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Yui Sakakibara - Nyanderful! (TV Size)

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Miya
Nih dd, hasil kk ngobrol sama Lilac soal artist name :)
chat with Lilac about Artist Name problem
15:01 <Miya> : Lilac, are you there? i want to ask something
15:29 <Lilac> : Sure.
15:29 <Lilac> : What's up?
15:33 <Miya> : emm, is Yui Sakakibara artist name rankable?
15:33 <Lilac> : How is it not?
15:34 <Miya> : so its rankable?
15:35 <Miya> : well, new rule said artist name from eastern country should start on surname first
15:35 <Lilac> : Oh yes.
15:35 <Lilac> : Definitely.
15:35 <Miya> : so? it's still rankable?
15:35 <Lilac> : Which means Sakakibara Yui would actually be correct.
15:35 <Lilac> : So technically...no.
15:36 <Miya> : it's unrankable then?
15:36 <Lilac> : Yep.
15:36 <Miya> : ok, thank you very much Lilac >.<
Kurai
Yo ~

General
  1. soft-hitclap is barely hearable, I increased the volume of it for you, it's sounds really better ! soft-hitclap.wav
    Now, you should work on your hitsounds (especially claps). :3
Niva's Nyan!
  1. 00:12:686 (1) - The end of this spinner is off-beat, so it looks weird. It would be much better if you end it somewhere where there is a beat such as 00:14:373 or 00:14:936 for exemple.
  2. 00:28:998 - If you listen to the music more carefully (listen with the 50% or 25% playback rate), you will notice that the pattern you have made should start here (because the drums starts here). Without a note here, the pattern seems late :/. So add a note ?
  3. 00:56:373 (1) - You are trying to follow the vocals here, but this slider doesn't, That's why this slider should be 1/2 longer.
Maya's Nyan!
  1. 00:51:686 (1) - When you play the map, I guess you feel that the reverse is too early, right ? It's because it is not in the rhythm. See, you have put this reverse on a blue tick, nevertheless there is nothing on this blue, that's why it seems odd when you play the map. I understand why you have done this but, really, you can't. You should do something like this instead :
  2. 00:54:686 (1) - ^
  3. 01:08:748 (3) - This anti-jump isn't a good idea at all. When you play the map, it looks like that (2) and (3) are only spaced by 1/2, but it's not the case, that's why it can be very confusing. Use the proper spacing please.
  4. 01:09:498 (5,1) - The comboing is unconsistent here. The new combo mak should be on (5) because it's where the singing restarts !
  5. 01:14:561 (3,4) - This pattern isn't correctly in the rhythm, do something like this to fix.
  6. 01:16:436 (2,3,4) - Same as 01:08:748 (3) about anti-jumping.
  7. 01:27:498 - It looks like something is missing here :/
Nyanderful!
  1. This difficulty doesn't have 1500ms audio lead-in as the other difficulties.
  2. 01:00:685 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Nothing in the music justify such a stream, you have only made it to make this part harder >:( Follow the music instead of doing this please D:
  3. 01:04:436 (3,4) - It's really hard to understand which is the slider and which is the circle. Do something like this instead, it would be more understandable : (select (4) and use ctrl+R)
  4. 01:14:561 (3,4) - Same as in Maya's Nyan!
1811's Taiko Nyan
  1. Move the difficulty settings to 5 (Taiko guidelines)
\:D/
Topic Starter
Maya-kira

KuraiPettan wrote:

Yo ~ haro~ xD

General
  1. soft-hitclap is barely hearable, I increased the volume of it for you, it's sounds really better ! soft-hitclap.wav
    Now, you should work on your hitsounds (especially claps). :3 yes sire ;u;7
Maya's Nyan!
  1. 00:51:686 (1) - When you play the map, I guess you feel that the reverse is too early, right ? It's because it is not in the rhythm. See, you have put this reverse on a blue tick, nevertheless there is nothing on this blue, that's why it seems odd when you play the map. I understand why you have done this but, really, you can't. You should do something like this instead :
  2. 00:54:686 (1) - ^
  3. 01:08:748 (3) - This anti-jump isn't a good idea at all. When you play the map, it looks like that (2) and (3) are only spaced by 1/2, but it's not the case, that's why it can be very confusing. Use the proper spacing please.
  4. 01:09:498 (5,1) - The comboing is unconsistent here. The new combo mak should be on (5) because it's where the singing restarts !
  5. 01:14:561 (3,4) - This pattern isn't correctly in the rhythm, do something like this to fix.
  6. 01:16:436 (2,3,4) - Same as 01:08:748 (3) about anti-jumping.
  7. 01:27:498 - It looks like something is missing here :/
yes sire ;u;7, all fixed ><

Nyanderful!
  1. This difficulty doesn't have 1500ms audio lead-in as the other difficulties.
  2. 01:00:685 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Nothing in the music justify such a stream, you have only made it to make this part harder >:( Follow the music instead of doing this please D:
  3. 01:04:436 (3,4) - It's really hard to understand which is the slider and which is the circle. Do something like this instead, it would be more understandable : (select (4) and use ctrl+R)
  4. 01:14:561 (3,4) - Same as in Maya's Nyan!
yes sire ;u;7, all fixed ><
\:D/
now rehitsounding ><
Leorda
Halo!

