Sallad4ever wrote:

Hi backstep

[General]

1. use 1395 as the offset

[Skin]

1. Also add a slider ball (the default one is ok) so it won't clash with the player's preferred skin

[SB]

1. His hair is cropped and I can see it. Well you don't have to fix it, just sayin

lol

[Normal]

1. 04:07:032 (1) - the end of this spinner is still a bit too loud imo, maybe use 30% volume timing section for the end only or on the start of the spinner

[Hard]

1. Decrease HP by 2 & OD by 1
2. 00:04:208 (1,2,3) - I'd say unstack them all or stack 4 under 3 too. it'll make the pattern more consistent and neat
3. 00:21:855 (2,3,4) - imo this rhythm sounds better if you CTRL+R them
4. 00:43:385 (4,5,6) - maybe unstack this? I almost confuse whether this is a 1/4 or 1/2, because the slider end stack you've used so far are 1/4, but they are slider so it's up to you
5. 01:34:561 (1) - I maybe nitpick on this one, but it looks better if you use the same slider as 01:12:679 (3) like [url=
6. 04:08:443 (4,5) - I found that this rhythm here doesn't really fit this soft part of the song, maybe remove 04:09:149 (5) or the whistle at the slider end?
7. 04:07:561 (2) - same as 04:07:032 (1) above the sound is still too loud

[Insane]

1. Decrease HP & OD by 1
2. 00:38:796 (2,3) - because of the vocal, I didn't know that 2 actually ends on 1/4. Unstack 3 to make it more easy to expect
3. 02:44:090 (1) - I highly suggest to make this slider the same length as 01:22:208 (1). Unlike 01:22:208 (1) it short length doesn't give a good slow down effect.
4. 04:07:042 (1) - same as 04:07:032 (1)

I really doubt the total size but it still 24mb so it's probably ok
Call me back for recheck

banvi wrote:

Just suggestion:
[Insane]
02:55:042 (1,2,3,4) To be honest , I prefer increasing spacing at this part. (if you agree this , use Edit->scale-by... ) XD
Fixed with x1.2 spacing :3
I can't find so much! XD
Really love this song , great SB , and good map! (:

no kds please

Breeze wrote:

General

1. Inconsistency in PreviewTime, [Insane] is 82394 while other 2 diff. is 82571, please use same one

^ Fixed.

Skin

1. You're missing a fruit-drop.png, please add it (even a default one is fine) into your folder and do a full submit

^ Add

SB

1. SB\image273.jpg is not used, are you forget to use it? If it's uesless, please delete it

^ Remove (I forgot insert in this song, but never mind lol)

Normal

1. 01:06:336 (1) - I think you can try making this slider more smooth, maybe like this?
   [attachment=0:ca09d]0.jpg[/attachment:ca09d]
2. 03:31:571 (1) - Reverse here sounds kinda odd, try lower hitsound to 30%, that sounds better IMO
3. 03:34:394 (2) - ^

^ Fixed all normal diff.

Insane

1. 04:07:042 - 30% volume make spinner end sounds a bit loud, I think 10% is better

^ Fixed
nice map and SB, since Sallad4ever said recheck in post, so leave this recheck to Sallad4ever :p

Thanks you Breeze

I'll try to ask sallad again.

Sallad4ever wrote:

backstep please search for more mod before I re-check it

1. 04:07:042 - Use 10% volume on this spinner too just like what Breeze said on his mod post on Insane
2. 04:11:277 - unnecessary timing section, it even made the spinner bonus sound very conspicuous, if you want to increase the volume then please put it directly at the spinner start not on the middle of it

1. 04:08:453 (4,5) - still doesn't sound fit, I suggest to make it the same as 04:02:806 (2)
2. 04:11:277 - same as above

1. 00:38:806 (2,3) - this one still doesn't seem quite right for me. Leave it as it is for now, cuz I'm just sayin this
2. 01:01:395 (4) - if you're following the back guitar then the rhythm for this should be the same as 01:07:218 (6), that is 01:01:395 (4) should start at 01:01:571 then it should be longer by 1/4 beat more
3. 04:11:277 - same as above

