1. 00:22:171 (1) - 2 grids down
2. 01:17:296 (2,4) - 2 grids up

1. 01:06:233 (6,7) - manual stack here.. ? looks bad here
2. 01:36:046 - add note..? it's in the music
3. 01:36:233 (4) - delete this..?
4. 01:47:296 (4) - move up a little
5. 01:54:608 (6,7) - right & down 1 grid cuz it's stacking in play mode
6. 02:41:483 (4,5) - ^
7. 03:59:858 (1,2) - move right 1 grid
8. 04:03:889 - add note here ? it can give more score

1. 00:27:983 (11) - whistle here ?
2. 01:06:046 (2) - this is not stacked at the right place ?
3. 01:40:171 (1) - remove the whistle at the beginning ?

L_P wrote:

General: what a waste of the star, vass_bass, use it to encourage new mappers imo

Regou wrote:

[Hard]
00:16:171 (1) Maybe make it like this?

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00:27:233 (7,8) Right 1 grid
00:28:546 (2,3) Right 1 grid
00:56:671 (1,2,3,4,5) Make the scale bigger for a bit.
01:26:483 (1,2,3,4,5,6) Spacing...
03:17:483 (4) Down 1 grid
03:34:171 ~ the end: The spacing become a bit smaller than the previous part. Make it larger.

May you mind change the diff name into [Lunatic]? This diff is not too hard...
The maximum score is not too far to the limit for ranked map... (Below 19,000,000)
Suggesion:
Change 03:52:358 (2,3,4) and 03:52:733 (5,6,7) into sliders
and also 03:56:858 (2,3,4).
Therefore you will get a score below 19,000,000 and make this map for ranked but not approval.

18 million is the recommended maximum.

;-; Right when I started to map this I see this mapset today.. sigh
Good job on this, good luck to you guys and happy (belated) birthday Vass!

1. I know that taiko diff is a guest diff but what about to start the 2nd kiai time on 03:32:671 to keep consistency with standard diffs?

1. 00:07:171 remove green line just use the red one setting S:C1 on it.
2. 00:14:296 (3) - I'd reduce this slider by 1/2 so that you can also add whistle on the reverse arrow to keep hitsound consistency. Obviously, reducing this slider by 1/2 you also need to add a circle on the next empty white line with new combo (according to the new rhythm), on 00:15:421. To be clearer: http://puu.sh/1sMJ4
3. 00:31:921 (5) - I can hear a drum sound here. What about to add clap on it?
4. 00:44:671 (3,4) - To be honest, I don't like how these 2 sliders flow and how they are played. I mean, what about to make something like this? I think it's more enjoyable and flowable to play:
   
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   420,172,44671,2,0,B|424:108|364:84,1,100,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   288,44,45421,2,0,B|192:100,1,100,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

5. 01:03:796 (3) - Finish + clap, sounds better (on the slider end, obv)
6. 01:17:296 (2,4) - Since this is a Normal diff I would move these 2 circles some grid up so that they are perfectly centered with both sliders (I mean
7. 01:16:171 (1,3)). According to this, why don't you move them to x:168 y:168?
8. 01:25:171 (3) - (maybe it could be nazi) but improve the stack with 01:22:921 (1) because it looks bad during gameplay, really.
9. 01:28:171 (1) - You should remove finish from this slider's head to keep consistency with 01:19:171 (1). If you want to keep it you also will have to add a finish on 01:19:171 (1)
10. 01:31:171 (6) - I'd use New combo here, according to the new vocal sound/downbeat
11. 01:53:296 (2) - I think this slider doesn't fit the vocal as it should (maybe also becaus to miss a note on the downbeat in a normal diff looks really weird, IMO). What about to edit the rhythm here like this? I think it'd fit really much better: http://puu.sh/1sN2A
12. 02:02:671 (1) - Too soon after the spinner for a normal diff/easiest diff of the mapset. You must fix this, please.
13. 02:04:171 (3) - Maybe new combo? Like 02:10:171 (1)
14. 02:11:671 (3) - I'd remove this whistle from slider body, I don't like how it sounds, honestly D;
15. 02:40:171 (1) - Finish on the slider head
16. 02:43:171 (4) - Add new combo according to new rhythm
17. 02:45:421 (1) - I don't like this slider xD Yea, I'm just suggesting you my opinions. What about to curve it in this way so that it's also blanketted with
18. 02:44:296 (7)'s head? I mean: http://puu.sh/1sNdS
19. 02:51:421 (3) - Maybe remove finish? There aren't cymbals in the song, or, at least, I can't hear them.
20. 02:52:171 (1) - Add finish here instead, to match that clash in the cymbals
21. 03:11:671 (1) - You should remove new combo from this slider to keep consistency with previous parts
22. 03:44:671 (1) - Remove new combo
23. 03:46:171 (3) - Add new combo removing it from 03:47:671 (1) instead. Still to keep consistency, please.
24. 04:03:046 (6) - Move this slider to x:180 y:248 because of bad blanket with 04:02:671 (5)
25. 04:03:796 (x) - Add a circle because the next spinner without a first "finish" note looks too empty to me, and pretty weird, really.
26. 04:04:171 (1) - Since this spinner should be looonger, reduce it till 04:08:671, with 5% volume

