This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年7月10日 at 13:07:45

Artist: yanaginagi
Title: Killer Song
Tags: maeda jun owari no hoshi no love song climbb65588 KanaRin
BPM: 166
Filesize: 15602kb
Play Time: 04:25
Difficulties Available:

1. Climbb & Kana's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 1536 notes)
2. Easy (1.66 stars, 189 notes)
3. Hard (4.91 stars, 527 notes)
4. Insane (5 stars, 739 notes)
5. Normal (3.45 stars, 282 notes)

Download: yanaginagi - Killer Song
Download: yanaginagi - Killer Song (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#8th

きみを守る それが唯一のあたしの生きる意味

ほぉｎ

Suzully wrote:

ほぉｎ

ほぉん
ほしありがとー！

finished making~

mod simasu

Amazing beatmaps..
wait for rank in this map. elo ratio 2532 !!!

Artists name is Yanagi Nagi not Yanaginagi, there is a space. Also the album name should be in tags not as source. I can provide the video for this song if you want to add it. Maeda Jun's work is very nice.

And maybe I can make a taiko after I finish Muteki no Soldier's taiko lol.

Fiya wrote:

Artists name is Yanagi Nagi not Yanaginagi, there is a space.

I think Artists name is Yanaginagi is correct .

1.Name of her Twitter is"yanaginagi".
2.It is written as "yanaginagi" on the album package.

reasons are these.
so, I won't change Artists name..

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Fiya wrote:

Also the album name should be in tags not as source.

I agreed.
I will delete source then add this to tag.

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Fiya wrote:

I can provide the video for this song if you want to add it. Maeda Jun's work is very nice.

Hmm..? this map has already video...

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Fiya wrote:

And maybe I can make a taiko after I finish Muteki no Soldier's taiko lol.

thank you for proposal.
but, I don't need Taiko diff T_T

When I clicked to download it with Direct there was no video O.o oh well, got it now nvm that xD.

And I'm probably going to make an unsubmitted taiko then since Nagi is love.

ッシャオラ！！！！！！！
リクエストにこたえます。

Easy

• 00:06:478 (2) - 00:06:117 ここからスタート？
  00:20:574 (2) - 1/2折り返しスライダーとかも合うかも
  00:24:912 (4,1) - spacing
  00:30:695 (5) - add new combo
  00:52:201 (2) - 終点を白線まで伸ばしてみてはどうでしょ
  01:43:707 (4) - マイブーム　
  
  01:54:008 (x) - add note
  03:36:625 (2) - 白線まで伸ばしてみようー
  03:50:179 (2,3,4) - sukiya
  

Normal

• 00:15:514 (x) - add note
  00:15:876 (x) - ^
  01:25:093 (4) - ピアノの音があるからホイッスル加える？
  02:39:783 (5) - 1/1スライダーの音とりも好き
  02:43:093 (5) - 1/2スライダーでも好き！！！！！！！！！！！
  03:58:673 (3) - add new combo

Hard

• 01:53:827 (5,6) - スタック多い気がしたから
  
  03:33:733 (4) - 最後のグリッドを1つ下

Insane

• 00:09:370 (3) - 始点にfinish追加
  00:23:737 (4) - ハイハットの音がするから始点にwhistle追加?
  00:50:574 (1,2,3) - 音がないとこに3連打いれるのはう～んって感じ。ほかの人にも言われたらちょっと考えてみて。
  01:40:815 (9) - スペーシングここだけ違うからもう少し離してみるといいかも
  01:48:406 (1,2,3) - same as 00:50:574 -
  02:04:490 (3) - 1/2スライダーとかにしてもおもしろいかも
  
  02:11:990 (1) - 1サビの終わりでボーカルカバーなのでここもボーカルに合わせたほうがいいと思う。
  02:25:921 (2) - 始点か終点どっちかのwhistleはずす？
  02:35:127 (5) - 反転させると(2)と1グリッドずれてるからここを1グリッド上にあげましょ
  03:03:824 (4) - ピアノの音聞くとここも上にあわせて(5)から下にずらすと音にあってるかな。ただ見た目が悪くなっちゃうかも
  03:09:607 (4) - ^
  03:14:396 - ピアノに合わせてるからここはあけてるん？
  03:20:902 - ピアノに合わせてるならもっとここらにオブジェクト置いたほうがいいよー
  03:26:685 (1,2,3) - スタックより1grid離したりしてみたら？
  03:29:215 (1,2,3) - same as 00:50:574 -
  04:02:468 (6) - 折り返しと終点にfinish追加?

