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LunarSakuya
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Leorda wrote:

Hello there

General
* You need spinner-background, spinner-approachcircle.png, cursortrail.png. It's a weird skin without that......Alright will do that
* The lyrics has an unused transparent background. Please crop it, or it'll be lag for ancient PC I'll...try...maybe
* It seems lyric10.png are not used...... Okay
* Remove all kiai and start the kiai at 02:07:151 and end the kiai at 02:34:977 Fixed
* Remove "english" in tags, since that word is in Genre after BAT ranked this Fixed
* I don't like if black space has the red spot Oh....Uh...idk I'll wait till someone else says something about it
* Since you have an SB, uncheck the "Letterbox during breaks" Fixed

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Easy
* AR +1?

00:43:673 (1) - The sliderborder is overlapped by previous slider (Nazi) Fixed
00:47:151 (3) - New combo Fixed
00:48:890 (1) - Remove new combo Fixed
00:54:107 (4) - New combo Fixed
01:30:629 (1) - Remove new combo Fixed
01:34:108 (1) - ^ Fixed
01:35:846 (3) - New combo Fixed
01:37:586 (1) - Remove new combo Fixed
02:47:151 (1) - ^ Fixed
02:57:586 (1) - ^ Fixed

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Normal
00:34:542 (2,3,4,5) - These stacks are make me boring..... Fixed
00:39:325 (2) - You using many repeating slider with short slider. This issue makes beginners go confusing about when the slider is end Fixed
00:43:673 (1) - I don't like this single combo on single object Fixed
02:39:325 (3) - Same issue as 00:39:325 (2) Fixed?
02:56:064 (3) - New combo
02:57:803 (1) - Remove new combo

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Hard
00:29:542 ~ 00:43:673 (S) - This distance spacing for this part is 1,3x. You must to use 1,4x for this part, like others spacing Fixed kinda
00:34:542 (1) - Meh, I don't like this anti-jump..... lol flipped it
01:53:021 (1,2,3,4) - ^ idk honestly

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Insane
01:15:847 (6,7,8,9) - I don't think stream are fit to the calm part..... Well....i'll consider
01:19:325 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^
01:23:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Spread this stacks. Since it has a different tick on each object, it confusing for read Okay
01:44:542 (11) - New combo Fixed

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Ganbate!!!!
Thanks!
Maya-kira
-general-

1) you need to complete the spinner elements .-. btw

2) sorry, forget to ignore easy and mine (just realized when I finished the mod hoho)



-easy-

01:30:629- (3) why not put it in the same place as (1)? they looks tidier
01:37:586- (2) this touch the hp bar, looks ugly :cry: change it into like this? (don't worry, the stack matches and they're not difficult to read)
120,168,97586,2,0,B|112:104|144:68|208:20|312:40|340:160,1,314.999990612269
01:43:673- (2,3) move (2) to 252,216 and (3) to 364,272 for a better pattern.
02:19:325- (2) I think its better to make a slider like (1) [fits the song better imo]
02:57:586- (1) remove nc

-normal-

00:29:760- (1,2,3) I think this pattern looks better.
00:52:368- (4,5) pattern them like this? flows better imo.
01:15:846- (3) stacking this on top of (4) looks more balanced imo >w<
01:26:281- (2,3,4) I think a 1/2 beat reverse slider is easier to play here.
01:28:020- (3,4) change this to 3/4 reverse slider?
01:34:977- (1,2) ^
01:45:412- (6) if you're following vocals, add 1 reverse.
01:57:586- (2,3) I think this pattern looks better.
02:18:455- (3) I think its better if you change this into a 1.5 slider and move this 1/2 beat earlier.
02:26:281- (7) I personally thinks 1-1 slider sounds better ><

-hard-

00:31:499- (2,3) I think this pattern flows better.
00:32:803- (5) it flows better if you press ctrl + r here .w.
00:33:890- (2,3) they're not stacked properly :cry:
00:53:020- (3) ^
00:56:281- (4) new combo for new spacing? (looks better)
01:20:194- (2) 1 grid right, 2 grids up.
01:32:368- (6) remove clap for consistency.
02:01:064- (3,4,5) this is sort of a random stream o.o
02:19:325- (8) 1-1 slider is better ><
02:26:281- (2) ^
02:28:020- (1,2,3) pattern them like this?
02:36:281- (3) another sort of random reverse stream .o.
02:39:977- (3) I think a singe beat suits better D:
02:43:238- (3) a sort of random silence D: remove it ><
02:54:107- (1,2) I think 1 reverse suits better.
02:59:977- (7) 3/4 slider? o.o 1-1 is better ><

-mine-

1) I personally thinks the opening is too hard. (volume) decrease it to 40%

2) this is a WIP, so I only say that you souldn't put the whole map to pending ;A;

-lunatic-

1) feels a little overmapped ;A; (but I'm not too hard on insanes, so I just let it out your style >w<d)

2) why is the kiai times different from the other diff?

01:05:194- (2) remove this? sounds better imo.
01:41:499- (4,1) move (4) 1 grid diagonal away from (2) and (1) a grid away from (4) [with this, there's more variation for this part]
03:02:803- (1) remove nc
Topic Starter
LunarSakuya
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Topic Starter
LunarSakuya
SPOILER

LunarSakuya wrote:

Maya-kira wrote:

-general-

1) you need to complete the spinner elements .-. btw Yeah getting there lol

2) sorry, forget to ignore easy and mine (just realized when I finished the mod hoho) lol thanks



-easy-

01:30:629- (3) why not put it in the same place as (1)? they looks tidier Fixed
01:37:586- (2) this touch the hp bar, looks ugly :cry: change it into like this? (don't worry, the stack matches and they're not difficult to read) Fixed
[spoilerbox]

