NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
I think you really could do better with some of the slider shapes... Ill fix some of them

[Beginner]
Slider Tick Rate 2 don't really fit this diff, you don't even have a 1/2 note... why you need 1/2 tick sounds all the way. Okay fixed
00:14:183 (3) - clap at both beginning and end. this is a similar part to 00:10:433 (3). the hitsounds change should really start from
00:16:058 (2) oops sorry i just forgot to add clap on (3) x.x
00:19:340 (1) - remove finish at the end, or switch it to 2's beginning okay

[Normal]
feels really weird to have such a high slider velocity in a Normal diff (Beginner:1.0, Normal:1.8, Experienced:2.0). I don't want to touch this diff now because the spacing feels strange to me (in a slider, you move so fast, but when meet a circle, the move suddenly slow down << because you're using 0.6x distance spacing all the way). If possible, i'll say set your slider velocity to a better value (1.4~1.6, possiblely) and rearrange this diff. you could keep the beats, so it won't need too much work i guess. Okay, ill change Normal ;3; Ill try at least

[Experienced]
no hitsounds for the first part?
00:26:488 (3) - hope this could move 1/2 later (mean the triple is start at 00:26:605 (4), you could stack them on the next (1), sounds better to me.
00:33:402 (4,5) - a little hard to read (because you don't have such beats before)
01:13:011 - add a note?

[Expert]
00:19:808 (2,3) - in an Insane diff, this is probably too close to each others (mainly it's a little crowded and looks not so good) changed
01:19:691 - add a note? okay good one
i think the hitsounds in this diff seems too regular, while your beats are full of 2*1/4 or 4*1/4... not so fit imo. but i can't do much without totally rearrange the hitsounds. hmm okay ill fix it

Raging Bull wrote:

Experienced:
I would lower AR by one tick. Not a really fast song to me.Hm okay Fixed
00:53:090 (1) - Add a finish here to signal kiai time?Sounds good so fixed~

Leorda wrote:

Experienced
00:20:043 (4) - Add 1 repeating slider?Fixed
00:57:308 (3) - Too close from previous notehm okay fixed

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Experienced]
no hitsounds for the first part?
00:26:488 (3) - hope this could move 1/2 later (mean the triple is start at 00:26:605 (4), you could stack them on the next (1), sounds better to me.hm but doesnt feel good to me :-/
00:33:402 (4,5) - a little hard to read (because you don't have such beats before)ill think about that
01:13:011 - add a note?okay

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Beginner]
Very good diff.

00:19:340 (1) - Make this blanket (2) more? hmm okay

All I could find.
[Normal]
Never liked distance snapping below 1.0...

Just try to fix some blankets, like fixed okay

01:04:340 (1) - This one too, bah, basically just try and do that.
It's generally good.

[Experienced]
Very good job here.

Even if 0.8 lol
[Expert]
00:31:058 (2) - Make it head towards the left okay
- 00:31:996 (4) - and this one towards the right. Then it doesn't touch (1) ^

00:47:933 (8) - On these sliders, the white control point if moved down two ticks, makes the slider look better. ^
00:49:340 (1) - Same here. ^

01:19:574 - ahahaha this is empty what a throw-off xD its a tricky moment

Good map. I can't stardsaefsdf

pieguy1372 wrote:

General:

-The left half of the scorebar is hard to see, perhaps brighten it a bit? okay ill try
-Tick rate 1? Actually tick rate 2 sounds fine here o.o

Easy:

00:40:433 (1) - Remove NC? oh, okay xD
00:44:183 (1) - ^ ^
00:50:746 (1) - ^ ^

Normal:

00:16:527 (2) - Remove finish from end nah, its supposed to be this way
00:24:965 (3) - this slider hangs off the edge of the playfield fixed

Experienced:

-The rhythms here seem too hard for a [Hard] diff, there are a lot of more complex 1/4 patterns I guess if you want you can keep it

Expert:

00:16:996 (4) - Remove finish from end no
00:20:746 (4) - Remove finish ^
01:12:308 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - hm, perhaps unstack these? I think it might be better okay

nice map~

Charles445 wrote:

General
When your health is low, it is very difficult to see the HP bar because it blends in the background http://puu.sh/4BbP. Make it more visible please. Yeah, i know about it :3 will change it

Beginner
Wow... This difficulty is absolutely amazing. It's easy to read and has unique beats to keep the fun going. Great work! Wow thanks ^^

Normal
Using a distance snap of 0.6x isn't a good idea because it makes sliders seem too fast. I suggest using 0.8x, 0.9x, or 1.0x. omg i hate this problem with sliders, it gives me a headache but ok, ill fix it xD
01:14:183 (5) - It would be nice if this didn't touch the score fixed
01:17:465 (4) - The hitburst from the 2 makes it a bit hard to see the reverse arrow. Try flipping it vertically like this http://puu.sh/4Beq ^
01:22:621 (3) - Move this up 1 space so the spacing is better. ^

Experienced
Approach Rate +1
This difficulty is tough to read, mainly because of the objects that have three 1/4 spaces in between them, like http://puu.sh/4Bdh and http://puu.sh/4Bdj .
There's noth0ing really wrong with this difficulty otherwise...

