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Yutsuki yukari
Hi. From my Queue

[General]

nothing
前奏的timing可能需要找pro一些的人来check一下~感觉前奏的尾巴off的很厉害

[NM]

00:53:675 (3) - 可以的话还是建议不要叠._.毕竟这也是最低难度XD,不过问题不大就是了
其他没什么了O.O

[Hard]

00:17:636 (1) - 往右下移一点,不要和前面的3有重合的地方~
00:38:202 (3) - 弄成和2一样的
01:12:164 (1) - 头上加个fin
总体来说没有什么问题。不过感觉这图下的太拘谨了,所以整个看上去就像贪吃蛇:< 玩起来感觉也不是很好
因为你slider下了很多,其实slider之间的跳跃比较灵活,可以试试看各种不同的跳跃,比如
http://puu.sh/aLKE
http://puu.sh/aLKJ
等等...

hard不是一定要严格遵守DS的o.o

同理,lunatic里串与串的链接部分也可以做适当的跳跃

虽然现在串下的很好,单看单个串也都很好,但是总体看就有种凌乱+不规律的感觉

试着摆整齐一点吧(* ̄▽ ̄)y
Topic Starter
0x57CB36

Shinkuu wrote:

lunatic不mod

  • normal
  1. 没什么大问题
  • hard
  1. 虽然不太想提,但是这里NC设置明显有问题
  2. NC设置是为了方便别人了解谱面的变化,相同规律的note和silder用同一种颜色。发生变化的时候使用NC
  3. 00:07:345 (1) - NC
  4. 00:08:864 (2) -
  5. 00:14:806 (1) -
  6. 00:15:561 (2) -
  7. 00:16:315 (1) -
  8. 00:29:523 (3) -
  9. 00:29:900 (1) -
  10. 01:28:768 (1) -
  11. 01:29:523 (2) -
  12. 还有不少类似的地方,我就不一一列举了
  13. 然后说说谱面上,看上去似乎有点凌乱,改进空间似乎还有很大
  14. 试试用固定组合,例如同一个节奏,第一段用4个slider,第二段用note+slider组合,第三段用来回slider的组合
  15. 其实无非就是注意变化性还有规律性
  16. 同样不一一列举了
就那么多吧,废话不说太多
good luck
谢谢~ 我之前都是按长白线放的, 没注意那么多

Yutsuki yukari wrote:

Hi. From my Queue

[General]

nothing
前奏的timing可能需要找pro一些的人来check一下~感觉前奏的尾巴off的很厉害

[NM]

00:53:675 (3) - 可以的话还是建议不要叠._.毕竟这也是最低难度XD,不过问题不大就是了
其他没什么了O.O

[Hard]

00:17:636 (1) - 往右下移一点,不要和前面的3有重合的地方~
00:38:202 (3) - 弄成和2一样的 不是很理解...
01:12:164 (1) - 头上加个fin
总体来说没有什么问题。不过感觉这图下的太拘谨了,所以整个看上去就像贪吃蛇:< 玩起来感觉也不是很好
因为你slider下了很多,其实slider之间的跳跃比较灵活,可以试试看各种不同的跳跃,比如
http://puu.sh/aLKE
http://puu.sh/aLKJ
等等...

hard不是一定要严格遵守DS的o.o

同理,lunatic里串与串的链接部分也可以做适当的跳跃

虽然现在串下的很好,单看单个串也都很好,但是总体看就有种凌乱+不规律的感觉

试着摆整齐一点吧(* ̄▽ ̄)y
前奏offset很不确定嗯... 我也是看那个ikari_kyon的offset做的, 再找人check吧

跳跃我试试...
Nixnez
从mod queue飘过来的。。。

[General]
- Timing绝对有误。这个是我粗略测到的Timing,你看看下吧。整体上是159bpm没错,只是需要微调offset吧了,我测的offset一般都不太准(正负10ms左右?)。完全不需要用 1/3 或1/6 snapping。00:08:864 (1,2,3,4) 的排列应该是以下例子, spinner在正确timing也是白点finish。Resnap all notes要记得检查拍子都对不对,有时会snap到蓝线。跟你之前用的timing对照下吧。

[Normal\
- 00:40:467 (1) - slider头加个finish?
- 00:41:222 (2) - slider头加个finish?
- 00:46:504 (1) - 少了两个finish?
- 00:53:297 (2) - 跟着音乐的finish放在00:53:108比较恰当?

[Hard]
- 00:36:693 (2) - 这里不需要slider吧?一点就行。
- 00:52:920 (2) - slider尾考虑加个finish?

[Lunatic]
- 手残的我鬼蓄mod无力啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊。。。
- 01:00:089 (1) - slider头加个finish?
- 01:00:655 (3) - 加个finish?


久违的鬼蓄,意外地有点怀念。。。(疑
VTC
hello ~ from my queue !


go go g o!!

[Normal]

i can't find any problem.

good!




[Hard]

00:08:864 (1) - spacing

00:08:864 (1,2) - make symmetry

00:18:580 (4,5) - hard to read .

00:50:655 (5) - add clap on end


NICE diff !


[Lunatic]

00:05:257 - add circle?

