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Fujiwara Marina - Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.)

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DarknessAngel
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年7月26日 at 上午 07:13:07

Artist: Fujiwara Marina
Title: Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.)
Source: Zettai Junshu Kyousei Kozukuri Kyokashou!!
Tags: Softhouse-seal GRANDEE opening galgame hentai eroge galge bishoujo gal game bossandy R_a_i_n S_h_i_o_n
BPM: 220
Filesize: 15638kb
Play Time: 01:32
Difficulties Available:
  1. Boss Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 624 notes)
  2. D.N.Angel (4.9 stars, 284 notes)
  3. Hard (5 stars, 264 notes)
  4. R a i n's Easy (2.43 stars, 104 notes)
  5. S h i o n's Normal (4.23 stars, 151 notes)
Download: Fujiwara Marina - Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.)
Download: Fujiwara Marina - Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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3rd


『ぜったい遵守☆強制子作り許可証!!』 OP


I hope you will like it ~



R a i n's Easy - Done - by R a i n (1/27/2012)
S h i o n's Normal - Done - by S h i o n (1/30/2012)
Hard - Done - by me(1/26/2012)
D.N.Angel - Done - by me(1/22/2012)
Boss Taiko Oni - Done - by bossandy (2/02/2012)
Selee
OTZ...please upload again, I have trouble downloading this
S h i o n
卧槽 I 神图...
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

S h i o n wrote:

卧槽 I 神图...
fanzhen0019
timing试试看这个?
bpm 220.000
offset 2561

不过从01:11到01:13这一段可能有点off(这一段唱的本身就off?)
其他部分应该都还好吧OAO
只是建议 还是找找timing方面的专家吧lol
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

fanzhen0019 wrote:

timing试试看这个?
bpm 220.000
offset 2561

不过从01:11到01:13这一段可能有点off(这一段唱的本身就off?)
其他部分应该都还好吧OAO
只是建议 还是找找timing方面的专家吧lol
我一直在煩惱的就是01:11...
正在等待Selee的幫助
我不知道該不該給你KD...lol


Editted : 還是給好了
R a i n
Hi~

If you are OK, please I make guestdif
R a i n
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

R a i n wrote:

Done!
updated !

good diff ~ ;)

but some place are a little hard for Easy :O
S h i o n
Download: Fujiwara Marina - Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.) (DarknessAngel) [S h i o n's Normal].osu

抱歉久等了 >. <

可以的话加个slidertick, 然后帮我在01:02:833 01:03:379 01:03:924 加一下音效~ 我懒= =
不加slidertick也行 没什么问题~

good luck
bossandy
抱歉 剩下20%了 晚點再給你 先給Taiko BG
好了 抱歉讓你久等了>_<



Download: Fujiwara Marina - Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.) (DarknessAngel) [Boss Taiko Oni].osu
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

bossandy wrote:

抱歉 剩下20%了 晚點再給你 先給Taiko BG~
Taiko BG的話,用這張做吧↓




這樣才能達成每個難度不同的BG :3
不好意思,要你在做一次Taiko BG了..
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ DarknessAngel ~ :)

Mod time for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Add 'opening,galgame and guest diff creator names' in tags.
  2. Remove Letterbox during breaks,because have video.
  3. You need change Source : Zettai Junshu Kyousei Kozukuri Kyokashou!!

[D.N.Angel]


  1. 00:07:470 (3) - Add new combo to here,because jump.
  2. 00:08:561 (3) - ^
  3. 00:26:151 (4) - Remove this note will be fine with me.
  4. 00:56:561 - Add note will be better.
  5. 01:23:676 (3) - Suggestion stack on 01:23:811.
  6. PS:我觉的这难度...不用板子根本玩不了...太多跳了(不能这么鬼畜).

[Hard]


  1. HP,OD+1
  2. 00:13:197 - Add clap.
  3. 00:30:651 (3,4) - Don't overlap, confusion here.

[S h i o n's Normal]


  1. AR+1 will be fun with me.
  2. 00:39:106 (1) - This is unrankable error,Add new combo to here.
  3. 01:02:561 (3) - Add finish.
  4. 01:09:651 - Add note will be better.

[R a i n's Easy]


  1. Change same offset as other diff.
  2. 00:02:560 (1) - Add finish.
  3. 00:06:924 (1) - ^
  4. 00:11:288 (1) - ^
  5. 00:20:015 - ^
  6. 00:33:106 - ^
  7. 00:38:561 - ^
  8. 00:47:288 - ^
  9. 01:13:448 - ^
  10. 01:22:176 - ^

That's all ~

Good luck ~ ;)
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ DarknessAngel ~ :)

Mod time for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Add 'opening,galgame and guest diff creator names' in tags. fixed
  2. Remove Letterbox during breaks,because have video. fixed
  3. You need change Source : Zettai Junshu Kyousei Kozukuri Kyokashou!! fixed

[D.N.Angel]


  1. 00:07:470 (3) - Add new combo to here,because jump. fixed
  2. 00:08:561 (3) - ^ fixed
  3. 00:26:151 (4) - Remove this note will be fine with me. fixed
  4. 00:56:561 - Add note will be better. fixed
  5. 01:23:676 (3) - Suggestion stack on 01:23:811. 放那裏玩起來不順,我改到其他地方了
  6. PS:我觉的这难度...不用板子根本玩不了...太多跳了(不能这么鬼畜).
    呵呵,我用滑鼠玩得挺開心的呢~

[Hard]


  1. HP,OD+1 fixed,啊咧,star rate = 4.96
  2. 00:13:197 - Add clap. fixed
  3. 00:30:651 (3,4) - Don't overlap, confusion here. 唔,我想保留這個
謝謝MOD~ :)


Editted:

Add tags,change source and cancel letterbox during breaks in R a i n's Easy and S h i o n's Normal
R a i n

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[R a i n's Easy]


  1. Change same offset as other diff.
  2. 00:02:560 (1) - Add finish.
  3. 00:06:924 (1) - ^
  4. 00:11:288 (1) - ^
  5. 00:20:015 - ^
  6. 00:33:106 - ^
  7. 00:38:561 - ^
  8. 00:47:288 - ^
  9. 01:13:448 - ^
  10. 01:22:176 - ^
)
All fixed
thanks MOD~ :)

Download: Fujiwara Marina - Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.) (DarknessAngel) [R a i n's Easy].osu
S h i o n
Download: Fujiwara Marina - Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.) (DarknessAngel) [S h i o n's Normal].osu

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[S h i o n's Normal]


  1. AR+1 will be fun with me. fixed
  2. 00:39:106 (1) - This is unrankable error,Add new combo to here. fixed
  3. 01:02:561 (3) - Add finish. no for here, but 01:00:106 (3)
  4. 01:09:651 - Add note will be better. no, thanks

)
Thank you for mod ~
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

S h i o n wrote:

update !
And thanks star ~ m(_ _)m
Wafu
[-S h i o n's Normal-]

00:43:297 (Inherited Point) - Offset 43333

[-Hard-]

01:32:266 (4) - Please, make this slider awesome, not linear ^^

I think there is no lot of things to mod. :o Nice map, good luck.