Rankedはよ！！！！

R a r e wrote:

ッシャオラ！！！！！！！
リクエストにこたえます。

Easy

• 00:06:478 (2) - 00:06:117 ここからスタート？ no change T^T
  00:20:574 (2) - 1/2折り返しスライダーとかも合うかも ok~
  00:24:912 (4,1) - spacing ^
  00:30:695 (5) - add new combo ^
  00:52:201 (2) - 終点を白線まで伸ばしてみてはどうでしょ ^
  01:43:707 (4) - マイブーム　
  
  ^
  01:54:008 (x) - add note no change~
  03:36:625 (2) - 白線まで伸ばしてみようー ok~
  03:50:179 (2,3,4) - sukiya
  
  no change~

Normal

• 00:15:514 (x) - add note no change~
  00:15:876 (x) - ^ ^
  01:25:093 (4) - ピアノの音があるからホイッスル加える？ ^
  02:39:783 (5) - 1/1スライダーの音とりも好き ^
  02:43:093 (5) - 1/2スライダーでも好き！！！！！！！！！！！ ^
  03:58:673 (3) - add new combo ちょっと変えました！

Hard

• 01:53:827 (5,6) - スタック多い気がしたから
  
  ok~
  03:33:733 (4) - 最後のグリッドを1つ下 ok~

Insane

• 00:09:370 (3) - 始点にfinish追加 ok~
  00:23:737 (4) - ハイハットの音がするから始点にwhistle追加? ん～とりあえずnoで！
  00:50:574 (1,2,3) - 音がないとこに3連打いれるのはう～んって感じ。ほかの人にも言われたらちょっと考えてみて。 了解～
  01:40:815 (9) - スペーシングここだけ違うからもう少し離してみるといいかも ほんとだT_T
  01:48:406 (1,2,3) - same as 00:50:574 - 了解～
  02:04:490 (3) - 1/2スライダーとかにしてもおもしろいかも
  
  ok~
  02:11:990 (1) - 1サビの終わりでボーカルカバーなのでここもボーカルに合わせたほうがいいと思う。 ok~
  02:25:921 (2) - 始点か終点どっちかのwhistleはずす？ 始点消しました～
  02:35:127 (5) - 反転させると(2)と1グリッドずれてるからここを1グリッド上にあげましょ ok~
  03:03:824 (4) - ピアノの音聞くとここも上にあわせて(5)から下にずらすと音にあってるかな。ただ見た目が悪くなっちゃうかも noでT_T
  03:09:607 (4) - ^ ^
  03:14:396 - ピアノに合わせてるからここはあけてるん？ yes~
  03:20:902 - ピアノに合わせてるならもっとここらにオブジェクト置いたほうがいいよー うーん・・とりあえずnoで・・
  03:26:685 (1,2,3) - スタックより1grid離したりしてみたら？ ok~
  03:29:215 (1,2,3) - same as 00:50:574 - 了解ー
  04:02:468 (6) - 折り返しと終点にfinish追加? no change~

Rankedはよ！！！！

mod thanks

rankがんばってください

M4M~
sorry for the delay

[General]
#1 KIAI終点 01:02:502 -
#3 KIAI終点 02:11:900 -

無音soft-sliderslide2入れましょう

[Easy]
00:06:478 (2) - 終点finish
00:12:261 (2) - ^
00:07:924 (3) - newcombo
00:43:707 (1) - 始点finish
00:46:599 (4) - newcombo
00:48:044 (6) - finish
00:50:484 - 不要な緑線
01:02:502 - なぜ音量下げたし
01:19:852 (1) - 始点finish
01:31:418 (1) - ^
01:34:309 (4) - newcombo
01:41:538 (1) - finish
01:48:587 (1) - spinner-osuにoverlapされるので上に向けるのはおすすめしませぬ
01:55:815 (2,3) - ちょっと難しい＆あってないので白線に置いたほうがいいかな
01:58:888 (3) - 始点finish
02:00:153 (1) - finish
02:10:454 (3) - ^
02:11:990 (1) - 終点02:13:346 -
02:32:334 (3) - newcombo
02:36:472 (1) - remove newcombo
02:47:231 (4) - 終点finish?
03:29:125 - 不要な緑線
03:38:974 (2) - 折り返しfinish
04:12:589 (1) - 音拾えてないつ


