this song is so good !! i like it !!! need be ranked!!
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Shiraishi Ryoko - Taiyou no Kakera
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nice map you got here. good job so far.
+1 star from me
+1 star from me
it's good better than what i can do at this game.
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Sushi971's Normal:
No problems here.
Hard:
00:52:26 (4) - Extend this slider to 00:53:350
01:06:89 (9) - fix the end of this slider, to either the left or right, but off of the blue tick none the less.
Excellent map, definitely starring this.
No problems here.
Hard:
00:52:26 (4) - Extend this slider to 00:53:350
01:06:89 (9) - fix the end of this slider, to either the left or right, but off of the blue tick none the less.
Excellent map, definitely starring this.
[Sushi's Normal]
00:13:61 (5) - stack the endpoints
00:29:14 (4) - move this so that it is symmetrical and not covered by 2
00:53:89 (1) - move this out from under 4
01:04:72 (1) - ^
01:18:09 (4,5) - stack the endpoints
[Hard]
00:14:15 (8) - move out from under 6
00:22:28 (1,2,3,4) - this just seems a kinda awkward pattern to me
00:24:63 (1) - move out from under 7
00:33:66 (3) - stack on the fading end of 6
00:56:78 (9) - new combo, and make it symmetrical
01:22:79 (1) - move out from under 7
01:26:58 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - overlap looks sloppy
00:13:61 (5) - stack the endpoints
00:29:14 (4) - move this so that it is symmetrical and not covered by 2
00:53:89 (1) - move this out from under 4
01:04:72 (1) - ^
01:18:09 (4,5) - stack the endpoints
[Hard]
00:14:15 (8) - move out from under 6
00:22:28 (1,2,3,4) - this just seems a kinda awkward pattern to me
00:24:63 (1) - move out from under 7
00:33:66 (3) - stack on the fading end of 6
00:56:78 (9) - new combo, and make it symmetrical
01:22:79 (1) - move out from under 7
01:26:58 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - overlap looks sloppy
The BPM and offset needs to be the same for all difficulties.
BPM: 166.050
Offset: 9,072
Fix and I'll get back to modding.
EDIT:
Normal:
-00:10:87 (5) - Make this exactly symmetrical.
-00:23:52 (1) - ^
-00:32:10 (3) - Nudge back 1/4 a beat.
-00:55:23 (3) - Nudge forward 1/4 a beat.
-01:00:74 (4) - Make this exactly symmetrical.
-01:05:44 (2) - Stack this directly on the endpoint of 1. If 2 is exactly where you want it, match up the endpoint of 1 with 2.
-01:07:51 (1) - Nudge back 1/4 a beat.
-01:10:40 (1) - ^
Hard:
-00:23:52 (7) - New Combo mark goes here.
-00:46:65 (4) - ^
-00:50:98 (7) - ^
-00:51:70 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-00:58:75 (4) - Finish goes here.
-01:06:88 (9) - Shorten by 1/4 a beat if you're trying to sync to the vocals.
EDIT: Fixed = bubble.
BPM: 166.050
Offset: 9,072
Fix and I'll get back to modding.
EDIT:
Normal:
-00:10:87 (5) - Make this exactly symmetrical.
-00:23:52 (1) - ^
-00:32:10 (3) - Nudge back 1/4 a beat.
-00:55:23 (3) - Nudge forward 1/4 a beat.
-01:00:74 (4) - Make this exactly symmetrical.
-01:05:44 (2) - Stack this directly on the endpoint of 1. If 2 is exactly where you want it, match up the endpoint of 1 with 2.
-01:07:51 (1) - Nudge back 1/4 a beat.
-01:10:40 (1) - ^
Hard:
-00:23:52 (7) - New Combo mark goes here.
-00:46:65 (4) - ^
-00:50:98 (7) - ^
-00:51:70 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-00:58:75 (4) - Finish goes here.
-01:06:88 (9) - Shorten by 1/4 a beat if you're trying to sync to the vocals.
