Garven wrote:

Sorry I took forever to get to this. Been busy.

[General]
Go make an easy difficulty.->I think I can reduce normal difficulty and ensure the spread of each difficulty.
01:14:731 - Why do I think of QB during this part in the video? ／人◕ ‿‿ ◕人＼
01:28:731 - Kiai spam... you can't really tell that there are two fountains here. Delete the second one for each of the sets->Fix
01:49:398 - Combo colors are very difficult to see against the video during this part->Fix

[Normal]
00:54:731 (1) - Why is this starting here? Feels better having a gap and starting at 00:55:064 - or something along that line. Right now it feels like you just completely missed what's going on in the music.->Fix
01:03:731 - Hmm, might be better to add a beat here then start the spinner at 01:04:064 - ->Fix
01:05:731 - Drag this delayed break to the default position->Fix
01:39:064 (3,3,3) - You lose a lot of the effect of the big powerful finishes when you're just idly bouncing back and forth on a slider. Especially after all of those kiai fountains to emphasize them earlier.->Fix

[Hard]
00:55:064 (2) - This part kind of lacks the intense punch like the Normal did. Feels like you're just ignoring the music and focusing on a pattern instead, which is doing the music a disservice.
Felt incredibly slider-reliant. -> But..I think is fine?

[Taiko]
01:05:731 - It was really nice to see that you actually didn't map anything during a no-drum part in the song. Finally, some good taste!
01:10:731 (1) - Oh wait... oh well.

[Hyper]
00:56:231 (2) - I really don't like where this is positioned. It's a pain to see with the previous hitburst.->I dont know..orz
01:05:731 - Drag this delayed break to the default position->Fix

[Another]
00:44:065 (1) - This repeat arrow is covered by hitbursts. Please rearrange.->Fix
00:51:565 (4) - ^->Fix
01:05:731 - Drag this delayed break to the default position->Fix

Edit: Oh, it was bubbled. Oops. Changing icon then.

Garven wrote:

Sorry, busy blah blah.

[Normal] -> all fix.
00:37:398 (2,3,1) - This doesn't flow very well compared to the rest of the mapping up to this point.
01:25:731 (4) - Hrm, maybe delete? Feels extraneous.
02:05:398 (1,1) - Add fnish

[Another] -> all fix.
00:44:065 (1) - This repeat arrow is covered by hitbursts. Please rearrange.
00:51:565 (4) - ^
01:37:731 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Compare spacing here to 01:40:065 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -

IceBeam wrote:

hi

mapset looks good in general,though you could try to map an easier diff basing notes at upbeats next time
current normal looks easy enough though

[Normal] -> all fix.
01:02:731 (1,2) - uh,it's kinda hard to get this rhytm unless you know this track or playing this second time. I suggest to start spinner from 01:02:731 or if you want to have a note here,leave a circle with finish at 01:02:731 and then start spinner from 01:02:814 to 01:05:398
01:56:064 (1) - uh,I doubt that beginners reading such 1/1 stacks easily,unstack please

[rrtyui's Hard] -> all fix.
00:41:398 (1,2,3,4) - uh,I lost a track on these,I mean stacked 1/4 sliders..first plays more or less fine,but 00:42:064 (4) always makes me sick..I'd rather change it to 1/2,but if you want to keep then probably unstack it?
01:04:731 (3,4,5) - maybe put (3,4) in slider too? would be easier to hit

well,the rest is okay,though I wish it was easier,as there're 2 harder diffs..passing this just because it's a guest diff

[KUMA's Taiko One] -> all fix.
01:25:398 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - does this stream follow anything?.. I really doubt it,maybe you could replace it with slider?

[Hyper] -> all fix.
good job

[Another] -> all fix.
01:03:731 (9,10,11,12,1) - I wish this stream was more visible,it's hidden by hitbursts,so probably move it somewhere else or 01:02:898 (2,3,4) instead?
01:16:065 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - not a fan of such random spacing,could you space them equal or at least do some symmetrical/geometrical patterns?
02:10:231 (11) - this is totally invisible @_@

SPOILER

ok,poke me again after fixes

IceBeam wrote:

alright,just one more thing and I can rank

01:31:731 (4,5,6) in Another - approach circles make it readable,but anyway it bugs me that this triple is stacked so all notes are under the hitbursts :s could you make them visible?

Pastel wrote:

omedeto~:D

rrtyui wrote:

congrats!XD

S o r d a wrote:

wow, congratz First rank!
I was late

GiNa wrote:

baka Rein
這圖好難
/me slaps Rein