❤since i don't really like this song, i will give u 1 suggestion..sry:(

❤the map is fun, i like your streaming though i can't really do it, but one thing is that if u can, make the OD-1 to insane diff, since its hard to get a high acc when having a long streaming though with a low bpm.


❤no kds for this post~!

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

❤since i don't really like this song, i will give u 1 suggestion..sry:(

❤the map is fun, i like your streaming though i can't really do it, but one thing is that if u can, make the OD-1 to insane diff, since its hard to get a high acc when having a long streaming though with a low bpm. // Fixed


❤no kds for this post~!

Sorry, I want to give you a kudosu, since it helpful~

Hi~ >w</
Mod request accepted from my queue
All Suggestions

General
Remove idumin from tags　(Idumin will be いづみん、not いずみん)

Platinum
00:28:901 (3) - Touches the score, but not really an issue
00:30:726 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Some of the notes aren't in a perfect line. Check the other streams as well. (nazi)
01:05:996 (1) - Remove NC
01:50:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Not sure if you really need a steam here
02:02:145 (4) - The beginning of this slider is completely hidden under (3), was this ranakable?

Gold
00:45:320 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make the pentagon symmetrical across the center? (Place the 1st note and use Ctrl+Shift+R, 72 degrees)
01:20:996 (5) - Touches score, just pointing out
01:47:550 (5) - The repeat sign is kind of hard to read. Can you adjust the shape?
02:12:888 (4) - Touches HP bar

Silver
Looks good

Bronze
01:16:739 (3) - Move right to a bit (nazi)

This beatmap set looks pretty~
I like the choice of colors and SB.

Takos wrote:

Hi~ >w</
Mod request accepted from my queue
All Suggestions

General
Remove idumin from tags　(Idumin will be いづみん、not いずみん) // Fixed

Platinum
00:28:901 (3) - Touches the score, but not really an issue // NO, I don't think it's necessary
00:30:726 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Some of the notes aren't in a perfect line. Check the other streams as well. (nazi) // Fixed
01:05:996 (1) - Remove NC // Removed
01:50:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Not sure if you really need a steam here // This stream was follow the synth
02:02:145 (4) - The beginning of this slider is completely hidden under (3), was this ranakable? // I don't know, maybe i'll talk to MAT or BAT

Gold
00:45:320 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make the pentagon symmetrical across the center? (Place the 1st note and use Ctrl+Shift+R, 72 degrees) // No, it's hard to fix it
01:20:996 (5) - Touches score, just pointing out // NO, I don't think it's necessary
01:47:550 (5) - The repeat sign is kind of hard to read. Can you adjust the shape? // I think it's easy to predict
02:12:888 (4) - Touches HP bar // If the tail slider touch the HP Bar, then it's fine

Silver
Looks good

Bronze
01:16:739 (3) - Move right to a bit (nazi) // ok

This beatmap set looks pretty~
I like the choice of colors and SB.

thank you!!!!!

Here's my mod

BRONZE

00:43:699 (1) Add finish sound?
02:03:564 (5,6,7) Maybe make them to a slider with a reverse arrow at 02:03:969

SILVER

00:27:483 (3) I think a finish sound is nice there
00:40:456 ^
01:18:767 Maybe not stack them, do as you did at 01:11:672

GOLD

01:26:064 (2) Move the note on the place where 4 from the previous combo was, to increase difficulty
02:03:158 (1,2,3,4) Maybe make the jumps a tiny bit more far

PLATINUM

02:03:969 (3) Maybe trade places with (4), just to increase difficulty here a bit
Nothing bad here, i really love this difficulty

Good luck

Edit: I made an entry in your modding queue before, so please change it to mod4mod?

Tenshichan17 wrote:

Here's my mod

BRONZE

00:43:699 (1) Add finish sound?
02:03:564 (5,6,7) Maybe make them to a slider with a reverse arrow at 02:03:969

SILVER

00:27:483 (3) I think a finish sound is nice there
00:40:456 ^
01:18:767 Maybe not stack them, do as you did at 01:11:672

GOLD

01:26:064 (2) Move the note on the place where 4 from the previous combo was, to increase difficulty
02:03:158 (1,2,3,4) Maybe make the jumps a tiny bit more far

PLATINUM

02:03:969 (3) Maybe trade places with (4), just to increase difficulty here a bit
Nothing bad here, i really love this difficulty

Good luck

Edit: I made an entry in your modding queue before, so please change it to mod4mod?

no change, sorry. thx for modding...... also, no mod4mod for you since this modpost is doesn't makes my map changes

req from my queue

Halo leorda, long time no see

I miss your "NI HAO!"

