1. Uncheck Letterbox During Breaks because of the video.
2. Preview time is not consistent in all diff, unrankable, please fix it.
3. Recommend to make SliderTickRate 2 in all diffs.
4. The star rate of lowest diff is over 3, it may cause ur mapset unrankable.
5. Set audio lead-in to 1 (1000ms) in Advent and Final Vent.

1. HP-1, OD-1. I suppose it should be a normal diff, so suggest to reduce them
2. 00:16:559 (4,5) - stack them?
3. 00:17:202 (1,2,3,4) - the approach circles 're nearly invisible here due to the video, suggest to change a combo color.
4. 00:27:060 (3) - remove clap?
5. 00:45:702 (2) - stack it with the end of (1)?
6. 00:48:274 - i suppose u miss a note here~
7. 00:51:488 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - too hard for a normal diff, highly recommend to change some of them to slider
8. 01:01:774 (4) - stack?
9. 01:02:631 (7) - ^

1. 00:11:845 (2,3,4,5) - invisible approach circles
2. 00:28:131 (2) - remove whistle?

1. HP-2, OD-2, highly recommend to do so. The bpm is not fast enough for such a high HP, and the OD make it worse. I always suggest not to make HP+AR+OD > 24.
2. 00:03:274 (6) - remove it? i suppose it's better to leave a blank here~
3. 00:15:702 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - invisible approach circles

- [Samuel's Vent] : Combo1 : 255,255,255

208,232,3917,6,0,B|152:272|88:216,1,105
112,152,4560,2,0,B|112:72,3,70

48,168,46131,2,2,B|52:312|52:312|140:328|140:328|180:288|180:288|

wmfchris wrote:

[General]
- Try to get 500 audio-lead in for the rest of the diff, [samuel's vent] audio lead-in 2500
- mp3 name's in .flv lol - Is this unrankable?

[Final Vent]
- there are several duplicated timelines 030
00:03:917 (1,2) - slider placement adjustment

208,232,3917,6,0,B|152:272|88:216,1,105
112,152,4560,2,0,B|112:72,3,70

00:16:988 (3) - finish at ending instead of beginning? Finish at both sides works as well
00:20:631 (8) - remove whistle on slider
00:45:060 (1,2) - stack properly, change the orientation of (1) so that it parallel with (1,2,3,..)
00:48:167 (2,3) - spacing

the spacing's a bit unstable... try to make spacing proportional to time between two notes, that makes players to read notes easier.

[Advent]
00:18:488 (4) - place about (424,80) for maintaining spacing
00:23:631 (7) - whistle?
00:46:131 (3) - slider shape adjustment

48,168,46131,2,2,B|52:312|52:312|140:328|140:328|180:288|180:288|

just try to avoid whistle over the whole slider because it really sounds noisy and don't fit here, and try to use less linear slider which overlaps too much and does not look good.

ahhhhhh those were the days orz but try to make stuffs that's more beautiful and easier to be read by players ;w; - I'm not from that time..

Shana Aisaka wrote:

Hi~ Here is my mod.

Red - Fix it.
Pink - Suggestion.

[General]
- Some of the diff doesn't have this tag "rica" Please fix it. ( IN Samuel's Vent )
- Why is Advent Slider Velocity is 1.60 ? but Final Vent is 1.40 . =w='' ( It should be Final Vent is 1.60 ) Fix~

[Sword Vent]
I think you should use grid level 3 . @w@"
HP Drain Rate - 1
00:21:488(x) = add note
00:21:917(3) = I think you should do it like this. http://puu.sh/gD8E 00:24:060(5) + finish
00:25:131(5) = slider end in 00:25:560
00:26:417(1) = I think the note 2&3 doesn't fit the sound. How about put a slider here? http://puu.sh/gD9r
00:42:702(5) = slider end in 00:43:345
01:00:917(1,2,3,4) = Remove clap.