[Normal]
00:00:695 (1,1) - spinnerの後にしては後続が早い気がするimo
Spinner終点が音取ってるわけじゃないので白線1個分くらい短くしても違和感ないと思います
00:07:562 (4) - 始点finish
00:13:346 (4) - ^
00:17:321 - add note
00:22:020 (1) - 始点finish
00:33:587 (1) - ^
00:36:478 (5) - newcombo
00:48:225 (1) - 後続が早い気がするから終点00:49:490 - ？
00:50:484 - 不要な緑線
00:56:358 (1) - newcombo不要
01:00:695 (3) - finishあってない
01:45:876 (3) - finish
01:46:056 (1) - 00:48:225 (1) -
02:11:990 (1) - 終点02:13:346 -
03:26:866 (1) - finishあってない
03:39:697 (2) - finish
03:50:360 (2,3) - finishあってない
04:02:830 (1) - finish
04:14:034 (1) - 終点finish

[Hard]
Hardにしては飛びすぎな印象

00:13:346 (4) - 始点finish
00:27:080 (3) - 終点clap
00:30:334 (4) - 始点clap
00:35:755 (1) - ^
00:47:683 (3) - 終点finish
00:48:135 (1) - Insaneに同じ
01:00:876 (7) - 真ん中に音が欲しい
01:16:237 (4,1) - いきなり飛びすぎなような
01:31:418 (1) - 始点finish
01:37:201 (1) - ^
01:41:177 (1,3) - NC入れ替え
01:45:876 (3) - finish
02:43:921 (1) ~ 02:48:886 (7) - 退屈
02:45:576 (3,5) - newcombo
02:48:886 (7) - finish
03:39:516 (5) - 終点finish
03:51:083 (1) - finishつけるなら終点
04:02:830 (4) - 始点finish
04:14:396 (3) - ^

[Insane]
00:10:093 (5) - 流れ的にfinish
00:13:346 (1) - 始点finish
00:33:406 (1) - clap
00:39:370 (1) - 音量低めでfinish?
00:40:815 (1,2,3,4) - 四連続はさすがにうるさいような　あとここはC2使うべきかと～～
00:48:044 (3) - finish
00:48:135 (1) - 終点00:49:490 - にして 00:49:852 - にnote置いてみては
01:00:876 (1) - downbeatに音が欲しいような
01:15:514 (5) - newcombo
01:19:671 - ここに三連打？
01:25:635 - 音量+10~20
01:31:056 (7,1) - このjumpは読みにくい＆doesnt make sense
01:37:201 (1) - finish
01:38:647 (1,2,3,4) - 00:40:815 (1,2,3,4) -
01:45:876 (3) - finish
01:58:707 (1) - finishいれるなら終点
02:00:514 (2,3) - finishあってない
02:10:273 (1) - 01:00:876 (1) -
02:24:059 ~ 02:37:300 - whistle多くてちょっと煩いと思う
02:24:886 (2,1) - 読みにくいような
03:39:516 (5) - 折り返しfinish
03:41:324 (2,3) - finishあってない
03:57:769 (8) - finish
04:02:468 (6) - 折り返しfinish

Melophobia wrote:

M4M~
sorry for the delay

[General]
#1 KIAI終点 01:02:502 -
#3 KIAI終点 02:11:900 -

無音soft-sliderslide2入れましょう
ok~

[Easy]
00:06:478 (2) - 終点finish
00:12:261 (2) - ^
00:07:924 (3) - newcombo
00:43:707 (1) - 始点finish
00:46:599 (4) - newcombo
00:48:044 (6) - finish
00:50:484 - 不要な緑線
01:02:502 - なぜ音量下げたし
01:19:852 (1) - 始点finish
01:31:418 (1) - ^
01:34:309 (4) - newcombo
01:41:538 (1) - finish
01:48:587 (1) - spinner-osuにoverlapされるので上に向けるのはおすすめしませぬ
01:55:815 (2,3) - ちょっと難しい＆あってないので白線に置いたほうがいいかな
01:58:888 (3) - 始点finish
02:00:153 (1) - finish
02:10:454 (3) - ^
02:11:990 (1) - 終点02:13:346 -
02:32:334 (3) - newcombo
02:36:472 (1) - remove newcombo
02:47:231 (4) - 終点finish?
03:29:125 - 不要な緑線
03:38:974 (2) - 折り返しfinish
04:12:589 (1) - 音拾えてないつ の、のーちぇんじで・・ T_T


[Normal]
00:00:695 (1,1) - spinnerの後にしては後続が早い気がするimo
Spinner終点が音取ってるわけじゃないので白線1個分くらい短くしても違和感ないと思います
00:07:562 (4) - 始点finish
00:13:346 (4) - ^
00:17:321 - add note
00:22:020 (1) - 始点finish
00:33:587 (1) - ^
00:36:478 (5) - newcombo
00:48:225 (1) - 後続が早い気がするから終点00:49:490 - ？
00:50:484 - 不要な緑線
00:56:358 (1) - newcombo不要
01:00:695 (3) - finishあってない
01:45:876 (3) - finish
01:46:056 (1) - 00:48:225 (1) -
02:11:990 (1) - 終点02:13:346 -
03:26:866 (1) - finishあってない
03:39:697 (2) - finish
03:50:360 (2,3) - finishあってない
04:02:830 (1) - finish
04:14:034 (1) - 終点finish

