Sorry I'm slooooow
[General]
Add mizuki to tags so it's easier to find it by your name
02:11:736 - No strobe here? Especially since you rekiai. If not, I'd remove the rekiai so it has a stronger feeling at the end of the song. Though tbh I almost prefer the kiai to start with that big boom instead of when the singer starts.
I really think that first break is really awkward. You just start playing, and then you have a break. Just feels like it's interruptive of play.
[BASIC]
00:38:736 (3) - I don't recommend really short repeating sliders like this in an easy difficulty.
00:58:069 (1) - Since it's so soon after a spinner, maybe have this start nearer the center?
02:24:402 - That's a really long break. May as well start mapping again where the other difficulties start up.
[ADVANCED]
00:41:403 (1,2) - Kinda looks bad with the hitcircle parts overlapping each other like that.
00:44:403 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo
00:51:319 (6,7) - Move down and right a grid or so to adjust for stacking
01:59:069 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo
02:05:986 (6,7) - Same as earlier
02:12:402 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo
02:13:736 (1,1,1) - ^
02:15:402 (1) - ^
Geez, waaay too many new combos in this section. Tone them down.
02:48:653 (2,3) - Same as earlier
Gaaah, fix all those super-short combos. There's a ton of them and they're kinda :/ Makes the map artificially easy.
03:11:736 (3) - Left one grid
03:12:069 (1) - right one grid
03:29:403 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Might work better as soft whistles
[EXTREME]
yuzuki:
01:41:736 (7) - Add clap
01:53:902 (2) - Eh, just do as normal hits instead of a slider.
mizuki:
02:18:069 (1,2,3,4) - I was kind of expecting this to be angled higher. It flows better that way imo. Rotating about 45 degrees worked pretty well.
Good stuff~