Thank you very much AngelEyE!~ I like your images that you made! >w<d and I'm sorry it took a little long before I went online again ==' (Christmas and such...)
Thanks for fixing!AngelEyE wrote:
LRC mistakes sorry! now fixed! and I add “creator’s name” LOL!
Thanks for modding eikka!~ >w<eikkaleyd wrote:
From Anshi and eikka's modding queue.Oh my poor English again (?
[Normal]
01.30.925 (4) I think it should be over (3)..? sure :3
03.27.999 (4) ^ fixed.
01.50.681 (7) Copy the slider (6) and CTRL+R you mean "03:50:681? if that's so, then I'm not so rue about it but I fixed it for the mean time, and might be changed back to the original in the near future. =w=
[Hard]
You can put notes further because it's a hard diff. I'm not so sure about changing the DS. It would require a lot of work remapping (or semi-remapping, meh I don't know what to call it.) and would take some time. So no changes for now, but I'm still thinking about this.
Don't know how to change distance spacing? use ALT and your mouse.XD
01.21.413 (3) too close fixed.
01.49.584 (7) 1/4 shorter, from here to 01.50.316 fixed.
04.17.936 (2) doesn't snap well not so sure about what to do here but made some little changes. fixed.
04.23.242 (4) strange....shape? fixed.
Really nice song and nice map. I like your SB too. thanks!~ >w<
Fight on~
Thanks for modding Leyko!~ >w<Leyko wrote:
Hey, I'm from #modreq I love this song, so i wanted to help.
General:
Why did you pick the full version of this song? You could've used a short one from the game o.o meh I prefer this one
Hitsounds:
How about using a blank hitsound for soft-sliderslide?
I think it sounds smoother: http://puu.sh/dkzL ok. fixed.
Also, at some points the finish hitsound really makes my ears explode :'D
So use this soft-hitfinish for these parts: http://puu.sh/dkAp fixed. but I only applied it to the parts where I want it to be. :3
And also this one is for soft-hitclap (really recommended): http://puu.sh/dkAx ok. fixed.
Add claps in this order: http://puu.sh/dkCn But don't overuse them so much xD I'll try to put that where I think it's good to be put
Okay, done with the hitsounds.
Man... I don't think these combo colors fit the background (especially the green one) .A.
So here's my suggestion:
[Colours]
Combo1 : 154,250,226
Combo2 : 57,210,203
Combo3 : 44,143,108
Combo4 : 224,224,224
All fixed
Normal:
HP - 1 ok fixed.
And maybe AR - 1? Since the slider's speed is pretty slow. sure. fixed.
01:28:364 (1) - Sliders such as this one don't fit to the smooth atmosphere of this song. Make them more curvy plz~sure. fixed. XD
01:33:852 (4) - Replace it with a slider like this? : http://puu.sh/dkE3 oh ok. fixed. XD
01:39:706 (4) - ^ fixed.
04:00:925 (1) - Um... Remove NC. oh what the... where the hell did that come from? anyways fixed. XD
04:40:438 (1,2,3) - Very confusing, even for me @.@ At least make (1) repeat only once and fix the distances. fixed.
Hard:
AR - 1 no change. I think it looks better this way
Why are you using 0.8x spacing? 1.0x would fit better imo. still thinking about this since the previous mod. no change for now
Do something about the sliders X_X They all look... linear and boring. Curve theeemmm! ~~~ I'll change what I can... XD
00:31:474 (5) - this slider confused me really bad... fixed.
00:53:242 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6...) - I like the idea here, but the whole pattern looks.. flat o.o Try experementing there. sure.
Also i realised that the notes repeat at some parts (03:08:242 - example), which only brought back my first question again xD
Oh well, it's your solution. oki
Here, I hope i helped you somehow .3.
Good luck!^^
Thanks for modding Thite!~ >w<Thite wrote:
hi
Normal
00:27:999 (4) - try to make this slider looks nice? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/219763 oh oki :3 Fixed.
01:39:706 (4) - change this note to slider like 01:33:852 (4) ? oh yes I forgot to do thatXD Fixed.
02:24:340 (1) - remove new combo where the heck did that come from O.O Fixed.
04:40:986 (2) - bit confused, how about delete this note? oki. Fixed :3
Hard
00:43:730 (1,1) - remove new combo oh oki :3 Fixed.
