Hello~

from phonic & Laurier's Modding Queue


[General]

1. You should cut MP3

[Insane]

1. 00:37:964 (6) - add new combo?
2. 01:32:339 (5) - ^
3. 01:46:964 (1) - remove finish?

[Hard]

1. HP-1

[Normal]

1. It is suggestion
   SPOILER

   

[Easy]

1. HP+1 OD+1

That's all~

phonic wrote:

Hello~

from phonic & Laurier's Modding Queue


[General]

1. You should cut MP3

ok later...........

[Insane]

1. 00:37:964 (6) - add new combo? ok~
2. 01:32:339 (5) - ^ ok~
3. 01:46:964 (1) - remove finish?

no.....

[Hard]

1. HP-1

no sry

[Normal]

1. It is suggestion
   SPOILER

   

Time line ...??!>

[Easy]

1. HP+1 OD+1

1/3/1 is ok.....

That's all~

Thx for mod (・ω・)/

fixed mp3: http://www.mediafire.com/?rtk59axaeskrcrc

Hi~~

[General]
Maybe Offset is wrong.
I can't be correct,sorry~~
In my opinion,it was best to play then offset about -20 ~ -25ms.

You could probably crop mp3 since you aren't using 30% of it. But it's up to you.

[Easy]
No problem.
Great map

[Normal]
Great.

[Hard]
Great

[Insane]
awesome..

A replay attached.
Maybe Offset is wrong.
Download: terametis - iyuna - Emukko Kyun Kyun [Insane] (2011-11-13) Osu.osr

set -20ms
Download: terametis - iyuna - Emukko Kyun Kyun [Insane] (2011-11-13) Osu.osr

I wish your map is Ranked~~star~~
bye


Download: terametis - iyuna - Emukko Kyun Kyun [Insane] (2011-11-13) Osu.osr

terametis wrote:

Hi~~

[General] Yeah, it was some wrong offset after changing mp3 ><, now all fixed
Maybe Offset is wrong.
I can't be correct,sorry~~
In my opinion,it was best to play then offset about -20 ~ -25ms.

You could probably crop mp3 since you aren't using 30% of it. But it's up to you.

[Easy]
No problem.
Great map

[Normal]
Great.

[Hard]
Great

[Insane]
awesome..

A replay attached.
Maybe Offset is wrong.
[attachment=1:7b38c]terametis - iyuna - Emukko Kyun Kyun [Insane] (2011-11-13) Osu.osr[/attachment:7b38c]

set -20ms
[attachment=0:7b38c]terametis - iyuna - Emukko Kyun Kyun [Insane] (2011-11-13) Osu.osr[/attachment:7b38c]

I wish your map is Ranked~~star~~
bye

Thx 4 star and timing help ヾ(●・ｖ・人・ｖ・○)ノ and replays www xD

Source should be "Emukko Sisters".

and please add "Apricot Cherry" to tags.

Don't kds

from Aoi & Sp3's mod queue~

[genenal]
you need delete bgir.jpg and full updata again
Short Ver. ? If yes. you need change title "Emukko Kyun Kyun (Short Ver.)"

[Hard]
00:14:549 (4,5,6) - spacing?
01:02:362 (2,3,4) - :OO? not same spacing? fix it?

[Insane]
00:09:487 (1,2,1) - need same spacing?
00:12:487 (1,2,3) - ^
00:29:549 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - not squire?
02:03:674 (1,2,3,4) - same as other specing? I think jump is more fit here~
02:09:674 (2,3,4) - spacing~?

good map ~

Ertyukjh010's modding ><"

綜合

不放Kiai Time嗎 0.0??

Easy

01:52:987 (1) - 好像不對稱0.0

Normal

01:37:049 (4) - 這距離好像有問題（0.91x）

Hard

01:55:237 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/181526
02:13:049 (1) - 用正常距離好了
02:27:112 (1,1,1,1,1.....) - 沒特別原因的話，不要NC比較好

Insane

00:40:273 (3,4,5,6,7) - 我的話會刪掉(7)，然後(3,4,5,6)做距離1.61x的正方形Jump
01:12:674 (1,1,1) - 會誤讀啦> <
02:27:674 (1,1,1) - ^

嘛，這圖我不給Star會對不起自己（白做了TT
加油 > <
我想過幾天我就能玩了吧??