00:05:447 (4) - remove this

00:05:637 - add circle

00:33:486 (3) - remove this . and fill in the circle

01:02:165 (5,6,7) - is not straight.. make more straightly,

01:08:203 (3,4) - ^


Nice ! you are professional mapper !!
Topic Starter
0x57CB36

Soul-less wrote:

从mod queue飘过来的。。。

[General]
- Timing绝对有误。这个是我粗略测到的Timing,你看看下吧。整体上是159bpm没错,只是需要微调offset吧了,我测的offset一般都不太准(正负10ms左右?)。完全不需要用 1/3 或1/6 snapping。00:08:864 (1,2,3,4) 的排列应该是以下例子, spinner在正确timing也是白点finish。Resnap all notes要记得检查拍子都对不对,有时会snap到蓝线。跟你之前用的timing对照下吧。
貌似把第一段拉到你的offset, BPM79.5就好了。。。

[Normal\
- 00:40:467 (1) - slider头加个finish?
- 00:41:222 (2) - slider头加个finish?
- 00:46:504 (1) - 少了两个finish?
- 00:53:297 (2) - 跟着音乐的finish放在00:53:108比较恰当?没东西。。。

[Hard]
- 00:36:693 (2) - 这里不需要slider吧?一点就行。 ?
- 00:52:920 (2) - slider尾考虑加个finish?

[Lunatic]
- 手残的我鬼蓄mod无力啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊。。。 我感觉还好啊 我自己都能过 :o
- 01:00:089 (1) - slider头加个finish?
- 01:00:655 (3) - 加个finish? ?


久违的鬼蓄,意外地有点怀念。。。(疑
其他的都改了, 感谢modding

VocaloidTACU wrote:

hello ~ from my queue !


go go g o!!

[Normal]

i can't find any problem.

good!




[Hard]

00:08:864 (1) - spacing

00:08:864 (1,2) - make symmetry

00:18:580 (4,5) - hard to read .

00:50:655 (5) - add clap on end


NICE diff !


[Lunatic]

00:05:257 - add circle?

00:05:447 (4) - remove this

00:05:637 - add circle i changed offset, maybe fine now>?

00:33:486 (3) - remove this . and fill in the circle then the stream will go to the bottom of the screen :o

01:02:165 (5,6,7) - is not straight.. make more straightly,

01:08:203 (3,4) - ^


Nice ! you are professional mapper !! thanks~~
all fixed, thanks modding :)
HakuNoKaemi
[General]
Hard Offset is different than the rest
You don't need differents BPMs only to make the slider faster/slower, we have the Slider Velocity Multiplier, why not use it? ( and it's unrankable to use different BPMs for that...)

[Normal]
Could be nice in graphic... but... hey... would you mind to spice up the rhythmn ? I'll put some examples :
00:41:976 (3) - a 3/1 Slider that follow the flute

00:48:769 (1,2) - When you got two slider like those... you could make them like (you can do it in 00:38:203 (2,3), 00:54:806 (4,1),01:02:353 (2,3) too and other places...)

00:53:297 (2) - Move at 00:53:108 (respecting the music more....)

[Hard]
You may change the start a little... as it's the same as normal
Control the slider with repeatitions better and make sure they fit ...
00:01:270 (1,2) - Change the placing like this?

00:04:307 (1,2) - Like this?

00:41:033 (2,3) - Like this will be following the music better, there are similiar parts in which you should control if the slider follow the music or not (you reapeted sliders does not follow music that wisely... )


[Lunatic]
You... kinda overmapped too much ... (all those streams that does not follow music ... it's not that they not stay good, but you really exaggerated with those...)
Topic Starter
0x57CB36

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[General]
Hard Offset is different than the rest fixed
You don't need differents BPMs only to make the slider faster/slower, we have the Slider Velocity Multiplier, why not use it? ( and it's unrankable to use different BPMs for that...) oh, I think the music is slower at first, so BPM change

[Normal]
Could be nice in graphic... but... hey... would you mind to spice up the rhythmn ? I'll put some examples :
00:41:976 (3) - a 3/1 Slider that follow the flute but I don't know where to place it :?

00:48:769 (1,2) - When you got two slider like those... you could make them like (you can do it in 00:38:203 (2,3), 00:54:806 (4,1),01:02:353 (2,3) too and other places...) doesn't sound good.. :?

00:53:297 (2) - Move at 00:53:108 (respecting the music more....) music is so random

[Hard]
You may change the start a little... as it's the same as normal
Control the slider with repeatitions better and make sure they fit ...
00:01:270 (1,2) - Change the placing like this?
fixed, good!!
00:04:307 (1,2) - Like this?

00:41:033 (2,3) - Like this will be following the music better, there are similiar parts in which you should control if the slider follow the music or not (you reapeted sliders does not follow music that wisely... )
i feel dull

[Lunatic]
You... kinda overmapped too much ... (all those streams that does not follow music ... it's not that they not stay good, but you really exaggerated with those...)
thanks for modding~ :)
Delica_old
hello ~ from my queue

General
  1. - 所有難度的timing改成這樣 http://puu.sh/aYUo
  2. - 記得改timing之後你的所有物件都會snapping,記得要修正,這非常重要!

Normal
  1. - 00:08:777 (2) - 移至x256 y232
  2. - 00:10:286 (1) - ^
  3. - 00:11:796 (2) - 移至x312 y80
    畢竟雖然很慢,不過是給初學者玩的,不完美的重疊可能導致誤判。不如疊的好一點。
    Normal 沒其他問題了。

Hard
  1. - 00:13:297 (1,2,3) - 像這種部分,後面有有很多這種slider來回滑兩次的部分,我強烈建議,可以拆掉一些部分變成這樣 http://puu.sh/aYYE 這只是範例而已,詳細的pattern要按照節奏走比較好,不過基本上大同小異,原因是都是來回兩次的slider會有點無聊,這樣可以增加譜面複雜度
  2. - 00:15:561 (1) - remove NC
  3. - 00:16:315 (1) - add NC
    NC最好加在長白線上,如果你有按照我的建議把後面的slider改掉的話 有些nc要稍微替換
  4. - 00:15:946 (8) - 這可以1/4拍的slider也是一樣後面重複了不少,我也建議能把他拆掉改成3個1/4拍的note
  5. - 00:15:946 (8) - 之後的這種1/4拍 在前面兩個或是後面兩個加上whistle音效
  6. - 00:22:353 (1) - slider的頭add finish
  7. - 00:34:429 (1) - ^
  8. - 01:36:315 (1,2) - ^
  9. - 00:42:542 (2) - 有點超界..
  10. - 01:01:032 (3) - ^
  11. - 01:14:051 (2) - ^

