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Foo Fighters - The Pretender

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foulcoon
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foulcoon
Gah, timing seems so close that i don't want to touch it quite yet.

[Insane]
Score is an issue, and this is normally NEVER ACCEPTABLE. However, i suggest you lower your drain by one tick, and set slider tickrate to 1 to match the other difficulties.

I wish you would experiment more with hitsounds. The switch to normal sampleset at the chorus is good, but the song builds so much before that and you've kept soft hitsounds. Try switching to normal and slowly increasing volume with each phrase after the first few Soft sections. You may also want to check on how to use multipart slider hitsounds. Alot of your sliders have claps on both ends, which ends up sounding bad (later in the song). You can select endpoints, and repeat points of sliders and place hitsounds on that individual point.

[Hard]
Make sure the difficulty settings are all AT LEAST marked "Normal" (middle of selection). The drain here is too low, and increasing by one tick wont affect much of anything.

There aren't really any major spacing flaws which is a very good sign ;)

Hopefully I can keep you posted, starred.
Doomsday
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i've done your suggestions foul but i only lightly skimmed it, because i didn't have much time. i won't be able to do anything else to the map until the 15th, when ill double check it to make sure everythings sorted.
Doomsday
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ok, should be sorted now
its ready for another modding
Doomsday
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added a bit of Kiai time where appropriate
any mods willing to mod this again? its done
Yuukari-Banteki
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[Normal]
02:35:25 (1) - kill the whistle, use finish instead, and youre overusing whistle and clap until this point
02:54:84 (1) - id suggest making a slightly louder timing section right here. also this entire thing thus far is devoid of hitsound :(
02:58:31 (2,1) - ew dead space
03:11:66 (1,2,3,4,5,1...) - finishspam
03:28:31 (1) - move volume up by a tick
03:34:03 (1) - end with a finish
03:35:24 (1,2) - too much finish, and all others like it
03:44:26 (5) - end with a finish
03:49:98 (4) - ^ and the others
03:55:36 (5) - ^ and the others
03:56:22 (1) - ^ and the others
04:15:47 (1,2,3,4) - stack the endpoints
04:21:02 (1) - spacing anyone? or at least a warning?
04:23:79 (3) - hidden under 2
04:24:83 (5) - spacing????


[Hard]
00:15:15 (2) - line this up with 1
00:18:96 (1,2) - random dead space
00:26:25 (2) - ^
00:58:50 (1) - make a louder timing section
01:40:46 (8) - add a finish to the end, and others like it
01:42:88 (1,2) - kill the whistles
01:55:02 (1) - line this up with 8
02:06:47 (3) - stack under fading 1
02:18:43 (2) - end with a finish, and others like it
02:35:42 (1) - add a finish
03:05:59 (1) - add a louder timing section
03:10:10 (5,1) - slider overlap is messy
03:12:87 (2,3) - ^
03:14:26 (3,4) - ^
03:50:50 (1,1,1...) - pattern is kinda dull - needs correctly placed hitsounds
04:00:21 (1) - kill whistle, add finish
04:15:99 (2,4) - kinda hidden; i dont like this
fix hitsounds plz


[Insane]
00:19:31 (2,1) - still dont like the dead space
00:42:89 (1) - all of these could use a finish at the end
01:13:24 (4,5,6,7) - overusing whistle
01:25:37 (7) - make this repeat once more and put a finish on it?
01:29:71 (4) - add a finish
01:39:59 (7) - finish the end
01:48:78 (2) - line this up with 1
02:10:63 (1) - add a finish
02:18:60 (1,2,3,4) - too much whistle
02:29:70 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:43:74 (1,2,3,4...) - entire section needs more hitsound (soft whistle and maybe finish)
03:05:94 (2) - needs to be in a louder section
03:14:26 (1,2,3) - slider overlap is ugly
03:33:33 (1) - finish end
03:41:31 (6,7) - add a finish somewhere
03:55:70 (1) - finish
04:00:21 (1) - ^
04:04:72 (1,1,1) - do not pass current ranking standard (auto +2000)
04:25:35 (1) - finish
please do not use the same hitsound for every note in a stream. they are best used on approx. 1/5 of the notes.
Doomsday
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Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Normal]
02:35:25 (1) - kill the whistle, use finish instead, and youre overusing whistle and clap until this point - fixed
02:54:84 (1) - id suggest making a slightly louder timing section right here. also this entire thing thus far is devoid of hitsound :( - fixed
02:58:31 (2,1) - ew dead space - fixed
03:11:66 (1,2,3,4,5,1...) - finishspam - fixed
03:28:31 (1) - move volume up by a tick - fixed
03:34:03 (1) - end with a finish - fixed
03:35:24 (1,2) - too much finish, and all others like it - fixed
03:44:26 (5) - end with a finish - fixed
03:49:98 (4) - ^ and the others - fixed
03:55:36 (5) - ^ and the others - fixed
03:56:22 (1) - ^ and the others - fixed
04:15:47 (1,2,3,4) - stack the endpoints - fixed
04:21:02 (1) - spacing anyone? or at least a warning? - nope, no warning
04:23:79 (3) - hidden under 2 - fixed
04:24:83 (5) - spacing???? - not too sure what you mean, but i've shuffled them around. seems fine to me.


