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Gunther - Teeny Weeny String Bikini
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Topic Starter
Irc talk.
Timing needed another section at 125.490 ms
Then fixed just some beats.
This time osuplayer111 made a better map, more good looking.
Make another good difficulty and i'll star =3
Timing needed another section at 125.490 ms
Then fixed just some beats.
This time osuplayer111 made a better map, more good looking.
Make another good difficulty and i'll star =3
Topic Starter
Thanks Card 
EDIT: added normal, and fixed hard.
Moved to pending beatmaps.
EDIT: added normal, and fixed hard.
Moved to pending beatmaps.
[Normal]
0:16:818( )-> Add a hit circle on here. (1/4 beat ealier than 17:501(2) ).
[Hard]
3:15:489(7,8,9,10)-> Inconsistent spacing
That's it!
Have a star.
0:16:818( )-> Add a hit circle on here. (1/4 beat ealier than 17:501(2) ).
[Hard]
3:15:489(7,8,9,10)-> Inconsistent spacing
That's it!
Have a star.
Topic Starter
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Topic Starter
Bump!
I can't figure out if this Gunther guy is a big Weird Al-esque joke mixed with techno music or what.
(Stars)
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Topic Starter
Lol Behon i don't know too. XD Anyway thanks :3
Gunther... again... °.° XD
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Topic Starter
Thanks again. All fixed
Topic Starter
I check again all difficulties and i fix all problems i found. Now song is perfect. :3
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Topic Starter
Sorry Jar, but is my first map with much combo colours, and i don't want to change. And, for the hp drain i guess it's ok
Hello,
Bpm is slighlty off, for a perfect bpm use 131,970
[Normal]
00:16:82 (2) - spacing
00:31:59 (5) - new combo
00:38:64 (5) - new combo
00:40:68 (1) - undo new combo unless you want it there for fashion.
01:06:14 (6) - new combo
01:07:04 (8) - put this one top of fading (5) and fix the other beats.
01:10:23 (5) - new combo, 01:10:68 (1) - undo new combo
01:11:36 (1) - same, unless you want it there for fashion.
01:22:73 (6) - new combo,01:23:86 (1) - undo new combo
01:24:77 (2) - new combo, 01:25:91 (5) - undo new combo
01:56:36 (5) - when playing, the beginning of this slider looks ugly because of this beat here 01:56:14 (4) -
02:25:03 (2) - reput on top if slider's end
02:28:89 (4,5) - try moving these a bit lower so you get to see (5) better
02:32:76 (1) - move this beat to the previous red tick and snap it, or put it on top of slider's end
[Hard]
00:11:59 (1) - this doesn't match with slider's end, reput it on top and then snap the following beat.
00:13:41 (6) - allign with slider's end and span following beats
00:15:00 (1) - same
00:19:54 (4) - reput on top of slider's end
00:20:00 (5) - same
00:31:59 (2) - new combo
00:49:09 (3) - center this correctly between (1) and (2)
00:49:77 (4) - new combo
01:47:27 (4) - reput on top of slider's end
01:57:95 (4,5,6) - reput on top so they all match themselves
02:15:26 (6) - new combo
02:24:35 (5,6) - allign with slider's end
02:33:67 (6) - new combo
02:48:67 (4,5,6) - reput them on top of the slider's end
02:53:44 (4) - new combo, 02:57:08 (4) - new combo
03:08:21 (3) - ugly slider design
03:12:08 (1,2) - reput on top of slider's end
03:15:48 (7) - new combo
03:21:62 (4) - reput on top of slider's end
Bpm is slighlty off, for a perfect bpm use 131,970
[Normal]
00:16:82 (2) - spacing
00:31:59 (5) - new combo
00:38:64 (5) - new combo
00:40:68 (1) - undo new combo unless you want it there for fashion.
01:06:14 (6) - new combo
01:07:04 (8) - put this one top of fading (5) and fix the other beats.
01:10:23 (5) - new combo, 01:10:68 (1) - undo new combo
01:11:36 (1) - same, unless you want it there for fashion.
01:22:73 (6) - new combo,01:23:86 (1) - undo new combo
01:24:77 (2) - new combo, 01:25:91 (5) - undo new combo
01:56:36 (5) - when playing, the beginning of this slider looks ugly because of this beat here 01:56:14 (4) -
02:25:03 (2) - reput on top if slider's end
02:28:89 (4,5) - try moving these a bit lower so you get to see (5) better
02:32:76 (1) - move this beat to the previous red tick and snap it, or put it on top of slider's end
[Hard]
00:11:59 (1) - this doesn't match with slider's end, reput it on top and then snap the following beat.