Expert
HP Drain -1, right now the drain is much too unforgiving. okay
00:04:808 (2,3,4) - Move these to the right 1 time so the spacing on the stream is better. fixed
00:14:769 (6,7) - Lessen the spacing between these two so the 1/4 beat is clearer. Like this http://puu.sh/4Bca ^
00:25:668 - Add a circle oh okay
00:29:418 - ^^ ^
01:05:277 (3) - Reverse this slider so the combo has better flow ^
This difficulty is fun and readable, nice job!

1. all good

1. all good

1. 00:28:715 (1) - i highly suggest don't make symmetrical arrangement here, since you're following the piano, this point is different from 00:24:965 (3), put a circle at 00:28:715 and start slider at 00:28:949
2. 00:51:215 (1) - use a ~35% vol clap instead
3. 00:59:418 (4) - it's recommended to not use slider with more than 1 repeats in Easy/Normal

1. over all it's nice, but i personally think you waste some of the blue tick rhythm of the song, example:
   00:02:933 (2) - can be shorten by 1/4
   01:14:418 (2) - can be move to 01:14:300
2. and to this slider, looks a lot better if you make it more curvy:
   
   SPOILER

   

1. rhythm is better than [Expert]
2. 00:20:746 (1) - spinner end sounds better if volume is lowered
3. 00:23:090 (3) - feel like lack a finish
4. 01:23:090 (3) - use soft:finish instead of normal:finish

theMikeAG wrote:

Huh, neat song.

~Beginner~
01:15:590 (1,2,3) - The way these sliders overlap doesn't look so great. Make more like this Changed it
~Normal~
00:49:340 (3) - You might to end this slider at 00:49:808. good idea^^

After looking over your entire map, that's all I've got.

Index-San wrote:

hello........ hi!
a perfect map again x( <3
okay...
i'll just apply suggestion here....
they are just suggestion......really xD .. just pick whatever from my suggestion (some of them or maybe all of them not suit to your style)

general:
kiai time ends...........oh well...there are some reason for that....maybe you can adjust some slider end or etc etc so the kiai ends same for all diffs? i made kiai the same everywhere :3

begginer:
00:09:027 (2) - try this ? okay
00:16:058 (2) - try this ? nah
00:46:996 (2,1) - well... this is a bit annoying xD... maybe ajust the slider to fits with the (2) approach circle ? umm okay
00:57:777 (2,3,4) - sorry for all this mod xD...i can't help to write this xD... the slider really fits if you use it like this rather than circles this actually looks good o.o
01:15:590 (1,3) - try this ? okay

normal:
00:18:871 (5,1,2,3,4) - make some pattern from it? okay
01:20:746 (3,1) - i just don't like the (3) covers (1) "in editor"... well...it's not noticeable in when you play it though..... looks fine for me

experienced:
didn't find anything

expert:
00:53:558 (3) - naziii xD xD okay
00:55:902 (4) - nazi again...(sorry for it.... but i really like to nazi some off sliders xD) fixed xD

okay...looks like it

Hellzero wrote:

General
<3 <3

Easy
<3 <3

Normal
00:34:340 (1,2,3) - поднять (2) слайдер чуть выше чтобы расстояние между ними не казалось разным? ок

Experienced
00:00:590 - 00:15:590 - why this part without claps? I know it guest diff but still.

Expert
00:34:340 - свисток? ок
00:54:965 (2) - поставить НК тут? ^
00:58:715 (6) - НК? ^
01:02:465 (5) - НК? ^
имо эти НК лучше под музыку подходят.

Приятная мапа. Красивые слайдеры <3
Лови (ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ~~☆ ~~(^ω^ ) спс!

