faito nanodesu!

ｓてｒ～

star wasuretetaaa

woo!

starstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstar

隅田川夏戀歌~~~
I like this!!!



star~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Yuzuki ♥ Mizuki

>a</ like this map so much!

Good lcuk >w</

KanaRin wrote:

Yuzuki ♥ Mizuki

>a</ like this map so much!

Good lcuk >w</

thank you

[Advanced]
00:14:069 (5) - This note's position is not such good
このnoteの位置はよくないと思う
02:09:069 (4,5) - Are they on purpose?
こちのspacingはわざなの？

02:51:736 (3) - Why is this without New combo?
どうしてこちにはnew comboがいない...?

[Extreme]
00:04:652 (3) - a bit different spacing between 2 and 4
00:29:652 (3) - ^
02:36:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think they're really hard to read...how about use new combo with 02:36:069 (1,3,5,7) ?
ここの順序はちょっと読みにくいから、1357をNew Comboしてほしい

02:44:403 (3) - add whistle at the end
02:49:903 (2) - add whistle
02:51:069 (2) - add whistle at the end
03:05:903 (4,6) - add whistle

I think this map's diff spread is not such good...maybe you need add a 4 star's diff< this is just personal opinion , you can ignore it

goodbye wrote:

[Advanced]
00:14:069 (5) - This note's position is not such good
このnoteの位置はよくないと思う
02:09:069 (4,5) - Are they on purpose?
こちのspacingはわざなの？

02:51:736 (3) - Why is this without New combo?
どうしてこちにはnew comboがいない...?

[Extreme]
00:04:652 (3) - a bit different spacing between 2 and 4
00:29:652 (3) - ^
02:36:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think they're really hard to read...how about use new combo with 02:36:069 (1,3,5,7) ?
ここの順序はちょっと読みにくいから、1357をNew Comboしてほしい

02:44:403 (3) - add whistle at the end
02:49:903 (2) - add whistle
02:51:069 (2) - add whistle at the end
03:05:903 (4,6) - add whistle

I think this map's diff spread is not such good...maybe you need add a 4 star's diff< this is just personal opinion , you can ignore it

arigato!!!

this map is so hentai :O

goooooooooood!

I want to make diff
but already fulled

gj!

PS : /me is dksslqj

Nakagawa-Kanon wrote:

goooooooooood!

I want to make diff
but already fulled

gj!

PS : /me is dksslqj

sorry;_;

thanks!

Natteke wrote:

this map is so hentai :O

natteke is hentai

Sorry I'm slooooow

[General]
Add mizuki to tags so it's easier to find it by your name
02:11:736 - No strobe here? Especially since you rekiai. If not, I'd remove the rekiai so it has a stronger feeling at the end of the song. Though tbh I almost prefer the kiai to start with that big boom instead of when the singer starts.
I really think that first break is really awkward. You just start playing, and then you have a break. Just feels like it's interruptive of play.

[BASIC]
00:38:736 (3) - I don't recommend really short repeating sliders like this in an easy difficulty.
00:58:069 (1) - Since it's so soon after a spinner, maybe have this start nearer the center?
02:24:402 - That's a really long break. May as well start mapping again where the other difficulties start up.

[ADVANCED]
00:41:403 (1,2) - Kinda looks bad with the hitcircle parts overlapping each other like that.
00:44:403 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo
00:51:319 (6,7) - Move down and right a grid or so to adjust for stacking
01:59:069 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo
02:05:986 (6,7) - Same as earlier
02:12:402 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo
02:13:736 (1,1,1) - ^
02:15:402 (1) - ^
Geez, waaay too many new combos in this section. Tone them down.
02:48:653 (2,3) - Same as earlier
Gaaah, fix all those super-short combos. There's a ton of them and they're kinda :/ Makes the map artificially easy.
03:11:736 (3) - Left one grid
03:12:069 (1) - right one grid
03:29:403 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Might work better as soft whistles

[EXTREME]

yuzuki:
01:41:736 (7) - Add clap
01:53:902 (2) - Eh, just do as normal hits instead of a slider.

mizuki:
02:18:069 (1,2,3,4) - I was kind of expecting this to be angled higher. It flows better that way imo. Rotating about 45 degrees worked pretty well.

Good stuff~

Garven wrote:

Sorry I'm slooooow

[General]
Add mizuki to tags so it's easier to find it by your name
02:11:736 - No strobe here? Especially since you rekiai. If not, I'd remove the rekiai so it has a stronger feeling at the end of the song. Though tbh I almost prefer the kiai to start with that big boom instead of when the singer starts.
I really think that first break is really awkward. You just start playing, and then you have a break. Just feels like it's interruptive of play.