04:17:936 (2) - this slider isn't snapped oh I didn't notice thatXD Fixed.
good luck~ Hai!~ >w<
Thanks for modding and your star athiota33!!! >w<athiota33 wrote:
Miku!!~ <3 >w<
[Normal]SPOILERI think slider tick rate 2 is more fit but i'm not sure,you can ask someone about that. ok I'll be having this since I find it good but still open for changes. :3
00:24:340 (3) - Try different placement? I think it looks good if you not stack it with (1) okay fixed~
01:54:706 (4) - NC? okay
01:55:803 (x) - Add slider and end it at 01:56:169? this slider would be too fast. No change
02:36:779 (7) - Ctrl+H? it looks more good (don't forget to fix spacing after this note) I still prefer the present one :< No change
02:41:535 (6) - Add finish? oki, Fixed~
03:31:291 (5) - NC? okay fixed~
03:45:925 (4) - ^ okay fixed~
03:51:779 (6) - ^ okay fixed~
04:13:365 (7) - Same as 02:36:779 (7) No change :<
04:26:536 (6,1) - Don't stack this note Fixed~
04:35:681 (3) - NC? Fixed~
Still have a problem with the combo
[Hard]SPOILERAR -1 or -2 okay, I subtracted 1. But still open for changes
01:25:438 (4) - Weird rhytmh fixed~
01:57:633 - Break start here like normal diff? fixed~
03:22:511 (4) - Weird rhytmh
Same as normal
That's all~
Star!
Thanks for modding -Bakari-! >w<-Bakari- wrote:
Hi.
I'm noob. Ignore if it's wrong
Hard
00:47:389 (1,2,3,4,5) - you can try to make here a star http://puu.sh/ewIG Made some near change. Fixed.
00:50:316 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^ Fixed.
02:29:828 (4) - new combo? Fixed.
02:35:681 (6) - ^ No change :<
03:09:157 (4) - shorter and move to 03:09:340 - No change :<
04:37:511 - maybe circle here? Fixed.
Normal
00:38:974 (4) - New combo? Fixed.~
03:33:852 (1) - delete new combo? Fixed.~
03:52:511 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - try this http://puu.sh/ewKk No change :<
Thanks for your modding and stars Shana Aisaka!!! >w<Shana Aisaka wrote:
Hi Kirino-san >///<" ~ Mod request In-game ~ so i mod :3
Red - Fix it. and some of it is a suggestion..
[General]
Well... it's fine.. but some of your sliders looks ugly? thanks!~ >w<
[Normal]
01:45:742(4) = this doesn't fit the sound . please move it to 01:45:925 end slider on 01:47:023 . :3 Fixed :3
01:56:901(x) = how about add some note here?? >w<" http://puu.sh/eDj1 oki Fixed :3
if you agreed to put note here then, 01:57:633 = whistle+finish. [color=#FF4000]Fixed :3
03:50:681(4) = Spacing ~ ikrXD Fixed.
04:26:901 = kiai time keep going?
if you agreed in ^ then please follow ↓↓↓↓
04:32:572 = end kiai time. 04:32:755 = kiai time here . 04:44:462 = end kiai time here.[/color] >///<" all fixed~ >w<
[Hard]
TIMING
00:40:803 = I this this timing doesn't needed.. [color=#FF4000]Fixed :3
01:10:072 = ^ I think I need this one :<
01:33:486 = ^ Fixed :3
end.[/color]
01:17:572(3,4) = this note doesn't fit the sound. please move this slider(3) to 01:17:755 and slider(4) to 01:18:486. like this http://puu.sh/eDqO . >///<" I like this one!~ >w< Fixed.
01:19:584(2) = slider look ugly to me. emm... change it to something like this? puu.sh/eDrf or you can change to something you like but please other then this http://puu.sh/eDrm . >///<" Fixed :3
01:23:242(2) = ^ [color=#FF4000]Fixed :3
01:31:291 = remove break time. I like to have a break time here No change.
01:45:742(2) = move your slider to 01:45:952 . end slider on 01:46:657 like this http://puu.sh/eDrR ?[/color] >///<" Fixed :3
Okay, that's all i got. >///<"
here star for you ~ (because i love Miku!! lol)
Thanks for mod and star Genkishi!Genkishi wrote:
Hi thar!!
[General]
-Delete "starduster" in tags because starduster is the title of the song so no need to put it ok fixed
-uncheck the letterbox during breaks what?
[Normal]
00:37:877 (3)-add clap at the beginning of the slider and then remove the clap at the end of the slider no change :<
00:39:340 (2)-add clap if you do ^ ^
00:41:535 (1)-whistle here? ok fixed.
00:41:535 (1,2,3)-i suggest that you change the beat here..so the player wont be bored when playing..add whistle in (1) and also remove the clap,add whistle instead at the end of the slider (2), replace the clap with whistle in (3)..(do this when you followed my suggestion) I get your point here but I made some different changes. 01:50:681 (7)-move this slider in x:176 y:368..if you do fix the spacing of the following notes ok fixed.
01:54:706 (1):make this slider like this fixed.
01:56:169 (2,3,4,5):if you do ^..fix the spacing like this fixed.
03:25:986 (1)-make the slider like this fixed.
[Hard]
00:29:096 (8)-remove clap and add whistle fixed.
00:40:803 (2)-^ fixed.
01:12:084 (3)-symmetry for this slider fixed.
01:19:584 (2)-ugly slider..make it like this much better fixed.
01:23:242 (2)-^ fixed.
01:45:560 (1)-remove new combo fixed.
02:38:425 (2)-give much effort when it comes to slider!! like this.. lol XD fixed.