[Hard]
Hardにしては飛びすぎな印象

00:13:346 (4) - 始点finish
00:27:080 (3) - 終点clap
00:30:334 (4) - 始点clap
00:35:755 (1) - ^
00:47:683 (3) - 終点finish
00:48:135 (1) - Insaneに同じ
01:00:876 (7) - 真ん中に音が欲しい のーちぇんじ T_T
01:16:237 (4,1) - いきなり飛びすぎなような
01:31:418 (1) - 始点finish
01:37:201 (1) - ^
01:41:177 (1,3) - NC入れ替え
01:45:876 (3) - finish
02:43:921 (1) ~ 02:48:886 (7) - 退屈
02:45:576 (3,5) - newcombo
02:48:886 (7) - finish
03:39:516 (5) - 終点finish
03:51:083 (1) - finishつけるなら終点
04:02:830 (4) - 始点finish
04:14:396 (3) - ^

[Insane]
00:10:093 (5) - 流れ的にfinish
00:13:346 (1) - 始点finish
00:33:406 (1) - clap
00:39:370 (1) - 音量低めでfinish?
00:40:815 (1,2,3,4) - 四連続はさすがにうるさいような　あとここはC2使うべきかと～～
00:48:044 (3) - finish
00:48:135 (1) - 終点00:49:490 - にして 00:49:852 - にnote置いてみては
01:00:876 (1) - downbeatに音が欲しいような のーちぇんじ T_T
01:15:514 (5) - newcombo
01:19:671 - ここに三連打？ すらいだーにしましたー
01:25:635 - 音量+10~20
01:31:056 (7,1) - このjumpは読みにくい＆doesnt make sense
01:37:201 (1) - finish
01:38:647 (1,2,3,4) - 00:40:815 (1,2,3,4) -
01:45:876 (3) - finish
01:58:707 (1) - finishいれるなら終点
02:00:514 (2,3) - finishあってない
02:10:273 (1) - 01:00:876 (1) - のーちぇんじ T_T
02:24:059 ~ 02:37:300 - whistle多くてちょっと煩いと思う
02:24:886 (2,1) - 読みにくいような
03:39:516 (5) - 折り返しfinish
03:41:324 (2,3) - finishあってない
03:57:769 (8) - finish
04:02:468 (6) - 折り返しfinish

almost fixed!
melochan arigato-

Taiko diff is done~

Download: yanaginagi - Killer Song (Ryafuka) [Climbb & Kana's Taiko Oni].osu

climbb65588 wrote:

Taiko diff is done~

thanks

Can't star

xsrsbsns wrote:

SPOILER

[General]
I get 354 offset for the first red line, while other red lines fine for me. ok~ changed~
I have not written hitsound mods for Hard & Insane because they are minor and you might not follow them.. If you followed Easy/Normal it's almost the same parts ><
Consider raising volume by 10~15%? (Maybe it's just me, but I like to hear sounds when I hit notes, it's really soft here) hmm..no change now but,I take it into consideration :3

[Easy]

You could add claps in
-----------------------------
00:04:671 (1) - slider end
00:06:478 (2) - slider start
00:07:924 (1) - start, middle, end
00:10:093 (3) - note
00:10:454 (1) - end
00:12:261 (2) - start
-----------------------------

00:18:767 (X) - Consider adding a note here
00:30:333 (3) - Add clap
00:36:117 (3) - ^
00:47:683 (2) - ^
01:02:593 (1) - I think this spinner is better ended at 01:03:948 or 01:05:394. If you change, change in other diffs too.
01:45:514 (2) - Add clap
all fixed

[Normal]

00:30:333 (X) - Consider adding a note here
00:36:117 (4) - Add clap
00:38:647 (3) - Add clap to end
01:35:394 (2,4) - Add clap
ok~

01:58:888 (4,5) - Add clap to start no~ ><
02:09:370 (2,4) - Add clap ^
(If you follow these two, you can apply same hitsound pattern to other chorus and other diffs)

[Hard]
03:05:541 (1) - Ctrl+R? Flows better ok~

[Insane]
<3 <3

Good map~ can't mod much orz

Can't star no problem :3

thanks modding ></

Hiiii

[Easy]
00:16:257 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts from spinner, could be hidden for beginners (sometimes beginners are slowly to read note)
00:50:775 (1) - ^ also, add 1 repeating slider? Like 00:53:667 (3)?
01:48:607 (1) - ^
01:50:956 (3) - Add 1 repeating slider or extend it to white tick. This short slider seems doesn't fit to music for me
03:29:396 (1) - Same issue as 00:16:257 (1)


[Normal]
00:50:233 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts and spinner-osu, it makes totally hidden for beginners
01:48:064 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts from spinner, could be hidden for beginners
02:07:763 (5) - Add 1 repeating slider for following vocal?
03:28:854 (1) - Same issue 01:48:064 (1)
03:38:794 (4) - Move to previous white tick for following vocal?