[Hard]
00:15:15 (2) - line this up with 1 - fixed
00:18:96 (1,2) - random dead space - fixed
00:26:25 (2) - ^ - fixed
00:58:50 (1) - make a louder timing section - fixed
01:40:46 (8) - add a finish to the end, and others like it - fixed
01:42:88 (1,2) - kill the whistles - fixed
01:55:02 (1) - line this up with 8 - fixed
02:06:47 (3) - stack under fading 1 - fixed
02:18:43 (2) - end with a finish, and others like it - fixed
02:35:42 (1) - add a finish - fixed
03:05:59 (1) - add a louder timing section - fixed
03:10:10 (5,1) - slider overlap is messy - fixed, i hope
03:12:87 (2,3) - ^ - -------------------------------^
03:14:26 (3,4) - ^ - ------------------------------^
03:50:50 (1,1,1...) - pattern is kinda dull - needs correctly placed hitsounds - moved the placement a bit.
04:00:21 (1) - kill whistle, add finish - fixed
04:15:99 (2,4) - kinda hidden; i dont like this - i think its fine, but i've lined up the hitcircles more so it looks clearer, but its still partly hidden.
fix hitsounds plz


[Insane]
00:19:31 (2,1) - still dont like the dead space - fixed, but i can't add too much because the score is already bordering on the max score
00:42:89 (1) - all of these could use a finish at the end - fixed
01:13:24 (4,5,6,7) - overusing whistle - fixed
01:25:37 (7) - make this repeat once more and put a finish on it? - fixed
01:29:71 (4) - add a finish - fixed
01:39:59 (7) - finish the end - fixed
01:48:78 (2) - line this up with 1 - fixed
02:10:63 (1) - add a finish - fixed
02:18:60 (1,2,3,4) - too much whistle - fixed
02:29:70 (1,2,3,4) - ^ - fixed
02:43:74 (1,2,3,4...) - entire section needs more hitsound (soft whistle and maybe finish) - fixed
03:05:94 (2) - needs to be in a louder section - fixed
03:14:26 (1,2,3) - slider overlap is ugly - fixed, i hope
03:33:33 (1) - finish end - fixed
03:41:31 (6,7) - add a finish somewhere - fixed
03:55:70 (1) - finish - fixed
04:00:21 (1) - ^ - fixed
04:04:72 (1,1,1) - do not pass current ranking standard (auto +2000) - fixed
04:25:35 (1) - finish - fixed
please do not use the same hitsound for every note in a stream. they are best used on approx. 1/5 of the notes.
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Behon
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The last part (At least on Normal, that's the only difficulty I've tried so far) might be better if you synced the hitcircles and slideres to go with the "Who are you" lyrics.

Otherwise, great job. Starred.
Doomsday
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bump
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Symbolic
[Insane]

Use Slider Tick Rate 1.

