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nimi
978 posts
Joined April 2010
nimi
I don't normally mod wip stuff (seems like you didn't read the queue rules x-x) but I'll mod anyways since i like the song

[Normal]
00:14:830 (x) - add a note here?
00:35:138 (3) - use distance snap
00:52:215 (1) - the sound of this spinner sounds a bit weird imo. end it at 00:54:984?
01:50:369 (6) - move it to 01:50:138? sounds better imo
02:41:600 (5) - this note is kinda hidden under 02:40:215 (3) (i know it's not too much, but eh.) move it a bit to the left?
02:42:984 (1,2) - remove the last repeat from (1) and start (2) at 02:44:138? if so, add a slider that starts at 02:44:830 and finishes at 02:45:061
02:46:676 (6) - add new combo?

[Hard]
AR +1?
01:01:446 (4) - replace it for a slider that finishes at 01:01:676?
01:02:138 (x) - add a note here?
01:36:984 (4) - new combo
02:39:753 (7) - make it like this http://puu.sh/cEaC? (changed slider's shape and placed it a bit higher)
02:54:984 (7) - same of the previous suggestion
03:03:292 (10) - stack correctly with the end of 03:02:599 (9)

*wondering why this is still wip*

that's all :)
IchiGUN
778 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
IchiGUN
Thanks Wiinter ;)
Already in Pending :3
Last edited by IchiGUN , edited 1 time in total.
Suzully
osu! Alumni
2,446 posts
Joined July 2010
Suzully
From my modding queue.

[General]

  • KIAI is not consistence.

    Since you added "hitcircle.png", you must add "approachcircle.png", and "reversearrow.png" too.
    I can say same thing about spinner skin. You must add "spinner-approachcircle.png".
    Speaking of score numbers, you must add "score-dot.png", "score-percent.png", and "score-x.png".
[Normal]

  • There are many finish sounds that are placed on wrong place. I recommend you to use it on downbeat, basically.
  1. 00:18:984 (2,3) - Add finish to (2), then remove it from (3).
  2. 00:20:830 (1,2) - ^
  3. 00:22:676 (x) - A note is needed here with finish sound.
  4. 01:10:676 (6) - Use finish instead of clap.
  5. 01:36:522 (3) - Add finish here.
  6. 01:54:061 (5) - Remove finish, and add it to 01:54:984 (1).
  7. 01:55:446 (2) - Remove finish.
  8. 02:36:523 (1) - Remove finish, and add it to 02:37:446 (2).
  9. 02:55:907 (1) - You should add finish.
[Hard]

  • Your hitsound seems not have regular pattern...you can improve it more.
  1. 00:55:907 (2) - Use finish instead of clap.
  2. 00:56:369 (3) - Add clap.
  3. 00:56:830 (4) - Remove clap.
  4. 02:10:215 (T) - It's not a good idea that increasing SV here imo. And also, please make (1,2,3,4)'s shape more beautiful.
  5. 02:27:984 (8) - Move it to x:432, y:176. That's symmetry with 02:26:369 (1).
  6. 02:30:061 (3,1) - Hmm, I feel these notes don't follow the music, try the pattern below.
  7. 02:47:599 (2,3,4) - Stack them perfectly with (1).
[Insane]
  1. 00:11:369 (3,4) - Try to move (3) to the top of (4) (x:128, y:208), and then try Ctrl+R on (4). The flow will become better imo.
  2. 00:19:330 (3) - Move it down by 2 grids.
  3. 01:15:984 (1,2) - How about the pattern below? I think that fits the rhythm more.
  4. 01:22:215 (2) - Stack it perfectly.
  5. 01:23:599 (1,2) -
  6. 01:34:907 (3) - A bit near from (2).
  7. 01:35:830 (3) - ^
The mapset is fine, and Insane looks great. But [Normal] and [Hard] need more works, especially about hitsound.
Star for now, good luck! :)
IchiGUN
778 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
IchiGUN
Suzully thanks a lot ;)
wowshakhov
262 posts
Joined June 2010
wowshakhov
done everything, thanks alot. 00:11:369 (3,4) improvement was really great :)
Teru21
746 posts
Joined September 2011
Teru21
Hi~ sorry for the late.. ;)
can i make the normal diff?

[Easy]
00:58:907 (4,5) - add clap

[Hard]
CZ -1

[Insane]
00:49:676 (3) - one grid down

GL :DGL
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
hi, as your req from my queue

General

errors

  1. a approachcircle pic is needed
  2. hitcircleselect actually doesn't make sense to players, it can only noticed on edit interface
  3. add default spinner-clear, spinner-osu and spinner-spin to avoid clash between yours and player‘s custom ones

Normal

00:19:446 (3) - clap？
Break time areas:
no evidence tells me set-up time(dark green area) is needed, please just restore them


Hard

03:03:292 (10) - stack

Insane

00:06:869 (1) - whistle
00:07:099 (3) - ^
00:07:446 (6) - whistle at beginning and body of the slider
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
Hi, from my queue


[General]

  1. Unused osb file in file folder, maybe delete it?
  2. The hitcircle in the skin is not complete, you need approachcircle.png, reversearrow.png
  3. The spinner in the skin is not complete, you should have spinner-approachcircle.png
[Normal]

  1. 00:15:292 (1) - 5 grids right
  2. 00:15:753 (2) - ^
  3. 02:10:215 (1) - move to (124,332)
[Hard]