[Advent]
Circle Size - 1
Approach Rate - 1
I suggest you to remake all the sliders. ;_; ( The sliders looks so ugly. )

[Final Vent]
Approach Rate + 1
Overall Difficult + 1
00:10:560(x) = add note
00:10:988(x) = ^
00:13:560(x) = ^
00:15:917(x) = ^
00:30:488(x) = ^ http://puu.sh/gDfs
01:03:274(x) = ^ http://puu.sh/gDfV put it anywhere you like. http://puu.sh/gDgd
This diff should be more hard! ><"

[Samuel's Vent]
Approach Rate + 1
This diff is good .

Okay, That's all ~
This map need more hardworking.
anywhere, Good Luck! Sorry, but I must correct your grammar ( Anywhere = place , Anyway is what you want to right? ) XD

1. Quality of the mp3 is horrible. If you can find a better one be sure to re-check offset and apply it to all diffs.
   
2. Hitsound volume is set to 100% for all parts in all maps (except samuel's). This is very noise, try to reduce it to ~70-80% for KIAI and ~60% for everything else in the timing panel (you can select multiple timing sections at once so this is just a matter of seconds to apply)
   
3. General object placement in all diffs could be improved a lot. If you have problems mapping "good looking" patterns try to turn off grid snap and place the notes properly. If you want to make a straight line just hold [Ctrl] and you can snap the notes every 45°. This will also fix the inconsistent spacing (especially in the easier diffs)

304,64,18917,2,0,B|192:64,1,100,0|8
236,142,19774,2,0,B|120:142,1,100,0|8
55,142,20631,5,0
55,222,21060,1,8

• - 00:17:202 (1) - move to 260/300
  - 00:17:631 (2) - stack with 00:16:559 (4) (after (4) is placed like in the screen above)

p3n wrote:

[General]

1. Quality of the mp3 is horrible. If you can find a better one be sure to re-check offset and apply it to all diffs.
   
2. Hitsound volume is set to 100% for all parts in all maps (except samuel's). This is very noise, try to reduce it to ~70-80% for KIAI and ~60% for everything else in the timing panel (you can select multiple timing sections at once so this is just a matter of seconds to apply)
   
3. General object placement in all diffs could be improved a lot. If you have problems mapping "good looking" patterns try to turn off grid snap and place the notes properly. If you want to make a straight line just hold [Ctrl] and you can snap the notes every 45°. This will also fix the inconsistent spacing (especially in the easier diffs)

[Sword Vent]
00:18:060 (2,3) - add claps to the ending points?
00:18:917 (3,4) - fix the overlap here, the spacing is inconsistent, make it look like this (and fix the following notes accordingly): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/243811

304,64,18917,2,0,B|192:64,1,100,0|8
236,142,19774,2,0,B|120:142,1,100,0|8
55,142,20631,5,0
55,222,21060,1,8

00:21:488 (X) - weird to leave out this note



[Advent]
Why is the SV in your "normal" map higher than in your "hard"? This is really weird. If this is what you intended then it is fine with me but from an aiming standpoint this map is on par if not harder than [Final Vent]. You could increase circle size to the biggest (like "easy") but this is more a workaround than a fix. If you lower the SV be sure to resnap and check EVERY slider afterwards.

00:12:917 (3,1,2) - notes are not in line with previous, disable "Grid-Snap" and hold down "Ctrl" whenn placing those notes, this will snap them exactly in line every 45°
00:15:059 (3,4,5) - try this pattern (much easier to read, especially for a "normal" diff): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/243816
to fix following notes maybe try something like this (or anything that is easy to read and consistent in spacing):

• - 00:17:202 (1) - move to 260/300
  - 00:17:631 (2) - stack with 00:16:559 (4) (after (4) is placed like in the screen above)

