Now finish!!

因为懒得每次出现soft-hitfinish的时候都加绿线，我干脆把这个文件的音量缩小了o o请用这个压缩包里的soft-hitfinish2替换原来的

Download: finished gd.rar

很糟糕的一件事，做完这么长的曲子之后发现超出了18M分的规定……有22M，所以只好大段大段删去，增加了很多break，看上去似乎有点微妙…… 不过目前也只能这样了

eikkaleyd wrote:

:) Now finish!!

因为懒得每次出现soft-hitfinish的时候都加绿线，我干脆把这个文件的音量缩小了o o请用这个压缩包里的soft-hitfinish2替换原来的

[attachment=0:f3da0]finished gd.rar[/attachment:f3da0]

很糟糕的一件事，做完这么长的曲子之后发现超出了18M分的规定……有22M，所以只好大段大段删去，增加了很多break，看上去似乎有点微妙…… 不过目前也只能这样了 OK 那看看modder怎麼說好了

好 !

謝謝Eikka的GD~ Updated

Hi~

[General]

1. Yia's Taiko的offest不一致:3 這好像Unrankable 把它改一致唄!!
2. 建議設個Kiai Time!!

[Hate]

1. 01:47:030 (1) - finish
2. 03:54:905 - clap
3. 04:00:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 這邊對新手可能有些難.. 把它排成不要重疊或換幾個silder好些~

[Hurt]

1. 00:23:217 (1)(3)(4) - 各往上一格? 間距沒關西 因為這樣00:22:655 (6)的尾部剛好在中間:3 好看些~
2. 00:57:530 (1) - 改彎的好些~
3. 01:02:405 (1,2,3) - 額..這三角形..怎麼看都不正=3=...是錯覺嗎o.O 如果不是請排好:>~~
4. 01:05:780 (4,5) - 位置互換打起來好些@@"
5. 01:08:405 (1,2,3) - 同之前
6. 01:47:030 (1,1) - 這2個轉盤肯定要改o.o...Auto只能轉到1000.....太短了阿>< 改成silder好多了:3
7. 02:59:780 (5,6,7,8) - 這邊可以排成這樣~~ 試試唄:3 (Copy之前的轉45度) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/252961
8. 03:24:530 (1,1) - 同之前
9. 03:26:780 (4) - 嘛...老實說有點醜..把它拉到對稱吧!! (額...雖然很難拉..=A=)
10. 04:02:780 (1,2) - 這4個音要不要都改圈lol?? 改了的話會比較好排~ 像這樣 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/252965

[eikka's Heart]

1. 00:23:780 (1,2,3) - 間距不一 建議排成一致:3
2. 00:24:530 - 加個圈吧!! 這樣感覺好突然就Break...
3. 00:30:530 - ^
4. 01:00:530 - ^
5. 01:06:342 - ^
6. 01:06:530 - ^
7. 02:20:030 - ^
8. 02:26:030 - ^
9. 02:44:780 (3,4,5,6) - 排好些~~
10. 03:19:092 (3,4,5,6,7) - 這邊間距是故意不一的嗎..? 如果不是..fix it plz! :>
11. 03:26:030 - 加個圈

額...這diff出啥東西T_T 不好意思>O<

就這樣~ Bad Mod Sorry:<
Awesome map o(^O^)o
Star!!!~~~

12BARRY21 wrote:

Hi~

[General]

1. Yia's Taiko的offest不一致:3 這好像Unrankable 把它改一致唄!!
   好像會跟放kiai的綠線重疊，不過還是修正了
2. 建議設個Kiai Time!!
   這首歌kiai放哪都感覺不好，還是不要放比較好

[Hate]

1. 01:47:030 (1) - finish Added.
2. 03:54:905 - clap Added.
3. 04:00:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 這邊對新手可能有些難.. 把它排成不要重疊或換幾個silder好些~ 好像到結尾了，放這樣也不好0 0，fixed.

[Hurt]

1. 00:23:217 (1)(3)(4) - 各往上一格? 間距沒關西 因為這樣00:22:655 (6)的尾部剛好在中間:3 好看些~ 不錯 沒注意到 fixed.
2. 00:57:530 (1) - 改彎的好些~ fixed.
3. 01:02:405 (1,2,3) - 額..這三角形..怎麼看都不正=3=...是錯覺嗎o.O 如果不是請排好:>~~ 沒錯lol 歪了 fixed.
4. 01:05:780 (4,5) - 位置互換打起來好些@@" ok.
5. 01:08:405 (1,2,3) - 同之前 ^
6. 01:47:030 (1,1) - 這2個轉盤肯定要改o.o...Auto只能轉到1000.....太短了阿>< 改成silder好多了:3 怎麼可能o o，我看auto是轉2000的，而且這裡我比較偏好Spinner，先保留吧
7. 02:59:780 (5,6,7,8) - 這邊可以排成這樣~~ 試試唄:3 (Copy之前的轉45度) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/252961 用一個跟這個差不多的方法改了
8. 03:24:530 (1,1) - 同之前 同之前
9. 03:26:780 (4) - 嘛...老實說有點醜..把它拉到對稱吧!! (額...雖然很難拉..=A=) 眼睛不好，看不出來是不是有對稱0 0，我再拉一次吧
10. 04:02:780 (1,2) - 這4個音要不要都改圈lol?? 改了的話會比較好排~ 像這樣 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/252965 好，比較有感覺一點XD