Lunatic
  1. OD+1
  2. lunatic和hard的難度延展不理想,建議把lunatic做簡單一點
  3. 這難度的NC有點亂
  4. - 00:02:739 (2) - 這物件有一點超界
  5. - 00:09:909 (3) - 這note的間距有問題
  6. - 00:10:286 (4) - 重疊在3上比較好
  7. - 00:12:920 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/aZ9p
  8. - 00:17:070 (6,1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/aZa8
  9. - 00:17:259 (7) - NC
  10. - 00:17:362 (2) - remove NC
  11. - 00:18:203 (1) - NC
  12. - 00:18:674 (1) - NC
  13. - 00:23:297 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - http://puu.sh/aZb8
  14. - 00:23:297 (7) - NC
  15. - 00:26:127 (1) - 超界
  16. - 00:29:335 (1) - NC
  17. - 00:29:712 (1) - remove NC
  18. - 00:30:467 (1) - NC
  19. - 00:31:221 (1) - 後移1/4拍
  20. - 00:31:316 (1) - NC
  21. - 00:32:165 (1) - NC
  22. - 00:30:655 (1) - NC
  23. - 00:35:655 (12) - 前移1/4拍然後NC
  24. - 00:35:750 (1) - remove NC
  25. - 01:38:580 (1) - NC
  26. - 01:38:957 (5) - remove NC
    整體而言不錯,不過譜面走向過於單調,你有發現這難度都是一直順時針這樣繞嘛,可以稍微做幾個reverse的slider,讓譜面走向改變
Good luck
HakuNoKaemi
the music isn't so random, and I do suggest following music in easies is funnier than not doing it ( and i do think the 00:48:769 (1,2) follow music, just listen the instruments )
for 00:41:976 (3) you do have places to use it, actually 4 times totally, 2 per kiai, including that point.
Topic Starter
0x57CB36

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

the music isn't so random, and I do suggest following music in easies is funnier than not doing it ( and i do think the 00:48:769 (1,2) follow music, just listen the instruments )
for 00:41:976 (3) you do have places to use it, actually 4 times totally, 2 per kiai, including that point.
Oh, I think I mean don't find place to make it on the screen, not the time line :o

changed the other two places
Topic Starter
0x57CB36

Delica wrote:

hello ~ from my queue

General
  1. - 所有難度的timing改成這樣 http://puu.sh/aYUo
  2. - 記得改timing之後你的所有物件都會snapping,記得要修正,這非常重要!
开始的要慢一点...

Normal
  1. - 00:08:777 (2) - 移至x256 y232
  2. - 00:10:286 (1) - ^
  3. - 00:11:796 (2) - 移至x312 y80
    畢竟雖然很慢,不過是給初學者玩的,不完美的重疊可能導致誤判。不如疊的好一點。 改了
    Normal 沒其他問題了。

Hard
  1. - 00:13:297 (1,2,3) - 像這種部分,後面有有很多這種slider來回滑兩次的部分,我強烈建議,可以拆掉一些部分變成這樣 http://puu.sh/aYYE 這只是範例而已,詳細的pattern要按照節奏走比較好,不過基本上大同小異,原因是都是來回兩次的slider會有點無聊,這樣可以增加譜面複雜度
  2. - 00:15:561 (1) - remove NC
  3. - 00:16:315 (1) - add NC
    NC最好加在長白線上,如果你有按照我的建議把後面的slider改掉的話 有些nc要稍微替換
  4. - 00:15:946 (8) - 這可以1/4拍的slider也是一樣後面重複了不少,我也建議能把他拆掉改成3個1/4拍的note
  5. - 00:15:946 (8) - 之後的這種1/4拍 在前面兩個或是後面兩個加上whistle音效
  6. - 00:22:353 (1) - slider的頭add finish
  7. - 00:34:429 (1) - ^
  8. - 01:36:315 (1,2) - ^
  9. - 00:42:542 (2) - 有點超界.. 还好吧
  10. - 01:01:032 (3) - ^
  11. - 01:14:051 (2) - ^

Lunatic
  1. OD+1
  2. lunatic和hard的難度延展不理想,建議把lunatic做簡單一點 我觉得很简单了啊... :o
  3. 這難度的NC有點亂
  4. - 00:02:739 (2) - 這物件有一點超界
  5. - 00:09:909 (3) - 這note的間距有問題
  6. - 00:10:286 (4) - 重疊在3上比較好
  7. - 00:12:920 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/aZ9p
  8. - 00:17:070 (6,1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/aZa8
  9. - 00:17:259 (7) - NC
  10. - 00:17:362 (2) - remove NC
  11. - 00:18:203 (1) - NC
  12. - 00:18:674 (1) - NC
  13. - 00:23:297 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - http://puu.sh/aZb8
  14. - 00:23:297 (7) - NC
  15. - 00:26:127 (1) - 超界
  16. - 00:29:335 (1) - NC
  17. - 00:29:712 (1) - remove NC
  18. - 00:30:467 (1) - NC
  19. - 00:31:221 (1) - 後移1/4拍
  20. - 00:31:316 (1) - NC
  21. - 00:32:165 (1) - NC
  22. - 00:30:655 (1) - NC
  23. - 00:35:655 (12) - 前移1/4拍然後NC
  24. - 00:35:750 (1) - remove NC
  25. - 01:38:580 (1) - NC
  26. - 01:38:957 (5) - remove NC
    整體而言不錯,不過譜面走向過於單調,你有發現這難度都是一直順時針這樣繞嘛,可以稍微做幾個reverse的slider,讓譜面走向改變
Good luck
fixed most, thanks modding~
Asgard
Hi.. From my Queue :) : Queue