00:52:774 (3) - remove the last repeat to match the vocals http://puu.sh/h1BW



[Final Vent]
00:20:631 (8) - I don't do the excessive "NC here NC there" mods but this (8) should be a NC here, and start the NC on (2) here 00:22:774 (1,2)
00:22:774 (1,2) - jumping into the stream seems weird and not intended. Maybe fix it to consistent spacing by slightly altering the previous pattern (so you don't overlap the note before the stream)
00:43:774 (1) - this spinner is nonesense, start the KIAI properly by mapping the note at 00:44:631 with a circle or slider start, sou don't need the spinner here
00:53:417 (1) - wrong placed clap? should be on the following note



[Samuel's Vent]
AR 8 or even AR 7 work so much better with your SV and the BPM of this song. AR 9 is just stupid...

Some overmaps are a cool addition here imo. As you set up the triplet pattern early in the song it flows really well. Some overmaps are really unnecessary and kill this flow though, I'll point those out and you can decide if you want a fluent, playable map or a map that doesn't make much sense and is therefore harder to FC:

00:09:167 (4) - plays much better if you delete this note (slightly overmapped, if wanted to follow the complete drumroll the stream wouldn't start here either way)
00:16:131 (5,7) - if you want to follow the vocals here, delete (5) and (7), fits much better, try it for yourself
00:23:524 (3) - overmapped, delete
00:57:274 (1,2) - don't stack (1), it is extremely hard to read (confusing) with the black combo colour and the stream starting on a red tick




Still some work to do but doesn't look bad. Keep it up, get some more mods and I'll recheck it and see if I can star it then.

nekonomitsu wrote:

Awesome map bro~ -w-b
Star for you.

[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,0
Combo2 : 58,58,58
Combo3 : 255,0,0
Combo4 : 128,0,128

1. I think this song tick rate1 better
2. there is a kiai time in Samuel's Vent different with other diffs : Kiai #1: Starts on 01:05:202, ends on 01:05:310

1. 01:05:310 (1) - end for 01:09:702 - I think better

1. this Diff Hard Diff? stream long I suggest that I reduce it
2. 00:16:988 (3) - remove finish beginning
3. 00:29:202 (6) - really ugly slider how about this?
4. 00:44:631 (8,1) - swaps newcombo

1. fine
   

1. fine too

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ hillaryzx ~

Mod time for PM - In game ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Add 'opening' in tags. Hm.... can be accepted... added

[Samuel's Vent]

1. HP-1.
2. 00:23:524 (3) - Remove this note will be better.
3. 00:57:488 (2) - Add new combo to here,and Remove 00:57:274 (1).
4. 01:05:256 (1) - This spinner should end to here 01:09:702.

[Advent]

1. 00:03:488 - Add finish. Ok!
2. 00:30:917 - ^ ^
3. 00:44:631 - ^^
4. 00:54:274 (5) - Add new combo to here,vocal start to here. I don't know about combo, so okay

That' all ~

Good luck ~

Barney Stinson wrote:

From my queue

Easy:
00:03:488: remove nc Ok

Advent:
00:27:488 - map this I think no....
01:01:559 (4,5) - These ones are a bit hard to catch for newbies. Put them in a more linear way Okay!

Final vent:
Nothing here

LKs wrote:

From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

General

Mp3 quality is terrible, I attempted to find a better one for you.

SPOILER

1. Fixed offset, timing sections and resnaped once on all diffs
2. New mp3 with 192kbps

Download Link: http://puu.sh/j6Rk



In case if you don't need my new mp3, here's your original mapset backup
Download Link: http://puu.sh/j6PC

hillaryzx wrote:

Woah, nice mp3... added :3
but I think it has same offset...
waiting for timing help.... (- _ -)/

BrokenArrow wrote:

offset is fine, you can leave it as it is~

p3n wrote:

recheck time:

[Sword Vent]
Looks much better now, especially the object placement has improved from what I remember.



