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senya - Little Devil

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LunarSakuya
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LunarSakuya
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, March 22, 2012 at 12:51:10 PM

Artist: senya
Title: Little Devil
Source: Touhou
Tags: yuuhei satellite elly bad apple koakuma ringo vass_bass
BPM: 138
Filesize: 8580kb
Play Time: 02:59
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (0.94 stars, 111 notes)
  2. Hard (4.62 stars, 323 notes)
  3. Lunatic (5 stars, 490 notes)
  4. Normal (2.8 stars, 192 notes)
  5. Vass' Devil (4.85 stars, 378 notes)
Download: senya - Little Devil
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Engrish version of Koakuma Apple


Thank you Vass_Bass for her Guest diff [Vass' Devil]!!

And thanks for all mods, support! ;D

1st beatmap ;)

Last full submit: 3/22/12
Skin elements borrowed from Xiao's FFVII Skin. Thank you! :)

"gj you forgot to credit me for a good part of the skin ~" - meiikyuu
Credits to meiikyuu for buttons and menu buttons and more buttons

Ranked by IceBeam
Last edited by LunarSakuya , edited 152 times in total.
meiikyuu
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
meiikyuu
ITS BEAUTIFUL. :) :) :)
The timing is perfect 8D
Neuexter
16 posts
Joined March 2010
Neuexter
Why are you so amazing at this. Some parts felt a bit weird... but I am kinda lazy at finding the times.
FINISH INSANE, IT'S MAD FUN.
meiikyuu
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
meiikyuu
HARD
1:42:803 - 1:43:673 A little thing that might disrupt the general pattern...

NORMAL
1:53:238 Combos 1,2,3 - Whistle
2:07:151 Increase hitsound volume
2:21:064 Finish sound
2:28:021 Finish
2:29:760 Finish
2:49:542 Delete Clap
2:51:282 Delete Clap
2:57:803 Finish


Hitsounds done nicely overall =) Hopefully that helped.
Backfire
3,204 posts
Joined February 2010
Backfire
Hi...can I make a taiko. ;w;
LunarSakuya
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Topic Starter
LunarSakuya

Backfire wrote:

Hi...can I make a taiko. ;w;
Yeah sure! :)
gammagon
gammagon
Yay Touhou.

I'll try easy lol
00:42:803 Add finish instead of clap
1:15:412 Clap on reverse
1:17:151 Clap on reverse
1:28:890 Whistle
1:29:760 Whistle
2:34:977 Whistle
2:36:716 Whistle
2:45:412 Whistle
2:46:282 Whistle

Just some suggestions :D

Edit: Star :)
LunarSakuya
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LunarSakuya

gammagon wrote:

Yay Touhou.

I'll try easy lol
00:42:803 Add finish instead of clap
1:15:412 Clap on reverse
1:17:151 Clap on reverse
1:28:890 Whistle
1:29:760 Whistle
2:34:977 Whistle
2:36:716 Whistle
2:45:412 Whistle
2:46:282 Whistle

Just some suggestions :D

Edit: Star :)
Done! Thank you very much ^^
Komeiji Yuki
1,264 posts
Joined March 2010
Komeiji Yuki
[Easy]

>>Different spacing may confuse beginners :l

00:54:542 - Un-used green line

00:55:847 (2,3) - spacing

01:37:586 (1) - change to slider ? I feel empty here

01:42:803 (3,4) - It may confuse beginners bcz the start and the end of the sliders are the same

01:48:890 - Add a circle

02:28:021 (1) - spacing

02:43:673 (2) - ^

02:45:412 (3) - ^

[Normal]

00:32:803 (1,2) - Remove NC from (1) and add NC to (2)

01:18:021 (2) - Add a circle

02:24:108 (4) - ^

[Hard]

00:57:586 - Close kiai time here

00:58:021 - Un-used green line

00:58:238 - Un-used green line

01:16:988 (2) - spacing

01:37:586 - Un-used green line

01:38:238 - Un-used green line

01:42:803 (1,2) - ugly stack :l

02:07:586 - Un-used green line

[Game of Love]

00:57:586 (4) - NC

01:31:499 (5) - NC

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Touhou song :idea:

Good Luck :3
Anshi_old
103 posts
Joined July 2011
Anshi_old
hi~ :D thx come to my modding queue.
here r some advice which r my subject ideas


-all the beat snap divisor is 1/8 ? 0 0
-good hitsound i think


-easy
00:33:238 (2) - be careful the spacing
00:37:586 (2) - ↑
00:55:412 - add a note?
01:31:499 (6) - the slider is askew
01:42:803 (3) - ugly slider...
01:44:542 (4) - ↑
01:53:238 (1) - be careful the spacing
01:56:716 (1) - x:156 y:192
02:14:108 (1) - he slider is askew
02:15:847 (1) - ↑
02:46:825 - 02:49:108 - add some comb or add a breaktime?
02:55:847 (1) - ugly slider
02:57:586 (1) - ↑

-normal
00:36:716 (1) - spacing
01:34:108 (5) - askew?
01:49:760 (5) - maybe a slider would be better
01:50:195 (1) - delete a convolution
01:51:499 - add a note
01:53:238 (1) - spacing
02:02:803 (2) - askew?
02:08:890 (3) - ↑
02:21:064 (1) - ugly...
02:54:108 (1) - spacing
02:57:803 (1) - ↑

-hard
i won't say the spacing again 0 0
others are good :)

-game of love
i won't say the spacing again 0 0
00:53:673 (1) - askew?
01:08:021 (1) - 01:10:412 (4) in my opinoin.it would be better like this ↓↓
SPOILER
02:33:238 (1) - add a note and move back the slider one space
01:37:695 - add a break time
02:33:238 (7) - ...move back the slider one space
kazumikos
393 posts
Joined February 2010
kazumikos
Heya~ ^^

[General]
SPOILER
+ The right offset is at 00:01:934, plz fix it
+ Ur BG's size currently is 1062 x 768, resize it to 1024 x 768
+ SB element should be a maximum at 800 x 600, which mean u'll have to resize it as well =/
+ Set beat snap divisor 1/4 plz x_x

[Game of love]
SPOILER
00:54:325 (4) - adjust this note 2 grid up, 3 grid left to make a square
00:57:586 (1) - finish
01:28:890 (1) - remove clap
01:30:629 (1) - whistle
01:34:542 (5) - clap > whistle
01:35:412 (8) - ^ (at the start)
01:36:282 (2) - remove clap. finish, add whistle
02:01:064 (1) - remove new combo
02:04:108 (1) - ^
02:04:977 (3) - new combo
02:07:151 (5) - finish at the start
02:19:651 (6) - this note should be at 02:19:542 (listen carefully =/)
02:26:608 (4) - same ^, move this note to 02:26:499

[Hard]
SPOILER
just to notice u, KIAI in this diff is different to other diffs
01:16:988 (2) - this note should be at 01:16:933
02:07:151 (1) - finish at the start
03:02:803 (1) - finish

[Normal]
SPOILER
00:57:586 (8) - finish
from 01:12:368 (1) - to 01:21:499 (5) - , i suggest u add some whitle at 2nd and 4th beat (of course this only apply after u fix offset) just like in Insane diff ^^

[Easy]
SPOILER
i strongly recommend u stick with distance snap in easy diff, plz fix all the spacing issues
00:54:108 (1) - remove whistle at the start
00:55:847 (2) - ^
00:57:586 (3) - finish
02:06:281 and 02:06:716: remove time section, they r no used
02:59:325 (1) - finish

note that i would like to see ur feed back about my mod to know wat u fix wat not, if u need my help just catch me IG ^^
I like the song
Here's a good luck blessing star~ :oops:
LunarSakuya
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Topic Starter
LunarSakuya

kazumikos wrote:

Heya~ ^^

[General]
SPOILER
+ The right offset is at 00:01:934, plz fix it
+ Ur BG's size currently is 1062 x 768, resize it to 1024 x 768
+ SB element should be a maximum at 800 x 600, which mean u'll have to resize it as well =/
+ Set beat snap divisor 1/4 plz x_x [/color]

[Game of love]
SPOILER
00:54:325 (4) - adjust this note 2 grid up, 3 grid left to make a square Fixed
00:57:586 (1) - finish Fixed
01:28:890 (1) - remove clap Fixed
01:30:629 (1) - whistle Fixed
01:34:542 (5) - clap > whistle Fixed
01:35:412 (8) - ^ (at the start)Fixed
01:36:282 (2) - remove clap. finish, add whistle Fixed
02:01:064 (1) - remove new combo Fixed
02:04:108 (1) - ^ Fixed
02:04:977 (3) - new comboFixed
02:07:151 (5) - finish at the startFixed
02:19:651 (6) - this note should be at 02:19:542 (listen carefully =/)Fixed
02:26:608 (4) - same ^, move this note to 02:26:499[/color]
Fixed

[Hard]
SPOILER
just to notice u, KIAI in this diff is different to other diffs Fixed
01:16:988 (2) - this note should be at 01:16:933 Fixed
02:07:151 (1) - finish at the start Fixed
03:02:803 (1) - finish Fixed

[Normal]
SPOILER
00:57:586 (8) - finish Fixed
from 01:12:368 (1) - to 01:21:499 (5) - , i suggest u add some whitle at 2nd and 4th beat (of course this only apply after u fix offset) just like in Insane diff ^^[/color]Fixed, put a whistle on note 4

[Easy]
SPOILER
i strongly recommend u stick with distance snap in easy diff, plz fix all the spacing issues Fixed
00:54:108 (1) - remove whistle at the start Fixed
00:55:847 (2) - ^ Fixed
00:57:586 (3) - finish Fixed
02:06:281 and 02:06:716: remove time section, they r no used Fixed
02:59:325 (1) - finish Fixed

note that i would like to see ur feed back about my mod to know wat u fix wat not, if u need my help just catch me IG ^^
I like the song
Here's a good luck blessing star~ :oops: Thank you so much! :)
I am still editing the rest btw. and sorry about the bad coding lol
Lucy_Heartfilia_old
554 posts
Joined March 2010
Lucy_Heartfilia_old
General
Volume - 10%
improve slider