Sallad's Nyan!~

01:27:873 (1) - I think this spinner is kinda too short for easy diff. Try extend as possible

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Niva's Nyan!~
00:15:311 (1) - Many repeating slider with short slider are not allowed in normal diff. Because it's tough to tell when it's end for beginners
00:26:748 (3) - This object is touch the HP Bar. This issue makes impair for visibility of notes and approach circle (included in new guidelines)
00:32:936 (4) - Tail slider that stuck in HP Bar is ugly
01:03:498 (2,3) - I think this notes is almost going to offscreen (maybe?)
01:26:186 (5) - Same issue as 00:15:311 (1)

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Maya's Nyan!~
00:28:814 (T) - Unsnapped green timing points. It makes hitsound goes crazy if unsnapped (Maybe?)
00:51:686 (1) - Snap the repeating slider in red tick is feels good, IMO
00:54:686 (1) - ^
01:07:248 (8) - Move 5th sliderpoint to X:420 and Y:248. And move the last sliderpoint to X:332 and Y:280 (big nazi)

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Nyanderful!~
00:28:814 (T) - Unsnapped green timing points. It makes hitsound goes crazy if unsnapped (Maybe?)
01:04:623 (4) - Unsnapped tail slider. Fix this by pulling the last sliderpoint to anywhere (I wonder why Kurai-loli is miss this? lol)

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End of modpost, goodbye!
taiko_maniac1811

KuraiPettan wrote:

1811's Taiko Nyan
  1. Move the difficulty settings to 5 (Taiko guidelines)
Really O_O"
i didn't know that,ok changed...

so much for a good taiko teacher for maya ==
i told u i'm not a good teacher ><"


p.s Maya,are u using the OSB file? if no delete it please...

Download: Yui Sakakibara - Nyanderful! (TV Size) (Maya-kira) [1811's Taiko Nyan].osu
Miya
Dd, waktu kk nyoba2 AIbat ke map dd, kk nemu problem inkonsistensi yang harus di fix. Ini contohnya.
AIBat Warnings
These warnings were generated by AIBat.
[All .osu Files]
General and Metadata:

Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn:
- [1811's Taiko Nyan] : 1000
- [Maya's Nyan!~] : 1500
- [Niva's Nyan!~] : 1500
- [Nyanderful!~] : 1279
- [Sallad's Nyan!~] : 1500

Combo Colours:
Inconsistency in combo colours:

- [1811's Taiko Nyan] :
No custom colours.

- [Maya's Nyan!~] :
Combo1 : 83,255,251
Combo2 : 255,111,106
Combo3 : 255,248,98
Combo4 : 70,255,145

- [Niva's Nyan!~] :
Combo1 : 83,255,251
Combo2 : 255,111,106
Combo3 : 255,248,98
Combo4 : 70,255,145

- [Nyanderful!~] :
Combo1 : 83,255,251
Combo2 : 255,111,106
Combo3 : 255,248,98
Combo4 : 70,255,145

- [Sallad's Nyan!~] :
Combo1 : 83,255,251
Combo2 : 255,111,106
Combo3 : 255,248,98
Combo4 : 70,255,145


Kiai:
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [1811's Taiko Nyan] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:03:686, ends on 01:29:186

- [Maya's Nyan!~] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:21:686, ends on 01:24:686

- [Niva's Nyan!~] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:03:686, ends on 01:24:686

- [Nyanderful!~] :

- [Sallad's Nyan!~] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:03:686, ends on 01:24:686

Tolong di fix ya. :D
Topic Starter
Maya-kira

Leorda wrote:

Halo! loha :D

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[b]Maya's Nyan!~

00:28:814 (T) - Unsnapped green timing points. It makes hitsound goes crazy if unsnapped (Maybe?) there's no timing point in 28:814 o.o;;, but there are one close to it, used as the transition of S => S:C1
00:51:686 (1) - Snap the repeating slider in red tick is feels good, IMO modded by kuraipettan :D
00:54:686 (1) - ^ modded by kuraipettan :D
01:07:248 (8) - Move 5th sliderpoint to X:420 and Y:248. And move the last sliderpoint to X:332 and Y:280 (big nazi) fixed @_@;;