And Taiko background is bugged. Here is fix, only add song name.. http://www.mediafire.com/?7nlso32zeljyinl
TW-KUMA01
[Taiko] 整體來說不錯 不過還是有點小問題

音效很小聲,要不要把每條線的音效都改成normal ?大概70%聽起來比較好

00:56:015 這裡遮到note了,個人是覺得這歌不太需要什麼變速的變化,維持1倍速我覺得比較好看

00:37:470 ~ 00:38:561 跟 00:46:197 ~ 00:47:288 我覺得沒必要下成這樣o.o 因為你別的部分下的沒有很難,然後這邊突然來一個大長串,會顯得有點突兀,可以試試看別的下法來處理這段音樂看看

01:32:879 這個轉盤不加反而比較舒服

大致上就這樣! 加油摟
Kryptogram
Hi there ! Here is my Mod

General:

- Make Taiko.jpg 800x600 since the other are 800x600

[R a i n's Easy]

00:07:470 (2,4) - More symetrical
328,72,7470,2,0,B|360:64|392:72|408:104|408:144,1,120,8|0
304,168,8560,1,8
272,272,9106,2,0,B|240:280|208:272|192:240|192:200,1,120,0|8
00:21:651 (5,6) - 1 grid to the left
00:28:470 (1) - Add finish at the end of the slider
00:56:015 (1) - ^
01:00:379 (2) - ^
01:04:742 (1) - ^
01:17:811 (1) - ^

[S h i o n's Normal]

00:05:833 (4) - Add a inheriting section whit soft-slidertick2 http://puu.sh/fGrZ
00:10:197 (8) - Same here but like this http://puu.sh/fGsx
00:32:288 (3) - Add finish at the end of the slider
00:35:288 (7) - Move the tail of the slider to x:336 y :220 http://puu.sh/fGtw
00:43:297 (x) - This timeline its unsnnaped 2ms fix it
00:44:015 (3) - Add a inheriting section whit soft-slidertick2 in the first tick
01:21:084 (6) - Add a inheriting section whit soft-slidertick2 in both ticks

[D.N.Angel]

OD +1

00:20:424 (2) - Move to x:51 y:222
00:22:879 (3) - ctrl+j then move it to x:308 y:156 http://puu.sh/fGDu
01:00:379 (1) - Add clap at the end of the slider
01:00:924 (3) - Add clap in the reverse arrow
01:01:742 (1) - Add clap
01:02:288 (3) - ^
01:04:742 (1) - Add clap at the end of the slider
01:05:288 (2) - Add clap in the reverse arrow
01:06:106 (1) - Add clap
01:06:651 (4) - ^
01:06:924 (6) - Delete clap at the begin of the slider and add it in the end

[Hard]

01:09:106 (3) - Add finish
01:19:448 (3) - Delete clap
01:20:538 (3) - ^
01:28:175 (2) - ^
01:29:266 (3) - ^

Nice mapset :) ! Hope it was helpful

Good Luck!
R a i n

[Te][Amo] wrote:


[b][R a i n's Easy]


00:07:470 (2,4) - More symetrical fixed
328,72,7470,2,0,B|360:64|392:72|408:104|408:144,1,120,8|0
304,168,8560,1,8
272,272,9106,2,0,B|240:280|208:272|192:240|192:200,1,120,0|8
00:21:651 (5,6) - 1 grid to the left no
00:28:470 (1) - Add finish at the end of the slider fixed
00:56:015 (1) - ^ fixed
01:00:379 (2) - ^ fixed
01:04:742 (1) - ^ fixed
01:17:811 (1) - ^ fixed
[/b]
thanks MOD!

Download: Fujiwara Marina - Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.) (DarknessAngel) [R a i n's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

dragonxcz wrote:

[-Hard-]

01:32:266 (4) - Please, make this slider awesome, not linear ^^ It's for symmetry

I think there is no lot of things to mod. :o Nice map, good luck.

And Taiko background is bugged. Here is fix, only add song name.. http://www.mediafire.com/?7nlso32zeljyinl thanks ^^


[Te][Amo] wrote:

General:

- Make Taiko.jpg 800x600 since the other are 800x600 fixed

[D.N.Angel]

OD +1

00:20:424 (2) - Move to x:51 y:222 you are so tough :O,fixed
00:22:879 (3) - ctrl+j then move it to x:308 y:156 http://puu.sh/fGDu change another part
01:00:379 (1) - Add clap at the end of the slider nonononono,bad idea... D:
01:00:924 (3) - Add clap in the reverse arrow
01:01:742 (1) - Add clap
01:02:288 (3) - ^
01:04:742 (1) - Add clap at the end of the slider
01:05:288 (2) - Add clap in the reverse arrow
01:06:106 (1) - Add clap
01:06:651 (4) - ^
01:06:924 (6) - Delete clap at the begin of the slider and add it in the end

[Hard]

01:09:106 (3) - Add finish fixed
01:19:448 (3) - Delete clap
01:20:538 (3) - ^
01:28:175 (2) - ^
01:29:266 (3) - ^ ... ... D:

Nice mapset :) ! Hope it was helpful

Good Luck!

Okay,thank you for your modding ~ (:
Dino99
Mod here~ ;)