120,168,97586,2,0,B|112:104|144:68|208:20|312:40|340:160,1,314.999990612269
01:43:673- (2,3) move (2) to 252,216 and (3) to 364,272 for a better pattern. Fixed
02:19:325- (2) I think its better to make a slider like (1) [fits the song better imo] Fixed
02:57:586- (1) remove nc Fixed

-normal-

00:29:760- (1,2,3) I think this pattern looks better. Fixed
00:52:368- (4,5) pattern them like this? flows better imo. Fixed
01:15:846- (3) stacking this on top of (4) looks more balanced imo >w< Fixed
01:26:281- (2,3,4) I think a 1/2 beat reverse slider is easier to play here. Fixed
01:28:020- (3,4) change this to 3/4 reverse slider? Fixed
01:34:977- (1,2) ^ Fixed
01:45:412- (6) if you're following vocals, add 1 reverse.Fixed
01:57:586- (2,3) I think this pattern looks better. Fixed
02:18:455- (3) I think its better if you change this into a 1.5 slider and move this 1/2 beat earlier. Fixed
02:26:281- (7) I personally thinks 1-1 slider sounds better >< Fixed

-hard-

00:31:499- (2,3) I think this pattern flows better. Fixed
00:32:803- (5) it flows better if you press ctrl + r here .w. Fixed
00:33:890- (2,3) they're not stacked properly :cry: Fixed
00:53:020- (3) ^ Fixed
00:56:281- (4) new combo for new spacing? (looks better) Fixed
01:20:194- (2) 1 grid right, 2 grids up. Fixed
01:32:368- (6) remove clap for consistency. Fixed
02:01:064- (3,4,5) this is sort of a random stream o.o Nah...i guess
02:19:325- (8) 1-1 slider is better >< Fixed
02:26:281- (2) ^ Fixed
02:28:020- (1,2,3) pattern them like this? Fixed
02:36:281- (3) another sort of random reverse stream .o. Nah, the beats faint in the bg ;D
02:39:977- (3) I think a singe beat suits better D: Fixed
02:43:238- (3) a sort of random silence D: remove it >< Fixed
02:54:107- (1,2) I think 1 reverse suits better. I'll consider
02:59:977- (7) 3/4 slider? o.o 1-1 is better >< I'll see if anyone else has a problem with this

-mine-

1) I personally thinks the opening is too hard. (volume) decrease it to 40%

2) this is a WIP, so I only say that you souldn't put the whole map to pending ;A;

-lunatic-

1) feels a little overmapped ;A; (but I'm not too hard on insanes, so I just let it out your style >w<d) Yeah maybe it is x_x

2) why is the kiai times different from the other diff? Oh i thought i checked x_x

01:05:194- (2) remove this? sounds better imo. Nah, fits the vocals..
01:41:499- (4,1) move (4) 1 grid diagonal away from (2) and (1) a grid away from (4) [with this, there's more variation for this part]Fixed?
03:02:803- (1) remove ncFixedThanks!
hoLysoup
hi~
thank you for modding my map
here is the promised mod:

[General]
  1. BG is 800x600? I'm sure there is a 1024x768 size for this exact BG. If you want I could find it for you.
  2. you have custom hitbursts but no custom circle?
  3. This is just.. something:
    I see that you are using green lines to adjust the slider velocities in each difficulty. But why don't you just adjust the main SV from the timing tab? As difficulty levels go down, so does SV. It will be easier for you to map with the main SV changed already so why not? If you see other people's maps it's like this too.
[Lunatic]
This is something unrankable here: you are using more than 3 SVs in this difficulty, please fix this. I would suggest removing the 0.55x because it's too slow imo
00:23:455 (1) - this spinner is too early imo, it breaks the flow of the nice beat you had going on from the start. It will be better if you keep mapping with the same hitsound pattern and make the spinner from 00:26:281~00:28:020.
01:25:086 (6,7,8) - this whole part is quite confusing, because of the objects are all on different ticks. I would suggest do not stack (6,7,8). If you're gonna keep this pattern, at least NC at (6) with a more distinct colour which would probably help.
01:53:020 (5) - NC here instead
01:58:455 (9) - NC here for sure
02:01:064 (6,7) - Weird anti-jump and they're in the same combo?
02:01:934 (8) - NC here because the stream looks weird and uneven, 02:02:260 (1) - remove NC
02:11:933 (1) - remove NC, this is part of the same pattern no need to NC, 02:13:238 (4) - NC here instead
02:15:847 (5) - why is this 0.75x? doesn't play very well I think, it's quite random actually
02:19:542 (3,4) - a strange place for antijump as well
02:26:282 (2,3,4) - ^

[Mine]
is this difficulty finished?
you should probably move this to WIP and not pending

[Hard]
OD5 is better I think
00:15:847 - why don't you start mapping here like you did for Lunatic? mm, perhaps have the same starting/ending point for all difficulties.
01:11:934 (2) - NC here
01:16:716 (2,3,4) - strange anti jump like before
02:13:238 (4) - uhh... maybe NC this because it has a different number of repeats from the previous two kick sliders
02:21:064 (1) - remove this NC
02:50:629 (1) - ^

[Normal]

02:17:586 (2,3) - spacing~

That's about it
the map is pretty good :>
Good luck~!
Topic Starter
LunarSakuya
SPOILER

hoLysoup wrote:

hi~
thank you for modding my map
here is the promised mod:

[General]
  1. BG is 800x600? I'm sure there is a 1024x768 size for this exact BG. If you want I could find it for you. I got it ^^
  2. you have custom hitbursts but no custom circle? Yes
  3. This is just.. something:
    I see that you are using green lines to adjust the slider velocities in each difficulty. But why don't you just adjust the main SV from the timing tab? As difficulty levels go down, so does SV. It will be easier for you to map with the main SV changed already so why not? If you see other people's maps it's like this too.Fixed
[Lunatic]
This is something unrankable here: you are using more than 3 SVs in this difficulty, please fix this. I would suggest removing the 0.55x because it's too slow imo Fixed
00:23:455 (1) - this spinner is too early imo, it breaks the flow of the nice beat you had going on from the start. It will be better if you keep mapping with the same hitsound pattern and make the spinner from 00:26:281~00:28:020. Fixed...;_;
01:25:086 (6,7,8) - this whole part is quite confusing, because of the objects are all on different ticks. I would suggest do not stack (6,7,8). If you're gonna keep this pattern, at least NC at (6) with a more distinct colour which would probably help. Fixed
01:53:020 (5) - NC here instead Fixed
01:58:455 (9) - NC here for sure Fixed
02:01:064 (6,7) - Weird anti-jump and they're in the same combo? Fixed?
02:01:934 (8) - NC here because the stream looks weird and uneven, 02:02:260 (1) - remove NC Fixed
02:11:933 (1) - remove NC, this is part of the same pattern no need to NC, 02:13:238 (4) - NC here instead Fixed
02:15:847 (5) - why is this 0.75x? doesn't play very well I think, it's quite random actually Fixed
02:19:542 (3,4) - a strange place for antijump as well Fixed? (maybe define antijump)
02:26:282 (2,3,4) - ^ Fixed?

[Mine]
is this difficulty finished? No
you should probably move this to WIP and not pending Fixed

[Hard]
OD5 is better I think Fixed
00:15:847 - why don't you start mapping here like you did for Lunatic? mm, perhaps have the same starting/ending point for all difficulties.Okay
01:11:934 (2) - NC here Fixed
01:16:716 (2,3,4) - strange anti jump like before ?
02:13:238 (4) - uhh... maybe NC this because it has a different number of repeats from the previous two kick sliders Fixed
02:21:064 (1) - remove this NC Fixed
02:50:629 (1) - ^ Fixed

[Normal]

02:17:586 (2,3) - spacing~ Fixed

That's about it
the map is pretty good :>
Good luck~!
Thanks a lot! :D
YTYuyu
Re-checking as requested

Easy:
00:36:716(1) - make this a curved slider to make a blanket.
00:55:846(3) - add a clap at the end
01:56:281 - add a circle?
01:56:716(4) - NC
02:55:846(1) - adjust this slider so that itd make a blanket

Normal:
01:31:499(5) - remove the clap at the repeat arrow
01:33:238(4) - remove the clap at the end
01:36:716(4) - ^
01:45:412(6) - add a whistle at the beginning
01:39:325-01:52:368 no hitsounds? can u add a clap rhythm?
02:18:455(3) - move it down so that it doesnt touch each other

Hard:
01:32:368(6) - remove the clap
02:09:542(6) - this slider could be nicer
02:54:542(2) - add a clap to keep the rhythm going

Mine:
why kiai time during breaks? and kiai time has to be the same for 1 mapset.
ohh this is a WIP. im not gonna mod it because its not done yet

Lunatic:
00:28:346 - remove the break because its not necessary
01:37:912 - ^
01:43:673(3) - add a whistle
01:44:542(1,3) - add a whistle at the beginning
01:48:020(5) - add a whistle at the beginning
01:48:890(1) - add a whistle
01:49:760(1) - ^
01:50:629(1) - ^ and this almost looks like a burai slider which is unrankable.
01:51:499(2,4) - add a whistle
01:55:853(3,4) - how about switching spots? (4) should be (3) and vice versa

this is the best i can do. u need to work on hitsounds because u use them but then u suddenly stop. GL :D
Topic Starter
LunarSakuya
SPOILER

Byakugan249 wrote:

Re-checking as requested

Easy:
00:36:716(1) - make this a curved slider to make a blanket. Fixed
00:55:846(3) - add a clap at the end Fixed
01:56:281 - add a circle? Fixed
01:56:716(4) - NC Fixed
02:55:846(1) - adjust this slider so that itd make a blanket Well, I tried xD

Normal:
01:31:499(5) - remove the clap at the repeat arrow Fixed
01:33:238(4) - remove the clap at the end Fixed
01:36:716(4) - ^ Fixed
01:45:412(6) - add a whistle at the beginning Fixed
01:39:325-01:52:368 no hitsounds? can u add a clap rhythm? It was like this in the beginning too..
02:18:455(3) - move it down so that it doesnt touch each other Fixed

Hard:
01:32:368(6) - remove the clap Decided to redo all hitsounds in this part
02:09:542(6) - this slider could be nicer Fixed
02:54:542(2) - add a clap to keep the rhythm going Fixed

Mine:
why kiai time during breaks? and kiai time has to be the same for 1 mapset.
ohh this is a WIP. im not gonna mod it because its not done yet

Lunatic:
00:28:346 - remove the break because its not necessary Fixed
01:37:912 - ^ Fixed
01:43:673(3) - add a whistle Fixed
01:44:542(1,3) - add a whistle at the beginning Fixed
01:48:020(5) - add a whistle at the beginning Fixed
01:48:890(1) - add a whistle Fixed
01:49:760(1) - ^ Fixed
01:50:629(1) - ^ and this almost looks like a burai slider which is unrankable. Fixed, and oh...uh.
01:51:499(2,4) - add a whistle Fixed, but not on 4
01:55:853(3,4) - how about switching spots? (4) should be (3) and vice versa I'll consider.

this is the best i can do. u need to work on hitsounds because u use them but then u suddenly stop. GL :D Lol, thanks!! :D
Ayukawa Tenri
Meaningful post is meaningful.
Topic Starter
LunarSakuya

Ayukawa Tenri wrote:

Meaningful post is meaningful.
and i was so excited too
Glass
Hi :D

[Easy]
SPOILER
02:38:455 (1) - I feel that this spinner doesn't fit, map this part instead?