EDIT: Fixed = bubble.
Topic Starter
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
silly...just change the name of the creator to yours then submit it againztrot wrote:
animask heres my 1st real mod
00:13:79 add a beat it will be 8 in the combo
00:14:06 (9) - move to white tick
00:14:42 (10) - ^
thats all i can see ^^ nice job but you put in your name so i cant post it
Fixes from My diff, here it is.
Download: Shiraishi Ryoko - Taiyou no Kakera (ztrot) [Sushi971's Normal].osu
Download: Shiraishi Ryoko - Taiyou no Kakera (ztrot) [Sushi971's Normal].osu
Hmm.
*pop*
Hard is fine.
[Sushi971's Normal]
00:24:79 (2,3,4,5) - Sections like this have somewhat tricky timing. The spacing is sort of inconsistent in this map, and though it works a lot of the time it makes this section hard to read.
00:28:40 (2,3,4) - This one too.
00:32:01 (3) - Make this 1/2 longer.
00:48:09 - Maybe put a beat here?
01:00:38 (3,4) - Unnecessary jump.
*pop*
Hard is fine.
[Sushi971's Normal]
00:24:79 (2,3,4,5) - Sections like this have somewhat tricky timing. The spacing is sort of inconsistent in this map, and though it works a lot of the time it makes this section hard to read.
00:28:40 (2,3,4) - This one too.
00:32:01 (3) - Make this 1/2 longer.
00:48:09 - Maybe put a beat here?
01:00:38 (3,4) - Unnecessary jump.
Edited my Difficulty
Changing the *tricky* timing was quite difficult, i let it and tried make it more readable
i deleted one note for the first one (number 2) and modified something for the second
Some slider were messed up with bpm change ad so sounded weird
It may still need some corrections
Download: Shiraishi Ryoko - Taiyou no Kakera (ztrot) [Sushi971's Normal].osu
Changing the *tricky* timing was quite difficult, i let it and tried make it more readable
i deleted one note for the first one (number 2) and modified something for the second
Some slider were messed up with bpm change ad so sounded weird
It may still need some corrections
Download: Shiraishi Ryoko - Taiyou no Kakera (ztrot) [Sushi971's Normal].osu
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
I think you should add an insane mode and make it longer it's a good song otherwise I think your being somewhat lazy about it 
Starred, as promised. Don't give me kudos for this; I don't need it.
I'm still a little upset you didn't add my difficulty 
Topic Starter
this is insane mode for those who wanted it i don't know if insane enough but plz add to ranked set
EDITED* fixed combos and spacing awaiting approval
Download: Shiraishi Ryoko - Taiyou no Kakera (ztrot) [Insane].osu
EDITED* fixed combos and spacing awaiting approval
Download: Shiraishi Ryoko - Taiyou no Kakera (ztrot) [Insane].osu
I'll do my best to help out 
[Insane]
00:31:29 (5) - Maybe you can line this up with (4)?
00:41:41 (7) - You can try to line this up with the end of (6).
00:46:65 (1,2,3) - Try to line up this row between (3) and (4) to make it look more neat.
01:20:61 (3,4) - The distance between these two notes is different from 01:20:25 (2,3) even though they are evenly timed.
The rest doesn't seem too bad. the stacks like 00:20:09 (9,10,11,12,13) for example are a bit over wheliming, but is reasonable since its within the beat and managable within the "insane" level so that should be fine.
[Insane]
00:31:29 (5) - Maybe you can line this up with (4)?
00:41:41 (7) - You can try to line this up with the end of (6).
00:46:65 (1,2,3) - Try to line up this row between (3) and (4) to make it look more neat.
01:20:61 (3,4) - The distance between these two notes is different from 01:20:25 (2,3) even though they are evenly timed.
The rest doesn't seem too bad. the stacks like 00:20:09 (9,10,11,12,13) for example are a bit over wheliming, but is reasonable since its within the beat and managable within the "insane" level so that should be fine.