00:18:27 (8) - Add whistle to the slider's startpoint.
00:18:96 (1) - Add whistle.
00:19:66 (3) - Add whistle to the slider's startpoint.
00:20:35 (4) - ^
00:27:98 (8) - Add whistle.
00:28:67 (10,11) - ^
00:47:40 (1) - New combo.
00:50:17 (1) - ^
01:23:139 (Timing Section) - Put Kiai Mode on at this timing section and put the Audio level to full.
01:24:16 (3) - New combo.
01:27:28 (4) - ^
01:31:79 (3) - ^
01:42:88 (3) - ^
01:48:43 (1) - New combo.
01:51:55 (2) - ^
01:55:02 (8) - ^
01:58:84 (2) - ^
02:13:059 (Timing Section) - Put Kiai Mode on at this timing section and put the Audio level to full.
02:14:44 (5) - New combo.
02:25:54 (5) - ^
03:11:248 (Timing Section) - This Speed-Up doesn't really fit imo.
03:28:311 (Timing Section) - Put the Audio level to full here.
03:29:35 (4) - New combo.
03:32:29 (4) - ^
03:40:44 (4) - ^
04:08:53 (3) - New combo.
04:10:96 (4) - ^


[Hard]

00:36:65 (2) - New combo.
00:39:42 (2) - ^
00:43:93 (2) - ^
00:45:67 (4) - ^
00:47:75 (2) - New combo.
00:50:52 (2) - ^
00:58:84 (2) - ^
01:01:62 (2) - ^
01:10:46 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:12:72 (2) - New combo.
01:23:139 (Timing Section) - Put Kiai Mode on at this timing section and put the Audio level to full.
01:59:88 (3) - ^
02:13:059 (Timing Section) - Put Kiai Mode on at this timing section and put the Audio level to full.
03:28:311 (Timing Section) - Put the Audio level to full here.
03:35:76 (4) - Shorten 1/4.
03:46:86 (4) - ^
03:57:96 (3) - ^
04:09:92 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Change this pattern.


[Normal]

00:45:67 (3) - New combo.
01:23:139 (Timing Section) - Put Kiai Mode on at this timing section and put the Audio level to full.
01:55:02 (5) - ^
01:57:80 (3) - ^
01:59:53 (2) - ^
02:13:059 (Timing Section) - Put Kiai Mode on at this timing section and put the Audio level to full.
03:28:311 (Timing Section) - Put the Audio level to full here.


Starred *
Doomsday
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fixed all, except the speedups in insane. i kinda like those :P

another modder plz?

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ztrot
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ztrot
im not big on the foo fighters but it mapped good <3 star for you
Gabi
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Gabi
great song, great map, nice job <3

star of justice

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Andrea
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Andrea
[Normal]

01:04:050 (x) - Add a note here + finish?
01:44:62 (5) - Finish on the end of slider.
01:55:02 (1) - 1 down.

[Hard]

00:18:96 (1,2) - Add a break here o.o -> 00:19:662 exactly
01:45:14 (6) - Finish <.<

[Insane]
00:21:249 - Break here too.
01:44:79 (9) - At end of slider finish.

Good map. Anyway two suggestions:
1) Add the BPM change warning on all diff's.
2) I see too much notes placed on blue lines. Maybe offset is not perfect.

Only that.
Star :)
Starrodkirby86
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I hope I found something. This map makes me think of peanut butter after what you did at the end of [Hard] and [Insane]...

[Normal]:
00:18:96 (4) - New combo? Entirely up to you.
01:15:14 (5) - New combo.
02:05:77 (2) - I think this would look nicer if you moved it up so it'll be aligned with the other two sliders.
02:19:12 (5) - New combo since the last chorus's slider was like that...Or...
02:30:22 (5) - Same as above.
03:34:03 (1) - Or remove this new combo. If you keep (5) back there, then remove this here. If you keep this here, then new combo on (5) there.
03:45:13 (1) - Same as above.
03:56:22 (1) - Same as above.
04:24:83 (5) - New combo? Entirely up to you.

[Hard]:
Very good.
04:01:60 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - This reminds me of peanut butter candy...Like Reese's. :9

[Insane]:
01:25:37 (5) - This slider has too many repeats or it's just fine...More on this later.
01:36:47 (5) - This slider has too little repeats or it's just fine. Decide on which is the cool one and get the offending one to match it.

This is really good. I would say something else, but I really don't have much to say, haha...I must be getting tired...in the middle of the day...

Here's a star for you.
Doomsday
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all fixed (both osuplayer's and starrods)
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Dangaard
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Dangaard
fine, star.
Mashley
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Mashley
WHAT IF I SAY THIS MAP GETS A STAR!!!
No problems found.
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Doomsday
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vytalibus
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<Storyboard>
I don't like the way the speed-up warning just pops up. Needs a longer duration, imo.