  1. 00:33:753 (1) - move to (140,24)
[Insane]

  1. 00:35:138 (8) - remove sliderwhistle
Good luck~
IchiGUN
778 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
IchiGUN
LKs, [CSGA]Ar3sgice thanks a lot :3
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
No_Gu
request from my queue

3:03 - 2 diff
00:55:907 2nd kiai starts here
[insane]
This is an insane diff...why you use the biggest circle size?..at least use 4 circle size
00:19:214 (2,3,4,5) - these spacing is like 00:18:292 (1,2,3) - .but they are different
00:24:523 (1) - too big jump...
00:44:830 (1) - auto play can only spin this 3000...maybe this is too short
01:04:676 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - copy 123 to make symmetrical
01:19:907 (1,2,3,4,5) - why not use soft hitsound?
02:50:369 (3) - 1 grid left to stack last 2

[hard]
00:07:907 (1) - finish
00:41:138 (1) - finish at the beginning
00:59:599 (1) - move clap to the repeat
01:04:676 (4) - clap at the beginning
01:18:061 (1) - finish
01:39:292 (3) - move clap to 1
03:01:907 (6,7,8) - a little close to 5
Hitsound set is a little disorderly..Use 24clap will be much better imo.
IchiGUN
778 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
IchiGUN
No_Gu thx :D
lily_no_hana
138 posts
Joined November 2009
lily_no_hana
YESSSSSSSS~ Finally a good kpop beatmap in the pending pile that I've seen in ages ahaha ><""" Been downloading all dodgey ones lately sigh ><" I look forward to this being ranked soon XD
IchiGUN
778 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
IchiGUN

lily_no_hana wrote:

YESSSSSSSS~ Finally a good kpop beatmap in the pending pile that I've seen in ages ahaha ><""" Been downloading all dodgey ones lately sigh ><" I look forward to this being ranked soon XD
Thanks! I hope so :P
winber1
4,519 posts
Joined February 2010
winber1
sorry for really late mod :(

Insane

--to be honest i like CS 4 a lot better than this. idk why but i've begun to dislike huge hitcircles now, but that's just me. it's also a little weird to have your insane difficulty to have a larger hitcircle size than hard.

00:05:138 (4) - flows better if you delete this note, then fix the spacing.
00:13:908 (3,4) - the notes are a little backwards :/. Switch them around to follow vocals more? http://puu.sh/e3Om
00:18:292 (1,2,3) - i don't mind if the spacing is a little smaller, but i wouldn't make the spacing the same as 00:19:214 (2,3,4,5) -
00:25:676 (1) - i would turn this into two notes http://puu.sh/e3P4
01:10:676 (4) - new combo? this is more of my personal opinion though. it's nor really necessary
01:16:676 (3,4) - these two notes don't follow the vocals very well :/ well, i would advise you to change it to follow the vocals, but some reason i don't mind it that much if it stays.
01:23:946 (2) - this kinda of unexpected since you aren't really following the vocal's sixteenth notes and you've never used this rhythm before. Probably a better idea to unstack this note.
01:37:446 (1) - remove combo
02:18:753 (6,1) - the jump here seems a little forced consider the spacing is so small. I would decrease the jump distance

Hard

00:39:292 (5) - new combo?
00:57:292 (1,2,3) - i'd rather not have these overlap each other but thats my personal preference.
01:02:368 (2) - fits better if this note was at 01:02:138 - :/
01:10:676 (8) - new combo?
01:42:061 (1) - start the spinner at 01:41:830 -
01:49:215 - add note to follow vocals
01:50:369 (6) - start the start at 01:50:138 and end at 01:50:599 to follow vocals more? (you could also add a note at 01:51:061 - so that it's easier to read)
01:58:676 (8) - new combo?
02:23:599 (1) - this slowed down slider doesn't really fit :/ it doesn't follow anything. the vocals don't provoke something like this either
02:29:599 - add note
03:02:599 (9) - new combo?

Normal

--AR +2/1

00:22:676 (4) - new combo?
00:31:446 (3) - it's better to follow the same pattern so you don't confuse beginners. http://puu.sh/e3V5
02:23:599 (1) - This note is just too far away from the center for a spinner of this length. I'd also adivse you not to slow this slider down.
02:42:984 (1) - this note is just a little awkward to play, and it isn't intuitive that it will repeat 3 times. http://puu.sh/e3Xi (combo 1 only repeats 2 times.)

good luck :3~~

oh hey, it's my 1111st post.
IchiGUN
778 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
IchiGUN
winber1 thanks :3
P.S. Better late than never ^^

winber1 wrote:

it's also a little weird to have your insane difficulty to have a larger hitcircle size than hard.
It's guest diff :)
winber1
4,519 posts
Joined February 2010
winber1
oh ha. i never realized. i didn't read the info lol >_>. Well, either way, i still likeAR -1 CS +1 (lol at my mistake), but i somehow doubt you'd change it. anyways... good luck
ax_pokl
ax_pokl
[General]
well done, skiped
song too long, more breaking times.