[R a i n's Easy]
  1. 00:04:742 (4) - Make the slider better? not linear.. :? Try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/236320
    168,256,4742,2,0,B|232:240|248:168,1,120,0|8
  2. 00:06:106 - Clap
  3. 00:10:470 - ^
  4. 01:16:993 (6) - ^
  5. 01:21:357 - ^
  6. 01:25:720 - ^
  7. 01:30:084 - ^
  8. 01:32:811 - Add a note with finish here? spinner start at 01:33:084? Do this~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/236328
    200,360,91993,2,0,B|152:352|120:320|112:288,1,120
    104,232,92811,1,4
    256,192,93084,12,0,95811
    You can try to add some whistle~ then it will be better~ :D
[S h i o n's Normal]
  1. 00:04:197 (5) - 形狀跟(4)一樣吧:3 覺得這樣好看些 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/236334
    72,268,4197,2,0,B|96:224|96:172,1,100,2|8
    176,168,4742,6,0,B|208:224|288:200,1,100,2|8
  2. 00:26:561 (1,2,3,4,5) - 換種排法吧o.o 這樣如何><?? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/236338
    364,112,26561,6,0,B|268:84,1,100,0|8
    260,164,27106,2,0,B|164:136,1,100,0|8
    88,112,27651,1,0
  3. 00:33:106 - Finish
  4. 00:36:379 (1) - 覺得有點怪怪的.. 感覺拖了一拍lol 試試轉盤在00:38:015結束? 然後分別在00:38:561 & 00:38:833 - 加個圈?
  5. 00:53:833 (1) - 5個折返...有點太多了._. 把它縮成3個 然後後面那兩個改圈? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/236342
  6. 00:59:833 - 加個圈
  7. 01:17:402 - Clap
  8. 01:31:720 (1,2) - 這兩個形狀一樣吧~
[Boss Taiko Oni]
  1. 00:08:697 (2) - d
  2. 00:14:833 (4) - k
  3. 00:24:106 (3) - d
  4. 00:42:583 - 加個d?
  5. 01:07:197 (3) - k
    不太會mod太鼓>w< 都只是建議!!~~~ :D
[Hard]
  1. OD+1?
  2. 00:16:742 (1,2,3,4) - 這樣如何? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/236349
  3. 00:36:379 (1) - 轉盤到00:37:197, 然後在00:37:470 ~ 00:38:561加8個圈(白線) 再做個音量漸增如何??
  4. 01:22:038 (5) - NC?
  5. 在01:32:675 & 01:32:811分別加note 然後轉盤從01:32:879開始~
[Insane]
  1. 00:21:515 (3,4) - 位置對調?
  2. 00:33:106 (1,2) - 略坑了lol 移近點嘛?
  3. 00:36:379 (1) - 同Hard吧
  4. 00:46:879 & 00:47:015 & 00:47:151 - 加note吧 這樣感覺有點空..
  5. 00:56:561 (3) - 節奏不好._. 加個折返?
  6. 01:10:197 (2) - ^
  7. 01:13:008 - 加個圈
  8. 01:13:312 - ^
  9. 同H吧 在01:32:675 & 01:32:811分別加note 然後轉盤從01:32:879開始~
就這樣了~
祝早日RANK!!~~~ ;)
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

12BARRY21 wrote:

Mod here~ ;)

[Hard]
  1. OD+1? 還加啊,要5星了喔><
  2. 00:16:742 (1,2,3,4) - 這樣如何? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/236349 原本的其實就OK了
  3. 00:36:379 (1) - 轉盤到00:37:197, 然後在00:37:470 ~ 00:38:561加8個圈(白線) 再做個音量漸增如何?? 是個好主意,不過這邊每個難度都放轉盤,所以為了一致...
  4. 01:22:038 (5) - NC? 就算要加也是加在前一個,但是不怎麼需要呢
  5. 在01:32:675 & 01:32:811分別加note 然後轉盤從01:32:879開始~ 恩,fixed
[Insane]
  1. 00:21:515 (3,4) - 位置對調? 原本的比較好吧:O
  2. 00:33:106 (1,2) - 略坑了lol 移近點嘛? 保留
  3. 00:36:379 (1) - 同Hard吧 同Hard吧
  4. 00:46:879 & 00:47:015 & 00:47:151 - 加note吧 這樣感覺有點空.. 不了
  5. 00:56:561 (3) - 節奏不好._. 加個折返? ^
  6. 01:10:197 (2) - ^ fixed
  7. 01:13:008 - 加個圈 你好像沒注意到兩條紅線,有各自的時間差,所以我盡量少放note
  8. 01:13:312 - ^ ^
  9. 同H吧 在01:32:675 & 01:32:811分別加note 然後轉盤從01:32:879開始~ fixed
就這樣了~
祝早日RANK!!~~~ ;)
謝謝建議 ~ :)

Editted:
忘記補一句...還有star ~ !! ><
R a i n

12BARRY21 wrote:

[R a i n's Easy]
  1. 00:04:742 (4) - Make the slider better? not linear.. :? Try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/236320
    168,256,4742,2,0,B|232:240|248:168,1,120,0|8
  2. 00:06:106 - Clap
  3. 00:10:470 - ^
  4. 01:16:993 (6) - ^
  5. 01:21:357 - ^
  6. 01:25:720 - ^
  7. 01:30:084 - ^
  8. 01:32:811 - Add a note with finish here? spinner start at 01:33:084? Do this~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/236328
    200,360,91993,2,0,B|152:352|120:320|112:288,1,120
    104,232,92811,1,4
    256,192,93084,12,0,95811
    You can try to add some whistle~ then it will be better~ :D
All fixed
thanks MOD~ :)

Download: Fujiwara Marina - Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.) (DarknessAngel) [R a i n's Easy].osu
S h i o n
Download: Fujiwara Marina - Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.) (DarknessAngel) [S h i o n's Normal].osu

[Te][Amo]: All fixed~

12BARRY21: 改了那个finish, 至于spinner是要和别的难度统一。
Bobo_old
Description
In 20XX, the humans are about to go extinct...

Since the ratio of men and women is now 1:10721, the authorities establish a new law, "Sex New Law", and issue a card called "Free Sex Licence". Once a man shows his card to a girl, he will be able to have sex with her soon. However, it doesn't work...

The authorities decide to issue a new license to break the deadlock...
That's interesting ._.

[General]

This is obviously from a hentai game, add "Hentai" to the tags.

[Easy]

00:15:379 (2,3,4) - For a 220bpm song, this is actually quite hard for an Easy, just turn them into 2 sliders.
00:41:015 (2,3,4) - ^
00:49:742 (2,3,4) - ^

[Normal]

00:10:197 (8) - I would just play around with the slider points so that the startpoint and the endpoint aren't touching each other.
00:48:924 (4) - ^

[Hard]

The jumps in this diff are quite difficult.
And the patterns are really confusing.

00:19:606 (3,4) - Replace with a slider?
00:24:379 (3) - New combo.

Ehh...

[DNAngel]

Why not just call it Insane?

01:32:539 (4,1,2) -
Give NC to (4) and delete NC on (1), then form a triangle.

Hmm.... could use some work, good luck getting ranked.
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

Bobo wrote:

Description
In 20XX, the humans are about to go extinct...

Since the ratio of men and women is now 1:10721, the authorities establish a new law, "Sex New Law", and issue a card called "Free Sex Licence". Once a man shows his card to a girl, he will be able to have sex with her soon. However, it doesn't work...

The authorities decide to issue a new license to break the deadlock...
That's interesting ._.

[General]

This is obviously from a hentai game, add "Hentai" to the tags. fixed


[Hard]

The jumps in this diff are quite difficult.
And the patterns are really confusing. I don't think so

00:19:606 (3,4) - Replace with a slider? no
00:24:379 (3) - New combo. fixed

Ehh...