[eikka's Heart] 這個請Eikka自己改了

1. 00:23:780 (1,2,3) - 間距不一 建議排成一致:3
2. 00:24:530 - 加個圈吧!! 這樣感覺好突然就Break...
3. 00:30:530 - ^
4. 01:00:530 - ^
5. 01:06:342 - ^
6. 01:06:530 - ^
7. 02:20:030 - ^
8. 02:26:030 - ^
9. 02:44:780 (3,4,5,6) - 排好些~~
10. 03:19:092 (3,4,5,6,7) - 這邊間距是故意不一的嗎..? 如果不是..fix it plz! :>
11. 03:26:030 - 加個圈

額...這diff出啥東西T_T 不好意思>O<

就這樣~ Bad Awesome!! Mod Sorry:<
Awesome map o(^O^)o
Star!!!~~~

Wow 好棒的mod

謝謝Barry這篇和star

谢谢Barry桑~周五回家了改。本来那几个break我都塞满了。。。可是爆分又删了T.T回去看看

eikka's heart
02:14:030 (1) - Again, remove the new combo at here
Nicely done. Hope it get ranked. XD

[HURT]
01:24:530 (1) - Remove new combo, again
02:38:030 (1) - Same here
03:01:092 - Add a spiner at here
This one's good too. Hope my advice help u guys XD

Kurogane Shourai wrote:

eikka's heart
02:14:030 (1) - Again, remove the new combo at here
Nicely done. Hope it get ranked. XD

Eikka will fix it.

Kurogane Shourai wrote:

[HURT]
01:24:530 (1) - Remove new combo, again Because the song into the next paragraph, there should do a new combo.
02:38:030 (1) - Same here ^
03:01:092 - Add a spiner at here To sort different paragraph
This one's good too. Hope my advice help u guys XD

OK. Thanks your mod

12BARRY21 wrote:

[eikka's Heart]

1. 00:23:780 (1,2,3) - 間距不一 建議排成一致:3 Done
2. 00:24:530 - 加個圈吧!! 這樣感覺好突然就Break... 我再看看别人怎么说，还有分数问题，暂时先keep着这条w
   （以下⑥条同上）
3. 02:44:780 (3,4,5,6) - 排好些~~ Done
4. 03:19:092 (3,4,5,6,7) - 這邊間距是故意不一的嗎..? 如果不是..fix it plz! :> lol我没有排那种间距的喜好，fixed~
5. 03:26:030 - 加個圈 Done~

Thanks~

Kurogane Shourai wrote:

eikka's heart
02:14:030 (1) - Again, remove the new combo at here I want to use this new combo... since it's a start of a section (Mai begins to sing "ah~")

EDIT: 我又弄出BUG了，修订
Download: Atoguru - UNDER WORLD (sirjuyt) [eikka's Heart].osu

Hello~

[Hate]

Resnap All Notes~

HP+1 & OD+1

02:59:780 (2) - 往左移1格後往上移1格(Grid Level 3)

[Hurt]

Resnap All Notes~

HP+1 & AR-1 & OD-1

00:14:405 (3) - 往左移1格後往上移1格(Grid Level 3)

01:47:030 (1,1) - 這兩個轉盤好像有點太短了......第一個用Slider代替?

03:09:905 (2) - Ctrl+H後再Ctrl+J，然後排好:33

03:24:530 (1,1) - 這兩個轉盤好像有點太短了......第一個用Slider代替?

[eikka's Heart]

AR-1

03:26:030 (5) - 往左移3格(Grid Level 4)

04:03:623 - 增加一個轉盤，從這裡到04:08:030 -

結束~

我覺得這張圖做的還不錯~

祝早日Ranked~

Star~

Good Luck~

(Red=一定要改的，Blue=強烈建議你改的，Black=建議而已)

AIR315 wrote:

Hello~

[Hate]

Resnap All Notes~ 0 0已經是snapped的

HP+1 & OD+1 okey.

02:59:780 (2) - 往左移1格後往上移1格(Grid Level 3) fixed.

[Hurt]

Resnap All Notes~ 已snapped

HP+1 & AR-1 & OD-1 嗯 AR8對我來說比較好

00:14:405 (3) - 往左移1格後往上移1格(Grid Level 3) 略怪，所以調成一樣的間距

01:47:030 (1,1) - 這兩個轉盤好像有點太短了......第一個用Slider代替? auto能轉到2000，保留

03:09:905 (2) - Ctrl+H後再Ctrl+J，然後排好:33 這裡是用1,2,3做一個迴轉的

03:24:530 (1,1) - 這兩個轉盤好像有點太短了......第一個用Slider代替? 同之前

[eikka's Heart]

AR-1

03:26:030 (5) - 往左移3格(Grid Level 4)

04:03:623 - 增加一個轉盤，從這裡到04:08:030 -

結束~

我覺得這張圖做的還不錯~

祝早日Ranked~

Star~

Good Luck~

(Red=一定要改的，Blue=強烈建議你改的，Black=建議而已)

謝謝mod和star

AIR315 wrote:

[eikka's Heart]

AR-1 keep it, 我再看看别人的说法决定好了~

03:26:030 (5) - 往左移3格(Grid Level 4) done~

04:03:623 - 增加一個轉盤，從這裡到04:08:030 - done~
感谢modding~

Download: Atoguru - UNDER WORLD (sirjuyt) [eikka's Heart].osu

Alright let's see what I can find.