(no KDS)

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IchiGUN
778 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
IchiGUN
ax_pokl ok, thx :)
Louis Cyphre
2,684 posts
Joined October 2009
Louis Cyphre
Хотелось бы увидеть лёгкую сложность.
BCI
1,081 posts
Joined May 2011
BCI
готово~

алсо:

TicClick wrote:

— Тот, который у тебя второй по счету, начни с 00:55:907.
мне вот тоже так кажется
а ещё бы первый киаи закончить на 00:22:676, а третий на 01:58:676, но это я просто предлагаю :3
звезда ^^

Download: 4minute - WHY (IchiGUN) [Easy].osu
IchiGUN
778 posts
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Topic Starter
IchiGUN
Black_Cherry_Ita большое спасибо. Диффка класс! ^^

TicClick wrote:

— Тот, который у тебя второй по счету, начни с 00:55:907.
Похоже, что так и надо...поправил :)
kosiga
1,548 posts
Joined May 2011
kosiga
hi~ IchiGUN :)

from my queue ~

sorry, for late mod :( here my mod ~

[General]
  1. KIAI TIME - better aligned the end of KIAI. 01:10:676 KIAI end ⇒ 01:10:215
[Easy]
SPOILER
  1. 00:07:907 (1) - add finish
  2. 00:15:292 (1) - ^ ( soft hitsound finish is better )
  3. 00:38:946 - remove green line
  4. 00:39:407 - ^
  5. 00:48:061 - add note. ( vocal follow )
  6. 00:55:849 - remove KIAI TIME
  7. 00:55:907 - use hitsound S ? or 00:55:965 - remove green line
  8. 01:03:696 - remove green line ?
  9. 01:03:811 - ^
  10. 02:07:446 (2) - one grid down.
  11. 02:20:080 - remove green line
  12. 02:20:196 - ^
  13. 02:23:773 - ^
  14. 02:23:888 - ^
  15. 02:25:792 - ^
  16. 02:25:907 - add note. ( vocal follow )
  17. 02:26:484 - remove green line
  18. 02:27:465 - ^
  19. 02:27:580 - ^

[Normal]
SPOILER
  1. 00:16:676 (4) - why? only have whistle to end of the slider ? I think that unnecessary ><; ( you should add a whistle to other parts if you do not change it)
  2. 00:21:753 (3) - add finish instead to clap to end of the slider
  3. 00:22:676 (4) - remove finish ( and maybe Normal hitsound do match ? )
  4. 00:37:446 (1,2) - use the same form. ><!
  5. 00:38:369 (2) - add finish to end of the slider. ( same 00:35:138 (3) - start of the slider )
  6. 00:39:292 (3) - remove finish
  7. 00:45:753 (1) - remove NC and 00:46:446 (2) - add NC
  8. 00:59:599 (6) - add NC and 01:00:061 (1) - remove NC
  9. 01:02:830 (3,4) - spacing too close a little(0.73x) 3:x468,y312 4:x476,y216 ?
  10. 01:03:292 (1) - add finish instead to clap
  11. 01:03:753 (2) - one grid right and up. x352,y68
  12. 01:08:830 (4) - add NC and add finish to start of the slider
  13. 01:10:215 (5) - add finish instead to whistle
  14. 01:10:676 (6) - remove finish ( and maybe Normal hitsound do match ? )
  15. 01:32:830 (8) - add NC ? ( slider speed change point. this speed change is confused for a beginner )
  16. 01:50:830 - add note
  17. 01:55:446 (2) - add clap
  18. 01:56:830 (1) - add finish
  19. 01:57:292 (2) - add clap instead to finish
  20. 01:57:753 (3) - add finish instead to clap to end of the slider
  21. 01:58:907 - Break time move left. http://puu.sh/ehff change like this ↓
  22. 02:41:138 (4) - add NC and
  23. 02:41:138 (4,5) - spacing too close a little (0.74x) 5:x84,y272 ?
  24. 02:42:984 (1) - remove NC and 02:44:138 (2) - add NC
  25. 02:58:676 (1) - tick move. 02:58:907. ( same other part rhythm ) and remove NC and 02:59:599 (3) - add NC ?

[Hard]
SPOILER
  1. 00:14:138 (7) - add whistle instead to finish to end of the slider ?
  2. 00:15:292 (1) - add finish ?
  3. 00:18:061 (1) - remove NC and 00:18:984 (3) - add NC ?
  4. 00:22:215 (7) - add finish instead to clap
  5. 00:22:676 (8) - same as Normal
  6. 00:27:061 (1) - remove NC ( because 00:30:061 (1,2) - not use NC )
  7. 00:31:446 (4) - DS 0.80x is better ? and try like this http://puu.sh/ehFI
  8. 00:55:446 (1) - remove NC and 00:55:907 (2) - add NC
  9. 01:06:523 (1) - remove NC and 01:06:984 (2) - add NC ?
  10. 01:10:215 (7) - add finish instead to clap
  11. 01:10:676 (8) - same as Normal
  12. 01:25:446 (9) - add NC and 01:25:907 (1) - remove NC
  13. 01:27:523 (1) - spinner start 01:27:292 is better
  14. 01:41:830 (1) - spinner start 01:42:061. and 01:41:830 - add note. i think do match it.
  15. 01:58:215 (7) - add finish instead to clap
  16. 01:58:676 (8) - remove finish ( and maybe Normal hitsound do match ? )
  17. 02:30:292 (1) - Suggestion of the rhythm. http://puu.sh/ehMI
  18. 02:36:292 (1) - remove NC and 02:37:446 (2) - add NC ?

