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Horie Yui - Coloring

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IchiGUN
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IchiGUN
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 16 июля 2012 г. at 2:15:41

Artist: Horie Yui
Title: Coloring
Source: Papa no Iukoto wo Kikinasai!
Tags: Black_Cherry_Ita BCI [CSGA]Ar3sgice ending
BPM: 117
Filesize: 5996kb
Play Time: 03:44
Difficulties Available:
  1. BCI's Easy (1,67 stars, 178 notes)
  2. Color of Heart (4,96 stars, 722 notes)
  3. Hard (4,84 stars, 645 notes)
  4. Normal (4,24 stars, 380 notes)
Download: Horie Yui - Coloring
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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● E a s y ☆ by Black_Cherry_Ita ☆ D o n e

● N o r m a l ☆ D o n e

● H a r d ☆ D o n e

● Color of Heart ☆ by [CSGA]Ar3sgice ☆ D o n e
Last edited by IchiGUN , edited 37 times in total.
KuronumaSawako
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KuronumaSawako
yay! is the full ver.?
IchiGUN
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IchiGUN

KuronumaSawako wrote:

yay! is the full ver.?
Yes ;)
KuronumaSawako
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KuronumaSawako
\o/ good
anxious to see this in pending ^^
IchiGUN
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IchiGUN

KuronumaSawako wrote:

anxious to see this in pending ^^
We will try as soon as possible :D thx
hillaryzx
363 posts
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hillaryzx
Hi, IchiGUN. Here's the mod~

General

- Resnap all notes in Hard

Easy

00:29:416(1) - add finish here...
00:41:724(1) - at the beginning point of the slider, put finish..
00:51:723 - add a note here? maybe it's a bit hard to easy diff..(just suggestion)
02:26:723(1) - move to 2:26:595?
02:30:826(1) - move to 2:30:697?

Normal

00:29:415(4) - add finish
00:35:056(4) - remove finish here...
00:41:723 - I sense something missing here. Add a circle + finish here...
01:22:749 - add a note here...

Hard

AR -1
01:22:749 - add a note here...
03:46:082(3) - remove finish?


Now, I'll take my leave....
IchiGUN
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IchiGUN
hillaryzx, thanks :3
Yucali
83 posts
Joined October 2010
Yucali
Hey there ♥ Modded as requested in my queue~

♣

General

I suggest to take a look at this hitsounds that you can use instead of the original whistle, for example.

[from Natteke's UserPage]

Clap Packs:
SPOILER
(Link 1) (Link 2)
(Link 3)

Snare Packs:

SPOILER
(Link 1) (Link 2)
(Link 3)

Cymbal Pack:
SPOILER
(Link)

Percussion Pack:
SPOILER
(Link)

♣

Easy

♦ HP Drain +1?

♦ 00:32:492 (2) - Move one grid below (grid level 4)

♦ 00:37:108 (3) - What about putting like here ?

♦ 02:47:877 (3) - Move one grid below (grid level 4)

♦ 03:01:723 (2) - Maybe you should move this mini slider somewhere else, like here and here

Nice diff, very linear ^^
Nothing more to add.

♣

Normal

♦ Uhm, consider changing the Circle Size, maybe (increasing it, obviously).

♦ 03:41:722 (3) - Add a clap and remove it from 03:42:235 (1) - I think it sounds better.

Nothing relevant, is quite funny to play.

♣

Hard

♦ In general I have to say that I see too many note stacked one above the other, try to change the style sometimes you can replace them with sliders for example, or just putting them following a line, but it's up to you to choose :3

♦ 00:15:313 - try to put those notes differently, maybe here

♦ 00:26:595 (6,7) - same here

[and some other parts too, but you don't have to change them all, maybe fix just some of them]

♦ 01:27:877 (5,6,7,8) - Try to put them in other way, let's see...here ?

♦ 01:58:261 - Add a note?