[Hard]
03:11:57 (1) - It might not be that obvious, but the vocalist's first scream starts at the red tick. It's probably because of the 'h' sound that makes you put this on the blue tick instead, but please reconsider.
03:12:87 (2) - End this on the red tick.

This map goes longer than 4 minutes, mind you. You'll have to put extra effort in this map if you want it to be ranked, since most people don't like long and boring maps.
fufe
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fufe

Doomsday93 wrote:

fufe wrote:

Normal:

02:43:74 (1) - Same as hard. i was mapping to the lyrics, so i think its fine as is. someone else suggested the same thing in IRC to me, so you're not the only one who thinks this.



Starlol <3

This change is to get it to map to lyrics. Listen in slow motion. the hit is too early and goes off before the guy opens is mouth.
Doomsday
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fixed all of vyt's suggestions

@fufe: i checked it again. the lyrics there start just after where i put then originally, but it sounds close where i originally put them than if i moved them forward 1/4.

in other words, i still think where i originally put the beats are more accurate. they both play fine to me, but i prefer them where they are.
minyeob
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minyeob
[Normal]
2:35:253(1)-> 1/4 beat backward or forward

[Hard]
1:31:792(1)-> Move right a bit.

That's it!


Doomsday
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Ultimate
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Ultimate
Starred!! .. good job and <3 hard ^^ hehe
hawkzor
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hawkzor
awesome map :)
Yuukari-Banteki
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Yuukari-Banteki
[Normal]
00:15:84 (3) - add a break
00:18:96 (1) - ^
00:26:94 (3) - ^
00:36:30 (1) - imo you should delete everything before this and start your map here
01:01:96 (2) - align w 1
02:20:34 (1) - align horizontally w 1
02:31:43 (1) - ^
02:45:83 (4) - these final notes should have hitsounds imo
04:15:47 (1,2,3,4) - the endpoints arent quite stacked...youll need to do this manually
04:21:02 (1,2) - no bpm doubling in a Normal diff
also i think you should uniformly kiai all choruses...


[Hard]
00:17:92 (8) - finish
00:19:31 (2) - ^
00:36:30 (1) - as before, i think you can start your map here
01:25:03 (5) - align over 4
02:16:18 (1,2,3,4,5) - uh, hitsounds?
02:19:47 (5) - remove whistle
02:27:27 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - hitsounds?
02:30:57 (5) - remove whistle
02:53:45 (4) - finish
02:57:62 (1) - make this parallel to 2
03:05:94 (2) - align w 1
03:14:26 (3,4) - stack endpoints more neatly
03:56:74 (1) - finish
04:15:99 (2) - move to the other side of 1,3


[Insane]
00:27:63 (7) - new combo
01:20:69 (1) - finish
01:40:80 (4) - ^
01:51:55 (1) - align w 1
01:56:76 (3) - start w clap
02:01:44 (7) - finish
02:04:56 (7) - ^
02:58:31 (5) - whistle hits 1,3 + add a break
03:45:65 (6) - finish
03:50:50 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1...) - hitsounds plz
04:06:11 (1) - start 1/2 earlier
04:07:84 (2) - finish
yeah hitsounds. work on them

stars are good
Doomsday
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Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Normal]
00:15:84 (3) - add a break done
00:18:96 (1) - ^ done
00:26:94 (3) - ^ done
00:36:30 (1) - imo you should delete everything before this and start your map here i'll keep the beginning mapped, since i want to map the entire thing
01:01:96 (2) - align w 1 done
02:20:34 (1) - align horizontally w 1 done
02:31:43 (1) - ^ done
02:45:83 (4) - these final notes should have hitsounds imo put whistles on them
04:15:47 (1,2,3,4) - the endpoints arent quite stacked...youll need to do this manually done
04:21:02 (1,2) - no bpm doubling in a Normal diff remade everything from here onwards, without X2 BPM
also i think you should uniformly kiai all choruses... bleh. forgot to put Kiai on the Normal diff x_x. fixed