[Hard]
01:37:221 (5) - New combo for preventing of long combos
03:05:360 (1) - It's doesn't makes sense if you using a single combo in one object only


[Insane]
02:50:721 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This streams are overlapped by hitbursts and it's unreadable for players


Good luck!

Leorda wrote:

Hiiii

[Easy]
00:16:257 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts from spinner, could be hidden for beginners (sometimes beginners are slowly to read note) ok~
00:50:775 (1) - ^ also, add 1 repeating slider? Like 00:53:667 (3)? ok,but no change slider.
01:48:607 (1) - ^ ok
01:50:956 (3) - Add 1 repeating slider or extend it to white tick. This short slider seems doesn't fit to music for me no change~
03:29:396 (1) - Same issue as 00:16:257 (1) ok~


[Normal]
00:50:233 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts and spinner-osu, it makes totally hidden for beginners ok
01:48:064 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts from spinner, could be hidden for beginners ^
02:07:763 (5) - Add 1 repeating slider for following vocal? ^
03:28:854 (1) - Same issue 01:48:064 (1) ^
03:38:794 (4) - Move to previous white tick for following vocal? no change~


[Hard]
01:37:221 (5) - New combo for preventing of long combos
03:05:360 (1) - It's doesn't makes sense if you using a single combo in one object only
these are mistake..changed~ thanks ;A;

[Insane]
02:50:721 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This streams are overlapped by hitbursts and it's unreadable for players ok,changed place..If this is still a problem, I will change ><


Good luck!

thanks modding~

Nyaa-desuu ~

[General]
- Add climbb65588 and KanaRin to your tags since they made a diff for you.
- osb. is not in use so remove it.


[Easy]
00:11:920 - Add a circle here or move 00:12:281 (3) here.
00:55:655 (4) - Reverse.
03:51:806 (4) - Line with (3)


[Normal]
00:52:763 (4) - Reverse.
01:32:522 (2) - Line with (1)
03:49:998 (2) - Add a circle?


Nyaww~
I got lazy so thats it ;w;
Good luck tho~ ^^

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Nyaa-desuu ~

[General]
- Add climbb65588 and KanaRin to your tags since they made a diff for you.
- osb. is not in use so remove it.
fixed them~

[Easy]
00:11:920 - Add a circle here or move 00:12:281 (3) here.
00:55:655 (4) - Reverse.
03:51:806 (4) - Line with (3) hmm,what do you mean..?
all no~

[Normal]
00:52:763 (4) - Reverse.
01:32:522 (2) - Line with (1) what do you mean..
03:49:998 (2) - Add a circle?
all no~

Nyaww~
I got lazy so thats it ;w;
Good luck tho~ ^^

thanks modding~

nice map
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Alright let's see what I can find. Mod requested in game.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. Just putting this for fun

[General]
CLEAR!

[Easy]
00:03:968 - make this a normal hit hitsound to match the drums.
00:16:257 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4) - for this one remove all whistles and add whistles at every 2nd downbeat. i think it sounds a lot better than every whistle at every 1st downbeat.
00:24:932 (4) - extend this slider till 00:27:462 to follow the vocals a lot accurately.
00:33:607 (1) - either replace the whistle for a finish, or add a finish with the whistle. you'll hear the sound of the cymbals if you listen carefully.
00:56:558 (1) - do Ctrl+J and make this slider symmetrical. it flows a lot smoother from and to the notes IMO.
01:02:613 (1) - remember what i said about not putting spinners this close on easy diffs? this would surprise beginners as the spinners spins immediately once the note is hit. set it to the red line so that you give a bit of time for beginners to get ready.
01:22:763 (4) - similar to 00:24:932.
01:34:329 (1) - replace the whistle for a clap to match the drums.
01:50:956 (3) - replace this 1/2 slider for a circle. beginners might let go thinking that it's a circle and not a slider due to the length of the slider.
01:52:944 (2) - extend this till 01:53:847 to follow the vocals a lot accurate.
01:55:655 (2) - remove this and add a 1/1 slider starting from 01:55:474. the majority of this diff is focusing on vocals and not the instrumental.
01:56:378 (3) - replace this for a 1/1 slider to follow the long pause accurately.
02:12:010 (1) - same as 01:02:613.
02:12:010 (1) - ^
03:30:842 (3) - remove the repeat on this slider. i find it unfitting and it breaks the flow. instead remove it, and add a 1/1 slider starting at 03:31:745 for a nicer flow to and from the notes.
03:33:733 (2) - ^
03:42:408 (2) - ^
03:57:589 (5) - same as 01:56:378.
04:08:432 (2) - same as 03:30:842.