[Advent]
00:27:698 (4,1) - this doesn't flow very well with the song. Start the spinner on 00:28:555 (red tick) and end it on 00:30:269 (red tick) to match the lyrics. Also turn (4) into a slider and let it end on 00:28:126 (red tick): http://puu.sh/k4SZ Ok

00:40:769 (7,1) - same as before this doesn't really match the song and may throw off beginner players (this is a normal diff after all). Start the spinner on 00:42:269 (red tick) and end it on 00:43:984 (red tick). If you want you can add another repeat to (7) to smooth it out. If you do, remove the finish hitsound from the slider-body and add finish hitsounds only on the 2nd turn and the ending point: http://puu.sh/k4UH Ok

00:50:841 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this notefollow seems a bit long for a normal diff. Maybe going only after the lyrics here works better (try it and only use it if YOU like it): http://puu.sh/k4W6 Sounds good



[Final Vent]
Set Tick-Rate to "2" like all other difficulties.
Maybe lower AR by 1. Seems a bit too high for the general mapping style of this difficulty.
Some notes touch the HP-bar...try to leave at least a small gap between the HP-bar and the hitobjects.

00:08:841 (X) - maybe add a note here...plays weird if you don't follow the beat like before Em... yeah you right...

00:59:841 (2) - If you want to follow the melody here (seems you want to do it), remove the last repeat. If you want you can add a circle on the last blue tick just before the downbeat: http://puu.sh/k4Rq I don't change this...

01:03:698 (4) - shorten by 1/2 to end on the blue tick to match the melody like before: http://puu.sh/k4RD Ok

You check this map by playing it at 50% speed in the editor and see if you can find some more places where it sounds better to slightly change the beatplacement but that is up to you. It is playable the way it is now.

mega_mac wrote:

has it already been ranked hillary zx?

hillaryzx wrote:

mega_mac wrote:

has it already been ranked hillary zx?

nope... lol

those wrote:

From .:Let those mod those maps:.

[General]
Audio leadin needs to be the same for all diffs. Already done before....

[Sword Vent]
00:50:198 - Inherited point isn't needed. My bad...removed

[Advent]
00:04:769 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Kinda boring here. Added some notes
00:20:626 (1) - Try x:200 y:176 Okay!

[Final Vent]
Many of the Inherited points aren't needed. Stuff like this is redundant. This occurs multiple times; take them out to decrease file size as much as possible. (=.=)/ Yeah, you right.... remove
00:31:341 (4) - Try NC don't know about combo colour, followed...
00:41:626 (4) - NC ^
00:42:912 (1) - Remove NC ^
00:43:341 (3) - NC ^


Good luck :3

Revengexsoyah wrote:

~Only Suggestions~


PLZ!!!!!!!! USE grid level 4 plz xD If that diff easy one...

[Advent]
00:04:769: clap ? no change
00:05:626: ^ nope
00:06:484: ^ ok
00:07:341: ^ no...
00:08:198: ^ ^
00:09:055: ^ here okay!
00:21:055: WHISTLE ?
WELL u need puts more hitsounds


[Final Vent]
try to put one clap each to two white sticks This map does not need too many clap....

well this bye for now only....
star don't see it in here? or you mean by kudosu..

TheNutritiousGuy wrote:

Modding~~

[General]
My first mind when I saw it.. please what, Power Rangers? Wtf? Oh.. lol. Lol...
Is the .osb File required? If not, delete it. Okay
Please write into the Creator's Word what kind of Diff should be. Em... maybe I'll follow this...