02:41:352 (2)-^ fixed.
03:16:657 (2)-ugly slider..make it like this much better fixed.
03:20:316 (2)-^ fixed.
04:15:011 (2)-as i said in 02:38:425.. fixed.
04:17:938 (2)-^ fixed.
04:43:730 (1)-slider like this fixed.
I suggest you use this hit sound http://www.mediafire.com/?elo5z1hnwbhnunn only for "Kiai parts"
I'll be thinking about this one^
Good map
Goodluck KiKo!!!!!!!!! aka cousin lol
Nymph wrote:
Hi Nymph here and request from ingame. Hello~ >w<
General:
approachcircle.png is 130x130. you'd better make it128x128. fixed.
kiai times are different:
- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 02:21:047, ends on 02:50:316
Kiai #2: Starts on 03:57:633, ends on 04:26:901
- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 02:21:047, ends on 02:50:316
Kiai #2: Starts on 03:57:633, ends on 04:32:572
Kiai #3: Starts on 04:32:755, ends on 04:44:462
Fixed~ Kiai times are now consistent :3
Normal:
Issues
OD 5 is a little high for a diff like this, I suggest -1 at least. fixed.
Beatmap design/suggestion
01:48:852 (4,5,6) - spacing here seems a little smaller compared with others. coolXD fixed.
02:25:803 (2) - maybe make the spacing more consistent. (many places are similar like this, maybe try to make them more beautiful? fixed.
02:27:633 (1,2) - this rhythm pattern feels a little weird, I still prefer slider first then note. (some pattern are similar with this, although I thought they maybe a little werid, but maybe just me and they are totally acceptable so I am gonna to mention them again. made changes.
02:32:023 (6) - 1/4 beats didn't fit here imo. 02:38:242 (2) - this is much better. nah it is also acceptable though. no change :<
04:43:730 (6) - slow down slider isn't quite safe in a normal diff like this.... at least add a new combo? added NC, fixed.
Hitsound
00:36:413 (1) - you started to use claps on the 1st and 3rd white tick, which feel a little weird, cuz you always using 2nd and 4th white ticks clap before and after 00:41:535 (1). So I think it is better to keep the same hitsound pattern here. fixed.
01:33:852 (4) - 01:39:706 (4) - I am not quite sure why you use silence slider tail here, cuz it didn't give me a very good feeling about the silence. added some volume. fixed.
01:34:218 (1) - 01:40:072 (1) - Do you make these spinners have a different volumn on purpose? cuz it is much better to have a same volumn imo of these spinners. fixed.
01:56:169 (3,4,5,6) - I didn't quite agree with the hitsound pattern you got here, 2 finishes seems too much. So here is my ideas: ① delete the finish on 3. add whistle on 5, and delete whistle on 6. or: ② delete the finish on 3, add finish on 5, silence 6. You maybe want to try these^^; made some changes >w<
03:31:291 (1) - why volumn 100? too loud.. made some changes >w<
Hard:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:29:462 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ...too early to use a pattern like these imo. Deleted some notes~
00:43:364 (1) - this is too far away.... fixed.
00:47:389 (1) - .... owo?
Hitsound
I really think maybe add claps during the kiai make be better, whistle are too weak imo.
00:57:633 (1) - missing clap? I did that for some purpose :3
03:08:608 (2) - whistle? fixed.
03:16:657 (2) - ^(not gonna mention these, just try to make your whistle more consistent. fixed.
03:18:852 (5) - add finish on 03:19:584? fixed.
I'm not yet finished fixing all because I need to ask some questions><Aleks719 wrote:
Meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeh
Electricity was turned off and i lost my long mod :<
i will write all shorter:
Folder
remove hidden folder "originals" with approach circle from map's folder
remove thumbs.db from SB folder
hitcircle.png is not a circle. note is bigger than circlecool, fixed all. and for hitcircle, I'm gonna delete it :< I just copied this from other vocaloid maps but you said it's not a circle, so I think deleting it would be better :3
SB
I wrote a lot of text here...
sb is good, but code is so messy and contains tons of useless lines. also loops can make it even shorter. Use notepad please.
Write me in game for fixing or i could remake code for you later, but only if you can't
I don't know how to use notepad in storyboarding... TAT
General
Turn off letterboxes, cuz of SB in breaks no change for the first break cause there's no SB there :3, and I think that's the only break with letterbox? (I'm not really sure what letterbox means)
Tick rate 2 in Hard please fixed~
I got offset 552 (-8 from yours). Resnap objects, kiai, sections, sb. I need help for this one, for I don't quite know things about resnapping ><
Not sure in these tags : "hatsune miku vocaloid". fixed~
Recheck is possible after theses fixes.