Request from Queue

[Easy]
00:25:237 (5) - +whistle
01:40:237 (5) - ^
01:28:799 - add green line: volume reduce to 45%
01:52:612 - try to add a note here(suggestion
02:13:237 (2) - +whistle(suggestion

[Normal]
00:31:589 - don't add note?
00:49:589 - ^

[Hard]
01:28:799 (6) - +whistle
02:03:674 (1) - ^

[Insane]
fine.

little mod dont need KDS._<

ertyukjh010 wrote:

Ertyukjh010's modding ><"

綜合

不放Kiai Time嗎 0.0?? no sry xD

Easy

01:52:987 (1) - 好像不對稱0.0 done

Normal

01:37:049 (4) - 這距離好像有問題（0.91x） done

Hard

01:55:237 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/181526 done
02:13:049 (1) - 用正常距離好了
02:27:112 (1,1,1,1,1.....) - 沒特別原因的話，不要NC比較好 i like it www ><!

Insane

00:40:273 (3,4,5,6,7) - 我的話會刪掉(7)，然後(3,4,5,6)做距離1.61x的正方形Jump hmm no, sry...
01:12:674 (1,1,1) - 會誤讀啦> < YAY! 111 xD
02:27:674 (1,1,1) - ^

嘛，這圖我不給Star會對不起自己（白做了TT
加油 > < 謝謝 wwww ></
我想過幾天我就能玩了吧??

Thx for star and mod (●′ω`人′ω`●)

AoiX wrote:

Request from Queue

(╭☞ｰ∀ｰ)╭☞Aoi's Mod

General

1. Green line on 00:43:705 that make change too suddenly.try to reduce the volume and use fade in.Also 01:58:705 it sounds much better now thx ><!
2. You can use kiai between 00:49:987~01:13:987 & 02:04:987~02:28:987.but it's depends on you~
3. You'd better cut off the part after 02:30:112

already cut lol, 15% of unused mp3 is ok~
Insane

1. 00:07:612 (4) - you have use a whistle on (3),so also add one on this circle to adapt.
2. 00:31:799 (4,5,6) - not overlap absolutely.
3. 00:49:049 (3,4) - add whistle on (3) and remove the one on (4)
4. 01:12:112 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1,1) - use 0.22x spacing 1/4 beat stream then follow three 0.3x spacing 1/2 beat circle will make player hard to divide.My advice is use same spacing. hmm no, if i use same spacing antijump will be like stream notes ><, no changes sry...
5. 02:27:112 (1) - ^

Hard

1. 00:25:987 (3) - forgot a finish here~
2. 00:48:674 (1,2,3,4) - same as Insane

Normal

1. 00:13:987 (1) - finish
2. 00:19:987 (4) - finish
3. 00:59:737 (7) - one grid down

Easy

1. N/A

All changed !
um...a enjoyable playing experience,so STAR~

Thx for help www ♡（´・ω・｀）/★

sherrie__fay wrote:

[Easy]
00:25:237 (5) - +whistle
01:40:237 (5) - ^
01:28:799 - add green line: volume reduce to 45%
01:52:612 - try to add a note here(suggestion
02:13:237 (2) - +whistle(suggestion hmm no, doesnt fit the vocal...

[Normal]
00:31:589 - don't add note?
00:49:589 - ^

[Hard]
01:28:799 (6) - +whistle
02:03:674 (1) - ^ hmm no, vocal again xD

[Insane]
fine.
Other changed~
little mod dont need KDS._< lol, 1PCFC U deserved it xDD

Thx sherrie__fay (♥∀♥)/

#modreqs stuff <3

Kyun ♪ Kyun ♪ (*･ω･)(･ω･*)

[General]
- Resnap all Inheriting Sections
- No Kiai Time? I suggest to put one from 00:49:987 to 01:13:987 & from 02:04:987 to 02:28:987
- no spinners at all?


