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Karen - Distorted Pain

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v2b
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2009年6月6日 at 19:45:10

Artist: Karen
Title: Distorted Pain
Source: Gore Screaming Show
BPM: 160
Filesize: 6653kb
Play Time: 01:55
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (3.45 stars, 132 notes)
  2. Insane (4.96 stars, 526 notes)
  3. Normal+ (4.46 stars, 298 notes)
Download: Karen - Distorted Pain
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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4th
Song from Gore Screaming Show
Lizbeth
very cool map v2b, timing feels right, good spacing, and the disign itself is pretty good too, i like it a lot.
:) star

good luck
bye!
mican
i like this song~
Gens
NOTE: I'm getting an unnatural lag in osu!, so I'm not able to test your beatmap for the moment.

[Overall]
- You'll need an Easy difficulty if you want to get this ranked. Nope, [Normal] is not Easy enough.
- You should change the background color even if you have a background. Why? Because, while the thumbnail is loading, the BG color is shown, so... Yeah, just for a nice effect.
- Stack Leniency: 0. I've heard this is unrankable, so you should increase it.


[Timing]
Pretty Good.

[Normal]
- Slider Tick Rate 1. Different to [Insane], huh? Are you sure about that?
00:39:80 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - This whole section seems abit Hard for Normal...
02:23:30 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^

[Insane]
- Slider Tick Rate 0.5. Different to [Normal], huh? People normally use 0.5 in Normal, so this seems strange to me. But it's fine as is.

01:32:30 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe storyboard a 2x slider warning?
02:11:30 (1,1,1,1) - These spinners only get 1000 Bonus with autoplay. :[ This is unrankable too.

~ ~ ~

Yeah, everything else is OK (I think).
I'll star this once you add an Easy difficulty.
minyeob
[Easy]
Fine.

[Normal]
1:31:363(3)-> 1/4 beat forward

[Insane]
45:988(2)-> I think this slider is ugly.
1:31:363(3)-> 1/4 beat forward
2:18:801(11)-> New combo.


1:31:363(3)-> 1/4 beat forward
Well, you don't have to change this.
But this circle breaks the accurate timing.
Just let you know

Starred~
Topic Starter
v2b
To Gens
- You'll need an Easy difficulty if you want to get this ranked. Nope, [Normal] is not Easy enough.
easy added
- You should change the background color even if you have a background. Why? Because, while the thumbnail is loading, the BG color is shown, so... Yeah, just for a nice effect.
black
- Stack Leniency: 0. I've heard this is unrankable, so you should increase it.
increased to 1

[Normal]
- Slider Tick Rate 1. Different to [Insane], huh? Are you sure about that?
change to 2
00:39:80 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - This whole section seems abit Hard for Normal...
02:23:30 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^
I have already made an easy so I won't change it

[Insane]
- Slider Tick Rate 0.5. Different to [Normal], huh? People normally use 0.5 in Normal, so this seems strange to me. But it's fine as is.
increased to 2
01:32:30 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe storyboard a 2x slider warning?
I dont think it's necessary
02:11:30 (1,1,1,1) - These spinners only get 1000 Bonus with autoplay. :[ This is unrankable too.
Ive never heard that 1000 bonus-spinner cant be ranked I wont change it unless a BAT force me to do

To minyeob
[Insane]
45:988(2)-> I think this slider is ugly.
fixed
2:18:801(11)-> New combo.
fixed
1:31:363(3)-> 1/4 beat forward
I have no ideas on it so i wont change it

Thanks for modding
abalee
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
ignorethis
fine.
Andrea
[Easy]

00:24:80 (1) - Finish

[Normal+]

00:18:80 (2) - A Finish here too?
00:24:80 (2) - ^
02:38:58 (1) - Unsilence this and add a finish.

[Insane]

00:18:80 (2) - Here,too, finish.
00:24:80 (2) - ^
01:32:30 (1) - This section needs a BPM warning...
01:54:80 (9) - New combo.
02:38:58 (1) - Unsilence this and add a finish.

Very nice map. Star <3
Topic Starter
v2b
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Doomsday
streams <3

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

[EASY]

nothing, good job

[NORMAL+]

nothing

[INSANE]

01:59:301 - this bits ridiculous. i love it
again can't find anything

if i ultra-super nazi modded i might find something, but i don't think that is necessary for ranking. i would be happy ranking this as is if i was a BAT. nice job

star'd
Starrodkirby86
This map is really spectacular~

[Insane]:
00:39:80 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is optional, but should you space out the (1-3) like the other 1/4s? It's okay if you don't though since there's not really any 1/8s.
01:14:11 (4,5,6) - These claps don't fit here at all...I mean, it's like that's the only time I remember hearing claps.
01:55:55 (5) - Extend by one repeat?
02:23:30 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - That 1/4 thing mentioned earlier. ^

The rest is fine.