[Normal]
SPOILER
All good

[Hard]
SPOILER
01:17:369 (4) - Too close to 01:18:021 (1,2,3) I think. Stack this on 01:16:934 (3)?
02:01:499 (6) - Remove NC
02:13:238 (1) - Remove NC
02:20:629 (9,10,11) - Move these a little bit farther from 02:19:325 (8)
02:35:195 (1) - Too close to 02:36:064 (2), move this up a few grids?

[Vass's Devil]
SPOILER
00:36:281 (1) - Not a big problem but, maybe stack this on 00:36:716 (1)?

[Lunatic]
SPOILER
00:19:325 (4) - NC
01:14:977 (3) - Perfect overlaps like this are considered unrankable, I suggest moving this 2-3 grids up
01:23:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This is very hard to read, I suggest stacking 01:25:086 (6,7,8) on 01:25:412 (1)
01:33:238 (1) - Same overlap issue as 01:14:977 (3)

I'd star your map but unfortunately I don't have any kudo left =(

Good luck with your debut~
Topic Starter
LunarSakuya

Glass wrote:

Hi :D

[Easy]
SPOILER
02:38:455 (1) - I feel that this spinner doesn't fit, map this part instead? Fixed

[Normal]
SPOILER
All good Awesome

[Hard]
SPOILER
01:17:369 (4) - Too close to 01:18:021 (1,2,3) I think. Stack this on 01:16:934 (3)? Fixed
02:01:499 (6) - Remove NC Fixed
02:13:238 (1) - Remove NC Fixed
02:20:629 (9,10,11) - Move these a little bit farther from 02:19:325 (8) Fixed
02:35:195 (1) - Too close to 02:36:064 (2), move this up a few grids?Fixed

[Vass's Devil]
SPOILER
00:36:281 (1) - Not a big problem but, maybe stack this on 00:36:716 (1)?

[Lunatic]
SPOILER
00:19:325 (4) - NC Fixed
01:14:977 (3) - Perfect overlaps like this are considered unrankable, I suggest moving this 2-3 grids up Fixed
01:23:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This is very hard to read, I suggest stacking 01:25:086 (6,7,8) on 01:25:412 (1) Fixed
01:33:238 (1) - Same overlap issue as 01:14:977 (3) Fixed

I'd star your map but unfortunately I don't have any kudo left =(

Good luck with your debut~
Thanks! :D :D :D
Wafu
Mod for queue request.

SPOILER
Easy:

01:39:325 (1) - Don't put slider under slider. http://oi41.tinypic.com/33w7clj.jpg
02:10:629 (1,2,3) - http://oi41.tinypic.com/xoo3fp.jpg
02:12:368 (1,2,3) - That same like 02:10:629 (1,2,3)
02:14:108 (1) - Try more stylish sliders. http://oi39.tinypic.com/35mnnex.jpg
02:54:108 (2,3) - Try this. http://i44.tinypic.com/j923xw.png

Normal:

00:38:021 (3,4,5) - http://i43.tinypic.com/xml8i1.png
00:44:977 (2,3,4) - Something like 00:38:021 (3,4,5)
02:41:064 (2) - http://i44.tinypic.com/2j2w22c.png

Hard:

00:37:586 (4) - Try this anywhere. http://i39.tinypic.com/2uh2t5w.png
00:54:542 (2) - http://i43.tinypic.com/6pyyww.png
02:00:195 (1) - Try use these sliders. http://i44.tinypic.com/w6p7df.png
02:28:890 (2) - Try some style. http://i39.tinypic.com/2h6x2fd.png
02:59:977 (7) - I'd do this. http://i44.tinypic.com/d886f.png + At first note in slider put clap.

Vass' Devil:

02:31:499 (2,3,4,5) - Don't do this. You can try this, it's onli tip, I recommend something similar like this http://i42.tinypic.com/auz0if.png
01:19:325 (2) - http://i39.tinypic.com/21c8arm.png

Lunatic:

It's hardest difficulty so add some jumps with 2.0 snap.
00:17:151 (3) - Jump
00:24:107 (2) - Jump
You can know where you may put jumps so do it.
Lunatic, looks very good.

You don't must follow this, but I will glad if you will.
Good Luck with map.
Vass_Bass
Thank you for modding
P.S. Add my name to the tags in all diffs

Download: Senya - Little Devil (LunarSakuya) [Vass' Devil].osu
Topic Starter
LunarSakuya
Mod for queue request.

SPOILER
Easy:

01:39:325 (1) - Don't put slider under slider. http://oi41.tinypic.com/33w7clj.jpg Someone suggested this to me earlier. If another person mentions this, I'll change
02:10:629 (1,2,3) - http://oi41.tinypic.com/xoo3fp.jpg Fixed
02:12:368 (1,2,3) - That same like 02:10:629 (1,2,3) Fixed
02:14:108 (1) - Try more stylish sliders. http://oi39.tinypic.com/35mnnex.jpg
02:54:108 (2,3) - Try this. http://i44.tinypic.com/j923xw.png Fixed

Normal:

00:38:021 (3,4,5) - http://i43.tinypic.com/xml8i1.png Fixed
00:44:977 (2,3,4) - Something like 00:38:021 (3,4,5) Fixed
02:41:064 (2) - http://i44.tinypic.com/2j2w22c.png Yeah this part bothered me, but i'll keep it for now lol

Hard:

00:37:586 (4) - Try this anywhere. http://i39.tinypic.com/2uh2t5w.png Not for this area..
00:54:542 (2) - http://i43.tinypic.com/6pyyww.png
02:00:195 (1) - Try use these sliders. http://i44.tinypic.com/w6p7df.png
02:28:890 (2) - Try some style. http://i39.tinypic.com/2h6x2fd.png
02:59:977 (7) - I'd do this. http://i44.tinypic.com/d886f.png + At first note in slider put clap.