General

why used 2 bpm?
just use 159 and use 'Slider velocity multiplier'
because listen here

not matched..
so just use
bpm 159
and offset 1228
if you accept about this
set Inherited Points
1.
offset - 1228
Slider velocity multiplier - 0.5

2.
offset - 13303
Slider velocity multiplier - 1


and background color - Black



normal

00:42:731 - add note and finish

00:48:014 (2) - remove clap start of slider

00:48:014 (2) - add finish end of slider

00:49:524 (1) - remove finish start of slider

01:06:882 - add note and finish




hard

OD - 5

00:06:135 - add note



lunatic


HP - 7

00:07:267 (3) - end : 00:07:833

00:08:210 (4) - start :00:08:022

00:13:297 (1) - remove NC

00:13:580 (2) - NC

00:13:957 - add note

00:14:429 (5) - NC

00:14:806 (1) - remove NC

00:15:561 (5) - NC

00:18:674 (9) - NC

00:19:335 (1) - remove NC

00:19:712 (9) - NC

00:19:995 - add note

00:23:203 - ^

00:23:486 - ^

00:23:391 (8) - NC

00:28:297 - add note

00:29:240 - ^


that's all ^^
Backfire
I'll make you a taiko ^^
I'll start on it when I get home.
I'm in love with the faries so =w=b
Topic Starter
0x57CB36

Backfire wrote:

I'll make you a taiko ^^
I'll start on it when I get home.
I'm in love with the faries so =w=b
thanks :)
Topic Starter
0x57CB36

A s g a r d wrote:

Hi.. From my Queue :) : Queue


General

why used 2 bpm?
just use 159 and use 'Slider velocity multiplier'
because listen here

not matched..
so just use
bpm 159
and offset 1228
if you accept about this
set Inherited Points
1.
offset - 1228
Slider velocity multiplier - 0.5

2.
offset - 13303
Slider velocity multiplier - 1


and background color - Black



normal

00:42:731 - add note and finish

00:48:014 (2) - remove clap start of slider

00:48:014 (2) - add finish end of slider

00:49:524 (1) - remove finish start of slider

01:06:882 - add note and finish




hard

OD - 5

00:06:135 - add note



lunatic


HP - 7

00:07:267 (3) - end : 00:07:833

00:08:210 (4) - start :00:08:022

00:13:297 (1) - remove NC

00:13:580 (2) - NC

00:13:957 - add note

00:14:429 (5) - NC

00:14:806 (1) - remove NC

00:15:561 (5) - NC

00:18:674 (9) - NC

00:19:335 (1) - remove NC

00:19:712 (9) - NC

00:19:995 - add note

00:23:203 - ^

00:23:486 - ^

00:23:391 (8) - NC

00:28:297 - add note

00:29:240 - ^


that's all ^^
fixed most~ thanks modding
merchat7
As requested,

[General]

Don't see anything

[Normal]

01:37:826 (1) - Spinner is quite short, remove this note and make spinner start here instead. Also to be consistent with Hard.

Other than that, quite nice map, all kick sliders play pretty well so no complain from me there.

[Hard]

00:08:777 (1,2,3,4) - I feel lower the spacing a little bit more make this play better. I can barely notice that the spacing is lowered here as well. Try 0.8x distant snap for all of these notes.
00:47:070 (2) - Place more like this, http://puu.sh/b7AM, I thought there was to be another repeat on the slider.

Again, good use of kick sliders, nice diff.

[Lunatic]

00:49:052 (6,7) - Can you make this a short slider instead? Don't really like how each of the stream has different amount of notes.

Plays quite nicely :D

I don't have much to suggest at all, have a star!

Good luck!
Wasabi
Hello!

Overall I like the song, very nice choice :)

Normal
Nothing wrong from what I can see!

Hard
00:53:674 - Remove finish
01:13:674 - Add finish

Lunatic
00:56:127 (3,4) - Make a short slider?


That's all I can find, sorry I couldn't be anymore useful! Great maps, I like them :)
Topic Starter
0x57CB36

merchat7 wrote:

As requested,

[General]

Don't see anything

[Normal]

01:37:826 (1) - Spinner is quite short, remove this note and make spinner start here instead. Also to be consistent with Hard. fixed

Other than that, quite nice map, all kick sliders play pretty well so no complain from me there.

[Hard]

00:08:777 (1,2,3,4) - I feel lower the spacing a little bit more make this play better. I can barely notice that the spacing is lowered here as well. Try 0.8x distant snap for all of these notes. ok
00:47:070 (2) - Place more like this, http://puu.sh/b7AM, I thought there was to be another repeat on the slider. ok

Again, good use of kick sliders, nice diff.

[Lunatic]

00:49:052 (6,7) - Can you make this a short slider instead? Don't really like how each of the stream has different amount of notes. short slider doesn't look nice, so I made 2 notes o.o

Plays quite nicely :D

I don't have much to suggest at all, have a star!

Good luck!
thanks for modding and star~

Snickerz wrote:

Hello!

Overall I like the song, very nice choice :)

Normal
Nothing wrong from what I can see!

