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ROOKiEZ is PUNK'D - In My World (TV Size)
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omg, i have to star it XDDD
As requested
[General]
- I notice most mats/bats don't really it when the difficulties names don't show whether it's a Easy/Normal/Hard Insane so considering renaming the diff to In my ___ Easy World, In ____ Normal World, In ___ Hard World etc. Also since it may be a little weird to say "my easy world" or "my hard world", you could try some other world like in ___ calm/relaxing world, in ____ tough/difficult world etc.
- In Yasora's World doesn't have letterbox during break, turn it on to be consistent with other diffs.
[Easy]
- Considering the bpm and how close the slider velocity is to Normal, would be much better to remap to 0.8x/0.9x velocity. Slider velocity is really fast.
- Not so sure about clap on red ticks, it make this sound really offbeat considering the drums on the background are on the white ticks.
00:09:850 (5) - This looks weird and the spacing isn't good. If you want to do something like this for the pattern, I recommend a short slider starting at 00:09:699 and ending it here so that the rhythm is more consistent and easier to follow.
00:14:093 (4,1) - Doesn't feel really nice to hit (1) due to spacing even through it is snapped to the correct spacing. I would suggest removing a repeat and adding a hit circle at 00:15:002. Rhythm is consistent, but no note on the down beat. I think it's fine without a note on the downbeat through.
Nothing really to say, just feel you should leave atleast 1 white tick between each note considering the bpm and the notes on the red ticks sound really offbeat to me, but I think this is because of the clap hitsound on them.
[Normal]
- Please do +1 ar, the bpm is this high and the feel song is quite fast so why such a low ar for Normal. I think even ar 5 would fit here.
00:05:911 (2) - This repeating slider feel really weird to me, feel better to me if you do a hit circle then a slider (starts on 00:06:214 and ends at 00:06:517), but it feel more like you should map on the red ticks here.
00:15:002 (2) - Sound betters if you remove a repeat and end it at same place. This make it less oblivious that the end of this slider isn't really following anything.
00:18:147 (1) - Rotate 90 degree anti clock wise, just to make it nicer to notice the 2 extra repeats on this slider. Without knowing the song, I release it too early.
01:13:410 (2,3) - Making this a slider lead nicer to the spinner and plays nicer since some people may get confuse since the vocal may trip you off (since it's on the previous red tick)
01:19:094 (2) - Making this a slider that end at 01:19:410 fits better with the vocal for me and makes the next notes a little nicer to play. You did a slider at 01:23:831 for this rhythm so for consistency as well.
01:25:094 (3,4) - Slider for them. (3) is follow a quiet hi-hat/crymbal sound compare to the vocal on the previous red tick and the kick drum on the next. Since the notes on the red ticks are more prominent, you'll get confused if you listen to the song so a slider make this nicer to play.
01:27:620 (4,5) - ^ Same thing here, short slider ending on the red tick may be better. This is consistent with Niva's diff.
Except for that one part at the beginning that felt really offbeat and the low ar, pretty nice diff.
[Hard]
00:05:456 (7) - Feel like a jump should be on here.
00:48:462 (5) - Don't like the placement of this since the slider track of (3) sort of camouflage it. Nicer if you put it up. http://puu.sh/beBZ
01:01:726 (3) - Hm, feel nicer if you stack this with the end of slider (2) so that there is a jump. Fits better with the song flow for me.
Looks good.
[Insane]
- I really feel ar 8 fits better with how you map this. The calmer part of this song doesn't really fit with ar 9 and for some of the jumps, being able to see the notes before they come make them nicer to read.
- I also feel slider velocity is too fast for a high bpm song. 1.8x would fit better imo.
00:23:199 (3,1,2) - Weird jumps to me, keep spacing consistent seem like a better idea.
00:29:515 (7,8,9,10) - Feel weird to play these notes after the big jumps from previous combo. I would suggest to use higher distant snapping for them.
00:46:094 (x) - Don't really agree with not putting notes here, plays better with a note here to me and consistent with previous pattern.
01:20:831 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - First time I look at it, I thought there would about 1/2 break between each combo, I suggest lower spacing between each combo to make it more oblivious that you have to hit them asap. Idea is good and fitting with the song through.
Definitely think slider velocity is too high, makes this play weird for me.
Pretty solid mapset, just feel Easy and Insane has too high slider velocity and Normal, some parts feel offbeat.
No star since you have so many already, good luck!
[General]
- I notice most mats/bats don't really it when the difficulties names don't show whether it's a Easy/Normal/Hard Insane so considering renaming the diff to In my ___ Easy World, In ____ Normal World, In ___ Hard World etc. Also since it may be a little weird to say "my easy world" or "my hard world", you could try some other world like in ___ calm/relaxing world, in ____ tough/difficult world etc.
- In Yasora's World doesn't have letterbox during break, turn it on to be consistent with other diffs.
[Easy]
- Considering the bpm and how close the slider velocity is to Normal, would be much better to remap to 0.8x/0.9x velocity. Slider velocity is really fast.
- Not so sure about clap on red ticks, it make this sound really offbeat considering the drums on the background are on the white ticks.
00:09:850 (5) - This looks weird and the spacing isn't good. If you want to do something like this for the pattern, I recommend a short slider starting at 00:09:699 and ending it here so that the rhythm is more consistent and easier to follow.
00:14:093 (4,1) - Doesn't feel really nice to hit (1) due to spacing even through it is snapped to the correct spacing. I would suggest removing a repeat and adding a hit circle at 00:15:002. Rhythm is consistent, but no note on the down beat. I think it's fine without a note on the downbeat through.
Nothing really to say, just feel you should leave atleast 1 white tick between each note considering the bpm and the notes on the red ticks sound really offbeat to me, but I think this is because of the clap hitsound on them.
[Normal]
- Please do +1 ar, the bpm is this high and the feel song is quite fast so why such a low ar for Normal. I think even ar 5 would fit here.
00:05:911 (2) - This repeating slider feel really weird to me, feel better to me if you do a hit circle then a slider (starts on 00:06:214 and ends at 00:06:517), but it feel more like you should map on the red ticks here.
00:15:002 (2) - Sound betters if you remove a repeat and end it at same place. This make it less oblivious that the end of this slider isn't really following anything.
00:18:147 (1) - Rotate 90 degree anti clock wise, just to make it nicer to notice the 2 extra repeats on this slider. Without knowing the song, I release it too early.
01:13:410 (2,3) - Making this a slider lead nicer to the spinner and plays nicer since some people may get confuse since the vocal may trip you off (since it's on the previous red tick)
01:19:094 (2) - Making this a slider that end at 01:19:410 fits better with the vocal for me and makes the next notes a little nicer to play. You did a slider at 01:23:831 for this rhythm so for consistency as well.
01:25:094 (3,4) - Slider for them. (3) is follow a quiet hi-hat/crymbal sound compare to the vocal on the previous red tick and the kick drum on the next. Since the notes on the red ticks are more prominent, you'll get confused if you listen to the song so a slider make this nicer to play.
01:27:620 (4,5) - ^ Same thing here, short slider ending on the red tick may be better. This is consistent with Niva's diff.
Except for that one part at the beginning that felt really offbeat and the low ar, pretty nice diff.
[Hard]
00:05:456 (7) - Feel like a jump should be on here.
00:48:462 (5) - Don't like the placement of this since the slider track of (3) sort of camouflage it. Nicer if you put it up. http://puu.sh/beBZ
01:01:726 (3) - Hm, feel nicer if you stack this with the end of slider (2) so that there is a jump. Fits better with the song flow for me.
Looks good.
[Insane]
- I really feel ar 8 fits better with how you map this. The calmer part of this song doesn't really fit with ar 9 and for some of the jumps, being able to see the notes before they come make them nicer to read.
- I also feel slider velocity is too fast for a high bpm song. 1.8x would fit better imo.
00:23:199 (3,1,2) - Weird jumps to me, keep spacing consistent seem like a better idea.
00:29:515 (7,8,9,10) - Feel weird to play these notes after the big jumps from previous combo. I would suggest to use higher distant snapping for them.
00:46:094 (x) - Don't really agree with not putting notes here, plays better with a note here to me and consistent with previous pattern.
01:20:831 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - First time I look at it, I thought there would about 1/2 break between each combo, I suggest lower spacing between each combo to make it more oblivious that you have to hit them asap. Idea is good and fitting with the song through.
Definitely think slider velocity is too high, makes this play weird for me.
Pretty solid mapset, just feel Easy and Insane has too high slider velocity and Normal, some parts feel offbeat.
No star since you have so many already, good luck!
