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dBu - Fairy Wars Symphony

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0x57CB36
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年2月25日 at 7:53:01

Artist: dBu
Title: Fairy Wars Symphony
Source: Touhou
Tags: daiyousei daisensou scherzo th12.8 great
BPM: 159
Filesize: 2469kb
Play Time: 01:37
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.94 stars, 202 notes)
  2. Lunatic (5 stars, 484 notes)
  3. Normal (3.02 stars, 107 notes)
Download: dBu - Fairy Wars Symphony
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Normal done (by me)
Hard done (by me)
Insane done (by me)

from the album "Scherzo of Fairy Wars"

short version

updates:

12-2 added [Normal], removed [under the 3 star rating, over the difficulty].

thanks modding

No_Gu
hoLysoup
wmfchris
kosiga
Kokatsu
Chewin
-Lennox-
Star Stream
ikari_kyon
Kei
nich95
Roddie
Scorpiour
Shinkuu
Yutsuki yukari
Soul-less
VocaloidTACU
HakuNoKaemi
Delica
A s g a r d
merchat7
Snickerz
amnb9280
[Ranger]
Genkishi
Kiiwa
S h i o n
Byakugan249
mochi
Kyshiro
eikkaleyd
SinDemonDragon13
L_P
CDFA
Blue Dragon
M a n a
nold_1702
ertyukjh010
[D]avideTheBest[ITA]
Lucy-Kaede
Melophobia
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
Kawayi Rika
AIR315
spboxer3
Laurier
Copter-kun
p3n
Teru21
ouranhshc
Shiirn
Leorda
winber1
Dragvon
cmn_891127
KayeSara
Neptunus
KingsAL2
kanpakyin
Kurai

thanks star

Kokatsu
Wiinter
Soul-less
merchat7
SinDemonDragon13
ertyukjh010
[D]avideTheBest[ITA]
me
p3n
Dragvon
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Last edited by 0x57CB36 , edited 62 times in total.
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
No_Gu
request from my queue

不到三星的那个就删了吧。。没理由能通过的。再说也超1800W分了

01:39:308加一条绿线截止kiai

[hard]
00:27:610 (3) - 中间红点往右移动一格
00:31:384 (1) - 开头finish
00:43:459 (1) - ^
00:55:535 (1) - ^
01:07:610 (1) - ^

[insane]
00:14:780 (8) - NC
00:25:346 (7) - 开头finish 加NC
00:37:421 (2) - 开头finish
01:01:384 (1) - 结尾finish
0x57CB36
261 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
0x57CB36

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue

不到三星的那个就删了吧。。没理由能通过的。再说也超1800W分了 简单的还没做好 (好难做。。。), 这个是充数的。。。= =

01:39:308加一条绿线截止kiai 好的

[hard]
00:27:610 (3) - 中间红点往右移动一格 谢谢指正。。
00:31:384 (1) - 开头finish 已改
00:43:459 (1) - ^ ^
00:55:535 (1) - ^ ^
01:07:610 (1) - ^ ^

[insane]
00:14:780 (8) - NC 已改正
00:25:346 (7) - 开头finish 加NC 已改正
00:37:421 (2) - 开头finish 已改正
01:01:384 (1) - 结尾finish 已改正
\

谢谢modding :)
Kirino Kousaka
655 posts
Joined November 2010
Kirino Kousaka
this map is to good I'm sorry I can't see anything wrong with it so I can't mod it ><
0x57CB36
261 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
0x57CB36

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

this map is to good I'm sorry I can't see anything wrong with it so I can't mod it ><
:) Thanks for checking anyways
hoLysoup
1,846 posts
Joined September 2009
hoLysoup
hi~

[General]
-BG沒辦法找到1024x768嗎?
-每個difficulty都Remove countdown

[Lunatic]
00:04:810 (2) - 這個slider需要重snap
00:28:648 (4,5) - 這個spacing請改正 完全沒有必要
00:36:761 (10,11) - 這兩個去掉, 音樂裡沒有這兩個beat
以下的finish都是音樂裡聽得到的:
00:43:459 (3) - slider頭加finish
00:46:478 (3) - ^
00:47:044 (4) - slider尾加finish
00:49:497 (10) - slider頭加finish
00:51:006 (6) - NC
00:57:610 (9) - NC
01:04:591 (3) - slider頭加finish
01:05:157 (4) - slider尾加finish
01:06:101 (1) - finish
01:07:610 (1) - ^
01:10:629 (1) - slider頭加finish
01:11:384 (4) - ^
01:11:950 (5) - slider尾加finish
01:19:686 (5) - slider頭加finish
01:38:931 (1) - 最後一個repeat加finish