Bronze

The custom Clap sounds not very well. I don't really think you set them logically. I guess that long sliders you've used just divide up the consistency of the Clap .
00:20:996 (1) - I personally suggest moving this clap to note 2
01:06:402 (4) - Maybe NC here
01:25:861 (1,2,3) - good designs
01:30:523 (2) - It's not so cool to make the distance between slider beginning and end different
02:08:023 (1) - Actually this note should be the beginning one of the purple

Silver

00:33:970 (1,2,3,4) - This diamond seems a bit weird, move (3) some grids left

Gold

x_x

Platinum

01:25:049 (9) - oops, this note
01:44:711 (9) - Tell me you copied&pasted it
I've thought I could type in something useful here :p

LKs wrote:

Halo leorda, long time no see

I miss your "NI HAO!"

Leorda I miss your "f****yeah"!

LKs wrote:

req from my queue

Halo leorda, long time no see

I miss your "NI HAO!"

Bronze

The custom Clap sounds not very well. I don't really think you set them logically. I guess that long sliders you've used just divide up the consistency of the Clap .
00:20:996 (1) - I personally suggest moving this clap to note 2 // OK
01:06:402 (4) - Maybe NC here // NO
01:25:861 (1,2,3) - good designs // what
01:30:523 (2) - It's not so cool to make the distance between slider beginning and end different // huh?
02:08:023 (1) - Actually this note should be the beginning one of the purple // uhhh, where?

Silver

00:33:970 (1,2,3,4) - This diamond seems a bit weird, move (3) some grids left // OK

Gold

x_x

Platinum

01:25:049 (9) - oops, this note // huh?
01:44:711 (9) - Tell me you copied&pasted it // yes, I did copy paste it
I've thought I could type in something useful here :p

thank you~

Pokie wrote:

Leorda I miss your "f****yeah"!

Pokie at IRC wrote : Fuck yeah

hi~

Bronze
00:24:239 (1) - really confusing to biginner imo
remove a repeat then add note here ;_;

Silver
please use spacing 1.0x during 00:20:997 (1) and 00:30:726 (1) -, 02:24:645 (4) - and 02:30:321 (4) -


Gold
looks fine. nothing to point out.

Platinum
00:37:212 (1) - move 3rd way-point to 1grid right
00:38:023 (3) - Copy paste from (1)
02:20:996 (1) - 3rd way-point to 1grid left
02:21:807 (3) - same as 00:38:023 (3) -

nice map>w<

[General]
-Did a folder check, tags, timing, etc, everything seems fine.

[Bronze]
00:24:239 (1) - Was not expecting that second repeat because of the stack. Please shorten this and add a circle. You will have to rearrange so the slider isnt stacked too.
00:27:483 (1) - (Nazi) this blanket could be a lot better, but would require you to adjust the slider before. No big deal but it is an easy so I think you should nazi the blankets : P
01:15:118 (1,2) - I know doing 1/1 is boring, but this is really hard for new players to hit since you have a lot of 1/1 in the notes just before. I suggest either adjusting the previous notes or use white ticks on this.
01:31:131 (3) - The switch to 1/1 here feels weird too... but there isnt much you can do about this so :v
01:46:942 (2) - Stack this manually

[Silver]
02:00:726 (5) - Blanket (2,3,4) ?
02:07:213 (4) - Remove?

[Gold]
01:13:496 (4,1) - I like this, it really fits :3
01:36:199 (2) - (nazi) Can you move this so the previous slider is going right through the middle? = =

[Platinum]
00:30:726 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Can you do something else here? This stream is just too long and doesn't really fit. ._.
00:43:699 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
01:26:266 (4) - Just saying, I hate stacks like this orz. Can you unstack it please? D:
01:27:077 (4) - ^
01:27:888 (4) - ^
02:14:510 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Another unfitting stream :c
02:27:483 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^

Cool map :3

[Bronze]
00:35:996 (3) - Shorten by a quarter beat and add a note at 00:37:212?


[Silver]
02:10:051 (3,4,5) - I'm not really sure if this is readable by less experienced players.

[Gold]
02:24:442 (2) - Shorten to the red tick and add a note at 02:25:050?

[Platinum]
00:38:023 (3) - instead of having this repeat here, I would suggest just to remove the repeat and stretch it so it looks like this, plays better and sounds better. 01:01:537 (5) - Whistle?
01:03:158 (1) - ^
01:04:780 (1) - ^
01:06:401 (5) - ^
01:08:023 (8) - ^
01:09:442 (6,7,1) - Might play better if the triplet was heading downwards, because the current pattern you have going is really linear.
01:50:996 (9) - NC?
02:21:807 (3) - read 00:38:023 (3)

I went through platinum twice and found nothing else, only went through the rest of the diffs once :/

Mei Ling \o/

request for M4M.
No capital word in title?.

[Platinum]
00:34:374 (1) - why nc here?
01:40:456 (3,4,5) - make them straight
02:24:442 (4) - x256 y 224

[gold]
nothing

[Silver]
00:35:186 (4) - out
02:14:509 (1,2,3,4) - don't overlap these

[Bronze]
02:09:645 (4) - don't overlap 2
02:14:510 (4) - add some circle instead of some repeat

EDIT: why the artist is 38BEETS but Artist.png shows it's 38beets?

