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Topic Starter
Melan Blue

theMikeAG wrote:

Huh, neat song.

~Beginner~
01:15:590 (1,2,3) - The way these sliders overlap doesn't look so great. Make more like this Changed it
~Normal~
00:49:340 (3) - You might to end this slider at 00:49:808. good idea^^

After looking over your entire map, that's all I've got.
Thank you so much! :)
SYSEN
hello........
a perfect map again x(
okay...
i'll just apply suggestion here....
they are just suggestion......really xD .. just pick whatever from my suggestion (some of them or maybe all of them not suit to your style)

general:
kiai time ends...........oh well...there are some reason for that....maybe you can adjust some slider end or etc etc so the kiai ends same for all diffs?

begginer:
00:09:027 (2) - try this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/136164
00:16:058 (2) - try this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/136168
00:46:996 (2,1) - well... this is a bit annoying xD... maybe ajust the slider to fits with the (2) approach circle ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/136169
00:57:777 (2,3,4) - sorry for all this mod xD...i can't help to write this xD...http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/136170 the slider really fits if you use it like this rather than circles
01:15:590 (1,3) - try this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/136174

normal:
00:18:871 (5,1,2,3,4) - make some pattern from it?
01:20:746 (3,1) - i just don't like the (3) covers (1) "in editor"... well...it's not noticeable in when you play it though.....

experienced:
didn't find anything

expert:
00:53:558 (3) - naziii xD http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/136178
00:55:902 (4) - nazi again...(sorry for it.... but i really like to nazi some off sliders xD) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/136180

okay...looks like it
Topic Starter
Melan Blue

Index-San wrote:

hello........ hi!
a perfect map again x( <3
okay...
i'll just apply suggestion here....
they are just suggestion......really xD .. just pick whatever from my suggestion (some of them or maybe all of them not suit to your style)

general:
kiai time ends...........oh well...there are some reason for that....maybe you can adjust some slider end or etc etc so the kiai ends same for all diffs? i made kiai the same everywhere :3

begginer:
00:09:027 (2) - try this ? okay
00:16:058 (2) - try this ? nah
00:46:996 (2,1) - well... this is a bit annoying xD... maybe ajust the slider to fits with the (2) approach circle ? umm okay
00:57:777 (2,3,4) - sorry for all this mod xD...i can't help to write this xD... the slider really fits if you use it like this rather than circles this actually looks good o.o
01:15:590 (1,3) - try this ? okay

normal:
00:18:871 (5,1,2,3,4) - make some pattern from it? okay
01:20:746 (3,1) - i just don't like the (3) covers (1) "in editor"... well...it's not noticeable in when you play it though..... looks fine for me

experienced:
didn't find anything

expert:
00:53:558 (3) - naziii xD xD okay
00:55:902 (4) - nazi again...(sorry for it.... but i really like to nazi some off sliders xD) fixed xD

okay...looks like it
Thank you for mod! ^-^
Hellzero
General
<3

Easy
<3

Normal
00:34:340 (1,2,3) - поднять (2) слайдер чуть выше чтобы расстояние между ними не казалось разным?
Experienced
00:00:590 - 00:15:590 - why this part without claps? I know it guest diff but still.

Expert
00:34:340 - свисток?
00:54:965 (2) - поставить НК тут?
00:58:715 (6) - НК?
01:02:465 (5) - НК?
имо эти НК лучше под музыку подходят.

Приятная мапа. Красивые слайдеры <3
Лови (ノ゚ω゚)ノ~~☆
Tony
Hey there. Here are some suggestions for your map

[General]
I think the kiai section should be here 01:08:090 - 01:23:090 . I think it's better there because the song starts to be more hardcore-ish and it's better to see some more lightning there than in the existing kiai section.