[DNAngel]

Why not just call it Insane? someone told me "D.N.Angel" is better than "Insane"

01:32:539 (4,1,2) -
Give NC to (4) and delete NC on (1), then form a triangle. no

Hmm.... could use some work, good luck getting ranked.
thanks sugguestion
R a i n

Bobo wrote:

[Easy]

00:15:379 (2,3,4) - For a 220bpm song, this is actually quite hard for an Easy, just turn them into 2 sliders.
00:41:015 (2,3,4) - ^
00:49:742 (2,3,4) - ^
no chenged
thanks MOD
L_P
hi, from mod queue

因为看不出问题,全部我都给建议罢了,跟不跟在于你,谢谢~

DNA, look through (i cant pass it haiz) i dont see mistake

Hard
00:11:151 (4) - http://puu.sh/gnqk this first, and then next pattern you can keep this (to make the player familiar to the rhythm)
00:15:106 (2,3,1) - 很适合antijump哦
00:30:651 (3,4) - 不移去别的地方吗?(这时候video闪了一下,容易误解)像在下一个slider的头上更好吧
另外这个难度的spacing有些大,果然是触手做的图,下次建议做小一点的哈哈
00:49:470 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个感觉上是一组的,不如做个四个slider的形状/pattern
00:51:379 (1) - stack在下个note上面感觉良好?
00:55:061 (1) - stack吧,不然太难了
01:11:781 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - spacing由小至大?
01:32:675 (1,2) - spacing过大啊啊啊

s h i o n
00:09:651 (7) - 这里用note?
00:32:015 (x) - 用个slider?到32561,然后再加个slider
00:40:742 (1,2,3,4) - 微微弯?
00:53:833 (1) - 第一个repeat 加finish?没加感觉不合群
01:25:448 (5) - 头加finish,两次都要,自我感觉良好

rain
00:15:379 (2,3) - one slider is easier
00:36:379 (1) - no finish is better?
00:40:742 (1,2,3) -yeah. one slider is enough
behind there got a lot of stuff can be easier, take your time if you wanna change, however, up to you

慢来,慢来,加油!
wmfchris
taiko mod as requested

[Taiko]
00:03:106 - this tone of this phrase is higher than the last one, try k d k
00:03:651 - ^ k
00:07:470 - ^
00:08:015 - ^
00:10:197 - try k d k d k or stream?
00:38:288 - observing the gituar pitch I think kkddd sounds better
00:56:015 - this note belongs to both last and next sentences. but if you maintain the stream, apply higher SV to this note as well, in order to avoid misleading players.
01:12:872 - try k---d d k...
01:32:879 - place the spinner 1/2 later than the notes

哇靠 不帶這麼兇殘的萌妹子
I think the 1/4 style is maintained throughout the song, which is ok for me, but the 1/4 since the red line sounds very random and need some fixing there.
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

L_P wrote:

hi, from mod queue

因为看不出问题,全部我都给建议罢了,跟不跟在于你,谢谢~

DNA, look through (i cant pass it haiz) i dont see mistake

Hard
00:11:151 (4) - http://puu.sh/gnqk this first, and then next pattern you can keep this (to make the player familiar to the rhythm)不行啊這個,會造成間距問題
00:15:106 (2,3,1) - 很适合antijump哦 不懂..
00:30:651 (3,4) - 不移去别的地方吗?(这时候video闪了一下,容易误解)像在下一个slider的头上更好吧 改成一個slider
另外这个难度的spacing有些大,果然是触手做的图,下次建议做小一点的哈哈
因為我覺得相對於最難難度已經算很簡單,所以不知不覺把間距弄開一點lol
00:49:470 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个感觉上是一组的,不如做个四个slider的形状/pattern
雖然是這麼說,但是第4個也排成同樣的形狀會有各種問題...
00:51:379 (1) - stack在下个note上面感觉良好? 保留,因為我原本就打算這麼放的~
00:55:061 (1) - stack吧,不然太难了 不行,這裡就是要放跳躍的
01:11:781 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - spacing由小至大? 好主意,fixed
01:32:675 (1,2) - spacing过大啊啊啊 ...是喔,雖然看不出來但還是fixed了

慢来,慢来,加油!
謝謝MOD ~ :)
spboxer3
Hello from tutuhaha and spboxer3's Mod queue

[general]


  • Settings
  1. 影片必須要無聲的~

[R a i n's Easy]


  • Settings
  1. 未需要使用的綠線:
    01:23:266 (2,3) -
  2. 超過6以上的combo都太長了 改一下
Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)


mapping
  1. 00:07:470 (2,3,4) - 頭尾,(3)之間的間距要相同才會好看~
  2. 00:40:742 (1,2,3,4) - 直線吧 會好看些

[S h i o n's Normal]


  • Settings
  1. 未需要使用的綠線:
    01:10:963 -
Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
  1. 00:13:470 (5,6) -
mapping
  1. 00:11:833 (2,3) - 覆蓋,有一點點凸出來了 把他完全覆蓋吧
  2. 00:19:742 (1,2,3) - 間距不平均
  3. 00:39:106 (1) - Bug NC不見了 請加回去
  4. 01:13:144 (3) - unsnap note

[Hard]


  • Settings
  1. 未需要使用的綠線:
    01:35:539 -
    01:10:963 -
Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
mapping
  1. 00:54:379 (3,1,2) - (3,1)和(3,2)等間距會好看些
  2. 01:03:106 (1,3,4) - 3的結尾還有4使用clap 1的clap拿掉

[D.N.Angel]


  • Settings
  1. 未需要使用的綠線:
    01:35:539 -
    01:10:963 -
Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
  1. 01:06:651 (4,6) -
mapping
  1. none~

[Boss Taiko Oni]


  • Settings
  1. 拿掉影片 換上Taiko BG
mapping
  1. wmf看過我就不多說了 Taiko mod只要一個就可以了~
紅色是unrankable的 一定要改 藍色的是需要討論的問題 黑色就只是建議

恩~這張作的不錯!! 不過我覺得Hard做的比你的特有難度好lol
star
加油瞜~
R a i n
fixed~

I cant't read Taiwanese...

I use exsite :?

Download: Fujiwara Marina - Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.) (DarknessAngel) [R a i n's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

spboxer3 wrote:

Hello from tutuhaha and spboxer3's Mod queue

[general]


  • Settings
  1. 影片必須要無聲的~ 不會用怎麼辦...

[Hard]


  • Settings
  1. 未需要使用的綠線:
    01:35:539 -
    01:10:963 - 有啊這個[/color]
Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
mapping
  1. 00:54:379 (3,1,2) - (3,1)和(3,2)等間距會好看些 居然看這麼仔細...調好了
  2. 01:03:106 (1,3,4) - 3的結尾還有4使用clap 1的clap拿掉 3已經有了,其他fixed

[D.N.Angel]


  • Settings
  1. 未需要使用的綠線:
    01:35:539 -
    01:10:963 -
Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
  1. 01:06:651 (4,6) - 保留
mapping
  1. none~

恩~這張作的不錯!! 不過我覺得Hard做的比你的特有難度好lol
star
加油瞜~
謝謝MOD & STAR ~ :)
也謝謝L_P的星 ~ ><
YTYuyu
Yo im here from 249 and sekai's Moe queue :D

General:
i think itd be better if u can set the lead in to 500 or 1000 because u could giv players some time to adjust.

