1. Try to keep the kiai time consistent for all difficulties.

1. You know, this difficulty plays like a hard because of the spacing, man. Also, considering that the bpm for this map is about 187, a slider of least 1.40 isn't the best way to go in my opinion.
2. Perhaps it's best to decrease the Approach Rate by one.

1. 01:52:236 (4)-A finish here doesn't sound right here in my opinion. Consider removing it.
2. 01:52:877 (1)-A finish here sounds right.

1. 01:08:649 (1)-The hitburst from this spinner is covering the reverse arrow of the next slider. Just place the slider somewhere else and you should be fine.
2. 02:41:592 (1)-Blanket this slider properly around note 6.
3. 02:43:195 (5)-^

1. 00:36:279-Perhaps it's best to put new combo here.
2. 00:51:342 (2)-A good idea to add a finish on the beginning?
3. 01:52:236 (3)-A finish here doesn't sound right here in my opinion. Consider removing it.
4. 01:52:977 (2)-Add a finish on the beginning. It would sound right if put it there.

Roddie wrote:

Heeey

Timing Points

1. Try to keep the kiai time consistent for all difficulties.

DC's Normal

1. You know, this difficulty plays like a hard because of the spacing, man. Also, considering that the bpm for this map is about 187, a slider of least 1.40 isn't the best way to go in my opinion.
2. Perhaps it's best to decrease the Approach Rate by one.

changed the ar but imo the map itself plays like a normal and because of the lack of circles making the gaps a bit bigger is usually okay.

Mild Death

1. 01:52:236 (4)-A finish here doesn't sound right here in my opinion. Consider removing it. fixed
2. 01:52:877 (1)-A finish here sounds right.

fixed

Color's Hate

1. 01:08:649 (1)-The hitburst from this spinner is covering the reverse arrow of the next slider. Just place the slider somewhere else and you should be fine.
2. 02:41:592 (1)-Blanket this slider properly around note 6.
3. 02:43:195 (5)-^

fixed all

DIE

1. 00:36:279-Perhaps it's best to put new combo here.
2. 00:51:342 (2)-A good idea to add a finish on the beginning?
3. 01:52:236 (3)-A finish here doesn't sound right here in my opinion. Consider removing it.
4. 01:52:977 (2)-Add a finish on the beginning. It would sound right if put it there.

fixed all

And that's about it.

Good luck to you, man.

1. Change 'Mr_Color' to 'Mr Color' in the tags. No other maps have the underscore.
2. Lowest diff is 3.72 stars. Guideline is 3, and normally I only allow it to go either up to 3.25 or 3.5 ... 3.72 is really, really much. It'd be tough to get it ranked like this since people give you a lot of shit about diff spread.

1. Make circles bigger!
2. All those finishes hurts my ears.
3. This is mapped short! Noooooooooo!!!!!!
4. 00:31:151 (1) - First object is almost offscreen T_T, this could be done better.
5. 01:35:250 (1,2,3,4) - Normally I don't point out flow problems but this one is just so... argh! This doesn't flow at all!
   
   Too hard for the easiest, seriously.

1. 02:31:336 (1,2) - These are offbeat. They should be 1/3 like in the DIE difficulty.

1. 00:59:034 (6,7) - These sliders move strangely. They go in a loop before moving upwards.
2. 02:00:569 (6,7) - Same as above.

1. 01:11:213 (1) - The reverse arrow is mostly hidden. Move this some grids down, that should be enough.

Jackubi wrote:

Any particular reason that I can't download this map and this is the only beatmap I can't download?