其他的diff沒甚麼意見, 把相對的finish加上就更好聽了
就這樣~
0x57CB36
261 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
0x57CB36

hoLysoup wrote:

hi~

[General]
-BG沒辦法找到1024x768嗎? 下载下来就是这样的= = 据说改BG可能会显示不出来 还是不要改好了 看着没区别
-每個difficulty都Remove countdown

[Lunatic]
00:04:810 (2) - 這個slider需要重snap ok
00:28:648 (4,5) - 這個spacing請改正 完全沒有必要 ok
00:36:761 (10,11) - 這兩個去掉, 音樂裡沒有這兩個beat ok
以下的finish都是音樂裡聽得到的:
00:43:459 (3) - slider頭加finish
00:46:478 (3) - ^
00:47:044 (4) - slider尾加finish
00:49:497 (10) - slider頭加finish
00:51:006 (6) - NC
00:57:610 (9) - NC
01:04:591 (3) - slider頭加finish
01:05:157 (4) - slider尾加finish
01:06:101 (1) - finish
01:07:610 (1) - ^
01:10:629 (1) - slider頭加finish
01:11:384 (4) - ^
01:11:950 (5) - slider尾加finish
01:19:686 (5) - slider頭加finish
01:38:931 (1) - 最後一個repeat加finish 都改了谢谢~

其他的diff沒甚麼意見, 把相對的finish加上就更好聽了
就這樣~
wmfchris
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5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
let's go

-> the tag should be daiyousei?
-> doubtful timing, -5 ms and there's no need to set 2 red lines becoz the first one is BPM159. Apple 0.5x time section instead.
-> 00:10:533 - consider to use a spinner. Otherwise the coming single not [with finish] looks odd.

[Lunatic]
OD+1?
00:04:872 (2) - make slider like this 
213,93,4872,2,0,B|181:116|152:96,1,45
00:05:816 (4) - ^, 
74,219,5816,2,0,B|108:268|152:288,1,90,4|0
before 0:11 - please make the spacing unique : <
00:34:025 (6) - spacing

- kiai time should be located at the streamy part.
- in the streamy part, it's highly prefereed that you end EVERY stream and start every stream at red/white (1/2, 1/1) because that fits the smootheness of the song.
The rest of it is fine. Just beward of the spacing which diverges a lot here

[Hard]
00:17:233 - to maintain the regularity, you can try to avoid 1/4 this combo, then use 1/4 in next combo, etc.
stream part: yeah, 1/4 should appear more regularly :3
00:36:667 (2) - single note here, otherwise use a slow slider otherwise this is very misleading

In overall:
- you may need more variation, like for [Hard] the whole song is slider with claps regularly and 1/4 sometimes :< play more other's work will be useful.
- Spinner is useful especially the tone is a long one. In your map there're many place that two single note with finishes seperated 2 beats should be replaced by spinner.

good luck!
0x57CB36
261 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
0x57CB36

wmfchris wrote:

let's go

-> the tag should be daiyousei? done
-> doubtful timing, -5 ms and there's no need to set 2 red lines becoz the first one is BPM159. Apple 0.5x time section instead. -5ms
-> 00:10:533 - consider to use a spinner. Otherwise the coming single not [with finish] looks odd. done

[Lunatic]
OD+1? but OD should be AR-2?
00:04:872 (2) - make slider like this 
213,93,4872,2,0,B|181:116|152:96,1,45
done
00:05:816 (4) - ^, 
74,219,5816,2,0,B|108:268|152:288,1,90,4|0
done
before 0:11 - please make the spacing unique : < done
00:34:025 (6) - spacing done

- kiai time should be located at the streamy part. it doesn't sound like high part of the song, and there is long stream at the end
- in the streamy part, it's highly prefereed that you end EVERY stream and start every stream at red/white (1/2, 1/1) because that fits the smootheness of the song. um... I followed the song
The rest of it is fine. Just beward of the spacing which diverges a lot here ok

[Hard]
00:17:233 - to maintain the regularity, you can try to avoid 1/4 this combo, then use 1/4 in next combo, etc. I don't know how to avoid it... added 1/4 in the next combo
stream part: yeah, 1/4 should appear more regularly :3 :3 I'll try
00:36:667 (2) - single note here, otherwise use a slow slider otherwise this is very misleading ok