♦ 01:58:646 (6) - Instead of putting single notes, why don't you try something likehere

♦ 02:41:210 (1,2,3,4) - and 02:43:261 (1,2,3,4) - I see this section too empty, but it can be good as it is I suppose...

Enjoyable map btw.

♣

That's all! Hope it will help you!
BCI
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BCI
thank you for mods ;)
http://puu.sh/hpcP
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
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[CSGA]Ar3sgice
Hi, from my queue


Hard

  1. 00:08:902 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1-2 is the same spacing as 4-5 but time distance is different, it's very misleading, plz move 5 to proper spacing
  2. 00:13:774 (4) - add clap
  3. 00:14:544 (1,2,3) - change it in this way http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot080-9.jpg ? orz
  4. 00:15:697 - add a note here
  5. 00:37:108 (3) - clap
  6. 01:09:415 (9,10) - finish?
  7. 01:12:236 (1) - spacing is too close
Normal

  1. 00:19:415 (1) - plz move reverse arrow to (228,98) (down) hard to follow (2), easy to read as 1/4
Easy

  1. 02:30:826 (1) - move 1/4 tick earlier
that's all

Good luck~
IchiGUN
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IchiGUN
Yucali and [CSGA]Ar3sgice, thanks a lot :333
CapnDavid
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CapnDavid
Good luck. (That show is awesome too.)
English of this show is called "Listen to Me, Girls, I'm Your Father!".
IchiGUN
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IchiGUN

david huhh wrote:

Good luck. (That show is awesome too.)
Thanks ;)
riffy
osu! Alumni
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riffy
from my queue

General
Цвета :< Совсем немного поправь :<
Не много ли киаи?

Hard
ох уж эта раскрутка слайдеров D:
00:23:261 (1,2,3,4,5) - звездочкой расположи
01:33:005 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

Normal
00:19:159 (4,1) - НК не так..
00:21:210 (4,1) - ^

Изя
/me gusta
00:30:442 (3,4) - новичок такой один раз кликнет, а второй раз не догадается D:
01:40:185 (2) - ох как я долго гадал, что с формой слайдера. давай попроще его? :3
02:41:723 (1,2) - cлегка не удобно для нубов\играющих с хидденом
02:47:108 (2,3) - а теперь попробуй это пройти, и подумай, а смогут ли новички? D:
02:58:646 (3,4) - \:D/ да можно и не применять
03:10:954 (2,3) - их так можно ставить, просто я избегаю этого в изях
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`
10/10 Отлично. Все вышесказанное лишь пожелания. :3
Удачи с мапой.
---Assault[K]---
---Assault[K]---
From my queue
[General]
Fine by me
except source: iukouto is together not iu kouto
[Easy]
02:11:971 - end of spinner add notes here? break is long
[Normal]
Same as easy , add note?
02:48:623 (1) spinner end slightly early so can hit (1) slider easier?
[Hard]
Hp 6 or 7, 5 is more for normal
01:08:671 (4,5,6,7,8) straight line will be nicer?
01:14:556 (8) new combo + add note after
02:11:971(8) end of note add notes here? break is long for me same as easy/normal
03:06:562(4) position move same as (5) is nicer
03:08:883 (7) move away from (5,6) but closer to (1)
03:46:078 (3) add soft finish

End of mod. Kd if helpful
i love papa no iukouto wo kikinasai :3
IchiGUN
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IchiGUN
-Bakari- and ---Assault[K]--- thanks :333
kosiga
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kosiga
hi~ IchiGUN :)

