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Leorda
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General
* You need a hitcircleoverlay.png, for making a complete set of the hitcircles
* Your video seems have an audio on it, remove the audio in your video. You can tell your friend if you can't
* Your video is end earlier than your song, please make it consistent and consider to find the good one
* If you have a custom hitcircle, don't forget to add "SliderBorder: 255,255,255" under [Colours]. Because new rules said so. Do it for all diffs


Easy
00:09:292 (3) - Since this slider is fit to vocal, try shorten this to 00:10:446
00:19:907 (1,2,3) - This part seems empty for me, try making interesting part?
01:18:984 (1) - This object touch the HP Bar
01:29:599 (2) - Remove the annoying whistle in sliderbody
01:34:676 (1) - ^
01:51:292 (2) - Finish on tail slider?
02:17:138 (x) - Add note here for making emphasis?
02:27:753 (3) - Remove the annoying whistle in sliderbody
02:42:523 (1) - ^


Normal
00:22:676 (4) - Finish here?
00:33:753 (1) - Put finish instead of clap?
00:41:138 (1) - FInish at head slider?
00:55:446 (1) - Too soon from spinner for normal diff, this could be difficult to reach this after spin the spinner
00:57:292 (1) - Why finish at head slider?
01:10:676 (3) - Finish here?
01:19:907 (3,4) - Replace this into one slider and end at blue tick for following vocal?
01:29:599 (1) - Same issue as 00:55:446 (1)
01:43:907 (1) - ^
02:23:599 (1) - Too far from spinner for normal diff, this could be difficult to reach this after spin the spinner
02:33:754 (1) - ^
02:46:215 (3) - Clap here?


Hard
00:22:676 (8) - New combo and add finish?
00:39:753 (2) - This object touch the HP Bar
01:10:676 (8) - New combo and add finish?
01:27:292 (1) - Finish?
01:32:830 (8) - New combo for slow slider?
01:58:676 (8) - New combo?


Insane
00:11:369 (3,4) - Unstack together, because some players is confusing which hitcircle should click first
00:22:676 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think stream is fit to the calm part in song. If you want to keep it, try to lower the volume
01:23:946 (2) - Stack to tail slider? It's weird if it has a small spacing
01:52:676 (2,3,4,5) - It such boring if you always stacking like this, try to make pattern?
01:58:676 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Same issue as 00:22:676 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5)
02:55:907 (1) - Sudden jump can makes players go confusing


So sorry for long mod :cry:

EDIT : I feel there is some inconsistent countdown on each diff
Topic Starter
IchiGUN
Leorda thanks :(
Topic Starter
IchiGUN

Leorda wrote:

General
* You need a hitcircleoverlay.png, for making a complete set of the hitcircles
* Your video seems have an audio on it, remove the audio in your video. You can tell your friend if you can't
* Your video is end earlier than your song, please make it consistent and consider to find the good one
* If you have a custom hitcircle, don't forget to add "SliderBorder: 255,255,255" under [Colours]. Because new rules said so. Do it for all diffs
Fixed ;)
BCI
thank you Leorda~

Download: 4minute - WHY (IchiGUN) [Easy].osu
L_P
kosiga should become a MAT and bubble every map i made
Topic Starter
IchiGUN

L_P wrote:

kosiga should become a MAT and bubble every map i made
and? :3
wcx19911123
from my queue

[General]
need to make kiai all the same in all diffs , for example : kiai start at 00:55:907 in Insane diff. please check kiai yourself and fix them

[skin]
spinner-background.jpg must be 1023x692. I'm not sure jpg file is fine or not , better change it to png file
approachcircle.png must be 128x128
hitcircleselect.png is useless , remove it

[Easy]
I think you should change diff name to ***'s Easy to make people know it is guest diff..
00:48:523 (1,2) - spacing is not 0.9x here
01:59:138 - add break here plz

[Normal]
difficulty setting is too low imo , HD+1 AR+1 OD+1 , much better
00:54:984 - clap sound odd here , use whistle or finish is better imo
01:19:907 (3,4) - this is really hard to read the rhyme , delete (4) , repeat (3) and add note at 01:20:830 is much better
01:32:830 (1) - use 0.75x speed plz , or this is too confusing..
01:42:984 - same as 00:54:984 -
02:21:753 (1) - this spinner is too short imo , I suggest change to a slider
02:32:830 - remove clap here , here should be quiet imo