Thanks for modding and star kosiga! >w<kosiga wrote:
hi~ Kirino Kousaka Hello!~
from m4m queue~ sorry for late lol I don't mind, It's okay
here my mod~
[General]Fixed~
- Song folder - SB - q.png「闇闇に飲まれないように」 ⇒change 「暗闇に飲まれないように」、 v.png「そうやって消えて?くなる」 ⇒change「そうやって消えて無くなる」 http://puu.sh/gJ0C hmm, I have to contact the one who made the lyrics for this XD
- Song Setup - Source - Vocaloid2⇒ maybe 「JimmyThumb P」 is correct. and vocaloid2 move to tags. Like this http://osu.ppy.sh/s/26222
[Normal]
- 00:29:828 (1) - spacing too far? (0.99x) Fixed~
- 00:41:535 (7) - add NC ( too long NC for normal diff >< ) Fixed~
- 01:11:535 - remove green line Fixed~
- 01:25:803 (5) - add NC ? oh okXD Fixed~
- 01:33:852 (4,1) - Suggestion of rhythm: 4slider end 01:34:218 , and 1spinner start 01:34:401 Fixed~
- 01:34:035 - remove green line Fixed~
- 01:39:706 (4,1) - 01:33:852 (4,1) same Suggestion Fixed~
- 01:39:889 - remove green line Fixed~
- 01:48:852 (4) - add NC ? oh okXD Fixed~
- 02:20:316 - green line - hitsound S - I prefer use the S:1 ( same as hard diff ) Fixed~
- 02:38:242 - remove green line Fixed~
- 02:47:755 (4) - add NC ? Fixed~
- 03:22:876 (5) - ^ Fixed~
- 03:56:352 - remove green line Fixed~
- 03:56:901 - same 02:20:316 Fixed~
- 04:24:341 (4) - add NC ? Fixed~
- 04:38:608 (3) - add NC and 04:40:438 (1) - remove NC Fixed~
[Hard][SB]
- 00:27:267 (6) - add NC ? Fixed~
- 00:37:511 (4) - ^ Fixed~
- 00:38:608 (7) - remove NC and 00:38:974 (1) - add NC ? [color=#F4000]made changes~[/color]
- 00:41:169 (3) - add NC ( DS change point ) Fixed~
- 00:42:999 - remove green line Fixed~
- 00:43:730 (2) - add whistle ( same as 03:27:267 (4) repeat of the slider) Fixed~
- 01:24:889 (3) - Suggestion of rhythm: http://puu.sh/gJlT ( same as 01:19:584 (2,3) ) Fixed~
- 01:33:586 - remove green line Fixed~
- 01:34:218 (1) - Suggestion of rhythm:spinner start 01:34:401 and add note to 01:34:218 Fixed~
- 01:39:889 - remove green line Fixed~
- 01:40:072 (1) - 01:34:218(1) same Suggestion Fixed~
- 01:50:864 - remove green line Fixed~
- 02:22:145 (1) - remove NC and 02:23:242 (2) - add NC Fixed~
- 02:32:572 (1) - remove NC and 02:32:755 (2) - add NC Fixed~
- 02:38:242 - remove green line Fixed~
- 03:21:962 (3) - 01:24:889 same Suggestion Fixed~
- 03:28:364 - move Break time http://puu.sh/gJtE ⇒move like this http://puu.sh/gJu4 Fixed~
- 03:56:352 - remove green line ? Fixed~
- 03:58:730 (1) - remove NC and 03:59:827 (2) - add NC Fixed~
- 04:06:413 (4) - add NC ( same as 02:29:828 (1) ) Fixed~
- 04:09:157 (1) - remove NC and 04:09:340 (2) - add NC Fixed~
- 04:30:742 (4) - add NC and 04:31:657 (1) - remove NC and 04:32:755 (3) - add NC ? Fixed~
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F,0,168852,169584,0.3599999,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"whitebg.png",320,240 ⇒ remove line
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"whitebg.png",320,240
F,0,170316,171047,0.3548802,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"whitebg.png",320,240 ⇒ remove line
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\_title.png",320,240
M,0,20316,,208,353
F,0,20316,21047,0,1
F,0,21047,21779,1
F,0,21779,22511,1
F,0,22511,23242,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\a.png",320,240
F,0,23974,24706,0,1
M,0,23974,29096,316,338,373,337
F,0,24706,28364,1
F,0,28364,29096,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\b.png",320,240
F,0,29096,29828,0,1
M,0,29096,36413,357,356,291,354
F,0,29828,,1
F,0,29828,34950,1
F,0,34950,35681,1,0.001600037 ⇒ change F,0,34950,35681,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\c.png",320,240
F,0,35681,36413,0,1
M,0,35681,40803,201,277,257,278
F,0,36413,40072,1
F,0,40072,40803,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\d.png",320,240
F,0,40803,41535,0,1
M,0,40803,45194,410,368,342,369
F,0,41535,44462,1
F,0,44462,45194,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\e.png",320,240
F,0,70803,71535,0,1
M,0,70803,75925,248,323,302,322
F,0,71535,75194,1
F,0,75194,75925,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\f.png",320,240
F,0,75925,76657,0.1654401,1 ⇒ change F,0,75925,76657,0,1
M,0,75925,82511,413,385,376,385
F,0,76657,,1
F,0,76657,81779,1
F,0,81779,82511,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\g.png",320,240
F,0,82511,83242,0,1
M,0,82511,87633,228,331,273,333
F,0,83242,86901,1
F,0,86901,87633,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\h.png",320,240
F,0,87633,88364,0,1
M,0,87633,92023,420,330,383,331
F,0,88364,91291,1
F,0,91291,92023,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\i.png",320,240
F,0,92023,92755,0,1
M,0,92023,103730,278,335,365,335
F,0,92755,102999,1
F,0,102999,103730,1,0.02720001 ⇒ change F,0,102999,103730,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\j.png",320,240
F,0,103730,104462,0,1
M,0,103730,111047,412,378,343,376
F,0,104462,,1
F,0,104462,110316,1
F,0,110316,111047,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\k.png",320,240
