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Hatsuki Yura - The Secret Garden

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Mayzel
Topic Starter
Mayzel
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年7月26日 at 18:50:05

Artist: Hatsuki Yura
Title: The Secret Garden
Tags: hameln koisuru marionette karenying kotone
BPM: 168
Filesize: 6929kb
Play Time: 02:57
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.4 stars, 147 notes)
  2. Hard (4.86 stars, 472 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 658 notes)
  4. Karen (5 stars, 592 notes)
  5. Normal (3.99 stars, 243 notes)
Download: Hatsuki Yura - The Secret Garden
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hatsuki Yura <3

Karen is by Kotone (a.k.a. karenying)

Special thanks : terametis Fuuko

*plz redownload if you got this map before Mar 3, 2013
Last edited by Mayzel , edited 97 times in total.
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
nice map ^^

fight~
Mayzel
Topic Starter
Mayzel

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

nice map ^^

fight~
thanks : )
Guy
Former osu! Champion: 2014
2,049 posts
Joined March 2009
Guy
hi~ #mod reqからです ;)

少しだけ気になった点を～


Song setup の Colors の Combo4が3と被っているので、
他の色に変えたほうがいいかもしれません(これはデフォルトの状態なので)



BGsize は1024x768 or 800x600 にしましょう。
↓よかったら使ってください。
SPOILER

Hit soundが使われていないので、どんどん入れてみてください。

譜面の方は良いと思いました :)
他の難易度も作ってみて　頑張ってください！
star~!
Mayzel
Topic Starter
Mayzel

Guy wrote:

hi~ #mod reqからです ;)
modありがとうございます！背景まで用意していただいてすみませんｗ
hitsound難しいですけど頑張ってみます...　他の難易度もどう音とろうか悩んでるとこですー
kioukiou
774 posts
Joined June 2008
kioukiou
Timing is a bit early to me,try +10 ms to all offset.

And don't forget resnap all notes.

Finish 期待. :)
Mayzel
Topic Starter
Mayzel

kioukiou wrote:

Timing is a bit early to me,try +10 ms to all offset.

And don't forget resnap all notes.

Finish 期待. :)
Thank you for mod, kioukiou! I love your maps :)
orsola
26 posts
Joined February 2011
orsola
nice map :)

mp3が最後切られていて無音になるのが気になりました。
フェードアウトにしたらどうでしょうか？
↓よかったらつかってください。 PASS1234

http://www1.axfc.net/uploader/Ne/so/124249
Mayzel
Topic Starter
Mayzel

orsola wrote:

nice map :)

mp3が最後切られていて無音になるのが気になりました。
フェードアウトにしたらどうでしょうか？
確かに・・・。ぶつぎりで違和感ありますね。
ｍｐ３差し替えました、わざわざありがとうございました！
kioukiou
774 posts
Joined June 2008
kioukiou
Just a reminder :
If you changed the mp3 file,you have to change offset.
I got the offset is 635(+26) ms.
Don't forget resnap all notes and check all green lines.
And don't kds to this post, thanks. :)
Mayzel
Topic Starter
Mayzel

kioukiou wrote:

Just a reminder :
If you changed the mp3 file,you have to change offset.
I got the offset is 635(+26) ms.
Don't forget resnap all notes and check all green lines.
And don't kds to this post, thanks. :)
Thank you, kioukiou! :)
OK. I will change the offset.
orsola
26 posts
Joined February 2011
orsola
[Insane]
00:21:527 (2) - volume 50%
00:51:706 (3) - add finish
00:52:063 (3) - soft
00:55:456 (7) - soft
01:06:170 (8) - delete clap
01:20:724 (3) - delete finish
01:20:992 (3) - add clap
01:21:170 (4) - soft
01:21:349 (4) - delete finish
01:21:527 (4) - delete clap
01:53:313 (7) - soft
01:53:849 (1) - delete finish
01:59:027 (6) - soft
01:59:563 (7) - delete finish
02:04:742 (3) - soft
02:05:277 (4) - delete clap
02:19:206 (11) - soft
02:25:992 (5) - finish
02:44:742 (1) - add finish
02:45:813 (5) - add whistle
02:56:706 (1) - delete clap and volume 70%
02:57:420 (3) - delete clap
02:57:777 (7) - soft
Mayzel
Topic Starter
Mayzel

orsola wrote:

[Insane]
00:21:527 (2) - volume 50% ok
00:51:706 (3) - add finish ok
00:52:063 (3) - soft ok
00:55:456 (7) - soft ok
01:06:170 (8) - delete clap ok
01:20:724 (3) - delete finish ok
01:20:992 (3) - add clap ok
01:21:170 (4) - soft ok
01:21:349 (4) - delete finish ok
01:21:527 (4) - delete clap ok
01:53:313 (7) - soft ok
01:53:849 (1) - delete finish ok
01:59:027 (6) - soft ok
01:59:563 (7) - delete finish ok
02:04:742 (3) - soft ok
02:05:277 (4) - delete clap ok
02:19:206 (11) - soft ok
02:25:992 (5) - finish ok
02:44:742 (1) - add finish ok
02:45:813 (5) - add whistle ok
02:56:706 (1) - delete clap and volume 70% ok
02:57:420 (3) - delete clap ok
02:57:777 (7) - soft ok
Many thanks for your mod! :)
hamuri
38 posts
Joined April 2009
hamuri
Mod requestでお見かけしたので、
あまり頼りにならないですが、少しだけMODさせていただきます。

ほとんどが提案になっていますので、よろしくお願いします。
Normal
Good!