[Insane]
SPOILER
  1. HD +1 ( higher than hard diff )
  2. 00:06:869 (1) - maybe remove NC and 00:06:984 (2) - add NC is better?
  3. 00:13:446 (1) - remove NC and 00:13:907 (3) - add NC ?
  4. 01:38:138 (6) - one grid up
  5. 01:41:830 (1) - same suggestion as hard diff
  6. 01:51:523 (2,4) - remove note ? I prefer that it not :D
  7. 02:38:830 (7,1,2,3,4) - Suggestion of the rhythm. http://puu.sh/ehX6
  8. 02:45:753 (6) - ^ http://puu.sh/ehXV

sorry, long mod :?

mapset is good ~ Star☆~ :)

Good luck ~ ;)
IchiGUN
778 posts
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Topic Starter
IchiGUN
kosiga, thanks a lot =) really great mod ^^'
BCI
1,081 posts
Joined May 2011
BCI
fixed, thank you~

Download: 4minute - WHY (IchiGUN) [Easy].osu
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Privet

General
* You need a hitcircleoverlay.png, for making a complete set of the hitcircles
* Your video seems have an audio on it, remove the audio in your video. You can tell your friend if you can't
* Your video is end earlier than your song, please make it consistent and consider to find the good one
* If you have a custom hitcircle, don't forget to add "SliderBorder: 255,255,255" under [Colours]. Because new rules said so. Do it for all diffs


Easy
00:09:292 (3) - Since this slider is fit to vocal, try shorten this to 00:10:446
00:19:907 (1,2,3) - This part seems empty for me, try making interesting part?
01:18:984 (1) - This object touch the HP Bar
01:29:599 (2) - Remove the annoying whistle in sliderbody
01:34:676 (1) - ^
01:51:292 (2) - Finish on tail slider?
02:17:138 (x) - Add note here for making emphasis?
02:27:753 (3) - Remove the annoying whistle in sliderbody
02:42:523 (1) - ^


Normal
00:22:676 (4) - Finish here?
00:33:753 (1) - Put finish instead of clap?
00:41:138 (1) - FInish at head slider?
00:55:446 (1) - Too soon from spinner for normal diff, this could be difficult to reach this after spin the spinner
00:57:292 (1) - Why finish at head slider?
01:10:676 (3) - Finish here?
01:19:907 (3,4) - Replace this into one slider and end at blue tick for following vocal?
01:29:599 (1) - Same issue as 00:55:446 (1)
01:43:907 (1) - ^
02:23:599 (1) - Too far from spinner for normal diff, this could be difficult to reach this after spin the spinner
02:33:754 (1) - ^
02:46:215 (3) - Clap here?


Hard
00:22:676 (8) - New combo and add finish?
00:39:753 (2) - This object touch the HP Bar
01:10:676 (8) - New combo and add finish?
01:27:292 (1) - Finish?
01:32:830 (8) - New combo for slow slider?
01:58:676 (8) - New combo?


Insane
00:11:369 (3,4) - Unstack together, because some players is confusing which hitcircle should click first
00:22:676 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think stream is fit to the calm part in song. If you want to keep it, try to lower the volume
01:23:946 (2) - Stack to tail slider? It's weird if it has a small spacing
01:52:676 (2,3,4,5) - It such boring if you always stacking like this, try to make pattern?
01:58:676 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Same issue as 00:22:676 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5)
02:55:907 (1) - Sudden jump can makes players go confusing


So sorry for long mod :cry:

EDIT : I feel there is some inconsistent countdown on each diff
Last edited by Leorda , edited 1 time in total.
IchiGUN
778 posts
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Topic Starter
IchiGUN
Leorda thanks :(
IchiGUN
778 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
IchiGUN

Leorda wrote:

General
* You need a hitcircleoverlay.png, for making a complete set of the hitcircles
* Your video seems have an audio on it, remove the audio in your video. You can tell your friend if you can't
* Your video is end earlier than your song, please make it consistent and consider to find the good one
* If you have a custom hitcircle, don't forget to add "SliderBorder: 255,255,255" under [Colours]. Because new rules said so. Do it for all diffs
Fixed ;)
BCI
1,081 posts
Joined May 2011
BCI
thank you Leorda~

Download: 4minute - WHY (IchiGUN) [Easy].osu
L_P
1,370 posts
Joined July 2011
L_P
kosiga should become a MAT and bubble every map i made
IchiGUN
778 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
IchiGUN

L_P wrote:

kosiga should become a MAT and bubble every map i made
and? :3
wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
wcx19911123
from my queue

[General]
need to make kiai all the same in all diffs , for example : kiai start at 00:55:907 in Insane diff. please check kiai yourself and fix them

[skin]
spinner-background.jpg must be 1023x692. I'm not sure jpg file is fine or not , better change it to png file
approachcircle.png must be 128x128
hitcircleselect.png is useless , remove it

[Easy]
I think you should change diff name to ***'s Easy to make people know it is guest diff..
00:48:523 (1,2) - spacing is not 0.9x here
01:59:138 - add break here plz