[Easy]

00:17:465 (1) - delete this NC cause in that part ( 00:15:590 - 00:22:621) you used NC every 8 white ticks. (hope you understand)
00:47:465 (1) - same ^^

[Normal]

00:44:183 (4) - remove NC and add new combo here : 00:45:121 (2) -
00:47:465 (1) - remove NC and add new combo here : 00:48:871 (2) -
result ---> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/136550

[Experienced]

00:00:590 - 00:20:511 - add claps and finishes like you did in Normal and Easy. It really fits
01:08:558 - 01:23:090 - same here ^^

[Expert]
really nice diff :)
Topic Starter
Melan Blue

Hellzero wrote:

General
<3 <3

Easy
<3 <3

Normal
00:34:340 (1,2,3) - поднять (2) слайдер чуть выше чтобы расстояние между ними не казалось разным? ок

Experienced
00:00:590 - 00:15:590 - why this part without claps? I know it guest diff but still.

Expert
00:34:340 - свисток? ок
00:54:965 (2) - поставить НК тут? ^
00:58:715 (6) - НК? ^
01:02:465 (5) - НК? ^
имо эти НК лучше под музыку подходят.

Приятная мапа. Красивые слайдеры <3
Лови (ノ゚ω゚)ノ~~☆ ~~(^ω^ ) спс!

Tony wrote:

Hey there. Here are some suggestions for your map

[General]
I think the kiai section should be here 01:08:090 - 01:23:090 . I think it's better there because the song starts to be more hardcore-ish and it's better to see some more lightning there than in the existing kiai section. no, i really want to leave it the way it is :<

[Easy]

00:17:465 (1) - delete this NC cause in that part ( 00:15:590 - 00:22:621) you used NC every 8 white ticks. (hope you understand) okay
00:47:465 (1) - same ^^ ^

[Normal]

00:44:183 (4) - remove NC and add new combo here : 00:45:121 (2) -
00:47:465 (1) - remove NC and add new combo here : 00:48:871 (2) -
result ---> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/136550 Okay

[Experienced]

00:00:590 - 00:20:511 - add claps and finishes like you did in Normal and Easy. It really fits
01:08:558 - 01:23:090 - same here ^^

[Expert]
really nice diff :)
Thank you so much! :D Спасибо~
Backstep
[General]
- About your song I think overall fine and I have a little suggestion.

[Beginer]
Fine

[Normal]
Fine

[Experienced]
00:19:340 (1) finish
00:38:090 (1) ^
00:45:590 (1) ^
01:00:590 (1) ^
01:15:590 (1) Finish at the start of slider.
Why I suggest you add finish sound ? because other difficulty have finish sound :D

[Expert]
Fine

Great map :P
Topic Starter
Melan Blue
>w< thank you!~
SPOILER
short message hnnnnnnnnngggg
spboxer3
sorry~I don't have any suggest for you ˊˋ
and everything looks good
Topic Starter
Melan Blue

spboxer3 wrote:

sorry~I don't have any suggest for you ˊˋ
and everything looks good
Thank you anyway :) I appreciate it
Lightgazer

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

hello~ :P

Experienced
00:49:808 (4) - add a New Combo?hm id say (5) but not sure here myself...
01:00:121 (6) - why dont start the New Combo at here?00:56:371 (7) = Same Pattern~

loveFantasy wrote:

hi

[Experienced]
  1. rhythm is better than [Expert] ;)
  2. 00:20:746 (1) - spinner end sounds better if volume is loweredok fixed
  3. 00:23:090 (3) - feel like lack a finishTrue
  4. 01:23:090 (3) - use soft:finish instead of normal:finishOkay~

backstep wrote:

[General]

[Experienced]
00:19:340 (1) finish
00:38:090 (1) ^
00:45:590 (1) ^
01:00:590 (1) ^
01:15:590 (1) Finish at the start of slider.
Why I suggest you add finish sound ? because other difficulty have finish sound :DBut i dont like Random Finishes :(

Great map :P
Thanks for Modding~

Download: Shoji Meguro - Long Way (Leyko) [Experienced].osu
-kevincela-
Wow,I'm loving so much this song *_*

Erm...Ok,I'm modding your map :D

[Beginner]

00:35:277 (2) - Well,this shape could be better
00:40:433 (4) - ^

[Normal]

01:01:527 (2) - Maybe it's better if you do the shape like in 01:00:590 (1) -
01:03:402 (5) - Maybe it's better to do like this:
01:08:558 - Add a note

[Experienced]

Nothing to point out!