Easy
Stacking -2~3
01:37:586(1) make the ugly slider better
02:46:282 make (4) and (5) Symmetric
02:55:847 (1) can't overlapped like this

Normal
Stacking - 3~4
01:48:890(1)~(5) diffierent distance
02:03:673(3) Askew
02:05:847(2) One grid down
02:21:064(1) ugly distance
02:27:586(8) delete note .strange
02:38:455(2) one grid right
02:42:151(1) error distance.Too close

Hard
00:41:064(3) ugly slider
00:48:890(3) ~
00:50:629(1) Askew
00:55:847(6) one grid down
01:16:281(8) Askew
01:25:847(3) delete one repeat
01:34:542(2) ugly slider
01:43:673(3) ~

Game of love
Stacking -2
many ugly slider :o
00:55:412(1) too closed
01:25:412~01:32:151 strange rythem.I suggest remap.Because rhthem and distance

You should improve your typesetting.
Good luck
LunarSakuya
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Topic Starter
LunarSakuya
SPOILER

kissfly wrote:

General
Volume - 10%
improve slider

Easy
Stacking -2~3 ?
01:37:586(1) make the ugly slider better Fixed
02:46:282 make (4) and (5) Symmetric Fixed
02:55:847 (1) can't overlapped like this Fixed

Normal
Stacking - 3~4 ?
01:48:890(1)~(5) diffierent distance Fixed
02:03:673(3) Askew Fixed
02:05:847(2) One grid down Fixed?
02:21:064(1) ugly distance Fixed
02:27:586(8) delete note .strange Fixed
02:38:455(2) one grid right Fixed
02:42:151(1) error distance.Too close Fixed

Hard
00:41:064(3) ugly slider Fixed
00:48:890(3) ~ Fixed
00:50:629(1) Askew Fixed
00:55:847(6) one grid down Fixed
01:16:281(8) Askew Fixed
01:25:847(3) delete one repeat Fixed
01:34:542(2) ugly slider Fixed
01:43:673(3) ~ Fixed

Game of love
Stacking -2 ?
many ugly slider :o
00:55:412(1) too closed Fixed
01:25:412~01:32:151 strange rythem.I suggest remap.Because rhthem and distance Considering

You should improve your typesetting. Thank you! I might have missed one thing above..
Good luck
Laurier
1,785 posts
Joined February 2011
Laurier
hi :)
from my mod queue
General
Time of KIAI is made the same.
Normal
Difficulty
I think HPAROD5 is difficult for beginners.
please change HP3 AR4 OD3 ?

00:55:847 (4) - new combo
01:27:151 (5) - new combo
01:28:021 (1) - remove newcombo
01:28:890 (3) - newcombo
01:34:108 (5) - new combo
01:34:977 (1) - remove
01:35:847 (3) - new
01:39:325 (1)~01:48:455 (4) why don'd use clap?
01:57:586 (1,1) - remove newcombo
02:18:455 (1,1) - ^
02:39:325 (3) - difficult for beginners? or if use this slider Reverse +1

hard
00:29:542 - add note?
00:48:890 (3) - try this http://puu.sh/8trH
01:17:369 (3) - spacing
02:53:238 (5) - ctrl+c and ctrl+v +ctrl+H (4)
02:54:108 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this stream is difficult to hard diff
03:02:803 (1) - delete and supin end at tihis time

Game of Love
HP and OD+1
00:36:390 - add note?
00:43:238 - ^
01:04:597 (1) - resnap?
02:26:934 (5) - move x420y264
02:26:934 (5) - add note
LunarSakuya
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Topic Starter
LunarSakuya
SPOILER
[quote="Laurier"]hi :)
from my mod queue
General
Time of KIAI is made the same. Fixed
Normal
Difficulty
I think HPAROD5 is difficult for beginners.
please change HP3 AR4 OD3 ? Fixed

00:55:847 (4) - new combo Fixed
01:27:151 (5) - new combo Fixed
01:28:021 (1) - remove newcombo Fixed
01:28:890 (3) - newcombo Fixed
01:34:108 (5) - new combo Fixed
01:34:977 (1) - remove Fixed
01:35:847 (3) - new Fixed
01:39:325 (1)~01:48:455 (4) why don'd use clap? Sorry I have reasons...
01:57:586 (1,1) - remove newcombo Fixed
02:18:455 (1,1) - ^ Fixed
02:39:325 (3) - difficult for beginners? or if use this slider Reverse +1 Fixed

hard
00:29:542 - add note? Fixed
00:48:890 (3) - try this http://puu.sh/8trH Fixed
01:17:369 (3) - spacing Where should I put it?
02:53:238 (5) - ctrl+c and ctrl+v +ctrl+H (4) Check please?
02:54:108 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this stream is difficult to hard diff Fixed
03:02:803 (1) - delete and supin end at tihis time Fixed

Game of Love
HP and OD+1 Fixed
00:36:390 - add note? Fixed
00:43:238 - ^ Fixed
01:04:597 (1) - resnap? Fixed?
02:26:934 (5) - move x420y264 Fixed
02:26:934 (5) - add note[/quote Alredy there?]
Last edited by LunarSakuya , edited 1 time in total.
YTYuyu
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Joined January 2011
YTYuyu
yo modding this map because of ur request :)

General:
the offset has to be the same for 1 mapset
like laurier said the kiai time has to be the same for 1 mapset

Easy:
00:45:412(1) - remove NC
00:54:108(1) - if ur trying to do a blanket this isnt a good 1. so make the slider like this http://puu.sh/8QUv
01:30:629(5) - NC
01:49:760(4) - 1 grid left
02:05:412 - move the green line here and disable kiai time
02:08:890(1) - remove NC
02:15:847(1) - ^
02:21:825(1) - make it like this http://puu.sh/8R9t
02:36:716(1) - remove NC

Normal:
01:34:107(5,6) - spacing

Hard:
00:55:847(6) - 1 grid down
01:42:803(1) - stack it on (1) at 01:41:933
02:52:368(4,5) - i dont like how this looks mainly because the sliders r overlapping. itd be better if u stack the beginning of (5) to the beginning of (4)

Game of Love:
no problems here. except for 1 thing. can u change the difficulty name to Lunatic?

this is the best i can do. GL :D
LunarSakuya
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LunarSakuya
SPOILER

Byakugan249 wrote:

yo modding this map because of ur request :)

General:
the offset has to be the same for 1 mapset
like laurier said the kiai time has to be the same for 1 mapset

Easy:
00:45:412(1) - remove NC Fixed
00:54:108(1) - if ur trying to do a blanket this isnt a good 1. so make the slider like this http://puu.sh/8QUv I tried.
01:30:629(5) - NC Fixed
01:49:760(4) - 1 grid left Fixed
02:05:412 - move the green line here and disable kiai time Fixed
02:08:890(1) - remove NC Fixed
02:15:847(1) - ^ Fixed
02:21:825(1) - make it like this http://puu.sh/8R9t Fixed?
02:36:716(1) - remove NC Fixed

Normal:
01:34:107(5,6) - spacing Fixed

Hard:
00:55:847(6) - 1 grid down Fixed
01:42:803(1) - stack it on (1) at 01:41:933 Fixed
02:52:368(4,5) - i dont like how this looks mainly because the sliders r overlapping. itd be better if u stack the beginning of (5) to the beginning of (4) ?

Game of Love:
no problems here. except for 1 thing. can u change the difficulty name to Lunatic? Fixed

this is the best i can do. GL :D THanks!!!
Hakkero
Hakkero
Easy, Normal and Hard seem fine for me.

Lunatic:
- 00:43:347 (1) remove this note, combo starts at (2) instead
- 01:41:097 (2,3,4,5) make these back and forth beats instead of stacking (2,3) and (4,5)
- 01:56:716 (1,2,3,4) move (3) to (1) and (4) to (2)
- 01:57:586 (1) move to (2) of this combo

not much, but feels better like this while playing imo
LunarSakuya
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Topic Starter
LunarSakuya

Hakkero wrote:

Easy, Normal and Hard seem fine for me.

Lunatic:
- 00:43:347 (1) remove this note, combo starts at (2) instead Someone suggested that note but Fixed
- 01:41:097 (2,3,4,5) make these back and forth beats instead of stacking (2,3) and (4,5) Fixed
- 01:56:716 (1,2,3,4) move (3) to (1) and (4) to (2) Fized
- 01:57:586 (1) move to (2) of this combo Fixed

not much, but feels better like this while playing imo
Why thank you, this means a lot!! :) :D :)

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(At comment below) AWESOME
Last edited by LunarSakuya , edited 1 time in total.
Hakkero
Hakkero
yeah, that's what i meant
Elly-chan
969 posts
Joined January 2011
Elly-chan
LunarSakuya >w<!

(General)
  1. Your MP3 Bit Rate is 320. Please Re-encode it to something between 128-192 kbps.
  2. littledevil.jpeg is 1062 x 768. The dimensions you are looking for is 1024 x 768, sooo.. resize your background to 1024 x 768 please.
  3. The BPM point should be the same in every map. Please, move it to 00:15:847 in every map.
(Skin)
  1. pause-overlay.png should be exactly 1024 x 768 dimensions. Resize your current image to these dimensions, please.
  2. hit0.png's dimensions have to be 256x256. Resize, please.
Also, a side comment about the skin. Shinki has nothing to do with this song nor relates to this song whatsoever, so maybe delete the Shinki Combo burst?

