1. CXu (4,21 stars, 145 notes)
2. Lively (4,56 stars, 173 notes)
3. Peaceful (1,69 stars, 94 notes)

iPown3G wrote:

Alright so...

SPOILER

CXu

00:17:742 (1) extend this spinner to end at 00:19:992 (delete the spinner inbetween) - But I like my triple-spinners ;_;
00:32:892 (8) don't let this slider be overlapped. you can for example re-arrange them like this:- Butbut then it isn't KAWAII kool anymore http://puu.sh/4eUn
(after doing this you will have to re-arrange the incoming notes ofc)
01:04:692 (5,6,7,8,9) i don't know if this is the right diff for this "stream", you could use a repeating slider - But don't they just play well <3 and it works as a indicator of the slight speedup of sliders, as well as the buildup of the song imo
01:12:492 (1) start new combo with the slider after this note - Huh, yes indeed. Fix
01:22:542 (1) extend spinner to end at 01:24:792 (delete spinner inbetween) - Read first one =w=

cya l8r

Hellzero wrote:

M4M

General
http://puu.sh/4gmj ;[*facepalm*.. сделал

CXu
00:49:392 (1,2) - spacing - Fixed that for you, CXu~

Lively
01:26:892 (1,2,3,4) - довольна таки сложно переключится на 1/6 - но оно подходит под музыку в этом месте =\
01:19:692 (4) - свисток? - =\

Сложно тут что то найти. Разве что на Peaceful и Lively дифах до 20 секунды хитсаунды отсутствуют.
я пробовал расставить свистки, но на мой взгляд они лишние в этой части

Elly-chan wrote:

Oh god I downloaded all your maps and they were so pro. mod4mod.

? = Suggestion
. = I think you should really do this.
! = You Must Fix It!

[General]
Why can't the guest diff keep the same BG as your maps? XD Doesn't matter though. Good~
^Actually it can, it's just kinda fun to have another bg~~ xD Well if you (CracK) want to, you could change it to the same one, I don't really mind =w=

[CXu]
00:07:392 (6) - New Combo? - Hmm yeah why not, fix~
00:17:742 - Do you think you can do something other then the first two spinners here. :l - Why no love for triplespinners
00:28:992 (2) - Just Clap. - Indeed, fix
00:48:192 (5) - Instead of whistle, clap. - idk, I think this is fine =w=
01:09:042 (4) - Instead ontop of the slider, can you put it under? *That sounds confusing so I'll show you* http://puu.sh/4nDO - Huh... Isn't it fine as it is?
01:11:892 (5) - Because of this, the pattern looks messy. Try this and adjust the patterns after it? http://puu.sh/4nDZ - I dunno, I think this is fine =w=
01:18:642 (3) - Remove this note? I dont know, it just seems weird with it there xD - I think this rhythm is fine at this place so not changing xP
01:22:542 - Do you think you can do something other then the first two spinners here. :l - yeah why no love
It should look perfect imo then.
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TicClick wrote:

CXu
00:17:722 (1,1) - I would merge these two into one - Just doesn't feel right for me
00:25:972 (3,7) - Hm. Try to remove these whistles and listen to it. In my opinion, it sounds better. If you agree, don't forget about other notes like 00:31:372 (5) - and so on - Actually yeah.... fixed some whistle stuff~
01:04:672 (5,6) - It confuses me - Really? I think it's fine
01:22:372 (5) - I would start spinner instead of this note - Hmm, good point. Fix~

1. Suggestions : You don't need to follow them if you disagree
   
   1. Use slidertick rate 1 in all diffs (as CXu difficulty). The slider tick rate should be the same in each difficulty because it should fit the song and not be used for have a lower/higher combo, increase difficulty etc... And slider tick rate 1 fits perfectly here :3
   2. Adjust the Audio Lead-in to 2000ms in each difficulty for consistency.
   3. Disable the letterbox during breaks as you don't use any breaks ?
   4. Add a 3rd combo color ? I think it's too much repetitive with only two different combo color.

1. Unrankable issues, errors : You need to fix them if you want your map ranked someday.
   
   1. Your .mp3 is 197kbps. The max bitrate allowed is 192kbps so you have to reencode it :/

1. Difficulty settings : You don't need to follow them if you disagree
   
   1. HP drain 4 and Overall Difficulty 4 are too much for an easy difficulty. Consider reducing them.

1. Suggestions : You don't need to follow them if you disagree
   
   1. 00:24:792 - Add a note (with a finish), I can clearly hear cymbals here, so it makes more sense to start the patternat this spot.

1. Unrankable issues, errors : You need to fix them if you want your map ranked someday.
   
   1. Fine

1. Everythings look fine here :3

1. Difficulty settings : You don't need to follow them if you disagree
   
   1. Fine

1. Suggestions : You don't need to follow them if you disagree
   
   1. 00:04:242 (4) - This slider doesn't start on something really consistent, so consider starting this slider 1/4 later. It will start on the piano, it would be more playable and it makes more sense.
   2. 00:06:642 (4) - Same as above, move this circle 1/4 later
   3. 00:13:842 (4) - Same as above
   4. 01:17:592 (1,2,3) - This triple feels awkward (it doesn't fit the music), so remove (2) or move (2) to 01:18:042.
      SPOILER

      
   5. 01:26:892 (1,2,3,4) - Why 1/6 ? There isn't any 1/6 in this song, so you can't use them, else it's considered as overmapping. Change it for a 1/4 triple, it would make more sense.

