinner. Maybe something else?
The reimu was here picture is really dark. You can try this one: Click Me if you like it.

BTW, did you use storyboard sounds? A lot of my hitsounds have changed and I don't like them that much o.o! If you have MSN or Xfire, I can send you a lot of pictures.

Other than that it's great. Thanks :)!
WyndII
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WyndII
uhm yea... I use a custom overdrive 1. for softfinish instead I put normalhit O.O

and Glad you like it now to edit it xD
tieff
Featured Artist
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tieff
It's awesome. Realy.

[Normal]
01:25:325 (1) - Maybe add clap here?
01:29:428 (1) - ^
01:33:531 (1) - ^
01:37:633 (1) - ^
02:28:402 (1) - Sorry, but why new combo?
03:01:223 (1) - Another new combo... Don't get it. =(

[Hard]
02:20:967 (6) - Maybe place this note here 02:21:224?

Amazing.
Starred.
mosluv
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mosluv

tieff wrote:

[Normal]
02:28:402 (1) - Sorry, but why new combo?
03:01:223 (1) - Another new combo... Don't get it. =(
The music is different on both 1's. @_@ If that made any sense. Also, I just didn't like the claps at the timings you mentioned.

Thanks for modding! :)
tieff
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tieff
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blissfulyoshi
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blissfulyoshi
Normal:
00:13:91 (3,4) - move down 1 notch (3) to align with 1 and 2 respectively
00:22:24 (3) - align with the rest of the combo
00:25:83 (3) - spacing is slightly off here
00:27:88 (3) - " "
00:51:99 (3) - spacing
01:05:32 (4) - make a vertical reflection of 2
01:08:40 (3) - spacing
01:09:68 (3) - " "
01:13:53 (4,1) - make both horizontal reflection of 2 from either combo
01:31:47 (3,4) - might want to align with 1,2 respectively
01:32:50 (1) - this is not a 180º spin of 01:28:40 (1) (probably not a problem)
01:35:58 (3,4) - same as 01:31:47 (3,4)
02:00:96 (3,5,6,7,8) - 3 and 5 are not vertical reflections of the bottom combo. After fixing that, remember to fix sliders 6,7,8
02:05:32 (1,2,3,4) - make this a square centered around the origin
02:09:17 (3) - spacing
02:10:45 (2) - " "
02:17:12 (2) - " "
02:18:65 (4) - " "
02:33:78 (3) - align with 4 from previous combo
02:38:40 (1,2,3,4) - the spacing is slightly off through these 4 notes
02:47:37 (2,4) - make a 180º spin of 1,3
02:50:45 (2) - make a 180º spin of 1
02:58:91 (3) - slightly off reflection of 1

I am a little afraid about 00:09:42 (1,2,1,2) being too hard for normal.

That is all. Fine map.
Takuma
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Takuma
Offset: 1,757 ms?

- All:
Nice hitsounds and spinner, but nothing is spinning! Haha.

Ahh, I have no problems with this map!
mosluv
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mosluv
Thanks blissfulyoshi and Takuma. I'll wait for another opinion on the offset, as I will have to move every single green timing point >_<!

blissfulyoshi wrote:

I am a little afraid about 00:09:42 (1,2,1,2) being too hard for normal.
I'll wait for a 2nd opinion on this too. :)
mican
mican
new spinner is ok :)
Gabi
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Gabi
great map :D
Jeffro
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mosluv
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mosluv
Thank you leimiliya, Gabi and Jeffro :)!
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Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
Man... Your current avatar has such a small head compared to the body. ._.

Normal~
  1. 00:13:91 (3,4) - Move 1 tick to the right.
  2. 01:38:65 (1) - Yay! Redo break after spinner. (It'll shorten)
Hard~
  1. 00:44:04 (4) - Move 1 tick to the left.
  2. 02:20:19 (2,3,4) - LOL!!!! Move a tick down.
  3. 02:24:04 (1,1) - Move 1 tick to the right.
  4. 02:26:86 (6,7,8) - Move 1 tick to the left. OR stack the circles on top of the sliders exactly like what you we're doing.
  5. 02:35:58 (8) - Move a tick down. Then fix up 02:36:09 (1), etc. to your liking.
Great job!
mosluv
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mosluv
Lol @ avatar comment xD! Thanks for modding :)!
ztrot
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nsane
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nsane
star_count++;
mosluv
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mosluv
o: Thank you!
Cyclone
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Cyclone
Offset feels early. Maybe add 10 ms. Also it is preferred if you have a timing section either before or on the first note. If you were to add a section on the 1st note, the offset comes out to 1737, so something like 1747 or so should do the trick.

Hard:

00:13:14 (1,2,3,4) - This just sounds incredibly awkward. I'd say more notes would clean it up. I would like you to mess around with it though instead of me suggesting something here.
02:51:73 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4) - This just seems kinda lazy.