Gah, I checked every diff. twice, they're all too sexy ;_;
Sorry, that I can't mod them :/

真心,作得很不錯呢..

marshall_racer wrote:

#modreqs stuff <3

Kyun ♪ Kyun ♪ (*･ω･)(･ω･*)

[General]
- Resnap all Inheriting Sections will Resnap soon
- No Kiai Time? I suggest to put one from 00:49:987 to 01:13:987 & from 02:04:987 to 02:28:987 dunno, maybe later .-.
- no spinners at all? my osu dont have spinners sry.....orz


Gah, I checked every diff. twice, they're all too sexy ;_;
Sorry, that I can't mod them :/

Thx \(･ω･*)

kanpakyin wrote:

真心,作得很不錯呢..

谢谢 （*^。^人^。^* ）

hi-

[General]

●fine

All suggestions

[Easy]

●HP+1.OD+1?
●01:54:487 (3) - spacing
●01:56:737 (2) - Move (x:190 y:218)
●02:27:487 (1,2,3) - change → http://puu.sh/8LcN

[Normal]

●HP+1? or OD+1?

[Hard]

●00:49:612 (1) - circle change? http://puu.sh/8Leb
●02:28:049 (1) - Move (x:187 y:230)

[Insane]

●fine~

Good map!!!!!!

-Gamu- wrote:

hi- Hi ~\('o'*)/ ♪

[General]

●fine

All suggestions

[Easy]

●HP+1.OD+1? no
●01:54:487 (3) - spacing it shold be ctrl+r, i forgot ><
●01:56:737 (2) - Move (x:190 y:218) ok~
●02:27:487 (1,2,3) - change → http://puu.sh/8LcN hmm... no....too boring .-.

[Normal]

●HP+1? or OD+1? ok~

[Hard]

●00:49:612 (1) - circle change? http://puu.sh/8Leb ok~
●02:28:049 (1) - Move (x:187 y:230) ok~

[Insane]

●fine~

Good map!!!!!!

Thx for mod ( *^-^)/

hihi,from queue.
你的图很不错，所以全部给你suggestion罢了

General:
你BG的，手的比例错了。。。。而且手指的角度也错了

INSANE
感觉slider velocity 不够快，对于insane来说失色了不少

00:12:487 (1,2,3) - 改成先来没有repeat的，然后有repeat的在后面
00:29:924 (3,4,5) - 感觉好像不适合用在这里
00:33:487 (1,2,3,4) - 可以用jump, 以视觉上的spacing取代电脑计算
00:49:987 (1) - 建议这里加kiai ，其实我不知道为何你不要加。。。
01:45:299 (4) - 直接用前面那个slider, ctrl + shift + s , scale 大。。。比较match吧
02:03:674 (1,2,3,4) - 其实我比较偏向在比较偏僻的地方用这种pattern叻，感觉比较好看
02:16:612 (7,8,9,10) - 以你作图的标准来说。。。太直了吧？

hard
01:10:612 (2) - stack 在 01:09:487 (7) - slider头的地方？
02:27:112 (1,1,2,3,1,1) - 这里又不是一个note一个note....不必new combo吧


normal
感觉没啥。。。图做的不错，但是difficulties spread就比较。。。大佬 你有看过normal这样多星的啊？

好图好图

request from my queue
2:28 : 3 diff

Insane
00:10:237 (1) - remove NC
00:31:612 (3) - clap
00:57:487 (7) - NC
00:57:862 (1) - remove NC
01:07:049 (1) - ^
01:25:799 (4) - overlap 1 this combo
01:30:299 (4,1) - this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/183563

199,133,90299,2,0,B|248:176|248:176|208:248|264:304,1,200,2|0
288,312,90862,6,0,B|329:308|363:331,1,80,8|0

01:32:362 (5) - NC?