General:
besides the taiko diff. no kiai time or a kiai burst? suggest that you set a kiai burst from 00:36:530 to 00:36:623, and 2nd kiai burst from 00:42:530 to 00:42:623...ill stop here. i'm sure you'll get what i'm following.

Hate:
00:42:530 (1,2,3,4) - personally i don't like where these notes are placed. it looks like you placed them randomly. so move (2,3,4) to the point that this combo looks like a parallelogram. if you don't know what the shape looks like, it's like this.
00:47:030 (3,4) - make these curved sliders like (1,2) for a nicer flow.
01:03:530 (2) - this curved slider looks a bit ugly. make it nicer.
01:22:280 (1) - remove the clap because it ruins the consistency.
01:41:030 (3) - remove the whistle at the beginning and at the slider body because it doesn't sound nice. instead add it at the end to make it sound like (1).
01:44:405 (4) - same as above but make it sound like (3)
02:51:530 (3) - remove the whistle at the sliderbody since (1) doesn't have it.
02:54:530 (4) - same as 01:41:030 but i'm sure you get the idea.
02:58:280 (6) - ^
03:03:530 (2) - add a clap at the end to keep consistency.
03:07:280 (4) - same as above but just add a clap.
03:12:530 (3) - same as 03:03:530
03:14:030 (1) - this wave looks ugly mainly because of the end. make it nicer.
03:15:530 (3) - same as above but at the beginning. this is arched too high. ^ and same as 02:51:530
03:18:530 (3) - same as 01:44:405
03:21:905 (3) - same as above but make it sound like (1)
04:00:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same as 00:42:530 but i'll let you take care of this.

Hurt:
01:47:030 (1) - this spinner is unrankable because it has to reach at least 2000 to be rankable.
03:24:530 (1) - ^

eikka's Heart:
00:24:530 - try this or something similar to this as it follows the vocals and the long pauses in vocals?
00:30:530 - ^
01:00:530 - ^
01:06:530 - ^
01:48:811 - remove the break because it appears right when the circle is hit and the bar doesn't decrease that much.
02:14:030 - same as 00:24:530
02:45:530 (1) - hmm move this down because it's touching the Hp bar. since this is near the end, players might mess up because if that.
03:13:280 (1,2,3,4) - this looks confusing so make this stack into a stream. i saw something similar to this near the beginning. if i'm right then do the same thing.
03:26:311 - same as 01:48:811
03:27:530 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this is why i told you to remove the long breaks on this. it's following the vocals/instrumental.

This is the best I can do. GL

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright let's see what I can find.

General:
besides the taiko diff. no kiai time or a kiai burst? suggest that you set a kiai burst from 00:36:530 to 00:36:623, and 2nd kiai burst from 00:42:530 to 00:42:623...ill stop here. i'm sure you'll get what i'm following. Umm ,those aren't intense enough to put kiai IMO

Hate:
00:42:530 (1,2,3,4) - personally i don't like where these notes are placed. it looks like you placed them randomly. so move (2,3,4) to the point that this combo looks like a parallelogram. if you don't know what the shape looks like, it's like this. looks better fixed.
00:47:030 (3,4) - make these curved sliders like (1,2) for a nicer flow. I put them intentionally for a better flow imo
01:03:530 (2) - this curved slider looks a bit ugly. make it nicer. OK.
01:22:280 (1) - remove the clap because it ruins the consistency. en Removed.
01:41:030 (3) - remove the whistle at the beginning and at the slider body because it doesn't sound nice. instead add it at the end to make it sound like (1). whistle of slider body is necessary for vocal, then, if removed whistle at the begining would break the hitsound pattern, and if added at the ending might sound unnecessary, so I'll keep this.
01:44:405 (4) - same as above but make it sound like (3) for vocal
02:51:530 (3) - remove the whistle at the sliderbody since (1) doesn't have it. I think add whistle would be better.
02:54:530 (4) - same as 01:41:030 but i'm sure you get the idea. same as 01:41:030
02:58:280 (6) - ^ ^
03:03:530 (2) - add a clap at the end to keep consistency. follow the clap of music
03:07:280 (4) - same as above but just add a clap. ^
03:12:530 (3) - same as 03:03:530 ^
03:14:030 (1) - this wave looks ugly mainly because of the end. make it nicer. got it. Fixed
03:15:530 (3) - same as above but at the beginning. this is arched too high. ^ and same as 02:51:530 fixed the curve but keep the hitsound
03:18:530 (3) - same as 01:44:405 same as 01:44:405
03:21:905 (3) - same as above but make it sound like (1) ^
04:00:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same as 00:42:530 but i'll let you take care of this. ok Fixed.

Hurt:
01:47:030 (1) - this spinner is unrankable because it has to reach at least 2000 to be rankable. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/259274 looks like auto can get 2000, would fixed them if other modder refer to
03:24:530 (1) - ^ ^

eikka's Heart:
00:24:530 - try this or something similar to this as it follows the vocals and the long pauses in vocals?
00:30:530 - ^
01:00:530 - ^
01:06:530 - ^
01:48:811 - remove the break because it appears right when the circle is hit and the bar doesn't decrease that much.
02:14:030 - same as 00:24:530
02:45:530 (1) - hmm move this down because it's touching the Hp bar. since this is near the end, players might mess up because if that.
03:13:280 (1,2,3,4) - this looks confusing so make this stack into a stream. i saw something similar to this near the beginning. if i'm right then do the same thing.
03:26:311 - same as 01:48:811
03:27:530 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this is why i told you to remove the long breaks on this. it's following the vocals/instrumental.