[Sword Vent]
00:09:055 (1) - I would extend it to 00:10:769. Okay
00:11:198 (1) - If you take this above, you should remove this Circle. ^
00:14:626 (1) - Remove it. It doesn't fit. I make new changes...
00:31:769 (2) - Set Clap. Okay
00:32:626 (4) - Set Clap at Start Point. ^
00:35:198 (2) - Set Clap. ^
00:36:055 (4) - Set Clap at Start Point. ^
00:42:055 (3,4) - Reverse the Position of this Hitobjects. ??
00:43:984 (6) - I would not suggest to place it on 1/4 Tick on this Diff. Move it to 00:44:198. Okay
00:45:483 (2) - Set Clap at Start Point and remove Finish at End Point. ^
00:46:341 (3) - Set Clap at Start Point and Finish at End Point. (The Finish doesn't sound bad, so try it. ^
00:48:912 (2) - Set Clap. ^
00:49:769 (4) - ^ ^
00:58:126 (5) - Remove Finish.

[Advent]
00:02:519 (2,3,4) - 00:02:519 (2,4) - Hell no, do not use for a Normal Diff 1/3 Beats. Remove some notes
00:07:555 (2) - Remove it, read the next points why. Okay
00:07:769 (3,4,5,6,7) - Move them to the next white Tick. E.g (00:08:198 (2), 00:09:055 (3), ...) Okay
00:07:769 (2) - Change it into a 1/4 Slider with a Reverse Arrow. So it should looks like this: http://puu.sh/mF7Q // http://puu.sh/mF7 ^
00:09:912 - The Inherited Point should start at 00:10:769. ^
00:25:769 (4) - Set Clap. ^
00:25:984 (5) - Set Whistle. ^
00:27:484 (3) - Set Clap. ^
00:27:698 (4) - Set Whistle at Start Point. ^
00:33:484 (2) - Set Clap. ^
00:34:341 (4) - ^? ^
00:38:198 (6) - Set Finish. ^
00:46:555 (3) - Set Clap at End Point. ^
00:47:626 (4) - ^ ^

[Final Vent]

[general]

1. why have osu_ file ?

[Sword Vent]

1. 00:11:626 (1,2) -distance
2. 00:13:769 (5) - whistle at end
3. 00:14:841 (1) - ^
4. 00:15:912 (2) - whistle
5. 00:35:626 (3,4) - let (3),(4) cover by (red 5) like this ?
6. 00:45:483 (2,3) - distance

[Advent]

1. 00:52:769 (2) - remove this ?!

[Final Vent]

1. 00:24:912 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - there rhythm are strange

[Samuel's Vent]

1. 00:39:699 (7,1,2) - (7) 2 grid right , (1) 2 grid up , (2) 2 grid left

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Hello! request from my My Queue

Samuel's Vent is perfect!

Final Vent:
01:03:698
Make this silder longer till 01:03:912
(Just drag it to the white line) Sounds nice to me :3 better at the current one :3

01:05:734 Add a Spinner? :3 that will the song longer... no change about this... :3

Advent:
00:54:484 move this circle to 00:55:984 and place it to x:376 y:232 I put it at other place...

Sword Vent is perfect! :3

regards~

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Hello! request from my My Queue

Samuel's Vent is perfect! THANK YOU!!!!

Final Vent:
01:03:698
Make this silder longer till 01:03:912
(Just drag it to the white line) Sounds nice to me :3

01:05:734 Add a Spinner? :3

Advent:
00:54:484 move this circle to 00:55:984 and place it to x:376 y:232

Sword Vent is perfect! :3

regards~

1. Everything's fine on the block. To the maps.

1. I SS'd this and the previous diff! Yay! 00:08:198 (3) - Place this to (296,96)? Oh, and remove the white point near the red point please. Oh, and make the red point a white point too. You may keep the position, but you should do something about the points.

1. 00:03:591 (4,6) - I don't think we need these notes. Short streams don't work here.
2. 00:23:412 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Streams don't work well here, IMO, especially if you use it on a Hard (amirite) diff.

1. Too much circles, don't you think?
2. 00:06:270 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Uh... are you sure with this stream?
3. 00:19:985 (3,4,5) & 00:23:842 (6,7,8) - Why are these triplets spaced differently?

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi there. Let's mod this now

*Note: Gold ones are a must-do. Everything in red are things that look awkward to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler.