[Hard]
02:28:907 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing to 02:27:984 (8) is not 0.8x when playing , move it right and down a bit plz
02:54:292 (6) - cancel repeat , move 02:54:984 (7) to 02:54:753 and add note at 02:55:446 , rhyme much better imo

[Insane]
need change diff name,too
HD+1/2 plz , it is too low now
I suggest AR9 , easy to read the jumps imo
this diff's tags is different with other diffs , make tags all the same in all diffs plz
00:06:753 (1) - move newcombo to 00:06:984 - , newcombo should start at heavy beat in streams , it is much easier to read the rhyme
00:13:907 (3,4) - circle first slider later , rhyme much better imo
01:16:099 - add note here?
01:39:292 (2,3,4,5) - this jump is too huge , here is song's soft part , I suggest not to make huge jump , reduce spacing plz
01:40:907 (1,2) - do something like this http://puu.sh/eEqx , or it is too hard to play
01:56:369 (8,1) - this jump is too huge imo.. try to reduce spacing plz..
02:25:907 (4,5) - circle first slider later , rhyme much better

feel free to get more mods , especially hitsound mods , then maybe I'll back
good luck
BCI
fixed, thanks >w<
насчёт имени дифы. если хочешь, поменяй сам, я не хочу портить твою карту своей аббревиатурой :o

Download: 4minute - WHY (IchiGUN) [Easy].osu
Topic Starter
IchiGUN
wcx19911123, thanks a lot. Fixed ;)

Black_Cherry_Ita wrote:

насчёт имени дифы. если хочешь, поменяй сам, я не хочу портить твою карту своей аббревиатурой :o
Ну почему же портить, хочешь - меняй название. Я не возражаю :D
BCI
Я не возражаю :D
да я ж не хочу, в том то и дело :с всё, прекращаю оффтопить ><
bossandy
  • Hi hi~ request from my queue~ ( 2 diff mod )
     
    General :
     
  1. Insane's Tags is different!! Make it the same as other diffs
     
    Easy :
     
  2. 01:08:830 (1) - up 1 grid make the spacing right
  3. 01:57:753 (2) - add clap middle
  4. 02:25:907 (5) - add clap
     
    Insane :
     
  5. 00:17:369 (4) - wrong spacing
  6. 00:39:523 (1,2,3,4) - Why spacing change here?
  7. 00:44:369 (5) - 1 grid left
  8. 00:54:753 (1) - I think it's too short for anyone
  9. 00:55:849 (T) - Unused Timing points
  10. 02:36:753 (1) - spacing
  11. 02:50:599 (4,5,6) - don't jump here

     
    You must to read~!
    red:I think you must to fix. bule: need to discuss. Black: just suggest.
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Nice map!! Make style like ztrot XD
Good luck :3
Topic Starter
IchiGUN
Thanks bossandy :3
Cygnus
Hi. Here's your mod. <3
GENERAL
  1. Your spinners don't really match your theme. Perhaps change to something which color is Red / Orange?
EASY
  1. Overall Difficulty -1
NORMAL
  1. HP Drain +1

  2. 00:22:676 - (4) Move this note to x:236 y:152

  3. 00:38:369 - (2) I hope you're aware that this slider is not aligned with the previous. Move to x:40 y:240

  4. 00:39:292 - (3,4,5,6) If you followed my suggestion above, remap this notes.
Good luck getting it ranked. :3
Topic Starter
IchiGUN
Philippines, thanks =)
Kiddo-Kun
I'll mod this much later today, or maybe tomorrow....Or I might still be busy until Wednesday T_T
Topic Starter
IchiGUN

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

I'll mod this much later today, or maybe tomorrow....Or I might still be busy until Wednesday T_T
Thanks a lot :oops:
Kiddo-Kun
Hi.