[Hard]
00:17:92 (8) - finish done
00:19:31 (2) - ^ done
00:36:30 (1) - as before, i think you can start your map here same as normal
01:25:03 (5) - align over 4 done
02:16:18 (1,2,3,4,5) - uh, hitsounds? done
02:19:47 (5) - remove whistle done
02:27:27 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - hitsounds? done
02:30:57 (5) - remove whistle done
02:53:45 (4) - finish done
02:57:62 (1) - make this parallel to 2 done
03:05:94 (2) - align w 1 done
03:14:26 (3,4) - stack endpoints more neatly done
03:56:74 (1) - finish done
04:15:99 (2) - move to the other side of 1,3 done, and also done the same with the other hitcircles like this


[Insane]
00:27:63 (7) - new combo done
01:20:69 (1) - finish done
01:40:80 (4) - ^ done
01:51:55 (1) - align w 1 done
01:56:76 (3) - start w clap done
02:01:44 (7) - finish done
02:04:56 (7) - ^ done
02:58:31 (5) - whistle hits 1,3 + add a break done
03:45:65 (6) - finish done
03:50:50 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1...) - hitsounds plz done
04:06:11 (1) - start 1/2 earlier done
04:07:84 (2) - finish done
yeah hitsounds. work on them

stars are good <3
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Bean490
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Bean490
Awesome map make more foo fighter plz :D
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
Normal~
00:30:06 (1) - Redo all breaks after this spinner.
02:06:47 (3,4) - Move both a tick to the left.
04:24:83 (7) - Suggestion: Maybe a new combo?

Hard~
00:30:06 (1) - Redo all breaks after this spinner.
01:25:37 (6) - Move farther from 5.

Insane seems fine.
Nice job!
Doomsday
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all fixed
Selectus
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Selectus
Really good map! I wanna see it ranked :)
Stared!
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Last edited by blissfulyoshi , edited 2 times in total.
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Yumiko
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Yumiko
I played this map and i think it's perfect, so...starred! ^^
Henkie
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Henkie
Played and checked as promised, looks good :D
Look at the picture below for my first try
note that i have a shitlaptop, shitmouse, i was tired, and i can't see slider heads/tails D:
S :D :D :D .. i did had 4 or 5 slider misses though ^^"
great job, nice song/map too doh :P
starred~

Doomsday
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blissfulyoshi wrote:

Normal:
00:45:67 (1) - move 1 notch dow (3) and one notch right(3) to align with 2 done
00:52:43 (4) - move 1 left(3) to line up with 3 done
01:03:53 (4) - try to make this continue 3's curve or align this note with 3 done
01:15:14 (1) - align the start of this with the end of 4 if i did that, it would be too close to red (4)
01:30:40 (1) - move down 1 notch(3) to align with 6 done
01:34:56 (1) - align with the end of 6 done
01:41:50 (1) - move up 1 notch(3) to align with 6 done
02:30:22 (1) - lines up better with 4 if you move 1 notch to the left(3) done
02:44:44 (2) - move up 1 notch(3) and left 1 notch(3) to form a right angle with 1 done
02:56:23 (2) - make this have the same slope as 1 done
04:21:02 (1) - why do you say speed up here when the slider velocity does not change after altering the SB so much i forgot to set it to "Diff Specific" x_x. ill have to fix that tomorrow because i don't want to lag my brother on the Xbox
im awaiting the rest of your mod
and thanks for the comments from x3ns0r, Yumiko, HenkieBP.
lets hope a BAT sees this soon
Doomsday
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blissfulyoshi wrote:

Hard:
00:43:93 (1) - move up 3 notches(3) to make a right angle with 1 done
00:45:67 (1) - move 1 notch to the right(3) to line up with the end of 2 done
01:05:09 (1) - move 1 notch to the right(3) to line up with 7 done
01:09:59 (3) - not exactly parallel with 1(very minor detail) fixed
01:09:94 (1) - make this one exactly parallel with the red 2(very minor detail) fixed
01:12:37 (1) - align with 4 and 5 it would mess up the spacing afterwards, so i've kept it as is
01:33:52 (5) - make this parallel with 3 done
02:13:75 (2) - make this parallel with 1 done
02:14:10 (3) - make this have match the location of 2's start to 1's end done
02:24:50 (1,2,3) - 02:13:75 (2) + 02:14:10 (3) done
02:43:74 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - you should center this 4 with the y-axis or make the 2 of the dark red combo line up with one of the beats in this combo i've lined the dark red combo up with the light red combo
02:54:84 (1) - align with 4 done
02:57:62 (1,2,3,4) - this should have some pattern that relates to the 1 and 2 before it. Ex: Have this start at the start of 1, make this a line through the center, and/or have the line end at the origin. fixed, i think
03:28:65 (2) - make this exactly like 1(very minor detail) done
03:38:36 (5) - make this exactly like 3(very minor detail) done
03:53:45 (1) - continue the slope of the slider before it done
03:53:62 (1) - align with the end of the slider before it done
04:05:41 (2) - make this a vertical reflection of 1 done
04:06:11 (3) - make this a horizontal reflection of 2 done
04:21:02 (1) - move two notches to the right(3) to line up with the end of 7 done

Insane:
00:47:40 (1) - align with the end of the slider before it done
00:58:15 (8) - make this a clone of 7(very minor detail) done
01:07:86 (10) - can you make 9 be on the same line 10 and 1 are on the spacing would be off with (9) if i do that, so i've kept it as is
01:15:84 (3) - might want to make this a clone of 1, but it is fine with its current style kept as is, since (5) and (7) are the same thing.
01:17:92 (1) - " " except for the sliders within this series ^
01:24:16 (1) - move 1 notch to the left(3) to make a line with 1 and 2 it already looks in line to me, and if i move it, it messes the spacing up
01:48:78 (2,3,4,5) - make these beats form a straight line done, apart from (5)
01:56:06 (1) - align with the slider below it done
01:56:76 (3) - make a clone of 1 done
02:08:55 (3) - can you have this end exactly on the end of 7 made it as exact as i can without moving the start.
02:21:20 (5) - make a right angle with 4 or make this a vertical reflection of 4 done
02:32:30 (5) - " " done
03:33:33 (1) - make this a clone of 3 done
03:36:63 (1) - move 1 notch to the right to align with the end of 4 done
03:56:05 (1) - align with the beat before it done
04:08:53 (1) - align with 1 and 2 not done. i was keping (1, 2, 3, 4, 5) as a curve
04:18:24 (1) - have this continue the 3,4 line or align with 4 done

Solid beatmap. Star <3
N0mad_old
27 posts
Joined October 2008
N0mad_old
There is a severe lack of good rock on Osu, and this a great prescription for some more. Fun and star'd~
DeletedUser_39338
DeletedUser_39338
As said, do want.
Sir Minelli
524 posts
Joined September 2008
Sir Minelli
Hello,


The map looks good, will help with aesthetics mostly.


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02:07:85 (1,2,3) - might want to align the sliders ends.
02:20:34 (1) - same with previous slider
02:31:43 (1) - same
02:45:13 (3) - same
04:23:79 (5) - new combo


[Hard]

00:54:34 (3) - from how the previous sliders are aligned, i suggest moving this one diagonally up to the right a bit and then align this 00:55:03 (4) - to its end, diagonally also, so they all seem like if they were going diagonally up to the left.
01:15:14 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - align the ends
01:17:92 (1) - make it align with upcoming (2)
02:14:44 (4) - spacing
04:12:17() - what about adding a beat here maybe?
Doomsday
Featured Artist
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Topic Starter
Doomsday

Sir Minelli wrote:

Hello,


[Normal]

02:07:85 (1,2,3) - might want to align the sliders ends. done
02:20:34 (1) - same with previous slider done
02:31:43 (1) - same done
02:45:13 (3) - same done
04:23:79 (5) - new combo done


[Hard]

00:54:34 (3) - from how the previous sliders are aligned, i suggest moving this one diagonally up to the right a bit and then align this 00:55:03 (4) - to its end, diagonally also, so they all seem like if they were going diagonally up to the left. done
01:15:14 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - align the ends done
01:17:92 (1) - make it align with upcoming (2) done
02:14:44 (4) - spacing the time between these are 1/2. other beats with 1/2 gaps have the same spacing, so its fine to me, so kept it as is
04:12:17() - what about adding a beat here maybe? made (8) a slider to fill that gap
Takuma
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined October 2008
Takuma
All:
  • For this song in particular, it needs more finishes and less claps/whistles. They fit more.
Insane:
  • 1. 01:29:53 (3,4) - 1 level 3 grid right.
    2. 01:40:63 (3,4) - ^
    3. 03:50:50 ~ 04:00:04 - A little overboard with the new combos there. Remove some.
Hard:
  • 1. 00:40:98 (5) - 1 level 3 grid left.
    2. 03:50:50 ~ 03:56:74 - The same combo problem.
    3. 04:01:60 ~ 04:04:54 - ^
Normal:
  • Fine.
Doomsday
Featured Artist
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Topic Starter
Doomsday
all fixed except the combo color spam, since i did that for effect, and im assuming its rankable since no-one else seems to have brought it up