Vass' Devil:

02:31:499 (2,3,4,5) - Don't do this. You can try this, it's onli tip, I recommend something similar like this http://i42.tinypic.com/auz0if.png
01:19:325 (2) - http://i39.tinypic.com/21c8arm.png

Lunatic:

It's hardest difficulty so add some jumps with 2.0 snap.
00:17:151 (3) - Jump
00:24:107 (2) - Jump
You can know where you may put jumps so do it.
Lunatic, looks very good.

You don't must follow this, but I will glad if you will.
Good Luck with map.
Thanks! :) I was in a hurry a bit so i stopped adding fixed lololol

P.S. Add my name to the tags in all diffs
Done!
MoodyRPG
Hi,sorry for the late mod,but i'm here

General
  1. Add spinner here 00:22:803 and finish here 00:28:020 in Easy,Normal and Hard
  2. For future maps,use Distance Snap 1,0x
Easy
HP: -3
AR: -1
OD: -2
- 00:36:716 (3) - Switch new combo
- 00:55:846 (3) - ^
- 02:38:455 (3) - ^
- 02:45:412 (3) - ^

Normal
- 02:10:629 (5) - Add new combo here
- 02:24:542 (5) - ^

Hard
- 02:19:325 (8) - New combo
- 02:29:760 (3) - More symetric with (1)

Devil
- 00:59:433 (T) - The timing point should end here 00:59:325
- 01:09:760 (4) - New combo

Lunatic
-- Why Lunatic? i know is a difficulty from Touhou but is better to put Insane IMO
- 01:50:629 (1) - Burai slider.Unrankeable

Lovely SB.Addictive Sweet. Good Job
Topic Starter
LunarSakuya
SPOILER

MoodyRPG wrote:

Hi,sorry for the late mod,but i'm here

General
  1. Add spinner here 00:22:803 and finish here 00:28:020 in Easy,Normal and Hard Fixed
  2. For future maps,use Distance Snap 1,0x Okay
Easy
HP: -3 Fixed
AR: -1 Fixed
OD: -2 Fixed
- 00:36:716 (3) - Switch new combo Fixed
- 00:55:846 (3) - ^ Fixed
- 02:38:455 (3) - ^ Fixed
- 02:45:412 (3) - ^ Fixed

Normal
- 02:10:629 (5) - Add new combo here Fixed
- 02:24:542 (5) - ^ Fixed

Hard
- 02:19:325 (8) - New combo Fixed
- 02:29:760 (3) - More symetric with (1) Fixed

Devil
- 00:59:433 (T) - The timing point should end here 00:59:325
- 01:09:760 (4) - New combo

Lunatic
-- Why Lunatic? i know is a difficulty from Touhou but is better to put Insane IMO I thought almost all the touhou maps had lunatic... ;_;
- 01:50:629 (1) - Burai slider.Unrankeable Fixed

Lovely SB.Addictive Sweet. Good Job

Hey, glad you could make it! xD
Thanks! :D
KayeSara
From my ignorable modding
[Easy]
  1. 01:12:368 (1) - Put it in 01:11:933
  2. 01:13:238 (2) - put it in 01:12:803
  3. 01:14:108 (3) - put iy in 01:13:673
  4. 01:14:542 - add note
  5. 01:14:977 (5) - put it in 01:15:412
  6. 01:16:716 (6,1,2,3,4) - ^
    Anyway, this is my sense of rhythm, it makes stronger tempo IMO...
    And if you like it, you can change it about other part.
[Normal]
  1. 01:34:977 (1,2) - it's better not to overlap those two notes
[Hard]
  1. 01:13:890 (1,2) - remove it, make slider from 01:13:673 to 01:13:890, and other slider from 01:14:107 to 01:14:325
[Vass' Devil]
  1. 00:18:020 (1,2) - change the direction
[Lunatic]
  1. 01:15:847 (4,5,6,7) - make a stream maybe better XD
  2. 01:31:064 (3,4,5) - ^
Nothing to say~Good Luck~and sorry for my inexistent star, becasue I don't have KD for star QAQ
Topic Starter
LunarSakuya
SPOILER

KayeSara wrote:

From my ignorable modding
[Easy]
  1. 01:12:368 (1) - Put it in 01:11:933 Fixed. Good one too.
  2. 01:13:238 (2) - put it in 01:12:803 Fixed
  3. 01:14:108 (3) - put iy in 01:13:673 Fixed
  4. 01:14:542 - add note Fixed
  5. 01:14:977 (5) - put it in 01:15:412 Fixed
  6. 01:16:716 (6,1,2,3,4) - ^ Fixed
    Anyway, this is my sense of rhythm, it makes stronger tempo IMO...
    And if you like it, you can change it about other part.
I like it. The other part I left because the rythmn might confuse beginners..I think lol

[Normal]
  1. 01:34:977 (1,2) - it's better not to overlap those two notes Fixed
[Hard]
  1. 01:13:890 (1,2) - remove it, make slider from 01:13:673 to 01:13:890, and other slider from 01:14:107 to 01:14:325 I got confused, but I changed something ^^;
[Vass' Devil]
  1. 00:18:020 (1,2) - change the direction
[Lunatic]
  1. 01:15:847 (4,5,6,7) - make a stream maybe better XD Fixed
  2. 01:31:064 (3,4,5) - ^Fixed
you have a pretty skin xD

Nothing to say~Good Luck~and sorry for my inexistent star, becasue I don't have KD for star QAQ haha you deserve it, it was a good mod :D

Thanks! Helpful~
AroMe
good map :)
KayeSara
Star for you~
Topic Starter
LunarSakuya

AroMe wrote:

good map :)
ありがとう~

KayeSara wrote:

Star for you~
aahhh thank you very much!!!!!!!!!!! xD
Vass_Bass

KayeSara wrote:

[Vass' Devil]
  1. 00:18:020 (1,2) - change the direction
no thanks
Kirino Kousaka
Hello!~ Here's my mod and sorry for being very very late >< (a request from my queue)

  • [General]
  1. Shouldn't "Senya" be "senya"?
  2. I highly suggest you to use this soft-hitclap because it goes with the music~ :3

    [Vass' Devil]
  3. 00:41:933 - the whistles from this part are quite noisy. Try to reduce their sound by more or less 15%.
  4. 01:14:760 (8) - aww hidden ><

    [Lunatic]
  5. 00:48:890 (8) - Add NC
  6. 01:19:325 (4) - ^
  7. 01:18:455 (1) - Remove NC
  8. 01:19:325 (4) - Add NC
  9. 01:44:325 (9) - ^
  10. 01:44:542 (1) - Remove NC
  11. 02:02:803 (9) - Add NC
That's all!~ :3
dkun
irc mod

sauce:
SPOILER
22:24 <dkun> : hm, you around?~
22:24 <LunarSakuya> : whats up
22:25 <dkun> : d'you mind if I just hint a few suggestions on this via IRC?
22:25 *dkun is editing (Senya - Little Devil)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/38106]
22:25 <LunarSakuya> : yeah sure :)
22:25 <dkun> : don't think anything I have to say is post worthy
22:25 <dkun> : so, yeah
22:25 <LunarSakuya> : lol its fine
22:25 <dkun> : um, via lunatic
22:26 <dkun> : 02:35:412 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - I am pretty sure that you can come up with something more "Lunatic" styled than what you have now
22:26 <LunarSakuya> : lol
22:26 <LunarSakuya> : true
22:26 <dkun> : 02:39:325 (6,7,8) - I would say repeat the two sliders once, but that's just my personal preference
22:26 <dkun> : because blue tick does not suit that part at all
22:27 <LunarSakuya> : repeat the two once..?
22:27 <dkun> : two sliders 6,8
22:27 <dkun> : repeat once
22:27 <dkun> : re-arrange
22:27 <dkun> : see how that plays out
22:27 <LunarSakuya> : oh
22:28 <dkun> : 02:31:499 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - dear god make this symmetrical via Y-axis
22:28 <LunarSakuya> : haha i did that when i first started the map
22:28 <LunarSakuya> : so okay i will do that
22:28 <dkun> : the idea is fine, but it just looks plain ugly and not fun to play
22:28 <dkun> : :(
22:29 <LunarSakuya> : ;_;
22:29 <dkun> : do it something like this!
22:29 <dkun> : 02:59:325 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
22:29 <LunarSakuya> : a shorter one? xD
22:29 <dkun> : ps I would move that last note to the middle
22:29 <LunarSakuya> : okay
22:30 <dkun> : no, it's fine how it is now; but it'd just look/play better if it was symmetrical
22:30 <dkun> : :p
22:30 <LunarSakuya> : lol alright
22:30 <LunarSakuya> : thanks
22:30 <LunarSakuya> : lol that was post worthy enough
eikkaleyd
From Anshi and eikka's modding queue.

[Easy]
01.27.151 (2) 1 grid right
01.35.846 (1,2) this way
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/224923
02.45.412 (1,2) these two sliders should have same shapes, maybe

[Normal]
01.48.020 (3) put it on (260,256)

[Hard]
01.16.933 (3) how about change it into a short slider?
01.46.064 add a circle
02.53.020 ^

02.40.846 (5) it should be further from (4)
02.59.977 (6) Umm, should be ended on the red line (03.00.412)

[Vass'Devil]
01.37.586 (1) this note should be further from (6)

[Lunatic]
00.52.803 (2) reduce one time reserve would be better
02.18.455 (6,1) ^

02.02.803 (9) New combo?

That's all, good luck to you~
Topic Starter
LunarSakuya
SPOILER

eikkaleyd wrote:

From Anshi and eikka's modding queue.

[Easy]
01.27.151 (2) 1 grid right Fixed
01.35.846 (1,2) this way Fixed
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/224923
02.45.412 (1,2) these two sliders should have same shapes, maybe lol ok Fixed

[Normal]
01.48.020 (3) put it on (260,256) Fixed

[Hard]
01.16.933 (3) how about change it into a short slider? Fixed
01.46.064 add a circle Fixed
02.53.020 ^ Fixed

02.40.846 (5) it should be further from (4) Fixed
02.59.977 (6) Umm, should be ended on the red line (03.00.412) oops xD Fixed

[Vass'Devil]
01.37.586 (1) this note should be further from (6)

[Lunatic]
00.52.803 (2) reduce one time reserve would be better reserve?
02.18.455 (6,1) ^

02.02.803 (9) New combo? Sure

That's all, good luck to you~

Thank youuuuuuuuu!!!!
eikkaleyd

LunarSakuya wrote:

[Lunatic]
00.52.803 (2) reduce one time reserve would be better reserve? Umm, it means one-time repeat?
02.18.455 (6,1) ^
Topic Starter
LunarSakuya

eikkaleyd wrote:

LunarSakuya wrote:

[Lunatic]
00.52.803 (2) reduce one time reserve would be better reserve? Umm, it means one-time repeat?
02.18.455 (6,1) ^
oohhh thats reverse xDD
eikkaleyd

LunarSakuya wrote:

oohhh thats reverse xDD

:o oohhhh Noooooooooo!!!I always said reserve!!!

I wonder how many times I said that when I was modding...Oh no..|||||

But, how did those mappers read my modding....?
Topic Starter
LunarSakuya

eikkaleyd wrote:

LunarSakuya wrote:

oohhh thats reverse xDD

:o oohhhh Noooooooooo!!!I always said reserve!!!