>General

1. Everything's fine on the block. To the maps.

>Advent

1. I SS'd this and the previous diff! Yay! 00:08:198 (3) - Place this to (296,96)? Oh, and remove the white point near the red point please. Oh, and make the red point a white point too. You may keep the position, but you should do something about the points. followed the placement of the slider but I can't understand what is your meaning about white and red point, sorry...

>Final Vent

1. 00:03:591 (4,6) - I don't think we need these notes. Short streams don't work here. ok
2. 00:23:412 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Streams don't work well here, IMO, especially if you use it on a Hard (amirite) diff. change..

Okay, just that. Beatmap's pretty nice and song's awesome.

Good luck on the way

Oh, and star.

Devil_Cosmo wrote:

as you request from my modding queue. sorry if it was late. bad weather wants to kill the internet connection -_-

[General]
Can you cut the mp3 until 01:10:500? after that i just hear the blank sound
oh, all of this mod maybe a suggestion.

[Sword Vent]

01:05:626 (2) add finish? The note already have finish on it. Thanks for the suggestion


another diff is fine. sorry if my mod is short Its Okay

ertyukjh010 wrote:

Hello Good song, I like it. Thank you~

[Sword Vent]

00:11:626 (1) - NC bug O_o, is there any bug here?
00:12:912 (3) - Move to X:360 Y:84 (Grid Lv4) → http://puu.sh/q20E Fixed
00:43:769 (5) - instead finish at end Fixed

[Advent]

00:31:341 (1) - NC bug O_o, I also don't know there is a bug...
00:34:769 (1) - End at 00:36:055 Okay!
00:36:269 (2) - Start to 00:36:484 followed~
Add more Clap will be better → http://puu.sh/q20x I'll try..

[Final Vent]

00:24:912 (1) - Wrong distance I can't find something wrong here though..
03:39:126 (2,3) - Ctrl+R will be better for rhythm Okay


That a ll

Gasaiyuno-chan wrote:

Cool
Sword Vent
00:21:055 (5) - Remove nc I don't know anything about this O.O. followed..
01:04:769 (1) - x:128.y:192 nope
01:05:626 (2) - x232 y80 nope

Normal
Look AIMOD-.- I saw and fixed all....

Hard
00:03:698 (4) - x320 y56 Ok

just some suggestions.

Video,0,"Kamen Rider Ryuki Opening HD_xvid_xvid.avi"

Video,800,"Kamen Rider Ryuki Opening HD_xvid_xvid.avi"

Aleks719 wrote:

General
Different preview time in Samuel's Vent Fixed
Remove last kiai fountain in Samuel's Vent
You use Custom hitsounds (n:c1 and s:c1, n:c2, s:c2), but no hitsounds in folder. forgot to add? seems that I cannot find the suitable hitsounds for the song...

Video
Video is obviously early. check how lyrics in video works with music. Set offset for video 800ms in every diff. You can make in in editor or better with the aid of notepad. In all *.osu files find this line

Video,0,"Kamen Rider Ryuki Opening HD_xvid_xvid.avi"

and set 800 instead of 0 in every diff. Result should be :

Video,800,"Kamen Rider Ryuki Opening HD_xvid_xvid.avi"

Video 320x240 is fine,but.. would be better to see video with good quality. The original video has been deleted, so I cannot change the quality although I want..