[Expert]

Nothing to point out here too!

This map is incredibly good for a mapper that doesen't have any ranked map!Great work!
Topic Starter
Melan Blue

-kevincela- wrote:

Wow,I'm loving so much this song *_* :3 we all do

Erm...Ok,I'm modding your map :D

[Beginner]

00:35:277 (2) - Well,this shape could be better made it curvy~
00:40:433 (4) - ^ changed it just a little

[Normal]

01:01:527 (2) - Maybe it's better if you do the shape like in 01:00:590 (1) - okay
01:03:402 (5) - Maybe it's better to do like this: ^
01:08:558 - Add a note no, for some players its hard to reach a note after a spinner

[Experienced]

Nothing to point out!

[Expert]

Nothing to point out here too!

This map is incredibly good for a mapper that doesen't have any ranked map!Great work!
>w< Thank you so muuuch! I appreciate it!
haha5957
[Normal]
00:58:715 (3) - this looks better when curved upward IMO
(ctrl+V 00:56:840 (1) and ctrl+R)

tried to do some more but your map seemed to be nearly perfect for me. sorry for poor modding~


star~
Topic Starter
Melan Blue

haha5957 wrote:

[Normal]
00:58:715 (3) - this looks better when curved upward IMO okay
(ctrl+V 00:56:840 (1) and ctrl+R)

tried to do some more but your map seemed to be nearly perfect for me. sorry for poor modding~


star~
Thanks! ^^
winber1
Expert

00:01:527 (3) - perhaps you could move this note 1/4 tick back and adjust spacing. Sounds a little better to me
00:34:340 (7) - new combo
00:34:808 (1) - remove combo
00:49:105 (x) - add note?
01:20:160 (6) - i would rather you continue that pattern you had with the rest of the song and just use a slider and hitcircle in instead of this longer slider (so end the slider at 01:20:394 and add a note at 01:20:511?)

Experienced

00:01:527 (5) - delete note? it just doesn't fit very well imo :(
00:05:277 (4) - ^
00:33:988 (5) - i don't mind that much if you have this note, but i just didn't expect it to be 1/4 tick after the slider. i would rather unstack it, but then it also kinda messes up the pattern a bit. idk. maybe you cuold just put it on a red tick or something idk.
00:54:965 (1) - remove combo
00:55:199 (2) - new combo (to follow the music a bit more)
01:00:121 (6) - new combo? to follow the music and signal the jump?
01:14:183 (3) - move 1/4 tick forward? sounds better imo. you also use this at 01:19:808 (3) -

Normal

00:23:090 (1) - I would move this a little close to the center, even tho it's not that far away anyways... but idk, yeah lol
01:20:746 (3,1) - this overlap kinda bothers me a bit. I feel it may be a tiny bit confusing, but i don't really know.

Easy

00:46:996 (2) - new combo?
00:48:871 (3) - new combo? and remove the combo on the next note? these combos follow the music a little better imo.
00:59:183 (3) - add clap to beginning?

Nice map! :3
Topic Starter
Melan Blue

winber1 wrote:

Expert

00:01:527 (3) - perhaps you could move this note 1/4 tick back and adjust spacing. Sounds a little better to me nah
00:34:340 (7) - new combo okay
00:34:808 (1) - remove combo ^
00:49:105 (x) - add note? good idea
01:20:160 (6) - i would rather you continue that pattern you had with the rest of the song and just use a slider and hitcircle in instead of this longer slider (so end the slider at 01:20:394 and add a note at 01:20:511?) okay