00:13:41 (6) - allign with slider's end and span following beats
00:15:00 (1) - same
00:19:54 (4) - reput on top of slider's end
00:20:00 (5) - same
00:31:59 (2) - new combo
00:49:09 (3) - center this correctly between (1) and (2)
00:49:77 (4) - new combo
01:47:27 (4) - reput on top of slider's end
01:57:95 (4,5,6) - reput on top so they all match themselves
02:15:26 (6) - new combo
02:24:35 (5,6) - allign with slider's end
02:33:67 (6) - new combo
02:48:67 (4,5,6) - reput them on top of the slider's end
02:53:44 (4) - new combo, 02:57:08 (4) - new combo
03:08:21 (3) - ugly slider design
03:12:08 (1,2) - reput on top of slider's end
03:15:48 (7) - new combo
03:21:62 (4) - reput on top of slider's end
Topic Starter
Updated. Thanks minelli :3
This map ROCKS!
Really, good job. Perfect timing as for me.
Really, good job. Perfect timing as for me.
Topic Starter
Thanks a lot! ^^
Topic Starter
BumP
Topic Starter
... check this please
Topic Starter
Bump -_-
*teeny weeny string bikini*
[normal]
00:15:23 (1) - remove new combo
00:19:09 (1) - ^
00:21:36 (1,1,1) - ^
00:54:89 (1,1) - ^
01:19:09 (1) - ^
01:25:91 (5) - new combo
01:30:00 (1) - remove new combo
01:52:27 (1,1,1) - ^
02:05:49 - remove the 2nd offset
02:35:49 (1,1,1) - remove new combo
[hard]
00:24:89 (1,1,1,1) - remove new combo marks
00:30:34 (1,1,1,1) - ^
00:41:25 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^
00:46:25 (1,1) - ^
00:48:07 (1) - ^
00:48:41 (1) - ^
00:51:70 (1,1) - ^
01:11:70 (1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^
01:19:66 (1,1) - ^
01:23:98 (1,1) - ^
01:30:57 (1,1) - ^
01:48:75 (1,1,1,1) - ^
01:53:52 (1,1) - ^
02:05:49 - remove the 2nd offset
02:16:96 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - remove new combo marks
02:36:85 (1,1) - ^
02:42:64 (1,1) - ^
02:54:92 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^
03:09:92 (1,1) - ^
03:10:60 (1,1) - ^
03:17:98 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^
03:19:23 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^
03:24:01 (1,1) - ^
03:24:58 (1) - ^
good job just remove all those unnecessary new combo's :p. starred
[normal]
00:15:23 (1) - remove new combo
00:19:09 (1) - ^
00:21:36 (1,1,1) - ^
00:54:89 (1,1) - ^
01:19:09 (1) - ^
01:25:91 (5) - new combo
01:30:00 (1) - remove new combo
01:52:27 (1,1,1) - ^
02:05:49 - remove the 2nd offset
02:35:49 (1,1,1) - remove new combo
[hard]
00:24:89 (1,1,1,1) - remove new combo marks
00:30:34 (1,1,1,1) - ^
00:41:25 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^
00:46:25 (1,1) - ^
00:48:07 (1) - ^
00:48:41 (1) - ^
00:51:70 (1,1) - ^
01:11:70 (1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^
01:19:66 (1,1) - ^
01:23:98 (1,1) - ^
01:30:57 (1,1) - ^
01:48:75 (1,1,1,1) - ^
01:53:52 (1,1) - ^
02:05:49 - remove the 2nd offset
02:16:96 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - remove new combo marks
02:36:85 (1,1) - ^
02:42:64 (1,1) - ^
02:54:92 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^
03:09:92 (1,1) - ^
03:10:60 (1,1) - ^
03:17:98 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^
03:19:23 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^
03:24:01 (1,1) - ^
03:24:58 (1) - ^
good job just remove all those unnecessary new combo's :p. starred
Normal
See Hard mod. Notes under sliders need to be fixed here too.
00:21:25 (1) - Delete.
Otherwise, looks good.
Hard
I disagree with most spinners here. Really annoying.
00:11:59 (1) - Replace under 00:10:91 (5). You'll probably have to move the entire combo with it.
00:14:09 (8,9,10) - Move so (10) is above 00:15:00 (1,2,3,1).
00:19:54 (4) - Replace under (3).
00:20:00 (5) - Replace under (4).
00:27:61 (4,1) - Replace under (3).
00:31:59 (2,3) - Replace under (1).