[Normal]
00:13:366 (4) - make this a NC because the guitar changes.
00:14:811 (6,7) - *nazi* stack this perfectly. it plays weird if the notes aren't stacked perfectly.
00:15:173 (7,1) - if this is unintentional, keep the spacing consistent. for easy and normal diffs, the DS should be consistent throughout the whole map. as it stands the DS is at 0.75 and the default DS is at 1.0.
00:46:257 (1,2,3) - try to do something easier than this. i don't think players at the normal level would alternate this quick.
02:33:990 (4) - same as 00:13:366 but the lyrics change.
02:50:631 (1) - i don't mind the 1st spinner, but this one would surprise players because they might think they're done spinning give a bit of a gap for players so that they can get ready to spin again for the 2nd time.
03:11:685 (3) - make this slider symmetrical for a smoother flow.
03:31:565 (4) - add another repeat to follow vocals?

[Hard]
00:05:414 (3) - stack the end of this slider with the end of (1). i don't like to see overlaps like this because they throw me off guard during gameplay.
00:23:305 (3,1) - here too. i see the blanket, but the overlap gets in the way during gameplay. either change the look of (3), or move (3) somewhere else so that it doesn't happen.
00:37:582 (5) - if you want to crate a gap between these 2 notes, make this slider a 4 point slider so that the blanket would look a lot nicer. it should look like this.
00:51:860 (4) - how about moving it here to avoid the bad overlaps?
00:52:763 (7,8) - if you follow the suggestion above, move it here for a smoother path from the previous note.
01:33:607 (2,4) - same as 03:11:685 on normal.
02:01:076 (2) - how about stacking this on the other (2)? it might ruin the DS, but it'll look a lot neater during gameplay IMO.
02:32:334 (4) - i think this is unrankable because the hitburst is covering the repeat arrow. move it so that the repeat arrow would be fully visible for players to see.
03:06:263 (3) - stack this on the beginning of (1). it'd flow a lot smoother and it'll be fully visible to see for players.
03:14:034 (2) - make this repeat twice and add 2 more 1/4 kick sliders to follow the drums.
03:30:480 (4) - move this here. same reason as 00:51:860.
03:37:528 (5) - i think it'd be fun if you can stack this on the end of (2).
03:41:685 (3) - stack this at the end of (1). it'd look a lot neater and it'd be fully visible to see for players.
i like the flow patterns, but i don't like the overlaps. IMO they get in the way during gameplay, so i suggest finding a way to fix the overlaps. they get in the way and it doesn't look nice. this is just my personal opinion so you can ignore this.

[Insane]
try AR9? i think it flows a lot smoother than AR8.
01:56:016 (1,2,3,4) - how about doing something like thid to challenge players? i think players might find this fun to do. if you ignore this, the you can do something similar to this.
03:14:034 (2) - why a 1/2 slider? you can hear the drums here, so add a stream to follow the drums.
same comment about the overlaps, but a fun diff nonetheless.

I guess that's it. GL

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright let's see what I can find. Mod requested in game.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. Just putting this for fun

[General]
CLEAR!