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Nyanderful!~
00:28:814 (T) - Unsnapped green timing points. It makes hitsound goes crazy if unsnapped (Maybe?) same as above ._.;;
01:04:623 (4) - Unsnapped tail slider. Fix this by pulling the last sliderpoint to anywhere (I wonder why Kurai-loli is miss this? lol) actually, he modded it ._.;; I just haven't updated T_T;;

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End of modpost, goodbye! thank you for mod leorda :3

Miya wrote:

Dd, waktu kk nyoba2 AIbat ke map dd, kk nemu problem inkonsistensi yang harus di fix. Ini contohnya.
AIBat Warnings
These warnings were generated by AIBat.
[All .osu Files]
General and Metadata:

Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn:
- [1811's Taiko Nyan] : 1000
- [Maya's Nyan!~] : 1500
- [Niva's Nyan!~] : 1500
- [Nyanderful!~] : 1279
- [Sallad's Nyan!~] : 1500

Combo Colours:
Inconsistency in combo colours:

- [1811's Taiko Nyan] :
No custom colours.

- [Maya's Nyan!~] :
Combo1 : 83,255,251
Combo2 : 255,111,106
Combo3 : 255,248,98
Combo4 : 70,255,145

- [Niva's Nyan!~] :
Combo1 : 83,255,251
Combo2 : 255,111,106
Combo3 : 255,248,98
Combo4 : 70,255,145

- [Nyanderful!~] :
Combo1 : 83,255,251
Combo2 : 255,111,106
Combo3 : 255,248,98
Combo4 : 70,255,145

- [Sallad's Nyan!~] :
Combo1 : 83,255,251
Combo2 : 255,111,106
Combo3 : 255,248,98
Combo4 : 70,255,145


Kiai:
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [1811's Taiko Nyan] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:03:686, ends on 01:29:186

- [Maya's Nyan!~] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:21:686, ends on 01:24:686

- [Niva's Nyan!~] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:03:686, ends on 01:24:686

- [Nyanderful!~] :

- [Sallad's Nyan!~] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:03:686, ends on 01:24:686

Tolong di fix ya. :D
yang audio lead in udah bener di dd ._. tapi fixed untuk taiko kiai ^^ thanks!~

KuraiPettan wrote:

General
[list][*]soft-hitclap is barely hearable, I increased the volume of it for you, it's sounds really better ! soft-hitclap.wav
Now, you should work on your hitsounds (especially claps). :3 yes sire ;u;7
FIX =>> good suggestion, but I think that one is too loud for the opening :3 (although the loudness is useful for me to fix pattern afterward)~ use it for kiai >w<

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oh and because sallad and niva is not available, I'll be the one who applies the mods .w. (won't tell which one I reject nor which one I accept though, sorry)

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alright~ ready to recheck >:'D
Topic Starter
Maya-kira
taiko nyan >< sorry, I accidentally press the give kudosu stuff T_T;;
taiko_maniac1811
so that's why i got 5 kudosu now...
anyway, me STAR ~☆ :D
Topic Starter
Maya-kira
thank you for star ;_; also sorry for the kudosu stuff-- wait lets just consider that for the osb file mod? ><;;
Kurai
I have denied the kudosu :3

Niva's Nyan!
  1. 00:14:842 - There is a heavy note note at the end of this spinner, so there's no need to silence it then.
Maya's Nyan!
  1. 00:58:811 (3,4) - This kind of jumps should be used only in insane difficulties because they are too big, and not every players could pass them easily (remember that hard difficulties aren't only played by good players!)
  2. 01:15:029 (4) - It sounds like a clap is missing at the beginning of it.
Nyanderful!~
  1. 01:00:686 (7) - This slider needs a new combo, it starts on a downbeat (big white tick) and the pitch in the vocals changes here.
  2. 01:15:123 (4) - As in Maya's Nyan!, this slider should be 1/4 earlier (with a clap at the eginning :3). Otherwise, it isn't in the music's rhythm.
Topic Starter
Maya-kira

KuraiPettan wrote:

I have denied the kudosu :3 ah, i see >< thanks~

Niva's Nyan!
  1. 00:14:842 - There is a heavy note note at the end of this spinner, so there's no need to silence it then. fixed
Maya's Nyan!
  1. 00:58:811 (3,4) - This kind of jumps should be used only in insane difficulties because they are too big, and not every players could pass them easily (remember that hard difficulties aren't only played by good players!) I'll think of it, but for now, I'll keep my jump (until I find a better pattern ;_;)
  2. 01:15:029 (4) - It sounds like a clap is missing at the beginning of it.fixed
Nyanderful!~
  1. 01:00:686 (7) - This slider needs a new combo, it starts on a downbeat (big white tick) and the pitch in the vocals changes here. fixed
  2. 01:15:123 (4) - As in Maya's Nyan!, this slider should be 1/4 earlier (with a clap at the eginning :3). Otherwise, it isn't in the music's rhythm.fixed
thank you kurai :D
Kurai
(Jump in Maya's Nyan! has been fixed)

Nyan Bubble ~
Topic Starter
Maya-kira
yay bubble ;u;!
Miya
congratz sis, for getting your first bubble. :D

Edit : Please clarify again, i still found some problem in your map with AIbat >.<

AIBat Warnings
These warnings were generated by AIBat.