Hard
00:53:674 - Remove finish
01:13:674 - Add finish fixed

Lunatic
00:56:127 (3,4) - Make a short slider? ^


That's all I can find, sorry I couldn't be anymore useful! Great maps, I like them :)
thanks modding
Ranger
Hi~
sorry my poor English

[Normal]
I think it`s too easy
change circle size 4

00:38:203 (2) - Put in a symmetric
00:44:241 (2) - ^
00:45:750 (4) - ^

[Hard]
00:08:777 (1) - Put in x:296 y:184
00:09:343 (2) - Put in x:200 y:184
00:09:909 (3,4) - Put in x:104 y:184
00:40:466 (1) - Put in a symmetric
01:07:070 (4) - ^

[Lunatic]
00:20:089 (5) - Add NC
00:21:599 (5) - ^
00:23:297 (7) - Add clap
00:23:391 (8) - Delect clap

Good Beatmap
good luck~
Genkishi
Hi there
from my queue

[General]
-seems fine

[Normal]
00:28:391 (1)-whistle here
00:34:429 (1)-^
00:38:203 (2)-new combo so it keeps the combo patterns

-many claps are used in this diff so it gets boring..go add some custom hit sounds imo

[Hard]
00:04:248 (1)-finish in the head
00:10:663 (1)-make this up to 00:11:984
00:08:777 (1)-spacing

[Lunatic]
00:10:663 (1)-make this up to 00:11:984
00:20:089 (5)-new combo
00:21:599 (5)-^
00:23:297 (7)-^


That's all good map
Topic Starter
0x57CB36

amnb9280 wrote:

Hi~
sorry my poor English

[Normal]
I think it`s too easy
change circle size 4

00:38:203 (2) - Put in a symmetric
00:44:241 (2) - ^
00:45:750 (4) - ^

[Hard]
00:08:777 (1) - Put in x:296 y:184
00:09:343 (2) - Put in x:200 y:184
00:09:909 (3,4) - Put in x:104 y:184
00:40:466 (1) - Put in a symmetric
01:07:070 (4) - ^

[Lunatic]
00:20:089 (5) - Add NC
00:21:599 (5) - ^
00:23:297 (7) - Add clap
00:23:391 (8) - Delect clap

Good Beatmap
good luck~
fixed most

thanks modding
Topic Starter
0x57CB36

Genkishi wrote:

Hi there
from my queue

[General]
-seems fine

[Normal]
00:28:391 (1)-whistle here
00:34:429 (1)-^
00:38:203 (2)-new combo so it keeps the combo patterns

-many claps are used in this diff so it gets boring..go add some custom hit sounds imo

[Hard]
00:04:248 (1)-finish in the head
00:10:663 (1)-make this up to 00:11:984
00:08:777 (1)-spacing

[Lunatic]
00:10:663 (1)-make this up to 00:11:984
00:20:089 (5)-new combo
00:21:599 (5)-^
00:23:297 (7)-^


That's all good map
fixed most, thanks modding :)
Kiiwa
S h i o n
Normal
  1. 唯一可能被挑的就是, 有几个滑条的重复次数不太规则 , 比如 00:23:864 (3) -
Hard
  1. 00:32:919 (1,2,3) - (1,2)叠一起, (3)分开? 因为00:31:410 (1,2,3)就是这样的 有点不连贯的感觉.
  2. 00:56:881 (4) - 叠一起还是感觉别扭...
Lunatic
  1. 01:32:919 (4) - 分开
  2. 开头感觉眼前一亮,但是后面略显平淡了点...
祝好运... :)
Topic Starter
0x57CB36

Kiiwa wrote:

thanks modding, fixed some :)

S h i o n wrote:

Normal
  1. 唯一可能被挑的就是, 有几个滑条的重复次数不太规则 , 比如 00:23:864 (3) - 不知道怎么改, 就不改了
Hard
  1. 00:32:919 (1,2,3) - (1,2)叠一起, (3)分开? 因为00:31:410 (1,2,3)就是这样的 有点不连贯的感觉.
  2. 00:56:881 (4) - 叠一起还是感觉别扭...
Lunatic
  1. 01:32:919 (4) - 分开
  2. 开头感觉眼前一亮,但是后面略显平淡了点...
祝好运... :)
thanks modding, fixed some :)
YTYuyu
Yo modding this map because of ur request :)

Normal:
00:14:806(2) - make this look the same as (1)
00:17:448(2) - *nazi* x:312 y:64

Hard:
00:22:353(1) - this could be a bit nicer

Lunaitc:
00:38:203(6) - make this look the same as (7)
01:25:278(6) - add a clap
01:37:353(6) - ^
01:38:203(5) - ^

this is the best i can do. GL :D
mochi
I'm going to suggest addition and removal of notes to match the map to the song more accurately.

[Lunatic]
00:13:486 - Add note
00:13:957 - Add note
00:16:221 - Add note
00:17:165 (7) - Delete
00:17:259 - Add note
00:17:448 (2) - Move to 00:17:542

00:19:995 - Add note
00:22:259 - Add note
00:25:372 (1) - Replace with stream
00:26:033 - Add note
01:37:825 - Stream should start here to fit well with song. You can add some more sliders before this.


bleh.. anyways i didn't look through the entire intro because i'm not sure if you left the gaps between streams on purpose or not. If you do follow my suggestion, it matches the instruments better. You can listen to the song and your note placement at 25% speed to get most accurate timings and whatever.
Topic Starter
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Byakugan249 wrote:

Yo modding this map because of ur request :)

Normal:
00:14:806(2) - make this look the same as (1)
00:17:448(2) - *nazi* x:312 y:64

Hard:
00:22:353(1) - this could be a bit nicer

Lunaitc:
00:38:203(6) - make this look the same as (7)
01:25:278(6) - add a clap
01:37:353(6) - ^
01:38:203(5) - ^

this is the best i can do. GL :D
fixed some, thanks modding :)

mochi wrote:

I'm going to suggest addition and removal of notes to match the map to the song more accurately.