Easy:

• 00:18:523 (5) - Add a new combo on this slider and remove it on the next one to match the change in the music.
• 00:22:676 - Add a break here like you did with the other diffs.
• 00:42:061 (1) - This slider looks sloppy to me. I cleaned it up for you:
124,68,42061,6,2,B|199:18|257:91|257:91|328:18|390:70,1,300,2|10
• 01:25:446 (3) - Add a new combo on this note, it matches the music better.
• 01:47:138 (5) - You should always try to avoid kick sliders on Easy diffs, they might screw easy players over. Do this instead. (Follow the new combos in that picture also)
• 01:51:292 (2) - New combo on this note to match the song.
• 02:20:369 (4) - You can make the flow here better by doing this.
• 02:41:599 (3) - Add new combo on this note and remove it from 02:42:523 to match the music.
• 02:45:292 (5) - Add a new combo on this note to match the music better.

Comments:

Aside from the combos, this is a really nice Easy diff. I really enjoy the sliders a lot and the rhythm is nice and constant.

Normal:

• 00:27:984 (3,4,5) - I think this pattern would fit the song better if it was something like this.
• 00:35:138 (3) - Remove the finish on the sliders end and instead add a clap. It match the song better that way.
• 01:18:753 (2) - I don't think this matches the song very well.Do something like this instead.
• 01:36:984 (4) - Add a new combo to this note to match the music .
• 02:23:599 (1) - This slow down will surely trip players up, mainly because it's 0.50x, but also because it seems a tad random to me. So, I suggest changing it to either a long - normal slider, or a 0.75x slow down.

Comments:

Overall, nothing is majorly wrong. It's just another normal, in my opinion.

Hard:

• 00:18:984 (1,2,3) - This stack has a weird flow to it. I would open it up like so.
• 00:51:753 (1) - It would feel better if you mapped through this spinner. This spinner seems unnecessary.
• 01:18:753 (2,3,4,5) - This stack seems pretty boring, in my opinion. I would change it to something a little more exciting.
• 01:19:907 (6,7,8,9) - I think you can make this feel better and match the music better if you did this.
• 01:36:522 (3) - Add a finish to this note to match the clash in the background.
• 02:21:753 (1) - This spinner seems random and unnecessary. I suggest mapping it.
• 02:28:907 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I suggest spreading these notes out.
• 03:03:061 (2) - It would match the music better and give a greater ending if you delete this note.

Comments:

A tad boring, to be honest. I would add some jumps and/or some 1/4th notes here and there, also the stacking feels boring and a bit strange. But other than that, pretty solid difficulty.

Insane:


• 00:39:523 (1,2,3,4) - This anti-jump does not play very well and it does not work well with the song. Do this instead.
• 00:44:830 (1) - This spinner feels weird. Please map through it.
• 01:08:599 (4,1) - This plays oddly in my opinion. I think this would play much better
• 01:16:676 (4) - I think this would flow better if you bring it bellow the slider, like this

Comments:

I like this diff. You have some nice flow and sliders here which adds to the game play. This is my favorite difficulty in the mapset.

Overall:
Pretty solid mapset. Nicely balanced and it plays great. But I see space for improvement. Get more mods and I'll come back.

A star for a good map ♪
Topic Starter
IchiGUN
Kiddo-Kun, thanks for mod :)
wowshakhov
Fixed everything except 00:44:830 (1). I'll probably map this part later.
athiota33
[Easy]

02:24:523 (4) - Add finish in the begining?
02:31:907 - Normal hitsound start here? it more fit
02:31:907 (1) - Add finish

[Normal]

00:32:830 (5) - Remove finish? a bit noisy
00:59:599 (1) - Finish instead of clap?
01:29:599 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Use some slider?
02:13:907 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
02:17:138 (8) - Add finish?

[Hard]

Fine

[Insane]

Fine

Nice map!
Good luck :D
Topic Starter
IchiGUN

athiota33 wrote:

Nice map!
Good luck :D
Thank you very much ;)
-Hyde
Easy
00:05:138 - http://puu.sh/f2QR
02:39:292 - Remove NC

Normal
01:38:830 - Remove NC
02:39:292 - ^

Hard
… 00:51:753 – Remove MC
00:58:907 –Add new combo
00:59:599 - Remove NC
01:32:830 - ^

Insane
00:13:446 - Remove NC
01:19:446 - Unnecessary NC
01:32:830 - Remove NC
02:33:984 - Add NC

Good Luck~
Maya-kira
hello. I think I forget to update so maybe my mod is not the latest update of the map T_T;; please deal with it orz~ from mini maya.