In overall:
- you may need more variation, like for [Hard] the whole song is slider with claps regularly and 1/4 sometimes :< play more other's work will be useful.
- Spinner is useful especially the tone is a long one. In your map there're many place that two single note with finishes seperated 2 beats should be replaced by spinner.

good luck!
Thanks for modding
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
OD+1? but OD should be AR-2?
this was never a strict rule, quite depending on the speed of the song. : >

no kd here
kosiga
1,548 posts
Joined May 2011
kosiga
hi~

from my queue ~

here my mod ~

[Normal]
  1. 00:13:266 (1) - add clap? to slider end point
  2. 00:14:775 (2) - ^
  3. 00:41:945 (3) - add finish
  4. 00:43:454 (1) - add finish to slider start point
  5. 00:47:982 (2) - add finish
  6. 00:49:492 (2) - add finish to slider start point
  7. 00:51:756 (1) - remove NC and 00:52:511 - add NC
  8. 00:54:775 (1) - remove NC and 00:55:530 - add NC
  9. 00:55:530 (2) - add finish to slider start point
  10. 01:01:567 (1) - ^
  11. 01:04:586 (1) - add finish to slider start point and 2nd repeat point
  12. 01:06:096 (2) - add finish
  13. 01:07:605 (1) - add finish to slider start point
  14. 01:10:624 (1) - ^
  15. 01:11:379 (2) - ^
  16. 01:12:133 (3) - add finish
  17. 01:27:228 (3) - add finish to slider start point
  18. 01:28:737 (1) - ^
  19. 01:31:756 (1) - ^
[Hard]
  1. 00:23:266 (2) - add clap to slider end point
  2. 00:37:228 (1) - add finish to slider end point
  3. 00:40:435 (1) - add finish to slider start point
  4. 00:41:001 (2) - add finish to slider end point
  5. 00:46:284 (1) - add finish to slider 2nd repeat point
  6. 00:47:039 (2) - ^
  7. 00:49:303 (1) - add finish to slider end point
  8. 00:52:888 (2) - ^
  9. 00:58:360 (4) - ^
  10. 00:59:115 (2) - add finish to slider start point
  11. 01:04:398 (4) - add finish to slider end point
  12. 01:05:341 (3) - add finish to slider start point
  13. 01:07:605 (1) - ^
  14. 01:10:624 (1) - ^
  15. 01:11:190 (2) - add finish to slider end point
  16. 01:19:681 (1) - add finish to slider start point
  17. 01:25:530 (4) - add finish to slider end point
  18. 01:27:228 (1) - add finish to slider start point
  19. 01:28:737 (1) - ^
  20. 01:31:756 (1) - ^
  21. 01:36:850 (2) - remove finish to slider end point
[Lunatic]
  1. 00:06:377 - add circle
  2. 00:05:245 (3,4) - Please fix it with DS1.2x
  3. 00:07:132 (2,3,4) - ^
  4. 00:10:339 (8) - add finish
  5. 00:40:435 (3) - add finish to slider start point
  6. 00:41:001 (4) - add finish to slider end point
  7. 00:47:039 (4) - ^
  8. 00:53:077 (3) - add finish to slider start point
  9. 00:55:530 (5) - ^
  10. 00:58:549 (6) - add something and add finish here
  11. 00:59:115 (4) - add finish to slider start point
  12. 01:05:152 (4) - add finish to slider end point
  13. 01:11:945 (5) - remove finish to slider end point
  14. 01:25:718 (1) - add finish to slider start point
  15. 01:27:228 (1) - ^
  16. 01:28:737 (1) - ^
  17. 01:31:756 (8) - ^
That's all ~ sorry, long mod :o

map is good but some hitsounds are necessary.

Good luck~ :)
Kokatsu
504 posts
Joined August 2011
Kokatsu
Hey bro, mod done.

Overall:
Set Kiai time to other times. At the moment, it's just..weird.
I would suggest 00:37:416-00:47:982 and 01:01:567-01:12:133 on all maps.

Normal:
Kiai rearrange mentioned above.
00:08:830 (2,1,2): Remove and add Spinner from 00:08:830-00:11:849. You can lower BSD to 1/2 then and it fits normal well.
00:41:945 (3): Add finish.
00:47:982 (2): ^
00:53:643 (4): Remove clap.
01:06:096 (2): Add finish.
01:12:133 (3): ^
01:37:794 (1,2): Remove and add Spinner for the same duration.