[Lunatic]
00:13:486 - Add note
00:13:957 - Add note
00:16:221 - Add note
00:17:165 (7) - Delete
00:17:259 - Add note
00:17:448 (2) - Move to 00:17:542

00:19:995 - Add note
00:22:259 - Add note
00:25:372 (1) - Replace with stream
00:26:033 - Add note
01:37:825 - Stream should start here to fit well with song. You can add some more sliders before this.


bleh.. anyways i didn't look through the entire intro because i'm not sure if you left the gaps between streams on purpose or not. If you do follow my suggestion, it matches the instruments better. You can listen to the song and your note placement at 25% speed to get most accurate timings and whatever.
gaps so it will not be constant stream..

thanks modding, fixed some :)
Kyshiro
As requested in the queue, modded.

--General--
Suggestion: Maybe give the beats the color of their clothes?
-------------

Normal
v______________________________________________v
Nice, couldn't find anything to fix here.
^______________________________________________^

Hard
v______________________________________________v
Nice, couldn't find anything to fix here.
^______________________________________________^

Lunatic
v______________________________________________v

-00:48:863 (5) - Remove beat

-00:48:957 Add beat

-01:36:221 Add beat (11)

-01:36:316 Remove Slider

-01:36:316 Add beat (12)

-01:36:504 Add beat, new combo

-01:37:070 (14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) -
Give some curve to the stream.
^______________________________________________^

That's all I could find.
Any questions? Contact me in-game :3
Topic Starter
0x57CB36

Kyshiro wrote:

As requested in the queue, modded.

--General--
Suggestion: Maybe give the beats the color of their clothes? I don't know what you mean by clothes... if you mean the BG, maybe it'll blend in the approach circles
-------------

Normal
v______________________________________________v
Nice, couldn't find anything to fix here.
^______________________________________________^

Hard
v______________________________________________v
Nice, couldn't find anything to fix here.
^______________________________________________^

Lunatic
v______________________________________________v

-00:48:863 (5) - Remove beat

-00:48:957 Add beat

-01:36:221 Add beat (11)

-01:36:316 Remove Slider

-01:36:316 Add beat (12)

-01:36:504 Add beat, new combo

-01:37:070 (14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) -
Give some curve to the stream.
^______________________________________________^

That's all I could find.
Any questions? Contact me in-game :3
thanks modding, fixed some :)
eikkaleyd
from Anshi and eikka's modding queue :)

[hard]
00.37.070 嗯……这里可以试着放个note过渡句子?
01.25.372 把最后一次reserve改成一个原地的单点试试【单点用clap

[lunatic]
00.07.833 (3) 加长一格到08.022
00.08.211 (4) slider改短一截,放到00.08.399-00.08.588上去
00.17.448 在这里加一个(3)然后把 00.17.542的这个note去掉
00.18.674 (1) 删掉
00.48.863 (5) 移到00.48.957这个位置【排列也要改动一下,节奏最好这样,是三连打*3的感觉

Good luck~!
Topic Starter
0x57CB36

eikkaleyd wrote:

from Anshi and eikka's modding queue :)

[hard]
00.37.070 嗯……这里可以试着放个note过渡句子?故意空拍的
01.25.372 把最后一次reserve改成一个原地的单点试试【单点用clap 我看看...

[lunatic]
00.07.833 (3) 加长一格到08.022
00.08.211 (4) slider改短一截,放到00.08.399-00.08.588上去
00.17.448 在这里加一个(3)然后把 00.17.542的这个note去掉
00.18.674 (1) 删掉 changed in another way
00.48.863 (5) 移到00.48.957这个位置【排列也要改动一下,节奏最好这样,是三连打*3的感觉 那样不好看。。

Good luck~!
thanks modding :)
SinDemonDragon13
Request from my and Crystals queue~ <3

Normal diff:
Its perfectly fine :) I have almost nothing to say about it, only that its more between an Easy and Normal diff.
And that you should use less sliders, thats all~

Hard diff:
Its also perfect like the Normal diff~
Dont have anything to mod in here.

Lunatic diff:
Same as the other 2 ones~ oAo
Looks like I dont have anything to mod here. XD

Just one thing about all diffs~ You should add some breaks in them so that the players can rest a little.
Guess thats all I can do~ I will star your map when I get some kudosu! :D
Topic Starter
0x57CB36

SinDemonDragon13 wrote:

Request from my and Crystals queue~ <3

Normal diff:
Its perfectly fine :) I have almost nothing to say about it, only that its more between an Easy and Normal diff.
And that you should use less sliders, thats all~ :)

Hard diff:
Its also perfect like the Normal diff~
Dont have anything to mod in here.

Lunatic diff:
Same as the other 2 ones~ oAo
Looks like I dont have anything to mod here. XD

Just one thing about all diffs~ You should add some breaks in them so that the players can rest a little.
Guess thats all I can do~ I will star your map when I get some kudosu! :D
[/color]
thanks anyways~
SinDemonDragon13

0x57CB36 wrote:

SinDemonDragon13 wrote:

Request from my and Crystals queue~ <3

Normal diff:
Its perfectly fine :) I have almost nothing to say about it, only that its more between an Easy and Normal diff.
And that you should use less sliders, thats all~ :)

Hard diff:
Its also perfect like the Normal diff~
Dont have anything to mod in here.