Only fixed 00:48:462 (5) because this is my promise to Maya, to create a Hard diff without jumps/spacing changes/drain sections/etc >_<
Leaving the diff name to Maya though, if she wanna change it. Thanks for mod ~
Download: ROOKiEZ is PUNK'D - In My World (TV Size) (Maya-kira) [In Niva's World].osu
Leaving the diff name to Maya though, if she wanna change it. Thanks for mod ~
Download: ROOKiEZ is PUNK'D - In My World (TV Size) (Maya-kira) [In Niva's World].osu
Topic Starter
thank you for modmerchat7 wrote:
[General]
- I notice most mats/bats don't really it when the difficulties names don't show whether it's a Easy/Normal/Hard Insane so considering renaming the diff to In my ___ Easy World, In ____ Normal World, In ___ Hard World etc. Also since it may be a little weird to say "my easy world" or "my hard world", you could try some other world like in ___ calm/relaxing world, in ____ tough/difficult world etc. that would make the title too longbeside, I already give descriptions in the creator comment and their star ratings doesn't mix with each other, so I think its fine.
- In Yasora's World doesn't have letterbox during break, turn it on to be consistent with other diffs. fixed
[Easy]
- Considering the bpm and how close the slider velocity is to Normal, would be much better to remap to 0.8x/0.9x velocity. Slider velocity is really fast. I prefer the current sv ><
- Not so sure about clap on red ticks, it make this sound really offbeat considering the drums on the background are on the white ticks. fixed
00:09:850 (5) - This looks weird and the spacing isn't good. If you want to do something like this for the pattern, I recommend a short slider starting at 00:09:699 and ending it here so that the rhythm is more consistent and easier to follow. fixed
00:14:093 (4,1) - Doesn't feel really nice to hit (1) due to spacing even through it is snapped to the correct spacing. I would suggest removing a repeat and adding a hit circle at 00:15:002. Rhythm is consistent, but no note on the down beat. I think it's fine without a note on the downbeat through. sorry, your suggestion is good, but I prefer my way .-.
Nothing really to say, just feel you should leave atleast 1 white tick between each note considering the bpm and the notes on the red ticks sound really offbeat to me, but I think this is because of the clap hitsound on them.
[Insane]
- I really feel ar 8 fits better with how you map this. The calmer part of this song doesn't really fit with ar 9 and for some of the jumps, being able to see the notes before they come make them nicer to read. ar 9 fits perfectly with most parts and I think it make this map a little more fun >< sorry~
- I also feel slider velocity is too fast for a high bpm song. 1.8x would fit better imo. I prefer the current sv ><, 1.8 would make this not so much different from hard.
00:23:199 (3,1,2) - Weird jumps to me, keep spacing consistent seem like a better idea. it flows better with this pattern
00:29:515 (7,8,9,10) - Feel weird to play these notes after the big jumps from previous combo. I would suggest to use higher distant snapping for them.I'll change if someone mention this again
00:46:094 (x) - Don't really agree with not putting notes here, plays better with a note here to me and consistent with previous pattern. I'll change if someone mention this again
01:20:831 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - First time I look at it, I thought there would about 1/2 break between each combo, I suggest lower spacing between each combo to make it more oblivious that you have to hit them asap. Idea is good and fitting with the song through. this is one reason why I use ar 9 orz
Definitely think slider velocity is too high, makes this play weird for me. orz
No star since you have so many already, good luck!
btw
you don't promise anything like that D:Niva wrote:
this is my promise to Maya, to create a Hard diff without jumps/spacing changes/drain sections/etc >_<
hi~ Maya-kira 
Thank you for the request
here my mod ~
[General]
sorry, long mod
ok~ good map and Star☆ again
Thank you for the request
here my mod ~
[General]
- KIAI TIME - change KIAI TIME ? 00:35:357~00:55:568 , 01:05:673~01:15:778 in all diff. I think is better :3
- 00:03:032 (3) - match it with a curve. more beautiful http://puu.sh/bpJu x344,y320 and with 00:03:790 (4) - x428,y136 ?
- 00:10:153 (1) - spacing too close (0.57x) x104,y312 ?
- 00:14:093 (4) - end does not match a sound >< remove repeat. and add slider 00:15:002~00:15:153 is better ?
- 00:32:989 (3) - one grid right. x160,y168
- 00:37:726 (1,2) - Suggestion of the rhythm http://puu.sh/bpLD
- 00:56:199 (2) - add NC ?
- 00:56:673 (3,1,2,3) - Suggestion of the rhythm http://puu.sh/bpMX
- 01:00:147 (3) - spacing too far. (0.88x)
- 01:04:094 (3) - one grid down. x16,y260
- 01:05:041 (1,2) - one tick right move. I think this slider start 01:05:199 is better. ( Please be careful about DS if I change it )
- 01:11:831 - add note ?
- 01:13:726 (4) - remove finish
- 01:18:462 (1) - start 01:18:305 is better. Suggestion of the rhythm http://puu.sh/bpPi
- 01:27:305 (3) - slider end 01:27:778
- Distance snap is not constant
if this diff is Normal plz use the DS constant 
- 00:00:759 (1,2,3,4) - I think does not match rhythm ><; start 00:00:608 is better. try ? http://puu.sh/bpSN
- 00:05:002 (1) - remove clap
- 00:08:032 (1) - grid move. x244,y196
- 00:15:002 (2) - remove one repeat. because end 00:15:153 is better.
- 00:22:883 (1) - slider end 00:23:199
- 00:50:357 (1,2,3,4) - vocal follow suggestion http://puu.sh/bpUT
- 00:54:462 (1) - start 00:54:305 end 00:54:936 ( repeat part 00:54:620 )
- 00:55:568 (3) - add NC
- 01:00:620 (1,2) - two tick right move. (start 01:00:620)
- 01:12:778 (5) - add NC and 01:13:094 - remove NC
- 01:25:094 (3,4) - remove. and add slider 01:25:094~01:25:252
- 01:27:620 (4,5) - remove. and add slider 01:27:620~01:27:778
- 00:19:726 (6) - remove whistle ?
- 00:34:252 (1) - spinner start 00:34:094
- 00:44:673 (7) - add NC and 00:45:147 - remove NC and 00:45:462 - add NC
- 01:27:305 (6) - add NC and 01:27:462 - remove NC
- 00:10:229 (1) - remove NC and 00:10:456 - add NC
- 00:15:002 (5) - slider end 00:15:153
- 00:23:989 (4,5) - grid move ? 4:x128,y260 5:x48,y260
- 00:28:726 (3) - add NC
- 00:29:041 (5) - ^
- 00:29:515 (7) - ^
- 00:29:989 (10) - Suggestion of the rhythm http://puu.sh/bpZ1
- 00:38:357 (5) - slider end 00:38:515 or 00:38:673
- 00:41:120 - add note
- 00:41:199 - ^
- 00:42:699 (2) - remove note ?
- 00:46:173 (3) - spacing too close ><
- 00:53:831 (8) - add NC
- 00:55:252 (1) - remove NC and 00:55:568 - add NC
- 00:56:752 (8) - this slider start 00:56:831. end 00:57:462. (repeat part 00:57:147) and add note here
- 00:57:462 (10) - remove note
- 01:05:041 (1) - remove NC and 01:05:199 - add NC
- 01:18:620 (1,2,3,4) - two tick right move. start 01:18:778
- 01:27:778 (1) - spinner end 01:28:726 ?
sorry, long mod
ok~ good map and Star☆ again
Thanks kosiga :3kosiga wrote:
[General]To Maya-kira : I checked this once more, and there should be a timing section on 00:35:357 and 01:18:482 to reset the metronome's beat. Moved kiai here though
- KIAI TIME - change KIAI TIME ? 00:35:357~00:55:568 , 01:05:673~01:15:778 in all diff. I think is better :3
[In Niva's World]
- 00:19:726 (6) - remove whistle ? That whistle is intentional >_<
- 00:34:252 (1) - spinner start 00:34:094 Done
- 00:44:673 (7) - add NC and 00:45:147 - remove NC and 00:45:462 - add NC Done
- 01:27:305 (6) - add NC and 01:27:462 - remove NC I prefer my current comboing atm. Will change if someone else mentions though
Download: ROOKiEZ is PUNK'D - In My World (TV Size) (Maya-kira) [In Niva's World].osu
[General]
Make someone control the timing... i kinda tried...Will tell if I find a more precise timing...