[Normal]
difficulty setting is too low imo , HD+1 AR+1 OD+1 , much better
00:54:984 - clap sound odd here , use whistle or finish is better imo
01:19:907 (3,4) - this is really hard to read the rhyme , delete (4) , repeat (3) and add note at 01:20:830 is much better
01:32:830 (1) - use 0.75x speed plz , or this is too confusing..
01:42:984 - same as 00:54:984 -
02:21:753 (1) - this spinner is too short imo , I suggest change to a slider
02:32:830 - remove clap here , here should be quiet imo

[Hard]
02:28:907 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing to 02:27:984 (8) is not 0.8x when playing , move it right and down a bit plz
02:54:292 (6) - cancel repeat , move 02:54:984 (7) to 02:54:753 and add note at 02:55:446 , rhyme much better imo

[Insane]
need change diff name,too
HD+1/2 plz , it is too low now
I suggest AR9 , easy to read the jumps imo
this diff's tags is different with other diffs , make tags all the same in all diffs plz
00:06:753 (1) - move newcombo to 00:06:984 - , newcombo should start at heavy beat in streams , it is much easier to read the rhyme
00:13:907 (3,4) - circle first slider later , rhyme much better imo
01:16:099 - add note here?
01:39:292 (2,3,4,5) - this jump is too huge , here is song's soft part , I suggest not to make huge jump , reduce spacing plz
01:40:907 (1,2) - do something like this http://puu.sh/eEqx , or it is too hard to play
01:56:369 (8,1) - this jump is too huge imo.. try to reduce spacing plz..
02:25:907 (4,5) - circle first slider later , rhyme much better

feel free to get more mods , especially hitsound mods , then maybe I'll back
good luck
BCI
1,081 posts
Joined May 2011
BCI
fixed, thanks >w<
насчёт имени дифы. если хочешь, поменяй сам, я не хочу портить твою карту своей аббревиатурой :o

Download: 4minute - WHY (IchiGUN) [Easy].osu
IchiGUN
778 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
IchiGUN
wcx19911123, thanks a lot. Fixed ;)

Black_Cherry_Ita wrote:

насчёт имени дифы. если хочешь, поменяй сам, я не хочу портить твою карту своей аббревиатурой :o
Ну почему же портить, хочешь - меняй название. Я не возражаю :D
BCI
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BCI
Я не возражаю :D
да я ж не хочу, в том то и дело :с всё, прекращаю оффтопить ><
bossandy
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bossandy
  • Hi hi~ request from my queue~ ( 2 diff mod )
    　
    General :
    　
  1. Insane's Tags is different!! Make it the same as other diffs
    　
    Easy :
    　
  2. 01:08:830 (1) - up 1 grid make the spacing right
  3. 01:57:753 (2) - add clap middle
  4. 02:25:907 (5) - add clap
    　
    Insane :
    　
  5. 00:17:369 (4) - wrong spacing
  6. 00:39:523 (1,2,3,4) - Why spacing change here?
  7. 00:44:369 (5) - 1 grid left
  8. 00:54:753 (1) - I think it's too short for anyone
  9. 00:55:849 (T) - Unused Timing points
  10. 02:36:753 (1) - spacing
  11. 02:50:599 (4,5,6) - don't jump here

    　
    You must to read~!
    red:I think you must to fix. bule: need to discuss. Black: just suggest.
--------------------------------------------------------
Nice map!! Make style like ztrot XD
Good luck :3
IchiGUN
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IchiGUN
Thanks bossandy :3
Cygnus
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Cygnus
Hi. Here's your mod. <3
GENERAL
  1. Your spinners don't really match your theme. Perhaps change to something which color is Red / Orange?
EASY
  1. Overall Difficulty -1
NORMAL
  1. HP Drain +1

  2. 00:22:676 - (4) Move this note to x:236 y:152

  3. 00:38:369 - (2) I hope you're aware that this slider is not aligned with the previous. Move to x:40 y:240

  4. 00:39:292 - (3,4,5,6) If you followed my suggestion above, remap this notes.
Good luck getting it ranked. :3
IchiGUN
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IchiGUN
Philippines, thanks =)
Kiddo-Kun
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Kiddo-Kun
I'll mod this much later today, or maybe tomorrow....Or I might still be busy until Wednesday T_T
IchiGUN
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IchiGUN

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

I'll mod this much later today, or maybe tomorrow....Or I might still be busy until Wednesday T_T
Thanks a lot :oops:
Kiddo-Kun
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Kiddo-Kun
Hi.

Easy:

• 00:18:523 (5) - Add a new combo on this slider and remove it on the next one to match the change in the music.
• 00:22:676 - Add a break here like you did with the other diffs.
• 00:42:061 (1) - This slider looks sloppy to me. I cleaned it up for you:
124,68,42061,6,2,B|199:18|257:91|257:91|328:18|390:70,1,300,2|10
• 01:25:446 (3) - Add a new combo on this note, it matches the music better.
• 01:47:138 (5) - You should always try to avoid kick sliders on Easy diffs, they might screw easy players over. Do this instead. (Follow the new combos in that picture also)
• 01:51:292 (2) - New combo on this note to match the song.
• 02:20:369 (4) - You can make the flow here better by doing this.
• 02:41:599 (3) - Add new combo on this note and remove it from 02:42:523 to match the music.
• 02:45:292 (5) - Add a new combo on this note to match the music better.

Comments:

Aside from the combos, this is a really nice Easy diff. I really enjoy the sliders a lot and the rhythm is nice and constant.