[Easy]
00:03:968 - make this a normal hit hitsound to match the drums. ok~
00:16:257 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4) - for this one remove all whistles and add whistles at every 2nd downbeat. i think it sounds a lot better than every whistle at every 1st downbeat. ^
00:24:932 (4) - extend this slider till 00:27:462 to follow the vocals a lot accurately. no change
00:33:607 (1) - either replace the whistle for a finish, or add a finish with the whistle. you'll hear the sound of the cymbals if you listen carefully. ok~
00:56:558 (1) - do Ctrl+J and make this slider symmetrical. it flows a lot smoother from and to the notes IMO. ^
01:02:613 (1) - remember what i said about not putting spinners this close on easy diffs? this would surprise beginners as the spinners spins immediately once the note is hit. set it to the red line so that you give a bit of time for beginners to get ready. ^
01:22:763 (4) - similar to 00:24:932. no~
01:34:329 (1) - replace the whistle for a clap to match the drums. ok~
01:50:956 (3) - replace this 1/2 slider for a circle. beginners might let go thinking that it's a circle and not a slider due to the length of the slider. ^
01:52:944 (2) - extend this till 01:53:847 to follow the vocals a lot accurate. ^
01:55:655 (2) - remove this and add a 1/1 slider starting from 01:55:474. the majority of this diff is focusing on vocals and not the instrumental. no~
01:56:378 (3) - replace this for a 1/1 slider to follow the long pause accurately. ^
02:12:010 (1) - same as 01:02:613. ok~
02:12:010 (1) - ^ is it 02:49:093 (1) - ? maybe,ok~
03:30:842 (3) - remove the repeat on this slider. i find it unfitting and it breaks the flow. instead remove it, and add a 1/1 slider starting at 03:31:745 for a nicer flow to and from the notes. no~
03:33:733 (2) - ^ ^
03:42:408 (2) - ^ ^
03:57:589 (5) - same as 01:56:378. changed to circle~
04:08:432 (2) - same as 03:30:842. no~

[Normal]
00:13:366 (4) - make this a NC because the guitar changes. ok
00:14:811 (6,7) - *nazi* stack this perfectly. it plays weird if the notes aren't stacked perfectly. ^
00:15:173 (7,1) - if this is unintentional, keep the spacing consistent. for easy and normal diffs, the DS should be consistent throughout the whole map. as it stands the DS is at 0.75 and the default DS is at 1.0. ok,I add notes
00:46:257 (1,2,3) - try to do something easier than this. i don't think players at the normal level would alternate this quick. ok~
02:33:990 (4) - same as 00:13:366 but the lyrics change. ^
02:50:631 (1) - i don't mind the 1st spinner, but this one would surprise players because they might think they're done spinning give a bit of a gap for players so that they can get ready to spin again for the 2nd time. hmm..I change start to red tick
03:11:685 (3) - make this slider symmetrical for a smoother flow.　ok~
03:31:565 (4) - add another repeat to follow vocals? no~

[Hard]
00:05:414 (3) - stack the end of this slider with the end of (1). i don't like to see overlaps like this because they throw me off guard during gameplay. ok,changed place
00:23:305 (3,1) - here too. i see the blanket, but the overlap gets in the way during gameplay. either change the look of (3), or move (3) somewhere else so that it doesn't happen. no~
00:37:582 (5) - if you want to crate a gap between these 2 notes, make this slider a 4 point slider so that the blanket would look a lot nicer. it should look like this. ok~
00:51:860 (4) - how about moving it here to avoid the bad overlaps? no~
00:52:763 (7,8) - if you follow the suggestion above, move it here for a smoother path from the previous note. ^
01:33:607 (2,4) - same as 03:11:685 on normal. ok~
02:01:076 (2) - how about stacking this on the other (2)? it might ruin the DS, but it'll look a lot neater during gameplay IMO. ^
02:32:334 (4) - i think this is unrankable because the hitburst is covering the repeat arrow. move it so that the repeat arrow would be fully visible for players to see. ^
03:06:263 (3) - stack this on the beginning of (1). it'd flow a lot smoother and it'll be fully visible to see for players. ^
03:14:034 (2) - make this repeat twice and add 2 more 1/4 kick sliders to follow the drums. ok~
03:30:480 (4) - move this here. same reason as 00:51:860. ^
03:37:528 (5) - i think it'd be fun if you can stack this on the end of (2). stack on the start of (2)~
03:41:685 (3) - stack this at the end of (1). it'd look a lot neater and it'd be fully visible to see for players. ok
i like the flow patterns, but i don't like the overlaps. IMO they get in the way during gameplay, so i suggest finding a way to fix the overlaps. they get in the way and it doesn't look nice. this is just my personal opinion so you can ignore this.

[Insane]
try AR9? i think it flows a lot smoother than AR8. ok~
01:56:016 (1,2,3,4) - how about doing something like thid to challenge players? i think players might find this fun to do. if you ignore this, the you can do something similar to this. no~
03:14:034 (2) - why a 1/2 slider? you can hear the drums here, so add a stream to follow the drums. ok~
same comment about the overlaps, but a fun diff nonetheless.

I guess that's it. GL

thanks 249-san!