Hard:
Kiai rearrange mentioned above.
Overall Difficulty +1/2: The map consists of a lot of Sliders, lots of sliders = lots of free 300's. Increasing OD should balance this a bit.
00:10:339 (5,1): Remove, add Spinner for same duration.
00:17:228 (3): Remove last reverse.
00:18:549 (4): ^
00:36:662 (2): This strikes me every time. Either make this one at same velo as all the other ones or mark it in a special way, that one can recognize the changed velo after first try (Add New Combo, Short Storyboard message "watch out!", something like that..).
01:36:284 (1,2): Remove (2), increase duration of (1) by 2 ticks ('till next red tick) and add reverse.

Lunatic:
Kiai rearrange mentioned above.
Check AIMod, did you use distance snap? Correct spaceing and snapping issues (don't wanna list 'em all, you've got them in AIMod).
00:05:245 (3,4): These are not on the song's beat. Shorten (3) by 1 tick, starts 1 tick later (from red to blue). (4) needs to be 1 tick longer. (Reduce Playback rate to 50% to get the exact timing if you don't get my trashtalk. :D)
00:32:888 (1,2,3): Rearrange, it's too hard (if you compare it with the rest of the map) to get the exact timing of starts/ends with that high approach speed.

Hope I could help. :)
Star for Touhou~
0x57CB36
261 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
0x57CB36

kosiga wrote:

hi~

from my queue ~

here my mod ~

[Normal]
  1. 00:13:266 (1) - add clap? to slider end point
  2. 00:14:775 (2) - ^
  3. 00:41:945 (3) - add finish
  4. 00:43:454 (1) - add finish to slider start point
  5. 00:47:982 (2) - add finish
  6. 00:49:492 (2) - add finish to slider start point
  7. 00:51:756 (1) - remove NC and 00:52:511 - add NC
  8. 00:54:775 (1) - remove NC and 00:55:530 - add NC
  9. 00:55:530 (2) - add finish to slider start point
  10. 01:01:567 (1) - ^
  11. 01:04:586 (1) - add finish to slider start point and 2nd repeat point
  12. 01:06:096 (2) - add finish
  13. 01:07:605 (1) - add finish to slider start point
  14. 01:10:624 (1) - ^
  15. 01:11:379 (2) - ^
  16. 01:12:133 (3) - add finish
  17. 01:27:228 (3) - add finish to slider start point
  18. 01:28:737 (1) - ^
  19. 01:31:756 (1) - ^
[Hard]
  1. 00:23:266 (2) - add clap to slider end point
  2. 00:37:228 (1) - add finish to slider end point
  3. 00:40:435 (1) - add finish to slider start point
  4. 00:41:001 (2) - add finish to slider end point
  5. 00:46:284 (1) - add finish to slider 2nd repeat point
  6. 00:47:039 (2) - ^
  7. 00:49:303 (1) - add finish to slider end point
  8. 00:52:888 (2) - ^
  9. 00:58:360 (4) - ^
  10. 00:59:115 (2) - add finish to slider start point
  11. 01:04:398 (4) - add finish to slider end point
  12. 01:05:341 (3) - add finish to slider start point
  13. 01:07:605 (1) - ^
  14. 01:10:624 (1) - ^
  15. 01:11:190 (2) - add finish to slider end point
  16. 01:19:681 (1) - add finish to slider start point
  17. 01:25:530 (4) - add finish to slider end point
  18. 01:27:228 (1) - add finish to slider start point
  19. 01:28:737 (1) - ^
  20. 01:31:756 (1) - ^
  21. 01:36:850 (2) - remove finish to slider end point
all added, thanks~ :) the rest checking
0x57CB36
261 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
0x57CB36

Kokatsu wrote:

Hey bro, mod done.

Overall:
Set Kiai time to other times. At the moment, it's just..weird. changed
I would suggest 00:37:416-00:47:982 and 01:01:567-01:12:133 on all maps.

Normal:
Kiai rearrange mentioned above.
00:08:830 (2,1,2): Remove and add Spinner from 00:08:830-00:11:849. You can lower BSD to 1/2 then and it fits normal well. what 1/2? = =
00:41:945 (3): Add finish. finishes already changed
00:47:982 (2): ^
00:53:643 (4): Remove clap. done
01:06:096 (2): Add finish.
01:12:133 (3): ^
01:37:794 (1,2): Remove and add Spinner for the same duration. because spinner sounds so strange... let me think about it