Normal:

• 00:27:984 (3,4,5) - I think this pattern would fit the song better if it was something like this.
• 00:35:138 (3) - Remove the finish on the sliders end and instead add a clap. It match the song better that way.
• 01:18:753 (2) - I don't think this matches the song very well.Do something like this instead.
• 01:36:984 (4) - Add a new combo to this note to match the music .
• 02:23:599 (1) - This slow down will surely trip players up, mainly because it's 0.50x, but also because it seems a tad random to me. So, I suggest changing it to either a long - normal slider, or a 0.75x slow down.

Comments:

Overall, nothing is majorly wrong. It's just another normal, in my opinion.

Hard:

• 00:18:984 (1,2,3) - This stack has a weird flow to it. I would open it up like so.
• 00:51:753 (1) - It would feel better if you mapped through this spinner. This spinner seems unnecessary.
• 01:18:753 (2,3,4,5) - This stack seems pretty boring, in my opinion. I would change it to something a little more exciting.
• 01:19:907 (6,7,8,9) - I think you can make this feel better and match the music better if you did this.
• 01:36:522 (3) - Add a finish to this note to match the clash in the background.
• 02:21:753 (1) - This spinner seems random and unnecessary. I suggest mapping it.
• 02:28:907 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I suggest spreading these notes out.
• 03:03:061 (2) - It would match the music better and give a greater ending if you delete this note.

Comments:

A tad boring, to be honest. I would add some jumps and/or some 1/4th notes here and there, also the stacking feels boring and a bit strange. But other than that, pretty solid difficulty.

Insane:

• 00:39:523 (1,2,3,4) - This anti-jump does not play very well and it does not work well with the song. Do this instead.
• 00:44:830 (1) - This spinner feels weird. Please map through it.
• 01:08:599 (4,1) - This plays oddly in my opinion. I think this would play much better
• 01:16:676 (4) - I think this would flow better if you bring it bellow the slider, like this

Comments:

I like this diff. You have some nice flow and sliders here which adds to the game play. This is my favorite difficulty in the mapset.

Overall:
Pretty solid mapset. Nicely balanced and it plays great. But I see space for improvement. Get more mods and I'll come back.

A star for a good map ♪
IchiGUN
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IchiGUN
Kiddo-Kun, thanks for mod :)
wowshakhov
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wowshakhov
Fixed everything except 00:44:830 (1). I'll probably map this part later.
athiota33
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athiota33
[Easy]

02:24:523 (4) - Add finish in the begining?
02:31:907 - Normal hitsound start here? it more fit
02:31:907 (1) - Add finish

[Normal]

00:32:830 (5) - Remove finish? a bit noisy
00:59:599 (1) - Finish instead of clap?
01:29:599 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Use some slider?
02:13:907 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
02:17:138 (8) - Add finish?

[Hard]

Fine

[Insane]

Fine

Nice map!
Good luck :D
IchiGUN
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IchiGUN

athiota33 wrote:

Nice map!
Good luck :D
Thank you very much ;)
-Hyde
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-Hyde
Easy
00:05:138 - http://puu.sh/f2QR
02:39:292 - Remove NC

Normal
01:38:830 - Remove NC
02:39:292 - ^

Hard
… 00:51:753 – Remove MC
00:58:907 –Add new combo
00:59:599 - Remove NC
01:32:830 - ^

Insane
00:13:446 - Remove NC
01:19:446 - Unnecessary NC
01:32:830 - Remove NC
02:33:984 - Add NC

Good Luck~
Maya-kira
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Maya-kira
hello. I think I forget to update so maybe my mod is not the latest update of the map T_T;; please deal with it orz~ from mini maya.

-easy-

00:36:523- (3) I think it'll looks better 1 grid right.
00:37:907- (1) You better map this part @_@;; imo.
00:42:061- (1) it feels really weird here o_o;; I think it becomes better when you add a note at 00:41:599
01:02:369- (3) I don't think this slider fits the flow well. consider to change it?
01:34:676- (1,2) I think this pattern flows better.
SPOILER
02:20:369- (4) place it at 256,48?
02:47:138- (2) I don't think this slider's reverse fits well @_@;;

-normal-

00:16:676- (4,5,6) I'm not sure about this, but imo, this kind of slider is dangerous D: better put a 1/1 slider with a note afterward rather than 3x 1/2 slider @_@;;
something like this :
00:57:292- (1,2,3) this one is fine for me because its the reff @_@;;
01:16:676- (5,6,7) I'd suggest you change this to reverse slider since it'll be easier for 'normal'
01:18:753- (2) one reverse is enough -_-;
01:36:984- (4) new combo here instead of at 01:38:830
02:36:523- (1) this actually starts 1/2 beat later isn't it..

actually I want to mod more here ;w;'' From the pattern, I would like to say that I like easy's pattern better.

-hard-

SV is definitely too high T_T;; I don't think you can call this 'hard' with that SV. skipping this diff T_T

-insane-

00:12:984- (1,2,3,4) imo, this pattern flows better xD
SPOILER
01:16:907- (4) I think it'll flow better if you ctrl+r here xD
02:19:446- (1,2,...7) pattern them to a 'C' letter would flow much better,
02:27:984- (4) I think slider would fit better o3o~
02:38:369- (5,6) add something like this?

03:03:292- (2) place it in the center?

