Hello

[General]
- You have an unused file in the folder: cloud.png SB Removed
- Remove gundam from tags since you already have it in source? Removed

[Freedom]
So you have 98 BPM for 1st spinner and then you change it to 152 at 00:12:378? Why would you do that? D: The first part of the song was 98 bpm. If I didn't use 2 timing section then my spinner will be unsnap.
You can't see your sb because of the 00:47:213 (1) spinner. SB Removed
00:34:088 (1) - the 00:33:496 (2) is blocking the repeat arrow http://puu.sh/35Qj so you can't tell if there is a repeat. Sorry my mistake. I forgot my skin doesn't have 300 geki
02:03:299 - don't use 0% volume, make it at least something (btw, old map, you can't even put 0% anymore)
02:33:793 - ^ Fixed
02:37:148 - ^ Fixed
03:13:463 (2) - remove? seems like you enjoy making stuff like this Removed

And some unneeded timesections, I tihnk:
01:47:608 Removed
01:48:595 Removed
02:07:345 Removed
02:09:318 Removed
02:12:378 Removed
02:31:424 Removed

1. All looks fine~

1. Sorry but would you explain why you chose AR9?AR9 doesn't fit the map at all!AR8 should be enough.

1. 01:03:889 (x) - (Bad gameplay)I think you should add a new combo here due to you were making a jump map at all.So that's really weird and awkward if you shortened the spacing here.Either add a note with a jump or Move 01:04:087 (1) - far away from 01:03:593 (4) - can fix this.
2. 02:38:423 (1,2,3,4) - (Bad gameplay)What's happen of this?It was extremely confuse,please check the stream and the flow.
3. 03:17:696 - Same as 01:03:889

1. 00:14:748 (1,2,3,4,5) - The shape of this 5-plat doesn't looks really good,I think a straight line is really good epough and move the stream away from (1)- and (4.)-
   
   Example

   
2. 00:40:207 (1) - Remove the new combo please,I think this place are not requir for spamming new combo.
3. 01:37:637 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Why put a lot of 1/4 jump here? D: In general that's ok but it doesn't the music at all.
4. 01:46:913 (1,2,3,4) - (Design)yes,nazi here.This is a imperfect square,that will be much nicer if you can do a small imporvement.
5. 01:58:754 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - It doesn't stack properly on the end of the slider (2)-,do you make this on purpose?otherwise,it would be much better if you fix it.
6. 02:12:372 (x) - Probably end the kiai time here?

1. 00:06:151 (5) - Add a whistle here to fit you hitsound pattern.

Difficulty setting
Sorry but would you explain why you chose AR9?AR9 doesn't fit the map at all!AR8 should be enough. I design this map for AR9. AR8 will make most of the jump note confusing. And ppl complain when I use AR8.

Issue/unrankable stuff
01:03:889 (x) - (Bad gameplay)I think you should add a new combo here due to you were making a jump map at all.So that's really weird and awkward if you shortened the spacing here.Either add a note with a jump or Move 01:04:087 (1) - far away from 01:03:593 (4) - can fix this. Fixed
02:38:423 (1,2,3,4) - (Bad gameplay)What's happen of this?It was extremely confuse,please check the stream and the flow. Fixed
03:17:696 - Same as 01:03:889 Fixed

Beatmap design/suggestion
00:14:748 (1,2,3,4,5) - The shape of this 5-plat doesn't looks really good,I think a straight line is really good epough and move the stream away from (1)- and (4.)- Fixed
00:40:207 (1) - Remove the new combo please,I think this place are not requir for spamming new combo. Fixed
01:37:637 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Why put a lot of 1/4 jump here? D: In general that's ok but it doesn't the music at all. This one was a 1/4 stream. 5 note stream. Some ppl don't like it and they want me to change to slider so I change those to this stream.
01:46:913 (1,2,3,4) - (Design)yes,nazi here.This is a imperfect square,that will be much nicer if you can do a small imporvement. Fixed
01:58:754 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - It doesn't stack properly on the end of the slider (2)-,do you make this on purpose?otherwise,it would be much better if you fix it. Fixed
02:12:372 (x) - Probably end the kiai time here? Oops My mistake Fixed

Hitsound
00:06:151 (5) - Add a whistle here to fit you hitsound pattern. Fixed

1. The red timing sections are different with Taiko diff
   
2. The tags are also different with each diff

1. Decrease HP and OD by 1
2. The map suffer for a lot of overmap, the most apparent case is 01:37:637 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - There are nothing in the music that can justify the use of those 1/4 slider repeats.
3. Another one is 01:04:087 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Yes it may follow the music but the first slider repeat is awkward and doesn't really fit the song, feels like the stream start too early. Try to follow the rhythm on the lyric/music even if the rhythm turn out to be simple. That is better than using 1/4 that doesn't go along along with the song.
   For 01:04:087 and other similar part try to start the downbeat (in this case is on 01:04:481). Starting the stream on the downbeat will emphasize the stream better than other beat.
4. Another problem is the use of finish. You use soooo many finish in succession. For example on 00:31:326 ~ 00:42:378. Not only they are too loud, they are also totally don't fit with the song. Try to use those finish on moderation, maybe use finish on downbeat each 2 or 4 stanza. just pay attention wether it fit the song
5. Next is the combo, I suggest to follow a fixed pattern of using combo. Here's an advice
   
   Wise man advice

   ziin wrote:

   New combos usually go best on the long white tick. There are exceptions, but often times people slide over or onto the downbeat, and they put the new combo on the next note (beat 2).... When you omit a hard beat on the downbeat, it feels strange, at least to me, and ruins the flow of the music. Sometimes the important downbeat is every measure, or every two, or every four. It depends a lot on the song.

   So hearing the song and how it seems that you don't want to use long combo. Start new combo on every 1 measure/stanza
6. 00:41:983 (1,2,3) - The anti jumps are rather out of place cause the song doesn't really shown any change that could fit with them.
7. 00:40:404 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I suggest to change them into jump that goes in a box pattern rather than the current cross pattern. Kinda like this, you can also use the same jump pattern on 01:46:913 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) but try to make the jump not too big because this part have different intensity than 00:40:404
8. 00:43:759 (1) - It's better if you use a circle here. The slider end on the downbeat doesn't give a good emphasize on the rhythm. Use this as the next rhythm if you follow the suggestion
9. 00:45:535 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Change the rhythm into this.
10. 01:20:862 (1,2) - Another unfit anti jump, it'll flow better if you use your normal spacing

shikyu wrote:

Mod4Mod request, some suggestions:]

[ZGMF-X10A Freedom]
00:00:947 (2) - add whistle at first repeat
00:25:409 (2) - (nazi) 1 grid up
00:26:198 (2) - ^
00:27:382 (5) - add clap + whistle
00:45:540 (1) - add clap at slider's end, remove clap at slider's start (2)
00:45:935 (2) - change whistle at slider's end to clap, more consistent
02:03:304 (4) - add clap
02:04:093 (1) - ^ at slider's start
02:26:593 (7) - add finish at slider's start
02:41:790 (1,2,3,4,5) - (nazi) why don't put this symetrical like pattern before this? it's better like that
02:42:975 (2) - add clap, remove clap at (3)
02:43:369 (4) - add clap
03:01:922 (1) - ^ at slider's end
03:04:882 (1) - change clap to whistle
03:05:672 (6) - ^
All fix up thanks very much


[Ozzy's Taiko]
01:10:804 (1) - fix this slider, overlapped with other notes Fixed I don'k know how did that happen
it look like this at taiko

SPOILER

at standart

SPOILER

03:39:120 (2) - change to k

overall good. hope it approved soon, good luck