Sallad4ever wrote:

[Easy] < it's Normal xD

1. 04:07:042 - Use 10% volume on this spinner too just like what Breeze said on his mod post on Insane
2. 04:11:277 - unnecessary timing section, it even made the spinner bonus sound very conspicuous, if you want to increase the volume then please put it directly at the spinner start not on the middle of it

^ Fixed with remove green line section
[Hard]

1. 04:08:453 (4,5) - still doesn't sound fit, I suggest to make it the same as 04:02:806 (2)
2. 04:11:277 - same as above

[Insane]

1. 00:38:806 (2,3) - this one still doesn't seem quite right for me. Leave it as it is for now, cuz I'm just sayin this
2. 01:01:395 (4) - if you're following the back guitar then the rhythm for this should be the same as 01:07:218 (6), that is 01:01:395 (4) should start at 01:01:571 then it should be longer by 1/4 beat more
3. 04:11:277 - same as above

Yup that's all, call me back again then I'll see if could bubble this

Sallad4ever wrote:

ok there's something wrong here
not only the screen is black instead of the sky, the SB load gone way above 5. It's not like this before the last time I re-check it

ziin wrote:

5.37 is way above 5?

in any case, delete the map and download it again. Everything is under 5.0 and this storyboard is almost perfect.

The animations look okay, but in the PV I think the top part faded out rather than the bottom. Oh well. I think it would have been simpler just to use animations as well, as that would save you a lot of coding (and re-coding).

153512 - image202 looks bad; len's hair is suppose to reach the top of the screen.
It's cannot fix it because origin image is http://puu.sh/821Q it have a bit problem, so you don't worry about it :3
87689 - image148 and co aren't quite far enough right
^ Fixed with no scale and have sunrise.
25042 - image 77 and co ^
^ Fixed with fade out white.png (look it better.)
71630 - sb-23 isn't using the better quality version? If you're not done with the SB move it back to WIP? There's a few old images there too. Fixed with insert your image but use SB-23 file name.

http://puu.sh/7Yzy - back looks pretty bad
Can you redo the sliderball? It's chopped off in some places, and the edges are kind of jagged. Also the max size is 118x118, not 108x108.
^ Fixed by replace all Sallad element.
Sorry for all the work I ended up making you do, but it looks awesome so have some stars. Once you're done, PM me for a full recheck before it gets bubbled so I can compress it down so it's under the 20 MB limit for videos. The reason for the limit is to save on bandwidth and download time, so I hope you can wait a little while on getting ranked so that you can save a lot of bandwidth in the future.
Thanks for stars

Sallad4ever wrote:

oops, bad language use
and yeah I've re-dl and it's return to normal, I wonder what happened yesterday then

Anyway, you haven't fixed the pause-back.png just like what ziin mentioned. I think it's easy to fix it, you can always use scorebar-kidanger2 to re-place the crying Ren pic. I try fixing it for you if you don't want to trouble yourself.
The slider ball still chopped on some places too(sliderb0, sliderb3, sliderb5, sliderb10) and once again I try fixing it for you. I knew I messed up some image on the rotating, so maybe *coughziincough* can help you on it

Gonzvlo wrote:

Hey, sorry for the delay.

Oh okay, apparently removing the BG wasn't enough. I found 2 parts exceeding 5x (load), I couldn't fix one of them so I reduced the time to just a few ms.

[attachment=0:45c69]Kagamine Len - Tori no Uta (backstep).osb[/attachment:45c69]

Let me know if that works for you, good luck.

Some part your storyboard picture missing

For example;

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/176819

But now I fixed it with your .osb file.