Try an offset of 3789? I feel the original offset, 3801, is a bit too late...

Star~
Topic Starter
v2b
00:39:80 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is optional, but should you space out the (1-3) like the other 1/4s? It's okay if you don't though since there's not really any 1/8s.
02:23:30 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - That 1/4 thing mentioned earlier. ^
I think it will be harder to hit if I change as you said The section now is hard enough.

01:14:11 (4,5,6) - These claps don't fit here at all...I mean, it's like that's the only time I remember hearing claps.
changed to whistle

01:55:55 (5) - Extend by one repeat?
I dont think it will sound better

Try an offset of 3789? I feel the original offset, 3801, is a bit too late...
changed

thank for modding :)
Sousei
婊子
RaisTF
Few suggestions ^^'
lvl 3 grid
Easy:
00:36:78 (3) - 1 grid right and 2 left to match with the end of 1st slider
Normal:
00:09:78 (1,2,3,4,5,6) and 00:12:78 (1,2,3,4,5) - I realy dont understand these parts, why dont you make them look like 00:06:78 (1,2,3,4,5,6) or smth else but symmetry...
01:02:28 (1,2,3,4) - 1 lvl3 grid up to align with 01:00:78 (1) and 01:03:78 (1)
Insane:
00:16:91 (5) - what is that for? I think sounds better without it
00:18:41 (6) - ^
00:19:91 (6) - ^
00:22:91 (5) - ^
00:24:41 (6) - ^
00:25:91 (6) - ^
01:41:28 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - looks too cruel for me

good map, star~
DeadAlready
nice map :)
shooting star~~XD
Alace
<insane>
01:32 those x2 bpm slider don`t fit the song IMO (but sliders look pretty good)
02:18:78 (1)~(9) hard to read

All good
star~
Topic Starter
v2b
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Gens
Hi again.
(Why do I always get lag when I'm modding? :<)

[Overall]
Modding again... Modding again... Everything seems ok.

[Timing]
Alright, timing seems to be spot-on. I can't suggest a better offset.

[Easy]
00:50:28 (1) - Be aware about these kind of sliders... Since it's only a 1/2 beat slider with many repeats, it's almost impossible to know how many will they be. Since there are no guidelines about this, I won't tell you to change, but please avoid this for future beatmaps. :)

Everything else is fine.

[Normal+] (Wow, good fix! :D)
This difficulty felt great! I can't find anything wrong with it.

[Insane]
01:32:28 (1,2,3,4) - I agree with Alazy, these 2x sliders don't fit.
01:59:28 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - This deathstream is kinda ugly, re-arrange it?
02:11:28 (1,1,1,1) - Oh, so you're keeping these spinners, huh? It's fine by me.

~ ~ ~

This map is really good now.
You can finally get your star!
Topic Starter
v2b
Easy:
00:50:28 (1) - Be aware about these kind of sliders... Since it's only a 1/2 beat slider with many repeats, it's almost impossible to know how many will they be. Since there are no guidelines about this, I won't tell you to change, but please avoid this for future beatmaps.
k I will.


Insane:
01:59:28 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - This deathstream is kinda ugly, re-arrange it?
this bits ridiculous. i love it

01:32:28 (1,2,3,4) - I agree with Alazy, these 2x sliders don't fit.
err..... well.. changed to circles Q_Q


Thanks for your modding
Larto
easy:
01:27:22 (2) - 1/4 later sounds better
01:39:22 (2) - 1/6 later and 1/6 shorter sounds better


Normal+ aka Hard:
01:27:22 (2) - 1/4 later and 1/4 shorter sounds better
01:39:22 (2) - 1/6 later and 1/6 shorter sounds better

Insane:
01:39:03 (2) - 1/6 shorter sounds better


To be honest, I have NO IDEA if you should do this. It's weird, but it plays much better. orz
Topic Starter
v2b

Larto wrote:

easy:
01:27:22 (2) - 1/4 later sounds better
01:39:22 (2) - 1/6 later and 1/6 shorter sounds better


Normal+ aka Hard:
01:27:22 (2) - 1/4 later and 1/4 shorter sounds better
01:39:22 (2) - 1/6 later and 1/6 shorter sounds better

Insane:
01:39:03 (2) - 1/6 shorter sounds better


To be honest, I have NO IDEA if you should do this. It's weird, but it plays much better. orz
fixed(?)
Larto
Some minor modding, then bubbled!
EVA-X
一看bg就知道是重口味 :evil:
Takuma
After some modding done in IRC.. Ranked!
Mafiamaster
Gore Screaming Show <3
Gabi
this song is so awesome and cool
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