I wonder how many times I said that when I was modding...Oh no..|||||

But, how did those mappers read my modding....?
LOL its okay xDD At least now you know! :)
Aleks719
General
ohhh...
comboburst.png's dimensions must not be larger than 500x767 (currently 600x600).
Missing Skin Files : approachcircle.png reversearrow.png cursortrail.png
size of spinner-background.png more than 1mb. recompress plaase
also lyrics10.png looks unused. check sb / main folder
better to cut unused transparency like in lyrics7.png or lyrics8.png
remove "English" from the tags from Vass' Devil diff. it will be in language

Lunatic
don't make this :
also :
02:39:325 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:39:869 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).

Normal
00:39:325 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:40:629 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).

too many mistakes in general. don't forget to make full submit etc.
Topic Starter
LunarSakuya

Aleks719 wrote:

General
ohhh...
comboburst.png's dimensions must not be larger than 500x767 (currently 600x600). Fixed
Missing Skin Files : approachcircle.png reversearrow.png cursortrail.png Fixed
size of spinner-background.png more than 1mb. recompress plaase Getting to that
also lyrics10.png looks unused. check sb / main folder Fixed
better to cut unused transparency like in lyrics7.png or lyrics8.png Alright i'll get to that
remove "English" from the tags from Vass' Devil diff. it will be in language Fixed

Lunatic
don't make this :
Fixedalso :
02:39:325 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). Fixed
02:39:869 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). Fixed

Normal
00:39:325 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). Fixed
00:40:629 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). Fixed

too many mistakes in general. don't forget to make full submit etc.
Thanks for your time!!
Kryptogram
Hi there ! Sorry for my late mod

This mod are just suggestions

General:

• The size of your BG should be 800x600 Image Link Replace it in the song folder
• I think youre missing some lyrics

SB:

I think this looks better
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Cool As Shit Black Background smooth red.jpg",320,240
F,0,0,1933,1
S,0,0,7586,1
F,0,1933,24977,1,0
S,0,7586,24977,1
F,0,154977,155846,0,0.75
F,0,155846,168564,0.75
F,0,168564,168890,0.75,0

Same here
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lyrics602.png",320,240
F,0,179107,179325,0,1
S,0,179107,182803,1,0.936
M,0,179107,183238,346,93,346,102
F,0,179325,182803,1
F,2,182803,183238,1,0
S,2,182803,183238,0.936,1.332

Easy

• 00:45:412 (2) - 1 grid up ?
• 01:33:238 (2) - Remove whistle
• 01:35:846 (1) - Add whistle at the begin of the slider
• 01:48:890 (4) - 1 grid up
• 01:53:238 (1) - Add finish at the begin of the slider
• 02:05:412 (2) - ^
• 02:14:108 (1) - ^
• 02:28:020 (1) - ^

Normal

• 00:36:716 (1) - Inconsistent spacing
• 00:42:369 (5,6) - 1 grid up
• 00:43:673 (1) - Add finish at the begin of the slider
• 00:49:977 (4) - Remove note
• 00:57:586 (5) - Add finish
• 01:25:412 (1) - Add whistle at the begin of the slider
• 01:28:890 (1) - ^
• 01:32:369 (1) - Add whistle
• 01:35:847 (3) - Add whistle at the begin of the slider
• 01:53:238 (1) - Add finish at the begin of the slider
• 02:48:890 (1) - ^

Hard

• 00:29:760 (2) - Add finish at the begin of the slider
• 00:43:673 (2) - Add finish at the begin and change finish for clap at the end of the slider
• 00:57:151 (3) - Add clap
• 01:11:499 (1) - Add finish
• 01:21:934 (1) - ^
• 01:39:325 (2) - Add finish at the begin of the slider
• 01:46:064 (4) - Remove NC add it in the next note ?
• 01:51:281 (6) - Add note
• 02:21:064 (1) - Add finish at the begin of the slider


Vass's Devil

•Fine C:

Lunatic


• 00:26:281 (1) - Add finish
• 00:29:760 (2) - Add finish at the begin of the slider
• 00:43:673 (2) - ^
• 00:52:803 (2) - Remove 1 reverse arrow
• 01:11:499 (1) - Add finish at the begin of the slider
• 01:53:238 (2) - ^
• 01:59:325 (3) - Add whistle
• 02:21:064 (1) - Add finish at the begin of the slider
• 02:46:716 (1) - Add finish

Sorry for my late mod Hope its helpful

Good luck !
and Star !
Topic Starter
LunarSakuya
SPOILER

[Te][Amo] wrote:

Hi there ! Sorry for my late mod

This mod are just suggestions

General:

• The size of your BG should be 800x600 Image Link Replace it in the song folder Thanks but I'm pretty sure images can be 1024 x 768
• I think youre missing some lyrics Okay a hundred kudosus for pointing that out, te amo

SB:

I think this looks better
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Cool As Shit Black Background smooth red.jpg",320,240
F,0,0,1933,1
S,0,0,7586,1
F,0,1933,24977,1,0
S,0,7586,24977,1
F,0,154977,155846,0,0.75
F,0,155846,168564,0.75
F,0,168564,168890,0.75,0

Same here
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lyrics602.png",320,240
F,0,179107,179325,0,1
S,0,179107,182803,1,0.936
M,0,179107,183238,346,93,346,102
F,0,179325,182803,1
F,2,182803,183238,1,0
S,2,182803,183238,0.936,1.332
Lol i wish you had screenshots. I'll get to these later :)
Easy

• 00:45:412 (2) - 1 grid up ? really minor but okay
• 01:33:238 (2) - Remove whistle Nah
• 01:35:846 (1) - Add whistle at the begin of the slider Fixed
• 01:48:890 (4) - 1 grid up Fixed
• 01:53:238 (1) - Add finish at the begin of the slider Fixed
• 02:05:412 (2) - ^ Fixed
• 02:14:108 (1) - ^ Fixed
• 02:28:020 (1) - ^ Fixed