Final Vent
00:11:519 - add note or make 1/4 slider added a note
00:18:376 - ^ suggest to remap this 00:17:412 (6,1) a bit for better pattern I changed the beat also
00:21:698 (2) - suddenly clap O.O, change to whistle...
00:24:912 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - suddenly jumps + finish spam new idea appear
00:41:626 (1,2) - pattern like this very linear.. try to make it more interesting.. nowdays, maps with these patterns have low rating.. change the slider's shape
00:49:983 (5) - claps on red ticks sound off almost all time. as example - here. this suggestion for whole diff. Better to use standart clap pattern (every 2nd and 4th white tick). I'll try to change it all...
01:03:912 - add note or reverse. No, it will sounds weird....
~not bad, but many linear patterns

Advent
01:01:769 (4,5,6,1) - sounds off Changed...
~offbeat patters

Sword Vent
00:54:698 (1,2,3) - raise spacing for avoid overlaps ok, fixed...
~not bad/ some not perfect moments for rhythm, but readable, imo

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

Above all

PreviewTime should be established in the same position Done

Sword Vent

change slider tick rate into "1" I decided not to change the slider tick because it follow the music

00:29:626 (2) - x:124 y:108 Ok
00:36:055 (4) - no stack,i suggestion that you can move this slider to left side of the last circle. Moved
-------------------it's better for newbie.
00:43:438 (6) - move to right of slider's end,x:224 y:332 Moved also
00:48:484 (1) - add finish Em, not bad...
00:55:341 (2) - move 1 grid down (lv4) Done

Advent

00;20:108 (6) - remove whistle Just fine, Ok
00:21:055 (2) - add whistle ^
00:41:198 (7) - remove finish Okay
00:42:055 (7) - ^ ^
00:41:626 (7) - add finish ^
00:45:646 (1) - copy (3) to (1) and rotate it for making a much more symmetric pattern nope, the current shape has no problem, not necessary to change the slider's shape (by copying, I mean)

Final Vent

change slider tick rate into "1" Okay with this, fixed

00:03:912 (1) - x:468 y:228 (grid lv4) change the place
00:08:841 (4) - move 1 grid right (grid lv4) ^
00:21:698 (2) - remove clap and add whistle followed...
00:22:662 (4) - i don't think finish hitsound is suitable for this note,so del it
or del it and add finish at 00:23:198 just delete it and replace with whistle
00:24:912 (1) - finish abused i think you should remove some of them
------------------- imo,remove finish which located in (1),(3)and(5),
-------------------add finish at (2) and (4)s' beginning I already change the whole thing, start with removing the sliders...


fine. :3 thanks>>>

good luck~

Advent

Final Vent

Samuel's Vent

L i d a N wrote:

Hey~ Yo :3

Advent

1. 00:08:198 (3) - Add clap on end? Added
2. 01:04:769 (3) - Remove that red point? There is nothing here... except the slider only

Final Vent

1. You should try to make the hitsounds more consistent and try to improve the shape of some of the sliders.
2. 00:08:841 (4) - Move to x:351 y:91 so it doesn't overlap with 00:09:055 (1) ? Fixed...
3. 00:16:983 (5,6) - I think those sliders would look better if they actually were round, try to make them like this: Fixed the shape of the slider
   
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4. 00:18:484 (X) - Add circle? Ok :3
5. 00:24:912 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't really like this part, it somehow sounds a bit weird :S Already change something new, not yet submitted though.. =.=
6. 00:43:341 (1) - Change to this: Done
   
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7. 00:51:698 (3) - Change to this: Ok
   
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The map's nice, needs some polishing though (Slider shapes on [Final Vent], Hitsounds). Good luck.

Mythol wrote:

Request from queue~

[General]
I highly recommend you avoid using black combo colors, they're very annoying to play with no bg. change colour to orange

[Sword Vent]
00:58:555 (1) - There isn't really anything that calls for a finish, in fact I even recommend silencing the spinner end here since the voice keeps going. okay, I silence the spinner.

[Advent]
00:02:198 (1,2,3) - How about a finish on 2 and start of 3, and a clap on the end of 3? Okay!

[Final Vent]
00:37:555 (3) - May want to move this up a bit. moved...
You don't have to use x1.0 spacing for the whole map. Part of the reason why it feels linear is because of this. emm... maybe.. I just want to fix the distance....


Just needs a little rhythm work but pretty good for a first map, GL~