F,0,111047,111779,0,1
M,0,111047,118364,261,297,320,295
F,0,111779,117633,1
F,0,117633,118364,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\z++.png",320,240
F,0,122023,122755,0,1
M,0,122023,125681,496,368,452,367
F,0,122755,124950,1
F,0,124950,125681,1,0.02720032 ⇒ change F,0,124950,125681,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\z++.png",320,240
F,0,128608,129340,0,1
M,0,128608,131535,141,285,188,282
F,0,129340,130803,1
F,0,130803,131535,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\z++.png",320,240
F,0,134462,135194,0,1
M,0,134462,137389,398,375,348,375
F,0,135194,136657,1
F,0,136657,137389,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\l.png",320,240
M,0,140316,,208,321
F,0,140316,141047,0,1
M,0,140316,146169,208,321,261,321
F,0,141047,145438,1
F,0,145438,146169,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\m.png",320,240
F,0,146169,146901,0,1
M,0,146169,152023,462,330,397,331
F,0,146901,151291,1
F,0,151291,152023,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\n.png",320,240
F,0,152023,152755,0,1
M,0,152023,157877,179,330,244,328
F,0,152755,,1
F,0,152755,157145,1
F,0,157145,157877,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\o.png",320,240
F,0,157877,158608,0,1
M,0,157877,170316,439,304,267,299
F,0,158608,169584,1
F,0,169584,170316,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\p.png",320,240
F,0,187877,188608,0,1
M,0,187877,192999,224,355,270,353
F,0,188608,192267,1
F,0,192267,192999,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\q.png",320,240
F,0,192999,193730,0.0118399,1 ⇒ change F,0,192999,193730,0,1
M,0,192999,199584,359,342,279,341
F,0,193730,198852,1
F,0,198852,199584,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\r.png",320,240
F,0,199584,200316,0,1
M,0,199584,204706,295,287,342,285
F,0,200316,203974,1
F,0,203974,204706,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\s.png",320,240
F,0,204706,205438,0,1
M,0,204706,209096,414,306,364,305
F,0,205438,208364,1
F,0,208364,209096,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\t.png",320,240
F,0,210560,211291,0,1
M,0,210560,216413,270,280,318,280
F,0,211291,215681,1
F,0,215681,216413,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\_w_1.png",320,240
F,0,20316,21047,0,1
M,0,20316,23974,159,90,208,90
F,0,21047,23242,1
F,0,23242,23974,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\u.png",320,240
F,0,216413,217145,0,1
M,0,216413,222267,338,409,306,408
F,0,217145,221535,1
F,0,221535,222267,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\v.png",320,240
F,0,222267,222999,0,1
M,0,222267,226657,303,332,337,333
F,0,222999,225925,1
F,0,225925,226657,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\w.png",320,240
F,0,226657,227389,0,1
M,0,226657,234706,420,408,329,408
F,0,227389,233974,1
F,0,233974,234706,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\x.png",320,240
F,0,236901,237633,0,1
M,0,236901,242023,237,280,295,278
F,0,237633,241291,1
F,0,241291,242023,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\y.png",320,240
F,0,242755,243486,0,1
M,0,242755,247877,410,317,352,315
F,0,243486,247145,1
F,0,247145,247877,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\z.png",320,240
F,0,248608,249340,0.02208008,1 ⇒ change F,0,248608,249340,0,1
M,0,248608,253730,232,359,289,361
F,0,249340,252999,1
F,0,252999,253730,1,0.001600037 ⇒change F,0,252999,253730,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\z+.png",320,240
F,0,254462,255194,0.005119934,1 ⇒change F,0,254462,255194,0,1
M,0,254462,259584,397,407,341,407
F,0,255194,258852,1
F,0,258852,259584,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\z++.png",320,240
F,0,260316,261047,0,1
M,0,260316,265438,167,248,238,245
F,0,261047,264706,1
F,0,264706,265438,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\z++.png",320,240
F,0,266169,266901,0,1
M,0,266169,271291,471,277,396,276
F,0,266901,270560,1
F,0,270560,271291,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\z++.png",320,240
F,0,272023,272755,0,1
M,0,272023,277145,225,320,287,321
F,0,272755,276413,1
F,0,276413,277145,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\z++.png",320,240
F,0,277877,278608,0,1
M,0,277877,282999,338,402,282,401
F,0,278608,282267,1
F,0,282267,282999,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\z++.png",320,240
F,0,283730,284462,0,1
M,0,283730,285925,399,277,412,276
F,0,284462,285194,1
F,0,285194,285925,1,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples
and add Suggestion :
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"whitebg.png",320,240
F,0,47389,50316,0.5,0
For this SB stuff above, I'll have to ask some help from Aleks719 lolXD
That's all~
nice map~ Star☆~ Thanks >w<
Good luck ~
yay thanks~ >w<AngelEyE wrote:
sorry for mistake
LRC fixed
yay thanks for helping me and stars >w<Aleks719 wrote:
irc help, some learning about SB, timing, stuff
http://puu.sh/gTit <= SB
part of irc mod...