Tony wrote:

Hey there. Here are some suggestions for your map

[General]
I think the kiai section should be here 01:08:090 - 01:23:090 . I think it's better there because the song starts to be more hardcore-ish and it's better to see some more lightning there than in the existing kiai section. no, i really want to leave it the way it is :<

[Easy]

00:17:465 (1) - delete this NC cause in that part ( 00:15:590 - 00:22:621) you used NC every 8 white ticks. (hope you understand) okay
00:47:465 (1) - same ^^ ^

[Normal]

00:44:183 (4) - remove NC and add new combo here : 00:45:121 (2) -
00:47:465 (1) - remove NC and add new combo here : 00:48:871 (2) -
result ---> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/136550 Okay

[Experienced]

00:00:590 - 00:20:511 - add claps and finishes like you did in Normal and Easy. It really fits
01:08:558 - 01:23:090 - same here ^^

[Expert]
really nice diff

spboxer3 wrote:

sorry~I don't have any suggest for you ˊˋ
and everything looks good

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

hello~

Experienced
00:49:808 (4) - add a New Combo?hm id say (5) but not sure here myself...
01:00:121 (6) - why dont start the New Combo at here?00:56:371 (7) = Same Pattern~

loveFantasy wrote:

hi

[Experienced]

1. rhythm is better than [Expert]
2. 00:20:746 (1) - spinner end sounds better if volume is loweredok fixed
3. 00:23:090 (3) - feel like lack a finishTrue
4. 01:23:090 (3) - use soft:finish instead of normal:finishOkay~

backstep wrote:

[General]

[Experienced]
00:19:340 (1) finish
00:38:090 (1) ^
00:45:590 (1) ^
01:00:590 (1) ^
01:15:590 (1) Finish at the start of slider.
Why I suggest you add finish sound ? because other difficulty have finish sound But i dont like Random Finishes

Great map

-kevincela- wrote:

Wow,I'm loving so much this song *_* :3 we all do

Erm...Ok,I'm modding your map

[Beginner]

00:35:277 (2) - Well,this shape could be better made it curvy~
00:40:433 (4) - ^ changed it just a little

[Normal]

01:01:527 (2) - Maybe it's better if you do the shape like in 01:00:590 (1) - okay
01:03:402 (5) - Maybe it's better to do like this: ^
01:08:558 - Add a note no, for some players its hard to reach a note after a spinner

[Experienced]

Nothing to point out!

[Expert]

Nothing to point out here too!

This map is incredibly good for a mapper that doesen't have any ranked map!Great work!

haha5957 wrote:

[Normal]
00:58:715 (3) - this looks better when curved upward IMO okay
(ctrl+V 00:56:840 (1) and ctrl+R)

tried to do some more but your map seemed to be nearly perfect for me. sorry for poor modding~


star~

winber1 wrote:

Expert

00:01:527 (3) - perhaps you could move this note 1/4 tick back and adjust spacing. Sounds a little better to me nah
00:34:340 (7) - new combo okay
00:34:808 (1) - remove combo ^
00:49:105 (x) - add note? good idea
01:20:160 (6) - i would rather you continue that pattern you had with the rest of the song and just use a slider and hitcircle in instead of this longer slider (so end the slider at 01:20:394 and add a note at 01:20:511?) okay

Experienced

00:01:527 (5) - delete note? it just doesn't fit very well imo
00:05:277 (4) - ^
00:33:988 (5) - i don't mind that much if you have this note, but i just didn't expect it to be 1/4 tick after the slider. i would rather unstack it, but then it also kinda messes up the pattern a bit. idk. maybe you cuold just put it on a red tick or something idk.
00:54:965 (1) - remove combo
00:55:199 (2) - new combo (to follow the music a bit more)
01:00:121 (6) - new combo? to follow the music and signal the jump?
01:14:183 (3) - move 1/4 tick forward? sounds better imo. you also use this at 01:19:808 (3) -

Normal

00:23:090 (1) - I would move this a little close to the center, even tho it's not that far away anyways... but idk, yeah lol okay
01:20:746 (3,1) - this overlap kinda bothers me a bit. I feel it may be a tiny bit confusing, but i don't really know. i think it's okay, but if someone will mention it again, mb i'll change

Easy

00:46:996 (2) - new combo? no
00:48:871 (3) - new combo? and remove the combo on the next note? these combos follow the music a little better imo. okay
00:59:183 (3) - add clap to beginning? xD yeah

Nice map! :3

regenz wrote:

hi Hi~ \(>w< /)
I'm form Thai Mapper Modding Team!

General

none.

Expert

00:11:840 (8) - Nc here instead of next circle. okay
00:14:652 add note here no
00:18:168 (6) - make this return slider okay
00:34:808 (1,3) - not perfect arrange if you intetion to make it same line as 1 fixed
01:03:402 (3) - can you make this slider like this one 01:01:058 (3) - ( i mean shape ) good one *3*
01:09:965 (1,2) - I think this jump is a bit far compare to 01:10:785 (5,6) -
but if you intention changed it
01:11:840 (1,2) - this jump is far than 01:09:965 (1,2) a little. fixed
01:21:215 (1,2) - same case as above ^

01:19:691 (3) - bad position of stream move to 01:20:043 'll solve it fixed

Experienced
AR +1 ?