-easy-

00:36:523- (3) I think it'll looks better 1 grid right.
00:37:907- (1) You better map this part @_@;; imo.
00:42:061- (1) it feels really weird here o_o;; I think it becomes better when you add a note at 00:41:599
01:02:369- (3) I don't think this slider fits the flow well. consider to change it?
01:34:676- (1,2) I think this pattern flows better.
02:20:369- (4) place it at 256,48?
02:47:138- (2) I don't think this slider's reverse fits well @_@;;

-normal-

00:16:676- (4,5,6) I'm not sure about this, but imo, this kind of slider is dangerous D: better put a 1/1 slider with a note afterward rather than 3x 1/2 slider @_@;;
something like this :
00:57:292- (1,2,3) this one is fine for me because its the reff @_@;;
01:16:676- (5,6,7) I'd suggest you change this to reverse slider since it'll be easier for 'normal'
01:18:753- (2) one reverse is enough -_-;
01:36:984- (4) new combo here instead of at 01:38:830
02:36:523- (1) this actually starts 1/2 beat later isn't it..

actually I want to mod more here ;w;'' From the pattern, I would like to say that I like easy's pattern better.

-hard-

SV is definitely too high T_T;; I don't think you can call this 'hard' with that SV. skipping this diff T_T

-insane-

00:12:984- (1,2,3,4) imo, this pattern flows better xD
01:16:907- (4) I think it'll flow better if you ctrl+r here xD
02:19:446- (1,2,...7) pattern them to a 'C' letter would flow much better,
02:27:984- (4) I think slider would fit better o3o~
02:38:369- (5,6) add something like this?

03:03:292- (2) place it in the center?

THIS IS AWESOME xD
I like this diff.
BCI
most of them were ignored ;W;
but still, thank you _HydeSama_ and Maya-kira :3

Download: 4minute - WHY (IchiGUN) [Easy].osu
Topic Starter
IchiGUN
_HydeSama_ and Maya-kira, thanks a lot :3
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ IchiGUN ~ :)

Mod time for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Remove Enable countdown.
  2. Remove Letterbox during breaks,because have video.

[Insane]


  1. CZ+1 will be fun.
  2. 00:55:965 - Unused timing line Remove pls.
  3. 01:19:907 - Add finish.
  4. 01:21:753 - ^
  5. 03:02:369 (6,1) - Try overlap this.

[Hard]


  1. 02:33:753 (1) - This is unrankable error,Add new combo to here.

[Normal]


  1. 00:17:138 - Remove finish.
  2. 00:59:369 - Add note will be better.
  3. 00:55:907 (1) - This is unrankable error,Add new combo to here.
  4. 00:59:599 (1) - Add finish.
  5. 01:54:061 (5) - Repeat should end to here 01:54:523.
  6. 02:33:753 (1) - This is unrankable error,Add new combo to here.
  7. 02:59:369 - Add note will be better.

That's all ~ nice mapset ~

Good luck ~ ;)
Topic Starter
IchiGUN
Ooo...thanks for modding Kawayi Rika :333
CatenOK
карта очень нравится,так держать,покарать всех ;3
Удачки тебе ;3 гоу гоу гоу к новым =Р
Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. Artist: 4Minute, plz follow this post when change it.
  2. spinner-background.jpg is a bit too bright (especially for the video), try to find a better one?
  3. spinner-spin.png, spinner-osu.png, spinner-clear.png are default ones? remove them if that's true.
[Hard]:
  1. 01:07:907 (5,6,7) - starting position is a bit weired cuz of the stacking, find a better place?
  2. 02:59:830 (5,6,7) - this is totally ok (compared with ^
[Insane]:
  1. 02:36:753 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - things can be much cooler if you follow exactly the how the rap goes. and this happened a lot after here.
[Normal]:
  1. 00:31:676 (3,4,5) - nazi spacing, cancel grid snapping might help
歩くsounds like 歩ぶ orz
cool song~