18:12 <Aleks719> : did you make full submit after new osb file?
18:12 <Kirino Kousaka> : yes :3
18:13 <Kirino Kousaka> : why? didn't it change? :<
18:13 <Aleks719> : no...
18:13 <Aleks719> : wait i'll redl
18:13 <Kirino Kousaka> : ok :3
18:13 <Kirino Kousaka> : maybe I should re upload to be sure :3
18:13 <Aleks719> : wait
18:13 <Aleks719> : i'm 1st
18:14 <Kirino Kousaka> : okXD
18:14 <Aleks719> : yes, old sb
18:14 <Aleks719> : check your osb
18:14 <Aleks719> : size of it?
18:14 <Aleks719> : in kb?
18:14 <Kirino Kousaka> : ok I'll re upload :<
18:14 <Aleks719> : wait
18:15 <Aleks719> : size of osb
18:15 <Aleks719> : ?
18:15 <Kirino Kousaka> : kb
18:15 <Kirino Kousaka> : 10.4 kb
18:15 <Aleks719> : yes
18:15 <Aleks719> : wrong
18:15 <Aleks719> : go to folder
18:15 <Kirino Kousaka> : I should fix it again ok wait
18:15 <Aleks719> : remove it
18:16 <Kirino Kousaka> : deleted.
18:16 <Aleks719> : i can send you mine again
18:16 <Aleks719> : if you lost link
18:16 <Aleks719> : or better in archive?
18:16 <Kirino Kousaka> : umm wait I'll just scroll upXD
18:16 <Aleks719> : ok
18:17 <Aleks719> : save as
18:17 <Aleks719> : save in your folder
18:17 <Kirino Kousaka> : oki :3
18:17 <Aleks719> : page - save as
18:17 <Aleks719> : done?
18:19 <Kirino Kousaka> : done :3
18:19 <Aleks719> : quit from your map and go to it again.click on design : http://puu.sh/gTsO . How many "whitebg" you have?
18:20 <Kirino Kousaka> : 1
18:20 <Aleks719> : iyes
18:20 <Aleks719> : *yess
18:20 <Kirino Kousaka> : wow why one :<
18:20 <Aleks719> : now it works right
18:20 <Kirino Kousaka> : oh ok XD
18:20 <Aleks719> : no need in tons
18:20 <Aleks719> : weeeeell
18:20 <Aleks719> : now
18:20 <Kirino Kousaka> : I see :3
18:20 <Kirino Kousaka> : timing points~
18:20 <Kirino Kousaka> : XD
18:20 <Aleks719> : no
18:20 <Aleks719> : hitcircle
18:20 <Kirino Kousaka> : what :<
18:20 <Aleks719> : use this :
18:21 <Aleks719> : wait
18:21 <Aleks719> : i'll find
18:21 <Kirino Kousaka> : oki :3
18:21 <Aleks719> : http://puu.sh/gTtz
18:22 <Kirino Kousaka> : ok fixed :3
18:22 <Aleks719> : welll
18:23 <Aleks719> : pink arrow...
18:23 <Kirino Kousaka> : why :<
18:23 <Aleks719> : ok
18:23 <Aleks719> : well
18:23 <Kirino Kousaka> : XD
18:23 <Aleks719> : Hard
18:23 <Aleks719> : open osu
18:23 <Aleks719> : in notepad
18:24 <Aleks719> : SliderMultiplier:1.99999990463257
18:24 <Kirino Kousaka> : opened
18:24 <Aleks719> : 2.0
18:24 <Aleks719> : instead of 1.99999999
18:24 <Aleks719> : neeeeeext
18:24 <Aleks719> : scroll
18:24 <Kirino Kousaka> : done :3
18:24 <Aleks719> : until colours
18:25 <Kirino Kousaka> : ok
18:25 <Aleks719> : add line " SliderBorder : 255,255,255 "
18:25 <Aleks719> : below colours
18:25 <Kirino Kousaka> : below Combo4?