Hi!


General

There's inconsistency in Kiai Times.
The problem it's in the [Silver] difficulty: 1st Kiai should start at 00:20:996, not at 00:20:997, and It should end at 00:46:949 like in the other difficulties, not at 00:46:942. 2nd Kiai has to end at 02:30:733, not at 02:30:726.
There's inconsistency in tags too. Add to [Platinum] difficulty tags "shanghai alice of meiji" instead of "shanghai alice meiji".

[Bronze]

If this is a Easy difficulty you shouldn't stack notes.

Here are some unsnapped timing points at:

• 
  
  

1. 00:46:949
2. 01:13:605
3. 01:14:416
4. 01:14:618
5. 01:26:578
6. 01:27:389
7. 01:27:591
8. 02:30:733

00:25:861 (2) - Maybe this is too hard for this difficulty (stacking notes).

01:15:118 (1) - To avoid this slider to start at a red tick, try this: http://puu.sh/cgKy. It's a more simple rhythm.

01:28:293 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/cgKZ

01:34:374 (1) - Maybe add NC and remove NC of 01:35:591 (1)? (To follow the vocals)

01:42:077 (3) - NC? (Same reason as above).

01:46:942 (2) - Same as I told you about 00:25:861 (2).

01:54:645 (4) - NC here and remove NC of the next slider (To follow the vocals).

02:01:131 (4) - NC? (Same reason as above).


[Silver]

Here are some unsnapped timing points too at:

• 
  
  

1. 01:13:605
2. 01:14:416
3. 01:15:022
4. 01:26:578
5. 01:27:389
6. 01:27:589

00:30:321 (6) - NC here and remove NC of the next slider? (To follow the vocals too).

[Gold]

Unsnapped timing points at:

• 
  
  

1. 00:46:949
2. 01:13:605
3. 01:14:416
4. 01:26:578
5. 01:27:389
6. 02:30:733

00:37:212 (6) - Remove NC here, add NC to 00:40:050 (10) and remove NC of 00:40:658 (1). It fits more to the vocals imo.

01:20:996 (5) - NC here and remove NC of 01:22:618 (1).

01:24:442 (1) - Remove NC.


[Platinum]

Unsnapped timing points at:

• 
  
  

1. 00:46:949
2. 01:13:605
3. 01:14:416
4. 01:26:578
5. 01:27:389
6. 02:30:733

00:27:077 (1) - Remove NC, add NC to 00:27:483 (6) and remove NC of 00:27:685 (1).

00:34:374 (1) - Unnecesary NC.

01:24:442 (4) - NC here, at 01:24:847 (7), and 01:25:253 (10) to avoid that long combo?

01:38:631 (1) - Remove NC here, add NC at 01:38:834 (2), and remove NC of 01:39:037 (1).

01:44:104 (4) - Same as I told you above about 01:24:442 (4).

01:47:956 (2) - NC here instead of being at 01:47:753 (1)?

01:57:077 (4) - Again, the same as I told you to avoid that long combo.

02:11:469 (1) - Remove NC to follow better the vocals.

02:18:158 (1) - Unnecesary NC imo.

____________

Nice mapset and SB. Good luck!

Bronze
00:46:942 (X) - unsnap KIAI time .-.
01:16:334 (2) - don't use Overlapping because this is hard to read in easy diff ._.
01:54:645 (4) - X304 Y25?
02:30:726 (X) - unsnap KIAI time .-.

Silver
00:43:294 (X) - add circle?

Gold
00:46:942 (X) - unsnap KIAI time .-.
02:30:726 (X) - unsnap KIAI time .-.

Platinum
00:46:942 (X) - unsnap KIAI time .-.
02:30:726 (X) - unsnap KIAI time .-.

maybe you can use slidertick ^ ^

mod for mod4mod

Bronze
why don't you use a clap sound as slider tick?
01:16:334 (2) - delete? i think it's confusing with 01:16:739 (3) -
01:43:699 (4) - NC
02:01:131 (4) - strange to me, i think you'd better add a circle here. if you do that, NC on slider
02:07:618 (1,2) - remove NC, NC
02:10:861 (1,2) - ^
02:14:510 (4) - reduce 1 arrow and add 2 circle?

Silver
why don't you use a clap sound as slider tick?
00:27:078 (1) - remove NC and 00:27:888 (4) - NC
01:54:645 (1,2) - ^

Gold
00:20:996 (1,2,3,4) - delete and add 2 sliders?
01:20:996 (5) - it touch my socre/acc board
02:29:104 (3) - delete and add 2 sliders?

Platinum
00:28:901 (3) - it touch my score board
00:30:422 (8) - delete. too busy and noisy to me
00:30:726 (1) - too simple stream.. you can fix them better lively
00:43:699 (1) - ^
01:50:185 (1) - ^
02:14:206 (8) - same as 00:30:422 (8)
02:14:510 (1) - o_O
02:27:179 (8,1) - you know what i'll say

that's all~

Hi~></
mod4mod!!