This is the best I can do. GL

wow ,

thank you ,useful mod~

Byakugan249 wrote:

eikka's Heart:
00:24:530 - try this or something similar to this as it follows the vocals and the long pauses in vocals?
00:30:530 - ^
01:00:530 - ^
01:06:530 - ^ Ok, since so many people talk about this, let's try it and see the maximum score.

01:48:811 - remove the break because it appears right when the circle is hit and the bar doesn't decrease that much.
Done~
02:14:030 - same as 00:24:530 Done~
02:45:530 (1) - hmm move this down because it's touching the Hp bar. since this is near the end, players might mess up because if that. lol, I didn't notice this note, fixed~! Thanks
03:13:280 (1,2,3,4) - this looks confusing so make this stack into a stream. i saw something similar to this near the beginning. if i'm right then do the same thing. changed this one, but I won't change the similar one near the beginning since I use NC so it won't be confusing. Maybe confusing in editor but not in playing mode I think~ :P
03:26:311 - same as 01:48:811 Done
03:27:530 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this is why i told you to remove the long breaks on this. it's following the vocals/instrumental. Although I don't understand this o.o But I removed it.

Thank you~
Download: Atoguru - UNDER WORLD (sirjuyt) [eikka's Heart].osu

Hi there. Time to begin the mod, I suppose?

*Usual note: Gold ones are a must-do. Yes, I'm playing with my avatar. Everything in red are things that look awkward to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler.

>General

1. I think it's fine to say that everything's fine here...

>Hate

1. 03:29:780 (4) - Add Whistle at the beginning of the slider?

>Hurt

1. IMO, it sounds pretty quiet here. Make things a bit louder, maybe?
2. 01:47:030 (1) - Isn't this spinner a bit too fast? Maybe make this and the next spinner into one long note?
3. 03:24:530 (1) - ^

>eikka's Heart

1. AR -1?
2. This one sounds pretty quiet, too, overall.
3. 01:30:530 (1,2,3,4) - ...This distance snap, even for a jump, is ridiculous. Are you sure with this?
4. 01:51:905 (8) - Stack below the end of the previous slider instead of the beginning?

Okay, that was pretty good. Song was pretty nice, too.

Good luck on the way

Yes it sounds quiet, but we have used 100％ volume._.So, maybe we can change the MP3 file instead.

Hi, from my queue


Hate

1. 00:14:030 (2,2) - 1/2 earlier

Hurt

1. 01:21:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - the sliders in this part is a little hard to see @.@
2. 01:41:967 (4) - imo it's better to move this note to 01:42:061
3. 01:47:030 (1) - this spinner should end on white tick...
4. 03:24:530 (1) - ^
5. 03:19:467 (4) - I think it's better to move this note to 03:19:561
6. 04:02:780 (1,2,3,4) - here? http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot267-0.jpg

Eikka's Heart

1. this bg ._.
2. 00:42:530 (1,2,3) - this part like this? http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot268-0.jpg
3. 01:22:655 (6,7) - ctrl+r?
4. 01:23:030 (1,2) - ctrl+r?
5. 01:32:405 (3,4) - ^

that's all

Good luck~

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi there. Time to begin the mod, I suppose?

*Usual note: Gold ones are a must-do. Yes, I'm playing with my avatar. Everything in red are things that look awkward to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler.

>General

1. I think it's fine to say that everything's fine here...

>Hate

1. 03:29:780 (4) - Add Whistle at the beginning of the slider? no change due to sound parrten

>Hurt

1. IMO, it sounds pretty quiet here. Make things a bit louder, maybe? 0 0 I think ther're loud enough
2. 01:47:030 (1) - Isn't this spinner a bit too fast? Maybe make this and the next spinner into one long note? OK ;_; too many modder referred to
3. 03:24:530 (1) - ^ ^

>eikka's Heart

1. AR -1?
2. This one sounds pretty quiet, too, overall.
3. 01:30:530 (1,2,3,4) - ...This distance snap, even for a jump, is ridiculous. Are you sure with this?
4. 01:51:905 (8) - Stack below the end of the previous slider instead of the beginning?

Okay, that was pretty good. Song was pretty nice, too.

Good luck on the way

yay~ thank you for mod

eikkaleyd wrote:

Yes it sounds quiet, but we have used 100％ volume._.So, maybe we can change the MP3 file instead.

._. 真的聽不到嗎，我這裡能聽得出來

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Hi, from my queue


Hate

1. 00:14:030 (2,2) - 1/2 earlier 嘛 之後都定型成這個模式了 改會很奇怪

Hurt

1. 01:21:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - the sliders in this part is a little hard to see @.@ 其實就是四方都繞一次，滿容易讀的
2. 01:41:967 (4) - imo it's better to move this note to 01:42:061 感覺改了破壞flow 0 0
3. 01:47:030 (1) - this spinner should end on white tick... fixed.
4. 03:24:530 (1) - ^ ^
5. 03:19:467 (4) - I think it's better to move this note to 03:19:561 同01:41:967
6. 04:02:780 (1,2,3,4) - here? http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot267-0.jpg o o 比較喜歡現在這種排法

Eikka's Heart

1. this bg ._.
2. 00:42:530 (1,2,3) - this part like this? http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot268-0.jpg
3. 01:22:655 (6,7) - ctrl+r?
4. 01:23:030 (1,2) - ctrl+r?
5. 01:32:405 (3,4) - ^

that's all

Good luck~

~還沒上傳就來了 XD

thanks mod

[General]
The mp3 seems to be not normalized. It is extremely loud. Maybe you can change that without altering the offset. But you should find someone who knows the tools to do it first.