18:25 <Aleks719> : yes http://puu.sh/gTuo
18:26 <Kirino Kousaka> : done :3
18:26 <Aleks719> : add same line for normal
18:26 <Aleks719> : in notepad
18:27 <Kirino Kousaka> : done :3
18:27 <Aleks719> : quit from map in osu
18:27 <Aleks719> : after that
18:28 <Aleks719> : save files
18:28 <Aleks719> : in notepad
18:28 <Kirino Kousaka> : saved.
18:28 <Aleks719> : after that full submit. call me back after~
18:28 <Kirino Kousaka> : oki :3
18:34 <Kirino Kousaka> : done :3
18:37 <Aleks719> : looks correct now
18:38 <Aleks719> : weeeeeeell
18:38 <Aleks719> : diffs
18:38 <Kirino Kousaka> : thank goodness >w<
18:38 <Aleks719> : open normal
18:38 <Aleks719> : let's start from it
18:39 <Kirino Kousaka> : yay >w<
18:39 <Aleks719> : 01:34:210 - you tried to fix it,right?
18:40 <Kirino Kousaka> : yes :3
18:40 <Aleks719> : yes, you made all correct
18:40 <Aleks719> : i'll explain one more time
18:40 <Aleks719> : for future
18:40 <Kirino Kousaka> : oki :3
18:40 <Aleks719> : as example, next : 01:37:503 -
18:41 <Aleks719> : http://puu.sh/gTxX
18:41 <Aleks719> : you see, green line not at red, yes?
18:41 <Kirino Kousaka> : yes
18:42 <Aleks719> : set cursor on red
18:42 <Kirino Kousaka> : set :3
18:42 <Aleks719> : timing - timing setup panel
18:43 <Kirino Kousaka> : ok :3
18:43 <Aleks719> : well, use current time
18:43 <Aleks719> : and check in editor
18:44 <Kirino Kousaka> : oh shocks
18:44 <Kirino Kousaka> : EPIC.
18:44 <Aleks719> : lines should be
18:44 <Aleks719> : one on one
18:44 <Aleks719> :
18:44 <Kirino Kousaka> : now that's what I'm looking for.
18:44 <Kirino Kousaka> : >w<
18:44 <Aleks719> : fix others
18:44 <Aleks719> : and don't forget about sliders
18:45 <Kirino Kousaka> : one by one?
18:45 <Aleks719> : with slowdowns!
18:45 <Aleks719> : yes
18:45 <Kirino Kousaka> : ok orz
18:45 <Kirino Kousaka> : XD
18:45 <Aleks719> : when all will be fixed - standard submit
18:45 <Aleks719> : that's all
18:46 <Kirino Kousaka> : ok I'll call you when I'm done or when i have some question :3
18:46 <Aleks719> : oki
yay :3hoLysoup wrote:
marked. I will remember to mod this soon :>
Thanks for modding Hanyuu! >w<Hanyuu wrote:
Normal:
01:34:393 (1) - finish fixed~
01:40:247 (1) - finish fixed~
01:56:893 (4) - whistle fixed~
01:57:625 (5) - a finish sound go here too because i think the custom sound is very fitting :3.
The timing section is very low volume though.. so ad a new one for this circle with 50% or something to make it better to hear if you want to give this a finish sound. fixed~
03:07:869 (1) - this clap sound removed~ XD fixed~
04:10:430 (3) - finish on start no change for this one :<
04:11:527 (4) - finish fixed~
04:14:454 (1) - finish fixed~
I think on this part you should just keep with the normal sound samples. It's a bit better here than the custom
04:34:576 (2) - finish on that middle part
04:37:503 (2) - ^
04:38:600 (1) - finish on end
fixed all^ and remapped/made some few changes on "04:41:161" up to the end.
Hard:
01:10:064 (2) - the standard finish on end of slider fixed~
01:16:649 (2) - forgot whistle at end :p fixed~
02:20:308 (1) - whistle on the start. It does not really matter i think but you did that in the normal diff so i thought i point it out . see also here 3:56:893 fixed~
02:31:466 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - try a sound section with normal sample and 35% volume for those notes (remove whistles) see also here 4:07:869 fixed~
02:37:869 (1,2) - those sliders you used here arent fitting so good.
The #2 should be on the white tick and the #1 extended to the blue. As it is now #2 sounds to go off too early No change for this one cause I'm not so sure :<
Great map and i don't think there is really anything wrong with or to mod! Really? >w<
So i gave as much as advice to improve it anymore.I also added a custom soft hit sound in the attachement if you like to use it.
Okay that is not working i don't know why... here is a download link then: http://puu.sh/h7R8. Okay!~ fixed. :3
Unfortunetely i have no kudosus star to give for this map i would awww .___. thanks anyway
Try finding someone to approve :p I will~ >w<
Thanks for modding hoLysoup! >w<hoLysoup wrote:
hihi~
I'm sorry I take so long~
[Hard]
Unrankable thing: you are using more than 3 SV in this difficulty please fix this.