R a i n's Easy:
00:47:220 - re-snap this line to the red tick.
00:47:288(1) - this curve looks ugly IMO. itd look nice if u can make this look the same as (2)
01:33:084(1) - end this spinner till 01:36:357 to follow the rest of the guitar

S h i o n's Normal:
00:16:197(4,5) - how about making curved sliders like this? it would make a nice, flowy pattern to the next note.
00:47:220 - same as my 1st suggestion on easy.
01:00:106(3) - can u move this down because its touching the score? this may cause a distraction to players causing them to mess up.
01:32:948(1) - end it till 01:36:357 to follow the rest of the guitar.

Hard:
00:47:220 - same as my suggestion on easy
01:32:879 - ^

D.N.Angel:
01:32:879 - same as my suggestion on easy.

this is the best i can do. Star and GL :D
bossandy

wmfchris wrote:

taiko mod as requested

[Taiko]
00:03:106 - this tone of this phrase is higher than the last one, try k d k
00:03:651 - ^ k
00:07:470 - ^
00:08:015 - ^
00:10:197 - try k d k d k or stream?
00:38:288 - observing the gituar pitch I think kkddd sounds better
00:56:015 - this note belongs to both last and next sentences. but if you maintain the stream, apply higher SV to this note as well, in order to avoid misleading players.
01:12:872 - try k---d d k...
01:32:879 - place the spinner 1/2 later than the notes

哇靠 不帶這麼兇殘的萌妹子
I think the 1/4 style is maintained throughout the song, which is ok for me, but the 1/4 since the red line sounds very random and need some fixing there.
瘋了 你真的mod了好多我的Taiko diff喔...
Thx for mod~~


Download: Fujiwara Marina - Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.) (DarknessAngel) [Boss Taiko Oni].osu
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

Byakugan249 wrote:

Yo im here from 249 and sekai's Moe queue :D

General:
i think itd be better if u can set the lead in to 500 or 1000 because u could giv players some time to adjust. fix to 500


Hard:
00:47:220 - same as my suggestion on easy I think it is fine :O
01:32:879 - ^ ^

D.N.Angel:
01:32:879 - same as my suggestion on easy. ^

this is the best i can do. Star and GL :D
Thanks MOD and star ~ :)
Yasora
yo

General
  1. Inconsistency kiai times in taiko diff
Easy
00:33:651 (3) new combo should in here (because same as 00:30:651 (1,2) and 00:32:560 (1,2)). also, remove clap in the next note
00:53:833 (5) add new combo
01:09:106 (6) ^
umm.. since the BPM is too high, not good if put note 1/1 and the pattern is too hard for beginner players. I mean, you put note like this. this isn't looking easy diff orz

Normal
00:09:106 (6) this combo set is too long imo. I suggest to add new combo in here
00:24:106 (1) uhh... maybe this is just me.. this slider is too weird to look orz. can make that into curve slider usually?
00:39:106 (1) I think this slider sound in the beginning is too silent in my ear. add sound like whistle or something, maybe?
01:23:266 (3).. spacing?
yeah, like a hard diff... but whatever :D

That's all...orz
Nice map :3 Good luck~
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

Yasora-chan wrote:

yo

General
  1. Inconsistency kiai times in taiko diff
Easy
00:33:651 (3) new combo should in here (because same as 00:30:651 (1,2) and 00:32:560 (1,2)). also, remove clap in the next note
00:53:833 (5) add new combo
01:09:106 (6) ^
umm.. since the BPM is too high, not good if put note 1/1 and the pattern is too hard for beginner players. I mean, you put note like this. this isn't looking easy diff orz

Normal
00:09:106 (6) this combo set is too long imo. I suggest to add new combo in here
00:24:106 (1) uhh... maybe this is just me.. this slider is too weird to look orz. can make that into curve slider usually?
00:39:106 (1) I think this slider sound in the beginning is too silent in my ear. add sound like whistle or something, maybe?
01:23:266 (3).. spacing?
yeah, like a hard diff... but whatever :D

That's all...orz
Nice map :3 Good luck~
wait for their reply
Thanks MOD & star ~ :)
ririco
from my and byaku queue ~ :3

[R a i n's Easy]

  1. 00:18:106 (2) - 1 grip down maybe?
  2. 00:31:470 (2) - spacing ~
  3. 00:32:560 (1) - delete this note seems useless?
  4. 00:51:106 (4) - add a finish on the end of the slider?
  5. 00:53:833 (5) - NC, new vocal start here~
  6. 00:58:197 (X) - add a note?
  7. 01:00:106 (1) - delete it just like 00:32:560 (1) - ?
  8. 01:16:720 (5) - NC?

[S h i o n's Normal]

  1. 00:41:288 (3) - like this will look better?
  2. 00:53:833 (1) - boring, maybe add a slow timing point?
  3. 01:02:561 (3) - ^
  4. 01:24:629 (2) - maybe like this?

other diffs seems fine to me, GL :3
S h i o n
R a i n

Byakugan249 wrote:

R a i n's Easy:
00:47:220 - re-snap this line to the red tick.
00:47:288(1) - this curve looks ugly IMO. itd look nice if u can make this look the same as (2)
01:33:084(1) - end this spinner till 01:36:357 to follow the rest of the guitar
Nochenged
thanks MOD!

Yasora-chan wrote:

Easy
00:33:651 (3) new combo should in here (because same as 00:30:651 (1,2) and 00:32:560 (1,2)). also, remove clap in the next note
00:53:833 (5) add new combo
01:09:106 (6) ^
umm.. since the BPM is too high, not good if put note 1/1 and the pattern is too hard for beginner players. I mean, you put note like this. this isn't looking easy diff orz
All fixed
thanks MOD!

-Sekai- wrote:

[R a i n's Easy]

  1. 00:18:106 (2) - 1 grip down maybe? fixed
  2. 00:31:470 (2) - spacing ~ fixed
  3. 00:32:560 (1) - delete this note seems useless? ok,it delete
  4. 00:51:106 (4) - add a finish on the end of the slider? add end of the slider
  5. 00:53:833 (5) - NC, new vocal start here~ fixed~
  6. 00:58:197 (X) - add a note? ok,add
  7. 01:00:106 (1) - delete it just like 00:32:560 (1) - ? ok
  8. 01:16:720 (5) - NC? fixed
thanks MOD! :)

Download: Fujiwara Marina - Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.) (DarknessAngel) [R a i n's Easy].osu
R a i n
Leorda
NI HAO

R a i n's Easy
00:14:560 (1) - Add 1 repeating slider and add whistle at end slider?
00:19:470 (x) - Add note here?
00:32:833 (3) - New combo for your combo pattern
00:33:651 (1) - Remove new combo
00:35:288 (1) - ^


S h i o n's Normal
00:06:651 (x) - Add note here?
00:39:106 (1) - New combo for preventing of spinner bug


Boss Taiko Oni
* 2nd Kiai should end at 00:56:015 to make consistent on each diff
* If you have a taiko BG, you have to remove the video via .osu files


Hard
00:55:061 (1,2) - This jumps seems sudden, consider to reduce it?


