Suzully wrote:

[1811's Taiko Nyan]

1. 01:03:686 (1) - Finish?
2. 01:15:686 (1) - ^

Suzully wrote:

01:24:686 (1,2,3,4) - It's hard to listen the sound due to low volume. I think normal player will be confused.
Increased the volume here (:

Miya wrote:

Hi dd, ini mod dari kk :3

General

1. Rule baru mengatakan kalo artist dari asia harus di tulis nama bekangnya dlu baru nama depan. Jadi Sakakibara Yui bukan Yui Sakakibara. Rule is rule, jadi unrankable stuff >.< referensi : viewtopic.php?f=80&t=56753 Sebenernya kalau nggak salah rule ini masih kontroversi, soalnya (kalau memang ini jadi diterapkan) semua Hatsune Miku harus jadi Miku Hatsune, etc. (referensi : viewtopic.php?f=80&t=56767)
   
   Niva's Nyan~
   
   1. Emm miya rasa volume hitsound 80% terlalu berisik deh. Apalagi waktu banyak finish sound di bagian seperti ini 00:58:061 (1,2,3,4,5,6). Diturunin jadi 65-70% gmn niva? Nggak ah (: 80 persen OK kok xD
   2. 00:00:686 (1) - Kata miya finish sound di pembukaan lagu kurang cocok deh. Soalnya ga ada suara bg yang mendukung. Jadi mending hapus aja. Deleted
   3. 00:02:936 - Gmn kalo dikasih note disini? Lebih masuk vokal kata miya. Err... Buat pattern-nya supaya tetap flowing susah >_< untuk sementara dibiarin dulu
   4. 00:06:686 (1) - Ini juga sama kayak pembukaan lagu. Mending di hapus aja.Deleted
   5. 00:29:186 - Gimana kalo di kasih note disini terus di stack diatasnya 00:29:373 (1). Rythimnya jadi lebih bagus kata miya. OK

Suzully wrote:

Seems like Indonesian mapper's collab TwT;; taiko-nyan is actually from Malaysia orz

[General]

• 
  Taiko and Nyanderful!~ has different lead-in from others.

fixed ><

[Maya's Nyan!~]

• 
  Some of pattern seems like be similar to Nyanderful!~ :cry I--I'm out of pattern

1. 00:39:311 (T) - Same as Nyanderful!~ fixed :3
2. 00:42:498 (T) - ^ fixed :3
3. 00:45:592 (T) - ^ fixed :3
4. 01:19:998 (1,2,3,4) - It's better not to change the spacing.fixed :3, since 3 peoples already point this out T_T;;

[Nyanderful!~]

1. 00:03:311 (5,6,7) - Looks crowded. How about moving (7) to x:364, y:316? fixed :3
2. 00:09:311 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^ fixed :3
3. 00:24:873 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Oh too big square jump. It's hard to play and not so fun imo. Try to make the spacing smaller, or try to remove 00:25:436 (1) and 00:26:186 (1). In the latter case, I guess the big jump will become good spice thank you >w< I'll change it if someone point this out again
4. 00:39:311 (T) - The volume is kinda low. fixed :3
5. 00:42:498 (T) - ^ fixed :3
6. 00:45:592 (T) - ^ fixed :3
7. 00:46:436 (2) - Why didn't you turn up the volume at this note? fixed :3
8. 01:00:685 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Wow beautiful stream!thank you ><?

Nyanderful is quite cute song<3
Good luck!

Miya wrote:

Hi dd, ini mod dari kk :3 hi kakak xD makasih modnya~

General

1. Rule baru mengatakan kalo artist dari asia harus di tulis nama bekangnya dlu baru nama depan. Jadi Sakakibara Yui bukan Yui Sakakibara. Rule is rule, jadi unrankable stuff >.< referensi : viewtopic.php?f=80&t=56753 ng... ngak tau deh ya >< apa dd tunggu MAT dulu aja orz
2. BGny kayak gepeng gtu, gimana kalo pake BG kk? download.php?id=68447 ng~ dd pikir-pikir dulu deh TwT
   