(Easy)
Hitsound and Combo mods
Hitsound
  1. 00:29:760 (1) - Finish.
  2. 00:43:673 (1) - Finish.
  3. 00:55:412 (2) - Clap.
  4. 01:11:499 (Spinner) - Finish.
  5. 01:23:673 (Spinner) - Finish.
  6. 01:31:064 (1) - Clap at the end repeat of the slider.
  7. 01:34:542 (2) - At the slider end, add a clap.
  8. 01:36:281 (5) - Clap.
  9. 01:37:586 (1) - Finish.
  10. 02:04:977 (6) - Clap.
  11. 02:05:412 (7) - Finish.
  12. 02:08:890 (2) - Remove the Whistle.
  13. 02:21:064 (1) - Finish.
  14. 02:24:108 (2) - Clap.
  15. 02:48:890 (1) - Finish.
  16. 02:50:195 (1) - Clap.
  17. 02:51:934 (1) - Clap.
  18. 02:57:151 (1) - Clap.
  19. 02:58:890 (1) - Clap.
Combo
  1. 00:32:369 (1) - Remove New Combo.
  2. 00:33:238 (2) - New Combo.
  3. 00:38:455 (1) - Remove New Combo.
  4. 01:27:151 (1) - Remove New Combo.
  5. 01:28:890 (3) - New Combo.
  6. 01:32:369 (3) - New Combo.
  7. 01:33:238 (1) - Remove New Combo.
  8. 01:34:108 (2) - New Combo.
  9. 01:35:847 (4) - New Combo.
  10. 01:42:803 (3) - New Combo.
  11. 01:54:977 (1) - Remove New Combo.
  12. 01:58:455 (1) - Remove New Combo.
  13. 02:03:673 (5) - New Combo.
  14. 02:17:586 (1) - New Combo.

orz i'm lazy at the moment i'll finish the mod later
LunarSakuya
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Topic Starter
LunarSakuya
SPOILER

Elly-chan wrote:

LunarSakuya >w<!

(General)
  1. Your MP3 Bit Rate is 320. Please Re-encode it to something between 128-192 kbps. lol read PM...
  2. littledevil.jpeg is 1062 x 768. The dimensions you are looking for is 1024 x 768, sooo.. resize your background to 1024 x 768 please. Fixed
  3. The BPM point should be the same in every map. Please, move it to 00:15:847 in every map. Fixed
(Skin)
  1. pause-overlay.png should be exactly 1024 x 768 dimensions. Resize your current image to these dimensions, please. Fixed
  2. hit0.png's dimensions have to be 256x256. Resize, please....It looks huge...Help? xD
Also, a side comment about the skin. Shinki has nothing to do with this song nor relates to this song whatsoever, so maybe delete the Shinki Combo burst? Help me find another combo pic? xD one's okay though i guess

(Easy)
Hitsound and Combo mods
Hitsound
  1. 00:29:760 (1) - Finish. Fixed
  2. 00:43:673 (1) - Finish. Fixed
  3. 00:55:412 (2) - Clap. Fixed
  4. 01:11:499 (Spinner) - Finish. Fixed
  5. 01:23:673 (Spinner) - Finish. Fixed
  6. 01:31:064 (1) - Clap at the end repeat of the slider. Fixed
  7. 01:34:542 (2) - At the slider end, add a clap. Fixed
  8. 01:36:281 (5) - Clap. Fixed
  9. 01:37:586 (1) - Finish. Fixed
  10. 02:04:977 (6) - Clap. Fixed
  11. 02:05:412 (7) - Finish. Fixed
  12. 02:08:890 (2) - Remove the Whistle. Fixed
  13. 02:21:064 (1) - Finish. Fixed
  14. 02:24:108 (2) - Clap. Fixed
  15. 02:48:890 (1) - Finish. Fixed
  16. 02:50:195 (1) - Clap. Fixed
  17. 02:51:934 (1) - Clap. Fixed
  18. 02:57:151 (1) - Clap. Fixed
  19. 02:58:890 (1) - Clap. Fixed
Combo
  1. 00:32:369 (1) - Remove New Combo. Fixed
  2. 00:33:238 (2) - New Combo. Fixed
  3. 00:38:455 (1) - Remove New Combo. Fixed
  4. 01:27:151 (1) - Remove New Combo. Fixed
  5. 01:28:890 (3) - New Combo. Fixed
  6. 01:32:369 (3) - New Combo. Fixed
  7. 01:33:238 (1) - Remove New Combo. Fixed
  8. 01:34:108 (2) - New Combo. Fixed
  9. 01:35:847 (4) - New Combo. Fixed
  10. 01:42:803 (3) - New Combo. Fixed
  11. 01:54:977 (1) - Remove New Combo.Fixed
  12. 01:58:455 (1) - Remove New Combo. Fixed
  13. 02:03:673 (5) - New Combo. Fixed
  14. 02:17:586 (1) - New Combo. Fixed

orz i'm lazy at the moment i'll finish the mod later Take your time =P
Ayukawa Tenri
7 posts
Joined October 2011
Ayukawa Tenri
Funny thing is both of you live in West Chester.
LunarSakuya
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
LunarSakuya
I know right, she's in the district next to mine o_O
Ayukawa Tenri
7 posts
Joined October 2011
Ayukawa Tenri
Biggest lulz. Meet up sometime?
Elly-chan
969 posts
Joined January 2011
Elly-chan

Ayukawa Tenri wrote:

Biggest lulz. Meet up sometime?
THIS! :O
GigaClon
168 posts
Joined September 2011
GigaClon
Return mod for modding my.

Everything seems fine, although it seems I'm not getting all of your custom skin. all I have is the miss, 50 and the Elite Beat! sprites.
LunarSakuya
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
LunarSakuya

GigaClon wrote:

Return mod for modding my.

Everything seems fine, although it seems I'm not getting all of your custom skin. all I have is the miss, 50 and the Elite Beat! sprites.
...Not even the lyrics? :o

Alright, thanks for letting me know!
Now the problem is how in the world do I fix this...
Kei
1,797 posts
Joined May 2010
Kei
Hi!

General

Samples volume sounds loud. You should low the volume a bit.

[Easy]

This is a quite difficult [Easy] difficulty.
When I told you to delete a note, it's because I personally think that it makes everything a bit difficult.

00:32:369 (4) - Make this slider end at the next white tick, and delete 00:33:238 (1). After that add NC at 00:34:108 (2).
00:34:977 (3,4,5) - Don't stack notes on a Easy difficulty.
00:36:716 (1,...) - Try this. It's better for a Easy difficulty imo: http://puu.sh/aOvj
00:41:934 (2,3,4) - Again. Don't stack notes.
00:47:151 (1,2,3) - ^
00:50:629 (1,2,3,4) - This is way too hard. Try something more simple and easy, like this: http://puu.sh/aOw5
01:18:455 (1,2,3,4) - Try to avoid linear patterns ><
01:25:412 (1,2,3,4) - ^ http://puu.sh/aOwZ
01:32:369 (3) - New combo.
01:35:847 (1,2,3) - And again. Don't stack notes.
01:43:238 (2) - Delete.
01:53:238 (1) - Move this slider somewhere else because It's being hidden by 01:51:499 (2).
01:53:238 (1,2,3) - Again, a hard part. Try this: http://puu.sh/aOzO
01:56:716 (1,2,3) - Don't stack notes.
02:04:977 (2,3) - ^
02:22:369 (2) - Delete this note, or do something like this: http://puu.sh/aOAs
02:23:673 (1,2,...) - Stacked notes again. Also, I suggest you to try something more simple here too: http://puu.sh/aOBp
02:28:021 (1,2,3,4) - ^ http://puu.sh/aOBB

[Normal]

I found spacing problems in this difficulty. Check all the spacings with Distance Snap.

00:50:629 (1) - This slider has so many repeats for a Normal difficulty imo.
01:16:716 (7) - Remove NC.
01:12:369 ~ 01:18:021 - Add samples?
01:48:890 (1,2,3,4,5) - Delete 01:49:108 (2) and 01:49:542 (4).
01:49:760 (3) - NC here instead of being at 01:50:194 (1).
01:58:455 (3) - Remove NC?
02:00:412 (2) - Delete?
02:01:716 (6) - ^
02:03:673 (3) - Too many repeats ><
02:04:977 (4) - NC here instead of being at 02:05:412 (1).
02:10:195 (1) - Maybe remove NC?
02:17:151 (4) - NC here instead of being at 02:17:586 (1)?
02:29:760 (5) - Remove NC.
02:39:325 (3) - Replace this slider with one of the same duration (without repeats) or something like that. That short slider sounds off.
02:50:847 (3,4,5,6,7) - This is difficult for a Normal imo.
02:52:803 (1) - Remove NC.

[Hard]

Some spacing problems here too. Open AIMod and try to fix that by yourself.