1. minor fixes when vertically/horizontally scrolling
2. compress all images losslessly
3. A few files I made into jpgs, but that was because the png file was 5x bigger.
4. Convert nearly all of the animations into osu animations instead of sprites. This has a side effect of removing the fade effect from the video, but IMO it's better this way.
5. Crop jpegs losslessly to save on SB load and minor file size.
6. Put in trees and such so it matches the video a little better. It's not 100% accurate as I left in some of the different stuff, or didn't care enough to match it up frame by frame.
7. Added background fade out in the intro so there is no black screen when starting to play.
8. hopefully removed all 5.0x sections, but if there are any, it's only for a millisecond or you're using the SB editor in widescreen as a guide.
9. Feel free to ask me questions on what I did/how I did it, I'll try to explain if you want, but try looking at the code (nearly all of this was just done in notepad++ with lots of saving/reloading).
10. Cleaned up some of the jpg artifacts on the pngs. Somehow swf allows jpgs with transparency...
11. Removed useless images (fruit-plate, a few unused SB items)
12. Made the ending fade out slower and removed a repeated storyboard section that isn't in the video

ziin wrote:

okay then all done.

What I did:

1. minor fixes when vertically/horizontally scrolling
2. compress all images losslessly
3. A few files I made into jpgs, but that was because the png file was 5x bigger.
4. Convert nearly all of the animations into osu animations instead of sprites. This has a side effect of removing the fade effect from the video, but IMO it's better this way.
5. Crop jpegs losslessly to save on SB load and minor file size.
6. Put in trees and such so it matches the video a little better. It's not 100% accurate as I left in some of the different stuff, or didn't care enough to match it up frame by frame.
7. Added background fade out in the intro so there is no black screen when starting to play.
8. hopefully removed all 5.0x sections, but if there are any, it's only for a millisecond or you're using the SB editor in widescreen as a guide.
9. Feel free to ask me questions on what I did/how I did it, I'll try to explain if you want, but try looking at the code (nearly all of this was just done in notepad++ with lots of saving/reloading).
10. Cleaned up some of the jpg artifacts on the pngs. Somehow swf allows jpgs with transparency...
11. Removed useless images (fruit-plate, a few unused SB items)
12. Made the ending fade out slower and removed a repeated storyboard section that isn't in the video

To use the storyboard, make sure you back up your current map first.
Copy/Paste the folder somewhere else on your computer, like in the osu! folder or on your desktop
Delete the "SB" folder, and delete all images in the skin/backgrounds. (this is very important, or else you'll get useless files that aren't used anymore).
Extract all the files into your folder and double check it to make sure I didn't mess anything up you really wanted to keep.

http://www.mediafire.com/?ict7kr3d6cjxagg

And I'm proud to say the osz is now under 19 MB

Edit: forgot the slider ball:
http://www.mediafire.com/?hxve877gjs81e62

I'm very like your fixed storyboard

Maybe can you teach me how to made it ?

Anyway thanks for helped me and Kudosu !

P.S. I think your post should had 2 kudosu XD

backstep wrote:

Maybe can you teach me how to made it ?

Sallad4ever wrote:

I seriously hate myself to delay this even further but as long as to make this map perfect I'll gladly hate myself.
Here is what I want to say, you already optimize the SB even the cropped hair is fixed too so maybe you could fix the floating title.png image too

Also on [Hard] 01:22:395 (2) - does the custom slider tick intentional? even if it has low volume I can still hear it and it's not good

Call me back for bubble after the fix so I can kill myself peacefully

Sallad4ever wrote:

This is what you could achieve if you're not gunning for rank but rather to perfection. Nice map and superb SB, this map totally deserve a Bubble!!!

Now I can kill myself peacefully

Luna wrote:

Yeah \:D/

See this map ranked soon Luna

ziin wrote:

I think I broke the title.png when I cropped out the transparency

No problem

Anyway fixed it already

Sync wrote:

I went ahead and gave this a star even though it's probably going to be ranked soon :<

Breeze wrote:

1 month bubble, god, let's do it \:D/

Skin

1. Just make sure your spinner circle is exactlly 666x666 pixels

Insane

1. I guess there're some place you forget to add clap
   
   1. 00:41:983 (4) - Slider head
   2. 00:58:218 (3) -

Just add these clap and I'll rank

All fixed.

Thanks for checking Breeze

Breeze wrote:

1. Just make sure your spinner circle is exactlly 666x666 pixels