00:55:91 (1) - Replace under 00:55:23 (6). You'll probably have to move 00:56:14 (1,2,3) with it.
01:07:61 (1,2) - Replace under 01:07:04 (8). You'll probably have to move (3,4) with it.
01:11:59 (1,1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Maybe instead do three 1/4's then a pause, three times? I think this will sound better. Also, you're missing a new combo at 01:11:82 (2).
01:23:41 (4) - Replace under (3).
01:30:68 (1,1) - Replace with slider?
01:47:27 (4) - Replace under (3).
01:52:27 (1) - Replace under 01:51:25 (5).
01:57:95 (4) - Replace under (3).
01:58:52 (5,6) - Replace under (4).
01:59:43 (1,2) - Replace under 01:58:86 (6).
02:13:67 (5) - Note here?
02:37:53 (2,3,4) - Colours?
02:45:26 (1) - Replace under 02:44:58 (3).
02:48:67 (4,5,6) - Replace under (3).
02:15:26 (6) - New combo?
02:57:08 (4) - Replace under (3). You'll probably have to move (4) with it.
03:12:08 (1,2) - Replace under 03:11:39 (3). You'll probably have to move (3) with it.
03:20:48 (1,2,3,4) - Move so (1) is above 03:19:80 (1).
03:21:62 (4) - Replace under (3).
See Hard mod. Notes under sliders need to be fixed here too.
00:21:25 (1) - Delete.
Otherwise, looks good.
Hard
I disagree with most spinners here. Really annoying.
00:11:59 (1) - Replace under 00:10:91 (5). You'll probably have to move the entire combo with it.
00:14:09 (8,9,10) - Move so (10) is above 00:15:00 (1,2,3,1).
00:19:54 (4) - Replace under (3).
00:20:00 (5) - Replace under (4).
00:27:61 (4,1) - Replace under (3).
00:31:59 (2,3) - Replace under (1).
00:55:91 (1) - Replace under 00:55:23 (6). You'll probably have to move 00:56:14 (1,2,3) with it.
01:07:61 (1,2) - Replace under 01:07:04 (8). You'll probably have to move (3,4) with it.
01:11:59 (1,1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Maybe instead do three 1/4's then a pause, three times? I think this will sound better. Also, you're missing a new combo at 01:11:82 (2).
01:23:41 (4) - Replace under (3).
01:30:68 (1,1) - Replace with slider?
01:47:27 (4) - Replace under (3).
01:52:27 (1) - Replace under 01:51:25 (5).
01:57:95 (4) - Replace under (3).
01:58:52 (5,6) - Replace under (4).
01:59:43 (1,2) - Replace under 01:58:86 (6).
02:13:67 (5) - Note here?
02:37:53 (2,3,4) - Colours?
02:45:26 (1) - Replace under 02:44:58 (3).
02:48:67 (4,5,6) - Replace under (3).
02:15:26 (6) - New combo?
02:57:08 (4) - Replace under (3). You'll probably have to move (4) with it.
03:12:08 (1,2) - Replace under 03:11:39 (3). You'll probably have to move (3) with it.
03:20:48 (1,2,3,4) - Move so (1) is above 03:19:80 (1).
03:21:62 (4) - Replace under (3).
I love.
[Normal]:
00:21:82 (1) - Clap here?
00:52:27 (1,2,3) - Have the (1) or so stack under the (7) slider?
[Hard]:
00:11:59 (1,2) - Move a little more to the right so it stacks?
00:55:91 (1,1,2,3) - Move a little to the right so the slider can stack?
02:16:74 (x) - Add beat?
02:39:58 (1,2,3) - What's with this rhythm...Makes no sense at all. (Like what does it follow, etc.)
03:12:08 (1,2,3) - Move a little to the right so the slider can stack?
You can also fix those stacked sliders and spaces by adjusting the slider's shapes.
I have to complain about the mp3...I recommend you adding a fade in and fade out. The abrupt end and start I don't like.
Star~
[Normal]:
00:21:82 (1) - Clap here?
00:52:27 (1,2,3) - Have the (1) or so stack under the (7) slider?
[Hard]:
00:11:59 (1,2) - Move a little more to the right so it stacks?
00:55:91 (1,1,2,3) - Move a little to the right so the slider can stack?
02:16:74 (x) - Add beat?
02:39:58 (1,2,3) - What's with this rhythm...Makes no sense at all. (Like what does it follow, etc.)
03:12:08 (1,2,3) - Move a little to the right so the slider can stack?
You can also fix those stacked sliders and spaces by adjusting the slider's shapes.
I have to complain about the mp3...I recommend you adding a fade in and fade out. The abrupt end and start I don't like.