Hard:
Kiai rearrange mentioned above.
Overall Difficulty +1/2: The map consists of a lot of Sliders, lots of sliders = lots of free 300's. Increasing OD should balance this a bit. Yea, right. +2
00:10:339 (5,1): Remove, add Spinner for same duration. only removed 1
00:17:228 (3): Remove last reverse. done
00:18:549 (4): ^ the music is different so no
00:36:662 (2): This strikes me every time. Either make this one at same velo as all the other ones or mark it in a special way, that one can recognize the changed velo after first try (Add New Combo, Short Storyboard message "watch out!", something like that..). I'll just remove the 0.5x section... perfectly readable the next one
01:36:284 (1,2): Remove (2), increase duration of (1) by 2 ticks ('till next red tick) and add reverse. then I can't add clap, so it sounds bad

Lunatic:
Kiai rearrange mentioned above.
Check AIMod, did you use distance snap? Correct spaceing and snapping issues (don't wanna list 'em all, you've got them in AIMod). I used 1.2x DS, AI mod recgonizes all compressed streams as spacing errors, that's the problem
00:05:245 (3,4): These are not on the song's beat. Shorten (3) by 1 tick, starts 1 tick later (from red to blue). (4) needs to be 1 tick longer. (Reduce Playback rate to 50% to get the exact timing if you don't get my trashtalk. :D) done
00:32:888 (1,2,3): Rearrange, it's too hard (if you compare it with the rest of the map) to get the exact timing of starts/ends with that high approach speed.

Hope I could help. :)
Star for Touhou~
Chewin
osu! Alumni
4,082 posts
Joined December 2010
Chewin
Hi, from my queue ;)

Normal:
  1. 01:34:775 (1) - Start it with finish
  2. Mh it's ok o:
Hard:
  1. 00:02:792 (2) - snap it
  2. 00:09:396 (3,4) - ^
  3. 00:10:716 (1) - end it at 00:11:849
  4. 00:17:228 (3) - Snap it please, move it at x280 y128 And forgot the clap at the end
  5. 00:19:303 (1) - Add finish at the beginning
  6. 00:37:228 (1) - Don't overlap with 00:36:662 (2), move it D:
Lunatic:
  1. 00:13:266 (1) - New combo and add finish
  2. 00:31:284 (12) - remove circle
  3. 00:31:379 add circle
  4. 00:31:473 (1) - If you added circle remove new combo
  5. It seems good enough :)
Good luck o/
0x57CB36
261 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
0x57CB36

Chewin wrote:

Hi, from my queue ;)

Normal:
  1. 01:34:775 (1) - Start it with finish fixed
  2. Mh it's ok o:
thanks
Hard:
  1. 00:02:792 (2) - snap it
  2. 00:09:396 (3,4) - ^ fixed
  3. 00:10:716 (1) - end it at 00:11:849 oh fixed
  4. 00:17:228 (3) - Snap it please, move it at x280 y128 And forgot the clap at the end fixed
  5. 00:19:303 (1) - Add finish at the beginning fixed
  6. 00:37:228 (1) - Don't overlap with 00:36:662 (2), move it D: fixed
Lunatic:
  1. 00:13:266 (1) - New combo and add finish
  2. 00:31:284 (12) - remove circle
  3. 00:31:379 add circle
  4. 00:31:473 (1) - If you added circle remove new combo all fixed
  5. It seems good enough :) thanks
Good luck o/
-Lennox-
640 posts
Joined September 2010
-Lennox-
Hi There.

General:

• A Taiko diff would be nice here. Maybe try to ask someone?
• Your BG size is "1023x767" it has to be "1024x768" it's not a big deal.
• Custom Hitsounds would fit here i guess. Try THIS
• Black Background colour in every diff? (song setup -> colours -> background Colour)
• Your Combo colours are pretty odd imo. Try this one: 
Combo1 : 164,102,0
Combo2 : 83,87,134
Combo3 : 153,153,153
Combo4 : 192,50,53

Normal:

• 00:07:320 (1) - Delete this one an reverse 00:05:811 (2) and add a note at 00:08:075? It's pretty boring to play those slow sliders again and again :/. (If you do this, don't forgett the spacing)
• 01:09:115 (3,4,1,2) - This might can get a little confusing for new players.


Hard:

Just one thing here. Those slider stacks are pure flow killer imo :/. Could you try to unstack them?
SPOILER
00:24:586 (3,4) -
• 00:26:850 (1,2) -
• 00:31:379 (1,2) -
• 00:56:473 (3,4) -
• 01:15:907 (3,4) -
• 01:29:492 (2,3) -

Lunatic:

• 00:04:301 - 00:08:641 : I don't really know. But i guess you have to map this on 1/3 ( Only the beginning)
• 00:25:907 (5,1) - Could be a higher spacing.