hard
02:15:299 (2,3,4) - 1 grid down

Normal
02:13:987 (4) - this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/183574

256,240,133987,2,0,B|308:228|344:192|344:192|376:228|432:240,1,200,2|0

Good mapset and lovely song.good luck on ranked

As requested

[General]

- You need to add KayeSara to tags to all diffs because of taiko guest diff.
- The tag Emukko isn't necessary since it's already in the title. Also, are you sure about the tags lost rarities ? I search around and they're apparently a doujin group, but I don't think they make/contribute anything to the game. http://vndb.org/p1075 so perhaps remove it. Consider adding visual novel & opening to tags. According to this http://nicosound.anyap.info/sound/sm15962574. It's a song that play on the title screen so if you think this isn't the opening, don't need to add. I think this is the full version so add it to tags?
- There is no background for KS's Taiko? Be sure to get one and full submit.

I guess everything else is fine, very hard to find information on this game.

[Easy]

00:46:987 (3,4) - I think you should do hit circle first then repeating slider. I can hear vocal at 00:48:862 which make me hit (4) too early so this will make it nicer to play. I guess place like this? http://puu.sh/94jZ.

Hm looks good, slider velocity a little bit too low for my taste.

[Normal]

00:07:987 (1) - I personally think you should Ctrl+H it so it points to the next note.
00:09:487 (1) - Similarly here, Ctrl+J it so it points to the next note and so it is symmetrical with 00:10:987 (1). Pointing notes to the next note usually always give nicer flow.
00:49:049 (2) - I feel a short slider fits the vocal better since "Kyun" is one word. Two hit circles make it feel like it's two words. Also to give variety since you used lot of double stacking like this here. Place like this I guess http://puu.sh/94lQ.
00:51:205 (3) - Nicer if (3) points to (4). I think you didn't do since you wanted to try something a little more interesting so perhaps place like this? http://puu.sh/94mC
00:56:737 (2) - ^ similarly here, I guess move (2,3,4) like this? http://puu.sh/94nn
01:12:862 (2,3) - Feel a little too hard to play for Normal, just use a slider instead. http://puu.sh/94nM
01:37:237 (4) - Hm, I feel white tick feels nicer probably because I can hear vocal at 01:37:424. There is no vocal at 01:30:674 so that's why I didn't find that part confusing. Place (1,2,3) here http://puu.sh/94oY and (4,5,6) http://puu.sh/94p1. All the spacing should be perfectly 1.0x.
02:11:737 (2) - Prefer if this point to the next note, for this pattern, a wave slider is perfect imo. So like this? http://puu.sh/94py.

All suggestions are mainly to make the flow a little nicer, pretty good map.

[Hard]

- You may want to -1 hp drain / overall difficulty to tone down the diff a little.

02:27:112 (1,1,2,3,1,1,1,1) - I don't see any reason for the new combo spam here, doesn't look good and I'm not sure what you're trying to do with it. Sorry if other modder already mention and you already give a reason why you wanted to do this.

Other then, seems nice, all the streams play nicely. It's slightly harder than a typical Hard so -1hp/od will help (preferably hp since you can't really notice the od much unless you're trying to 100% a song).

[Insane]

- Doesn't feel that much harder than Hard, +1 od perhaps?

00:50:737 (3,4,5) - I think this is better http://puu.sh/94s5 since it seem you want to do a sort of back and forth, but for some reason, (4,5) points to the same direction which really break this pattern flow. Also put (1,2) like this http://puu.sh/94su.

Nice map in general, just try to fix the above pattern, since it doesn't flow as well as the other patterns in this diff.

Map looks good, starred. Good luck!