Experienced

00:01:527 (5) - delete note? it just doesn't fit very well imo :(
00:05:277 (4) - ^
00:33:988 (5) - i don't mind that much if you have this note, but i just didn't expect it to be 1/4 tick after the slider. i would rather unstack it, but then it also kinda messes up the pattern a bit. idk. maybe you cuold just put it on a red tick or something idk.
00:54:965 (1) - remove combo
00:55:199 (2) - new combo (to follow the music a bit more)
01:00:121 (6) - new combo? to follow the music and signal the jump?
01:14:183 (3) - move 1/4 tick forward? sounds better imo. you also use this at 01:19:808 (3) -

Normal

00:23:090 (1) - I would move this a little close to the center, even tho it's not that far away anyways... but idk, yeah lol okay
01:20:746 (3,1) - this overlap kinda bothers me a bit. I feel it may be a tiny bit confusing, but i don't really know. i think it's okay, but if someone will mention it again, mb i'll change

Easy

00:46:996 (2) - new combo?
no
00:48:871 (3) - new combo? and remove the combo on the next note? these combos follow the music a little better imo. okay
00:59:183 (3) - add clap to beginning? xD yeah

Nice map! :3
Thank you so much! ^w^
regenz
hi
I'm form Thai Mapper Modding Team!

General

none.

Expert

00:11:840 (8) - Nc here instead of next circle.
00:14:652 add note here
00:18:168 (6) - make this return slider
00:34:808 (1,3) - not perfect arrange if you intetion to make it same line as 1
01:03:402 (3) - can you make this slider like this one 01:01:058 (3) - ( i mean shape )

01:09:965 (1,2) - I think this jump is a bit far compare to 01:10:785 (5,6) -
but if you intention
01:11:840 (1,2) - this jump is far than 01:09:965 (1,2) a little.
01:21:215 (1,2) - same case as above

01:19:691 (3) - bad position of stream move to 01:20:043 'll solve it

Experienced
AR +1 ?

01:00:121 (6,7) - new combo at 6 since it's only one set of jump in this diff make it clearly for player sake.

Normal

01:02:230 (3) - little bit close for previous object.
01:22:386 (2) - remove this note ?

Beginner

00:49:340 (1) - change to 1/1 return slider
01:02:933 (3,4) - ^


Please Vote for me if my mod useful!

http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=60&t=63069&st=0&sk=t&sd=a

Thanks. :)
Topic Starter
Melan Blue

regenz wrote:

hi Hi~ \(>w< /)
I'm form Thai Mapper Modding Team!

General

none.

Expert

00:11:840 (8) - Nc here instead of next circle. okay
00:14:652 add note here no
00:18:168 (6) - make this return slider okay
00:34:808 (1,3) - not perfect arrange if you intetion to make it same line as 1 fixed
01:03:402 (3) - can you make this slider like this one 01:01:058 (3) - ( i mean shape ) good one *3*
01:09:965 (1,2) - I think this jump is a bit far compare to 01:10:785 (5,6) -
but if you intention changed it
01:11:840 (1,2) - this jump is far than 01:09:965 (1,2) a little. fixed
01:21:215 (1,2) - same case as above ^

01:19:691 (3) - bad position of stream move to 01:20:043 'll solve it fixed

Experienced
AR +1 ?

01:00:121 (6,7) - new combo at 6 since it's only one set of jump in this diff make it clearly for player sake.

Normal

01:02:230 (3) - little bit close for previous object. fixed
01:22:386 (2) - remove this note ? hm okay

Beginner

00:49:340 (1) - change to 1/1 return slider good one
01:02:933 (3,4) - ^ hmm okay


Please Vote for me if my mod useful! ^^ sure

http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=60&t=63069&st=0&sk=t&sd=a

Thanks. :)
Thank you so much for modding! 8-)
zeroclover
hi, come for a little mod

Expert
00:36:215 (1) - move circle 1 grid to down
00:37:152 (3) - move circle 2 grid to right
00:38:090 (4) - move slider 2 grid to left

i looked many spacing issue problems (aimod), but this beatmap fun to play :D
1st result : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/163566

