1. Destruction (4.83 stars, 1225 notes)
2. Taiko Collab (4.94 stars, 2166 notes)

Pereira006 wrote:

hello~~

Some Suggestions
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Destruction

00:14:979 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - this just little miss ryhthm as 00:15:790 and 00:16:033 there need add Note most better rhthm like you did 00:15:465 (5,6) IMO also if you add you need fix 00:14:979 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - or try remap this part IMO
00:25:681 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this i just get confused pleasse remove new combo all like this http://puu.sh/cJg7 like you did 00:57:790 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10)
00:38:979 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:38:006 (4,5) - can you change shape i mean this http://puu.sh/cJoN most better IMO like you did 01:36:708 (1,2)
01:55:766 (1) - stack perfect with 01:54:766 (1)?
01:59:569 (1) - stack perfect with 01:58:646 (1)?
02:38:544 (1) - remove new combo?
03:09:030 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - same happened 00:14:979 (3,4,5,6,7,8)
03:54:436 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - pleaaaaaase reduce spacing ;_________________;
04:52:166 (1) - remove new combo?
04:56:058 (1) - ^
04:43:085 (1) - ^

I really enjoy play i can't find everthing so my mod just opinion
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that all i think and good luck
bye bye

Crimmi wrote:

Modding, CrimmiStyle!!

[IRC Mod]

SPOILER

20:54 <Crimmi> : hey again
20:55 <Chocopikel> : hey~
20:56 <Crimmi> : alrighty i've checked your map and it's pretty solid but i gotta point out some issues and suggestions
20:56 <Crimmi> : like this 01:59:338 - http://puu.sh/cJsU
20:58 <Chocopikel> : oops, I agree, done
21:02 <Crimmi> : Well there is nothing else i could find, nice map :3

spboxer3 wrote:

[general]

1. none

[Easy]

1. 00:25:033 (6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I have some idea! use 0∘, 30∘,60∘,90∘look will be better then now
2. 00:33:790 (5,5) - maybe let them stack?
3. 01:00:384 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - graph. I try to make It more pretty↓
   
   photo

   
   
   If you agree this. I give you some code
   

   192,104,60384,5,0
   212,88,60465,1,0
   240,84,60546,1,0
   264,84,60627,1,0
   288,92,60708,1,2
   312,104,60790,1,0
   332,120,60871,1,0
   344,144,60952,1,0
   352,172,61033,1,0
   352,196,61114,1,0
   344,220,61195,1,0
   332,244,61276,1,0
   316,264,61357,1,2
   292,276,61438,1,0
   268,280,61519,1,0
   244,276,61600,1,0

4. 02:16:490 (3) - add whistle at slider end?
5. 02:19:085 (5) - ^
6. 02:22:004 (7) - ^ slider start
7. 02:22:977 (1,2,3) - add finish hitsound?
8. 05:35:308 (6,3) - stack? ((if you do this. same as 05:37:579 (5) -

red is unrankable issue. bule is need to discuss. Black is just suggest.

OK~That's all
good luck~:P
star!

val0108 wrote:

[イケメン]
03:14:868 (6) - スライダー終わり03:15:355 そのままのほうが合ってる気がしたかな
03:18:841 (7,8) - omg jump 絶対直してね okay
03:38:544 - add note それか　http://puu.sh/cNzJ こんな感じで done
03:40:490 (3,4,5) - 前のスライダーで隠れててすっごい見にくい。done
03:43:733 - add note dooone
04:07:409 (1) - 一番難しかった ここの配置には手をかけたからね そりゃ簡単に繋がれては困りますよ兄さん
04:19:733 (9,1,1) - しっかり重ねる done

oh yes!!

• 00:20:168 (1) - remove finish? It does not suit it D:
  01:02:979 (T) - make the volume 80% here
  01:23:735 (T) - volume 10%
  01:26:330 (T) - volume 15%
  01:28:924 (T) - volume 20%
  01:31:519 (T) - volume 25%
  01:47:058 (T) - the offset here seems off to me.. maybe ask someone to check?
  01:49:430 (T) - ^

Reiji-RJ wrote:

t+pazolite!!

Let's see~

[Destruction]

• 00:20:168 (1) - remove finish? It does not suit it D: done
  01:02:979 (T) - make the volume 80% here done
  01:23:735 (T) - volume 10% hmm... I raised 5% (15%)
  01:26:330 (T) - volume 15% ^ (20%)
  01:28:924 (T) - volume 20% ^ (25%)
  01:31:519 (T) - volume 25% ^ (30%)
  01:47:058 (T) - the offset here seems off to me.. maybe ask someone to check? okay, I asked Faust
  01:49:430 (T) - ^ ^

Omg, this is awesome!
Hope, it will be approved soon *^*

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Faust wrote:

Timing:

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Seems fine. I will let you know if there are mistakes.

Tony wrote:

Hi! Mod4Mod!

[General]
Awesome Timing!
Checked everything, and it looks good!