1. 00:12:046 (2) - Are you missing a whistle on the slider's end here? I guess yes.
2. 00:28:921 (3) - What an ugly slider/blanket with previous slider ç_ç Just fix this moving the central sliderpoint to x:392 y:64
3. 00:39:796 (4) - Finish on this slider head because of clash in the cymbals
4. 00:45:046 (3) - ^
5. 00:51:796 (2) - ^
6. 00:58:171 (1) - ^
7. 01:03:421 (7) - Finish + clap? Or just clap if you don't want to use finish in this calmer part
8. 01:08:671 (5) - Finish
9. 01:20:671 (6) - I'd use new combo to start this slider rhythm/new spacing
10. 01:34:827 (4,5) and 01:36:140 (3,4) - I'd change these doublets with two 1/4 sliders ç.ç
11. 03:17:483 (4) - Move this circle to x:80 y:252 to keep spacing consistency between 03:17:296 (3,4) and 03:17:483 (4,5)
12. 03:32:671 (1,2,3,4) - Please no, this spacing is confusing and really awkward to play ._. Use a different and a more enjoyable pattern to play here.
13. 03:58:546 (3) till the end - I don't understand why you are not using custom clap hitsounds here to fill the drum sounds. I mean that you should add some custom claps on sound likes 03:58:546 (3), 03:59:296 (5)'s heads and so on.
14. 04:03:983 (x) - Add circle, same reason of normal diff

1. What about to use AR 9? This is an extra diff, and it looks better..
2. 00:30:608 (10,11,12) - It has always been awkward playing this kind of spacing/pattern. I suggest you something like this instead: http://puu.sh/1sNMS (just move the (11) like the screenshoot shows)
3. 00:56:671 (6) - New combo? According to spacing changes and also because of next square çwç
4. 01:00:421 (4) - Move to x:348 y:208 to make a symmetrical triangle (with 1.30x spacing)
5. 02:33:796 (5,6) - Just stack them. This sudden "weird" stack could confuse a lot.
6. 03:28:171 (5) - New combo on this slider removing it from the next one
7. 04:03:983 (x) - Add a circle, same reason of normal diff
8. Before to mod this map I was imagining something harder than this xD Well, pretty nice map for me, good job ;3

1. 00:22:171 (7) - kat? It sounds better in my opinion
2. Just this, rest is fine for me.

Louis Cyphre wrote:

Extra - Finished. This difficulties goes for approval, due to amount of score. Mapped by IceBeam, Reiji-RJ, Louis Cyphre
Hard - by Vass Bass
Normal - mapped by [Ryuu]
Taiko - mapped by OnosakiHito

Ranking Criteria wrote:

1. You must fully map at least one difficulty of a mapset if you are the person who is uploading it. For collaborated beatmap sets, the uploader must be a part of every difficulty. Also, no guest mapper should have more content in the mapset than the creator. It makes no sense to upload a map if you barely contributed to it.

So, this map can't be ranked in this state, unless Louis map another diff by himself. Sorry, but I had to comunicate this
Oh.. and btw, Extra can be Ranked now for this rule: t/84012
And that's about it.. GL with 'your' map Louis