[In Maya's World]
00:03:790 (4,5) - Would be easier if you continued following the guitar with those, as you started following drums in the middle of a combo(it could be confusive for noobs) move at 00:03:638 (4,5)
00:11:365 (2) - Adjust the shape a little
00:14:093 (4) - One less repeat
00:15:153 (x) - to add a circle here
00:38:989 (2) - Make it a 1/1 Slider and add one repeat
00:44:673 (1) - Adjust Blanket
Adjust the various blankets after too, and there are many many many
01:20:989 (3,4,5) - Adjust?
Adjusted blankets
Download: ROOKiEZ is PUNK'D - In My World (TV Size) (Maya-kira) [In Maya's World].osu
[In Yasora's World]
Use Custom hitsounds too?
Why using 2 Distance Snaps? ( i can say 00:15:002 (2,1) - work good as a normal jump, but others?)
00:00:759 (1,2,3,4) - Soft Hitsounds here?
00:05:002 (1,1) - why two NCs?
00:05:305 (1,2,3,4) - fix the pattern?
00:08:335 (2,3,4) - Make the pattern like this?
- no graphic mod as you should however make the distance snaps more consistent
You can use this pattern to follow voice in some parts better
examples:
in 00:16:568 (3,4) -
00:18:147 (1) - You can divide it in 2 sliders like
00:51:305 (2,3) - Move it in 00:51:147 (2,3) -
00:54:462 (1) - Move it in 00:54:305 (1) and make it 1/4 longer ( 1/2 totally )
[In Niva's World]
I, i--- can't find anything ç.ç
That's good!
[In My World]
00:46:094 (x) - Add a Note, Midly stopped stream aren't good .-.
00:53:831 (8,9,x,10,11,x) - Make it a 3-3 stream (add 00:53:989 and 00:54:305 (13) -
00:54:462 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to move them like this?
and make the volume lower, as it's fastidious ...
01:27:778 (1) - Make it start in 01:27:936 (1) to
01:27:778 (x) - Add this circle in the center
The song was good :3
Make someone control the timing... i kinda tried...Will tell if I find a more precise timing...
[In Maya's World]
00:03:790 (4,5) - Would be easier if you continued following the guitar with those, as you started following drums in the middle of a combo(it could be confusive for noobs) move at 00:03:638 (4,5)
00:11:365 (2) - Adjust the shape a little
00:14:093 (4) - One less repeat
00:15:153 (x) - to add a circle here
00:38:989 (2) - Make it a 1/1 Slider and add one repeat
00:44:673 (1) - Adjust Blanket
Adjust the various blankets after too, and there are many many many
01:20:989 (3,4,5) - Adjust?
Adjusted blankets
Download: ROOKiEZ is PUNK'D - In My World (TV Size) (Maya-kira) [In Maya's World].osu
[In Yasora's World]
Use Custom hitsounds too?
Why using 2 Distance Snaps? ( i can say 00:15:002 (2,1) - work good as a normal jump, but others?)
00:00:759 (1,2,3,4) - Soft Hitsounds here?
00:05:002 (1,1) - why two NCs?
00:05:305 (1,2,3,4) - fix the pattern?
00:08:335 (2,3,4) - Make the pattern like this?
- no graphic mod as you should however make the distance snaps more consistent
You can use this pattern to follow voice in some parts better
examples:
in 00:16:568 (3,4) -
00:18:147 (1) - You can divide it in 2 sliders like
00:51:305 (2,3) - Move it in 00:51:147 (2,3) -
00:54:462 (1) - Move it in 00:54:305 (1) and make it 1/4 longer ( 1/2 totally )
[In Niva's World]
I, i--- can't find anything ç.ç
That's good!
[In My World]
00:46:094 (x) - Add a Note, Midly stopped stream aren't good .-.
00:53:831 (8,9,x,10,11,x) - Make it a 3-3 stream (add 00:53:989 and 00:54:305 (13) -
00:54:462 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to move them like this?
and make the volume lower, as it's fastidious ...
01:27:778 (1) - Make it start in 01:27:936 (1) to
01:27:778 (x) - Add this circle in the center
The song was good :3
Please read my siggy~
[General]
• Make the first Kiai start on 00:35:357 and it should end on 00:55:568. It matches the music better that way.
[In Maya's World]
• 00:03:790 (4,5) - I would move these to notes over a 1/2 tick earlier so it would match the music a lot better
• 00:10:153 (1) - If I were you, I would move this note over to 00:10:305 and shorten the slider so that it ends on 00:10:759. Doing this would follow the music better and it would enhance the game play. It should look like this in the end:
• 00:22:568 (3) - I would flip this note so that is is moving downwards. This would make the note flow better into the next note, thus enhancing the game play.
• 00:28:410 (1,2) - I find this change over to red ticks has a very awkward feel to it. I would so something like this:
• 00:44:673 (1,2) - I like these slider~ Just thought I'd let you know :3
[In Yasora's World]
• 00:00:759 (1,2,3,4) - Move all these notes one white tick earlier.
• 00:18:147 (1) - I don't really like this kick slider. It tripped me up and it feels like lazy mapping. I would do something like this:
• 00:54:462 (1) - I would move this note over so it starts on 00:54:305 and then expand it so it ends on 00:54:936. It matches the lyrics that way (Because that IS what you are doing.)
• 01:09:305 (2) - Part of this note seems to be going off screen. Fix that:
• 01:14:041 (1) - I would make this spinner end on 01:15:778. Seeing as that's where the vocals end
[In My World]
♦ O_O That SV...
♦ I would turn down the AR to 7 or 8 to compensate for the insanely high SV.
♦ This diff seems a little too hectic for my taste. Some of the 1/4 notes feel a little forced when they don't fit in, just to add "fake difficulty"
• 00:10:229 (1) - I would delete this note here. It doesn't seem to fit in.
• 00:45:936 (1,2,3,4) - I don't anyone would get this on their first try. I would do something like this.
[Overall]
• This map could a little more modding before it's good to go. Though, this map does show the effort you put into it and the I admit that this song would be a tad hard to map. Good job~
♪Star♪
P.S.
I'll tell you what map I want you to mod some other time.
[General]
• Make the first Kiai start on 00:35:357 and it should end on 00:55:568. It matches the music better that way.
[In Maya's World]
• 00:03:790 (4,5) - I would move these to notes over a 1/2 tick earlier so it would match the music a lot better
• 00:10:153 (1) - If I were you, I would move this note over to 00:10:305 and shorten the slider so that it ends on 00:10:759. Doing this would follow the music better and it would enhance the game play. It should look like this in the end:
• 00:22:568 (3) - I would flip this note so that is is moving downwards. This would make the note flow better into the next note, thus enhancing the game play.
• 00:28:410 (1,2) - I find this change over to red ticks has a very awkward feel to it. I would so something like this:
• 00:44:673 (1,2) - I like these slider~ Just thought I'd let you know :3
[In Yasora's World]
• 00:00:759 (1,2,3,4) - Move all these notes one white tick earlier.
• 00:18:147 (1) - I don't really like this kick slider. It tripped me up and it feels like lazy mapping. I would do something like this:
• 00:54:462 (1) - I would move this note over so it starts on 00:54:305 and then expand it so it ends on 00:54:936. It matches the lyrics that way (Because that IS what you are doing.)
• 01:09:305 (2) - Part of this note seems to be going off screen. Fix that:
• 01:14:041 (1) - I would make this spinner end on 01:15:778. Seeing as that's where the vocals end
[In My World]
♦ O_O That SV...
♦ I would turn down the AR to 7 or 8 to compensate for the insanely high SV.
♦ This diff seems a little too hectic for my taste. Some of the 1/4 notes feel a little forced when they don't fit in, just to add "fake difficulty"
• 00:10:229 (1) - I would delete this note here. It doesn't seem to fit in.
• 00:45:936 (1,2,3,4) - I don't anyone would get this on their first try. I would do something like this.
[Overall]
• This map could a little more modding before it's good to go. Though, this map does show the effort you put into it and the I admit that this song would be a tad hard to map. Good job~
♪Star♪
P.S.
I'll tell you what map I want you to mod some other time.