へい

[Easy]
00:24:932 (4) - add NC?
00:53:667 (3) - ^
01:22:763 (4) - ^
02:03:064 (3) - ^
03:55:420 (3) - ^
04:01:203 (3) - ^

[Normal]
00:07:582 (4,1) - switch NC
00:46:257 (1,2) - ^
01:50:414 (1,3) - ^ (以降のパートと統一するため)
01:53:847 (1,2) - ^
01:57:281 (6,1) - ^
03:06:263 (4,1) - ^
03:36:986 (1,3) - ^

[Hard]
00:07:582 (4) - add NC
00:12:100 (6,1) - switch NC
00:13:366 (4) - add NC
00:17:341 (1,2) - switch NC
00:46:619 (4,1) - ^
01:27:100 (5) - add NC
01:55:835 (6,1) - switch NC
01:57:100 (4) - add NC
02:07:582 (3,1) - Hardにしては飛びすぎのような…
02:42:058 (3) - add NC
03:04:818 (4,1) - switch NC
03:06:263 (3) - add NC
03:10:601 (4) - ^

[Insane]
00:15:173 (3) - 折り返さないでサークルを加えてみてはどうでしょう こんな感じに→ http://puu.sh/w7Qz
00:20:233 (4) - 終点にwhistle?
00:23:486 (3,1) - NC入れ替えたほうが曲に合う気がする
00:24:751 (2) - NC変えたのならこっちにNC
00:30:715 (6,1) - switch NC?
00:32:161 (4,1) - ^
00:35:052 (5) - 00:23:486を変えてるのならここも合わせて変えたほうがいいかな
00:37:944 (5) - 上と同じ理由でNC追加？
00:56:920 (3) - 2連打のほうがメリハリもついて自分は好き。→ http://puu.sh/w7VX
01:21:317 (3,1) - 00:23:486を変えてるのならry
01:22:582 (2) - 上と同じ理由でNC追加？
01:32:884 (5,1) - ^
01:34:329 (3) - ^
01:45:986 (1) - 00:48:155からと同じようにspinnerの終わりを01:47:341にして01:47:703にnoteを置いてみてはどうでしょう
03:15:119 (1) - remove NC?
03:24:516 () - add note?

以上です。
配置はほとんど問題無いと思う！！ NCのつけ方がちょっと特殊だったので指摘した所は全部提案ってことで。
Ranked期待してます

kusano wrote:

へい

[Easy]
00:24:932 (4) - add NC?
00:53:667 (3) - ^
01:22:763 (4) - ^
02:03:064 (3) - ^
03:55:420 (3) - ^
04:01:203 (3) - ^
all ok~
[Normal]
00:07:582 (4,1) - switch NC 00:07:040 - ここにいれました！
00:46:257 (1,2) - ^
01:50:414 (1,3) - ^ (以降のパートと統一するため)
01:53:847 (1,2) - ^
01:57:281 (6,1) - ^
03:06:263 (4,1) - ^
03:36:986 (1,3) - ^
all fixed~

[Hard]
00:07:582 (4) - add NC no~
00:12:100 (6,1) - switch NC
00:13:366 (4) - add NC
00:17:341 (1,2) - switch NC
00:46:619 (4,1) - ^
01:27:100 (5) - add NC
01:55:835 (6,1) - switch NC
01:57:100 (4) - add NC
02:07:582 (3,1) - Hardにしては飛びすぎのような… ちょっとだけ縮めました！
02:42:058 (3) - add NC
03:04:818 (4,1) - switch NC
03:06:263 (3) - add NC
03:10:601 (4) - ^
almost fixed~

[Insane]
00:15:173 (3) - 折り返さないでサークルを加えてみてはどうでしょう こんな感じに→ http://puu.sh/w7Qz
00:20:233 (4) - 終点にwhistle?
00:23:486 (3,1) - NC入れ替えたほうが曲に合う気がする
00:24:751 (2) - NC変えたのならこっちにNC
00:30:715 (6,1) - switch NC?
00:32:161 (4,1) - ^
00:35:052 (5) - 00:23:486を変えてるのならここも合わせて変えたほうがいいかな
00:37:944 (5) - 上と同じ理由でNC追加？
00:56:920 (3) - 2連打のほうがメリハリもついて自分は好き。→ http://puu.sh/w7VX no~;^;
01:21:317 (3,1) - 00:23:486を変えてるのならry
01:22:582 (2) - 上と同じ理由でNC追加？
01:32:884 (5,1) - ^
01:34:329 (3) - ^
01:45:986 (1) - 00:48:155からと同じようにspinnerの終わりを01:47:341にして01:47:703にnoteを置いてみてはどうでしょう
03:15:119 (1) - remove NC?
03:24:516 () - add note? no~ ;^;
almost fixed~

以上です。
配置はほとんど問題無いと思う！！ NCのつけ方がちょっと特殊だったので指摘した所は全部提案ってことで。
Ranked期待してます

ありがとーーー