Normal

• 00:36:716 (1) - Inconsistent spacing ...I think they can handle it xD but I'll see if anyone else dislikes this.
• 00:42:369 (5,6) - 1 grid up Fixed
• 00:43:673 (1) - Add finish at the begin of the slider Fixed
• 00:49:977 (4) - Remove note Fixed
• 00:57:586 (5) - Add finish Fixed
• 01:25:412 (1) - Add whistle at the begin of the slider Fixed
• 01:28:890 (1) - ^ Fixed
• 01:32:369 (1) - Add whistle Fixed
• 01:35:847 (3) - Add whistle at the begin of the slider Fixed
• 01:53:238 (1) - Add finish at the begin of the slider Fixed
• 02:48:890 (1) - ^ Fixed

Hard

• 00:29:760 (2) - Add finish at the begin of the slider Fixed
• 00:43:673 (2) - Add finish at the begin and change finish for clap at the end of the slider Fixed
• 00:57:151 (3) - Add clap
• 01:11:499 (1) - Add finish Fixed
• 01:21:934 (1) - ^
• 01:39:325 (2) - Add finish at the begin of the slider Fixed
• 01:46:064 (4) - Remove NC add it in the next note ? Fixed
• 01:51:281 (6) - Add note Fixed
• 02:21:064 (1) - Add finish at the begin of the slider Fixed


Vass's Devil

•Fine C:

Lunatic


• 00:26:281 (1) - Add finish Fixed
• 00:29:760 (2) - Add finish at the begin of the slider Fixed
• 00:43:673 (2) - ^
• 00:52:803 (2) - Remove 1 reverse arrow Something bothers me...
• 01:11:499 (1) - Add finish at the begin of the slider Fixed
• 01:53:238 (2) - ^ Fixed
• 01:59:325 (3) - Add whistle Fixed
• 02:21:064 (1) - Add finish at the begin of the slider Fixed
• 02:46:716 (1) - Add finish Fixed

Sorry for my late mod Hope its helpful It's okay, it was very helpful :D Thank you very much!

Good luck !
and Star ! !! thanks again xD
:)
grumd
«Engrish version» in description?
maybe English?
Topic Starter
LunarSakuya

grumd wrote:

«Engrish version» in description?
maybe English?
Hahaha it's a minor joke :lol: (it was on purpose)
Starry_old
Requested by TheVapor <3

[Easy]

01:56:716 (1) - Reverse this 1 more time.
02:38:455 (1,2,3) - Slider goes here way better. maybe you should make it the same as the next note.
01:17:586 - Add a note here.

[Normal]

01:28:020 (3,1) - Add a whistle to the beginning of the sliders only.
01:30:629 (4) - ^ and new combo here.
01:33:238 (4) - Add whistle to the beginning of the slider
01:40:629 (2) - Clap
01:42:369 (4) - ^
02:45:412 (2) - ^
02:46:064 (4) - ^

[Hard]

01:27:151 (4) - New combo
01:31:934 (4) - ^
02:55:846 (4) - ^
02:17:586 (2,3) - 1 slider?

[Vass's Devil]

00:41:933 (1,2,3) - This can be very confusing because its too near, maybe separate just a bit. Just separate the 2
00:55:846 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:51:499 (1,2,3) - ^
02:13:890 (2) - New combo?
02:17:586 (4) - ^

[Lunatic]

01:14:108 (1) - Clap at the end
01:18:021 (10) - New combo
01:23:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Clap at 2,4,6,8?
01:26:064 (4) - Clap at 4?
01:27:477 (2) - Clap here?
01:27:912 (4) - ^
02:06:716 (5) - New combo here?
02:07:151 (1) - Remove new combo?
02:10:629 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Adding clap at the start of slider sounds nice :3

Nice map~
Topic Starter
LunarSakuya
SPOILER

Starry wrote:

Requested by TheVapor <3

[Easy]

01:56:716 (1) - Reverse this 1 more time. Fixed
02:38:455 (1,2,3) - Slider goes here way better. maybe you should make it the same as the next note. Fixed
01:17:586 - Add a note here. ?

[Normal]

01:28:020 (3,1) - Add a whistle to the beginning of the sliders only.
01:30:629 (4) - ^ and new combo here. Fixed
01:33:238 (4) - Add whistle to the beginning of the slider I think i'm okay now lol
01:40:629 (2) - Clap
01:42:369 (4) - ^
02:45:412 (2) - ^
02:46:064 (4) - ^

[Hard]

01:27:151 (4) - New combo Combos are fine i think xD
01:31:934 (4) - ^
02:55:846 (4) - ^
02:17:586 (2,3) - 1 slider?

[Vass's Devil]

00:41:933 (1,2,3) - This can be very confusing because its too near, maybe separate just a bit. Just separate the 2
00:55:846 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:51:499 (1,2,3) - ^
02:13:890 (2) - New combo?
02:17:586 (4) - ^

[Lunatic]

01:14:108 (1) - Clap at the end
01:18:021 (10) - New combo Fixed
01:23:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Clap at 2,4,6,8? I did something else
01:26:064 (4) - Clap at 4?
01:27:477 (2) - Clap here?
01:27:912 (4) - ^
02:06:716 (5) - New combo here? Fixed
02:07:151 (1) - Remove new combo? Fixed
02:10:629 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Adding clap at the start of slider sounds nice :3 Okay i'll actually try this, Fixed

Nice map~

Thanks for the mod!!!!
Vass_Bass

Starry wrote:

[Vass's Devil]

00:41:933 (1,2,3) - This can be very confusing because its too near, maybe separate just a bit. Just separate the 2
00:55:846 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:51:499 (1,2,3) - ^
02:13:890 (2) - New combo?
02:17:586 (4) - ^
nothing changed, but thanks
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