Thanks for mod~merchat7 wrote:
[General]
- In Yasora's World doesn't have letterbox during break, turn it on to be consistent with other diffs. fixed
[Normal]
- Please do +1 ar, the bpm is this high and the feel song is quite fast so why such a low ar for Normal. I think even ar 5 would fit here. ok
00:05:911 (2) - This repeating slider feel really weird to me, feel better to me if you do a hit circle then a slider (starts on 00:06:214 and ends at 00:06:517), but it feel more like you should map on the red ticks here. fixed
00:15:002 (2) - Sound betters if you remove a repeat and end it at same place. This make it less oblivious that the end of this slider isn't really following anything. fixed
00:18:147 (1) - Rotate 90 degree anti clock wise, just to make it nicer to notice the 2 extra repeats on this slider. Without knowing the song, I release it too early. eemm.. ok
01:13:410 (2,3) - Making this a slider lead nicer to the spinner and plays nicer since some people may get confuse since the vocal may trip you off (since it's on the previous red tick) I don't understand this mod = =;; sorry
01:19:094 (2) - Making this a slider that end at 01:19:410 fits better with the vocal for me and makes the next notes a little nicer to play. You did a slider at 01:23:831 for this rhythm so for consistency as well. eem.. no
01:25:094 (3,4) - Slider for them. (3) is follow a quiet hi-hat/crymbal sound compare to the vocal on the previous red tick and the kick drum on the next. Since the notes on the red ticks are more prominent, you'll get confused if you listen to the song so a slider make this nicer to play. no
01:27:620 (4,5) - ^ Same thing here, short slider ending on the red tick may be better. This is consistent with Niva's diff. no
Except for that one part at the beginning that felt really offbeat and the low ar, pretty nice diff.
Thanks for mod~kosiga wrote:
[In Yasora's World]
Distance snap is not constant if this diff is Normal plz use the DS constant really? I just change the spacing if the notes is new combo :/
00:00:759 (1,2,3,4) - I think does not match rhythm ><; start 00:00:608 is better. try ? http://puu.sh/bpSN fixed
00:05:002 (1) - remove clap no D: because in there are avaible drum sound
00:08:032 (1) - grid move. x244,y196 lol fixed
00:15:002 (2) - remove one repeat. because end 00:15:153 is better. already do that :>
00:22:883 (1) - slider end 00:23:199 no that already follow the vocal
00:50:357 (1,2,3,4) - vocal follow suggestion http://puu.sh/bpUT ok, and I add circle too :>
00:54:462 (1) - start 00:54:305 end 00:54:936 ( repeat part 00:54:620 ) no
00:55:568 (3) - add NC no
01:00:620 (1,2) - two tick right move. (start 01:00:620) uuh.. no ._.;;
01:12:778 (5) - add NC and 01:13:094 - remove NC okay..
01:25:094 (3,4) - remove. and add slider 01:25:094~01:25:252 ok
01:27:620 (4,5) - remove. and add slider 01:27:620~01:27:778 ok
Thanks for mod~HakuNoKaemi wrote:
[In Yasora's World]
Use Custom hitsounds too? no, I'm too lazy do that :p #kicked
Why using 2 Distance Snaps? ( i can say 00:15:002 (2,1) - work good as a normal jump, but others?) uhh.. I add some different spacing if combo is change
00:00:759 (1,2,3,4) - Soft Hitsounds here? no
00:05:002 (1,1) - why two NCs? because different rhythm and......different spacing right? :p
00:05:305 (1,2,3,4) - fix the pattern? no..what must I fix it? D':
00:08:335 (2,3,4) - Make the pattern like this? no..
- no graphic mod as you should however make the distance snaps more consistent
You can use this pattern to follow voice in some parts better
examples:
in 00:16:568 (3,4) - it's too hard for beginner I think
00:18:147 (1) - You can divide it in 2 sliders like no. same reason with before
00:51:305 (2,3) - Move it in 00:51:147 (2,3) -
00:54:462 (1) - Move it in 00:54:305 (1) and make it 1/4 longer ( 1/2 totally )
Thanks for mod~Kiddo-kun wrote:
[In Yasora's World]
00:00:759 (1,2,3,4) - Move all these notes one white tick earlier. already do that :>
00:18:147 (1) - I don't really like this kick slider. It tripped me up and it feels like lazy mapping. I would do something like this: tehehehehefixed
00:54:462 (1) - I would move this note over so it starts on 00:54:305 and then expand it so it ends on 00:54:936. It matches the lyrics that way (Because that IS what you are doing.) I swear I don't understand this sorry T_T
01:09:305 (2) - Part of this note seems to be going off screen. Fix that: okay T3T
01:14:041 (1) - I would make this spinner end on 01:15:778. Seeing as that's where the vocals end but, I don't do that :p
Download: ROOKiEZ is PUNK'D - In My World (TV Size) (Maya-kira) [In Yasora's World].osu
Things were cleared up IRCYasora-chan wrote:
Kiddo-kun wrote:
[In Yasora's World]
00:54:462 (1) - I would move this note over so it starts on 00:54:305 and then expand it so it ends on 00:54:936. It matches the lyrics that way (Because that IS what you are doing.) I swear I don't understand this sorry T_T
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Thanks Kiddo-kun xD
Mayachii, aku edit ya di last post :3
Mayachii, aku edit ya di last post :3
Topic Starter
kosiga wrote:
hi~ Maya-kira
[General]fixed
- KIAI TIME - change KIAI TIME ? 00:35:357~00:55:568 , 01:05:673~01:15:778 in all diff. I think is better :3
[In Maya's World][In My World]
- 00:03:032 (3) - match it with a curve. more beautiful http://puu.sh/bpJu x344,y320 and with 00:03:790 (4) - x428,y136 ? fixed
- 00:10:153 (1) - spacing too close (0.57x) x104,y312 ? used kiddo-kun's suggestions
- 00:14:093 (4) - end does not match a sound >< remove repeat. and add slider 00:15:002~00:15:153 is better ?I'll wait for next suggestions
- 00:32:989 (3) - one grid right. x160,y168 fixed
- 00:37:726 (1,2) - Suggestion of the rhythm http://puu.sh/bpLD fixed
- 00:56:199 (2) - add NC ? fixed
- 00:56:673 (3,1,2,3) - Suggestion of the rhythm http://puu.sh/bpMX sorry ;A;
- 01:00:147 (3) - spacing too far. (0.88x) fixed
- 01:04:094 (3) - one grid down. x16,y260 fixed
- 01:05:041 (1,2) - one tick right move. I think this slider start 01:05:199 is better. ( Please be careful about DS if I change it ) fixed
- 01:11:831 - add note ? sorry ;A;
- 01:13:726 (4) - remove finish fixed
- 01:18:462 (1) - start 01:18:305 is better. Suggestion of the rhythm http://puu.sh/bpPi fixed
- 01:27:305 (3) - slider end 01:27:778sorry ;A;
- 00:10:229 (1) - remove NC and 00:10:456 - add NC fixed
- 00:15:002 (5) - slider end 00:15:153 sorry ;A;
- 00:23:989 (4,5) - grid move ? 4:x128,y260 5:x48,y260 fixed
- 00:28:726 (3) - add NC I'll wait for next suggestions
- 00:29:041 (5) - ^ I'll wait for next suggestions
- 00:29:515 (7) - ^ I'll wait for next suggestions
- 00:29:989 (10) - Suggestion of the rhythm http://puu.sh/bpZ1 I see your point, but I like my current rhythm
- 00:38:357 (5) - slider end 00:38:515 or 00:38:673 fixed
- 00:41:120 - add note sorry ;A;
- 00:41:199 - ^ sorry ;A;
- 00:42:699 (2) - remove note ? fixed
- 00:46:173 (3) - spacing too close >< I'll wait for next suggestions
- 00:53:831 (8) - add NC fixed
- 00:55:252 (1) - remove NC and 00:55:568 - add NC fixed
- 00:56:752 (8) - this slider start 00:56:831. end 00:57:462. (repeat part 00:57:147) and add note here I'll wait for next suggestions
- 00:57:462 (10) - remove note why? Please give explanation ><
- 01:05:041 (1) - remove NC and 01:05:199 - add NC no, the lyric starts here
- 01:18:620 (1,2,3,4) - two tick right move. start 01:18:778 I'll wait for next suggestions
- 01:27:778 (1) - spinner end 01:28:726 ?sorry ;A;
HakuNoKaemi wrote:
[General]
Make someone control the timing... i kinda tried...Will tell if I find a more precise timing... okay, please inform me anytime
[In Maya's World]
00:03:790 (4,5) - Would be easier if you continued following the guitar with those, as you started following drums in the middle of a combo(it could be confusive for noobs) move at 00:03:638 (4,5) used kiddo-kun's suggestions
00:11:365 (2) - Adjust the shape a little
because I used kiddo-kun's suggestion, this pattern is no longer valid
00:14:093 (4) - One less repeat fixed
00:15:153 (x) - to add a circle here fixed
00:38:989 (2) - Make it a 1/1 Slider and add one repeat used kosiga's suggestion instead
00:44:673 (1) - Adjust Blanket
fixed
Adjust the various blankets after too, and there are many many many I think they plays fine ._.;;
01:20:989 (3,4,5) - Adjust?