00:31:064 (6) - NC here instead of being at 00:31:499 (1).
00:41:934 (1) - Remove NC.
00:43:673 (2) - Add finish at start.
00:44:977 (6) - NC.
00:45:412 (1) - Remove NC. Also, why is there a random slider velocity decrease all of a sudden?
00:48:021 (1) - Remove NC.
00:48:673 (4) - NC.
00:48:890 (3) - And.. why it increases now? I personally don't like that kind of velocity's changes. They seem random to me.
00:55:412 (4) - NC.
00:56:281 (1) - Remove NC.
00:57:586 (1) - NC.
01:16:282 (8) - NC.
01:16:716 (1) - Remove NC.
01:19:108 (5) - NC.
01:19:325 (1) - Remove NC.
01:29:325 (3) - Again that random slider volocity decrease ;n; Whyyyy?
01:32:151 (5) - NC.
01:33:238 (1) - Remove NC.
01:35:195 (4) - Move that note somewhere because it's being hidden by 01:34:542 (2).
01:35:629 (6) - NC.
01:36:716 (1) - Remove NC.
01:37:586 (7) - NC.
01:40:629 (5) - NC
01:41:064 (1) - Remove NC.
01:47:586 (1,2,3) - Move these notes somewhere ;n; They're placed where 01:47:151 (4) was. Try to avoid that. It doesn't look good ><
01:55:847 (1) - Remove NC.
01:56:716 (6) - NC.
01:57:586 (1) - Remove NC.
02:01:499 (6) - NC.
02:02:586 (1) - Remove NC.
02:02:803 (2) - NC.
02:03:673 (5) - NC.
02:04:542 (1) - Remove NC.
02:04:977 (4) - NC.
02:05:412 (1,1,1,1) - Remove NC to those notes.
02:09:325 (1) - Remove NC.
02:10:195 (7) - NC.
02:10:195 (7) - NC.
02:11:934 (9) - NC.
02:12:803 (1,1) - Remove NC to both of the sliders.
02:15:847 (1) - Remove NC.
02:17:151 (8) - NC.
02:17:586 (4) - Remove NC.
02:21:064 (4) - NC?
02:23:238 (1) - Remove NC.
02:23:455 (7) - NC.
02:24:108 (1) - Remove NC.
02:24:542 (5) - NC.
02:25:847 (9) - Maybe NC here and remove NC at 02:26:282 (1)?
02:27:586 (1) - Remove NC.
02:28:021 (2) - NC.
02:28:890 (1) - Remove NC.
02:29:760 (1) - Remove NC.
02:41:064 (1) - Remove NC.
02:52:369 (4,5) - Confusing. (5) It's being hidden by (4).
02:57:803 (7) - NC.
02:58:455 (1) - Remove NC.
02:59:977 (1) - Remove NC.

[Lunatic]

00:32:369 (6) - NC.
00:34:542 (5) - NC.
00:34:977 (1) - Remove NC.
00:40:195 (10) - NC.
00:48:455 (7) - NC.
00:48:890 (1) - Remove NC.
00:50:629 (6) - NC.
00:51:064 (1) - Remove NC.
00:53:673 (1) - Remove NC.
00:54:108 (6) - NC.
01:16:282 (8) - NC.
01:18:021 (1) - Remove NC.
01:18:455 (2) - NC.
01:31:499 (5) - Remove NC.
01:33:238 (1) - Remove NC.
01:34:108 (5) - NC.
01:37:586 (8) - NC.
01:42:803 (5) - NC.
01:43:673 (1) - Remove NC.
01:44:108 (7) - NC.
01:44:542 (1) - Remove NC.
01:45:195 (6) - Remove NC.
01:49:760 (5) - NC.
01:54:542 (5) - NC.
01:54:977 (1) - Remove NC.
01:55:412 (3) - Touchs the HP Bar.
01:57:586 (1) - Remove NC
01:58:021 (7) - NC.
01:59:325 (1) - Remove NC.
02:02:803 (1) - Remove NC.
02:03:673 (9) - NC.
02:06:716 (1) - Remove NC.
02:07:151 (9) - NC.
02:08:455 (1) - Remove NC.
02:09:542 (1) - Remove NC.
02:10:195 (1) - Remove NC.
02:10:629 (5) - Remove NC.
02:11:933 (7) - NC.
02:15:847 (1) - Remove NC.
02:17:151 (7) - NC.
02:17:586 (1) - Remove NC.
02:18:890 (7) - NC.
02:20:629 (1) - Remove NC.
02:21:064 (9) - NC.
02:21:934 (1) - Remove NC.
02:25:412 (1) - Remove NC.
02:25:847 (2) - NC.
02:27:586 (1) - Remove NC.
02:28:021 (8) - NC.
02:29:760 (1) - Remove NC.
02:37:151 (5) - NC.
02:37:586 (1) - Remove NC.
02:44:760 (1) - Remove NC.
02:45:195 (7) - NC.
02:45:738 (1) - Remove NC.
02:50:412 (1) - Remove NC.
02:50:629 (2) - NC.
02:52:151 (7) - NC.
02:52:369 (1) - Remove NC.
02:59:107 (2) - NC.
02:59:760 (1) - Remove NC.
02:59:977 (8) - Remove NC.

__________________


You should work more on your beatmap. Specially on the design :3
Good Luck!

EDIT: I Forgot to tell you something. Resize all the images you used (BG, SB) to 1024x768. That's the allowed image size. Ah, and, yes, the SB downloaded okay :3.
LunarSakuya
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
LunarSakuya
SPOILER

Kei wrote:

Hi!

General

Samples volume sounds loud. You should low the volume a bit.

[Easy]

This is a quite difficult [Easy] difficulty.
When I told you to delete a note, it's because I personally think that it makes everything a bit difficult.

00:32:369 (4) - Make this slider end at the next white tick, and delete 00:33:238 (1). After that add NC at 00:34:108 (2).
00:34:977 (3,4,5) - Don't stack notes on a Easy difficulty.
00:36:716 (1,...) - Try this. It's better for a Easy difficulty imo: http://puu.sh/aOvj
00:41:934 (2,3,4) - Again. Don't stack notes.
00:47:151 (1,2,3) - ^
00:50:629 (1,2,3,4) - This is way too hard. Try something more simple and easy, like this: http://puu.sh/aOw5
01:18:455 (1,2,3,4) - Try to avoid linear patterns ><
01:25:412 (1,2,3,4) - ^ http://puu.sh/aOwZ
01:32:369 (3) - New combo.
01:35:847 (1,2,3) - And again. Don't stack notes.
01:43:238 (2) - Delete.
01:53:238 (1) - Move this slider somewhere else because It's being hidden by 01:51:499 (2).
01:53:238 (1,2,3) - Again, a hard part. Try this: http://puu.sh/aOzO
01:56:716 (1,2,3) - Don't stack notes.
02:04:977 (2,3) - ^
02:22:369 (2) - Delete this note, or do something like this: http://puu.sh/aOAs
02:23:673 (1,2,...) - Stacked notes again. Also, I suggest you to try something more simple here too: http://puu.sh/aOBp
02:28:021 (1,2,3,4) - ^ http://puu.sh/aOBB

[Normal]

I found spacing problems in this difficulty. Check all the spacings with Distance Snap.

00:50:629 (1) - This slider has so many repeats for a Normal difficulty imo.
01:16:716 (7) - Remove NC.
01:12:369 ~ 01:18:021 - Add samples?
01:48:890 (1,2,3,4,5) - Delete 01:49:108 (2) and 01:49:542 (4).
01:49:760 (3) - NC here instead of being at 01:50:194 (1).
01:58:455 (3) - Remove NC?
02:00:412 (2) - Delete?
02:01:716 (6) - ^
02:03:673 (3) - Too many repeats ><
02:04:977 (4) - NC here instead of being at 02:05:412 (1).
02:10:195 (1) - Maybe remove NC?
02:17:151 (4) - NC here instead of being at 02:17:586 (1)?
02:29:760 (5) - Remove NC.
02:39:325 (3) - Replace this slider with one of the same duration (without repeats) or something like that. That short slider sounds off.
02:50:847 (3,4,5,6,7) - This is difficult for a Normal imo.
02:52:803 (1) - Remove NC.

[Hard]

Some spacing problems here too. Open AIMod and try to fix that by yourself.

00:31:064 (6) - NC here instead of being at 00:31:499 (1).
00:41:934 (1) - Remove NC.
00:43:673 (2) - Add finish at start.
00:44:977 (6) - NC.
00:45:412 (1) - Remove NC. Also, why is there a random slider velocity decrease all of a sudden?
00:48:021 (1) - Remove NC.
00:48:673 (4) - NC.
00:48:890 (3) - And.. why it increases now? I personally don't like that kind of velocity's changes. They seem random to me.
00:55:412 (4) - NC.
00:56:281 (1) - Remove NC.
00:57:586 (1) - NC.
01:16:282 (8) - NC.
01:16:716 (1) - Remove NC.
01:19:108 (5) - NC.
01:19:325 (1) - Remove NC.
01:29:325 (3) - Again that random slider volocity decrease ;n; Whyyyy?
01:32:151 (5) - NC.
01:33:238 (1) - Remove NC.
01:35:195 (4) - Move that note somewhere because it's being hidden by 01:34:542 (2).
01:35:629 (6) - NC.
01:36:716 (1) - Remove NC.
01:37:586 (7) - NC.
01:40:629 (5) - NC
01:41:064 (1) - Remove NC.
01:47:586 (1,2,3) - Move these notes somewhere ;n; They're placed where 01:47:151 (4) was. Try to avoid that. It doesn't look good ><
01:55:847 (1) - Remove NC.
01:56:716 (6) - NC.
01:57:586 (1) - Remove NC.
02:01:499 (6) - NC.
02:02:586 (1) - Remove NC.
02:02:803 (2) - NC.
02:03:673 (5) - NC.
02:04:542 (1) - Remove NC.
02:04:977 (4) - NC.
02:05:412 (1,1,1,1) - Remove NC to those notes.
02:09:325 (1) - Remove NC.
02:10:195 (7) - NC.
02:10:195 (7) - NC.
02:11:934 (9) - NC.
02:12:803 (1,1) - Remove NC to both of the sliders.
02:15:847 (1) - Remove NC.
02:17:151 (8) - NC.
02:17:586 (4) - Remove NC.
02:21:064 (4) - NC?
02:23:238 (1) - Remove NC.
02:23:455 (7) - NC.
02:24:108 (1) - Remove NC.
02:24:542 (5) - NC.
02:25:847 (9) - Maybe NC here and remove NC at 02:26:282 (1)?
02:27:586 (1) - Remove NC.
02:28:021 (2) - NC.
02:28:890 (1) - Remove NC.
02:29:760 (1) - Remove NC.
02:41:064 (1) - Remove NC.
02:52:369 (4,5) - Confusing. (5) It's being hidden by (4).
02:57:803 (7) - NC.
02:58:455 (1) - Remove NC.
02:59:977 (1) - Remove NC.