THIS IS AWESOME xD
I like this diff.
BCI
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BCI
most of them were ignored ;W;
but still, thank you _HydeSama_ and Maya-kira :3

Download: 4minute - WHY (IchiGUN) [Easy].osu
IchiGUN
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IchiGUN
_HydeSama_ and Maya-kira, thanks a lot :3
Kawayi Rika
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Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ IchiGUN ~ :)

Mod time for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Remove Enable countdown.
  2. Remove Letterbox during breaks,because have video.

[Insane]


  1. CZ+1 will be fun.
  2. 00:55:965 - Unused timing line Remove pls.
  3. 01:19:907 - Add finish.
  4. 01:21:753 - ^
  5. 03:02:369 (6,1) - Try overlap this.

[Hard]


  1. 02:33:753 (1) - This is unrankable error,Add new combo to here.

[Normal]


  1. 00:17:138 - Remove finish.
  2. 00:59:369 - Add note will be better.
  3. 00:55:907 (1) - This is unrankable error,Add new combo to here.
  4. 00:59:599 (1) - Add finish.
  5. 01:54:061 (5) - Repeat should end to here 01:54:523.
  6. 02:33:753 (1) - This is unrankable error,Add new combo to here.
  7. 02:59:369 - Add note will be better.

That's all ~ nice mapset ~

Good luck ~ ;)
IchiGUN
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IchiGUN
Ooo...thanks for modding Kawayi Rika :333
CatenOK
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CatenOK
карта очень нравится,так держать,покарать всех ;3
Удачки тебе ;3 гоу гоу гоу к новым =Р
Colin Hou
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Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. Artist: 4Minute, plz follow this post when change it.
  2. spinner-background.jpg is a bit too bright (especially for the video), try to find a better one?
  3. spinner-spin.png, spinner-osu.png, spinner-clear.png are default ones? remove them if that's true.
[Hard]:
  1. 01:07:907 (5,6,7) - starting position is a bit weired cuz of the stacking, find a better place?
  2. 02:59:830 (5,6,7) - this is totally ok (compared with ^
[Insane]:
  1. 02:36:753 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - things can be much cooler if you follow exactly the how the rap goes. and this happened a lot after here.
[Normal]:
  1. 00:31:676 (3,4,5) - nazi spacing, cancel grid snapping might help
歩くsounds like 歩ぶ orz
cool song~

I'm wondering if you can find a video with better quality, anyway send me a PM after your fixes.
Ranger
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Ranger
Hi~
From my queue

[Easy]
00:42:061 (1) - Increased spacing accuracy,Put in x:124 y:84
00:47:599 (3) - I think straight view better.Put in x:128 y:160
00:49:907 (3) - How about change like this?more Symmetry
SPOILER

I`m sorry,i don`t know how to give a code :(
01:01:446 (1) - I think in the middle is good to me(Put in x:256 y:244)
01:01:907 (2,3) - ^(x:256 y:156)
01:10:215 (4) - Add Finish the end
01:14:369 (1) - Add Finish
02:47:138 (2) - spacing error.Put in x:68 y:276

[Normal]
00:58:907 (4,5,6,1) - I think lt`s hard to beginner.how about change like this?(Just suggestion)
SPOILER
02:58:907 (7,8,9,1) - ^some reason.Change some.

[Hard]
00:51:753 (8) - Add NC?
01:41:830 (11) - Remove circle
01:42:061 (1) - Move at 01:41:830 and increase 01:43:676
I think feel better like this
02:21:753 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - hard :?
How about reduce the spacing?

[Insane]
Good Insane! wow :)

That`s all
this is korean Musician song,light?
Go Go Rank~
IchiGUN
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Colin Hou and [Ranger] thanks :3

Colin Hou wrote:

I'm wondering if you can find a video with better quality, anyway send me a PM after your fixes.
I uploaded new quality video, but size is increased to + 4mb (previous 13mb, now 17mb)
It's okay? :?
Colin Hou
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Colin Hou
sure
bmin11
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[Insane]
02:26:830 (6,7) - Couldn't really get why you increased the spacing here. Could have just kept it with the small spacing.
02:33:753 (3) - New combo

[Hard]
Smaller hit circles then [Insane]...? Interesting. Even though it feels some what odd, but I can't see why not lol
00:53:599 (3,1) - This needs a larger spacing in between. Just separate them a little bit for the impression.
02:17:599 (1~) - you used a larger spacing then [Insane] for this part. Seems out of unity. Even [Hard] seems harder then [Insane] for this part. May consider lowering the spacing.

That's all from me. Good luck!
IchiGUN
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IchiGUN

bmin11 wrote:

That's all from me. Good luck!
Thanks ;)
Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
Изя ничё так и инсейн ничё так, но вот нормал и особенно хард. Из-за квадратности и не ровных слайдеров мне они не понравились.
IchiGUN
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IchiGUN

Louis Cyphre wrote:

Изя ничё так и инсейн ничё так, но вот нормал и особенно хард. Из-за квадратности и не ровных слайдеров мне они не понравились.
Увы. Ничего менять уже не буду =)
Colin Hou
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bUbbled!

genre seems to be Japanese lol (pop of course
IchiGUN
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IchiGUN

Colin Hou wrote:

bUbbled!
Thanks a lot :D
My first bubble (〃⌒▽ ⌒)
IceBeam
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IceBeam
привет

может намапишь все же интро в нормале и харде? там совсем немного вроде - но будет намного лучше
и еще скин файлы требуют .png формата,переведи в него спиннер-бэкграунд + фулл-сабмит

и ещё размер видео удручает D:
я качал очень долго,еще больше пережать нельзя?