I see your point, but I prefer my way
[In My World]
00:46:094 (x) - Add a Note, Midly stopped stream aren't good .-. although it sounds good to me, but since many peoples points this out... fixed
00:53:831 (8,9,x,10,11,x) - Make it a 3-3 stream (add 00:53:989 and 00:54:305 (13) - sorry, but this 2-2 streams sounds better to me .w.
00:54:462 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to move them like this?
I can't see it well @_@;; can you give me the codes instead?
and make the volume lower, as it's fastidious ... fixed
01:27:778 (1) - Make it start in 01:27:936 (1) to
01:27:778 (x) - Add this circle in the center good idea, fixed.
The song was good :3
thanks for the mod >w<Kiddo-Kun wrote:
Please read my siggy~
[General]
• Make the first Kiai start on 00:35:357 and it should end on 00:55:568. It matches the music better that way. used kosiga's suggestion.
[In Maya's World]
• 00:03:790 (4,5) - I would move these to notes over a 1/2 tick earlier so it would match the music a lot better sorry ;A;, I think my current pattern match the music best. Might change if someone mention this again though
• 00:10:153 (1) - If I were you, I would move this note over to 00:10:305 and shorten the slider so that it ends on 00:10:759. Doing this would follow the music better and it would enhance the game play. It should look like this in the end:
• 00:22:568 (3) - I would flip this note so that is is moving downwards. This would make the note flow better into the next note, thus enhancing the game play.
I don't see so much difference, but... fixed
• 00:28:410 (1,2) - I find this change over to red ticks has a very awkward feel to it. I would so something like this:
that might make the spacing difficult. beside the vocals starts on red tick >< but however, I don't think your suggestion is bad. I'll wait for the next opinion
• 00:44:673 (1,2) - I like these slider~ Just thought I'd let you know :3 lol thanks >w< I liked them too~
[In My World]
♦ O_O That SV... don't worry about the SV
♦ I would turn down the AR to 7 or 8 to compensate for the insanely high SV. I actually prefer my current AR
♦ This diff seems a little too hectic for my taste. Some of the 1/4 notes feel a little forced when they don't fit in, just to add "fake difficulty" well.. sorry for that ._.
• 00:10:229 (1) - I would delete this note here. It doesn't seem to fit in. fixed
• 00:45:936 (1,2,3,4) - I don't anyone would get this on their first try. I would do something like this.
used kosiga and hakunokaemi's suggestion already ._.
As promised Maya-chan, here's your mod <3
General :
In Yasora's World :
General :
- Timing : I'm still totally unsure about the timing, you should ask someone good at it to check it :/
- You don't have any breaks, disable the letterboxes then ?
- 00:03:790 (4) - As you're following the guitar previously, you need to follow the guitar here too, otherwise this note feels too late and awkward. Move this note 1/2 earlier then.
- 00:04:396 (5) - Same for this slider, you need to follow the guitar. I know there is a loud note at 00:05:002 and you need to map it too, so try something like this :
- 00:15:305 (5) - This circle is too late, it doesn't follow the music. Move it 1/2 earlier.
- 00:21:305 (2,3) - This pattern is awkward, I mean the end of (2) is not acually in the rhythm of the song and (3) has a different rhythm than what you did before. It's confusing :/
I suggest you something like this : - 00:40:410 (1) - This anti-jump is bad, look, the spacing between the end of (3) and the beginning of this slider is the spacing that is used for notes spaced by 1/1 however the spacing between these note is 2/1. That's very confusing and most of the beginners will click this slider earlier than they should. Use the proper spacing please.
- 00:56:199 (1,2,1,2,3) - This pattern is totally not in the song rhythm. Consider doing this patern instead (or something else) :
- 01:12:147 (2,3) - Again, this pattern doesn't follow the song's rhythm. Try this :
In Yasora's World :
- 00:05:305 (1) - The reverse on this slider sounds kinda bad since there is actually nothing in the music at 00:05:608. Also, don't stack this slider with the previous circle, it looks kinda hard to read.
- 00:15:153 - A finish would sond awesome at the end of this slider.
- 00:22:883 (1) - Even if this slider follows the vocal, it plays very awkwardly. You should extend it by 1/4.
- 00:42:778 - It feels like a note is missing here.
- 00:44:989 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is not bad or something, however you can do something much better if you follow the actual rhythm of the song. I mean :
- 01:00:462 (1) - This slider is too long, if you want to follows the song, you have to shorten this slider by 1/2.
- 01:06:462 (3) - ^
- 01:07:094 (4) - This slider doesn't follow the song's rhythm, it is 1/2 later than it should so move it 1/2 backward.
- 01:27:620 (4) - Silenced objects are unrankable because they are very confusing and doesn't give any feedback to the player. Unsilence it.
- 00:22:726 (4,5) - Because of the vocals which are dominant here, this pattern sonds awkward, I would do something like this :
- 00:49:252 (2) - For the same reason as before, do something like this ? :
- AR9 doesn't fit this song, there are calm part such as 00:25:410 for example where it doesn't fit at all ! Believe me, AR8 would me more appropriate.
- You are using some 1/4 which are not justified by the music which causes a bad overmapping. Seriously, it kills the quality of the map
You should remove them, here's the list of the note you should remove :- 00:05:456 (1,2,3) - This pattern is not even in the good rhythm (blue - red - blue rarely fits). do this :
- 00:06:441 (3) - Remove
- 00:06:668 (1,2,3,4) - Again this pattern doesn't fit the music, 4 notes streams are very unusal in 1/4 rhythms (mostly in 1/3 and 1/6 rhythms) So consider doing something like this :
- 00:09:623 (5) - Remove
- 00:14:774 (2) - Remove
- 00:19:410 (5,6,7,8) - Same as 00:06:668 (1,2,3,4). Do this ?
- 00:35:594 (2) - Remove
- 00:36:226 (5) - Remove
- 00:37:883 (2) - Shorten it by 1/4
- 00:42:383 (3) - Remove
- 00:48:305 (1,2,3,4) - Again a 4 notes stream. Do this ?
- 00:59:910 (7) - Move it 1/4 later and shorten it by 1/4
- 01:02:120 (5) - Remove
- 01:04:173 (5,7) - Remove
- 00:05:456 (1,2,3) - This pattern is not even in the good rhythm (blue - red - blue rarely fits). do this :
- 00:02:577 (1,2,3) - This jump is quite big, such a big jump after anti-jumps is not a good thing :/
- 00:12:426 (6) - This slider is too close from the previous note. Use the proper spacing please.
- 00:23:199 (3,1) - This jump is not justified by the song so I don't understand you have such a huge jump here :/
That's very confusing and hard to read (Even more if you use AR9 !!). - 00:29:515 (7) - Hophop, a little new combo is missing here ^-^
- 00:54:462 (1,2,3,4,5) - Believe me, slider streams suck >~<
Use circles instead °A°
Topic Starter
ne kurai ._.KuraiPettan wrote:
As promised Maya-chan, here's your mod <3
General :In Maya's World :
- Timing : I'm still totally unsure about the timing, you should ask someone good at it to check it :/ I'll try to find someone >_<
- You don't have any breaks, disable the letterboxes then ? fixed
- 00:03:790 (4) - As you're following the guitar previously, you need to follow the guitar here too, otherwise this note feels too late and awkward. Move this note 1/2 earlier then.
- 00:04:396 (5) - Same for this slider, you need to follow the guitar. I know there is a loud note at 00:05:002 and you need to map it too, so try something like this :
- 00:15:305 (5) - This circle is too late, it doesn't follow the music. Move it 1/2 earlier.
- 00:21:305 (2,3) - This pattern is awkward, I mean the end of (2) is not acually in the rhythm of the song and (3) has a different rhythm than what you did before. It's confusing :/
I suggest you something like this :- 00:40:410 (1) - This anti-jump is bad, look, the spacing between the end of (3) and the beginning of this slider is the spacing that is used for notes spaced by 1/1 however the spacing between these note is 2/1. That's very confusing and most of the beginners will click this slider earlier than they should. Use the proper spacing please.
- 00:56:199 (1,2,1,2,3) - This pattern is totally not in the song rhythm. Consider doing this patern instead (or something else) :
- 01:12:147 (2,3) - Again, this pattern doesn't follow the song's rhythm. Try this :
In Yasora's World :In Niva's World :
- 00:05:305 (1) - The reverse on this slider sounds kinda bad since there is actually nothing in the music at 00:05:608. Also, don't stack this slider with the previous circle, it looks kinda hard to read.
- 00:15:153 - A finish would sond awesome at the end of this slider.
- 00:22:883 (1) - Even if this slider follows the vocal, it plays very awkwardly. You should extend it by 1/4.
- 00:42:778 - It feels like a note is missing here.