[Hate]
00:14:217 (2) - don't leave out the downbeat on 00:14:030. At this point the player will not have picked up the beat by playing. Generally you should map the downbeats that start a new phrase or new chord. Maybe use a short 1/2 slider to cover it: http://puu.sh/knUN
00:17:217 (2) - ^
00:20:217 (3) - ^
00:50:217 (2) - ^
00:53:217 (2) - ^
00:56:217 (2) - ^
01:51:717 (2) - ^
01:54:717 (2) - ^
01:57:717 (3) - ^

Other than that pretty solid map. A bit repetitive but the song is very long so it should be ok. Plays nice on DT/HR/HD.


[Hurt]
02:05:967 (4) - maybe Ctrl + R for better flow
04:02:592 (5,1,2) - the difference in jump distance doesn't flow/play very nice here imo. Maybe try altering the pattern to have a consistent jump distance for the last 2 combos: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/263789

256,248,242030,5,0
256,168,242217,1,0
256,88,242405,1,0
256,72,242499,1,0
256,56,242592,1,8
424,120,242780,5,0
256,160,243061,1,0
88,120,243342,1,0
256,56,243530,1,4

Very nice map. Even with the long song it is not boring at all.


[eikka's Heart]
00:41:780 (1,2) - this jump seems a bit huge here, especially when there is nothing in the song to indicate it. Maybe just use the same sliders as before 00:41:030 (1,2) and just reverse them (Ctrl + R)
00:42:530 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ♥
00:52:936 - add a note here to make it consistent with all the previous beatplacements

Some really unique patterns. I like it. Some things are not very "logical" but are still playable.



I couldn't find very much. Maybe I'm just tired today Solid mapset if you can fix the volume of the mp3. Have this

p3n wrote:

[General]
The mp3 seems to be not normalized. It is extremely loud. Maybe you can change that without altering the offset. But you should find someone who knows the tools to do it first. ok.. I'll try to fix.


[Hate]
00:14:217 (2) - don't leave out the downbeat on 00:14:030. At this point the player will not have picked up the beat by playing. Generally you should map the downbeats that start a new phrase or new chord. Maybe use a short 1/2 slider to cover it: http://puu.sh/knUN
00:17:217 (2) - ^
00:20:217 (3) - ^
00:50:217 (2) - ^
00:53:217 (2) - ^
00:56:217 (2) - ^
01:51:717 (2) - ^
01:54:717 (2) - ^
01:57:717 (3) - ^ They're hard to fix due to distance, and it would exceed 3.00 star I think ?

Other than that pretty solid map. A bit repetitive but the song is very long so it should be ok. Plays nice on DT/HR/HD.


[Hurt]
02:05:967 (4) - maybe Ctrl + R for better flow yes fixed.
04:02:592 (5,1,2) - the difference in jump distance doesn't flow/play very nice here imo. Maybe try altering the pattern to have a consistent jump distance for the last 2 combos: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/263789

256,248,242030,5,0
256,168,242217,1,0
256,88,242405,1,0
256,72,242499,1,0
256,56,242592,1,8
424,120,242780,5,0
256,160,243061,1,0
88,120,243342,1,0
256,56,243530,1,4

changed by another way

Very nice map. Even with the long song it is not boring at all.


[eikka's Heart]
00:41:780 (1,2) - this jump seems a bit huge here, especially when there is nothing in the song to indicate it. Maybe just use the same sliders as before 00:41:030 (1,2) and just reverse them (Ctrl + R)
00:42:530 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ♥
00:52:936 - add a note here to make it consistent with all the previous beatplacements

Some really unique patterns. I like it. Some things are not very "logical" but are still playable.



I couldn't find very much. Maybe I'm just tired today Solid mapset if you can fix the volume of the mp3. Have this

yeah~
thanks your mod and star

From my queue

Easy:
00:14:217 (2,3) - Hard rhythm for newbies. Delete and make like (1). Do this to all pattern like that

Hurt: Find someone who does guest diff (on this queue too) or do a normal to reduce gap between this diff and easy, Cheesus
nothing

Insane:
Nazi, 00:29:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make it like.... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/264111
00:42:530 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - nonsense antijump
01:35:780 (5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - Not a good choise. If you stack a stream, notes will go down, and later you put a stream that goes up. This is wrong and ugly
01:48:905 - Add a break

That's all. Good luck!

Barney Stinson wrote:

From my queue

Easy: ._. It's practically a normal diff.
00:14:217 (2,3) - Hard rhythm for newbies. Delete and make like (1). Do this to all pattern like that mah I don't think

Hurt: Find someone who does guest diff (on this queue too) or do a normal to reduce gap between this diff and easy, Cheesus
nothing now the gap is reduced

Insane:
Nazi, 00:29:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make it like.... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/264111
00:42:530 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - nonsense antijump
01:35:780 (5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - Not a good choise. If you stack a stream, notes will go down, and later you put a stream that goes up. This is wrong and ugly
01:48:905 - Add a break

That's all. Good luck!

ok. thank mod~

Well, I don't really have anything to say, ahaha. The map doesn't have any problems that I could detect. You get a Star. Good luck!

