As requested
[
General]
- You need to add
KayeSara to tags to all diffs because of taiko guest diff.
- The tag
Emukko isn't necessary since it's already in the title. Also, are you sure about the tags
lost rarities ? I search around and they're apparently a doujin group, but I don't think they make/contribute anything to the game.
http://vndb.org/p1075 so perhaps remove it. Consider adding
visual novel &
opening to tags. According to this
http://nicosound.anyap.info/sound/sm15962574. It's a song that play on the title screen so if you think this isn't the opening, don't need to add. I think this is the
full version so add it to tags?
- There is no background for KS's Taiko? Be sure to get one and full submit.
I guess everything else is fine, very hard to find information on this game.
[
Easy]
00:46:987 (3,4) - I think you should do hit circle first then repeating slider. I can hear vocal at 00:48:862 which make me hit (4) too early so this will make it nicer to play. I guess place like this?
http://puu.sh/94jZ.
Hm looks good, slider velocity a little bit too low for my taste.
[
Normal]
00:07:987 (1) - I personally think you should Ctrl+H it so it points to the next note.
00:09:487 (1) - Similarly here, Ctrl+J it so it points to the next note and so it is symmetrical with 00:10:987 (1). Pointing notes to the next note usually always give nicer flow.
00:49:049 (2) - I feel a short slider fits the vocal better since "Kyun" is one word. Two hit circles make it feel like it's two words. Also to give variety since you used lot of double stacking like this here. Place like this I guess
http://puu.sh/94lQ.
00:51:205 (3) - Nicer if (3) points to (4). I think you didn't do since you wanted to try something a little more interesting so perhaps place like this?
http://puu.sh/94mC00:56:737 (2) - ^ similarly here, I guess move (2,3,4) like this?
http://puu.sh/94nn01:12:862 (2,3) - Feel a little too hard to play for Normal, just use a slider instead.
http://puu.sh/94nM01:37:237 (4) - Hm, I feel white tick feels nicer probably because I can hear vocal at 01:37:424. There is no vocal at 01:30:674 so that's why I didn't find that part confusing. Place (1,2,3) here
http://puu.sh/94oY and (4,5,6)
http://puu.sh/94p1. All the spacing should be perfectly 1.0x.
02:11:737 (2) - Prefer if this point to the next note, for this pattern, a wave slider is perfect imo. So like this?
http://puu.sh/94py.
All suggestions are mainly to make the flow a little nicer, pretty good map.
[
Hard]
- You may want to -1 hp drain / overall difficulty to tone down the diff a little.
02:27:112 (1,1,2,3,1,1,1,1) - I don't see any reason for the new combo spam here, doesn't look good and I'm not sure what you're trying to do with it. Sorry if other modder already mention and you already give a reason why you wanted to do this.
Other then, seems nice, all the streams play nicely. It's slightly harder than a typical Hard so -1hp/od will help (preferably hp since you can't really notice the od much unless you're trying to 100% a song).
[
Insane]
- Doesn't feel that much harder than Hard, +1 od perhaps?
00:50:737 (3,4,5) - I think this is better
http://puu.sh/94s5 since it seem you want to do a sort of back and forth, but for some reason, (4,5) points to the same direction which really break this pattern flow. Also put (1,2) like this
http://puu.sh/94su.
Nice map in general, just try to fix the above pattern, since it doesn't flow as well as the other patterns in this diff.
Map looks good, starred. Good luck!