From my modding queue.
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Good luck!
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Wrong video path is set on Taiko diff.
You should show that aesopl19193 made [Easy] in Creator's Words?
- 00:27:012 (3) - I know you put this note to follow the vocal, but I think to follow the music is better here. How about extending it to 00:27:710?
- 01:07:477 (1) - Shorten it to 01:10:268.
- 00:28:320 (T) - The volume is too low. Try to turn it up to 50%.
- 01:12:187 (T) - ^ 55% as well as the first half part of KIAI.
- 00:54:919 (3,4) - Since there aren't other notes which are stacked, I think it's better to avoid stacking.
Many notes are just copy&pasted and reversed...I was kinda bored...
Speaking of a part that is not KIAI, it seems that you overused quick triples. I guess that's one of reason "hitsound is a bit loud" as wmf said before.
The pattern of formation is very simple, and easy to play, but there are many quick triples. Looks kinda overmapping.
In KIAI, the number of it fits the music imo. So if you can, try to re-consider about pattern in NOT KIAI, then your map will be much better.
- 00:03:291 (T) - Remove this green line.
- 01:21:431 (1) - This spinner should be finished at 01:24:134, and next one should start from here.
You set AR9, but the pattern of formation is very simple overall, and most of notes are just quick triples.
It's well considered and neat as first map, but it cannot be called "creative" yet.
- 00:15:849 (1) - How about moving the end point to x:252, y:76? That looks better for me.
- 00:49:338 (1) - Sice you use 0.25x SV here, it's slow and doesn't make good effect. I think it's better to use 0.50x SV here. On the other hand, 4th SV is NOT acceptable, so you should change it anyway.
- 00:59:977 (1) - The spacing is quite wide and this is quick triple, so it's just a hard patten and hard to read. I recommend you to reduce the spacing between (3,1).
Good luck!