yuan0312 wrote:

well well goooooooooooooood map .oni
and two note i think
1:11:561 this note is finish(X) i think it would be clap (x)
and the last is finish(O) ...i think it would be (o)....

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OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Saten's Hard]
00:34:901 (6) - Whistle?

00:58:001 (3) - Don't let the end touch (4)'s head ;w;
Good diff! Moe Saten!

SPOILER

nold_1702 wrote:

[Saten's Hard]
00:34:901 (6) - Add whistle at the begin of the slider. there's already a whistle here o.o
00:35:651 (1) - Delete the 00:35:801 (1) Whistle Add whistle at 00:35:951 (1) sounds weird imo o.o
02:40:451 (X) - Add a object done
02:54:851 (3) - ^ done
That's all for this diff 0.0~

Loctav wrote:

[Saten's Hard]
Jättebra, like it more than the Insane, lol D: Far more better spaced than the Insane.

00:04:151 (5) - the track runs below my lifebar D: eww lol
00:46:601 (6) - ^
00:47:651 (1) - imo this looks odd.

Rena-chan wrote:

I don't remember giving any specific permission to use my spinner skin in this map.
I don't see any credit whatsoever being given for it.
I don't remember you asking for permission to use it in more than just one map.

Either give proper credit or delete it from the map. I don't have anything against people wanting to use my skin elements, but credit should be given where credit is due.

Rena-chan wrote:

Also, why do you have two copies of the exact same picture (4Jvj.jpg and BG.jpg) ? Delete one of them as it isn't serving any other purpose than to take up space/bandwidth. If one of them is used in the storyboard, just correct the filename in your .osb.

1. A few stuff bugged me in the baba's insane though.
   This is a suggestion only, but I think you should raise OD to 7. 200bpm and OD6 don't go well together, because anyone who is able to play that bpm on AR9 will most likely have 99+ if not 100% accuracy. OD7 isn't much harder, but it still creates more variation on the scoreboard, something to consider.
2. The kiai time goes over a break. You shouldn't have a need to use kiai time on breaks.
3. 00:11:341 (4) - This note is very bad. Occasional notes over nothing to preserve playability are okay I guess (even though I am against mapping emptiness) but this note makes zero sense, it would be best to remove it. In the music, there is a slight buildup which could be expressed by a slider sliding into the music (next big white tick). I don't feel that would play good, so I suggest you just leave nothing here.
4. 00:28:441 (1,2,3) - You should be careful how you position your notes. For example, you could place these almost anywhere, but you chose them to put behind the hitbursts from previous notes. If this was your intention, okay, but I suggest that you move them somewhere they are seen better.
5. 00:30:841 - This section was kinda awkward because there is a very bassy undertone in the music and all you have are soft default hitsounds. You could try to immitate that sound with a hitsound somehow.
6. 01:21:241 - In this section, the overuse of finishes felt kinda bad, you should remove most of them.
7. 02:39:841 - This section was kinda too loud, needs volume change. Although I'd say it's pretty epic for maybe another kiai?

eikkaleyd wrote:

:) 頑張れオノくん～！I'm here for star~

[Te][Amo] wrote:

Saten's Hard ~~~ IMO

01:39:401 (1) - Add finish
00:48:851 (5) - Change whistle for finish

Acrith wrote:

[Saten's Hard]

01:22:451 (1) - Finish?

OnosakiHito wrote:

_Gezo_ for showing me the song![/b][/size]

Saten-san wrote:

All applied~ thanks

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00:39:251 (3) - 

00:20:651 (3,4,5) - some people might complain about 200bpm 1/2 in a normal but i don't see any problem no sir

MoonShade wrote:

Hard
00:09:251 (5) - 1 grid right done
00:39:251 (5) - try to use more sliderpoints and make it rounder http://puu.sh/cUTr made it rounder
01:00:251 (3) - the end point of this slider should to be 1 grid down to be consistent with the next one fixed
01:14:351 (2) - something more eye-appealing? kay
01:21:251 (1,2,3,4,1) - this and the next few pentagons doesn't look the same, I think you should make one and then copy-paste it those are the same o_O
01:50:651 (2) - copy-paste the last one ^
01:51:701 (4,5) - ^ ?
liked it :3 :3

MoonShade wrote:

Still needs some work imo, so ask for more mods. Take a star for your efford.