- 00:44:989 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is not bad or something, however you can do something much better if you follow the actual rhythm of the song. I mean :
- 01:00:462 (1) - This slider is too long, if you want to follows the song, you have to shorten this slider by 1/2.
- 01:06:462 (3) - ^
- 01:07:094 (4) - This slider doesn't follow the song's rhythm, it is 1/2 later than it should so move it 1/2 backward.
- 01:27:620 (4) - Silenced objects are unrankable because they are very confusing and doesn't give any feedback to the player. Unsilence it.
In My World :
- 00:22:726 (4,5) - Because of the vocals which are dominant here, this pattern sonds awkward, I would do something like this :
- 00:49:252 (2) - For the same reason as before, do something like this ? :
That's all for now >w<
- AR9 doesn't fit this song, there are calm part such as 00:25:410 for example where it doesn't fit at all ! Believe me, AR8 would me more appropriate.
- You are using some 1/4 which are not justified by the music which causes a bad overmapping. Seriously, it kills the quality of the map
You should remove them, here's the list of the note you should remove :
- 00:05:456 (1,2,3) - This pattern is not even in the good rhythm (blue - red - blue rarely fits). do this :
- 00:06:441 (3) - Remove
- 00:06:668 (1,2,3,4) - Again this pattern doesn't fit the music, 4 notes streams are very unusal in 1/4 rhythms (mostly in 1/3 and 1/6 rhythms) So consider doing something like this :
- 00:09:623 (5) - Remove
- 00:14:774 (2) - Remove
- 00:19:410 (5,6,7,8) - Same as 00:06:668 (1,2,3,4). Do this ?
- 00:35:594 (2) - Remove
- 00:36:226 (5) - Remove
- 00:37:883 (2) - Shorten it by 1/4
- 00:42:383 (3) - Remove
- 00:48:305 (1,2,3,4) - Again a 4 notes stream. Do this ?
- 00:59:910 (7) - Move it 1/4 later and shorten it by 1/4
- 01:02:120 (5) - Remove
- 01:04:173 (5,7) - Remove
- 00:02:577 (1,2,3) - This jump is quite big, such a big jump after anti-jumps is not a good thing :/
- 00:12:426 (6) - This slider is too close from the previous note. Use the proper spacing please.
- 00:23:199 (3,1) - This jump is not justified by the song so I don't understand you have such a huge jump here :/
That's very confusing and hard to read (Even more if you use AR9 !!).- 00:29:515 (7) - Hophop, a little new combo is missing here ^-^
- 00:54:462 (1,2,3,4,5) - Believe me, slider streams suck >~<
Use circles instead °A°
I'm thinking to remap my diff >_<
It seems like very horrible @_@;
Fixed both.
Thanks as usual KuraiPettan :3
Download: ROOKiEZ is PUNK'D - In My World (TV Size) (Maya-kira) [In Niva's World].osu
Thanks as usual KuraiPettan :3
Download: ROOKiEZ is PUNK'D - In My World (TV Size) (Maya-kira) [In Niva's World].osu
Fixed some~ :3
thank you kurai~
Download: ROOKiEZ is PUNK'D - In My World (TV Size) (Maya-kira) [In Yasora's World].osu
thank you kurai~
Download: ROOKiEZ is PUNK'D - In My World (TV Size) (Maya-kira) [In Yasora's World].osu
Topic Starter
I actually remembered I write in front that I don't want a taiko diff T_T;; but however.. why don't you give it a shot? xDGenkishi wrote:
Can i make a taiko diff?
if I like the result, I'll use it and vice versa xD
why this map back to WIP? O.o
Topic Starter
I'm remapping easy and insane xDYasora-chan wrote:
why this map back to WIP? O.o
Taiko Taiko..:3
This is my first taiko diff
so i hope you like it
Download: ROOKiEZ is PUNK'D - In My World (TV Size) (Maya-kira) [In Genki's Taiko World].osu
This is my first taiko diff
so i hope you like it
Download: ROOKiEZ is PUNK'D - In My World (TV Size) (Maya-kira) [In Genki's Taiko World].osu
Topic Starter
sorry genki-san ._.
maybe you did your best, but I'll skip it for now >_< so sorry
maybe you did your best, but I'll skip it for now >_< so sorry
Founded the reason the timing seemed strange, the syncope. It means that many notes are delayed or anticipated, in the full version some notes are delayed by 1/2 and that seems to make the metronome goes wrong, while it's going right.
And yes, in the TV Size there is a more complex syncope at the start (about 1/8 every half stanza but anticipated in that case... ) so, yes, if not with using many different offsets, about 8 or 12 or 16, didin't count that. ( the offset you're using sound good in the first seconds even if positioned after)
And yes, in the TV Size there is a more complex syncope at the start (about 1/8 every half stanza but anticipated in that case... ) so, yes, if not with using many different offsets, about 8 or 12 or 16, didin't count that. ( the offset you're using sound good in the first seconds even if positioned after)
Topic Starter
syncope @_@;; (what the hell is that---)
I don't really get it T_T;;
I don't really get it T_T;;
Syncope - A missed beat or off-the-beat stress.Maya-kira wrote:
syncope @_@;; (what the hell is that---)
I don't really get it T_T;;
Modding, CrimmiStyle!!
From my Mod Rescue Queue~
Suggestion
Change
[In Maya's World]
01:10:883 (1) - Remove Whistle & add Finish?
[In Yasora's World]
Awesome~
[In Niva's World]
Awesome~
[In My World]
Why is this diff the only diff with 3 different timing sections?
01:05:672 (3) - Add finish?
01:08:199 (3) - ^
01:10:883 (1) - ^
01:18:314 (3) - ^
Alrighty then, this map is solid, good luck!!
Topic Starter
thank you ;w;Crimmi wrote:
Syncope - A missed beat or off-the-beat stress.Maya-kira wrote:
syncope @_@;; (what the hell is that---)
I don't really get it T_T;;
Modding, CrimmiStyle!!
From my Mod Rescue Queue~
Suggestion
Change
[In Maya's World]
01:10:883 (1) - Remove Whistle & add Finish? no that would make the other whistle useless TwT;;
[In My World]
Why is this diff the only diff with 3 different timing sections?
01:05:672 (3) - Add finish? okay ;w;
01:08:199 (3) - ^ okay ;w;
01:10:883 (1) - ^ okay
01:18:314 (3) - ^ okay
Alrighty then, this map is solid, good luck!!
thx reqs~
[Yosora]
0.35.989(2) - spacing
0.43.726(2) - ^
0.45.147(1,2) - try this
0.51.620(3) - try this
[Maya]
1.27.620(1) - remove finish
[Yosora]
0.35.989(2) - spacing
0.43.726(2) - ^
0.45.147(1,2) - try this
0.51.620(3) - try this
[Maya]
1.27.620(1) - remove finish
Topic Starter
frost-b-spec wrote:
thx reqs~
[Yosora]
0.35.989(2) - spacing
0.43.726(2) - ^
0.45.147(1,2) - try this
0.51.620(3) - try this
[Maya]
1.27.620(1) - remove finishno, sorry (and I think you still have the old version of this map? "w")
[quote="frost-b-spec"]thx reqs~
[Yosora]
0.35.989(2) - spacing
0.43.726(2) - ^
0.45.147(1,2) - try this sorry, no change
0.51.620(3) - try this ^
thanks for mod (:
Download: ROOKiEZ is PUNK'D - In My World (TV Size) (Maya-kira) [In Yasora's World].osu
[Yosora]
0.35.989(2) - spacing
0.43.726(2) - ^
0.45.147(1,2) - try this sorry, no change
0.51.620(3) - try this ^
thanks for mod (:
Download: ROOKiEZ is PUNK'D - In My World (TV Size) (Maya-kira) [In Yasora's World].osu
Hi ~ As request by kanpakyin ~ TAT
- Red - Unrankable stuff.
- Blue - Extremely suggest you to fix this.
- Black - Feel free to ignore this.
- Timing is NOT unified!! The first 2 diffs have only 1 red line.
- I'm not a big fan of your setting of KIAI section. Looks a bit orderless and random.
- 00:32:989 (3,1) - This overlap looks not good..Well, just a say.
- 00:35:515 (x) - Remove useless timing section.
- 00:54:147 (1,1) - This is unrankable! The note is too close to the spinner and too far away from the center. Remember this is the easiest diff in this mapset~ So this pattern should not be put here.
- 00:55:568 (x) - Remove useless timing section.
- 01:01:883 (3) - I prefer reduce 1/2, the slider should end at 01:02:515.(Just like 00:41:989 (2) hmm?)
- 01:15:936 (x) - Remove useless timing section.