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue
2:28 : 3 diff

Insane
00:10:237 (1) - remove NC ok
00:31:612 (3) - clap ooops....forgot ><
00:57:487 (7) - NC no
00:57:862 (1) - remove NC no
01:07:049 (1) - ^ no
01:25:799 (4) - overlap 1 this combo ok
01:30:299 (4,1) - this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/183563 ok

199,133,90299,2,0,B|248:176|248:176|208:248|264:304,1,200,2|0
288,312,90862,6,0,B|329:308|363:331,1,80,8|0

01:32:362 (5) - NC? ok

hard
02:15:299 (2,3,4) - 1 grid down ok

Normal
02:13:987 (4) - this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/183574 ok

256,240,133987,2,0,B|308:228|344:192|344:192|376:228|432:240,1,200,2|0

Good mapset and lovely song.good luck on ranked

Thx for mod (●･ω･)ﾉ

Thx for mod and star （#⌒０⌒#）／

Hi Nymph here and request from my queue.

General:
TAGs are different in each diff, add sisters in Insane and taiko diff tag.

lots of green timing section seem didn't snap well in every diff, I wonder if they have affect your hitsounds.


Easy:
Beatmap design/suggestion
02:03:487 (3) - nazi: change to - X256 Y212?


Normal:
Hitsound
00:18:487 (4) - add whistle too? finish is a bit quiet compared with the whistle before. just personal opinion.
others fine for me.


Hard:
Beatmap design/suggestion
02:27:112 (1,1,2,3,1,1,1,1) - actually I don't see these new combos necessary... consider remove them.


Insane:
fun, nothing I want to nazi about.


^^fun map and cute song~ since it already got 8 stars I am gonna save 1... good luck~

Hi.

Request from my modding queue:


Easy

1. 02:25:237 (x) - 叠一个NOTE在(4)上
2. 02:04:401 (T) - 没用的绿线

Normal

1. 00:19:595 (T) - 没用的绿线
2. 00:59:737 (7) - NC , 01:00:487 (1) - RNC
3. 01:37:612 (5,6) - 换成slider吗 这两个有点突然的感觉 之前几个红线 节奏还蛮连贯的
4. 00:49:401 (T) - 没用的绿线
5. 02:04:401 (T) - ^

Hard

1. 00:25:237 (4) - Ctrl+R 感觉更流畅
2. 00:43:987 (4,5) - 形状换下? flow更好一点， 现在有点奇怪。。
3. 02:04:401 (T) - 没用的绿线

Insane

1. 01:58:612 (7) - 为什么突然轻了下来= =?
2. 02:04:401 (T) - 没用的绿线

I'll finish it in those days, anyway, star first

Hi there, mod from queue~

General:
Tags not exactly same, pay attention to insane diff plz

completely no kiai time...just a suggestion, 01:01:987 - 01:13:987 and 02:16:621 - 02:28:987 could be set as kiai time

Easy:
00:17:737 (4) - consider to add a whistle at end?
00:54:487 (2) - just a suggestion: extend slider to next white line
01:03:487 (2) - ^


Normal:
00:18:487 (4) - whistle?
00:25:612 (5) - ^
01:37:612 (5,6) - suggest to move foward to red line...or add a note at 01:37:424...i felt strange when i test here...


Hard:
HP-1, OD-1, just a suggestion

00:15:862 (1) - it looks a little strange that it is a unique 'hard turning' slider but not special rhythm or beats...maybe u wanna emphasize it but i cannot find any reason to do so....

00:37:799 (4) - maybe u can add a hit sound here?

01:33:299 (3) - add a S:C1 Whistle at the end?


Insane:

suggestion: some sliders are not symmetrical very well, i suppose maybe u wanna make them symmetrical, for example, 02:28:612 (2) - and 01:45:299 (4) - , i thought u can adjust the shapes better:)



actually, it's pretty a nice map~~I suppose it's ready for ranked:)

Nymph wrote:

Hi Nymph here and request from my queue. Hi ></

General:
TAGs are different in each diff, add sisters in Insane and taiko diff tag. dunno how could this happen >< , fixed

lots of green timing section seem didn't snap well in every diff, I wonder if they have affect your hitsounds. will recheck them now...