[Storyboard]
No problems found.

[All .osu Files]
Combo Colours:
Inconsistency in combo colours:

- [1811's Taiko Nyan] :
No custom colours.

- [Maya's Nyan!~] :
Combo1 : 83,255,251
Combo2 : 255,111,106
Combo3 : 255,248,98
Combo4 : 70,255,145

- [Niva's Nyan!~] :
Combo1 : 83,255,251
Combo2 : 255,111,106
Combo3 : 255,248,98
Combo4 : 70,255,145

- [Nyanderful!~] :
Combo1 : 83,255,251
Combo2 : 255,111,106
Combo3 : 255,248,98
Combo4 : 70,255,145

- [Sallad's Nyan!~] :
Combo1 : 83,255,251
Combo2 : 255,111,106
Combo3 : 255,248,98
Combo4 : 70,255,145

Kiai:
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [1811's Taiko Nyan] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:03:686, ends on 01:24:686

- [Maya's Nyan!~] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:03:686, ends on 01:24:686

- [Niva's Nyan!~] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:03:686, ends on 01:24:873

- [Nyanderful!~] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:03:686, ends on 01:24:686

- [Sallad's Nyan!~] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:03:686, ends on 01:24:686


[Difficulty: 1811's Taiko Nyan]
No problems found.

[Difficulty: Maya's Nyan!~]
Snapping:

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
00:28:814


[Difficulty: Niva's Nyan!~]
No problems found.

[Difficulty: Nyanderful!~]
Snapping:

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
00:28:814


[Difficulty: Sallad's Nyan!~]
No problems found.
Kurai
You're right in Niva's Nyan!, the kiai should end at 01:24:686 >w<
HeatKai

KuraiPettan wrote:

You're right in Niva's Nyan!, the kiai should end at 01:24:686 >w<
Kurai baka D:
don't do careless work =w=
I should punish you X3
Miya
It's good that AIbat now work perfectly. x) You should try that software too Kurai.
Topic Starter
Maya-kira
fixed ^^
thank you~
Kurai
:3
Topic Starter
Maya-kira
thank you everyone ^^
(and I don't expect heatkai to show up lol, thanks heat-kun ^^!~)
HeatKai

Maya-kira wrote:

thank you everyone ^^
(and I don't expect heatkai to show up lol, thanks heat-kun ^^!~)
ninja'd
<--- mine
Topic Starter
Maya-kira
...thank you niva for the 6 star spam .//.;;
Yasora
as your request boss~ /OwO
Sakura
I'm sorry but the osz only includes 3 difficulties, please resubmit

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/199852
Sure
I'm just passing by,
You'd better change the artist to 'Sakakibara Yui' than 'Yui Sakakibara'.
http://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist?q=sakakibara
Kurai

Sakura Hana wrote:

I'm sorry but the osz only includes 3 difficulties, please resubmit

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/199852
How did it happen ? o.o
Even if the osz includes only 3 difficulties, other ones are still marked as "Latest version but not approved"
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/200289
Topic Starter
Maya-kira
okay, I'll try to fix it soon \:D/

edit: all fixed! >w<7
Kurai
Ok, everything should be in order now.
Rebubbled ~
Andrea
[Niva's Nyan!~]

00:28:998 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing here seems wrong to me.

[Nyanderful!~]

00:16:623 (6,1) - I don't really like this anti-jump.

That's it, fix and I'll rank!
Topic Starter
Maya-kira

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Niva's Nyan!~]

00:28:998 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing here seems wrong to me. fixed. I hope this is okay.

[Nyanderful!~]

00:16:623 (6,1) - I don't really like this anti-jump. [/color] fixed. I hope this is okay.

That's it, fix and I'll rank!
Andrea
You perfectly got what I meant!

Ranked~
Yasora
yayyy~~~ mayachii~~~ congrats~~~ xD *pelukkkkkkkkkkk* <3 <3
Niva
Finally ^^

Congratulations~
Suzully
Congrats Maya-chan and also Indonesian mappers :)
Oh well, though taiko is Malaysian who did a good job too!
taiko_maniac1811
Gratz Maya-chii :3
tq too Suzully :3
mekadon_old
Grats Maya-chauuuuuu <3
f e a r
Yay ranked~ \:D/
Congratulations Maya <3
-Nanase-
thank U~
Good Beatmaps
Dino99
Gratz~~~~~
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