01:00:121 (6,7) - new combo at 6 since it's only one set of jump in this diff make it clearly for player sake.

Normal

01:02:230 (3) - little bit close for previous object. fixed
01:22:386 (2) - remove this note ? hm okay

Beginner

00:49:340 (1) - change to 1/1 return slider good one
01:02:933 (3,4) - ^ hmm okay


Please Vote for me if my mod useful! ^^ sure

http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=60&t=63069&st=0&sk=t&sd=a

Thanks.

zeroclover wrote:

hi, come for a little mod hi

Expert
00:36:215 (1) - move circle 1 grid to down no
00:37:152 (3) - move circle 2 grid to right okay
00:38:090 (4) - move slider 2 grid to left okay

i looked many spacing issue problems (aimod), but this beatmap fun to play ;3; i know
1st result : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/163566

Experienced
minus : no clap sound like expert diff i like to hear clap hitsound at beginning

good hard diff
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/163572

Normal
Look good
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/163573

Beginner
fine
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/163576

go ranked go~

winber1 wrote:

Experienced

00:01:527 (5) - delete note? it just doesn't fit very well imo I let them be for now
00:05:277 (4) - ^^
00:33:988 (5) - i don't mind that much if you have this note, but i just didn't expect it to be 1/4 tick after the slider. i would rather unstack it, but then it also kinda messes up the pattern a bit. idk. maybe you cuold just put it on a red tick or something idk.Stack is better here i think since its a 1/4
00:54:965 (1) - remove comboWhat i have now sounds good to me acually
00:55:199 (2) - new combo (to follow the music a bit more)Same here
01:00:121 (6) - new combo? to follow the music and signal the jump?Fixed
01:14:183 (3) - move 1/4 tick forward? sounds better imo. you also use this at 01:19:808 (3)Ill Think about that one


Nice map! :3

regenz wrote:

hi
I'm form Thai Mapper Modding Team!

Experienced
AR +1 ?hm okay

01:00:121 (6,7) - new combo at 6 since it's only one set of jump in this diff make it clearly for player sake.Fixed

Please Vote for me if my mod useful!

http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=60&t=63069&st=0&sk=t&sd=a

Thanks.

zeroclover wrote:

hi, come for a little mod

Experienced
minus : no clap sound like expert diff i like to hear clap hitsound at beginning )Finally Fixed

good hard diff
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/163572

go ranked go~

Byakugan249 wrote:

yo modding this song because of ur request

Experienced:
00:24:027(4) - NC
00:43:246(7) - ^
00:49:808(4) - ^
i think its ok how the NCs are but thanks for pointing them out

This is the best i can do. GL

Mikarunoel131 wrote:

I like this song so I would like to help you , too ^^ even if I am a bit new with modding things |D
I try my best =D

Experienced :

01:01:996 whistle with audio 50 % would sound nicer than clap with 30 I think . It sounds like the rythem you made befor than ^^ Not sure here
(have to say like that whistle rythem you made x3)Thanks~
01:22:855 maybe whistle ?it would change the rhythm then :/

Well I don`t know the rules about spacing at insane maps so .. I just hear over the sounds ^^````
( hope i actually helped you a little bit )

sliders

312,180,49332,2,0,B|356:180|360:228|356:276|312:276,1,140,2|8
200,276,50269,2,0,B|156:276|152:228|156:180|200:180,1,140,2|8

68,320,24965,2,0,B|64:264|92:228|128:212|128:212|92:192|52:160|60:104,1,262.499992176891,2|0
96,80,26371,5,8
144,68,26605,1,0

Aleks719 wrote:

Timing
I see that your timing from Breeze, but imo offset 582(-8ms from now). i get +/1ms on OD9 with 582.

IceBeam wrote:

[Normal]
единственная сложность,названная по стандарту. может придумать для неё что-нибудь? Вообще я называла диффы осваиваясь на четвертой персоне, а там нормал так и называется хD так что думаю можно оставить~

00:24:957 (3) - вот тут слайдер заканчивается на красный тик,там нет очевидной ноты,так что лучше закончить на 1/2 раньше или позже ок, исправила
00:28:707 (1) - ^ ну,на твоё усмотрение,они не плохи сейчас,можешь оставить ^

[Expert]
00:34:917 - было бы логично сюда нотку добавить ок
00:37:496 (7) - если передвинуть на 1/4 назад - ритм будет более правильным ^

that's it

Все исправленно Спасибо за мод~

Derekku wrote:

Very nice <3

Added some red to the title text (artist/title at the beginning). Let me know if you want it changed or if it's alright!