   Maya's Nyan~
   
   1. Diffnya uda lumayan bagus kq dd. Patternya uda bagus nya~ >w< makasih kak~
   2. 00:10:248 (8,9) - Hmm note ini lebih bagus di ketengahin deh. Terus di kasih new combo. Jadi kata kk mending pindahin ke x:256 y:308. Kalo di stack kurang bagus. sorry, no change ><
   3. Ritme finish soundnya coba dibuat kayak mapnya ka Sallad sama Niva deh dd.. Lebih bagus kata kk. Jadi gini deh, kasih finish sound di note yang kk sebutin :
      
      1. 00:15:311 (1) - di endpointnya fixed :3
      2. 00:21:311 (1) - di ednpointnya fixed :3
   4. 00:27:686 - Disini perlu dikasih note sama finish sound deh. Finish sound buat nutup irama finish sound sebelumnya. Cobain deh, lebih bagus kata kk. Oh ya stack aja di 00:27:873 (1). sorry, no change >< terlalu rame, soalnya sebelumnya uda ada finish.. Tapi, kalau soal tambah notenya mungkin bakal dd pakai kalau ada yang point out lagi :3
   5. 00:30:498 (9) - Emm, ini di endpointnya juga perlu finish sound deh. Di bgnya mendukung masalahnya >.< sorry, no change ><
   6. 00:31:998 - Kasih note? Lebih masuk vokal kalo di kasih note di sini kata kk. sorry, no change ><
   7. 00:51:686 (1) - Slider ini kurang enak didenger. Soalnya repeatny berhenti di blue line. Polaritynya jg jelek kalo tiba2 switch ke blue line tanpa perantara. Coba dibuat biar sldiernya endingnya di 00:52:436 dan repeatnya di 00:52:061. thank you >w< I'll change it if someone point this out again
   8. 00:54:686 (1) - Sama kayak atas, lakukan hal yang sama >.< thank you >w< I'll change it if someone point this out again
   9. 01:19:248 (8) - Bentuk slidernya agak aneh dd. Bisa dibuat simetris? Coba patternya dibuat kayak gini > http://puu.sh/9POT fixed :3
   Nyanderful!~
   
   1. 00:10:248 (8,9) - Sama kayak diff sebelumnya di ketengahin terus kasih new combo di 8? Daripada di stack.sorry, no change ><
   2. 00:19:998 (1,2,3) - Semua slider ini lebih baik berhenti di white line aja. Di blue line kayak yg off, g masuk lagu. thank you >w< I'll change it if someone point this out again
   3. 00:21:498 (3) - Kasih finish sound dd di endpointnya. fixed :3
   4. 00:31:998 - Gimana kalo dikasih note disini? Kata kk flownya jadi lebih bagus. iya sih-- tapi dd ikutin lirik >< if someone points this out again, I'll change it TwT
   5. 00:40:998 (3) - Slider ini hampir nyentuh 2 >.<. Di keatasin 1 grid terus dibuat lebih simetri dd. Kk liat kurang simetri. fixed :3
   6. 00:43:998 (3) - Sama kayak yg atas. fixed :3

Ok deh, segitu aja mod dari kk. Uda lumayan bagus kq. Kk kasih star ya x)
Good luck dd~

taiko_maniac1811 wrote:

maya~ put 1.5 lead-in time in my diff >< go
*me goes to bed ==zzzzz*

1. soft-hitclap is barely hearable, I increased the volume of it for you, it's sounds really better ! soft-hitclap.wav
   Now, you should work on your hitsounds (especially claps). :3
   

1. 00:12:686 (1) - The end of this spinner is off-beat, so it looks weird. It would be much better if you end it somewhere where there is a beat such as 00:14:373 or 00:14:936 for exemple.
2. 00:28:998 - If you listen to the music more carefully (listen with the 50% or 25% playback rate), you will notice that the pattern you have made should start here (because the drums starts here). Without a note here, the pattern seems late :/. So add a note ?
3. 00:56:373 (1) - You are trying to follow the vocals here, but this slider doesn't, That's why this slider should be 1/2 longer.