- 01:27:620 (1) - Toooooooooo loud for me. Remove finish and set 5% volume plz...
- This diff is a bit difficult for beginners...
- Remove audio lead-in time since it's unnecessary.
- 01:09:305 (2) - Stack this perfectly plz ~
451,264,69305,2,0,B|447:328|347:372|299:356|259:320,1,220,8|8
275,332,70094,1,0
- 00:35:673 (1) - You have to set new combo here manually.
- 00:54:305 (1) - Hmm~ I prefer add a note here and delay the spinner to 00:54:383 or 00:54:462.
- 01:05:673 (x) - Resnap the KIAI section.
- Nice diff!
- Remove audio lead-in time since it's unnecessary.
- 00:19:094 (7) - This is not suitable here. Firstly this fast slider with 3 reverses is confused, and this follows nothing, neither vocal nor music. Perhaps you can try note on 00:19:094 and 1/4 slider with 1 reverse on 00:19:252.
- 00:31:568 (5) - I suggest, don't stack this on 00:31:252 (3) but try some other positions. A bit hard to read tho..
- 00:32:831 (x) - Add note here.
- 00:35:357 (x) - The KIAI section should be started here, like how other diffs have done.
- 00:37:567 (1,4) - Switch new combo for easier reading.
- 00:50:988 (2,3) - Ehh. Spacing? Since I find very few jumps but here...
- 00:56:041 (3) - What's wrong on the tail.. o o
- 01:05:673 (x) - Resnap the KIAI section.
- 01:16:251 (1) - Too far away from the center maybe.
- 01:18:146 (2,3) - Just comment, really hard to know jumps would come here.
Topic Starter
thank you for modJoJo wrote:
Hi ~ As request by kanpakyin ~ TAT[General]
- Red - Unrankable stuff.
- Blue - Extremely suggest you to fix this.
- Black - Feel free to ignore this.
[In Maya's World]
- Timing is NOT unified!! The first 2 diffs have only 1 red line. [/color]
- I'm not a big fan of your setting of KIAI section. Looks a bit orderless and random. o_o;; but imo this fits the song orz
[In my World]
- 00:32:989 (3,1) - This overlap looks not good..Well, just a say. fixed
- 00:35:515 (x) - Remove useless timing section. ^
- 00:54:147 (1,1) - This is unrankable! The note is too close to the spinner and too far away from the center. Remember this is the easiest diff in this mapset~ So this pattern should not be put here. ^
- 00:55:568 (x) - Remove useless timing section. ^
- 01:01:883 (3) - I prefer reduce 1/2, the slider should end at 01:02:515.(Just like 00:41:989 (2) hmm?) even so, there's drum at 883, and that's why I keep this slider ending at 883.
- 01:15:936 (x) - Remove useless timing section. fixed
- 01:27:620 (1) - Toooooooooo loud for me. Remove finish and set 5% volume plz... fixed
- This diff is a bit difficult for beginners... x_xa
That's it~ Good luck >~<
- Remove audio lead-in time since it's unnecessary. wah TwT;; my bad (i forget orz)
- 00:19:094 (7) - This is not suitable here. Firstly this fast slider with 3 reverses is confused, and this follows nothing, neither vocal nor music. Perhaps you can try note on 00:19:094 and 1/4 slider with 1 reverse on 00:19:252. I hear a drum sound around here o3o
- 00:31:568 (5) - I suggest, don't stack this on 00:31:252 (3) but try some other positions. A bit hard to read tho.. fixed
- 00:32:831 (x) - Add note here. I'll think about it
- 00:35:357 (x) - The KIAI section should be started here, like how other diffs have done. fixed
- 00:37:567 (1,4) - Switch new combo for easier reading. I'll think about it (because I follow the vocal atm)
- 00:50:988 (2,3) - Ehh. Spacing? Since I find very few jumps but here...I'll think about it
- 00:56:041 (3) - What's wrong on the tail.. o o uh.. extra shape xwx?
- 01:05:673 (x) - Resnap the KIAI section. fixed
- 01:16:251 (1) - Too far away from the center maybe. yes ofc, but however, this is an insane diff ><
- 01:18:146 (2,3) - Just comment, really hard to know jumps would come here. I'll think about it
Yo modding this map because of ur request
General:
Lead in time is inconsistent. *points at Yasora's diff*
In Maya's World:
00:44:831(1,2) - move it 1 tick up because it looks like its not following vocals accurately. if u move it up it follows vocals accurately.
00:54:147(1,1) - this spinner is unexpected for beginners. instead add a slider, end it at 00:54:936, delete the circle at 00:55:568 and make it repeat. this should follow vocals accurately.
01:06:305(2) - same as 00:44:831
01:16:726 - delete the break because the hp bar doesnt decrease that much.
In Yasora's World:
00:18:147(1) - i think u forgot to add a clap at the beginning. if u did add it to keep a steady pattern.
00:46:094(3,4) - delete (3,4) and try this. IMO this is easier and it follows vocals accurately.
01:03:147(1) - how about replacing this for 1 1/4 slider with 2 repeats. it follows vocals accurately.
In Niva's World:
00:32:989(3) - move it down because its touching the hp bar. this may cause a distraction for players causing them to mess up.
01:24:146(4) - ^
In Maya's World:
just out of curiosity why isnt there 2 timing points like the other diffs?
00:57:936 - add a circle to follow vocals?
this is the best i can do. GL
I might watch Ao no Exorcist after listening to this.
General:
Lead in time is inconsistent. *points at Yasora's diff*
In Maya's World:
00:44:831(1,2) - move it 1 tick up because it looks like its not following vocals accurately. if u move it up it follows vocals accurately.
00:54:147(1,1) - this spinner is unexpected for beginners. instead add a slider, end it at 00:54:936, delete the circle at 00:55:568 and make it repeat. this should follow vocals accurately.
01:06:305(2) - same as 00:44:831
01:16:726 - delete the break because the hp bar doesnt decrease that much.
In Yasora's World:
00:18:147(1) - i think u forgot to add a clap at the beginning. if u did add it to keep a steady pattern.
00:46:094(3,4) - delete (3,4) and try this. IMO this is easier and it follows vocals accurately.
01:03:147(1) - how about replacing this for 1 1/4 slider with 2 repeats. it follows vocals accurately.
In Niva's World:
00:32:989(3) - move it down because its touching the hp bar. this may cause a distraction for players causing them to mess up.
01:24:146(4) - ^
In Maya's World:
just out of curiosity why isnt there 2 timing points like the other diffs?
00:57:936 - add a circle to follow vocals?
this is the best i can do. GL
I might watch Ao no Exorcist after listening to this.
thanks for mod all (:
sorry for late fix
Download: ROOKiEZ is PUNK'D - In My World (TV Size) (Maya-kira) [In Yasora's World].osu
sorry for late fix
Download: ROOKiEZ is PUNK'D - In My World (TV Size) (Maya-kira) [In Yasora's World].osu
[General]
Delete OSB-file in folder.
[In Maya's World]
This is a very very hard diff as it is the "easiset" in the mapset.
00:17:831 (1) - New combo?
00:20:041 (1) - And then new combo here?
00:20:989 (2) - Skip new combo? .. I don't know of these 3 but I feel like it's better this way, so give it a thought.
00:26:041 (1) - This slider can be better if you drag the bottom point. Like this:01:01:883 (3) - You can easily make this slider much better by dragging the right point like this:
01:12:778 (4) - another slider that you can make better by dragging some points and delete the end point like this:
[In Yasora's World]
00:16:568 (3,4) - You should do something here so they don't overlap each other.
00:41:989 (3) - eew, ugly slider hehe.. do something about that last end point of it. To make it curve smoother around (2).
00:54:305 (1) - Don't do new combo here
00:55:568 (3) - New combo.
00:57:778 (1) - And then skip this new combo.
01:09:305 (2) - The starting point of this slider should be exactly beneath 01:08:041 (1) - but, it's not very bad as it is though, just look at it : ).
[In Niva's World]
00:26:989 (4) - One grid to the left.
00:28:568 (4) - Make this slider so that it overlap better with (2).. maybe drag the end point of (3) 4 grids up? : D
if you do that, make sure the spacing between (4) and (5) is smaller that it currently is.
00:35:672 (1) - hmm, when I see this, I think "why suddenly change to ugly slider when all of you'r others are so perfectly?" you should really really make this slider smoother.. perhaps this should do?: 00:47:989 (1) - new combo? since you did here: 00:45:462 (1) - and here 00:46:726 (1) -
~Best diff imo~
[In My World]
OD + 1 ?
00:16:726 (5) - This slider should overlap (7) better.
