As requested,
a bit late, lol modding two maps in a row with 1 normal 1 hard 2 insane.
Like this song, but don't like remix through.
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General- Bishoujo Game Remix? I thought this was the op for an OVA, but oh well.
Everything else seems fine.
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Normal]
- I'll be modding this like a Easy.
00:05:777 (3,4,5) - Repeating slider work perfectly here, why not do it? I feel 5 hit circles in a row is a bit too much for the easiest diff. Suggestion on how to put
http://puu.sh/8F8m.
00:10:916 (3,4) - 6 hit circles in a row
Slider instead for these notes please.
http://puu.sh/8F8D00:36:936 (5,6,1) - Hm, I feel it play nicer if you place it more like this
http://puu.sh/8F8W. Box pattern feel a bit unnatural to play most of the time.
00:49:464 (2,3,4) - Don't really like this straight pattern. Make (2.3) a slider and place like this
http://puu.sh/8F9m. I didn't suggest for 00:52:034 (2,3,4) as it seems fine to me.
00:54:604 (2,3,4) - Making less boxy feel more natural to play
http://puu.sh/8F9D.
00:57:174 (2,3,4,5) - I don't really like to see stack like this in the easiest difficulty. Making two short sliders feel nicer to me.Place something like this I guess
http://puu.sh/8F9M.
00:59:744 (3,4,5) - ^ don't like to see stack like this. Consider repeating slider instead if you want to keep the same feel, but since there is lot of repeating slider here, if you can space it out, would be better.
01:05:205 (2,3,4) - You should probably get the idea by now, make less box-like for more natural flow.
01:07:453 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 00:57:174.
01:10:344 (3,4) - If you can adjust this to be less box like, would be nice.
01:15:163 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - So many hit circles in a row. I don't really think it fits since some notes are more accented then other. I would make (1,2) a slider and (4,5,6) a repeating slider. I would place something like this
http://puu.sh/8Fb9.
01:25:442 (3,4,5) - Suggesting a repeating slider for reasons that I've mentioned before, but if you want to keep it to make the parts at kiai time a bit more intense, I guess it's fine.
01:30:582 (3,4) - Slider instead, nicer to play for the next note as the slider "finishes" the combo.
01:35:079 (4,5) - ^ same reason, to "finish" the section.
01:49:535 (1,2,3,4) - Would prefer a hexagon/star shape
http://puu.sh/8FbV.
01:56:923 (5,1,2) - Like this
http://puu.sh/8Fc5.
As you can see, I don't like box/straight patterns. Main reason why I want you to simplify all those pattern is that this is the easiest diff. It's quite nice through, don't worry too much about the long mod for Normal.
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0OoMickeyoO0's Hard]
Nothing to really point out, nice map.
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Ma~Ji Majikaru~ Magical~!]
- I just point out some jumps which doesn't really make sense/feel way too sudden.
00:27:299 - 00:29:708 - Stack > jump > stack > jump.. Doesn't play too well. And nothing in the music really suggest such a big jump (2.88x-3.62x). Rework this part.
00:58:619 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - The jumps between each combo doesn't really make sense and doesn't play very well.
01:01:189 (1,2,3) - 4.5x jump... It play better then the above pattern, but still, it doesn't play that great.
01:02:153 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I don't feel like I'm following the music at all with this pattern and constant 2.5x jumps isn't that nice.
There are also other jumps which I don't think fit as well, but I didn't mention as they play well enough. Overall, I feel the main problem is, you're following the instrument too much and constantly reusing patterns and I feel they're lot of random jumps. Because of this, I couldn't really feel the flow of the song. Since there is vocal, I suggest reworking all parts where there is vocal and follow the vocal more. You can still follow the instrument, but build your patterns around the vocal. If you can do this, I'm sure this diff will be much better.
merc2004's Magickal01:25:442 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make it like the previous box patterns
http://puu.sh/8Fgw and make (5,6) a slider. Play much better.
Similar issues as Ma~Ji Majikaru~ Magical~.. Especially at ar 9, don't make unexpected jumps like at 00:49:464 (1,2). Keep jumps like this when the music really calls for it.
Well, I can't really mod Ma~Ji Majikaru~ Magical~ & merc2004's Magickal since the map in theory is fine, but in term of flow and how fun it is, it isn't too good. I understand why you're following the instrument, since if you aren't, why map to the remix and not to the original version instead. But you really need to work on the flow and making jumps that play well and not to make the map harder.No star because of this. Your Normal and Hard is pretty good through.
Well good luck!