Experienced
minus : no clap sound like expert diff :( i like to hear clap hitsound at beginning

good hard diff :)
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/163572

Normal
Look good
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/163573

Beginner
fine
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/163576

go ranked go~
Topic Starter
Melan Blue

zeroclover wrote:

hi, come for a little mod hi 8-)

Expert
00:36:215 (1) - move circle 1 grid to down no
00:37:152 (3) - move circle 2 grid to right okay
00:38:090 (4) - move slider 2 grid to left okay

i looked many spacing issue problems (aimod), but this beatmap fun to play :D ;3; i know
1st result : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/163566

Experienced
minus : no clap sound like expert diff :( i like to hear clap hitsound at beginning

good hard diff :)
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/163572

Normal
Look good
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/163573

Beginner
fine
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/163576

go ranked go~
^^= Thank you so much!
YTYuyu
yo modding this song because of ur request :)

Beginner:
00:52:621(4) - x:20 y:248 from there fix the spacing till 00:55:433
01:13:715(3) - Aline the end point to (4)

Normal:
Change the name to Advanced?
01:13:715(4) - NC
01:17:465(4) - ^

Experienced:
00:24:027(4) - NC
00:43:246(7) - ^
00:49:808(4) - ^

Expert:
00:16:527(4) - NC
00:18:285(5) - ^
00:20:160(5) - ^

This is the best i can do. GL :D
zeroclover
hmm, when i playing expert diff now
why circle size is smaller than before @_@
or it just my feeling...

expert
00:14:418 - add a circle ( for stream at 00:14:183 (3,4,5,6) - its look fine to me )
Topic Starter
Melan Blue
Thanks for modding, guys 8-)
SPOILER

Byakugan249 wrote:

yo modding this song because of ur request :) yo^^

Beginner:
00:52:621(4) - x:20 y:248 from there fix the spacing till 00:55:433 okay
01:13:715(3) - Aline the end point to (4) ^

Normal:
Change the name to Advanced? nah, it's supposed to be like this :3
01:13:715(4) - NC no
01:17:465(4) - ^ ^

Experienced:
00:24:027(4) - NC
00:43:246(7) - ^
00:49:808(4) - ^

Expert:
00:16:527(4) - NC no
00:18:285(5) - ^ ^
00:20:160(5) - ^ ^

This is the best i can do. GL :D

zeroclover wrote:

hmm, when i playing expert diff now
why circle size is smaller than before @_@ no, they're the same as before xD
or it just my feeling...

expert
00:14:418 - add a circle ( for stream at 00:14:183 (3,4,5,6) - its look fine to me ) agree
Mikarunoel131_DELETED
I like this song so I would like to help you , too ^^ even if I am a bit new with modding things |D
I try my best =D

Easy :

0:30:121 spacing
0:37:152 maybe hitsound wishtle ?
0:41:840 spacing ( combo 1 and 2 )
0:50:277 maybe hitsound wishtle ?

/ love iiit x33 i am not good in things like sliders xD

Normal :

00:24:965 until 00:30:590 spacing ?
00:59:418 spacing
01:11:371 ^
01:14:183 ^
(about spacing here 00:24:965 until 00:30:590 . I don`t know if that is okay that way . But it looks strange to me so i wrote it in here^^)

/ like that song even more with hitsounds like that ^w^

Experienced :

01:01:996 whistle with audio 50 % would sound nicer than clap with 30 I think . It sounds like the rythem you made befor than ^^
(have to say like that whistle rythem you made x3)
01:22:855 maybe whistle ?