Hard
00:28:313 circle追加、あるいは手前のスライダーを一つ伸ばす
00:35:456 circle追加
01:51:170 circle追加
02:02:599 circle追加

Insane
00:52:216 不要な緑線？
00:55:519 同上
01:13:555 同上
01:19:269 同上
01:24:983 同上
01:25:125 同上
01:39:269 同上

サビの後半にかけて一部分Hitsoundに凝ってらっしゃいますが、
あまりに一部分すぎるので、サビの最後まで凝ってみるのも悪くない気がしました。


全体的に素晴らしい出来だと思います。がんばってください。
Mayzel
Topic Starter
Mayzel

hamuri wrote:

Hard
00:28:313 circle追加、あるいは手前のスライダーを一つ伸ばす
00:35:456 circle追加
01:51:170 circle追加

結構悩んでたとこでした。アレンジして修正してみましたがどうでしょう？

02:02:599 circle追加 ok

Insane
00:52:216 不要な緑線？ fixed
00:55:519 同上 fixed
01:13:555 同上 fixed
01:19:269 同上 fixed
01:24:983 同上 timeずれかな？何もなかったｗ
01:25:125 同上 おなじく！
01:39:269 同上 ここブレイクの真っ最中です！！

ただ、付近に不要な緑線あったので削除しておきました。

サビの後半にかけて一部分Hitsoundに凝ってらっしゃいますが、
あまりに一部分すぎるので、サビの最後まで凝ってみるのも悪くない気がしました。

なかなかサウンドはむずかしいですねー、凝って作ったらmodでdeleteされまくってしまった…
じっくり悩んでみます。

全体的に素晴らしい出来だと思います。がんばってください。

ありがとうございます！お互い頑張りましょう。
Thanks a lot, hamuri!
Colin Hou
osu! Alumni
4,456 posts
Joined November 2009
Colin Hou
from #modreq

[Insane]:
  1. 00:23:492 ~ 01:05:992 (T) - whistles are overused in these part, making the pace too hurried.
  2. 01:09:206 ~ 01:12:063(T) - cancel the whistles, listen to the drums and place some claps there.
  3. 01:46:349 ~ 02:28:849 (T) - too much whistles
  4. 02:32:063 ~ 02:34:563 (T) - same as above
  5. copy & paste is not a good way of mapping in my eye :'(
[Hard]:
  1. 00:08:492 (5,6,7) - rhythm here is 3/4, that means notes at 00:08:492 00:08:759 00:09:027.
  2. 00:09:920 (2,3) - ^
  3. 02:20:634 (1,2,3) - jump here doesn't fit well
  4. 02:25:456 (6,7,1) - spacing
  5. more hitsounds for non-KIAI parts plz.
[Normal]:
  1. 00:02:063 (1,2) - spacing here it too much as a Normal diff
  2. 00:06:349 (1,2,3) - better than ^, but still worry about it.
  3. 01:05:992 (4,1) - no huge jump in Normal plz.
  4. hitsounds for non-KIAI parts are too little.
still need a lot of work on hitsounds, other things are much better. good luck
Mayzel
Topic Starter
Mayzel

Colin Hou wrote:

[Insane]:
  1. 00:23:492 ~ 01:05:992 (T) - whistles are overused in these part, making the pace too hurried. fixed
  2. 01:09:206 ~ 01:12:063(T) - cancel the whistles, listen to the drums and place some claps there. fixed
  3. 01:46:349 ~ 02:28:849 (T) - too much whistles fixed
  4. 02:32:063 ~ 02:34:563 (T) - same as above fixed
  5. copy & paste is not a good way of mapping in my eye :'( ok... I'll not copypaste from now on. I'm sorry for my noob mapping.
[Hard]:
  1. 00:08:492 (5,6,7) - rhythm here is 3/4, that means notes at 00:08:492 00:08:759 00:09:027. fixed
  2. 00:09:920 (2,3) - ^ fixed
  3. 02:20:634 (1,2,3) - jump here doesn't fit well fixed
  4. 02:25:456 (6,7,1) - spacing fixed
  5. more hitsounds for non-KIAI parts plz. added hitsounds
[Normal]:
  1. 00:02:063 (1,2) - spacing here it too much as a Normal diff fixed
  2. 00:06:349 (1,2,3) - better than ^, but still worry about it. fixed
  3. 01:05:992 (4,1) - no huge jump in Normal plz. fixed
  4. hitsounds for non-KIAI parts are too little. added hitsounds
Many thanks for your mod! I'm very glad :)　I would appreciate it if you would mod my map again.
Mayzel
Topic Starter
Mayzel
Maybe I should refix 01:09:206 ~ 01:12:063 and 02:32:063 ~ 02:34:563 (Insane) ... noob sound.
ShoruRi
19 posts
Joined January 2011
ShoruRi
hi~ from #modreqs

Hard
・02:56:527~02:57:777のspinnerを02:56:527~02:59:206まで伸ばしてみてわ!

Insane
HR+1

配置,音取りはgood :)
楽しめました XD
Mayzel
Topic Starter
Mayzel

DericeRt wrote:

hi~ from #modreqs

Hard
・02:56:527~02:57:777のspinnerを02:56:527~02:59:206まで伸ばしてみてわ!　fixed

Insane
HR+1 fixed

配置,音取りはgood :)
楽しめました XD

ありがとうございます！
Mayzel
Topic Starter
Mayzel

ligy wrote:

Maybe I should refix 01:09:206 ~ 01:12:063 and 02:32:063 ~ 02:34:563 (Insane) ... noob sound.
Refixed. I did my best..
Mayzel
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Mayzel
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