Odaril wrote:

Please reply to this mod sayin what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game

General
Maybe add "H-Boy" to the tags, since it is your previous name ? sure
I have an offset of 1,431. Remember to resnap the kiai sections. sure

Easy
00:05:786 (1) - I don't think you should silence beats like that - it made that slider rather confusing to play. k
01:20:332 (4) - Same. Also, wouldn't it be better to make a crescendo with the ticks ?
01:26:150 (1) - On the same range of ideas, a decrescendo here would be nice.

Normal
You didn't use in the beginning the same sound samples as in the other diffs you made.
00:42:521 (2,3) - A crescendo here would sound really nice.
01:19:976 (4,1,1) - Make a crescendo until the second beat of (1) ?

Hard
00:17:604 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Crescendo ?
01:20:877 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - ... crescendo ? ;_;

PoLKmix
Well. Is fine...


I know I'm annoying with the crescendos but hitsounds are very important in a map, and you missed possibly awesome hitsounds.
I enjoyed playing the Hard a lot.

James2250 wrote:

-The hitsounds sound pretty quiet compared to the song in most places if you want to turn some of them up slightly
-2 seconds seems slightly longer than is needed for the audio lead-in in my opinion change to 1s
-The HP bar seems lower down than it is meant to be, or is that just me?
-Why have Hard with a lower SV than Normal? its my awkwardness .., but i dont want to change it.

Easy: raise volume by 10%
You could avoid some small overlaps like 00:52:703 (4,5) and 01:12:703 (1,2) to look slightly neater in general k

Normal: raise the kiai time'svolume by 10%
00:16:703 (2,2) - same overlap comment k
00:42:522 (2,3) - ^ ^

Hard:
00:34:521 (5) - try and avoid the hidden repeat here by the previous hitburst k
00:43:249 (4,1) - minor things like this you could clean up more ^
01:21:976 (5,1) - same repeat comment nah

PoLKmix:
-The OD is much lower than Hard on this difficulty if you can try and fix that OD+1
00:14:158 (1) - remove new combo? k
00:28:703 (5,6) - odd spacing change a design by lks...
00:34:885 (1,2) - overlaps like these could look alot nicer ^
00:39:976 (4,6) - ^ ^
01:10:340 (7,1) - spacing k

Some parts could look more organized while playing but not bad overall
Deserves a star~

KuraiPettan wrote:

Easy
- Approach rate +1 k
00:43:611 (2) - I think this clap is unnecessary and it sounds weird :/ ^
00:51:612 (2) - Add clap ? ^
00:59:249 (5) - Add whistle onto the beginning and onto the end ^ feel good
01:26:158 (1) - Start it 3/4 earlier, It will fit the song more. ^

Normal
01:24:885 (2) - I think you should use the proper spacing here, (2) is too far from (1). It's fine like this but I will prefer with the appropriate spacing. k
01:25:885 - Add a spinner here as in "Easy" and "PoLKmix" ? nah

Hard
01:25:885 - Add a spinner here as in "Easy" "PoLKmix" ? nah

That's all I can find, It's a nice map with a nice flow. Hope It will be ranked soon.
*star*

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. missing skin elements: default-comma.png, default-dot.png, default-percent.png, default-x.png 已经忘了当时用的啥字体了-A-找个类似的...
2. 3.jpg, 3-1.jpg 有明显瑕疵...
3. 结尾的spinner有/没有统一一下

这个无法统一了。。

星星很久前就交掉了 orz

Gonzvlo wrote:

Hi,

Sometimes the jumps/anti-jumps felt a bit weird but I didn't have much trouble with most of them while playing. Although, there are some spacing issues that you should fix.

[General]

1. Skin: The files "Spinner-osu", "Spinner-spin" and "Spinner-clear" are missing, make sure to add them and full submit. (If you don't want make custom ones, use the file included in the template skin)

[PoLKmix]

1. 00:27:268 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern uses 3 different spacing values, that's definitely not a good idea. Try something a bit more consistent, like this.
2. 00:37:813 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Same here, (4) and (1) are way too close. Let me suggest something like this

That's all, let me know when you're ready!