[Lunatic]

00:32:369 (6) - NC.
00:34:542 (5) - NC.
00:34:977 (1) - Remove NC.
00:40:195 (10) - NC.
00:48:455 (7) - NC.
00:48:890 (1) - Remove NC.
00:50:629 (6) - NC.
00:51:064 (1) - Remove NC.
00:53:673 (1) - Remove NC.
00:54:108 (6) - NC.
01:16:282 (8) - NC.
01:18:021 (1) - Remove NC.
01:18:455 (2) - NC.
01:31:499 (5) - Remove NC.
01:33:238 (1) - Remove NC.
01:34:108 (5) - NC.
01:37:586 (8) - NC.
01:42:803 (5) - NC.
01:43:673 (1) - Remove NC.
01:44:108 (7) - NC.
01:44:542 (1) - Remove NC.
01:45:195 (6) - Remove NC.
01:49:760 (5) - NC.
01:54:542 (5) - NC.
01:54:977 (1) - Remove NC.
01:55:412 (3) - Touchs the HP Bar.
01:57:586 (1) - Remove NC
01:58:021 (7) - NC.
01:59:325 (1) - Remove NC.
02:02:803 (1) - Remove NC.
02:03:673 (9) - NC.
02:06:716 (1) - Remove NC.
02:07:151 (9) - NC.
02:08:455 (1) - Remove NC.
02:09:542 (1) - Remove NC.
02:10:195 (1) - Remove NC.
02:10:629 (5) - Remove NC.
02:11:933 (7) - NC.
02:15:847 (1) - Remove NC.
02:17:151 (7) - NC.
02:17:586 (1) - Remove NC.
02:18:890 (7) - NC.
02:20:629 (1) - Remove NC.
02:21:064 (9) - NC.
02:21:934 (1) - Remove NC.
02:25:412 (1) - Remove NC.
02:25:847 (2) - NC.
02:27:586 (1) - Remove NC.
02:28:021 (8) - NC.
02:29:760 (1) - Remove NC.
02:37:151 (5) - NC.
02:37:586 (1) - Remove NC.
02:44:760 (1) - Remove NC.
02:45:195 (7) - NC.
02:45:738 (1) - Remove NC.
02:50:412 (1) - Remove NC.
02:50:629 (2) - NC.
02:52:151 (7) - NC.
02:52:369 (1) - Remove NC.
02:59:107 (2) - NC.
02:59:760 (1) - Remove NC.
02:59:977 (8) - Remove NC.

__________________


You should work more on your beatmap. Specially on the design :3
Good Luck!

EDIT: I Forgot to tell you something. Resize all the images you used (BG, SB) to 1024x768. That's the allowed image size. Ah, and, yes, the SB downloaded okay :3.

WHEW longest mod ever xD Fixed all combos and everything else except about 2 pattern aspects :) Thank you so much for the wonderful mod!!!
I will resize the images soon..
Delica_old
5 posts
Joined February 2011
Delica_old
Hi~From my queues

General
  1. Change MP3 Beatmap with an Mp3 of 192kbps+ is not rankable
  2. delete kiai 02:35:195 -03:02:803?

Easy

  • 00:30:629 (2) - add clap
    00:32:368 (4) - slide head add clap
    00:34:108 (1) - add clap
    00:34:977 (2) - add whistle
    00:36:716 (1) - slide head add whistle and slide tail add clap
    00:37:586 (2) - slide middle and tail add whistle
    00:41:064 (2) - add clap
    00:41:933 (3) - add whistle
    00:43:673 (1) - ^
    00:45:412 (2) - ^
    00:50:629 (1) - ^
    00:52:368 (3) - ^
    00:54:107 (4) - ^
    00:55:846 (6) - ^
    01:12:369-01:21:064 (4) - ^
    01:25:412 (1) - slide tail add clap
    01:27:151 (2) - ^
    01:31:499 (2) - ^
    01:34:977 (2) - add whistle
    01:35:846 (3) - slide tail add whistle
    01:35:846 (3) - slide middle add clap
    01:39:325 (1) - ^
    01:41:064 (2) - ^
    01:44:542 (3) - ^
    01:46:282 (1,2,3,4) - remove whistle
    01:49:760 (1) - add whistle
    01:51:499 (2) - add whistle and slide middle add clap
    01:53:238 (1) - add whistle
    01:54:977 (3) - ^
    01:56:716 (1) - ^
    02:00:195 (1,2,3,4) - ^
    02:03:673 (1,2) - ^
    02:07:151 (1) - slide head add finish
    02:08:890 (2) - add whistle
    02:10:629 (1,3) - ^
    02:12:369 (1,3) - ^
    02:14:108 (1,2) - ^
    02:17:586 (1,2) - slide head and slide tail add whistle
    02:24:542 (2) - add whistle
    02:26:282 (4) - slide head and slide tail add whistle
    02:28:020 (1,2) - slide head add whistle
    02:41:934 (1,2) - slide middle add clap
    02:45:412 (3) - slide tail add clap
    02:46:282 (4) - ^

Normal
ok sounds problem is so annoying
00:30:194 (2) - slide head add clap
00:31:064 (3) - add clap
00:31:499 (4) - slide middle add clap
00:32:803 (5) - add clap
00:33:238 (1) - slide middle add clap
00:34:542 (2,4) - add clap
00:35:847 (5) - imperfect stack
00:36:716 (1) - slide tail add clap
00:38:021 (3) - add clap
00:38:890 (1) - ^
00:39:325 (2) - add clap on 00:39:760
00:40:629 (1) - slide head add clap
00:41:499 (2) - add clap
00:42:368 (5) - ^
00:49:760 (3,4) - add whistle
00:50:194 (5) - add clap
00:50:629 (1) - add whistle on head and middle then add clap on tail
00:54:108 (1) - ^
00:54:977 (2) - add whistle
00:55:194 (3) - add note with whistle
01:21:064 (4) - add whistle
01:26:716 (4) - add clap
01:28:455 (4) - ^
01:30:194 (3) - ^
01:35:412 (2) - ^
01:40:629 (2,4) - ^
01:42:803 (1,2) - add whistle
01:43:238 (3) - add clap
01:43:673 (4,5) - add clap on tail
01:45:412 (6) - ^
01:46:282 (1,2) - ^
01:48:021 (3,4) - add clap
01:50:195 (1) - add clap on 1 and 3

Hard
00:44:977 (6) - remove NC
00:45:412 (1) - NC
00:48:673 (1) - remove NC
00:48:890 (1) - NC
00:52:151 (1) - remove NC
00:52:369 (1) - NC
01:14:977 (1) - NC
01:17:369 (4) - weird distance
01:19:325 (1) - NC
01:27:151 (4) - NC
01:36:282 (1) - NC
02:04:977 (4) - remove NC
02:05:412 (5) - NC
02:12:369 (8) - NC
02:15:847 (5) - remove NC
02:17:151 (1) - NC
02:17:586 (7) - remove NC
02:23:455 (3) - remove NC
02:25:847 (1) - remove NC
02:26:064 (7) - add note
02:26:282 (2) - NC
02:27:586 (1) - NC
02:38:455 (1) - NC
02:57:803 (1) - remove NC
02:58:021 (8) - NC

Lunatic
00:31:064 (1) - remove NC
00:31:499 (2) - NC
00:48:890 (8) - NC
01:13:238 (5) - NC
01:14:108 (5) - remove NC
01:14:977 (7) - NC
01:15:847 (6,7,1,2) - just use 1/4 note?
01:16:282 (1,2) - remove NC
01:16:716 (1) - NC
01:23:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - dont stack
01:44:542 (1) - NC
01:48:021 (1) - NC
01:48:890 (1) - remove NC
01:58:455 (9) - NC
02:01:934 (1) - NC
02:02:260 (1) - remove NC
02:06:716 (1) - NC
02:07:151 (1) - remove NC
02:08:890 (13) - NC
02:15:847 (5) - NC
02:17:151 (1) - remove NC
02:17:586 (6) - NC
02:18:890 (4) - remove NC
02:19:325 (1) - NC
02:24:542 (1) - NC
02:26:281 (2) - replace it with slider http://puu.sh/b4UK
02:31:934 (5) - remove NC
02:32:042 (1) - NC
02:32:369 (5) - remove NC
02:32:586 (1) - NC
02:32:803 (5) - remove NC
02:52:151 (1) - NC
03:02:803 (2) - remove NC
02:52:369 (8) - remove NC

overall is a good map
Good luck
LunarSakuya
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Topic Starter
LunarSakuya
SPOILER

Delica wrote:

Hi~From my queues

General
  1. Change MP3 Beatmap with an Mp3 of 192kbps+ is not rankable
  2. delete kiai 02:35:195 -03:02:803?

