[lota78's Insane] (Done...
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Offset needs to be adjusted to about 755ms.
Errors that you see are based off from the 755 offset. Some of the errors would be suggestions, not directions.
00:09:06 (1,2,3,4) - The slider seems over used on this one. Maybe you can try turning it into a "chain" of sliders?
00:14:02 (4,5,6) - Questionable spacing for its timing.... maybe it could be like that for the level, but not sure because of its timing...
00:29:03 (1,2) - (2) Looks a bit too far off from (1)
00:29:24 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - The slider end near the fading (2) makes it look funny. Maybe you can try evening this out?
00:33:99 (7,1) - A stack like this can be very confusing because of the timing gap between the notes.
00:35:18 (4) - Sounds a bit late, try moving this back 1/4 to the "red tick".
00:37:98 (5,6,7) - This section could be moved forward by 1/4, starting (5) at the "red tick". Also, it sounds like 00:38:52 could use a hitnote, but that part is optional.
00:39:60 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Might have to move this back by 1/2 to the "red tick" then resnap the notes in place. Also, the way the song changes, this might be where you need to add another offset at 39,390ms, but this just an idea.
00:45:86 (5,6) - Sounds a bit early. Try moving this 1/4.
00:46:189 - The "ninja break" shouldn't be here since its not really a "break" at all.
00:48:45 (1) - This sounds really odd. Try using 1/4 division instead of 1/8 for the repeats on this slider.
00:49:31 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - The "flower burst slider stack" here also sounds odd since its using the 1/8 timing. Try using 1/4 divisions on this part also. And as for (4), try starting it at a "blue tick" and end it at 00:50:614.
00:51:15 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Same timing issue as 00:49:31 at the "flower burst slider stack" and also needs to move back 1/4 earlier to the "red tick". The slider after also needs adjusting same as above starting it at 00:52:01 ending it at 00:52:341.
00:53:43 (8) - Hitnote conflict + "Wondering timing". Remove (7) then resnap the timing of (8) back in place.
00:55:15 (8) - ^ (Same as above)
00:57:19 (8,9) - Try moving the timing 1/4 to get it in sync with the song.
00:57:95 (10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - A bit too far from (9).
00:58:92 (1) - Did the sliders get faster or something???
The slider is long and really fast. Not the best combination to use. You may have to take out the BPM doubling if you plan to really use those sliders so the slider balls are not "slider bullets".
01:08:52 (10) - Might want to cut the slider end to 01:09:393 to make it sound better.
01:09:82 (1,1) - You might have to convert this part into hitnotes instead of all repeating sliders since there are some "pauses" in the lyrics.
01:15:54 (1,1) - There's almost not recovery time to catch the note after the spinner. But depends on what others say.
01:16:30 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Disorganized Spacing....
01:23:20 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Improper spacing and at 01:24:39 (6,7), (7) sounds a bit late. Try moving it back 1/4.
01:27:73 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Improper spacing...?
01:30:54 (1) - This is an odd spinner. But I can see how its difficult to time. Maybe starting it at 01:30:97 to 01:33:567 would sound better? And maybe you could insert a break after to fill the gap of nothing (optional idea).
01:35:72 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Sounds like this should end at (9). Anything past it sounds kinda off....
01:59:79 (1,2,3,4) - Sounds late. Might want to try moving this back 1/4 earlier.
02:03:24 (5) - 1/4 early. Try moving this 1/4 later.
02:11:33 (1) - Slider over use. Try adjusting the timing to 1/4.
02:12:20 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,1,1) - Err...... wow.....
. This might be overkill with the sliders used like this. Having the sliders repeat in a unnecessary way not only will it sound offbeat, but it also unnecessarily add to the combos. The max score is at
10,122,996 / 10,000,000, which is over the limit because of the unneeded note points. Try to eliminate the overuse of the sliders but at the same time, you can still make it "insane" but not to the point no one can play it. Also, for the 3 spinners, you might want to take on the 2nd one and put some notes in to fill its place.
02:25:36 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Irregular spacing. It doesn't match the timing of the notes.
02:29:25 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Interesting way of shaping the notes, but the spacing for its timing is the main problem with this.
02:32:70 (1,1) - Slider over use.
02:39:18 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Irregular spacing for its timing.
02:43:06 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
02:46:09 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - ^
02:50:62 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
02:53:42 (1) - Ends a bit early. Try extending the end point by 1/4.
02:55:26 (1,2,3) - Sounds late. Move back by 1/4 and then extend the slider to the 1/4 range. (The end point should be at the "red tick".)
02:55:80 (3,1) - There's a big "void" here in the map. Either add a break or add some notes.
03:19:33 (
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In Bold: I don't think its going to work out unless you either: A.) Reduce the HP drain -or- B.) Put some hitnotes in this section.
In Color: Overusing the spinners is not a good idea when its back-to-back like this. If you are able to either replace the ones in between with some hitnotes or some sliders, it should give you some slack from the over use problem.
03:35:62 (1) - No breathing space to catch this after the spinner......
03:36:16 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - These notes are scattered like stars in the sky....
03:40:05 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Nice shape, bad spacing..... and did you double the BPM again? The slider is moving too fast....
03:43:50 (1,1) - These two sliders sound like angry bees.....
. Either resnap its timing properly or remove them and replace it with some hitnotes.
03:49:98 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Irregular spacing again...
03:56:88 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - ^
04:01:41 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - ^
[EVA-X's Relax](Unavailable since it is in progress....)
My thoughts: This map has potential, but with how it is at the moment, you'll need to do some remapping and testing. Try to remove the unnecessary like the over repeating use of sliders, the spinners, and the double BPM thing. And as for the shapes, try making the shape with proper spacing in between notes. I can understand that some maps have the "jumps" in the Insane level, but not when its unnecessary. And to make sure you have proper timing of the notes, try slowing the song down, even to 25% if you have to. There are also sections in this map that needs to be resnapped with timing, spacing, or both. I know this song can be mapped well, but it will take some hard work in the process of trial and error. But i'll give it a star since this song can work out into being a beatmap in the future.
, u gave us such great help and attention, the suggestions i'll use in the map.
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