02:20:308 (1) - it's right here, you should just use 0.75x. thanks!~ fixed!~
00:57:625 (1) - how come clap is missing here? this is intentional? yes it is... quite XD
01:10:064 (2) - NC this because the SV is quite slow compared to from start until now. 01:09:515 (1) - and then you can remove NC from this if you'd like or not it's both fine. Removed on "01:09:515 (1)". Fixed.
03:24:332 (6) - move the 2nd waypoint to x:160 y:268? makes the slider parallel to the long one. I find this a bit hard to do
03:54:698 (1) - for this spinner, my suggestion is that use 40% volume for the spinner and then silence the spinner end(5%). It creates a good effect for the upcoming kiai section. also 75% volume for this spinner is too loud. sure, fixed
[Normal]
Unrankable thing: you are using more than 3 SV in this difficulty please fix this.
03:56:893 (1) - it's right here, you should just use 0.75x. thanks!~ fixed!~
00:41:527 (1,2) - maybe move (2) away from (1)? for example move it somewhere on the right side because the rhythm could be confusing when the spacing seem close. Fixed!~
02:50:308 - make kiai end here please oops, my bad, I must have did something that caused this thanks~ fixed~
03:29:820 (1,2) - maybe remove these 2 beats..? because you always follow the vocals but these 2 don't :< it looks better if they're here, no change :<
03:54:698 (1) - same spinner suggestion as Hard diff Fixed!~
04:43:356 (7,1) - fix spacing please~ Aimod said there's nothing wrong with the spacing :<
ok that's all!
there's enough stars so I will save one :> aw okay
good luck! hai!~
I'm sorry for the late reply and fix, I was busy and not able to fix my map.wcx19911123 wrote:
yo
[General]
offset is really off to me , 562(+10) is much better fixed~
need to add vocaloid to tags fixed~
plz cancel letterbox during breaks , or it looks very weird at break time fixed~
hitsound is kinda quiet imo , volume up a bit? It seems fine to me :<
[Normal]
00:31:283 (4) - this direction is confusing , it is hard to know how many times the slider repeats made some changes~
02:19:576 - remove whistle here , it sound kinda odd to me fixed~
02:32:015 (7) - this kind of slider is hard to read for newbies imo , I suggest you not repeat it , or at least not stack it with circle fixed~ hitcircle unstacked.
04:08:600 (7) - ^ fixed~
04:31:649 (3) - yes , so something like this , this is much better than ^ okay~
04:43:722 (1) - I strongly suggest not to slow down the slider here , it doesn't fit the song at all and it is really confusing , even it has a slider tick fixed~
[Hard]
difficulty is too high , at least AR-1 and OD-1 plz Many suggests that I should have AR 8, only OD-1
00:47:381 - 01:10:064 - this part is too loud imo , volume down a bit plz fixed~
01:23:052 - add note? fixed~
02:22:137 (4) - this sldier's direction is confusing , too made some changes~
02:31:466 - 02:32:564 - there notes are too quiet imo , volume up a bit plz fixed~
03:20:125 - add note? fixed~
03:52:137 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - try normal hitsound here? maybe volume down a bit fixed~
03:58:722 (4) - same as before made some changes~
04:08:052 - same.. fixed~
ok , diffs are rankble , but
I just think rhyme is really boring , you can try to follow more things , not only vocal or drums
and notes is really too closed to each other , I suggest you increase spacing a bit , and put some jumps somewhere(and don't jump randomly, jump to fit the song) , then I think the map would be much better
seems this need more works , anyway , good luck thanks~
Thanks for your mod M a n a!~M a n a wrote:
Random mod :3
[Hard]
OD-1? Because this is relax song and more fit IMO >< fixed!~
00:39:708 (2) - Maybe make it more pretier like this? fixed!~00:57:635 (1) - Missing clap? okay fixed~ since there are lots of mods telling thisXD
01:12:086 (5,1) - Same as 03:09:159 (4,1) what? No change.
01:19:586 (2) - Same as 03:16:659 (2) ^
01:23:244 (3) - ^ ^
01:56:354 - Maybe break start at 01:57:635? I can't because they told me to get rid of letterboxes. No change.
02:32:025 (5) - Maybe add hitsound here? Added "whistle"~
03:09:159 (4,1) - Maybe make it like this? made some little changes~03:16:659 (2) - ^ Sorry no change :<03:20:318 (3) - ^ ^
03:54:708 (1) - Remove whistle? okay~
04:20:683~04:42:818 - The hitsounds are weird. Because at 03:56:903~04:19:952 you use only finish sound. and at this part you only use whistle sound ><. It sounds weird to me. Make it consistent? Hmm, I actually made this on purpose. I used finishes in the main part of the chorus as it's "climax" and my reason for putting these whistles instead of finishes in the ending part because it is like the "falling action" part of the map. No changes made.
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01:30:927 (4) - Don't stack it? Previous mods says that I should make something like this, but I kinda agreed to your point. Fixed~
03:28:001 (4) - ^ ^
03:54:708 (1) - Remove whistle? Fixed~
Nice~
That's all~
Nice map! Thanks!~ >w<