Easy

  • 00:30:629 (2) - add clap
    00:32:368 (4) - slide head add clap
    00:34:108 (1) - add clap
    00:34:977 (2) - add whistle
    00:36:716 (1) - slide head add whistle and slide tail add clap
    00:37:586 (2) - slide middle and tail add whistle
    00:41:064 (2) - add clap
    00:41:933 (3) - add whistle
    00:43:673 (1) - ^
    00:45:412 (2) - ^
    00:50:629 (1) - ^
    00:52:368 (3) - ^
    00:54:107 (4) - ^
    00:55:846 (6) - ^
    01:12:369-01:21:064 (4) - ^
    01:25:412 (1) - slide tail add clap
    01:27:151 (2) - ^
    01:31:499 (2) - ^
    01:34:977 (2) - add whistle
    01:35:846 (3) - slide tail add whistle
    01:35:846 (3) - slide middle add clap
    01:39:325 (1) - ^
    01:41:064 (2) - ^
    01:44:542 (3) - ^
    01:46:282 (1,2,3,4) - remove whistle
    01:49:760 (1) - add whistle
    01:51:499 (2) - add whistle and slide middle add clap
    01:53:238 (1) - add whistle
    01:54:977 (3) - ^
    01:56:716 (1) - ^
    02:00:195 (1,2,3,4) - ^
    02:03:673 (1,2) - ^
    02:07:151 (1) - slide head add finish
    02:08:890 (2) - add whistle
    02:10:629 (1,3) - ^
    02:12:369 (1,3) - ^
    02:14:108 (1,2) - ^
    02:17:586 (1,2) - slide head and slide tail add whistle
    02:24:542 (2) - add whistle
    02:26:282 (4) - slide head and slide tail add whistle
    02:28:020 (1,2) - slide head add whistle
    02:41:934 (1,2) - slide middle add clap
    02:45:412 (3) - slide tail add clap
    02:46:282 (4) - ^

Normal
ok sounds problem is so annoying
00:30:194 (2) - slide head add clap
00:31:064 (3) - add clap
00:31:499 (4) - slide middle add clap
00:32:803 (5) - add clap
00:33:238 (1) - slide middle add clap
00:34:542 (2,4) - add clap
00:35:847 (5) - imperfect stack
00:36:716 (1) - slide tail add clap
00:38:021 (3) - add clap
00:38:890 (1) - ^
00:39:325 (2) - add clap on 00:39:760
00:40:629 (1) - slide head add clap
00:41:499 (2) - add clap
00:42:368 (5) - ^
00:49:760 (3,4) - add whistle
00:50:194 (5) - add clap
00:50:629 (1) - add whistle on head and middle then add clap on tail
00:54:108 (1) - ^
00:54:977 (2) - add whistle
00:55:194 (3) - add note with whistle
01:21:064 (4) - add whistle
01:26:716 (4) - add clap
01:28:455 (4) - ^
01:30:194 (3) - ^
01:35:412 (2) - ^
01:40:629 (2,4) - ^
01:42:803 (1,2) - add whistle
01:43:238 (3) - add clap
01:43:673 (4,5) - add clap on tail
01:45:412 (6) - ^
01:46:282 (1,2) - ^
01:48:021 (3,4) - add clap
01:50:195 (1) - add clap on 1 and 3

Hard
00:44:977 (6) - remove NC
00:45:412 (1) - NC
00:48:673 (1) - remove NC
00:48:890 (1) - NC
00:52:151 (1) - remove NC
00:52:369 (1) - NC
01:14:977 (1) - NC
01:17:369 (4) - weird distance
01:19:325 (1) - NC
01:27:151 (4) - NC
01:36:282 (1) - NC
02:04:977 (4) - remove NC
02:05:412 (5) - NC
02:12:369 (8) - NC
02:15:847 (5) - remove NC
02:17:151 (1) - NC
02:17:586 (7) - remove NC
02:23:455 (3) - remove NC
02:25:847 (1) - remove NC
02:26:064 (7) - add note
02:26:282 (2) - NC
02:27:586 (1) - NC
02:38:455 (1) - NC
02:57:803 (1) - remove NC
02:58:021 (8) - NC

Lunatic
00:31:064 (1) - remove NC
00:31:499 (2) - NC
00:48:890 (8) - NC
01:13:238 (5) - NC
01:14:108 (5) - remove NC
01:14:977 (7) - NC
01:15:847 (6,7,1,2) - just use 1/4 note?
01:16:282 (1,2) - remove NC
01:16:716 (1) - NC
01:23:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - dont stack
01:44:542 (1) - NC
01:48:021 (1) - NC
01:48:890 (1) - remove NC
01:58:455 (9) - NC
02:01:934 (1) - NC
02:02:260 (1) - remove NC
02:06:716 (1) - NC
02:07:151 (1) - remove NC
02:08:890 (13) - NC
02:15:847 (5) - NC
02:17:151 (1) - remove NC
02:17:586 (6) - NC
02:18:890 (4) - remove NC
02:19:325 (1) - NC
02:24:542 (1) - NC
02:26:281 (2) - replace it with slider http://puu.sh/b4UK
02:31:934 (5) - remove NC
02:32:042 (1) - NC
02:32:369 (5) - remove NC
02:32:586 (1) - NC
02:32:803 (5) - remove NC
02:52:151 (1) - NC
03:02:803 (2) - remove NC
02:52:369 (8) - remove NC

overall is a good map
Good luck

Haha sorry about the trouble you went through
The sections without claps were intentional so I didn't change those, but you did catch all the other hitsounds I missed!
There was a huge combo post before yours so I didn't change everything...anyway.
Thanks for the mod :D
Wasabi
69 posts
Joined June 2010
Wasabi
Hello!

General
I like the song, and a nice job with the SB!

Easy
I saw nothing wrong :)

Normal
01:16:281 - Add a note?
01:56:716 - Make slider symmetrical, same for slider 2 and 3 at this section.

Hard
01:54:760 - Move this note so the slider before it doesn't overlap with it.
02:09:325 - This slider feels awkward to me. Not sure what to suggest on it...
02:12:368 - New combo.

Lunatic
01:16:281 - Remove new combo
01:18:020 - New combo
01:18:455 - Remove new combo
01:50:629 - This spinner doesn't really fit, remove it?


These are only suggestions and sorry I couldn't be that much of help! Great map though :)
LunarSakuya
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Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
LunarSakuya
SPOILER

Snickerz wrote:

Hello!

General
I like the song, and a nice job with the SB!

Easy
I saw nothing wrong :) :)

Normal
01:16:281 - Add a note? Fixed
01:56:716 - Make slider symmetrical, same for slider 2 and 3 at this section. Fixed

Hard
01:54:760 - Move this note so the slider before it doesn't overlap with it.Fixed
02:09:325 - This slider feels awkward to me. Not sure what to suggest on it...Fixed
02:12:368 - New combo. Fixed. Put it on note before.

Lunatic
01:16:281 - Remove new combo Fixed
01:18:020 - New combo Nah
01:18:455 - Remove new combo ^
01:50:629 - This spinner doesn't really fit, remove it? Fixed


These are only suggestions and sorry I couldn't be that much of help! Great map though :)
Haha thanks for the mod xD It was good!
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Hello there

General
* You need spinner-background, spinner-approachcircle.png, cursortrail.png. It's a weird skin without that......
* The lyrics has an unused transparent background. Please crop it, or it'll be lag for ancient PC
* It seems lyric10.png are not used......
* Remove all kiai and start the kiai at 02:07:151 and end the kiai at 02:34:977
* Remove "english" in tags, since that word is in Genre after BAT ranked this
* I don't like if black space has the red spot
* Since you have an SB, uncheck the "Letterbox during breaks"

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Easy
* AR +1?

00:43:673 (1) - The sliderborder is overlapped by previous slider (Nazi)
00:47:151 (3) - New combo
00:48:890 (1) - Remove new combo
00:54:107 (4) - New combo
01:30:629 (1) - Remove new combo
01:34:108 (1) - ^
01:35:846 (3) - New combo
01:37:586 (1) - Remove new combo
02:47:151 (1) - ^
02:57:586 (1) - ^

--------------------------------------------------------------------

Normal
00:34:542 (2,3,4,5) - These stacks are make me boring.....
00:39:325 (2) - You using many repeating slider with short slider. This issue makes beginners go confusing about when the slider is end
00:43:673 (1) - I don't like this single combo on single object
02:39:325 (3) - Same issue as 00:39:325 (2)
02:56:064 (3) - New combo
02:57:803 (1) - Remove new combo

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Hard
00:29:542 ~ 00:43:673 (S) - This distance spacing for this part is 1,3x. You must to use 1,4x for this part, like others spacing
00:34:542 (1) - Meh, I don't like this anti-jump.....
01:53:021 (1,2,3,4) - ^

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Insane
01:15:847 (6,7,8,9) - I don't think stream are fit to the calm part.....
01:19:325 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^
01:23:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Spread this stacks. Since it has a different tick on each object, it confusing for read
01:44:542 (11) - New combo

--------------------------------------------------------------------

Ganbate!!!!
LunarSakuya
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Topic Starter
LunarSakuya
SPOILER

Leorda wrote:

Hello there

General
* You need spinner-background, spinner-approachcircle.png, cursortrail.png. It's a weird skin without that......Alright will do that
* The lyrics has an unused transparent background. Please crop it, or it'll be lag for ancient PC I'll...try...maybe
* It seems lyric10.png are not used...... Okay
* Remove all kiai and start the kiai at 02:07:151 and end the kiai at 02:34:977 Fixed
* Remove "english" in tags, since that word is in Genre after BAT ranked this Fixed
* I don't like if black space has the red spot Oh....Uh...idk I'll wait till someone else says something about it
* Since you have an SB, uncheck the "Letterbox during breaks" Fixed

--------------------------------------------------------------------

Easy
* AR +1?