Star~
Topic Starter
Starrodkirby86 wrote:
I love. Thanks
[Normal]:
00:21:82 (1) - Clap here? No, finish
00:52:27 (1,2,3) - Have the (1) or so stack under the (7) slider? Fixed
[Hard]:
00:11:59 (1,2) - Move a little more to the right so it stacks? Fixed
00:55:91 (1,1,2,3) - Move a little to the right so the slider can stack? Fixed
02:16:74 (x) - Add beat? No, if you see 01:10:68 (7,1,1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - i don't add too.
02:39:58 (1,2,3) - What's with this rhythm...Makes no sense at all. (Like what does it follow, etc.) Follow guitar.
03:12:08 (1,2,3) - Move a little to the right so the slider can stack? Fixed
You can also fix those stacked sliders and spaces by adjusting the slider's shapes.
I have to complain about the mp3...I recommend you adding a fade in and fade out. The abrupt end and start I don't like.
Star~
[Hard]
Maybe soft hitsound from 00:23:640 to 00:25:344?
00:25:11 (1) - Remove note? Try this. ^^
00:30:57 (1) - Maybe delete note?
02:00:68 (6) - Not sure about this, but... New combo?
02:49:58 (1) - Remove new combo?
And... Teeny Weeny String Bikini!
Maybe soft hitsound from 00:23:640 to 00:25:344?
00:25:11 (1) - Remove note? Try this. ^^
00:30:57 (1) - Maybe delete note?
02:00:68 (6) - Not sure about this, but... New combo?
02:49:58 (1) - Remove new combo?
And... Teeny Weeny String Bikini!
Topic Starter
tieff wrote:
[Hard]
Maybe soft hitsound from 00:23:640 to 00:25:344? No, all normal better
00:25:11 (1) - Remove note? Try this. ^^ Fixed
00:30:57 (1) - Maybe delete note? Fixed
02:00:68 (6) - Not sure about this, but... New combo? Fixed
02:49:58 (1) - Remove new combo? Fixed
And... Teeny Weeny String Bikini!
Topic Starter
Now the map is perfect, i don't found any problem
Normal:
Perfect
!
Hard:
00:20:00 (5) - Restack on end of slider.
00:48:64 (1,2) - Clap.
00:49:09 (3) - Clap at end.
01:57:95 (4) - Restack on end of slider.
01:58:52 (5,6) - ^
01:59:43 (1,2) - ^
02:39:80 (x) - Add note here.
02:40:37 (x) - ^ Stack on 02:40:48 (1).
02:48:67 (4,5,6) - Restack on end of slider.
03:21:62 (4) - ^
I think most of my suggestions make it sound better o:! Awesome map! Consider doing what Starrodkirby86 said about the mp3. Make it fade in and fade out.
Perfect
!Hard:
00:20:00 (5) - Restack on end of slider.
00:48:64 (1,2) - Clap.
00:49:09 (3) - Clap at end.
01:57:95 (4) - Restack on end of slider.
01:58:52 (5,6) - ^
01:59:43 (1,2) - ^
02:39:80 (x) - Add note here.
02:40:37 (x) - ^ Stack on 02:40:48 (1).
02:48:67 (4,5,6) - Restack on end of slider.
03:21:62 (4) - ^
I think most of my suggestions make it sound better o:! Awesome map
! Consider doing what Starrodkirby86 said about the mp3. Make it fade in and fade out.[Hard]
00:27:73 (1) - Take out New Combo here
00:27:95 (6) - New Combo Here
00:30:23 (1,1,1,1) - Take out New Combos
00:58:41 (1,1,1) - Claps? or take out New Combos...?
01:47:73 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Claps? eh...probably not.
02:17:30 (1) - Clap here?
02:17:76 (1) - ^
02:18:21 (1) - ^
03:17:98 (1,1,1,1,1) - Take out new combos
00:27:73 (1) - Take out New Combo here
00:27:95 (6) - New Combo Here
00:30:23 (1,1,1,1) - Take out New Combos
00:58:41 (1,1,1) - Claps? or take out New Combos...?
01:47:73 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Claps? eh...probably not.
02:17:30 (1) - Clap here?
02:17:76 (1) - ^
02:18:21 (1) - ^
03:17:98 (1,1,1,1,1) - Take out new combos
Topic Starter
UP
Everything is all good for me, just curious why some spinners are start on 1/4 and I saw 1 on 1/8?_?
Starred for now.
Starred for now.
Topic Starter
What spinner deepsea ? If you want i fix. And maybe you can bubble it