Lunatic diff:
Same as the other 2 ones~ oAo
Looks like I dont have anything to mod here. XD

Just one thing about all diffs~ You should add some breaks in them so that the players can rest a little.
Guess thats all I can do~ I will star your map when I get some kudosu! :D
[/color]
thanks anyways~
Thank you for the kudosu! ^^
L_P
ahaha, i saw crap mods

quite good for a new mapper
Lunatic
00:01:230 (1) - why so many dots there? 4 was more than enough, i recommend 3 dots
00:02:739 (2) - samething
00:06:513 (5) - really awkward spacing, prefer make it like slider 3 and 4
00:08:211 (4) - this slider is not in sync with the music...i dont know how to fix it .. leave that to you
00:15:938 (5,6,7) -this should be a slider with a repeat
um...i have no clues on how you decide when it will be sliders. try make it regular?
wow after 00:37:259 (1) - the map is surprisingly better.. wow
though the slider shape of
00:38:957 (1) - should made by four dots
00:39:712 (4) - the middle part shouldnt have the red dot
00:41:976 (1) - should use 4 dots only
00:49:052 (6,7) - use slider?
01:13:486 (1,2,3,4,5) - haha, nice idea, but a bit weird is the angle, arrange it neater, rotate it neater

HARD
it is quite ok, however you used too much head and tail sliders...you know some bats really against it
the last thing i could remember is sakura saying this...is it? may be wrong thing dont know..

cause you dont really play my map...and so...
haiz...i know the mod isnt that pretty, but hope it does help
Shohei Ohtani
ALLRIGHT, LET'S DO THIS.

Lunatic:
00:13:297 - Put the red timing section here~. It makes sense musically, as the current red timing section is starting on the pick-up notes to the first measure~. and stuff.
If you want to, for these streams, probably add claps on the snare drum hits~.
Also, I just got shooted on one of my maps because a guest diff had a bunch of slider-streams, which people don't like. By slider-streams, I mean things like 00:32:920 (1,2,3,4,5,6), and people will eat you for it~. You should probably change them to regular note streams~.

Hard:
00:25:372 (1,2) - Kinda boring to have a lot of repeats~.
00:28:391 (1) - ^
00:32:164 (3) - ^
00:33:674 (3) - ^
00:35:938 (1) - ^
00:45:561 (3,1) - ^
01:27:259 (1,2,3) - ^
01:33:296 (1,2) - ^

Normal:
00:23:864 (3) - Boring-sama!~
00:46:505 (1) - ^
01:04:618 (1) - ^

yay
Mismagius
Whoa, so many posts and almost no stars D:

~General~
  1. Folder seems to be okay.


[Normal]
  1. 00:04:248 (1) - Add whistle to this slider? It sounds so empty D:
  2. 00:05:758 (2) - ^
  3. 00:08:777 (2) - Add a whistle on the repeat? Fits with the song.
  4. 00:16:316 (1) - Add a whistle at the start? Sounds nice.
  5. 00:17:826 (3) - ^
  6. 00:22:354 (1,3) - ^
  7. 00:28:392 (1) - ^
  8. 00:34:430 (1) - ^
  • Overall Rating: 8.7/10 ~ Well, most of the map is just sliders. Try to make more patterns using hitcircles! Either way, the map is nice, well-hitsounded, doesn't need many changes.
[Hard]
  1. 00:04:248 (1) - Whistle at the end? It feels less empty this way.
  2. 00:24:051 (2) - Move the middle sliderpoint 1 grid left and 1 grid up, it looks nicer~
  3. 00:50:655 (5) - Remove clap at end? D: It sounds a bit awkward as it is...
  4. 00:59:900 (4) - Finish at the end? You can hear it in the song.
  5. 01:05:938 (1) - Whistle at the end? You can hear it in the song;
  6. 01:09:146 (1,3) - ^ at the start of these sliders? It sounds way nicer~
  7. 01:16:693 (1) until 01:19:334 (4) - This part feels a bit empty with only claps. Try adding more whistles and finishes, since they're present in the song.
  8. 01:22:730 (1) - Whistle at the start? Sounds less empty.
  • Overall Rating: 8.9/10 ~ The map itself is nice, just found some hitsound issues that, if fixed, will make the map a bit less dull. Either way, this is really well-mapped, nice job!
[Lunatic]


  • Overall Difficulty +1? It seems a bit too low for a Lunatic difficulty.
  1. 00:04:814 (2) - Whistle at the end? This section sounds a bit empty with only finishes.
  2. 00:05:758 (4) - ^
  3. 00:07:267 (3) - ^
  4. 00:09:343 (2) - Please add whistle, this sounds really empty. D:
  5. 00:17:542 (3,4) - Remove clap from (3) and add it on (4). It sounds way better then~
  6. 00:36:693 (9) - Add a finish here? It fits with the song.
  7. 00:38:957 (1) - A whistle at the start? Sounds less empty..
  8. 00:41:976 (1) - ^
  9. 00:44:240 (7) - ^
  10. 00:48:014 (1) - ^ Nice slider, by the way.
  11. 00:50:844 (7) - I see you did the same thing here, so why not add a whistle instead of a clap? It sounds a bit awkward with a clap.
  12. 00:57:070 (8) - New combo? It seems that the combo is a bit too long... Also, would be better to read.
  13. 01:00:844 (5) - Add a whistle? You can hear it in the song.
  14. 01:09:146 (1) - ^ at the start?
  15. 01:11:976 (5) - Add a finish at the end? You can hear it in the song.
  • Overall Rating: 9.0/10 ~ Streams, streams, streams. Very fun map, just some hitsound issues again, but nothing really bad. Excellent map.
Topic Starter
0x57CB36

L_P wrote:

ahaha, i saw crap mods

quite good for a new mapper
Lunatic
00:01:230 (1) - why so many dots there? 4 was more than enough, i recommend 3 dots dots?
00:02:739 (2) - samething
00:06:513 (5) - really awkward spacing, prefer make it like slider 3 and 4 fixed spacing
00:08:211 (4) - this slider is not in sync with the music...i dont know how to fix it .. leave that to you i don't know either :o
00:15:938 (5,6,7) -this should be a slider with a repeat ???
um...i have no clues on how you decide when it will be sliders. try make it regular?
wow after 00:37:259 (1) - the map is surprisingly better.. wow
though the slider shape of
00:38:957 (1) - should made by four dots
00:39:712 (4) - the middle part shouldnt have the red dot
00:41:976 (1) - should use 4 dots only
00:49:052 (6,7) - use slider?
01:13:486 (1,2,3,4,5) - haha, nice idea, but a bit weird is the angle, arrange it neater, rotate it neater remade some sliders...

