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al2e10 wrote:
HI~
It is a good map ~ But I have some opinon want to give you~
[Hard]
Timming Tick Rate Can change to 1 I like the sound and scoring of a tick rate of 2 better; the reason it's at 0.5 on Hard is so it doesn't sound bad when the BPM increases.
00:28:825~(slider) put it short to 00:28:714 I don't like how that sounds.
[Normal]
01:06:269 (1) is it have something wrong? I see what you mean, but I like it how it is.
01:45:158 (6) can change to finish~ Done
02:10:047 and 02:10:269 is it something wrong agian? I don't know what is wrong here. I think it's fine.
02:43:381 can change to new combo~ Done.
02:43:825 ^ also~Done.
[ALL]
You can make a [Ease diffculty]~ I can do this later.
Chack the hit-circle in [Normal]!! It has something wrong!! What do you mean?
This is nice map^^
So I put a star~
TheRagnarok wrote:
[Normal]
* 00:48:269 (1) - Maybe space a little farther (using 0.9x spacing as refernce). Shouldn't be a big deal since there's a break after it. Sure, done.
* 01:16:492 (3) - Eh, I want to suggest spacing this a little farther, but I almost don't care. Your call. Slight increase; done.
* 01:26:269 (3) - Same as above, though I care about it more here. I think that if you make a spacing pattern change, you should keep it consistent for the first combo or two to engrain the player into the new spacing. Consider it. Slight increase; done.
Your [Hard] diff changes the hitsound samples at appropriate sections of the song. Maybe you should do the same with [Normal], as your sounds disappear behind the louder music. You don't need to change the tempo, so maybe just use inherited timing sections?
[Hard]
* 01:19:380 (1 - 6, 1) - Opinion: I like to think that there should be good reasonong behind jumps {Example: I like the jumps made at 01:22:046 (6, 7, 1)}. Here the jumps seem to occur in the middle of a music phrase and just seems random. It makes the visual pattern look nice, but it's still against my policy. This occurs a few times, so it's probably just your style. You're probably the better judge here. I think I like it better as it is, though I see what you're saying.
It's all pretty slick though. Star!