Well I don`t know the rules about spacing at insane maps so .. I just hear over the sounds ^^````
( hope i actually helped you a little bit )

Expert :

00:26:840 whistle ?
00:30:590 ^
00:31:537 ^

00:37:35 delet whistle
00:37:152 use whistel there ^^

/ just do what you think would sound better for you ^^ Like your beatmap , like Persona 4 , like that song xD
Hope i helped a little bit ^-^
Topic Starter
Melan Blue
Late reply is late ;A;
SPOILER

Mikarunoel131 wrote:

I like this song so I would like to help you , too ^^ even if I am a bit new with modding things |D
I try my best =D

Easy :

0:30:121 spacing fixed
0:37:152 maybe hitsound wishtle ? okay
0:41:840 spacing ( combo 1 and 2 ) fixed
0:50:277 maybe hitsound wishtle ? okay

/ love iiit x33 i am not good in things like sliders xD thanks ^^ neither am i actually xD

Normal :

00:24:965 until 00:30:590 spacing ? v
00:59:418 spacing fixed
01:11:371 ^ ^
01:14:183 ^ ^
(about spacing here 00:24:965 until 00:30:590 . I don`t know if that is okay that way . But it looks strange to me so i wrote it in here^^) it kind of looks strange to me too, but i don't know how to fix/change it @_@ '

/ like that song even more with hitsounds like that ^w^

Experienced :

01:01:996 whistle with audio 50 % would sound nicer than clap with 30 I think . It sounds like the rythem you made befor than ^^
(have to say like that whistle rythem you made x3)
01:22:855 maybe whistle ?

Well I don`t know the rules about spacing at insane maps so .. I just hear over the sounds ^^````
( hope i actually helped you a little bit )

Expert :

00:26:840 whistle ? okay
00:30:590 ^ ^
00:31:537 ^ ^

00:37:35 delet whistle
00:37:152 use whistel there ^^ okay :3

/ just do what you think would sound better for you ^^ Like your beatmap , like Persona 4 , like that song xD (thanks bro *_*)
Hope i helped a little bit ^-^
Thank you so much! ^_^
Lightgazer

winber1 wrote:

Experienced

00:01:527 (5) - delete note? it just doesn't fit very well imo :( I let them be for now
00:05:277 (4) - ^^
00:33:988 (5) - i don't mind that much if you have this note, but i just didn't expect it to be 1/4 tick after the slider. i would rather unstack it, but then it also kinda messes up the pattern a bit. idk. maybe you cuold just put it on a red tick or something idk.Stack is better here i think since its a 1/4
00:54:965 (1) - remove comboWhat i have now sounds good to me acually
00:55:199 (2) - new combo (to follow the music a bit more)Same here
01:00:121 (6) - new combo? to follow the music and signal the jump?Fixed
01:14:183 (3) - move 1/4 tick forward? sounds better imo. you also use this at 01:19:808 (3)Ill Think about that one


Nice map! :3

regenz wrote:

hi
I'm form Thai Mapper Modding Team!

Experienced
AR +1 ?hm okay

01:00:121 (6,7) - new combo at 6 since it's only one set of jump in this diff make it clearly for player sake.Fixed

Please Vote for me if my mod useful!

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Thanks. :)

zeroclover wrote:

hi, come for a little mod

Experienced
minus : no clap sound like expert diff :( i like to hear clap hitsound at beginning )Finally Fixed

good hard diff :)
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/163572

go ranked go~

Byakugan249 wrote:

yo modding this song because of ur request :)

Experienced:
00:24:027(4) - NC
00:43:246(7) - ^
00:49:808(4) - ^
i think its ok how the NCs are but thanks for pointing them out

This is the best i can do. GL :D

Mikarunoel131 wrote:

I like this song so I would like to help you , too ^^ even if I am a bit new with modding things |D
I try my best =D

Experienced :

01:01:996 whistle with audio 50 % would sound nicer than clap with 30 I think . It sounds like the rythem you made befor than ^^ Not sure here
(have to say like that whistle rythem you made x3)Thanks~
01:22:855 maybe whistle ?it would change the rhythm then :/

Well I don`t know the rules about spacing at insane maps so .. I just hear over the sounds ^^````
( hope i actually helped you a little bit )
Download: Shoji Meguro - Long Way (Leyko) [Experienced].osu
Aleks719
Timing
I see that your timing from Breeze, but imo offset 582(-8ms from now). i get +/1ms on OD9 with 582.