00:21:778 (5) - Should overlap (7) better.
00:26:831 (4) - Spacing.
00:30:857 (1,2) - These two are just not suiting.. sorry.
00:37:567 (5) - Don't take new combo here.
00:37:883 (1) - But take it here instead.
00:44:042 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - That pattern, try to play it.. that's not good.. you should do something with this pattern.. maybe the best choise is to make a new pattern. Looks pretty good when not playing though : ).
00:51:146 (3) - Spacing.
00:52:567 (6) - Spacing.
00:53:041 (9) - It would feel better to play it if this was a slider.. but then you have to make new pattern.. so it's up to you >_> .. It works as it is, just that it would be better if you made slider here.
00:54:541 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - This stream is extremly hard to read.. do something else?
00:57:462 (7) - This slider don't curve very well around (6) so it looks alittle weird.
00:57:778 (1) - Don't do new combo here.
00:58:093 (1) - Rather do it here.
01:06:935 (4) - Make this so that the end of the slider curves better around (3) ..it's gonna look way better.
Okay, that's about it.
☆ Star ☆
Delete OSB-file in folder.
[In Maya's World]
This is a very very hard diff as it is the "easiset" in the mapset.
00:17:831 (1) - New combo?
00:20:041 (1) - And then new combo here?
00:20:989 (2) - Skip new combo? .. I don't know of these 3 but I feel like it's better this way, so give it a thought.
00:26:041 (1) - This slider can be better if you drag the bottom point. Like this:01:01:883 (3) - You can easily make this slider much better by dragging the right point like this:
01:12:778 (4) - another slider that you can make better by dragging some points and delete the end point like this:
[In Yasora's World]
00:16:568 (3,4) - You should do something here so they don't overlap each other.
00:41:989 (3) - eew, ugly slider hehe.. do something about that last end point of it. To make it curve smoother around (2).
00:54:305 (1) - Don't do new combo here
00:55:568 (3) - New combo.
00:57:778 (1) - And then skip this new combo.
01:09:305 (2) - The starting point of this slider should be exactly beneath 01:08:041 (1) - but, it's not very bad as it is though, just look at it : ).
[In Niva's World]
00:26:989 (4) - One grid to the left.
00:28:568 (4) - Make this slider so that it overlap better with (2).. maybe drag the end point of (3) 4 grids up? : D
if you do that, make sure the spacing between (4) and (5) is smaller that it currently is.
00:35:672 (1) - hmm, when I see this, I think "why suddenly change to ugly slider when all of you'r others are so perfectly?" you should really really make this slider smoother.. perhaps this should do?: 00:47:989 (1) - new combo? since you did here: 00:45:462 (1) - and here 00:46:726 (1) -
~Best diff imo~
[In My World]
OD + 1 ?
00:16:726 (5) - This slider should overlap (7) better.
00:21:778 (5) - Should overlap (7) better.
00:26:831 (4) - Spacing.
00:30:857 (1,2) - These two are just not suiting.. sorry.
00:37:567 (5) - Don't take new combo here.
00:37:883 (1) - But take it here instead.
00:44:042 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - That pattern, try to play it.. that's not good.. you should do something with this pattern.. maybe the best choise is to make a new pattern. Looks pretty good when not playing though : ).
00:51:146 (3) - Spacing.
00:52:567 (6) - Spacing.
00:53:041 (9) - It would feel better to play it if this was a slider.. but then you have to make new pattern.. so it's up to you >_> .. It works as it is, just that it would be better if you made slider here.
00:54:541 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - This stream is extremly hard to read.. do something else?
00:57:462 (7) - This slider don't curve very well around (6) so it looks alittle weird.
00:57:778 (1) - Don't do new combo here.
00:58:093 (1) - Rather do it here.
01:06:935 (4) - Make this so that the end of the slider curves better around (3) ..it's gonna look way better.
Okay, that's about it.
☆ Star ☆
not change anything in my diff ._. also, maya, please update my diff ><
Late reply orz ><
Download: ROOKiEZ is PUNK'D - In My World (TV Size) (Maya-kira) [In Niva's World].osu
JoJo wrote:
Hi ~ As request by kanpakyin ~ TAT
[In Niva's World]
- 00:35:673 (1) - You have to set new combo here manually. Done
- 00:54:305 (1) - Hmm~ I prefer add a note here and delay the spinner to 00:54:383 or 00:54:462. Awesome suggestion, added
- 01:05:673 (x) - Resnap the KIAI section. Done
- Nice diff!
Byakugan249 wrote:
Yo modding this map because of ur request
In Niva's World:
00:32:989(3) - move it down because its touching the hp bar. this may cause a distraction for players causing them to mess up.
01:24:146(4) - ^
It won't distract that much imo. No change, sorry ><
Thanks for mod all ~ :3AndreasHD wrote:
[In Niva's World]
00:26:989 (4) - One grid to the left. Done
00:28:568 (4) - Make this slider so that it overlap better with (2).. maybe drag the end point of (3) 4 grids up? : D
if you do that, make sure the spacing between (4) and (5) is smaller that it currently is. Hmm, I get your point. I didn't do exactly as you say, but improved the overlap here ~
00:35:672 (1) - hmm, when I see this, I think "why suddenly change to ugly slider when all of you'r others are so perfectly?" you should really really make this slider smoother.. perhaps this should do?: Nice suggestion again, done
00:47:989 (1) - new combo? since you did here: 00:45:462 (1) - and here 00:46:726 (1) - OK ~
~Best diff imo~
Download: ROOKiEZ is PUNK'D - In My World (TV Size) (Maya-kira) [In Niva's World].osu
Topic Starter
Sorry can't update yet-- no computer connection x_x
edit:
sorry accidentally press the give kudosu to yasora >_<
edit:
sorry accidentally press the give kudosu to yasora >_<
Topic Starter
Byakugan249 wrote:
In Maya's World:
00:44:831(1,2) - move it 1 tick up because it looks like its not following vocals accurately. if u move it up it follows vocals accurately. no, sorry
00:54:147(1,1) - this spinner is unexpected for beginners. instead add a slider, end it at 00:54:936, delete the circle at 00:55:568 and make it repeat. this should follow vocals accurately. fixed, but using my own way ehe
01:06:305(2) - same as 00:44:831 no, sorry
01:16:726 - delete the break because the hp bar doesnt decrease that much. I'll think about it
In Maya's World:
just out of curiosity why isnt there 2 timing points like the other diffs? forgot to remove the other one tehe, sorry >_<
00:57:936 - add a circle to follow vocals ? fixed
this is the best i can do. GL
I might watch Ao no Exorcist after listening to this.go and watch it
thanks for modAndreasHD wrote:
[General]
Delete OSB-file in folder.
[In Maya's World]
This is a very very hard diff as it is the "easiset" in the mapset. I don't think its that hard o3o; my newcomer friend still pass it (and she almost fc it, so I guess yeah)
00:17:831 (1) - New combo? no, sorry
00:20:041 (1) - And then new combo here? ^
00:20:989 (2) - Skip new combo? .. I don't know of these 3 but I feel like it's better this way, so give it a thought. ^
00:26:041 (1) - This slider can be better if you drag the bottom point. Like this: I don't actually see any difference, but--- fixed01:01:883 (3) - You can easily make this slider much better by dragging the right point like this: ^01:12:778 (4) - another slider that you can make better by dragging some points and delete the end point like this: ^
[In My World]
OD + 1 ? no, sorry
00:16:726 (5) - This slider should overlap (7) better. I'll think about it
00:21:778 (5) - Should overlap (7) better. I'll think about it
00:26:831 (4) - Spacing. what's wrong with the spacing?
00:30:857 (1,2) - These two are just not suiting.. sorry. no, sorry
00:37:567 (5) - Don't take new combo here.
00:37:883 (1) - But take it here instead.
00:44:042 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - That pattern, try to play it.. that's not good.. you should do something with this pattern.. maybe the best choise is to make a new pattern. Looks pretty good when not playing though : ).
00:51:146 (3) - Spacing.
00:52:567 (6) - Spacing.
00:53:041 (9) - It would feel better to play it if this was a slider.. but then you have to make new pattern.. so it's up to you >_> .. It works as it is, just that it would be better if you made slider here.
00:54:541 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - This stream is extremly hard to read.. do something else?
00:57:462 (7) - This slider don't curve very well around (6) so it looks alittle weird.
00:57:778 (1) - Don't do new combo here.
00:58:093 (1) - Rather do it here.
01:06:935 (4) - Make this so that the end of the slider curves better around (3) ..it's gonna look way better.
sorry, I don't change much
Okay, that's about it.
☆ Star ☆