MoonShade wrote:

Normal

00:20:801 (4) - delete, too fast for normal changed
00:20:951 (5,6) - jump? I don't know... changed
00:36:851 (3,4,5,6) - hm i think it's too fast. make the slider longer, to the next white tick, and place following cirlces one white tick apart changed in another way
01:06:701 (6) - delete changed
01:23:651 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - for your easiest diff i don't know if this space isn't too far, it's nice and all, but maybe not suitable for the easiest diff I like in this way. :s
01:50:051 - why did the spacing turns to 0.7 suddenly? feels weird changed
02:30:251 - with a 0.5 spacing from here on, playing the sliders and then going to the next note feels kind of weird, cause the slider is fast and the distance is short, this may confuse beginners. It would be better to leave the distance to 0.8 or 1.0, then adjust the speed by an inherit timing section..I will ask about this.

MoonShade wrote:

Insane
00:05:041 (2,3,4) - copy-paste 'n flip
01:17:641 (1,2,3,4,5) - you should make at least that symmetric, with the same spacing between all of the circles and such
02:37:141 (6) - copy-paste the last one
02:36:091 (5,1,3,4) - some symmetric copy-paste 'n flip pattern of those sliders would be very nice at this part

Still needs some work imo, so ask for more mods. Take a star for your efford.

• 01:06:091 (1,2,3) - scale these down a bit, i'd suggest ~10%
  01:06:541 (1,2,1) - ^
  01:06:841 (1) - remove new combo since it's still part of the jumppattern
  01:07:141 (1) - add the new combo here then
  01:09:841 (1,2) - scale this jump down by ~5%
  01:10:141 (1,2) - ^
  01:17:791 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - reduce the spacing in the combos by 5-15% or reduce the spacing between each combo a bit, like this it's awkward to play due to the sudden change of directions combined with these huge spacingchanges (even though i was able to play it it was... let's say, hard)
  01:23:191 (4,5) - tbh, i'd like to see 4 and 5 reversed here, creating a wide jump and a more speedy feeling (plus i don't like edgy patterns which aren't jumpy)
  01:24:841 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - previous combo's spacing was fitting in my opinion, but this one is overdone, i'd recommend scaling it down by 15-20%, feels better to me
  01:30:241 (5,6,7,8) - these jumps (especcially 7,8) feel way too far for the rest of the map; scale 5,6 down by ~10%, 7,8 by 10-15%
  01:34:441 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same thing as with 01:24:841, reduce spacing or rearrange to a more specific pattern to make it feel better
  01:38:641 (1,2,3,4) - scaling this down by ~15% feels way better imo
  
  02:20:191 - due to the missing note here (feels as if there has to be one), the following pattern feels very confusing; add one there or rearrange this pattern~
  
  02:39:841 (2) - reduce volume to 80% in this section, 100% blasts your ears way too hard in this part (imo)
  02:45:841 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - that is a badass huge spacing, reduce by ~10-15% please
  02:55:441 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i'd like to see this pattern more as a jumpy one then... let's say... a "widespaced edgy flow" (you could rearrange the circles in the following order: 1-3-2-4-6-5-7

Jenny wrote:

@Regou's Extra (not yet submitted):

To tell straight before I start bitching: This was fun to play, but there's few things to improve to make it feel more comfortable (difficulty is no reason for uncomfortable mapping, just sayin - just if it is overdone).

• 01:06:091 (1,2,3) - scale these down a bit, i'd suggest ~10% fixed
  01:06:541 (1,2,1) - ^fixed
  01:06:841 (1) - remove new combo since it's still part of the jumppatternfixed
  01:07:141 (1) - add the new combo here thenfixed
  01:09:841 (1,2) - scale this jump down by ~5%fixed
  01:10:141 (1,2) - ^fixed
  01:17:791 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - reduce the spacing in the combos by 5-15% or reduce the spacing between each combo a bit, like this it's awkward to play due to the sudden change of directions combined with these huge spacingchanges (even though i was able to play it it was... let's say, hard)Decreased the spacing for a bit.
  01:23:191 (4,5) - tbh, i'd like to see 4 and 5 reversed here, creating a wide jump and a more speedy feeling (plus i don't like edgy patterns which aren't jumpy)Done
  01:24:841 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - previous combo's spacing was fitting in my opinion, but this one is overdone, i'd recommend scaling it down by 15-20%, feels better to mefixed
  01:30:241 (5,6,7,8) - these jumps (especcially 7,8) feel way too far for the rest of the map; scale 5,6 down by ~10%, 7,8 by 10-15%fixed
  01:34:441 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same thing as with 01:24:841, reduce spacing or rearrange to a more specific pattern to make it feel betterfixed
  01:38:641 (1,2,3,4) - scaling this down by ~15% feels way better imofixed
  