Whenever you get the chance, please remember to mod “Vela-Nova.” (I took a while to get to your request, so I'm adding this to make sure you didn't forget my queue was M4M. Thanks in advance♪)

Redesignated wrote:

Well, I don't really have anything to say, ahaha. The map doesn't have any problems that I could detect. You get a Star. Good luck!

Whenever you get the chance, please remember to mod “Vela-Nova.” (I took a while to get to your request, so I'm adding this to make sure you didn't forget my queue was M4M. Thanks in advance♪)

OK .

Anyway, thanks mod and star!

Sorry, computer is broken and I'm late.





Ok so many mods here~Thank you all for suggestions to such a newbie mapper uh
Download: Atoguru - UNDER WORLD (sirjuyt) [eikka's Heart].osu

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关于MP3 file，我缩小了15%的音量，虽然听去差距不大……
MP3 HERE
如果用这个MP3的话offset就变成12563左右了（我家的软件怎么了 ）请同时用这个DIFF（offset修改版
Download: Atoguru - UNDER WORLD (sirjuyt) [eikka's Heart].osu


Download: Atoguru - UNDER WORLD (sirjuyt) [eikka's Heart].osu

eikkaleyd wrote:

:o Sorry, computer is broken and I'm late.
————————————————
关于MP3 file，我缩小了15%的音量，虽然听去差距不大……
MP3 HERE
如果用这个MP3的话offset就变成12563左右了（我家的软件怎么了 ）请同时用这个DIFF（offset修改版
[attachment=1:1ef53]Atoguru - UNDER WORLD (sirjuyt) [eikka's Heart].osu[/attachment:1ef53]

其實我一直都沒覺得它大聲過(orz 而且剛剛才發現mp3的封面怎麼會是T-ara)

嗯 總之還是先換掉了mp3 謝謝提供 \(^ ^)/

request from ★(oﾟ∀`从'∀ﾟo)★-Gamu-'s Modding Queue ~
對不起非常晚來 ><





圖都很好
只能說你挑對歌了<3
唯一有點遺憾的是我不太喜歡這歌
如果是我喜歡的我就會直接加進Favorite A了說 ~ -3-


感覺很接近ranked了呢
再找一點MOD確定一下
然後去找泡吧 ~ \:D/

S.T.A.R ! !
and good luck ~

DarknessAngel wrote:

eikka's Heart

1. 02:02:063 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 這裡非常的亂啊，雖然我知道這部分你不想跟前面一樣，但我還是希望你把所有的(4)刪掉，不想刪的話，至少把(4)疊在(3)下面 唔，好吧删了4~
2. 02:59:063 (2) - 唔唔，這非常不好啊，要做的坑爹如果是以這種形式出現會讓人有些厭煩呢...我希望你把這note刪掉，短slider加個折返 OTL上次好像也是这种东西被挑了，坏习惯真糟糕，fixed~顺便说一下我一点也不想坑爹啊TAT只是想做个爽快的图
3. 03:07:500 - 我敢打賭連擊是從這裡開始的 发现了，不过前面也有个一样的问题（1:30左右，没被你发现的样子）……这样改会破坏很多东西，所以暂时还想不出好的改法
4. 02:49:781 (8,1,2) - 這連打是多出來的喔 删啦~
5. 很好的圖呢，這首歌真的很好發揮 ~ eikka,good job !
   
   谢谢DN，不过也有很多人吐槽呢，其实感觉做的有点任性了

Download: Atoguru - UNDER WORLD (sirjuyt) [eikka's Heart].osu

DarknessAngel wrote:

request from ★(oﾟ∀`从'∀ﾟo)★-Gamu-'s Modding Queue ~
對不起非常晚來 ><

Red words = Unrankable thing
Blue words = It is the best way that you fix it
Black words = If I were you,I would do that
Green words = some of my comment,or something I want you to notice

eikka's Heart

1. 02:02:063 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 這裡非常的亂啊，雖然我知道這部分你不想跟前面一樣，但我還是希望你把所有的(4)刪掉，不想刪的話，至少把(4)疊在(3)下面
2. 02:59:063 (2) - 唔唔，這非常不好啊，要做的坑爹如果是以這種形式出現會讓人有些厭煩呢...我希望你把這note刪掉，短slider加個折返
3. 03:07:500 - 我敢打賭連擊是從這裡開始的
4. 02:49:781 (8,1,2) - 這連打是多出來的喔
5. 很好的圖呢，這首歌真的很好發揮 ~ eikka,good job !
   

Hurt

1. 雖然有些跳對於Hard來說有些大了，但還在容許範圍之內，great map !

Hate

• 
  
  這難度的滑條速度讓我有點嚇到... XD 這是能怎麼個嚇到法?

1. 00:27:563 (2) - 箭頭上的whistle移到頭上比較好，這樣比較符合時宜(如果這個沒改，下面那些就不用看了 ~ ) 喔0 0 嗯 其實我比較喜歡Whistle在折返上的音效
2. 00:33:563 (2) - ^
3. 01:09:563 (2) - ^
4. 02:17:063 (2) - ^
5. 02:23:063 (2) - ^
6. 03:30:563 (1) - ^
7. 03:36:563 (2) - ^
8. 03:42:563 (2) - ^
9. 03:48:563 (2) - ^

圖都很好
只能說你挑對歌了<3
唯一有點遺憾的是我不太喜歡這歌
如果是我喜歡的我就會直接加進Favorite A了說 ~ -3- XD 是嗎


感覺很接近ranked了呢
再找一點MOD確定一下
然後去找泡吧 ~ \:D/

S.T.A.R ! !
and good luck ~

\:D/ 哇

謝謝mod和star!