All of them just a suggestion


Nice map~!!

Hello~

M4M~

[Bronze]

00:30:726 (3) - Add clap on the arrow of the slider?

00:43:699 (1) - ^

02:27:483 (1) - ^

[Silver]

Fine~

[Gold]

00:29:104 (5) - Add a clap at the end of the slider?

00:30:726 (1) - ^

[Platinum]

HR+1?

OK~

Nice map~

Good Luck~

wow, thanks for mod guys~

suddenly mat
get mods

gosh I wonder if I'll find anything now...

[storyboard]
a tip to reduce sb load is to only use the background when it's going to be displayed in the game. add:
Sprite,Background,Centre,"Kurenai Misuzu.jpg",320,240
_S,0,0,,0.8
_F,0,0,,1
_F,0,6402,,0
_F,0,46942,,1
_F,0,124780,,0
_F,0,150726,152692,1
into the SB. The important thing is to stick it in the background, which results in removing the background from always being drawn.

[bronze]
nada

[silver]
00:36:402 (5,1) - I don't like how 5 stacks with 1. experiment with dropping the stack ratio.
01:12:483 (4) - if you listen to the bass drum here, it drops this beat. Not sure if that's worth mapping because of normal
02:08:834 (2,3,4) - this stack looks terrible

[gold]
00:33:766 (1) - the new combos to me seem a bit inconsistent in this map, and I noticed a few in silver but decided it was okay. Could you double check all your new combos so they are where you want them to be? I realize this is an old map, and your opinions may have changed on NCs. I usually put them on the long white tick or on the pickup for the lyrics, but you've sort of done a mishmash of both.
01:22:618 (1,2) - can you rotate this so the repeat on (2) isn't overlapping the slider of (1)?
01:32:347 (4,5) - and copy/paste ^ here
01:46:942 (4,5) - maybe rearrange this one if you feel like it.
01:53:429 (2,1,2) - nazi, seems like these should be in a straight line but they're not. Fix it if it's easy to fix otherwise it's fine.
01:58:293 (1) - just a small tip for these sorts of corners. When you use a red dot, it's best to have the next node in a straight line with it so the bezier has a perfect tangent line to work off of. There were a number of these in the map if you want to fix them http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/213727
02:12:888 (4) - I try to avoid putting the center of any circle/slider above y=8 since this will intersect with the HP bar. It would be less of a problem if the HP bar was underneath sliders like it is in EBA or ouendan, but osu does it differently for some reason.

[platinum]
00:30:726 (1) - these are exceptionally boring. maybe decompress them slightly, and add some curve to it?
00:32:347 (1) - the first 16 notes work well, but these last 16 get to be really repetitive. maybe delete a few notes to add rhythm or map the bass drum with sliders/repeating sliders.
00:33:868 - the bass drum has a hit here if you decide to do ^, so watch out for it.
00:43:699 (1) - ^^^
00:59:915 (1) - this section is cool; you have a number of different rhythm patterns to map essentially the same thing, but they're all ordered. 2 measures of this rhythm, 2 measures of that rhythm, etc... What if you redid it so you mixed them all together? 2 beats of rhythm 1, 4 beats rhythm 2, 2 beats rhythm 1, 2 beats rhythm 3, etc...
01:32:347 (4,5) - it would be better if it were straight. the snake slider overlaps the end of (5). Or you could snake the first half of it, and make the 2nd half straight. or add a squiggle in the middle.
01:44:711 (9) - nazi/spacing whatever
01:50:996 (1) - bass drum again if you want
02:01:537 (3,4) - (3) completely covers up (4)'s start. It's fine I suppose, but there's some people who dislike these sorts of overlaps. I would rather have (4) on top of (3) but you obviously can't do that in this orientation. There's a discussion on it somewhere in the new rules.

Sorry this mod was a bit conceptual rather than "fix this", so hopefully everything I said makes sense. If it doesn't, PM me and I'll try to explain it either in game or on the forums.

Nothing bad, just a lot of suggestions.

ziin wrote:

suddenly mat
get mods

gosh I wonder if I'll find anything now...

[storyboard]
a tip to reduce sb load is to only use the background when it's going to be displayed in the game. add:
Sprite,Background,Centre,"Kurenai Misuzu.jpg",320,240
_S,0,0,,0.8
_F,0,0,,1
_F,0,6402,,0
_F,0,46942,,1
_F,0,124780,,0
_F,0,150726,152692,1
into the SB. The important thing is to stick it in the background, which results in removing the background from always being drawn.

