Kinda late~~
Some might be slightly more nazi than you need, fix what you want to
Seems odd to have 2 long breaks next to each other...would be nicer if you could spread them out more, or just delete one otherwise?
Keep the countdown consistent on every difficulty (either all off or all on)
Remove un-needed audio lead-in time on every difficulty
Make sure that every difficulty has a preview point set
Easy:
00:10:574 timing section isn't needed. Just make the main offset soft, same for any other difficulties that use it
00:20:679 (1) - all of these could be stacked slightly better
00:40:258 (4) - should be a clap to follow your previous pattern
01:13:732 (2,1) - avoid anti jump
01:16:258 (1,1) - could be more creative
01:37:732 (1,1,1,1) - not a good idea, isn't fun to play and beginners often have trouble with spinners
Normal:
Make HP/OD higher than Easy
00:14:837 (8) - add note (and move previous finish)
00:19:890 (8) - ^
00:26:047 (5,1) - avoid anti jump
01:05:363 (5) - same as earlier
02:35:521 (1) - start at 02:35:837 (end same place)
02:40:890 (1) - extend to red tick (same for the 4 after this)
Okamiroy's Hard:
Make OD at least as high as Normal (its very low for a Hard)
00:19:259 (5,6) - try not to have hidden repeats
00:23:205 (7) - new combo
00:24:785 (1) - remove new combo
00:25:732 (7) - new combo
00:30:785 (1,2,3) - hidden repeats, put them a different way
00:44:679 (1) - ends at an odd place to me, extend 2 white ticks?
00:50:996 (1) - ^
01:04:575 (5,6,7) - hidden repeat
02:13:100 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - same combo placement as I mentioned earlier
02:35:048 (8,1) - avoid anti jump
02:37:101 (1) - extend 2 white ticks
02:43:417 (1) - extend 1 white tick
02:58:574 (1,2,3,4) - hidden repeats
Insane:
Resnap all notes
Don't follow all the combos but will leave that for now
00:52:100 (8,1,2,3,4) - don't overlap
02:16:416 (3) - 2x doesn't fit to me
02:54:626 (1,1,2,3) - don't overlap
Angel_Beat']s Insane:
Claps seem odd at times and could probably follow more of a rhythm
Increase OD slightly to match more of an Insane?
Resnap all notes
00:17:363 (1) - odd place for a new combo
01:13:732 (3,1) - spacing
01:21:309 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - could be more interesting
01:53:837 (7,1) - ^
01:56:679 (1,1,1,1) - needs warning if you are keeping them, they are unexpected
03:03:625 (1) - separate start and end point more
Isn't looking too bad but needs slightly more work before I can star, call me back and I should be able to~
Some might be slightly more nazi than you need, fix what you want to
Seems odd to have 2 long breaks next to each other...would be nicer if you could spread them out more, or just delete one otherwise?
Keep the countdown consistent on every difficulty (either all off or all on)
Remove un-needed audio lead-in time on every difficulty
Make sure that every difficulty has a preview point set
Easy:
00:10:574 timing section isn't needed. Just make the main offset soft, same for any other difficulties that use it
00:20:679 (1) - all of these could be stacked slightly better
00:40:258 (4) - should be a clap to follow your previous pattern
01:13:732 (2,1) - avoid anti jump
01:16:258 (1,1) - could be more creative
01:37:732 (1,1,1,1) - not a good idea, isn't fun to play and beginners often have trouble with spinners
Normal:
Make HP/OD higher than Easy
00:14:837 (8) - add note (and move previous finish)
00:19:890 (8) - ^
00:26:047 (5,1) - avoid anti jump
01:05:363 (5) - same as earlier
02:35:521 (1) - start at 02:35:837 (end same place)
02:40:890 (1) - extend to red tick (same for the 4 after this)
Okamiroy's Hard:
Make OD at least as high as Normal (its very low for a Hard)
00:19:259 (5,6) - try not to have hidden repeats
00:23:205 (7) - new combo
00:24:785 (1) - remove new combo
00:25:732 (7) - new combo
00:30:785 (1,2,3) - hidden repeats, put them a different way
00:44:679 (1) - ends at an odd place to me, extend 2 white ticks?
00:50:996 (1) - ^
01:04:575 (5,6,7) - hidden repeat
02:13:100 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - same combo placement as I mentioned earlier
02:35:048 (8,1) - avoid anti jump
02:37:101 (1) - extend 2 white ticks
02:43:417 (1) - extend 1 white tick
02:58:574 (1,2,3,4) - hidden repeats
Insane:
Resnap all notes
Don't follow all the combos but will leave that for now
00:52:100 (8,1,2,3,4) - don't overlap
02:16:416 (3) - 2x doesn't fit to me
02:54:626 (1,1,2,3) - don't overlap
Angel_Beat']s Insane:
Claps seem odd at times and could probably follow more of a rhythm
Increase OD slightly to match more of an Insane?
Resnap all notes
00:17:363 (1) - odd place for a new combo
01:13:732 (3,1) - spacing
01:21:309 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - could be more interesting
01:53:837 (7,1) - ^
01:56:679 (1,1,1,1) - needs warning if you are keeping them, they are unexpected
03:03:625 (1) - separate start and end point more
Isn't looking too bad but needs slightly more work before I can star, call me back and I should be able to~