Hey

General
* After I discuss with wcx, the offset seems +4ms
* Add "subterranean animism" into tags, because that song is come from Touhou


Hate
00:32:813 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts and spinner-osu. It's hidden for players, especially for beginners
01:08:813 (1) - ^
03:35:813 (1) - ^
03:47:813 (1) - The sliderbody is covered by spinner-osu, and the sliderbody is hidden


Yia's Taiko
* Please full-mapped this, half-mapped is doesn't make sense


Hurt
* Some object are overlapped by hitbursts and spinner-osu. It's hidden for players during gameplay (e.g. 00:32:438 (1)). Consider to fix this issue


eikka's Heart
00:35:250 (2) - Overlapped by hitbursts and spinner-osu. It's hidden for players
01:09:188 (2) - Covered by spinner-osu at gameplay


sorry for picky

Leorda wrote:

Hey

General
* After I discuss with wcx, the offset seems +4ms fixed.
* Add "subterranean animism" into tags, because that song is come from Touhou Added.


Hate
00:32:813 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts and spinner-osu. It's hidden for players, especially for beginners
01:08:813 (1) - ^
03:35:813 (1) - ^
03:47:813 (1) - The sliderbody is covered by spinner-osu, and the sliderbody is hidden All fixed.


Yia's Taiko
* Please full-mapped this, half-mapped is doesn't make sense


Hurt
* Some object are overlapped by hitbursts and spinner-osu. It's hidden for players during gameplay (e.g. 00:32:438 (1)). Consider to fix this issue yea I think it's fine now.


eikka's Heart
00:35:250 (2) - Overlapped by hitbursts and spinner-osu. It's hidden for players
01:09:188 (2) - Covered by spinner-osu at gameplay


sorry for picky

yeah

Thanks your mod ,Leorda~

Leorda wrote:

Hey

eikka's Heart
00:35:250 (2) - Overlapped by hitbursts and spinner-osu. It's hidden for players changed
01:09:188 (2) - Covered by spinner-osu at gameplay changed

Download: Atoguru - UNDER WORLD (sirjuyt) [eikka's Heart].osu

eikkaleyd 's Mod Request.

Black=Just suggestion,you can fix it if you like.You may not fix it or ignore it if you don't agree with me.
Blue =I think it's a important thing(IMO,you have better to fix it.(Still the same,ignore it if you don't agree.)
Red=Unrankable issue.(You should fix it,otherwise you can't get a rank or app.)

[General]

You must use the common combo colours even though you have many Guest Diff.The same Combos Colours


[eikka's Heart]
這張可以轉做AR8 更合適的(通常170BPM下的I都是AR8~但如果是AR9都沒什麼問題,
只是會次中層玩家小一份娛樂,還可接受的.)

00:13:973 (1,2) - 第一節就來2連打不夠好,沒給玩家試清楚歌的節奏,應這樣子放:
樓上的圖片nc不要跟:P

00:45:567 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - rhythm錯了,這歌的triplets理應是紅線開始的,試試這樣的rhythm:
一樣不要跟NC

00:47:067 (1,2,1,2) - 這都一樣.

01:22:879 (7) - 放在slider的開始會令玩家confuse

01:45:192 (1) - 我玩的時候confuse了一下子,是因為誤認為這是一個3連slider,不如放做全notes?

01:51:567 (7,8) -

01:59:067 (3,4) - ^

這樣的排列會令HD玩家讀不到圖+no mod 玩家confuse

02:19:317 (4) - rerduce 一個repeat,轉做note,同樣1pc認為是只有1個repeat.

03:00:754 (2) - 一樣的問題




[Hurt]

00:15:942 (3) - (NAZI)Stack it better at the end of 00:15:004 (5). The new coordinate is x279,y184.

00:45:942 (2) - Wrong rhythm,triplets in this song should be started at red time line but not white.Do it like this:
00:46:692 (7,3,6) - The same.

01:05:442 (2,3,4,5,6) - If it's a hard,it's too diffcult.If it's an I,ignore this.

02:35:442 (3,6,3,6) - Wrong rhythm.Do it the same with 00:45:942

The rest are fine for me.



[Hate]

01:42:942 (2) - Whistle the slider since you did at 01:44:442 (4) -

Fine.

Hope my mod is useful to you.

nold_1702 wrote:

eikkaleyd 's Mod Request.

[General]

You must use the common combo colours even though you have many Guest Diff.The same Combos Colours
OK, I changed mine

[eikka's Heart]
這張可以轉做AR8 更合適的(通常170BPM下的I都是AR8~但如果是AR9都沒什麼問題,
只是會次中層玩家小一份娛樂,還可接受的.) 嗯，很多人这么说了，改吧

00:13:973 (1,2) - 第一節就來2連打不夠好,沒給玩家試清楚歌的節奏,應這樣子放 哦哦好棒的改法

00:45:567 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - rhythm錯了,這歌的triplets理應是紅線開始的,試試這樣的rhythm 好的

00:47:067 (1,2,1,2) - 這都一樣. Done

01:22:879 (7) - 放在slider的開始會令玩家confuse 我是想做成返回的flow，于是改成了放在外边一点点

01:45:192 (1) - 我玩的時候confuse了一下子,是因為誤認為這是一個3連slider,不如放做全notes? Done

01:51:567 (7,8) - :arrow: 我已经放到下一个slider的头部去了

01:59:067 (3,4) - ^ 放到这个的尾部去了

這樣的排列會令HD玩家讀不到圖+no mod 玩家confuse

02:19:317 (4) - rerduce 一個repeat,轉做note,同樣1pc認為是只有1個repeat. Done

03:00:754 (2) - 一樣的問題 改了

Hope my mod is useful to you.

