Did you know that "neu" is a German word which means "new" in English? =)
General:Tags: Remove "Niente" from tags, as this is how your diff is called, and it's not really necessary. Remove "Long Ver" as well, you already say in the Title that this is the long version of neu.
.OSB: First of all, you have 2 osb files... so you'll have to
delete "Shounen Radio - neu (Spectator)".
I was checking the other osb "Shounen Radio - neu (Long Version) (Spectator)", and it's the same as Lesjuh's map. Be sure to
delete it too, as doesn't even have files such as "Storyboard\SB_1.jpg" or "Storyboard\black.png", which they don't belong to this map.
Folder "Lyrics": I don't see it used in .OSU/.OSB files. Unless you're going to make a good use of it, you must
delete it as well.
Custom hitcircle: You have the following files "hitcircle" and "hitcircleoverlay". You'll need to
include a "reversearrow" too.
(You'll need to make a full submission after all these changes).
Niente:Guidelines wrote:
A maximum of three slider velocities should be used (including 1x).
In this map you're using 4 different slider velocities: 0.50, 0.75, 1.00 and 1.20. But as the map is almost 7 min long, and they honestly fit with the quiet-loud parts of the map, I won't say this is an issue that must be fixed.
Some of the sliders you use here aren't completely symmetical, as 00:14:253 (5), 00:18:042 (1), 00:19:305 (3), 00:24:358 (3), 01:04:147 (1), and so on. I suggest spending a little bit more in Edit Mode trying to make a perfect curve, but I'll help you with the 1st one:
SPOILER
168,96,14253,2,0,B|216:40|296:40|344:96,1,200,0|2
01:21:516 (1) - I can barely hear the end of this spinner, can you raise a bit more the volume or include a proper hitsound in it?
01:46:465 (
Timing section) - Delete it. This diff hasn't got any note there to be modified by this TS.
01:46:465 (
Timing section) -
As the next note 01:51:435 (1) belongs to another uninherited TS, I honestly don't think it's really necessary. It really is, because Taiko has some notes under the influence of this TS.
01:56:358 (1) -
Unsnapped!02:05:250 (
Timing section) - Delete it. This diff hasn't got any note there to be modified by this TS.
02:10:824 (1,2) - Spacing can be a bit confusing here. Can you separate (1) from (2)?
02:26:199 (2,3) - ^
03:12:621 (1) - Volume is only at 5%... Too quiet imo.
03:26:637 (7,1) - Spacing can be a bit confusing here. Can you separate (7) from (1)?
03:36:436 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - A stream splitted in 2 parts... Dunno if it's rankable.
03:42:466 (
Timing section) - I'm pretty sure this one's not necessary at all.
03:55:396 (1) - A bit close to (4) IMO.
03:59:164 (1) - Again, the end of this spin isn't even audible. Raise up the volume/delete the green section w/volume at 5%.
05:37:952 (1,1) - Both notes are too near from each other.
Kim's Taiko Oni:HP Drain -2?
This diff hasn't got a Taiko specific background. Call me in-game if you want one.
00:16:779 (X) - Add a note.
01:09:832 (100) - I'll be cool if this were a slider.
01:13:305 (X) - Though you're not folowing the lyrics here, it feels a bit empty without a note in this point.
01:15:832 (X) - ^
01:23:726 (138,139) - There's a gap without notes here. Can you add some that follow the music?
03:22:571 (821,822,823,824,825,826,827,828,829,830,831,832,833) - 1/6 stream @199 BPM = 1/4 stream @298.5 BPM orz... Consider adding a slider instead of a 1/6 stream with such high BPM.
03:42:466 (
Timing section) - I'm pretty sure this one's not necessary at all.
03:57:808 (X) - Though you're not folowing the lyrics here, it feels a bit empty without a note in this point.
04:17:104 (X) - ^
04:08:662 (31) - Slider instead of note?
04:27:958 (68) - ^
04:52:042 (153) - Consider adding a spinner until 05:02:581, which will be the beginning of the silent part.
06:03:882 (124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136) - Another 1/6 stream T_T
I wish you the best of luck trying to approve this map :3