00:43:673 (1) - The sliderborder is overlapped by previous slider (Nazi) Fixed
00:47:151 (3) - New combo Fixed
00:48:890 (1) - Remove new combo Fixed
00:54:107 (4) - New combo Fixed
01:30:629 (1) - Remove new combo Fixed
01:34:108 (1) - ^ Fixed
01:35:846 (3) - New combo Fixed
01:37:586 (1) - Remove new combo Fixed
02:47:151 (1) - ^ Fixed
02:57:586 (1) - ^ Fixed

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Normal
00:34:542 (2,3,4,5) - These stacks are make me boring..... Fixed
00:39:325 (2) - You using many repeating slider with short slider. This issue makes beginners go confusing about when the slider is end Fixed
00:43:673 (1) - I don't like this single combo on single object Fixed
02:39:325 (3) - Same issue as 00:39:325 (2) Fixed?
02:56:064 (3) - New combo
02:57:803 (1) - Remove new combo

--------------------------------------------------------------------

Hard
00:29:542 ~ 00:43:673 (S) - This distance spacing for this part is 1,3x. You must to use 1,4x for this part, like others spacing Fixed kinda
00:34:542 (1) - Meh, I don't like this anti-jump..... lol flipped it
01:53:021 (1,2,3,4) - ^ idk honestly

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Insane
01:15:847 (6,7,8,9) - I don't think stream are fit to the calm part..... Well....i'll consider
01:19:325 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^
01:23:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Spread this stacks. Since it has a different tick on each object, it confusing for read Okay
01:44:542 (11) - New combo Fixed

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Ganbate!!!!
Thanks!
Maya-kira
368 posts
Joined May 2011
Maya-kira
-general-

1) you need to complete the spinner elements .-. btw

2) sorry, forget to ignore easy and mine (just realized when I finished the mod hoho)



-easy-

01:30:629- (3) why not put it in the same place as (1)? they looks tidier
01:37:586- (2) this touch the hp bar, looks ugly :cry: change it into like this? (don't worry, the stack matches and they're not difficult to read)
SPOILER
120,168,97586,2,0,B|112:104|144:68|208:20|312:40|340:160,1,314.999990612269
01:43:673- (2,3) move (2) to 252,216 and (3) to 364,272 for a better pattern.
02:19:325- (2) I think its better to make a slider like (1) [fits the song better imo]
02:57:586- (1) remove nc

-normal-

00:29:760- (1,2,3) I think this pattern looks better.
SPOILER
00:52:368- (4,5) pattern them like this? flows better imo.
SPOILER
01:15:846- (3) stacking this on top of (4) looks more balanced imo >w<
01:26:281- (2,3,4) I think a 1/2 beat reverse slider is easier to play here.
01:28:020- (3,4) change this to 3/4 reverse slider?
01:34:977- (1,2) ^
01:45:412- (6) if you're following vocals, add 1 reverse.
01:57:586- (2,3) I think this pattern looks better.
SPOILER
02:18:455- (3) I think its better if you change this into a 1.5 slider and move this 1/2 beat earlier.
02:26:281- (7) I personally thinks 1-1 slider sounds better ><

-hard-

00:31:499- (2,3) I think this pattern flows better.
SPOILER
00:32:803- (5) it flows better if you press ctrl + r here .w.
00:33:890- (2,3) they're not stacked properly :cry:
00:53:020- (3) ^
00:56:281- (4) new combo for new spacing? (looks better)
01:20:194- (2) 1 grid right, 2 grids up.
01:32:368- (6) remove clap for consistency.
02:01:064- (3,4,5) this is sort of a random stream o.o
02:19:325- (8) 1-1 slider is better ><
02:26:281- (2) ^
02:28:020- (1,2,3) pattern them like this?
SPOILER
02:36:281- (3) another sort of random reverse stream .o.
02:39:977- (3) I think a singe beat suits better D:
02:43:238- (3) a sort of random silence D: remove it ><
02:54:107- (1,2) I think 1 reverse suits better.
02:59:977- (7) 3/4 slider? o.o 1-1 is better ><

-mine-

1) I personally thinks the opening is too hard. (volume) decrease it to 40%

2) this is a WIP, so I only say that you souldn't put the whole map to pending ;A;

-lunatic-

1) feels a little overmapped ;A; (but I'm not too hard on insanes, so I just let it out your style >w<d)

2) why is the kiai times different from the other diff?

01:05:194- (2) remove this? sounds better imo.
01:41:499- (4,1) move (4) 1 grid diagonal away from (2) and (1) a grid away from (4) [with this, there's more variation for this part]
03:02:803- (1) remove nc
LunarSakuya
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LunarSakuya
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LunarSakuya wrote:

Maya-kira wrote:

-general-

1) you need to complete the spinner elements .-. btw Yeah getting there lol

2) sorry, forget to ignore easy and mine (just realized when I finished the mod hoho) lol thanks



-easy-

01:30:629- (3) why not put it in the same place as (1)? they looks tidier Fixed
01:37:586- (2) this touch the hp bar, looks ugly :cry: change it into like this? (don't worry, the stack matches and they're not difficult to read) Fixed
[spoilerbox]

120,168,97586,2,0,B|112:104|144:68|208:20|312:40|340:160,1,314.999990612269
01:43:673- (2,3) move (2) to 252,216 and (3) to 364,272 for a better pattern. Fixed
02:19:325- (2) I think its better to make a slider like (1) [fits the song better imo] Fixed
02:57:586- (1) remove nc Fixed

-normal-

00:29:760- (1,2,3) I think this pattern looks better. Fixed
SPOILER
00:52:368- (4,5) pattern them like this? flows better imo. Fixed
SPOILER
01:15:846- (3) stacking this on top of (4) looks more balanced imo >w< Fixed
01:26:281- (2,3,4) I think a 1/2 beat reverse slider is easier to play here. Fixed
01:28:020- (3,4) change this to 3/4 reverse slider? Fixed
01:34:977- (1,2) ^ Fixed
01:45:412- (6) if you're following vocals, add 1 reverse.Fixed
01:57:586- (2,3) I think this pattern looks better. Fixed
SPOILER
02:18:455- (3) I think its better if you change this into a 1.5 slider and move this 1/2 beat earlier. Fixed
02:26:281- (7) I personally thinks 1-1 slider sounds better >< Fixed

-hard-

00:31:499- (2,3) I think this pattern flows better. Fixed
SPOILER
00:32:803- (5) it flows better if you press ctrl + r here .w. Fixed
00:33:890- (2,3) they're not stacked properly :cry: Fixed
00:53:020- (3) ^ Fixed
00:56:281- (4) new combo for new spacing? (looks better) Fixed
01:20:194- (2) 1 grid right, 2 grids up. Fixed
01:32:368- (6) remove clap for consistency. Fixed
02:01:064- (3,4,5) this is sort of a random stream o.o Nah...i guess
02:19:325- (8) 1-1 slider is better >< Fixed
02:26:281- (2) ^ Fixed
02:28:020- (1,2,3) pattern them like this? Fixed
SPOILER
02:36:281- (3) another sort of random reverse stream .o. Nah, the beats faint in the bg ;D
02:39:977- (3) I think a singe beat suits better D: Fixed
02:43:238- (3) a sort of random silence D: remove it >< Fixed
02:54:107- (1,2) I think 1 reverse suits better. I'll consider
02:59:977- (7) 3/4 slider? o.o 1-1 is better >< I'll see if anyone else has a problem with this

-mine-

1) I personally thinks the opening is too hard. (volume) decrease it to 40%

2) this is a WIP, so I only say that you souldn't put the whole map to pending ;A;

-lunatic-

1) feels a little overmapped ;A; (but I'm not too hard on insanes, so I just let it out your style >w<d) Yeah maybe it is x_x

2) why is the kiai times different from the other diff? Oh i thought i checked x_x

01:05:194- (2) remove this? sounds better imo. Nah, fits the vocals..
01:41:499- (4,1) move (4) 1 grid diagonal away from (2) and (1) a grid away from (4) [with this, there's more variation for this part]Fixed?
03:02:803- (1) remove ncFixedThanks!
hoLysoup
1,846 posts
Joined September 2009
hoLysoup
hi~
thank you for modding my map
here is the promised mod:

[General]
  1. BG is 800x600? I'm sure there is a 1024x768 size for this exact BG. If you want I could find it for you.
  2. you have custom hitbursts but no custom circle?
  3. This is just.. something:
    I see that you are using green lines to adjust the slider velocities in each difficulty. But why don't you just adjust the main SV from the timing tab? As difficulty levels go down, so does SV. It will be easier for you to map with the main SV changed already so why not? If you see other people's maps it's like this too.
[Lunatic]
This is something unrankable here: you are using more than 3 SVs in this difficulty, please fix this. I would suggest removing the 0.55x because it's too slow imo
00:23:455 (1) - this spinner is too early imo, it breaks the flow of the nice beat you had going on from the start. It will be better if you keep mapping with the same hitsound pattern and make the spinner from 00:26:281~00:28:020.
01:25:086 (6,7,8) - this whole part is quite confusing, because of the objects are all on different ticks. I would suggest do not stack (6,7,8). If you're gonna keep this pattern, at least NC at (6) with a more distinct colour which would probably help.
01:53:020 (5) - NC here instead
01:58:455 (9) - NC here for sure
02:01:064 (6,7) - Weird anti-jump and they're in the same combo?
02:01:934 (8) - NC here because the stream looks weird and uneven, 02:02:260 (1) - remove NC
02:11:933 (1) - remove NC, this is part of the same pattern no need to NC, 02:13:238 (4) - NC here instead
02:15:847 (5) - why is this 0.75x? doesn't play very well I think, it's quite random actually
02:19:542 (3,4) - a strange place for antijump as well
02:26:282 (2,3,4) - ^

[Mine]
is this difficulty finished?
you should probably move this to WIP and not pending

[Hard]
OD5 is better I think
00:15:847 - why don't you start mapping here like you did for Lunatic? mm, perhaps have the same starting/ending point for all difficulties.
01:11:934 (2) - NC here
01:16:716 (2,3,4) - strange anti jump like before
02:13:238 (4) - uhh... maybe NC this because it has a different number of repeats from the previous two kick sliders
02:21:064 (1) - remove this NC
02:50:629 (1) - ^

[Normal]
02:17:586 (2,3) - spacing~

That's about it
the map is pretty good :>
Good luck~!
LunarSakuya
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Topic Starter
LunarSakuya
SPOILER

hoLysoup wrote:

hi~
thank you for modding my map
here is the promised mod:

[General]
  1. BG is 800x600? I'm sure there is a 1024x768 size for this exact BG. If you want I could find it for you. I got it ^^
  2. you have custom hitbursts but no custom circle? Yes
  3. This is just.. something:
    I see that you are using green lines to adjust the slider velocities in each difficulty. But why don't you just adjust the main SV from the timing tab? As difficulty levels go down, so does SV. It will be easier for you to map with the main SV changed already so why not? If you see other people's maps it's like this too.Fixed
[Lunatic]
This is something unrankable here: you are using more than 3 SVs in this difficulty, please fix this. I would suggest removing the 0.55x because it's too slow imo Fixed
00:23:455 (1) - this spinner is too early imo, it breaks the flow of the nice beat you had going on from the start. It will be better if you keep mapping with the same hitsound pattern and make the spinner from 00:26:281~00:28:020. Fixed...;_;
01:25:086 (6,7,8) - this whole part is quite confusing, because of the objects are all on different ticks. I would suggest do not stack (6,7,8). If you're gonna keep this pattern, at least NC at (6) with a more distinct colour which would probably help. Fixed
01:53:020 (5) - NC here instead Fixed
01:58:455 (9) - NC here for sure Fixed
02:01:064 (6,7) - Weird anti-jump and they're in the same combo? Fixed?
02:01:934 (8) - NC here because the stream looks weird and uneven, 02:02:260 (1) - remove NC Fixed
02:11:933 (1) - remove NC, this is part of the same pattern no need to NC, 02:13:238 (4) - NC here instead Fixed
02:15:847 (5) - why is this 0.75x? doesn't play very well I think, it's quite random actually Fixed
02:19:542 (3,4) - a strange place for antijump as well Fixed? (maybe define antijump)
02:26:282 (2,3,4) - ^ Fixed?