[bronze]
nada

[silver]
00:36:402 (5,1) - I don't like how 5 stacks with 1. experiment with dropping the stack ratio.
01:12:483 (4) - if you listen to the bass drum here, it drops this beat. Not sure if that's worth mapping because of normal
02:08:834 (2,3,4) - this stack looks terrible

[gold]
00:33:766 (1) - the new combos to me seem a bit inconsistent in this map, and I noticed a few in silver but decided it was okay. Could you double check all your new combos so they are where you want them to be? I realize this is an old map, and your opinions may have changed on NCs. I usually put them on the long white tick or on the pickup for the lyrics, but you've sort of done a mishmash of both.
01:22:618 (1,2) - can you rotate this so the repeat on (2) isn't overlapping the slider of (1)?
01:32:347 (4,5) - and copy/paste ^ here
01:46:942 (4,5) - maybe rearrange this one if you feel like it.
01:53:429 (2,1,2) - nazi, seems like these should be in a straight line but they're not. Fix it if it's easy to fix otherwise it's fine.
01:58:293 (1) - just a small tip for these sorts of corners. When you use a red dot, it's best to have the next node in a straight line with it so the bezier has a perfect tangent line to work off of. There were a number of these in the map if you want to fix them http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/213727
02:12:888 (4) - I try to avoid putting the center of any circle/slider above y=8 since this will intersect with the HP bar. It would be less of a problem if the HP bar was underneath sliders like it is in EBA or ouendan, but osu does it differently for some reason.

[platinum]
00:30:726 (1) - these are exceptionally boring. maybe decompress them slightly, and add some curve to it?
00:32:347 (1) - the first 16 notes work well, but these last 16 get to be really repetitive. maybe delete a few notes to add rhythm or map the bass drum with sliders/repeating sliders.
00:33:868 - the bass drum has a hit here if you decide to do ^, so watch out for it.
00:43:699 (1) - ^^^
00:59:915 (1) - this section is cool; you have a number of different rhythm patterns to map essentially the same thing, but they're all ordered. 2 measures of this rhythm, 2 measures of that rhythm, etc... What if you redid it so you mixed them all together? 2 beats of rhythm 1, 4 beats rhythm 2, 2 beats rhythm 1, 2 beats rhythm 3, etc...
01:32:347 (4,5) - it would be better if it were straight. the snake slider overlaps the end of (5). Or you could snake the first half of it, and make the 2nd half straight. or add a squiggle in the middle.
01:44:711 (9) - nazi/spacing whatever
01:50:996 (1) - bass drum again if you want
02:01:537 (3,4) - (3) completely covers up (4)'s start. It's fine I suppose, but there's some people who dislike these sorts of overlaps. I would rather have (4) on top of (3) but you obviously can't do that in this orientation. There's a discussion on it somewhere in the new rules.

Sorry this mod was a bit conceptual rather than "fix this", so hopefully everything I said makes sense. If it doesn't, PM me and I'll try to explain it either in game or on the forums.

Nothing bad, just a lot of suggestions.

wow, long mod, thx ^^

Hi, mod 4 mod ~


[General]

1. I think hitsound volume is a little too high... = =

[Bronze]

1. 00:43:699 (1) - add finish
2. 01:09:645 (2) - ^

[Silver]

1. 00:27:888 (4,5) - how about make the blank perfect and stack (6) under (4) end
2. 01:13:699 (2,3) - spacing larger? or it's kinda easy to miss the next slider
3. 01:18:564 (4) - add note?
4. 02:07:618 (1) - orz don't you think reverse is a little hidden...

[Gold]

1. 00:40:658 (1) - delete this note...? it feels bad
2. 00:47:347 - somehow... spinner?
3. 01:18:564 (4) - -1 reverse ?
4. 01:45:118 (1) - delete..?
5. 02:27:483 (2,3) - make symmetrical ?

[Platinum]

1. nice streams orz
2. 01:14:712 (2) - 1/2 later? feels better then
3. 01:55:050 (2) - make perfect shape plz

Good luck~

M4M lol.

Bronze:
[*] 00:25:861 (2) - unrankable Slider bug, needs to be stacked correctly, move it 1 grid down and 1 right.
[*] 01:46:942 (2) - ^

Silver:
[*] 00:27:078 (1,2,3) - nazi: one grid up :3
[*] 00:32:348 (2) - unrankable Slider bug, needs to be stacked correctly, move it 1 grid down and 1 right.
[*] 00:43:699 (1) - could be rounder, try this:

408,52,43699,6,0,B|468:120|412:224,2,180,0|0|8

[*] 02:23:024 (2) - definitly too high, crosses the hp-bar ingame, move it a bit down.

Gold:
[*] 01:11:266 (3) - unrankable Slider bug, needs to be stacked correctly, move it 1 grid down and 1 right.
[*] 01:20:996 (5) - Slidertail crosses the scorebar lol.
[*] 01:53:429 (2) - unrankable Slider bug, needs to be stacked correctly, move it 1 grid down and 1 right.
[*] 02:12:888 (4) - crosses the hp-bar ingame, move it a bit down.

Platinum:
[*] nothing unrankable detected, looks fine :3

Very nice, love that Storyboard~
A shame this map has no taiko, just call me if you map a touhou song again.
I'd gladly map one for you.