Easy:
Beatmap design/suggestion
02:03:487 (3) - nazi: change to - X256 Y212? ok~


Normal:

Hitsound
00:18:487 (4) - add whistle too? finish is a bit quiet compared with the whistle before. just personal opinion.
others fine for me. hmm...no ><


Hard:
Beatmap design/suggestion
02:27:112 (1,1,2,3,1,1,1,1) - actually I don't see these new combos necessary... consider remove them. already changed them, i guess i just forgot to update ><



Insane:
fun, nothing I want to nazi about.


^^fun map and cute song~ since it already got 8 stars I am gonna save 1... good luck~
since u so greedy i wont give kd then.... wwwwww thx ( ＾▽＾)/

Thx for mod 愛［*´ω｀人´ω｀*］愛

S h i o n wrote:

:) Hi. Hi (^ ^*)/

Request from my modding queue:


Easy

1. 02:25:237 (x) - 叠一个NOTE在(4)上 changed
   
2. 02:04:401 (T) - 没用的绿线

Normal

1. 00:19:595 (T) - 没用的绿线
2. 00:59:737 (7) - NC , 01:00:487 (1) - RNC
3. 01:37:612 (5,6) - 换成slider吗 这两个有点突然的感觉 之前几个红线 节奏还蛮连贯的
4. 00:49:401 (T) - 没用的绿线
5. 02:04:401 (T) - ^

Hard

1. 00:25:237 (4) - Ctrl+R 感觉更流畅 done
   
2. 00:43:987 (4,5) - 形状换下? flow更好一点， 现在有点 奇怪。。 changed~
3. 02:04:401 (T) - 没用的绿线

Insane

1. 01:58:612 (7) - 为什么突然轻了下来= =? not sure what it means, but changed ^-^
2. 02:04:401 (T) - 没用的绿线

Useless timelines deleted thx ><!

Thx 4 mod (/^-^)/

done

Download: iyuna - Emukko Kyun Kyun (cRyo[iceeicee]) [KS's Taiko].osu

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there, mod from queue~ Hi~ ( ´ ▽ ` )ﾉ

General:
Tags not exactly same, pay attention to insane diff plz

completely no kiai time...just a suggestion, 01:01:987 - 01:13:987 and 02:16:621 - 02:28:987 could be set as kiai time

Easy:
00:17:737 (4) - consider to add a whistle at end? ok~
00:54:487 (2) - just a suggestion: extend slider to next white line hmm..no
01:03:487 (2) - ^


Normal:
00:18:487 (4) - whistle? ok
00:25:612 (5) - ^ no, it should be normalhit, not wistle/ect
01:37:612 (5,6) - suggest to move foward to red line...or add a note at 01:37:424...i felt strange when i test here... changed


Hard:
HP-1, OD-1, just a suggestion nah...ill keep 6/6

00:15:862 (1) - it looks a little strange that it is a unique 'hard turning' slider but not special rhythm or beats...maybe u wanna emphasize it but i cannot find any reason to do so.... changed

00:37:799 (4) - maybe u can add a hit sound here? no, normal hit again ><

01:33:299 (3) - add a S:C1 Whistle at the end? no . .. ><


Insane:

suggestion: some sliders are not symmetrical very well, i suppose maybe u wanna make them symmetrical, for example, 02:28:612 (2) - and 01:45:299 (4) - , i thought u can adjust the shapes better:) changed first one, but didnt found anything wrong with 2-nd slider ><



actually, it's pretty a nice map~~I suppose it's ready for ranked:)

Thx for mod (^-^)/

KayeSara wrote:

done

Thank you for ban also wwww (^-^*)

taiko mod as requested.

00:38:924 - d k
00:48:112 - d k
00:48:674 - k d d k, you may also consider to finish on all 4 notes
00:52:612 - d to fit the pattern afterwards
01:04:612 - d, ^
the second half is just copying the first half so skipped

repeats works well, but I expect more variation~
7.5/10, good luck ~

wmfchris wrote:

taiko mod as requested.