thank you for the request ~ :D

here my mod ~

[General]
  1. Song Setup - Title - maybe Full.Ver is necessary? (Because there is already TVsize in ranked map) so change 「Coloring (Full Ver.)」 ?
[Easy]
SPOILER
  1. 00:09:416 (2) - become more beautiful. ex ↓
    218,265,9415,2,0,B|167:235|147:162|186:109|245:80|314:111|337:170,1,300,2|0
  2. 00:13:006 (1) - use copy 00:14:031 (2) slider is better.
  3. 00:36:083 (2,3) - Suggestion of the rhythm: I think that simple rhythm is good . because it is easy diff :3 like this: http://puu.sh/hvcn
  4. 00:51:980 (2) - spacing too far >< (1.04x)
  5. 01:05:313 (3) - add finish to end of the slider ?
  6. 01:09:416 (4) - remove whistle to slider body
  7. 01:29:929 (2) - slider 2nd point one grid down. and add finish to end of the slider
  8. 01:47:365 (1) - add finish to start of the slider ?
  10. 01:50:442 (4) - add whistle to start of the slider ( same as 01:09:416 (4) )
  11. 01:55:569 (1) - add finish
  12. 02:03:774 (1) - add finish to start of the slider ?
  13. 02:05:826 (1) - add whistle to end of the slider ( same as 01:09:416 (4) )
  14. 02:20:185 (1) - I think volume is too big. suggest gradually lower the volume. ex: 60⇒50⇒40⇒30⇒20⇒10⇒end 60% and add whistle　like http://puu.sh/hvFo
  15. 02:39:159 (1) - spinner start 02:38:903
  16. 02:47:877 (3) - add finish to end of the slider
  17. 02:57:108 (1) - add finish ?
  18. 02:59:159 (4) - add whistle to end of the slider ( same as 01:09:416 (4) )
  19. 03:05:313 (5) - add NC
  20. 03:16:082 (4) - add whistle to end of the slider
  21. 03:23:774 (4) - add whistle to end of the slider ( same as 01:09:416 (4) )
  22. 03:29:928 (1) - add finish to start of the slider ?

[Normal]
SPOILER
  1. 00:17:364 (1,2) - I think that this pattern is difficult in normal >:( change simple pattern is better IMO. http://puu.sh/hvK6
  2. 00:19:415 (1,2) - ^
  3. 00:21:467 (1,2) - ^
  4. 00:25:569 (2,3) - ^
  5. 00:27:620 (1,2) - ^
  6. 00:53:005 (4) - add whistle
  7. 00:53:261 (5) - remove whistle
  8. 00:53:518 (6) - add whistle
  9. 00:57:108 (2) - ^
  10. 00:57:620 (4) - ^
  11. 01:01:210 (3,4) - add whistle
  12. 01:09:415 (3,4) - ^
  13. 01:14:031 (6) - change slider. end 01:14:544 or same as 02:11:467 (6,7) is better. ( because 1st end is different from other diff )
  14. 01:23:005 (2) - slider repeat arrow is overlapped by 01:22:749 (1) . it is not good ><;
  15. 01:37:108 (1) - spinner end 01:38:646 is better. It is too fast that note comes (1/2beat) after a spinner in normal diff.
  16. 01:42:236 (3,4) - add whistle
  17. 01:50:441 (3,4) - ^
  18. 01:58:646 (3,4) - ^
  19. 02:06:851 (3,4) - ^
  20. 02:11:467 (6) - remove finish
  21. 02:51:980 (3,4) - add whistle
  22. 03:00:185 (3,4) - ^
  23. 03:08:389 (3,4) - ^
  24. 03:16:594 (3,4) - ^
  25. 03:24:800 (3,4) - ^
  26. 03:33:005 (3,4) - ^
  27. 03:37:621 (6) - remove finish
  28. 03:41:722 (3,4,1) - spacing too far a little. ( 1.0x )

    sorry.. There is many it about hitsound :? it is my suggestion, you can ignore it