HARD
it is quite ok, however you used too much head and tail sliders...you know some bats really against it
the last thing i could remember is sakura saying this...is it? may be wrong thing dont know.. I don't know, it's too much sliders o.o

cause you dont really play my map...and so... your map is too hard, I tried 6pc and can't pass :o i'm noob
haiz...i know the mod isnt that pretty, but hope it does help

CDFA wrote:

ALLRIGHT, LET'S DO THIS.

Lunatic:
00:13:297 - Put the red timing section here~. It makes sense musically, as the current red timing section is starting on the pick-up notes to the first measure~. and stuff. 4 notes not snapped... :o
If you want to, for these streams, probably add claps on the snare drum hits~.
Also, I just got shooted on one of my maps because a guest diff had a bunch of slider-streams, which people don't like. By slider-streams, I mean things like 00:32:920 (1,2,3,4,5,6), and people will eat you for it~. You should probably change them to regular note streams~.

Hard:
00:25:372 (1,2) - Kinda boring to have a lot of repeats~.
00:28:391 (1) - ^
00:32:164 (3) - ^
00:33:674 (3) - ^
00:35:938 (1) - ^
00:45:561 (3,1) - ^
01:27:259 (1,2,3) - ^
01:33:296 (1,2) - ^ I don't know how to fix them :o

Normal:
00:23:864 (3) - Boring-sama!~
00:46:505 (1) - ^
01:04:618 (1) - ^

yay

Blue Dragon wrote:

Whoa, so many posts and almost no stars D: haha

~General~
  1. Folder seems to be okay.


[Normal]
  1. 00:04:248 (1) - Add whistle to this slider? It sounds so empty D:
  2. 00:05:758 (2) - ^
  3. 00:08:777 (2) - Add a whistle on the repeat? Fits with the song.
  4. 00:16:316 (1) - Add a whistle at the start? Sounds nice.
  5. 00:17:826 (3) - ^
  6. 00:22:354 (1,3) - ^
  7. 00:28:392 (1) - ^
  8. 00:34:430 (1) - ^ added all, thanks!
  • Overall Rating: 8.7/10 ~ Well, most of the map is just sliders. Try to make more patterns using hitcircles! Either way, the map is nice, well-hitsounded, doesn't need many changes.
[Hard]
  1. 00:04:248 (1) - Whistle at the end? It feels less empty this way. used finish
  2. 00:24:051 (2) - Move the middle sliderpoint 1 grid left and 1 grid up, it looks nicer~ fixed
  3. 00:50:655 (5) - Remove clap at end? D: It sounds a bit awkward as it is... ok
  4. 00:59:900 (4) - Finish at the end? You can hear it in the song. ok
  5. 01:05:938 (1) - Whistle at the end? You can hear it in the song; ok
  6. 01:09:146 (1,3) - ^ at the start of these sliders? It sounds way nicer~ ok
  7. 01:16:693 (1) until 01:19:334 (4) - This part feels a bit empty with only claps. Try adding more whistles and finishes, since they're present in the song. ok
  8. 01:22:730 (1) - Whistle at the start? Sounds less empty.
  • Overall Rating: 8.9/10 ~ The map itself is nice, just found some hitsound issues that, if fixed, will make the map a bit less dull. Either way, this is really well-mapped, nice job! thanks
[Lunatic]


  • Overall Difficulty +1? It seems a bit too low for a Lunatic difficulty. ok
  1. 00:04:814 (2) - Whistle at the end? This section sounds a bit empty with only finishes.
  2. 00:05:758 (4) - ^
  3. 00:07:267 (3) - ^
  4. 00:09:343 (2) - Please add whistle, this sounds really empty. D:
  5. 00:17:542 (3,4) - Remove clap from (3) and add it on (4). It sounds way better then~
  6. 00:36:693 (9) - Add a finish here? It fits with the song.
  7. 00:38:957 (1) - A whistle at the start? Sounds less empty..
  8. 00:41:976 (1) - ^
  9. 00:44:240 (7) - ^
  10. 00:48:014 (1) - ^ Nice slider, by the way.
  11. 00:50:844 (7) - I see you did the same thing here, so why not add a whistle instead of a clap? It sounds a bit awkward with a clap.
  12. 00:57:070 (8) - New combo? It seems that the combo is a bit too long... Also, would be better to read.
  13. 01:00:844 (5) - Add a whistle? You can hear it in the song.
  14. 01:09:146 (1) - ^ at the start?
  15. 01:11:976 (5) - Add a finish at the end? You can hear it in the song. all added
  • Overall Rating: 9.0/10 ~ Streams, streams, streams. Very fun map, just some hitsound issues again, but nothing really bad. Excellent map. so Lunatic is the best? thanks ^^
thanks all modding :)
M a n a
[Normal]

Nice~

[Hard]

00:09:343 (2) - Add whistle or finish?
00:10:663 (1) - Move at 00:10:475?
00:27:636 (3) - I think the slider form is a bit strange...
01:09:146 (1) - Remove whistle in the begining?
01:09:900 (3) - ^
01:16:693 (1) - Add finish in the begining?

[Lunatic]

00:36:693 (9) - ~nazi~Make it aline with (8)?
01:13:674 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - I don't know why,i just don't like this position...
01:34:806 (1) - Add finish in the begining?

Thats all
Good luck :)
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