EDIT I should probably mod normal, eh?

Normal:

Gets kinda jumpy at times for a normal... Like at 01:08:91() - and 02:58:65() -

00:13:14 (1,2,3,4) - Same thing as Hard.
mosluv
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mosluv
Changed everything you mentioned except the jumps in Normal. I figured Normal shouldn't be too easy and the jumps are not that hard to reach, even for a Normal.

Thanks for modding! :D
Shinxyn
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Shinxyn
Normal- Most of these mods are to make normal easier (your probably NOT ganna do them...)
00:09:43 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - rather not have these 1/4 next to each other
02:01:74 (6,7,8) - don't place behind the combo?
02:08:15 (1) - would sound better as just 3 notes (reduce two repeats and add note to where this used to end?)
02:09:69 (1) - ^
02:32:25 (6) - nazi- up a tick
02:40:46 (1,2,1) - space this instead of stack
Kinda jumpy, but whatever

Hard-
00:28:79 (1,2) - sounds weird to me
00:52:51 (5) - right two or three ticks?
01:34:05 (7) - right a tick?
02:20:20 (2) - down a tad bit?
Hitsounds are very unique, don't think I want to really mod those xD

Too lazy to re-download atm >_<;
mosluv
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mosluv
^Didn't do everything but thanks for the mod! :)
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Cyclone
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kyou201916
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kyou201916
wonderful beatmap
mosluv
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mosluv
Thank you Cyclone and Kyou! I changed the patterns again at 00:13:15 and made the jumps at 02:55:59 a little closer.

:)
Lef
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Lef

WyndII wrote:

Nexy...
This map
is
freaking
awesome.
^
<3 it. Star.
Andrea
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ktgster
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Star
mosluv
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mosluv
Thanks for the mod and stars! I removed the jumps you mentioned osuplayer111.
lukewarmholiday
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lukewarmholiday
Nothing, starred
whymeman
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mosluv
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mosluv
00:34:56 (6,1) - Interesting jump...
I used distance snap 2.0 for this jump. It should be fine o.o.

00:51:49 (1,2,3,4,5) - The shape here looks a bit odd. ( (5) seems to stick out a bit...)
I do not see what you see here D:!

00:57:38 (1,2,3,4,5,7,8) - It could get slightly confusing when the notes are cluttered up like this.
It's not that cluttered D:<!

Thanks for the mod :)!
Hikato
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Joined August 2008
Hikato
[Normal]
02:01:74 (6) - Align the end with 5 also not the same angle as 7 and 8
02:02:25 (7) - Align the end with 3

[Hard]
00:13:15 (1) - O.o Align with 1
02:51:74 (1,3) - why are these further away from 1 than 3 and 4?

Only things I can point out.

Starred.
mosluv
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mosluv

Hikato wrote:

[Normal]
02:01:74 (6) - Align the end with 5 also not the same angle as 7 and 8
02:02:25 (7) - Align the end with 3
Nuuu! I want them to be the same angle. Thanks for the mod :)!
0_o
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0_o
Holy carp @ yellow bars

I got nothin

*
Alace
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Alace
hahahaha
i don`t need to find a custom hitsound for you
you only need to do one thing
the hitsounds will be 1000000% better

Remove all normal whistles

Nice map <3
mosluv
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mosluv
Thank you Alace for that. It does sound so much better O.O!
Alace
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Alace
<Normal>
02:49:18 (1) - i miss at this point XD too near maybe

<Hard>
Good

plz use the blank sound sample made by cyclone
I guess players won`t be lag after using it
viewtopic.php?f=10&t=729&p=141504#p141504
I also made ablank sample pack for all hitsounds
Don`t forget full submit

EDIT:All good
bubble
Yuukari-Banteki
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Yuukari-Banteki
[Normal]
00:02:77 (2) - insert break
01:13:79 (1) - inherit section on end is out-of-place
01:35:59 (3) - ^ just look at your inherit sections and make sure theyre all a tick before the note you intend them to affect



[Hard]
00:02:90 (3) - insert break
check your inherit sections
02:57:90 (1) - incorrect bpm change


probably rankable in its current state but i think it could be polished a bit more. GREAT map though, fun to mod ^_^
Cyclone
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Cyclone
My ONLY concern with this map is the choice of Combobursts you have chosen. It seems like you just grabbed your favorite 2 out of my skin or something.