[BASIC]
00:38:736 (3) - I don't recommend really short repeating sliders like this in an easy difficulty.
00:58:069 (1) - Since it's so soon after a spinner, maybe have this start nearer the center?
02:24:402 - That's a really long break. May as well start mapping again where the other difficulties start up.

[ADVANCED]
00:41:403 (1,2) - Kinda looks bad with the hitcircle parts overlapping each other like that.
00:44:403 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo
00:51:319 (6,7) - Move down and right a grid or so to adjust for stacking
01:59:069 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo
02:05:986 (6,7) - Same as earlier
02:12:402 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo
02:13:736 (1,1,1) - ^
02:15:402 (1) - ^
Geez, waaay too many new combos in this section. Tone them down.
02:48:653 (2,3) - Same as earlier
Gaaah, fix all those super-short combos. There's a ton of them and they're kinda :/ Makes the map artificially easy.
03:11:736 (3) - Left one grid
03:12:069 (1) - right one grid
03:29:403 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Might work better as soft whistles

[EXTREME]

yuzuki:
01:41:736 (7) - Add clap
01:53:902 (2) - Eh, just do as normal hits instead of a slider.

mizuki:
02:18:069 (1,2,3,4) - I was kind of expecting this to be angled higher. It flows better that way imo. Rotating about 45 degrees worked pretty well.

Good stuff~

ありがとー
fix!

[General]
Set source to Jubeat Ripples
I still think the kiai start times would be better one white tick back (00:46:402 - 00:57:069 - 02:01:069 - 02:11:736 - 02:43:736 - and 02:54:402 - )

[BASIC]
00:58:069 (1) - I still would rather this be closer to the center so that it is easier to hit after the spinner. This IS the easiest difficulty of the set.
01:52:736 (1) - ^
02:55:403 (1) - ^
03:29:403 (1,2,3) - Having these as the soft hit sound set would work better (like in the other two difficulties)

[ADVANCED]
02:48:069 (1,2,3) - Maybe like this?
02:51:069 (1) - Remove new combo
02:51:403 (1) - ^
02:51:736 (1) - ^
03:20:736 (1) - ^

[EXTREME]
02:36:402 (1) - Remove new combo
02:37:069 (1) - ^
02:49:736 (1) - ^
02:50:403 (1) - ^ (I'm almost inclined to say keep both of those patterns as one combo)

Garven wrote:

[General]
Set source to Jubeat Ripples
I still think the kiai start times would be better one white tick back (00:46:402 - 00:57:069 - 02:01:069 - 02:11:736 - 02:43:736 - and 02:54:402 - )

[BASIC]
00:58:069 (1) - I still would rather this be closer to the center so that it is easier to hit after the spinner. This IS the easiest difficulty of the set.
01:52:736 (1) - ^
02:55:403 (1) - ^
03:29:403 (1,2,3) - Having these as the soft hit sound set would work better (like in the other two difficulties)

[ADVANCED]
02:48:069 (1,2,3) - Maybe like this?

SPOILER

02:51:069 (1) - Remove new combo
02:51:403 (1) - ^
02:51:736 (1) - ^
03:20:736 (1) - ^

[EXTREME]
02:36:402 (1) - Remove new combo
02:37:069 (1) - ^
02:49:736 (1) - ^
02:50:403 (1) - ^ (I'm almost inclined to say keep both of those patterns as one combo)

arigato-

Alright, a couple minor pattern adjustments via IRC and away we go!

Bubbled!

:U

Garven wrote:

Alright, a couple minor pattern adjustments via IRC and away we go!

Bubbled!

:U

<33333333333333333

隅田川<3

Extreme


saikou deshita!!!!!


combo ippai-

①②④⑥
②③⑤⑧
④⑤⑦⑨
⑥⑧⑨⑩

:3

①②⑨⑩
③④⑪⑫
⑤⑥⑬⑭
⑦⑧⑮ⓐ

D:

So this is full ver.
Kinda ambiguous to mention it in the title of the song since there is already ranked one without mentioning that it's actuallt jubeat cut.

omg I love this map <3

Ranked.

Changed EX to AR9. Rebub.

Or not. >_> Anyway, bubble continues strong!

Garven wrote:

Changed EX to AR9. Rebub.

thanks><

wow 藤原さんの絵が

Colin Hou wrote:

wow 藤原さんの絵が

藤原さん神

Looking good! specially loved goww's sections on [Advanced]

Ranked!

finally gratz!

gratz! >_<
I love jubeat~w

grats o/

congrats~

congrats!