thx~all fixedSallad4ever wrote:
Hi bakabaka, Colin ask me to mod this so here I am
[General][Yuki's Normal]
- Hmm I want confirmation on the second offset, I think it should be 35280
- Wait a minute, shouldn't the title be Microcosmos without spacing? holysoup already post it before but it seems that you haven't change it yet. Read this thread to do a title change. Consult with Colin if you have difficulty on it
- Use 2 second audio lead in for all diff (Colin's Hard already use it)
[Colin's Hard]
- 00:08:006 (1) - not perfectly symmetry, could you by chance make it more symmetry?
Here is the code if you don't want to trouble yourself96,304,8006,6,0,B|152:304|152:304|176:356|256:384|336:356|360:304|360:304|416:304,1,360,6|0- 00:11:643 (1) - ^
- 00:56:728 (2) - this is just me being very picky, but this linear slider are not very good looking. Maybe use a curve or wavy slider instead
- 00:58:603 (5) - I suggest to move this somewhere else, even if it just a little, this slider still overlapped by 00:56:728 (2) and this ruin all your neat patterns
- 01:18:395 (1,2,3) - I really think this should have the same rhythm as 01:21:311 (1,2,3) if you're following the background music
Something like this
- 01:18:395 (1) - move to 01:18:186
- 01:18:603 (2) - move to 01:19:020 then add circles at 01:18:603 & 01:18:811
- 01:19:645 (3) - move to 01:20:061 and remove 01:20:270 (4)
This will make the whole pattern have the same rhythm with the previous & the next combo- 01:41:103 (7) - NC (new combo) this
[Insane]
- 00:18:347 (2,3) - I honestly think this 1/4 beat are to pushing and unexpected (because it's a single circle at 1/4 beat) for this low pace of the song. A simple slider instead of 2 beats like this are good enough, or just use a 1/2 beat like the majority of rhythm you used on this part. The same case for 00:18:916 (4,5) & 00:26:188 (2,3)
Nice map. The jump on insane are a bit inconsistent but not all of them.
- 00:29:938 (1) - you don't need the timing section to increase volume here because spinner are already have increasing volume so adding another timing section to do it are redundant
- 00:36:311 (2,3) - this small jump between 2 big jumps, doesn't play very nice. You should give these the same spacing as the previous jump
- 00:40:686 (1) - I suggest you to use normal spacing for this one, it almost looks like 1/2 beat apart when it's actually a 1/4
- 00:55:686 (1) - this looks like a spacing infringement no matter how many time I see it, you should use spacing 1x here
- 01:01:311 (6,7) - this jump are too much. I suggest to use the same jump spacing as on 01:00:894 (4,5)
- 01:05:894 (6,7) - ^ use the same spacing as the previous jump
- 01:10:478 - maybe add a circle with soft-whistle here
- 01:29:020 (1) - same as 00:55:686 (1), it's better to use normal spacing here
- 01:29:436 - I suggest to add a circle here, there's a beat here if you listen closely to the music
- 01:45:895 (2) - hmm following your hitsound pattern, shouldn't this be a normal-hit?
- 01:51:936 (1) - remove the timing section on this spinner, it's redundant. Only use 1 timing section on the end of the spinner just like on Colin's Hard
Good Luck