1. 00:51:686 (1) - When you play the map, I guess you feel that the reverse is too early, right ? It's because it is not in the rhythm. See, you have put this reverse on a blue tick, nevertheless there is nothing on this blue, that's why it seems odd when you play the map. I understand why you have done this but, really, you can't. You should do something like this instead :
   
2. 00:54:686 (1) - ^
3. 01:08:748 (3) - This anti-jump isn't a good idea at all. When you play the map, it looks like that (2) and (3) are only spaced by 1/2, but it's not the case, that's why it can be very confusing. Use the proper spacing please.
4. 01:09:498 (5,1) - The comboing is unconsistent here. The new combo mak should be on (5) because it's where the singing restarts !
5. 01:14:561 (3,4) - This pattern isn't correctly in the rhythm, do something like this to fix.
   
6. 01:16:436 (2,3,4) - Same as 01:08:748 (3) about anti-jumping.
7. 01:27:498 - It looks like something is missing here :/

1. This difficulty doesn't have 1500ms audio lead-in as the other difficulties.
2. 01:00:685 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Nothing in the music justify such a stream, you have only made it to make this part harder Follow the music instead of doing this please D:
3. 01:04:436 (3,4) - It's really hard to understand which is the slider and which is the circle. Do something like this instead, it would be more understandable : (select (4) and use ctrl+R)
   
4. 01:14:561 (3,4) - Same as in Maya's Nyan!

1. Move the difficulty settings to 5 (Taiko guidelines)

KuraiPettan wrote:

Yo ~ haro~ xD

General

1. soft-hitclap is barely hearable, I increased the volume of it for you, it's sounds really better ! soft-hitclap.wav
   Now, you should work on your hitsounds (especially claps). :3 yes sire ;u;7
   

Maya's Nyan!

1. 00:51:686 (1) - When you play the map, I guess you feel that the reverse is too early, right ? It's because it is not in the rhythm. See, you have put this reverse on a blue tick, nevertheless there is nothing on this blue, that's why it seems odd when you play the map. I understand why you have done this but, really, you can't. You should do something like this instead :
   
2. 00:54:686 (1) - ^
3. 01:08:748 (3) - This anti-jump isn't a good idea at all. When you play the map, it looks like that (2) and (3) are only spaced by 1/2, but it's not the case, that's why it can be very confusing. Use the proper spacing please.
4. 01:09:498 (5,1) - The comboing is unconsistent here. The new combo mak should be on (5) because it's where the singing restarts !
5. 01:14:561 (3,4) - This pattern isn't correctly in the rhythm, do something like this to fix.
   
6. 01:16:436 (2,3,4) - Same as 01:08:748 (3) about anti-jumping.
7. 01:27:498 - It looks like something is missing here :/

yes sire ;u;7, all fixed ><

Nyanderful!

1. This difficulty doesn't have 1500ms audio lead-in as the other difficulties.
2. 01:00:685 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Nothing in the music justify such a stream, you have only made it to make this part harder Follow the music instead of doing this please D:
3. 01:04:436 (3,4) - It's really hard to understand which is the slider and which is the circle. Do something like this instead, it would be more understandable : (select (4) and use ctrl+R)
   
4. 01:14:561 (3,4) - Same as in Maya's Nyan!

yes sire ;u;7, all fixed ><
\:D/

KuraiPettan wrote:

1811's Taiko Nyan

1. Move the difficulty settings to 5 (Taiko guidelines)

Leorda wrote:

Halo! loha

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[b]Maya's Nyan!~
00:28:814 (T) - Unsnapped green timing points. It makes hitsound goes crazy if unsnapped (Maybe?) there's no timing point in 28:814 o.o;;, but there are one close to it, used as the transition of S => S:C1
00:51:686 (1) - Snap the repeating slider in red tick is feels good, IMO modded by kuraipettan
00:54:686 (1) - ^ modded by kuraipettan
01:07:248 (8) - Move 5th sliderpoint to X:420 and Y:248. And move the last sliderpoint to X:332 and Y:280 (big nazi) fixed @_@;;

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Nyanderful!~
00:28:814 (T) - Unsnapped green timing points. It makes hitsound goes crazy if unsnapped (Maybe?) same as above ._.;;
01:04:623 (4) - Unsnapped tail slider. Fix this by pulling the last sliderpoint to anywhere (I wonder why Kurai-loli is miss this? lol) actually, he modded it ._.;; I just haven't updated T_T;;

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End of modpost, goodbye! thank you for mod leorda :3

Miya wrote:

Dd, waktu kk nyoba2 AIbat ke map dd, kk nemu problem inkonsistensi yang harus di fix. Ini contohnya.