I'm wondering if you can find a video with better quality, anyway send me a PM after your fixes.
Ranger
Hi~
From my queue

[Easy]
00:42:061 (1) - Increased spacing accuracy,Put in x:124 y:84
00:47:599 (3) - I think straight view better.Put in x:128 y:160
00:49:907 (3) - How about change like this?more Symmetry
SPOILER

I`m sorry,i don`t know how to give a code :(
01:01:446 (1) - I think in the middle is good to me(Put in x:256 y:244)
01:01:907 (2,3) - ^(x:256 y:156)
01:10:215 (4) - Add Finish the end
01:14:369 (1) - Add Finish
02:47:138 (2) - spacing error.Put in x:68 y:276

[Normal]
00:58:907 (4,5,6,1) - I think lt`s hard to beginner.how about change like this?(Just suggestion)
02:58:907 (7,8,9,1) - ^some reason.Change some.

[Hard]
00:51:753 (8) - Add NC?
01:41:830 (11) - Remove circle
01:42:061 (1) - Move at 01:41:830 and increase 01:43:676
I think feel better like this
02:21:753 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - hard :?
How about reduce the spacing?

[Insane]
Good Insane! wow :)

That`s all
this is korean Musician song,light?
Go Go Rank~
Topic Starter
IchiGUN
Colin Hou and [Ranger] thanks :3

Colin Hou wrote:

I'm wondering if you can find a video with better quality, anyway send me a PM after your fixes.
I uploaded new quality video, but size is increased to + 4mb (previous 13mb, now 17mb)
It's okay? :?
Colin Hou
sure
bmin11
[Insane]
02:26:830 (6,7) - Couldn't really get why you increased the spacing here. Could have just kept it with the small spacing.
02:33:753 (3) - New combo

[Hard]
Smaller hit circles then [Insane]...? Interesting. Even though it feels some what odd, but I can't see why not lol
00:53:599 (3,1) - This needs a larger spacing in between. Just separate them a little bit for the impression.
02:17:599 (1~) - you used a larger spacing then [Insane] for this part. Seems out of unity. Even [Hard] seems harder then [Insane] for this part. May consider lowering the spacing.

That's all from me. Good luck!
Topic Starter
IchiGUN

bmin11 wrote:

That's all from me. Good luck!
Thanks ;)
Louis Cyphre
Изя ничё так и инсейн ничё так, но вот нормал и особенно хард. Из-за квадратности и не ровных слайдеров мне они не понравились.
Topic Starter
IchiGUN

Louis Cyphre wrote:

Изя ничё так и инсейн ничё так, но вот нормал и особенно хард. Из-за квадратности и не ровных слайдеров мне они не понравились.
Увы. Ничего менять уже не буду =)
Colin Hou
bUbbled!

genre seems to be Japanese lol (pop of course
Topic Starter
IchiGUN

Colin Hou wrote:

bUbbled!
Thanks a lot :D
My first bubble (〃⌒▽ ⌒)
IceBeam
привет

может намапишь все же интро в нормале и харде? там совсем немного вроде - но будет намного лучше
и еще скин файлы требуют .png формата,переведи в него спиннер-бэкграунд + фулл-сабмит

и ещё размер видео удручает D:
я качал очень долго,еще больше пережать нельзя?

[Easy]
00:00:523 (1) - слайдер не идеально симметричен,но хотя бы на 1 грид влево бы подвинуть
00:34:676 (2) - тоже поработать бы над симметрией
01:11:138 - почему брейк отсюда начинается? должен с 01:10:907
01:20:369 (3) - подвинь средний вейпоинт на 1 грид вправо хотя бы,будет лучше
01:23:138 - вот тут нотки не хватает,советую добавить
02:54:061 (2) - опять же симметрия,2 грида вправо

[Normal]
01:32:830 (1) - ох,сделай-ка ты лучше другую форму,выглядит не очень,мягко говоря
01:58:676 - добавь сюда ноту,либо перетащи сюда брейк (просто кликни на его начале,и перетащи мышью)
02:24:984 (2) - лучше уж начни нк отсюда
02:30:522 (1) - я бы вообще начал спиннер с 02:29:830,так намного лучше,а закончил бы на 02:31:907 - под звук