D.N.Angel
01:32:879 (1) - End at 01:35:538, like others diff


Ohhh!!!! Another Fujiwara clan! The name is "Fujiwara no Marina"!!! aaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

EDIT : wait, why "Fujiwara no Marina"? I'm just joking D:
R a i n

Leorda wrote:

R a i n's Easy
00:14:560 (1) - Add 1 repeating slider and add whistle at end slider? add whistle
00:19:470 (x) - Add note here? no
00:32:833 (3) - New combo for your combo pattern ok~ fixed
00:33:651 (1) - Remove new combo ^
00:35:288 (1) - ^ ^
thanks MOD! :)

Download: Fujiwara Marina - Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.) (DarknessAngel) [R a i n's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO


S h i o n's Normal
00:06:651 (x) - Add note here? no fixed
00:39:106 (1) - New combo for preventing of spinner bug fixed


Boss Taiko Oni
* 2nd Kiai should end at 00:56:015 to make consistent on each diff fixed
* If you have a taiko BG, you have to remove the video via .osu files fixed


Hard
00:55:061 (1,2) - This jumps seems sudden, consider to reduce it? no fixed


D.N.Angel
01:32:879 (1) - End at 01:35:538, like others diff fixed


Ohhh!!!! Another Fujiwara clan! The name is "Fujiwara no Marina"!!! aaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

...fixed
thanks MOD ~ :)
bossandy
  • Hi hi~ request from In-Game PM~
     
    General :
     
  1. 01:32:879 (1) - 每個diff spinner上的 綠線都不一樣 統一吧 ( All diff have different green line on the spinner ,make it the same )
     
    R a i n's Easy :
     
  2. 01:00:106 (X) - add a note?
     
    S h i o n's Normal :
     
  3. 00:10:197 (3) - 拜託 別讓頭尾碰在一起 打起來感覺不好
  4. 00:19:742 (1) - 頭加個whistle聽起來更好 ^_^
  5. 00:44:015 (3) - 結尾clap吧 跟著音樂 這裡停止加clap感覺不好!
  6. 00:48:924 (4) - 不好看
  7. 01:11:781 (5) - 結尾whistle~
  8. 01:17:266 (3) - spacing~
  9. 01:32:266 (2) - ^
     
    Hard :
     
  10. 坑爹的Hard...挑不出東西啦!!!~
     
    D.N.Angel :
     
  11. 00:47:015 (X) - 加個note 複製00:46:742 (4) - 然後Ctrl+>兩次 XD
  12. 00:56:424 (2) - spacing有那麼一點不一樣 但應該沒差多少~
     
    You must to read~!
    red: I think you must to fix. bule: need to discuss. Black: just suggest.
--------------------------------------------------------
哭了 難譜我mod不來lol~~
Have my Star~ Good Luck :3
S h i o n
Download: Fujiwara no Marina - Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.) (DarknessAngel) [S h i o n's Normal].osu

bossandy wrote:

[list][size=125]
S h i o n's Normal :
 
[*]00:10:197 (3) - 拜託 別讓頭尾碰在一起 打起來感覺不好 fixed
[*]00:19:742 (1) - 頭加個whistle聽起來更好 ^_^ x
[*]00:44:015 (3) - 結尾clap吧 跟著音樂 這裡停止加clap感覺不好! fixed
[*]00:48:924 (4) - 不好看 ;_;
[*]01:11:781 (5) - 結尾whistle~ k
[*]01:17:266 (3) - spacing~ fixed
[*]01:32:266 (2) - ^ ^
多谢mod~
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

bossandy wrote:

  • Hi hi~ request from In-Game PM~
     
    General :
     
  1. 01:32:879 (1) - 每個diff spinner上的 綠線都不一樣 統一吧 ( All diff have different green line on the spinner ,make it the same ) 再說...orz 
     
    Hard :
     
  2. 坑爹的Hard...挑不出東西啦!!!~ :O
     
    D.N.Angel :
     
  3. 00:47:015 (X) - 加個note 複製00:46:742 (4) - 然後Ctrl+>兩次 XD 是個好主意,不過這裡我是故意這樣放的,能讓玩家暫停稍作休息
  4. 00:56:424 (2) - spacing有那麼一點不一樣 但應該沒差多少~ 這真的是差那麼一丁點啊...我移掉grid調了..
     
    You must to read~!
    red: I think you must to fix. bule: need to discuss. Black: just suggest.
--------------------------------------------------------
哭了 難譜我mod不來lol~~
Have my Star~ Good Luck :3
Thanks MOD (&...star ? ) ~ :)
ertyukjh010
Ertyukjh010's modding ><"

Easy

感覺還好,只是排版有點隨便= ="

Normal

00:24:106 (1) - 怪怪的圖案
00:44:015 (3) - 這個Slider沒跟音樂吧,改為到00:44:561結束,00:44:833放Note
00:52:742 (6,1) - 沒有平衡

Hard

00:17:833 (1,2) - 這兩個Slider各自按Ctrl+J都看到沒有對稱
01:11:099 (2) - 刪掉

DNA

00:19:197 (2,3) - 太遠了;再後慮一下這個距離
00:22:742 (X) - add note
總覺得會不會Overmap= =貼一個自己1PC的記錄↓ 0miss owo
2PC↓ 感覺OD7甚至6會比較好,不然這麼跳會打出很多100分

快快Rank掉吧~~
滿8星我就不加了,如果您真的需要就密我~~
GoodLuck
Spectator
Spectator's Modding



[ D.N.Angel ]

HP Drain -1
Overall Difficulty -1

About Combo Color



Change White color into more grey.. will be better



00:04:197 - Remove NC
00:07:470 - Remove NC
00:08:561 - Remove NC
01:02:015 (2) - x : 104 y : 84
01:11:508 (3) - x : 88 y : 100
01:13:448 (1,2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/242840
01:32:538 - Add NC
01:32:675 - Remove NC
01:35:538 - Remove This inherited point


Good Luck~ :)
S h i o n
Download: Fujiwara Marina - Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.) (DarknessAngel) [S h i o n's Normal].osu

ertyukjh010 wrote:

Normal

00:24:106 (1) - 怪怪的圖案 故意的= =
00:44:015 (3) - 這個Slider沒跟音樂吧,改為到00:44:561結束,00:44:833放Note 不了~
00:52:742 (6,1) - 沒有平衡 修了一点
多谢mod~
R a i n

bossandy wrote:

 
R a i n's Easy :
 
[*]01:00:106 (X) - add a note? no
thanks MOD!
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

ertyukjh010 wrote:

Ertyukjh010's modding ><"

Easy

感覺還好,只是排版有點隨便= =" 這製圖者看不懂中文



Hard

00:17:833 (1,2) - 這兩個Slider各自按Ctrl+J都看到沒有對稱 fixed
01:11:099 (2) - 刪掉 fixed

DNA

00:19:197 (2,3) - 太遠了;再後慮一下這個距離 fixed
00:22:742 (X) - add note 故意不加的
總覺得會不會Overmap= =貼一個自己1PC的記錄↓ 0miss owo
2PC↓ 感覺OD7甚至6會比較好,不然這麼跳會打出很多100分 HP-1,OD-1

快快Rank掉吧~~
滿8星我就不加了,如果您真的需要就密我~~
GoodLuck
謝謝MOD ~ :)
Sure
Hi there :D I'm here.


[General]
  1. Remove audio from the video for reducing size.
  2. Remove offsets 70963, 73176 and 73448. I'm sure about one offset is enough. Just vocal is off at this time, instrument is fine. Also the last offset is a bit fast to me. Anyway you need double check.

[D.N.Angel]
00:34:606 (2) - I feel better this position for flow. That jump is quite force to me. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/244602


[Hard]
00:49:470 (1,2,3,4) - How about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/244606


[S h i o n's Normal]
00:21:106 (3) - Refine shape like this http://puu.sh/hcHh


[R a i n's Easy]
Fine


Everything is fine except the timing issue. Ask timing expert one more time before rank it.
Good luck!
S h i o n
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

ykcarrot wrote:

Hi there :D I'm here.


[General]
  1. Remove audio from the video for reducing size. fixed
  2. Remove offsets 70963, 73176 and 73448. I'm sure about one offset is enough. Just vocal is off at this time, instrument is fine. Also the last offset is a bit fast to me. Anyway you need double check. fixed

[D.N.Angel]
00:34:606 (2) - I feel better this position for flow. That jump is quite force to me. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/244602
fixed


[Hard]
00:49:470 (1,2,3,4) - How about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/244606
nope


Everything is fine except the timing issue. Ask timing expert one more time before rank it.
Good luck!
Thank MOD & star ~ :)
BeatofIke
Request from my modding queue. Sorry for the long wait.

[General]
-I wish I know how to censor videos with white. >_<
-Your offset sounds a bit late. Try changing it to 2,553. If you do, make sure you change the offset and re-snap all the timing sections in all difficulties.

[R a i n's Easy]
-Good

[S h i o n's Normal]
-00:44:017 (3) - I'm not certain which sound this slider is going to.
-00:52:744 (6) - ^

[Hard]
-Seems a bit too jumpy for a hard difficulty, otherwise it's okay.

[D.N.Angel]
-JUMP SPAM!!!
-Some notes are hard to predict, due to sudden spacing changes thoughout the map. I've seen this in some insane maps I've played and failed XD (i suck :0). Anyway, nothing wrong here.

To be honest, I think this map is ready for a bubble.
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

BeatofIke wrote:

Request from my modding queue. Sorry for the long wait.

[General]
-I wish I know how to censor videos with white. >_< haha~me,too XD
-Your offset sounds a bit late. Try changing it to 2,553. If you do, make sure you change the offset and re-snap all the timing sections in all difficulties. I think offset is OK :O

[R a i n's Easy]
-Good

[S h i o n's Normal]
-00:44:017 (3) - I'm not certain which sound this slider is going to.
-00:52:744 (6) - ^

[Hard]
-Seems a bit too jumpy for a hard difficulty, otherwise it's okay.

[D.N.Angel]
-JUMP SPAM!!!
-Some notes are hard to predict, due to sudden spacing changes thoughout the map. I've seen this in some insane maps I've played and failed XD (i suck :0). Anyway, nothing wrong here.

To be honest, I think this map is ready for a bubble.
thanks MOD ~ :)
NatsumeRin
[General]
offset:+5

[R a i n's Easy]
00:53:017 (3) - delete?
01:00:108 - add a note (whistle?)

[S h i o n's Normal]
00:06:653 - 为啥突然顿了,加个音呗
00:31:199 (2,3) - 吐个槽,这两个slider按的地方都意义不明,在一个小节第二拍按到下一个小节去了,只为了凑拍子未免也差点意思
01:11:835 (5) - 形状不太好,不如4直接ctrl+hj?
后面突然那段逼逼逼是啥啊,而且逼也不逼完整了后半又回soft了

[Hard]
进kiai怎么突然不知道clap该放哪了,太不连贯……
00:57:244 (3) - 挪开点边缘别叠上
01:11:017 (1) - 这vocal自己没唱准的地方你还是别强求了我觉得,用个slider好些
01:19:472 (3) - 多余clap
01:28:199 (2) - ^
01:29:290 (3) - 这个还凑合不过也不建议

[D.N.Angel]
最前面那段建议remap,如果我只看了那点可能就拉黑了
还是进了kiai突然不知道clap放哪的问题
01:13:949 (3,4) - ……虽然是vocal的问题但节奏不能这么来

[Boss Taiko Oni]
kiai尾没snap到。


这歌vocal比较不靠谱,图的话中规中矩吧,综合一下就是不想泡……抱歉。
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
offset:+5 fixed


[Hard]
进kiai怎么突然不知道clap该放哪了,太不连贯…… 哦好吧,改成一貫模式
00:57:244 (3) - 挪开点边缘别叠上 fixed
01:11:017 (1) - 这vocal自己没唱准的地方你还是别强求了我觉得,用个slider好些 fixed
01:19:472 (3) - 多余clap 故意加的,我個人滿喜歡
01:28:199 (2) - ^ ^
01:29:290 (3) - 这个还凑合不过也不建议 欸,這怎麼了嗎

[D.N.Angel]
最前面那段建议remap,如果我只看了那点可能就拉黑了 ...為什麼orz
还是进了kiai突然不知道clap放哪的问题 fixed
01:13:949 (3,4) - ……虽然是vocal的问题但节奏不能这么来 在藍線上...這是意外lol,fixed

[Boss Taiko Oni]
kiai尾没snap到。 fixed


这歌vocal比较不靠谱,图的话中规中矩吧,综合一下就是不想泡……抱歉。 哦...

Thanks MOD ~ :)


EDIT : I have changed offset in R a i n's Easy,S h i o n 's Normal & Bass Taiko Oni
R a i n

NatsumeRin wrote:

[R a i n's Easy]
00:53:017 (3) - delete?
01:00:108 - add a note (whistle?)
All fixed
thanks!