AIBat Warnings

These warnings were generated by AIBat.
[All .osu Files]
General and Metadata:

Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn:
- [1811's Taiko Nyan] : 1000
- [Maya's Nyan!~] : 1500
- [Niva's Nyan!~] : 1500
- [Nyanderful!~] : 1279
- [Sallad's Nyan!~] : 1500

Combo Colours:
Inconsistency in combo colours:

- [1811's Taiko Nyan] :
No custom colours.

- [Maya's Nyan!~] :
Combo1 : 83,255,251
Combo2 : 255,111,106
Combo3 : 255,248,98
Combo4 : 70,255,145

- [Niva's Nyan!~] :
Combo1 : 83,255,251
Combo2 : 255,111,106
Combo3 : 255,248,98
Combo4 : 70,255,145

- [Nyanderful!~] :
Combo1 : 83,255,251
Combo2 : 255,111,106
Combo3 : 255,248,98
Combo4 : 70,255,145

- [Sallad's Nyan!~] :
Combo1 : 83,255,251
Combo2 : 255,111,106
Combo3 : 255,248,98
Combo4 : 70,255,145


Kiai:
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [1811's Taiko Nyan] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:03:686, ends on 01:29:186

- [Maya's Nyan!~] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:21:686, ends on 01:24:686

- [Niva's Nyan!~] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:03:686, ends on 01:24:686

- [Nyanderful!~] :

- [Sallad's Nyan!~] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:03:686, ends on 01:24:686

Tolong di fix ya.

KuraiPettan wrote:

General
[list][*]soft-hitclap is barely hearable, I increased the volume of it for you, it's sounds really better ! soft-hitclap.wav
Now, you should work on your hitsounds (especially claps). :3 yes sire ;u;7

1. 00:14:842 - There is a heavy note note at the end of this spinner, so there's no need to silence it then.

1. 00:58:811 (3,4) - This kind of jumps should be used only in insane difficulties because they are too big, and not every players could pass them easily (remember that hard difficulties aren't only played by good players!)
2. 01:15:029 (4) - It sounds like a clap is missing at the beginning of it.

1. 01:00:686 (7) - This slider needs a new combo, it starts on a downbeat (big white tick) and the pitch in the vocals changes here.
2. 01:15:123 (4) - As in Maya's Nyan!, this slider should be 1/4 earlier (with a clap at the eginning :3). Otherwise, it isn't in the music's rhythm.

KuraiPettan wrote:

I have denied the kudosu :3 ah, i see >< thanks~

Niva's Nyan!

1. 00:14:842 - There is a heavy note note at the end of this spinner, so there's no need to silence it then. fixed

Maya's Nyan!

1. 00:58:811 (3,4) - This kind of jumps should be used only in insane difficulties because they are too big, and not every players could pass them easily (remember that hard difficulties aren't only played by good players!) I'll think of it, but for now, I'll keep my jump (until I find a better pattern ;_;)
2. 01:15:029 (4) - It sounds like a clap is missing at the beginning of it.fixed

Nyanderful!~

1. 01:00:686 (7) - This slider needs a new combo, it starts on a downbeat (big white tick) and the pitch in the vocals changes here. fixed
2. 01:15:123 (4) - As in Maya's Nyan!, this slider should be 1/4 earlier (with a clap at the eginning :3). Otherwise, it isn't in the music's rhythm.fixed

KuraiPettan wrote:

You're right in Niva's Nyan!, the kiai should end at 01:24:686 >w<

Maya-kira wrote:

thank you everyone ^^
(and I don't expect heatkai to show up lol, thanks heat-kun ^^!~)

Sakura Hana wrote:

I'm sorry but the osz only includes 3 difficulties, please resubmit

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/199852

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Niva's Nyan!~]

00:28:998 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing here seems wrong to me. fixed. I hope this is okay.

SPOILER

[Nyanderful!~]

00:16:623 (6,1) - I don't really like this anti-jump. [/color] fixed. I hope this is okay.

SPOILER

That's it, fix and I'll rank!