[Hard]
00:30:061 (1,2,3) - тут всё,конечно,читаемо,так что можно оставить как есть,но на будующее - соблюдай спейсинг,тут он совсем неверный
01:18:753 (2,3,4,5) - нет,ну..правда не нужны эти джампы тут -_-
01:20:599 (8,9) - старайся не стаковать таким образом 1/2 слайдеры,т.к. при игре стакинг не появляется - это баг осу
поэтому,абсолютно не видно начала 2-го слайдера,так что измени их или сделай стак вручную:
01:51:292 (1) - стакни с (8) или дальше отодвинь,слишком близко сейчас
02:04:215 (1,2,3,4) - опять же стаки

[Insane]
00:13:446 (1) - убери нк
00:22:676 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - этна-стрим как-то совсем сюда не подходит,лучше уж просто реверс-слайдеры
02:00:870 (2,3) - я писал про это в харде,нужно сделать вручную стак
02:01:793 (2,3) - ^
02:49:907 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - если бы не вистл на (3) - был бы совсем ужас,можно оставить конечно,но очень странный спейсинг

вот,и желательно получить ребабл (или хотя бы чтобы колин ху написал что перепроверил и всё ок),а то слишком длинный мод вышел - а я всё же хочу ранкнуть,а не бабл возвращать
Topic Starter
IchiGUN
IceBeam, thanks again.
Всё исправил :3
Colin Hou
[Easy]:
  1. 01:22:215 (1,2,3) - sorry no jump in easy plz
  2. 02:47:138 (2) - shape this better?
[Normal]:
  1. 02:21:984 (1,2) - place them somewhere not touching each other?
[Insane]:
  1. 02:26:138 (5,6,7,1) - nazi spacing
:]
Topic Starter
IchiGUN
Colin Hou, thanks again ^-^ Done
Colin Hou
rebubbled
Topic Starter
IchiGUN

Colin Hou wrote:

rebubbled
\:D/
IceBeam
the band is korean but this single is japanese so genre will be pop (japanese)

ranked

поздравляю с 1-ой мапкой!
Topic Starter
IchiGUN
IceBeam, большое спасибо! ^^
Reiji-RJ
Oshiete tte tte te te te <3
Поздравляю!
kosiga
IchiGUN !! Congratulations :) :)
Colin Hou
congratz for the first rank~ :D keep moving!
Topic Starter
IchiGUN
Reiji-RJ, спасяб ^^
kosiga, どうもありがとうございました :33333
Colin Hou, thanks =)
Kawayi Rika
wow nice

Omedeto ichiGUN ~ :)
BCI
грацую :3
Ibuki Suika
Maya-kira
congratulations xD
Topic Starter
IchiGUN
Thanks again :3
yeahyeahyeahhh
Tell my WHY WHY WHY is this shit categorized as Japanese



Korea OP
Andrea
Fixed now~
Sure

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

Tell my WHY WHY WHY is this shit categorized as Japanese



Korea OP
NO, it's Japanese. D:
Fix back.
Colin Hou
lyrics: japanese + little english

this is why i mentioned the genre when bubble
IceBeam

IceBeam wrote:

the band is korean but this single is japanese so genre will be pop (japanese)

ranked

поздравляю с 1-ой мапкой!
meh
Andrea
Oops, sorry guys :P

I should read more next time xD
YunBora
МАПА ГАВНОООО
ГАВНООООООО
yeahyeahyeahhh

ykcarrot wrote:

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

Tell my WHY WHY WHY is this shit categorized as Japanese



Korea OP
NO, it's Japanese. D:
Fix back.
way to ruin troll :(
Roddie

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

way to ruin troll :(
>yfw


Oh, and congrats, IchiGUN.
yeahyeahyeahhh
Indeed good sir :(
TicClick
Ух ты, я это когда-то модил. Поздравляю же!
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IchiGUN

TicClick wrote:

Ух ты, я это когда-то модил. Поздравляю же!
спс :3
Mari Yui
WoWWW :o
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