Hi~~
These are all suggestions.

[Bronze]
perfect map.Mod of the following is a very small thing.

01:53:834 (3)　　　　1grid left
01:55:050 (1)　　　　1grid left? You set x300 in 01:58:699.
02:22:618 (5)　　　　1grid right

[Silver]
00:34:780 (3)　　　　1grid up?
01:13:497 (2)　　　　How about this? Although it is the right DS, I have sense of incongruity.[Gold]
00:46:942 (5)　　　　1grid down & 2grid right
01:51:604 (x)　　　　hmm,I feel this note dont suit for song.I propose to remove this note.

[Platinum]
00:32:347 (x)　　　　How about this? I feel too mane reverse.00:35:185 (5)　　　　How about this? I think, this pattern fits the song.00:40:658 (4)　　　　^00:45:320 (x)　　　　Same as suggestions 00:32:347
01:16:435 (3)　　　　move to (x228,y304).01:25:050 (9)　　　　1grid up


Sorry, I can't find a problem..
I wish your map is Ranked.
Bye~

hello XD
plz reply!

platinium
00:27:685 (1) - maybe make it further from the previous note? when player play double time, i assume they feel uncomfortable because the spacing reduce so much, ive that experience from making players test my own map
00:35:185 (5) - here shouldnt be a slider...i mean, nothing makes it a slider.may be a slider with a repeat with half length
01:03:158 (1) - a little jump, make it neater http://puu.sh/cFZB
01:25:861 (1,2,3,4) - arrangement like this is quite easy for a insane? maybe ctrl + R the slider?
01:28:496 (2) - curve it more lol, it isnt pretty enough
01:39:645 (2) - geez...i must say again,,your long slider have no drum sound, maybe make a custom slider tick
01:41:469 (2,5) - samething
01:51:503 (6) - clap?
01:54:442 (1) - because of this slider the clap become discontinue..last time i heard rumors of someone using bpm changes to change the tickrate, maybe you wanna try that? (the first thing is you added a slider tick sound)
01:55:050 (2) - these two sliders have absolutely no clap ..... too awkward?
02:03:564 (2,3,4) - i knew you play taiko, dont you think it is nice to put all finish here? but make the volume decreasing along it
02:11:469 (1) - samething as 00:27:685 (1)
02:18:969 (5) - delay this to next beat, add a note here, this feel nicer...trust me T.T
02:30:422 (6) - clap?


wow

hard(gold)

00:32:347 (4) - make it symmetrical?
00:45:320 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/cG2y ?
01:02:348 (7) - add a repeat? may be it will greatly increase the play count hahaha
01:43:293 (3,1,2,3,4) - aww...why not make a star like i mentioned in http://puu.sh/cG2y ? it may look better to me
01:58:293 (1) - slider tick clap
01:59:915 (3,5) - slider tick clap
02:24:442 (2,4) - maybe this two neednt follow the vocal, the drum stops there...

silver
00:30:726 (1,2) - omg plz dont stack this?no particular reason...just feeling may be harder to hit
00:40:456 (3) - delete, make the next slider here, and add a note after the slider, will sound better "must try this"
00:43:699 (1) - symmetrical plz?
00:46:537 (6,7) - make this into one slider? easier ...
01:06:807 (1) - this slider really really need clap in tick
01:17:551 (3) - remove clap because the front part has no clap, this will sound a bit awkward
01:46:942 (2) - add repeat delete next note? i like kick slider here...no particular reason
oh i see now, you have 01:50:186 (3) - a kick slider, ↑ that might be helpful
02:05:186 (1) - if you add a finish at the tail, the clap will sound more comfortable

02:08:834 (2) - the arrangement is a bit ugly, suggestion: make the previous slider ctrl + R, and then copy paste it, ctrl + H, move spacing
http://puu.sh/cGeq



bronze....play with hidden + hard rock + double time, FC-ed

thats...large mod...plz look at it...even you take 10 days

~Mostly suggestions~

General:

1. Some sliders look like they could use a few more anchor points... not a big deal though

Bronze:

1. 00:22:618 (3) - Move points around to remove overlap with 00:20:996 (1)?
2. 00:35:996 (3) - Rotate 00:34:374 (1) for this slider instead?
3. 00:40:861 (3) - I think a new player will get confused with this overlap
4. 01:16:537 (2) - Remove note?

Silver:

1. 00:43:699 (1) - 1 grid left and up?
2. 00:46:942 (7) - Remove note?

Gold:

1. 01:45:118 (1) - Remove note?

Platinum:

1. 00:30:726 (1,2,3,4, etc.) - spacing feels too little for me.. doesn't feel right (also annoying to play when stream is long in later parts), just my opinion~
2. 01:25:049 (9) - whoops? adjust to .2 spacing like the rest

cool stuff~

Hi~
[Bronze]
Looks good.