Keep up your work! Good luck!
Star Stream
2,033 posts
Joined June 2010
Star Stream
Hoy~
from my queue :3

1. Offset: 1,240ms BPM: 79.50
2. Offset: 13,289ms BPM: 159.00
use this

Normal
00:05:768 (2) - 1grid down,right
00:10:296 (1,2) - like this http://puu.sh/ajii
00:31:402 (1) - x:60 y:180
00:32:534 (2) - 1grid right
00:38:949 (3,4,1) - use Tiny size
00:44:232 (2,3,4) - ^
00:57:817 (4) - 1grid right
01:11:402 (2) - 1grid down
01:26:874 (2) - 1grid right
01:28:760 (1) - x:300 y:60
01:37:817 (1,2) - spinner

Hard
01:36:850 (2) - like this http://puu.sh/ajjt

Insane
01:37:039 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - like this http://puu.sh/ajjW (slider)

Good luck :p
jossieP
1,875 posts
Joined May 2010
jossieP

Star Stream wrote:

1. Offset: 1,240ms BPM: 79.50
2. Offset: 13,289ms BPM: 159.00
nuuuu x3

ok Ill just check your timing here

1st Timeline~
BPM: 79,000
Offset: 1270

00:09:434 (6,7,8) - About the snapping of this 3, (6,7) should be on a 1/3 tick, and (8) on a 1/6 tick xp following the new timing 00:09:371 (6), 00:09:877 (7), 00:10:257 (8).

2nd Timeline~
BPM: 159,000
Offset: 12920

The first object of stream on the bpm change SHOULD START ON NEW BPM!
Kei
1,797 posts
Joined May 2010
Kei
Hi there! It's your first beatmap? o.o

General

The background size is 1023x767. You have use another background with a size of 1024x768 or resize this one to 1024x768.
I resized the image for you :3 ~


Background

[Normal]


00:04:301 (1) - Add Finish at start.
00:05:811 (2) - ^
00:08:830 (2) - Add Whistle at Repeat and Finish at end.
00:19:303 (1) - Add Finish at start.
00:22:322 (1) - ^
00:25:341 (1) - ^
00:28:360 (1) - ^
00:31:379 (1) - ^
00:34:398 (1) - ^
00:40:435 (1) - ^
00:41:190 (2) - ^
00:46:473 (1) - Add Finish at start and at the second repeat.
01:00:058 (4) - Add Finish at start.
01:31:756 (1) - ^
01:33:265 (3) - ^
01:34:775 (1) - ^
01:36:284 (3) - ^
01:37:039 (4) - Add finish at start and end.
01:37:920 - Instead of leaving this empty space add a spinner here, delete (2) and make it end at 01:39:303 (where (2) was).


[Hard]


00:04:301 (1) - Add Finish at start.
00:05:811 (2) - ^
00:09:962 (4) - Finish.
00:22:322 (1) - Claps at start?
00:41:945 (4) - Remove new combo and add Finish at start.
00:44:775 (4) - Remove new combo.
00:47:982 (1) - Add Finish at start and remove new combo.
00:51:001 (6) - Remove new combo.
00:52:888 (2) - Add Finish at end.
00:57:228 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:58:360 (8) - New combo here and remove new combo of 00:58:737 (1).
00:59:492 (4) - Finish at end.
00:59:869 (5) - ^
01:01:001 (3) - Finish at end?
01:04:398 (4) - New combo here and remove new combo of 01:04:775 (1).
01:05:907 (1) - Add Finish at end, remove new combo and add new combo to 01:06:284 (2).
01:09:115 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:12:133 (1) - Add Finish at start, remove combo and add new combo to 01:12:699 (2).
01:13:643 (1) - Maybe Finish at start?
01:30:247 (1) - Add Finish at start.
01:30:813 (2) - ^
[b]01:36:284 (1) - ^
01:36:850 (2) - Add Finish at start and end.
01:37:794 (1) - Maybe add a note here with Finish and move this spinner 1 tick forward?


[Lunatic]


00:09:962 (7) - Add Finish.
00:10:528 (1) - ^
00:12:891 (1,2,3) - These notes aren't snapped.

Well I'm not gonna write all again hitsounds suggestions, so, if you like how it sounds what I told you below about samples, apply it to this difficulty too. I think it sounds better if you apply what I told you but it's only my opinion :3

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And that's all. Good luck!
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