1. Unrankable issues, errors : You need to fix them if you want your map ranked someday.
   
   1. Fine

Leorda wrote:

General
* You need more hitsound, I feel the hitsound feels low. So you need to add some clap (Not sure) - I think my hitsounds are fine?
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CXu (pronounce : shi-chu) - More like Sju but okay xD
00:12:792 (3,4,5) - This stacks are stacked badly in gameplay, please unstack or restack until it fixed - I think I got this kinda fixed =w=
00:43:692 (7) - I think this notes is almost offscreen... - Well... Almost I think it's fine where it is
01:04:692 (5) - New combo? - Hmm, yeah. Fix~

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1. The .mp3 file has a bitrate of 197 kbps. You have to re-encode it to 192 kbps, which is the maximum allowed (yeah, I know you knew, but it's just better to point it out anyway).
2. For what I read on the internet, kei, miyako, chihiro, and yuuko are characters from the anime, ef. So, why do they have to be in the tags? I can't really find a reason for anyone to search by the characters from a series.
   The same goes for shaft. For what I read, it's the studio that created the anime. So again, I don't see a reason for having them in the tags.
   Could you please remove them?

1. Well, not much to say about this one. The mapping is simple, and good.
   The thing is, I was sooo waiting to hear some custom claps, and it didn't happen... I think how this sounds would be enhanced if you add some of those claps, keeping a low volume, in the kiai section. Try it, I think you'll like it

1. 00:08:592 (1) - This is kind of too far from (6) - the distance from it is of 1,32x.
   I don't know if you thought of making a Normal or a Hard, but I think it would be better if it was more Normal-ish, so please place this here using 1,0x spacing.
2. 00:13:692 (4,5) - This is not fully stacked under (3), which is totally ok. But then, (5) is fully and perfectly stacked under (4). And having those two different ways of placing the circles there looks ugly, at least in the editor. Perhaps it's better if you just stack (4) and (5) directly under (3).
3. 00:17:742 (1,1) - These two spinners are too short, even if the computer gets 3000 bonus points. I don't think it would be easy to play for something more like a Normal. I'd suggest that you delete this two spinners, and create one that starts here and ends at 00:19:992 (where the other spinner ended).
4. 00:41:292 (1,2,3) - Again you have a jump here, which isn't just right, but I don't think it is much of a problem here.
   But also, you have that triplet that doesn't look good at all, imo. Remove (2). That works just fine here.
   Again, I strongly consider that triplet as overmapping (at least for a difficulty that is in between a Normal and a Hard)
5. 00:43:242 (4) - Here, too. Why is it that so many people add triplets everywhere thinking it makes the map funnier? This isn't actually needed, try removing it, and also removing the clap at 00:43:692 (5), you will notice it sounds even more delicate.
6. 00:52:992 (8) - SInce the spacing isn't 1,0x, consider adding a new combo here.
7. 01:05:292 (4) - This clap here sounds off in the mini stream. It would be much more pleasant to hear a whistle. Try replacing it for the clap.
8. 01:22:392 (1,1) - Same as in 00:17:742. Create one unique spinner that ends at 01:24:792.

1. 00:24:792 (5) - Meh, this should have a soft finish, and the volume should be arround 50%. Try it.
2. Again, as in [Peaceful], I feel that some custom claps are missing one the kiai section. Seriously, you should at least try adding them.
3. Also, those 1/8s at the beginning didn't convince much. Are they really necessary? Maybe some well.placed 1/4ths would be play better... I don't know.

narakucrimson wrote:

[CXu]

1. 00:08:592 (1) - This is kind of too far from (6) - the distance from it is of 1,32x.
   I don't know if you thought of making a Normal or a Hard, but I think it would be better if it was more Normal-ish, so please place this here using 1,0x spacing. - I somewhat moved the (6) a liiiiiittle bit (changed the shape a little) so it's a biiit closer. I don't think this is much of a problem though, and this isn't really meant to be just a "Normal" (hence the streamthing)
2. 00:13:692 (4,5) - This is not fully stacked under (3), which is totally ok. But then, (5) is fully and perfectly stacked under (4). And having those two different ways of placing the circles there looks ugly, at least in the editor. Perhaps it's better if you just stack (4) and (5) directly under (3).- When stacked directly underneath, it looks weird in playmode. I've tried to get this to look a little better though (again xP). Hopefully this is better.
3. 00:17:742 (1,1) - These two spinners are too short, even if the computer gets 3000 bonus points. I don't think it would be easy to play for something more like a Normal. I'd suggest that you delete this two spinners, and create one that starts here and ends at 00:19:992 (where the other spinner ended).- No love for these triplespins I'm keeping these though, because I think they fit way better than just 2 spinners. Oh btw auto seem to get 4000 points . But anyway, it just doesn't feel right for me to not have these spinners here.
4. 00:41:292 (1,2,3) - Again you have a jump here, which isn't just right, but I don't think it is much of a problem here.
   But also, you have that triplet that doesn't look good at all, imo. Remove (2). That works just fine here.
   Again, I strongly consider that triplet as overmapping (at least for a difficulty that is in between a Normal and a Hard) - I'm not changing any of these as I believe it plays much better like this.
5. 00:43:242 (4) - Here, too. Why is it that so many people add triplets everywhere thinking it makes the map funnier? This isn't actually needed, try removing it, and also removing the clap at 00:43:692 (5), you will notice it sounds even more delicate. - Wait wait, you can't hear that drum at 00:43:242 - ? And no, I don't agree with removing that clap either.
6. 00:52:992 (8) - SInce the spacing isn't 1,0x, consider adding a new combo here. - Sure
7. 01:05:292 (4) - This clap here sounds off in the mini stream. It would be much more pleasant to hear a whistle. Try replacing it for the clap. - I don't think it sounds off at all, but I do think the whistle sounds quite good too, so I'm changing that
8. 01:22:392 (1,1) - Same as in 00:17:742. Create one unique spinner that ends at 01:24:792.- ^Read comments