[Silver]
00:34:780 (3) - 1grid up
00:39:645 (4) - 1grid right
00:46:132 (4,5,6) - 1grid down


[Gold]
00:32:347 (4) - slider reverse point 4grid up
00:46:942 (5) - 1grid down,1grid right

[Platinum]
00:27:280 (2) - remove circle
00:35:793 - add circle
02:03:564 (2,3,4) - add finish

Nice Map!! go go ranked~

[Bronze]
fine

[Silver]
humm fine?

[Gold]
01:06:401 (7) - add new combo
01:06:604 (1) - delete new combo
01:14:915 - add object?
01:27:888 - same

[Platinum]
01:14:915 - same above

Um, thx for mod you guys

@L_P : no changes, sorry ;_;

Mod request from Random modding
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[Bronze]
00:45:320 (x) - clap?
01:12:888 (1) - why not put it to the center of the circle(SB)
01:25:861 (1) - as above (maybe make this SB for diff. specific and fit the notes?)


[Silver]
00:43:699 (1) - a bit large spacing
01:14:510 (3) - spacing
01:15:726 (x) - clap?
02:03:970 (5) - spacing
02:14:510 (1,2,3,4) - ah,, dont know why (maybe the slider looks like so close) if I play it first time I'll think it like..
..you can..change the slider location?

[Gold]
00:42:077 (x) - add a note? or 00:42:280 (1) - do a jump
01:56:266 (4,5) - (4)x:444 y:192 (5)x:368 y:192 (then (5) looks better)


[Platinum]
00:32:347 (1,1) - divide into 4 sliders ?
00:45:320 (1,1) - ^
02:16:131 (1,1) - ^
02:29:104 (1,1) - ^
01:06:604 (1) - imo, ctrl+r , then more fit the spacing.
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that's all~
nice song..
noob modding @.@
Hope it helps you.

Fix some, thx Snowy Dream ><

Hi

[General]
fine~

[Bronze]
AR -1 for consistent the overall setting?
00:43:293 (x) - would you add a note here? Because I have seen you have stuffed a lot of 1/1 before so give a note here for adjustment and it sounds good for me.
01:12:787 (1.2.3) - Reducing hitsound doesn't show a good effect here.If I were you,I would only put the finish on (1)- .
01:16:537 (2,3) - I don't suggest putting some 1/2 click in easy diff.It may make confused to newbie.They can't identify there is a 1/1 or 1/2.
01:25:861 (1,2,3) - again.Same as 01;12:787
02:01:131 (4) - some design thSame g here.Would you make it like this?

[Silver]
00:37:213 (1) - what?A long slider?I think that sounds weird because you just stuff a ton of 1/1 and appear a long slider (rhythm) here suddenly.
01:12:888 (1,2,3) - Same as easy,the hitsounds stuff.
01:19:375 (4) - The rhythm....Seems off for me.I mean the reverse of the slider,you can hear that nothing to support it (drum sounds/vocal)
01:33:970 (4) - Do you missing a clap at the end of the slider.If yes,please add it to fit your hitsound pattern.
01:48:564 (2) - Same as 00:37:213.
02:14:510 (1,2,3,4) - I'm quite scare about this place.It may make confused to newbie (I assume some newbie will play normal diff.) and they may think this is a 1/2 spacing and....yeah,you konw what will happen.
Please make good use of whistle.They can make some cool effect to your map.

[Gold]
00:25:050 (3,4) - This 3/4 is meaningless.It doesn't fit the music at all,I think something like 1/2 or 1/1 is really good enough.
01:50:996 (4) - Probably move this away from the beginning of slider (3)- ?Then that should be much better.

[Platinum]
00:30:726 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2) - It is really need to have such a long stream?They mostly can't fit the music and they are quite annoying.That would be much better if you change that to soft-hitsound here.
00:43:699 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2) - same
01:09:645 (1,2,3,4) - That would be much better if you can add some whistle on these slider because you didn't fit the drum sound so some whistle can improve the quality of the hitsound.
01:12:888 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Hitsound stuff same as easy.(Won't mention this again)
01:24:847 (7) - Probably add a new combo here because this combo length is much longer than others so just add a new combo here for consistency.
01:44:509 (7) - ^Same.
01:50:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Stream stuff....doesn't fit the music ...I think you better to change this to simple 1/2
01:57:483 (7) - Add a new combo due to the above reson.
02:06:402 (5,6,7) - hum,probably change a pattern here? Because I have seen you put this pattern before so would you change a new pattern here to give a "fresh" feeling to player.

wmfchris wrote:

Hi

[General]
fine~

[Bronze]
AR -1 for consistent the overall setting?
00:43:293 (x) - would you add a note here? Because I have seen you have stuffed a lot of 1/1 before so give a note here for adjustment and it sounds good for me.
01:12:787 (1.2.3) - Reducing hitsound doesn't show a good effect here.If I were you,I would only put the finish on (1)- . // I was reducing a volume for following vocal
01:16:537 (2,3) - I don't suggest putting some 1/2 click in easy diff.It may make confused to newbie.They can't identify there is a 1/1 or 1/2.
01:25:861 (1,2,3) - again.Same as 01;12:787 // I was reducing a volume for following vocal
02:01:131 (4) - some design thSame g here.Would you make it like this?