[Mine]
is this difficulty finished? No
you should probably move this to WIP and not pending Fixed

[Hard]
OD5 is better I think Fixed
00:15:847 - why don't you start mapping here like you did for Lunatic? mm, perhaps have the same starting/ending point for all difficulties.Okay
01:11:934 (2) - NC here Fixed
01:16:716 (2,3,4) - strange anti jump like before ?
02:13:238 (4) - uhh... maybe NC this because it has a different number of repeats from the previous two kick sliders Fixed
02:21:064 (1) - remove this NC Fixed
02:50:629 (1) - ^ Fixed

[Normal]
02:17:586 (2,3) - spacing~ Fixed

That's about it
the map is pretty good :>
Good luck~!
Thanks a lot! :D
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,147 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu
Re-checking as requested

Easy:
00:36:716(1) - make this a curved slider to make a blanket.
00:55:846(3) - add a clap at the end
01:56:281 - add a circle?
01:56:716(4) - NC
02:55:846(1) - adjust this slider so that itd make a blanket

Normal:
01:31:499(5) - remove the clap at the repeat arrow
01:33:238(4) - remove the clap at the end
01:36:716(4) - ^
01:45:412(6) - add a whistle at the beginning
01:39:325-01:52:368 no hitsounds? can u add a clap rhythm?
02:18:455(3) - move it down so that it doesnt touch each other

Hard:
01:32:368(6) - remove the clap
02:09:542(6) - this slider could be nicer
02:54:542(2) - add a clap to keep the rhythm going

Mine:
why kiai time during breaks? and kiai time has to be the same for 1 mapset.
ohh this is a WIP. im not gonna mod it because its not done yet

Lunatic:
00:28:346 - remove the break because its not necessary
01:37:912 - ^
01:43:673(3) - add a whistle
01:44:542(1,3) - add a whistle at the beginning
01:48:020(5) - add a whistle at the beginning
01:48:890(1) - add a whistle
01:49:760(1) - ^
01:50:629(1) - ^ and this almost looks like a burai slider which is unrankable.
01:51:499(2,4) - add a whistle
01:55:853(3,4) - how about switching spots? (4) should be (3) and vice versa

this is the best i can do. u need to work on hitsounds because u use them but then u suddenly stop. GL :D
LunarSakuya
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Topic Starter
LunarSakuya
SPOILER

Byakugan249 wrote:

Re-checking as requested

Easy:
00:36:716(1) - make this a curved slider to make a blanket. Fixed
00:55:846(3) - add a clap at the end Fixed
01:56:281 - add a circle? Fixed
01:56:716(4) - NC Fixed
02:55:846(1) - adjust this slider so that itd make a blanket Well, I tried xD

Normal:
01:31:499(5) - remove the clap at the repeat arrow Fixed
01:33:238(4) - remove the clap at the end Fixed
01:36:716(4) - ^ Fixed
01:45:412(6) - add a whistle at the beginning Fixed
01:39:325-01:52:368 no hitsounds? can u add a clap rhythm? It was like this in the beginning too..
02:18:455(3) - move it down so that it doesnt touch each other Fixed

Hard:
01:32:368(6) - remove the clap Decided to redo all hitsounds in this part
02:09:542(6) - this slider could be nicer Fixed
02:54:542(2) - add a clap to keep the rhythm going Fixed

Mine:
why kiai time during breaks? and kiai time has to be the same for 1 mapset.
ohh this is a WIP. im not gonna mod it because its not done yet

Lunatic:
00:28:346 - remove the break because its not necessary Fixed
01:37:912 - ^ Fixed
01:43:673(3) - add a whistle Fixed
01:44:542(1,3) - add a whistle at the beginning Fixed
01:48:020(5) - add a whistle at the beginning Fixed
01:48:890(1) - add a whistle Fixed
01:49:760(1) - ^ Fixed
01:50:629(1) - ^ and this almost looks like a burai slider which is unrankable. Fixed, and oh...uh.
01:51:499(2,4) - add a whistle Fixed, but not on 4
01:55:853(3,4) - how about switching spots? (4) should be (3) and vice versa I'll consider.

this is the best i can do. u need to work on hitsounds because u use them but then u suddenly stop. GL :D Lol, thanks!! :D
Ayukawa Tenri
7 posts
Joined October 2011
Ayukawa Tenri
Meaningful post is meaningful.
LunarSakuya
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
LunarSakuya

Ayukawa Tenri wrote:

Meaningful post is meaningful.
and i was so excited too
Glass
1,527 posts
Joined January 2010
Glass
Hi :D

[Easy]
SPOILER
02:38:455 (1) - I feel that this spinner doesn't fit, map this part instead?

[Normal]
SPOILER
All good

[Hard]
SPOILER
01:17:369 (4) - Too close to 01:18:021 (1,2,3) I think. Stack this on 01:16:934 (3)?
02:01:499 (6) - Remove NC
02:13:238 (1) - Remove NC
02:20:629 (9,10,11) - Move these a little bit farther from 02:19:325 (8)
02:35:195 (1) - Too close to 02:36:064 (2), move this up a few grids?

[Vass's Devil]
SPOILER
00:36:281 (1) - Not a big problem but, maybe stack this on 00:36:716 (1)?

[Lunatic]
SPOILER
00:19:325 (4) - NC
01:14:977 (3) - Perfect overlaps like this are considered unrankable, I suggest moving this 2-3 grids up
01:23:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This is very hard to read, I suggest stacking 01:25:086 (6,7,8) on 01:25:412 (1)
01:33:238 (1) - Same overlap issue as 01:14:977 (3)

I'd star your map but unfortunately I don't have any kudo left =(

Good luck with your debut~
LunarSakuya
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Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
LunarSakuya

Glass wrote:

Hi :D

[Easy]
SPOILER
02:38:455 (1) - I feel that this spinner doesn't fit, map this part instead? Fixed

[Normal]
SPOILER
All good Awesome

[Hard]
SPOILER
01:17:369 (4) - Too close to 01:18:021 (1,2,3) I think. Stack this on 01:16:934 (3)? Fixed
02:01:499 (6) - Remove NC Fixed
02:13:238 (1) - Remove NC Fixed
02:20:629 (9,10,11) - Move these a little bit farther from 02:19:325 (8) Fixed
02:35:195 (1) - Too close to 02:36:064 (2), move this up a few grids?Fixed

[Vass's Devil]
SPOILER
00:36:281 (1) - Not a big problem but, maybe stack this on 00:36:716 (1)?

[Lunatic]
SPOILER
00:19:325 (4) - NC Fixed
01:14:977 (3) - Perfect overlaps like this are considered unrankable, I suggest moving this 2-3 grids up Fixed
01:23:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This is very hard to read, I suggest stacking 01:25:086 (6,7,8) on 01:25:412 (1) Fixed
01:33:238 (1) - Same overlap issue as 01:14:977 (3) Fixed

I'd star your map but unfortunately I don't have any kudo left =(

Good luck with your debut~
Thanks! :D :D :D
Wafu
1,703 posts
Joined June 2011
Wafu
Mod for queue request.

SPOILER
Easy:

01:39:325 (1) - Don't put slider under slider. http://oi41.tinypic.com/33w7clj.jpg
02:10:629 (1,2,3) - http://oi41.tinypic.com/xoo3fp.jpg
02:12:368 (1,2,3) - That same like 02:10:629 (1,2,3)
02:14:108 (1) - Try more stylish sliders. http://oi39.tinypic.com/35mnnex.jpg
02:54:108 (2,3) - Try this. http://i44.tinypic.com/j923xw.png

Normal:

00:38:021 (3,4,5) - http://i43.tinypic.com/xml8i1.png
00:44:977 (2,3,4) - Something like 00:38:021 (3,4,5)
02:41:064 (2) - http://i44.tinypic.com/2j2w22c.png

Hard:

00:37:586 (4) - Try this anywhere. http://i39.tinypic.com/2uh2t5w.png
00:54:542 (2) - http://i43.tinypic.com/6pyyww.png
02:00:195 (1) - Try use these sliders. http://i44.tinypic.com/w6p7df.png
02:28:890 (2) - Try some style. http://i39.tinypic.com/2h6x2fd.png
02:59:977 (7) - I'd do this. http://i44.tinypic.com/d886f.png + At first note in slider put clap.

Vass' Devil:

02:31:499 (2,3,4,5) - Don't do this. You can try this, it's onli tip, I recommend something similar like this http://i42.tinypic.com/auz0if.png
01:19:325 (2) - http://i39.tinypic.com/21c8arm.png

Lunatic:

It's hardest difficulty so add some jumps with 2.0 snap.
00:17:151 (3) - Jump
00:24:107 (2) - Jump
You can know where you may put jumps so do it.
Lunatic, looks very good.

You don't must follow this, but I will glad if you will.
Good Luck with map.
Vass_Bass
943 posts
Joined October 2009
Vass_Bass
Thank you for modding
P.S. Add my name to the tags in all diffs

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