非常感谢MOD和提醒

Download: Atoguru - UNDER WORLD (sirjuyt) [eikka's Heart].osu

nold_1702 wrote:

eikkaleyd 's Mod Request.

Black=Just suggestion,you can fix it if you like.You may not fix it or ignore it if you don't agree with me.
Blue =I think it's a important thing(IMO,you have better to fix it.(Still the same,ignore it if you don't agree.)
Red=Unrankable issue.(You should fix it,otherwise you can't get a rank or app.)

[General]

You must use the common combo colours even though you have many Guest Diff.The same Combos Colours


[eikka's Heart]
這張可以轉做AR8 更合適的(通常170BPM下的I都是AR8~但如果是AR9都沒什麼問題,
只是會次中層玩家小一份娛樂,還可接受的.)

00:13:973 (1,2) - 第一節就來2連打不夠好,沒給玩家試清楚歌的節奏,應這樣子放:

SPOILER

樓上的圖片nc不要跟:P

00:45:567 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - rhythm錯了,這歌的triplets理應是紅線開始的,試試這樣的rhythm:

SPOILER

一樣不要跟NC

00:47:067 (1,2,1,2) - 這都一樣.

01:22:879 (7) - 放在slider的開始會令玩家confuse

01:45:192 (1) - 我玩的時候confuse了一下子,是因為誤認為這是一個3連slider,不如放做全notes?

01:51:567 (7,8) -

SPOILER

01:59:067 (3,4) - ^

這樣的排列會令HD玩家讀不到圖+no mod 玩家confuse

02:19:317 (4) - rerduce 一個repeat,轉做note,同樣1pc認為是只有1個repeat.

03:00:754 (2) - 一樣的問題




[Hurt]

00:15:942 (3) - (NAZI)Stack it better at the end of 00:15:004 (5). The new coordinate is x279,y184. 好 看來是前面就已經歪了XD 改到 x280,y184

00:45:942 (2) - Wrong rhythm,triplets in this song should be started at red time line but not white.Do it like this:

SPOILER

用太鼓試了一下 還是覺得這個節奏比較好

00:46:692 (7,3,6) - The same. 同上

01:05:442 (2,3,4,5,6) - If it's a hard,it's too diffcult.If it's an I,ignore this. ...難度上確實是有一點過了 改簡單一點

02:35:442 (3,6,3,6) - Wrong rhythm.Do it the same with 00:45:942 嗯 就是這樣 keep

The rest are fine for me.



[Hate]

01:42:942 (2) - Whistle the slider since you did at 01:44:442 (4) - 哇 這都看得見0 0 Added.

Fine.

Hope my mod is useful to you.

謝謝mod和star > <


-
等太鼓完成之後應該能再試試看了

taiko diff - full ver.
謝謝您

Download: Atoguru - UNDER WORLD (sirjuyt) [Yia's Taiko].osu

[Kirisame-Marisa] wrote:

taiko diff - full ver.
謝謝您

謝謝 \>w</

[General]
- inconsistancy of tags

[Insane]
00:32:817 (1,2) - whistle at beginning?
00:35:723 (5,6) - spacing上沒需要特地放成這樣吧
00:51:942 (3) - 擺成正三角形
01:05:067 - need some whistles
01:48:848 - remove break

- 有個別notes放的太隨意了 可以兼顧一下美感
- whistle其實可以貫徹整首歌的
- 聲音大少變化可以再下點功夫 比如00:36:567 - 這段 (整首也重複了不少次)

[Hard]
00:15:004 (5) - 這個會誤導玩家 加NC, stack (4,5)結尾
00:18:004 (5) - ^
00:18:004 (5) - ^
01:41:442 (2) - ^
01:52:504 (4) - ^
01:58:504 (5) - ^, 這個unrankable 因為有reverse slider的頭尾不能被遮住
03:10:317 (3) - remove hitsound at the beginning, whistle at the track, clap at the end
03:18:942 (2) - same as 0:15

[Hate]
02:13:317 (4) - 避免這種1/2 slider在最低難度出現
02:29:817 (2) - ^
02:31:317 (4) - ^
02:37:317 (4) - ^
02:55:317 (5) - ^
03:21:192 (2) - ^
03:22:692 (4) - ^
03:44:817 (3) - ^
03:56:817 (5) - ^
* 3/4 slider也拿掉吧
* 估計把這些拿掉以後難度再降 這樣N和H之間的難度就差太遠了

[Taiko]
00:45:567 - 用一個遞進去顯示vocal的變化吧 ddkdd -> ddkkd 之後那幾個都這樣改
01:00:567 - 後面你都沒用slider 這裡也不用
01:21:567 - same as 0:45
01:35:817 - k
03:39:567 - 這一長串與音樂不符
03:42:567 - ^
03:45:567 - ^
03:48:567 - ^
03:51:567 - 這段實在沒必要7連塞滿 vocal本來就以x x x---x x x做模進

*不必做成難度遞增
*後段overmap
*前段中段單獨來看不錯

加油~