Contact me on IRC maybe i'll come up with something.
mosluv
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mosluv

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Normal]
00:02:77 (2) - insert break As I said in a previous post, I want the players to pick up their HP between these long breaks. It shouldn't even be a problem as it's almost impossible to fail @ the start
01:13:79 (1) - inherit section on end is out-of-place
01:35:59 (3) - ^ just look at your inherit sections and make sure theyre all a tick before the note you intend them to affect This shouldn't be a problem either. There is no way someone can hit the end of a slider early so the player ends up hearing the previous sound sample

[Hard]
00:02:90 (3) - insert break Same reason as above
check your inherit sections Same reason as above
02:57:90 (1) - incorrect bpm change No idea what you mean here. I did not change the BPM

probably rankable in its current state but i think it could be polished a bit more. GREAT map though, fun to mod ^_^
Thanks for modding though o.o!

D:! Haven't been on much, thus, haven't seen Cyclone yet. I didn't just grab the favorite 2. I thought I had put in Kaguya and Eirin. Sorry if I made a mistake; they look so much like the ones in the spinner.
nsane
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nsane
I thought I had put in Kaguya and Eirin. Sorry if I made a mistake; they look so much like the ones in the spinner.
I don't know who the one in 0 is, but the person comboburst1 is Sakuya Izayoi.
Cyclone
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Cyclone
None of the characters in my skin are either Kaguya or Eirin. To date those 2 have no been playable in any game. The 2 you grabbed were Aya Shameimaru and Sakuya Izayoi.
KatanAnime
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KatanAnime
Ty Nexy for this good map!
CheeseWarlock
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anonymous_old
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General
Nice green timeline.
Star'd. <3

Hard
00:47:13 (4,5,6,7) - Centre these sliders properly.
01:03:02 (6,1) - This looked kinda weird and I almost missed the jump. =X
mosluv
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mosluv

CheeseWarlock wrote:

I nazi because I care ^__^ <3

Playing with default skin's hitsounds, the few whistles in this map come across as very random, and make the otherwise-nice hitsounds feel messy. Add a few more in so they don't draw so much attention? I don't see it as messy, I like the way it sounds. Unless there are some specific areas you are talking about that I haven't noticed.

[Hard]
00:40:72 (7,1) - All the rest of the anti-jumps here are fine. But this one just ruins the flow every time I play it. I like the way it is and don't think it ruins the flow.
Thanks for modding and strager as well ^_^!

@Cyclone: I changed the combobursts to hopefully Kaguya & Eirin this time. Please re-download.
Yuukari-Banteki
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Yuukari-Banteki
[Normal]
looks good ^^


[Hard]
looks better 8D


k have a nice pretty bubble ^_^
Cyclone
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Cyclone
combobursts are facing the wrong way >_>
mosluv
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mosluv
^What? Do you mean flip them horizontally? Elaborate please. D:
Shinxyn
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Shinxyn

Nexy wrote:

^What? Do you mean flip them horizontally? Elaborate please. D:
All comboburst images should be facing right.... (the "backside of the character would be left)... in other words, yes, flip them horizontally.... >_< just turn on comboburst and test it..
Layola_old
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mosluv
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mosluv
^ _ ^ Fixed the combobursts.
Metroid
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Metroid
Easy
01:38:914 - Make this part of the next combo please?

Hard
Fine to me but it's questionable...

Good luck on rankage..

starred' for awesomeness..
Alace
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mosluv
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mosluv
Thanks Alace. Metroid, I think you put your mod post in the wrong map. I have no Easy and 01:38:91 is a break.

Thanks for the star though D:!
Cyclone
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aww, only 2 more plays.. :P

RemmyX25
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download should be fixed?
Layola_old
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Layola_old
You uploaded an old version. The combobursts are wrong, which there was a long argument about it in the above posts.
RemmyX25
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Zekira
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RemmyX25 wrote:

Well shit.
Awesome opener.
Nachy
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Nachy

RemmyX25 wrote:

Well shit.

If someone could get me the combo bursts, ill fix it again.
Are these the correct combo bursts?


Lybydose
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Lybydose

NachoPiggy wrote:

RemmyX25 wrote:

Well shit.

If someone could get me the combo bursts, ill fix it again.
Are these the correct combo bursts?
GIANT FILES
Yes.

Also the BG thumbnail should be updated.
RemmyX25
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no no no no those are too wide. They can't be more than 500px wide.

EDIT: cb-0 is reduced, but i dont know what im going to do about the other one.
Nachy
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Nachy
Strange, those are the combo bursts in my folder ever since it got ranked :<

What's the err.. right resolution for these?
Lybydose
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Lybydose
Well those ARE ones originally included, but whatever, here's the resized.

SPOILER


Yes one of them is cut off on the left. It was either that or scale it down, and it would look stupid if one was scaled down and the other not. It looks fine though because the left side always lines up with the screen edge.

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RemmyX25
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Well, 500px is the max width. id say 768px is an appropriate height.

EDIT: Should be fixed
Gabi
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Gabi
lol. every other bat says a different thing. is it 500 width or 388 width? because the tempalte skin says 388
RemmyX25
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yea. but the max IS 500px. The template is ONLY 388px
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