  02:20:191 - due to the missing note here (feels as if there has to be one), the following pattern feels very confusing; add one there or rearrange this pattern~Want to keep 755 combo here...
  
  02:39:841 (2) - reduce volume to 80% in this section, 100% blasts your ears way too hard in this part (imo)fixed
  02:45:841 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - that is a badass huge spacing, reduce by ~10-15% pleasefixed
  02:55:441 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i'd like to see this pattern more as a jumpy one then... let's say... a "widespaced edgy flow" (you could rearrange the circles in the following order: 1-3-2-4-6-5-7fixed

Zlew wrote:

Regou's Extra: Imo AR +1

Jenny wrote:

Zlew wrote:

Regou's Extra: Imo AR +1

...ar10 u mad?

Leorda wrote:

Guten Morgen

Regou's Extra
00:11:041 (3,4,5) - These jump are too far, move it closer please fixed
00:56:041 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - I feel this jumps are pretty random rearranged the pattern


Once, you already done, forum PM me for recheck

P.S. Okuu is bird brain

Leorda wrote:

Saten's Hard
00:35:651 (1) - Add whistle at end slider and remove whistle at repeating slider
00:36:101 (2) - Remove whistle
00:36:251 (3) - Add whistle at start slider
00:48:851 (1) - Split this slider into two slider for following instruments?


P.S. Okuu is bird brain

Leorda wrote:

Guten Morgen

General
* After I discuss to narakucrimson about number of diff, look here <- I will wait until the rules got approved.
* The kiai is different on each diff... <- fixed
* Uninherited timing sections are different on each too.... You may want to go check all of them <- I don't understand. Aren't they okay? Normaly yes.
* Make sure all diff has a storyboard sound, like [Normal] <- fixed, and ALSO made a new SB.


Skin
* You need reversearrow.png, since you have a custom hitcircle <- fixed, using now osu!'s arrow
* comboburst.png dimensions are 559x717, and must not larger than 500x767 <- fixed


Normal
* AFAIK, different spacing in Normal diff can be confusing for average player. But, you may talk to MAT/BAT then :< <- going to ask so


Insane
00:13:441 (3,4) - Spacing error fixed
02:12:241 (3) - Remove whistle at sliderbody fixed


Once, you already done, forum PM me for recheck

P.S. Okuu is bird brain

OnosakiHito wrote:

Leorda wrote:

P.S. Okuu is bird brain

Okuu is a bird brain.

 C,81176,102851,0,0,0,255,0,0,255

 C,0,83651,95651,255,0,0,255,0,0

1. (Normal) - 2 notes are moved due to avoiding of overlapped by hitbursts from spinner
2. (Saten's Hard) - Fixing a wrong hitsound pattern
3. (Saten's Hard) - Split into 2 slider at 01:10:451 (1)
4. (Insane) - Add some finish hitsound for following instruments at song

grumd wrote:

What about adding "baba1994" to the tags?

OnosakiHito wrote:

grumd wrote:

What about adding "baba1994" to the tags?

Thought about this allready, but he isn't online anymore and as I said before, I have need to take all changes, mods and made the hitsounds.
At least, I have added him in the credits of the first post.

-Sekai- wrote:

what 8 diffs o.o"

DaxMasterix wrote:

gogo

Jacob wrote:

7 insanes

are you srs

Jacob wrote:

7 insanes

are you srs

Sakura Hana wrote:

I had my doubts about the background but after asking other BATs they seem fine with it so i guess i'll let it go.

I recommend raising OD by 1 on either Insane or Extra (or both), and i strongly suggest using AR+1 on Extra.

Insane and Extra have 10 ms less on all their red lines!