anyways, i could use a BAT now for bubble/rankage
Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Larto
BPM: Sounds like 86,500 to me, actually.



Tell me if you agree. I'm not 100% sure, but it sounds better to me at least. That was all the "error".

Okay then! You changed it since you agreed, I think this is bubbleworthy.
Bubbled.
chel007
26 posts
Joined February 2009
chel007
Love the song the beatmap is well done
Star 4 u
RemmyX25
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Here since the beginning
RemmyX25
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Doomsday
Featured Artist
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Topic Starter
Doomsday

RemmyX25 wrote:

Very long song. :\ We've seen worse though.

Normal:
I don't think all of the breaks in the beginning are really necessary, since they are so short. If anything, remove the breaks and lower the HP drain rate by one notch imho. done

Also, this is more of a personal gripe, I think the hit circles should be just a tad larger for easier difficulties. i thought it seemed fine with the hitcircle size it had, since i didn't want it to seem too crowded, but it doesn't seem too bad with bigger hitcircles, so done

02:19:14 (1) - move to the red tick and shorten it so it still ends on the white tick done
02:23:13 (2) - I recommend either making this repeat or making it longer made it a repeat. spacing seems to work fine with the repeat too
02:30:24 (1) - move to red tick, shorten so it ends on white. I also recommend making this one repeat. done
02:34:23 (2) - have it end on white tick done

Hard:
03:50:53 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Do these really need their own combo? redone the combo's here
04:01:63 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^ done
04:24:87 (1,1,1,1) - These I'll forgive.

Insane:
00:21:052 - This could be mapped instead of a break. put some hitcircles here
02:43:77 (1) - Move to white tick done
02:59:033 - break feels unnecessary removed
03:50:53 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - unnecessary NewCombos? redone
03:56:08 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^ redone
04:04:75 (1,1) - Could these be combined into one spinner? They just barely hit the 2000 bonus mark on Auto (feel free to argue this one) i've done this in an attempt to stop people fc'ing it first time (not that its very effective). since auto can get +2000, i'll keep them as is

Also, if you can, move the "Speed Up" so that its closer to where you actually NEED to speed up moved them over a bit, hopefully that should be fine now
vytalibus
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870 posts
Joined May 2008
vytalibus
Call me soft, but this passes my standards of a "rankable" map. Could be improved in terms of fun, but meh.
Doomsday
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Doomsday

vytalibus wrote:

Could be improved in terms of fun, but meh.
yeah. it is kinda dull, but i did this some time ago, and at this point, i just wanna get this over and done with
Tapdancingmetroid
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Tapdancingmetroid
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ThePassingShadow
330 posts
Joined June 2008
ThePassingShadow
...Slider speed increase without warning ?

osu! is just full of tricks now.
0_o
2,155 posts
Joined December 2008
0_o
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panaut0lordv
2 posts
Joined September 2012
panaut0lordv
Map seems to be corrupt when I try to import .osz file and I downloaded it like 10 times.
I can't afford downloading beatmap pack, mobile connection here.

Thanks in advance for some checking.

/not sure if good place to post it though
Stefan
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10,425 posts
Joined January 2011
Stefan
Just download it at first time.
Looks like your Internet connection is badly.
panaut0lordv
2 posts
Joined September 2012
panaut0lordv
Well, have you checked?
Because I have absolutely no problem with other maps and hey, The Pretender without video works absolutely fine, but I like the video and I think it would be cooler to play with one.
It's such a nice map ;3


EDIT: I just proved to be an idiot. Apparently, OSU doesn't cope with some of zip archives, after unzipping with 7zip everything works fine...
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