Expert
Не будь жестокой, ставь ОД-1, т.е. ОД7.

Experienced
claps on quiet sections ? hum, strange. but ok.
00:33:988 (5) - well, imo, doesn't fit here. replace 1/4 later to the downbeat (red tick) or remove this note
and inconsistence at the end of diff: 01:21:215 (1,2,3) - suddenly triple, when only doubles before.

Normal
00:24:957 (3,1) - очень. очень плохой антиджамп. фиксить о/
00:28:707 (1,2) - ^
00:48:863 (1,2,3) - так посимпатичнее
sliders

312,180,49332,2,0,B|356:180|360:228|356:276|312:276,1,140,2|8
200,276,50269,2,0,B|156:276|152:228|156:180|200:180,1,140,2|8
01:22:152 (1) - remove nc

spacing, slder :
68,320,24965,2,0,B|64:264|92:228|128:212|128:212|92:192|52:160|60:104,1,262.499992176891,2|0
96,80,26371,5,8
144,68,26605,1,0

Easy
01:04:340 (1) - я даже помню,кто его рисовал,лол. отличная диффка, без нареканий
Kurai

Aleks719 wrote:

Timing
I see that your timing from Breeze, but imo offset 582(-8ms from now). i get +/1ms on OD9 with 582.
I have checked the offset on Aleks' request, and 582 sounds better.
Aleks719
orz Thanks a lot, Kurai!


Beginner
01:04:332 (1) - Нельзя обеззвучивать концы слайдеров. Тайм секцию с 5% перенеси на начало спиннера. А в конец того слайдера добавь вистл. Хотя странно, зачем ты так тут вообще сделала,т.к. в нормале уже все ок без этой секции с 5%

Expert
00:41:832 (1,2) - на пару клеточек вниз.

EDIT : Bubbled!
-kevincela-
Yay,it's bubbled! Go for rank :3
regenz
I Wish this map Rank Soon. Leyko Mapping Skill Is great.
Goodluck.
IceBeam
[Normal]
единственная сложность,названная по стандарту. может придумать для неё что-нибудь?

00:24:957 (3) - вот тут слайдер заканчивается на красный тик,там нет очевидной ноты,так что лучше закончить на 1/2 раньше или позже
00:28:707 (1) - ^ ну,на твоё усмотрение,они не плохи сейчас,можешь оставить

[Expert]
00:34:917 - было бы логично сюда нотку добавить
00:37:496 (7) - если передвинуть на 1/4 назад - ритм будет более правильным

[Experienced]
00:36:558 (2) - slider starts on blue tick here? no way,add first repeat to 00:36:441
also,to continue this rhytm,add notes to 00:37:027 and 00:37:378

01:00:113 (1,2) - the first and only "jump" in this diff,so looks odd :s place them in another way?

and fix this horrible volume jumps in the intro/outro parts D: I can't even hear the rhytm,so I'll have to check it once again
make a constant volume

that's it
Topic Starter
Melan Blue

IceBeam wrote:

[Normal]
единственная сложность,названная по стандарту. может придумать для неё что-нибудь? Вообще я называла диффы осваиваясь на четвертой персоне, а там нормал так и называется хD так что думаю можно оставить~

00:24:957 (3) - вот тут слайдер заканчивается на красный тик,там нет очевидной ноты,так что лучше закончить на 1/2 раньше или позже ок, исправила
00:28:707 (1) - ^ ну,на твоё усмотрение,они не плохи сейчас,можешь оставить ^

[Expert]
00:34:917 - было бы логично сюда нотку добавить ок
00:37:496 (7) - если передвинуть на 1/4 назад - ритм будет более правильным ^

that's it
Все исправленно :D Спасибо за мод~
IceBeam
ranked!
Louis Cyphre
Наконец-то!! : D молодец <3
0x57CB36
congrats!
spboxer3
congratz for your first Rank map :P
Topic Starter
Melan Blue
Thanks everyone!^^~
-kevincela-
Gratz! ^^
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