[Easy]
00:00:523 (1) - слайдер не идеально симметричен,но хотя бы на 1 грид влево бы подвинуть
00:34:676 (2) - тоже поработать бы над симметрией
01:11:138 - почему брейк отсюда начинается? должен с 01:10:907
01:20:369 (3) - подвинь средний вейпоинт на 1 грид вправо хотя бы,будет лучше
01:23:138 - вот тут нотки не хватает,советую добавить
02:54:061 (2) - опять же симметрия,2 грида вправо

[Normal]
01:32:830 (1) - ох,сделай-ка ты лучше другую форму,выглядит не очень,мягко говоря
01:58:676 - добавь сюда ноту,либо перетащи сюда брейк (просто кликни на его начале,и перетащи мышью)
02:24:984 (2) - лучше уж начни нк отсюда
02:30:522 (1) - я бы вообще начал спиннер с 02:29:830,так намного лучше,а закончил бы на 02:31:907 - под звук

[Hard]
00:30:061 (1,2,3) - тут всё,конечно,читаемо,так что можно оставить как есть,но на будующее - соблюдай спейсинг,тут он совсем неверный
01:18:753 (2,3,4,5) - нет,ну..правда не нужны эти джампы тут -_-
01:20:599 (8,9) - старайся не стаковать таким образом 1/2 слайдеры,т.к. при игре стакинг не появляется - это баг осу
поэтому,абсолютно не видно начала 2-го слайдера,так что измени их или сделай стак вручную:
SPOILER
01:51:292 (1) - стакни с (8) или дальше отодвинь,слишком близко сейчас
02:04:215 (1,2,3,4) - опять же стаки

[Insane]
00:13:446 (1) - убери нк
00:22:676 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - этна-стрим как-то совсем сюда не подходит,лучше уж просто реверс-слайдеры
02:00:870 (2,3) - я писал про это в харде,нужно сделать вручную стак
02:01:793 (2,3) - ^
02:49:907 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - если бы не вистл на (3) - был бы совсем ужас,можно оставить конечно,но очень странный спейсинг

вот,и желательно получить ребабл (или хотя бы чтобы колин ху написал что перепроверил и всё ок),а то слишком длинный мод вышел - а я всё же хочу ранкнуть,а не бабл возвращать
IchiGUN
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IceBeam, thanks again.
Всё исправил :3
Colin Hou
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[Easy]:
  1. 01:22:215 (1,2,3) - sorry no jump in easy plz
  2. 02:47:138 (2) - shape this better?
[Normal]:
  1. 02:21:984 (1,2) - place them somewhere not touching each other?
[Insane]:
  1. 02:26:138 (5,6,7,1) - nazi spacing
:]
IchiGUN
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Colin Hou, thanks again ^-^ Done
Colin Hou
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rebubbled
IchiGUN
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Colin Hou wrote:

rebubbled
\:D/
IceBeam
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the band is korean but this single is japanese so genre will be pop (japanese)

ranked

поздравляю с 1-ой мапкой!
IchiGUN
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IceBeam, большое спасибо! ^^
Reiji-RJ
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Oshiete tte tte te te te <3
Поздравляю!
kosiga
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IchiGUN !! Congratulations :) :)
Colin Hou
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congratz for the first rank~ :D keep moving!
IchiGUN
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Reiji-RJ, спасяб ^^
kosiga, どうもありがとうございました :33333
Colin Hou, thanks =)
Kawayi Rika
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wow nice

Omedeto ichiGUN ~ :)
BCI
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грацую :3
Ibuki Suika
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@Why
Maya-kira
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congratulations xD
IchiGUN
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Thanks again :3
yeahyeahyeahhh
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yeahyeahyeahhh
Tell my WHY WHY WHY is this shit categorized as Japanese



Korea OP
Andrea
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Fixed now~
Sure
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Sure

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

Tell my WHY WHY WHY is this shit categorized as Japanese



Korea OP
NO, it's Japanese. D:
Fix back.
Colin Hou
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lyrics: japanese ＋ little english

this is why i mentioned the genre when bubble
Last edited by Colin Hou , edited 1 time in total.
IceBeam
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IceBeam wrote:

the band is korean but this single is japanese so genre will be pop (japanese)

ranked

поздравляю с 1-ой мапкой!
meh
Andrea
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Oops, sorry guys :P

I should read more next time xD
YunBora
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МАПА ГАВНОООО
ГАВНООООООО
yeahyeahyeahhh
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yeahyeahyeahhh

ykcarrot wrote:

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

Tell my WHY WHY WHY is this shit categorized as Japanese



Korea OP
NO, it's Japanese. D:
Fix back.
way to ruin troll :(
Roddie
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yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

way to ruin troll :(
>yfw

SPOILER
;)

Oh, and congrats, IchiGUN.
yeahyeahyeahhh
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yeahyeahyeahhh
Indeed good sir :(
TicClick
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Ух ты, я это когда-то модил. Поздравляю же!
IchiGUN
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TicClick wrote:

Ух ты, я это когда-то модил. Поздравляю же!
спс :3
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WoWWW :o
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