[Destruction]
Tick Rate 2 looks ugly, especially in the first part. Maybe use Tick Rate 1? (That would spoil your aweshum 2001 max combo D:) ooooor, use BPM 92,5 instead of 185 in the first part (00:00:709 - 00:21:465) and then insert BPM 185 here 00:21:465. I see you did this here too 01:02:979
02:54:759 - same thing as above ^
00:15:627 (6,7) - I suggest to reverse those two notes because 00:15:465 (5,6) - this jump is quite surprinsing, or just add New combo on 6?
03:09:678 (6) - same thing as above ^
02:38:543 (1) - Add New Combo?
04:43:091 (5) - same thing as above ^
03:14:867 (6) - I don't think the finish from the end of the slider sounds good there. Maybe soft whistle?
03:16:813 (x) - it feels kinda empty. Maybe Add a note? ? note exists


Awesome song! Awesome map!
2x Starr :3 Good luck with approval!

pekos wrote:

Hi! random modding form #modreqs

すごく素敵な譜面でした
☆

提案としては
03:14:219 (1,2,3,4) - Vol 70%
03:14:705 (5) - Vol 60%
03:14:867 (6) - Vol 50%
03:15:192 (Finish) - Vol 40%

Loctav wrote:

Yo yo Chocopikel, random quick mod. Picked this up on #modreqs. Giving this a lookthrough and mention everything I'd change :3

If the map is finished in general, you may should move it to 'Pending' only 1 diff!! can't move pending check...


[Destruction]

Tickrate may fit to the music but on the slow kicksliders, it looks pretty ugly. Maybe you should add some skin element to make it look better or reduce the tickrate to 1. okay, I agree

00:14:979 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - looks messy. Maybe more like this? http://puu.sh/d5LA done
00:25:033 (6) - move the controlpoint down? http://puu.sh/d5LS
01:00:222 (7) - move it? http://puu.sh/d5MD can't see. broken image?
02:11:435 (1,2,3) - move it up?
02:22:976 (1,2,3) - move the whole pattern a bit down so (1) is in the middle of the previous pattern changed pattern
03:09:030 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - looks messy.
04:50:875 (3) - move a bit to the left to match the middle of (1,2)
05:16:982 (5,6,7) - same as 01:00:222 (7)? same as 01:00:222 (7)

This deserves a star.

1. Timing: It's slightly off, more details below:
   Offset is really nice, however at a certain point, it's just off by ~10ms. What I did is:
   01:02:979 - Everything after this point (including this), I added +10ms. You should do the same. With that, I am getting much better results. I find it strange, but that's what I am getting, and I have confirmed this with a friend, he thinks the same. So:
   
   SPOILER

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   340830,-200,4,2,1,5,0,0

   
   Be really careful how you resnap, you need to resnap using 1/4 and then you need to select 1/8 and resnap again, else some notes will not be snapped correctly.
   

1. I will still use your timings to mod this, to avoid confusion.
2. 00:20:168 (1) - I suggest that you silence the end, because it messes up with the rhythm a bit. (soft sounds and 5% volume)
3. 00:54:708 (6,7) - I found this spacing rather confusing. (You spectated me when I missed it ) I think you should reduce it. Best way to do this would be to move 00:54:384 (4,5,6) a bit and leave 7 where it is currently.
4. 05:27:198 (3,4) - I would prefer if you increase this spacing somehow. You did it everywhere else that's like this section (05:24:604 (3,4), 05:22:009 (3,4))

lolcubes wrote:

Ok, here we go!

[General]

1. Timing: It's slightly off, more details below:
   Offset is really nice, however at a certain point, it's just off by ~10ms. What I did is:
   01:02:979 - Everything after this point (including this), I added +10ms. You should do the same. With that, I am getting much better results. I find it strange, but that's what I am getting, and I have confirmed this with a friend, he thinks the same. So:
   
   SPOILER

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   Be really careful how you resnap, you need to resnap using 1/4 and then you need to select 1/8 and resnap again, else some notes will not be snapped correctly.
   

[Destruction]

1. I will still use your timings to mod this, to avoid confusion.
2. 00:20:168 (1) - I suggest that you silence the end, because it messes up with the rhythm a bit. (soft sounds and 5% volume)
3. 00:54:708 (6,7) - I found this spacing rather confusing. (You spectated me when I missed it ) I think you should reduce it. Best way to do this would be to move 00:54:384 (4,5,6) a bit and leave 7 where it is currently.
4. 05:27:198 (3,4) - I would prefer if you increase this spacing somehow. You did it everywhere else that's like this section (05:24:604 (3,4), 05:22:009 (3,4))

That's pretty much it.
I can move the map to pending for you once you apply updates.

lolcubes wrote:

Also there is one more thing I forgot to mention.

01:01:681 (1) - This spinner, you need to manually snap it on the big white tick at 01:02:979, else it sounds wrong (and is kinda unsnapped).

Also I like how you changed the ending, I think it's much better now, however:
05:31:749 (3) - New combo (to keep it consistent with your change)
05:34:344 (3) - ^
05:36:938 (3) - ^

Fix those and I bubble.

lolcubes wrote:

Alright, I like this.

Bubble #1.~

Also:

\:D/

Backfire wrote:

LOL
Me and ono didn't even get to finish our taiko. What the heck ;w;

ziin wrote:

because it's a sin to have a map waiting in pending for over a week amirite?