00:38:924 - d k
00:48:112 - d k
00:48:674 - k d d k, you may also consider to finish on all 4 notes
00:52:612 - d to fit the pattern afterwards
01:04:612 - d, ^
the second half is just copying the first half so skipped

repeats works well, but I expect more variation~
7.5/10, good luck ~

Fix all and the same issue in the second part, anyway, I'll make some varitations, lazy always Orz.....

Download: iyuna - Emukko Kyun Kyun (cRyo[iceeicee]) [KS's Taiko].osu

Hiiiii.Time for m4m

[Overall]
Awesome.
One thing I hv to complain is
Let the break at1:14:080 delay to 01:16:987(All diffs)
Oh no...I saw where you live...You live in China...So you can speak in Chinese?
My English is bad.If you have somewhere not understand.Ask me in IRC or PM me

[Easy]
00:25:987 (1) - You can see it's not balance in the way.You have better to make it more balance.And it will be more beautiful
00:27:487 (2) - It's a copy of ^.Am I right?So,copy the same thing after fixing ^,
00:28:987 (1,2) - ^
01:12:862 (2) - Del whistle at the beginning.Add Finish at the end.
01:32:737 (1) - End-Add custom1 Finish
02:03:487 (3) - Change it to 02:03:674 Don't forget about the spacing :>
02:13:237 (2) - 02:13:049
02:28:049 (2) - Del whistle....


[Normal]
00:12:487 (1) - Delete the slider whistle
02:13:987 (4) - Ugly

Well done in this diff.


[Hard]
00:18:299 (4) - Add whistle at the U-turn
00:37:237 (1,2,3) - Jump larger will be better
01:42:299 (4) - Add whistle at the U-turn
01:45:299 (6) - ^
01:51:299 (6) - ^

[Insane]
00:05:924 (4) - Let the U-trun keep right
00:07:612 (4,5,6,7) - This stream should be tortuous
00:36:299 (9) - Add whistle at the U-turn
01:01:612 (6,7,8,9) - This stream should be tortuous
02:16:612 (7,8,9) - ^


[After Modding]
Really,it's a awesome map.
I think it's ready for buble and rank~
You can ask some mat or bat to bubble it and then let it rank...
I will star it if I hv kd.
Good luck!

General
nicemap.
00:49:987 - would be a great place to start kiai. end it at the break.
02:04:987 - ^except end of map

Easy
Nothing much. Some of the sliders were kind of strangely shaped, and not in a good way. Smoother sliders are better imo.

Normal
Pretty nice.

Hard
00:28:799 (1,2,3) - i'm somewhat ok with the needless triples all over, but these are very unforgiving and not flowing at all.
00:52:612 (7) - very hard to read. move over to the left?

Insane
Very nice use of offbeat sliders, i'm impressed.
01:30:299 (4) - ugly, replace with a note and a slider starting on the white tick?
good otherwise.

Thx for mod and star (･ω･)ノ

Shiirn wrote:

General
nicemap.
00:49:987 - would be a great place to start kiai. end it at the break. dont like kiai sry ><
02:04:987 - ^except end of map

Easy
Nothing much. Some of the sliders were kind of strangely shaped, and not in a good way. Smoother sliders are better imo. changed 4 sliders

Normal
Pretty nice.

Hard
00:28:799 (1,2,3) - i'm somewhat ok with the needless triples all over, but these are very unforgiving and not flowing at all. #2 removed
00:52:612 (7) - very hard to read. move over to the left? ok~

SPOILER

Insane
Very nice use of offbeat sliders, i'm impressed.
01:30:299 (4) - ugly, replace with a note and a slider starting on the white tick? changed

SPOILER

good otherwise.

Thx for mod ></

wmfchris wrote:

taiko mod as requested.

00:38:924 - d k
00:48:112 - d k
00:48:674 - k d d k, you may also consider to finish on all 4 notes
00:52:612 - d to fit the pattern afterwards
01:04:612 - d, ^
the second half is just copying the first half so skipped

repeats works well, but I expect more variation~
7.5/10, good luck ~

missed ur post somehow ....sry ><

Thx for mod (^^ )/