[Hard]
SPOILER
  1. 00:39:928 (1,2,3,4) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/hvWk ( match it with a vocal ? and 00:41:723 - add finish here )
  2. 00:44:800 (6,7) - remove 6circle. and move 7slider to 00:44:800 ( and add repeat ? )
  3. 00:58:133 (1) - add finish
  4. 00:59:800 (x) - add note. There is a vocal on the back
  5. 01:00:826 (x) - ^
  6. 01:34:031 (5,6) - same as 00:44:800 (6,7)
  7. 01:37:364 (1) - spinner end 01:38:646 is better IMO. and remove finish and 01:39:159 (1) - add finish here
  8. 01:40:826 (x) - add note.
  9. 01:41:851 (x) - ^
  10. 01:55:569 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
  11. 01:57:236 (x) - add note.
  12. 02:39:928 (1) - spinner start 02:39:800 ?
  13. 02:45:056 (1,2,3,4,5) - plz use a constant DS >< i think many people do not think it to be the same rhythm :(
  14. 02:48:902 (1) - add finish
  15. 02:50:569 (x) - add note.
  16. 02:51:595 (x) - ^
  17. 02:59:800 (x) - ^
  18. 03:05:826 (2) - add finish to start of the slider
  19. 03:06:979 (x) - add note
  20. 03:08:005 (x) - ^
  21. 03:21:723 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
  22. 03:23:390 (x) - add note
  23. 03:24:415 (x) - ^
  24. 03:44:928 (x) - ^
  25. 03:46:210 - remove green line

    Why is how to put hitsound different from normal o.o ?

    and sorry for many add note :? it is just my suggestion ;)

sorry, for many mod :?

map is good. star ☆~ :D

Good luck ~ :)
IchiGUN
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IchiGUN
ｍ（．＿．）ｍ ありがとう kosiga, thank you so much :3
Mitsuneko
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Mitsuneko
My mod.Sorry if it doesn't help.

[Easy]

00:30:954(4)- Stacking in an Easy diff might confuse players. So unstack
00:53:005(2)- Add clap at end
00:53:518(3)- Move clap at the beginning to the end of the slider.
01:24:800(3)- NC?
01:40:185(2)- Unstack
01:49:415(3)- ^
02:02:236(2)- ^
02:08:903(2)- Remove reverse arrow,then make end at 02:09:415,sounds better.
02:24:287(1)- Make it end at 02:24:544
02:25:313(2) Move back to 02:25:056. Sounds better.
02:26:595(1)- Either move it back a tick or move it up a tick. Blue ticks are rarely used in Easy diffs. It probably might not be a good idea to move it back a tick either.So move it to 02:26:851 and let it end at 02:27:364
02:30:826(1)- Move back a tick
02:42:236(2)- Unstack
02:44:287(2)- ^
02:59:159(4)- ^
03:11:467(3)- ^
03:11:467(4)- ^

[Normal]

02:46:082(3)- This is quite an odd looking slider O.o Maybe change it?
02:46:082(2)- NC

[Hard]

Seems fine~

Nice map.
IchiGUN
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IchiGUN
nekonomitsu, thaaanks :3
Pereira006
osu! Alumni
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Pereira006
hello~~

general

i konw the easy is gues diff and color is same but the code is different http://puu.sh/hCtU you have do it same code on osu.notepad for all diff then save

Some Suggestions
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Easy

00:27:365 (1) - add finish ? like you did at 00:29:416 (1)
00:32:492 (2) - grid 2 up to make symentric at 00:31:467 (1) or is intentional?
01:22:749 (1,2) - not nice blanket

woooow /me cry pro mapper stuff cool
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Normal

00:23:261 (1) - remove new combo and at 00:23:518 (2) - put new combo
00:25:313 (1) - remove new combo and at 00:25:569 (2) - put new combo
00:33:774 (1,2) - Inconsistency spacing also i not like overlaps if better un-overlaps like this http://puu.sh/hCEW better gameplay IMO
00:37:877 (1,2) - same overlaps
00:41:979 (2,3) - ^ same
01:34:287 (3,4) - Inconsistency spacing

stuff cool
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Hard

00:10:441 (6) - sUpEr fit this song o.o

stuff aswome
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that all i think pleasse some mod you can't understand my eng is suck pleasse ask me in-game i will explain better

good luck and bye bye
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