suggestion

[Silver]
00:37:213 (1) - what?A long slider?I think that sounds weird because you just stuff a ton of 1/1 and appear a long slider (rhythm) here suddenly.
01:12:888 (1,2,3) - Same as easy,the hitsounds stuff. // I was reducing a volume for following vocal
01:19:375 (4) - The rhythm....Seems off for me.I mean the reverse of the slider,you can hear that nothing to support it (drum sounds/vocal) // The repeating slider is following vocal. If you using 0,25 Playback rate, you'll hear that repeating slider is following vocal
01:33:970 (4) - Do you missing a clap at the end of the slider.If yes,please add it to fit your hitsound pattern.
01:48:564 (2) - Same as 00:37:213.
02:14:510 (1,2,3,4) - I'm quite scare about this place.It may make confused to newbie (I assume some newbie will play normal diff.) and they may think this is a 1/2 spacing and....yeah,you konw what will happen.
Please make good use of whistle.They can make some cool effect to your map. // Where can I place for a good whistle?

[Gold]
00:25:050 (3,4) - This 3/4 is meaningless.It doesn't fit the music at all,I think something like 1/2 or 1/1 is really good enough.
01:50:996 (4) - Probably move this away from the beginning of slider (3)- ?Then that should be much better.

[Platinum]
00:30:726 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2) - It is really need to have such a long stream?They mostly can't fit the music and they are quite annoying.That would be much better if you change that to soft-hitsound here.
00:43:699 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2) - same
01:09:645 (1,2,3,4) - That would be much better if you can add some whistle on these slider because you didn't fit the drum sound so some whistle can improve the quality of the hitsound.
01:12:888 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Hitsound stuff same as easy.(Won't mention this again) // I was reducing a volume for following vocal
01:24:847 (7) - Probably add a new combo here because this combo length is much longer than others so just add a new combo here for consistency.
01:44:509 (7) - ^Same.
01:50:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Stream stuff....doesn't fit the music ...I think you better to change this to simple 1/2
01:57:483 (7) - Add a new combo due to the above reson.
02:06:402 (5,6,7) - hum,probably change a pattern here? Because I have seen you put this pattern before so would you change a new pattern here to give a "fresh" feeling to player. // No

Uhhh, recheck ?

As random modding old maps.

[General]

• 
  Remove "black.png" and "white effect.png" from your folder, these images aren't used.

[Bronze]

1. 01:30:523 (2,3,1) - It's hard for newbie to read this pattern. I recommend you to change (2,3) to a slider.
2. 02:08:023 (2) - Remove clap, and add clap to (3).
3. 02:09:645 (4,1) - ^

[Silver]

1. 01:18:767 (1,2,3) - Kinda confusing for normal-player. I think a note should be added at 01:18:564 too.

[Gold]

1. 00:24:847 (2) - I know why you placed it here, but imo it looks better if it's moved down by 1 grid.
2. 00:25:861 (5,6) - Hm, I feel something weird about this rhythm, how about changing the pattern like below?
   
3. 01:12:888 (1,2,3,4) - Straight-four-circles is kinda difficult pattern as hard diff. It's better to change (3,4) to a slider imo.
4. 01:13:699 (1,2,3,4) - ^
5. 01:53:429 (2) - What's the purpose of non-stacking?

[Platinum]

1. 01:25:861 (1,2,3,4) - It's kinda hard to read this quick triple since the pattern of previous ones(01:24:037 (1) ~ 01:25:455 (6)) are put at red line so imo player expects next one is also put at red line. In addition, there are jumps between (6,7,1), it makes reading (1) harder too. So I recommend you to change the pattern like below. (Maybe it's better to change next two same patterns(01:26:672 (1),01:27:483 (1)) too.)
   

That's it!
I'll be back to recheck.

all fixed, Suzully~

thx ><

Yeah all stuff are fine, bubbled!

Suzully wrote:

Yeah all stuff are fine, bubbled!

thank you!!!!

Looks good to me.

Ranked~

gratz!^^

I like this map!!~

congratz!!~

congratz,Leorda

Yo, Leo-chan~!
Congratz!!

congratz~~<3

thx guys <3

NEEDS MOAR 38BEETS SONG!!!!

wogh akhirnya ke rank juga

lufi10 wrote:

wogh akhirnya ke rank juga

thank you~

Congratz~><//

Hinacle wrote:

Congratz~><//

arigato~

congrats~

Yasora-chan wrote:

congrats~

thank you <333

Congrats~~~! \>w</

omedeto-
congrats!!

thank you Akemi-chan, and Hinacle~!

Congratz >w<

phonic wrote:

Congratz >w<

thx