Download: Fujiwara Marina - Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.) (DarknessAngel) [R a i n's Easy].osu
JauiPlaY
Hi
一些建議

[General]
Fine.

[R a i n's Easy]
00:23:295 (1,2) - (1)的new combo應該給(2)
01:01:749 (1) - 去掉nc
01:07:204 (4) - 應該放到前面的長白線吧,然後01:07:749再加個note
01:33:113 (1) - 應該放到前面紅線
我覺得combo下的有點亂

[S h i o n's Normal]
00:44:022 (3) - 略違和
01:17:295 (3) - 可以嘗試把尾的clap放到頭上

[Hard]
00:26:840 (2,3) - 覺得有點難而且有點難看...如果是我會把它們放在00:26:022 (3,4)的頭上
00:44:022 (1,2) - 難看...(2)應該再拉開一點比如拉到x120y124
00:44:977 (4,1) - ^一個建議
00:46:749 (4,1) - 中間總覺得少了甚麼
01:11:022 (1) - 似乎是藍線起跳

[D.N.Angel]
00:46:749 (4,1) - 同Hard
01:35:568 (T) - 無用綠線一根

恩我覺得可以泡了
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

JauiPlaY wrote:

Hi
一些建議

[General]
Fine.

[Hard]
00:26:840 (2,3) - 覺得有點難而且有點難看...如果是我會把它們放在00:26:022 (3,4)的頭上 唔,我刻意調出這距離以容易區別1/2與1/1的
00:44:022 (1,2) - 難看...(2)應該再拉開一點比如拉到x120y124 哦...微調了下
00:44:977 (4,1) - ^一個建議 ^
00:46:749 (4,1) - 中間總覺得少了甚麼 我故意留的空白,好讓玩家暫停休息下
01:11:022 (1) - 似乎是藍線起跳 我個人還在考慮當中...要是這改了的話全部難度都要改,其實我覺得用slider可以把這感覺稍微去除一些

[D.N.Angel]
00:46:749 (4,1) - 同Hard 同Hard
01:35:568 (T) - 無用綠線一根 fixed

恩我覺得可以泡了

謝謝MOD ~ :)



Chinese → English

[R a i n's Easy]
00:23:295 (1,2) - remove this nc and add it to the next note
01:01:749 (1) - remove nc
01:06:658 (3,4,5) - try to make this rhythm
I think your new combo setting is a little bad
R a i n

JauiPlaY wrote:

[R a i n's Easy]
00:23:295 (1,2) - (1)的new combo應該給(2)
01:01:749 (1) - 去掉nc
01:07:204 (4) - 應該放到前面的長白線吧,然後01:07:749再加個note
01:33:113 (1) - 應該放到前面紅線
我覺得combo下的有點亂

DarknessAngel wrote:

[R a i n's Easy]
00:23:295 (1,2) - remove this nc and add it to the next note ok
01:01:749 (1) - remove nc 01:01:749 (2) - add NC
01:06:658 (3,4,5) - try to make this rhythm sorry,nochenged
I think your new combo setting is a little bad
thanks MOD and thank you translate DarknessAngel ;)

Download: Fujiwara Marina - Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.) (DarknessAngel) [R a i n's Easy].osu
hillaryzx
Hi, a bit late~ sorry

General

Nothing~


R a i n's Easy

00:32:568 - add a circle here?
00:35:295(3) - add 1 more repeat here...
01:02:022 - add note here, I feel a bit blank here...

S h i o n's Normal

00:24:113(3) - the slider look a bit ugly, make it like this?



00:27:658(5) - 1 grid down
00:45:658(4) - remove finish here

Hard

Particularly Okay...

D.N.Angel

... O.o ... are you following the drum? if yes, then its okay... if no, I can say, sometimes, the beat doesn't follow the song a bit ( In my opinion )


And now, I'll take my leave...
Kuma-san
Hi~
[Hard]
Hmmm...Are you sure its rankable?
[Normal]
00:11:840 (2) - i don't like this overlap >_>
00:52:204 (5) - what this form?...
...Omg...maybe i'm too much newbie but i'm not see more problems...
P.S.don't give me kd for this poor mod >_>
Good luck with rank
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

Kuma-san wrote:

Hi~
[Hard]
Hmmm...Are you sure its rankable? Why not?
R a i n

hillaryzx wrote:

R a i n's Easy

00:32:568 - add a circle here?
00:35:295(3) - add 1 more repeat here...
01:02:022 - add note here, I feel a bit blank here...
No chenged
thanks MOD !
Kuma-san

DarknessAngel wrote:

Kuma-san wrote:

Hi~
[Hard]
Hmmm...Are you sure its rankable? Why not?
Oh lol.i forgot to paste it. i mean are you sure its rankable 00:30:658 (3) - ?
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

Kuma-san wrote:

Oh lol.i forgot to paste it. i mean are you sure its rankable 00:30:658 (3) - ?
I haven't known it is unrankable. No one(modder) told me -.-
so,fixed
Lissette
Hi~ sorry for the delay

Add rain and shion to tags

D.N.Angel
00:22:204 (1,2,3) - 3 looks like is at 1/2 beat from other notes due to the jump from 1 to 2, and is awkward to play really, place it farther so the spacing look even
00:23:295 (1,2,3,4) - the jump from 1 to 2 is just so random, and doesn't fit to me at all
00:40:749 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The vocals highlight in this part, follow them more
00:45:249 (2) - remove note, feels awkward to to vocals being predominant in this part, also make the spacing between the 2 notes left like this 00:44:568 (1,2) -
00:52:340 (4) - remove note too, this is kinda overmapped ><
01:13:477 - 01:14:568 (1) - this part is <3, except for this combo 01:14:568 (1,2,3,4,5) that you should remove 3.
01:19:340 (3) - delete note
01:23:704 (3) - same
01:24:795 (3) - same
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

Lissette wrote:

Hi~ sorry for the delay yeah,I wait you for a long time <3

Add rain and shion to tags fixed

D.N.Angel
00:22:204 (1,2,3) - 3 looks like is at 1/2 beat from other notes due to the jump from 1 to 2, and is awkward to play really, place it farther so the spacing look even no fix because I really like this part T.T
00:23:295 (1,2,3,4) - the jump from 1 to 2 is just so random, and doesn't fit to me at all fixed
00:40:749 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The vocals highlight in this part, follow them more fixed
00:45:249 (2) - remove note, feels awkward to to vocals being predominant in this part, also make the spacing between the 2 notes left like this 00:44:568 (1,2) - fixed
00:52:340 (4) - remove note too, this is kinda overmapped >< fixed
01:13:477 - 01:14:568 (1) - this part is <3, except for this combo 01:14:568 (1,2,3,4,5) that you should remove 3. fixed
01:19:340 (3) - delete note fixed
01:23:704 (3) - same fixed
01:24:795 (3) - same fixed
Thanks Lissette's great MOD ~ :)
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